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Volume 5 - Comment Letters

    Comment Letter A

    Comment Letter A - San Bernardino Valley Audubon Society, 15 January 2003

    A-1 Responses A-2 through A-36 are provided below. The public review period for the Draft MSHCP and Draft EIS/EIR closed on January 15, 2003; however, the NEPA review period for the Plan and EIS/EIR was reopened on February 28, 2003 and closed on March 14, 2003.

    A-2 A four component Conservation Strategy is identified for each Covered Species in the Draft MSHCP consisting of 1) a global biological goal; 2) global biological objectives; 3) species-specific objectives; and 4) management and monitoring activities. The Conservation Strategy for each species identifies the specific conservation requirements for each species and, for some species, calls for surveys outside the Criteria Area, to ensure that the species-specific Conservation Strategy is met (see Figures 6-1, 6-3, 6-4 and 6-5 of the Draft MSHCP). The information and analyses provided in the Draft MSHCP will be used by the Wildlife Agencies in their determinations regarding the permit issuance and FESA and NCCP criteria must be met for all species on the Covered Species list. Since more specific information is not provided regarding species for which "the criteria for permit coverage are not met," a more specific response is not possible.

    A-3 The National Forest Management Act (NFMA) provides regulations that prescribe how land and resource management planning is to be conducted on National Forest System lands. Management is carried out under a forest management plan pursuant to the NFMA. Species noted in the comment are forest sensitive species which are managed in accordance with the forest management plan.

    The species accounts for San Bernardino mountain kingsnake, San Diego mountain kingsnake, southern rubber boa, black swift, California spotted owl, MacGillivray's warbler, northern goshawk, Williamson's sapsucker, San Bernardino flying squirrel, California beardtongue, California bedstraw, chickweed oxytheca, lemon lily, ocellated Humboldt lily and San Jacinto Mountains bedstraw recognize that much of the Conservation for these species will occur on Forest Service lands. Other features incorporated in the MSHCP will also benefit these species as noted on the table on the following pages.

    As noted in the Draft MSHCP, Swainson's hawk, merlin and peregrine falcon have sparse and widespread distribution throughout the Plan Area, on Forest Service lands, other Public/Quasi-Public (PQP) Lands, and within the Criteria Area. Swainson's hawk is generally present in the Plan Area only during transient migratory movements and the Plan will benefit this species by providing 141,960 acres of suitable foraging Habitat. Likewise, merlin is generally present in the Plan Area only during transient migratory movements and the Plan will benefit this species by providing 193,840 acres of suitable foraging Habitat. Peregrine falcon is primarily a fall transient but has been known to nest in the Plan Area; it has been observed at almost every open water body in the Plan Area and is present in Prado Basin on a regular basis. The Plan will benefit peregrine falcon by providing over 15,000 acres of open water Habitat and providing a 100m buffer around these open water areas as they are incorporated into the MSHCP Conservation Area. Based on these features incorporated in the Plan, it is expected that existing patterns of use by these species in the Plan Area will continue with implementation of the MSHCP.

    Lincoln's sparrow has a sparse and widespread distribution throughout the Plan Area within a variety of Habitats and is a rare breeder within the mountain Bioregions. Lincoln's sparrow will not become a Covered Species Adequately Conserved until the requirements outlined in species-specific Objective 3 for this species are met. This objective requires protection of breeding Habitat for Lincoln's sparrow and documentation of successful reproduction. Approximately 190,390 acres of wintering Habitat for Lincoln's sparrow will be conserved within the Plan Area.

    The Lead Agencies agree that Conservation of the species referenced in the comment depends on management of Forest Service lands. The Final MSHCP retains these species on the Covered Species list but states that some of these species will be moved to the list of Covered Species Adequately Conserved only upon execution of an MOU with the Forest Service regarding management activities associated with these species. For the remainder of these species, it was concluded that features are already incorporated in the MSHCP that provide for protection of these species. This information is clearly summarized on the forest species table reproduced on the following pages.

    In addition, the National Forest Management Act (NFMA) provides regulations that prescribe how land and resource management planning is to be conducted on National Forest system lands. Management is carried out under a forest management plan pursuant to the NFMA. Species noted in the comment are forest sensitive species which are managed in accordance with the forest management plan.

    MSHCP FOREST SPECIES LIST
    Common Name
    Scientific Name
    Conservation Contribution by Permittees Incidental Take Summary
    AMPHIBIANS
    mountain yellow-legged frog
    Rana mucosa
    Additional surveys will be required as part of the project review process for public and private projects and detected populations will be protected according procedures in Section 6.3.2.
    • Primary habitat for this species includes riparian scrub and water bodies. Implementation of the Protection of Species Associated with Riparian/Riverine Areas and Vernal Pool Policy (see Section 6.1.2) would benefit this species.
    • Approximately 138 acres (29 percent) of suitable primary breeding habitat and 11,459 (26 percent) of potentially suitable secondary habitat (11,597 acres total [26 percent]), would be located outside the MSHCP Conservation Area and individuals within these areas will be subject to Incidental Take consistent with the Plan.
    REPTILES
    San Bernardino mountain kingsnake1
    Lampropeltis zonata parvirubra
    • Funding for the MSHCP Plan includes provisions for transfer of local funding for management that will benefit the entire MSHCP Conservation Area. • Approximately 7,571 acres (26 percent) of potential habitat for the San Bernardino mountain kingsnake would be outside the MSHCP Conservation Area and individuals within these areas will be subject to Incidental Take consistent with the Plan.
    San Diego mountain kingsnake1
    Lampropeltis zonata pulchra
    Conservation of 717 acres (9%) of suitable habitat within the Criteria Area would occur. Approximately 2,723 acres (26 percent) of potential habitat for the San Diego mountain kingsnake would be outside the MSHCP Conservation Area and individuals within these areas will be subject to Incidental Take consistent with the Plan.
    southern rubber boa1
    Charina bottae umbratica
    Funding for the MSHCP Plan includes provisions for transfer of local funding for management that will benefit the entire MSHCP Conservation Area. Incidental Take of the southern rubber boa is difficult to quantify due to our limited knowledge of the species distribution within the Plan Area and the fact that losses may be masked by fluctuations in abundance and distribution during the life of the permit. However, the maximum level of Take of the southern rubber boa can be anticipated by the loss of the number of acres of habitat that will become unsuitable for this species, and individuals within these areas will be subject to Incidental Take consistent with the Plan. Approximately 155 acres (5 percent) of potential habitat for the southern rubber boa would be outside the MSHCP Conservation Area.
    southern sagebrush lizard1
    Sceloporus graciosus vandenburgianus
    Funding for the MSHCP Plan includes provisions for transfer of local funding for management that will benefit the entire MSHCP Conservation Area. Approximately 10,246 acres (20 percent) of potential habitat for the sagebrush lizard would be outside the MSHCP Conservation Area and individuals within these areas will be subject to Incidental Take consistent with the Plan. Eleven (42 percent) of the 26 precision code "1" or "2" records would be outside the MSHCP Conservation Area.
    BIRDS
    black swift (breeding)
    Cypseloides niger
    This species is known to nest at waterfalls. Implementation of the Protection of Species Associated with Riparian/Riverine Areas and Vernal Pool Policy (see Section 6.1.2) would benefit this species. The Incidental Take of the black swift is difficult to quantify due to our limited knowledge of its distribution and abundance within the Plan Area. The maximum level of Incidental Take of black swift can be anticipated by the loss of the number of acres of habitat. Approximately 12,270 acres (27 percent) of potential habitat for the black swift will be outside the Criteria Area and Public/Quasi-Public Land designations and individuals within this area will be subject to Incidental Take consistent with the Plan. No known nesting locations will be subject to Take.
    California spotted owl1
    Strix occidentalis occidentalis
    No take of active nest sites will occur. Approximately 16,000 acres (about 28 percent) of potential habitat for the California spotted owl will be outside the Criteria Area or Public/Quasi-Public designations, and individuals within these areas will be subject to Incidental Take consistent with the Plan. Approximately five locations from the CDFG database appear to be located outside of the Criteria Area or Public/Quasi-Public designations. Only one of these five locations outside of the MSHCP Conservation Area has been recorded as nesting (1988). No other known nesting areas are outside the Criteria Area or Public/Quasi-Public designations. No take of nesting locations is included within this permit.
    Lincoln's sparrow (breeding)
    Melospiza lincolnii
    This species is know to nest in meadows and montane riparian/riparian scrub. Implementation of the Protection of Species Associated with Riparian/Riverine Areas and Vernal Pool Policy (see Section 6.1.2) would benefit this species. Approximately 70 acres (7%) of breeding habitat would be conserved within the Criteria Area. Approximately 114,790 acres (60%) of wintering habitat would be conserved within the Criteria Area. Foraging areas in lowlands occurring within the Criteria Area would be used by this species during migration. The Incidental Take of the Lincoln's sparrow is difficult to quantify due to our limited knowledge of its distribution and abundance within the Plan Area. The maximum level of Incidental Take of Lincoln's sparrow can be anticipated by the loss of the number of acres of habitat that will become unsuitable for this species. About 580 acres (55 percent) of potential breeding habitat for the Lincoln's sparrow will be outside the Criteria Area and Public/Quasi-Public lands, and individuals within this habitat will be subject to Incidental Take consistent with the Plan upon satisfaction of Objective 2 above. Of this area, approximately 30 acres (3 percent) will be within Rural/Mountainous designation areas. Although these areas will not be part of the managed MSHCP Conservation Area and the existing zoning/ordinances for these areas do not preclude development and could allow substantial fragmentation and/or degradation of habitat for proposed covered species, the anticipated levels of development in these areas may be consistent with the continued presence of the Lincoln's sparrow, although Lincoln's sparrow tends to be of insular distribution for nesting and thus may be sensitive to fragmentation of its suitable breeding habitat. Take of nests of Lincoln's sparrow is not covered by the MSHCP Plan. About 219,670 acres (54 percent) of potential wintering habitat for the Lincoln's sparrow will be outside the Criteria Area and Public/Quasi-Public Lands and individuals within this habitat will be subject to Incidental Take consistent with the Plan.
    MacGillivray's warbler
    Oporornis tolmiei
    This species is known to forage and breed in wetland habitats. Implementation of the Protection of Species Associated with Riparian/Riverine Areas and Vernal Pool Policy (see Section 6.1.2) would benefit this species. Approximately 125,230 acres (19%) of suitable habitat would be conserved within the Criteria Area. Foraging areas in lowlands occurring within the Criteria Area would be used by this species during migration. About 240,570 acres (36 percent) of potential habitat for the MacGillivray's warbler will be outside the Criteria Area or Public/Quasi-Public designations, and individuals within these areas will be subject to Incidental Take consistent with the Plan.
    mountain quail
    Oreortyx pictus
    Approximately 19,800 acres (6%) of suitable habitat would be conserved within the Criteria Area. During wintering, this species is known to move downslope into areas within the Criteria Area (i.e. Wasson Canyon). About 93,800 acres (29 percent) of potential habitat for the mountain quail will be outside the Criteria Area and Public/Quasi-Public designations and individuals within these areas will be subject to Incidental Take consistent with the Plan. Additionally, approximately 32,730 acres of potential habitat (10 percent) are designated Rural/Mountainous and individuals within these areas will be subject to Incidental Take consistent with the Plan.
    Nashville warbler
    Vermivora ruficapilla
    Approximately 125,230 acres (19%) of suitable breeding, dispersal and migration habitat would be conserved within the Criteria Area. Foraging areas in lowlands occurring within the Criteria Area would be used by this species during migration. This species is know to breed in wetland habitats. Implementation of the Protection of Species Associated with Riparian/Riverine Areas and Vernal Pool Policy (see Section 6.1.2) would benefit this species. About 240,570 acres (about 36 percent) of potential breeding and dispersal/migration habitat for the Nashville warbler will be outside the Criteria Area or Public/Quasi-Public designations, and individuals within these areas will be subject to Incidental Take consistent with the Plan. The area outside the MSHCP Conservation Area includes 71,100 acres of breeding habitat within the mountain Bioregions and 169,470 acres of dispersal/migration habitat. Of this, approximately 91,510 acres (14 percent) of potential habitat are located within Rural/Mountainous designation areas. While the Rural/Mountainous areas are not included within the MSHCP Conservation Area and will not be managed for the benefit of wildlife, the anticipated levels of development in these areas will likely be consistent with maintaining some habitat for the Nashville warbler. Two point locations will be in the Rural/Mountainous zone. Two high precision recent points are located outside the MSHCP Conservation Area and are located in non-native grassland observed during migration due to the lowland location. The known nest location areas are not outside the MSHCP Conservation Area.
    northern goshawk
    Accipiter gentilis
    No take of active nest sites will occur throughout the Plan Area. About 12,270 acres (27 percent) of potential habitat for the northern goshawk will be outside the Criteria Area and Public/Quasi-Public and individuals within this habitat will be subject to Incidental Take consistent with the Plan. No nest sites are known outside the MSHCP Conservation Area; however no systematic surveys have been conducted to locate nest sites for this species outside the MSHCP Conservation Area. No take of active nest sites will be permitted.
    purple martin
    Progne subis
    This species is known to nest in wetland habitats. Implementation of the Protection of Species Associated with Riparian/Riverine Areas and Vernal Pool Policy (see Section 6.1.2) would benefit this species. One of three known nest sites occurs in the Criteria Area. About 17,810 acres (about 28 percent)of potential Habitat for the purple martin will be outside the Criteria Area and Public/Quasi-Public designations, and individuals within these areas will be subject to Incidental Take consistent with the Plan. Of this, approximately 4,840 acres (8 percent) will be within Rural/Mountainous designation areas. Although these areas will not be part of the managed MSHCP Conservation Area the anticipated levels of development in these areas will likely be consistent with the continued presence of the purple martin. The historic breeding location of the purple martin at Hemet Lake is not included within the MSHCP Conservation Area, however this site may no longer be viable and may not be active.
    Williamson's sapsucker1
    Sphyrapicus thyroideus
    Inclusion of potential nesting habitat (i.e., groups of large snags) would occur within the MSHCP Conservation Area. About 12,270 acres (27 percent) of potential Habitat for the Williamson's sapsucker will be outside the Criteria Area or Public/Quasi-Public designations, and individuals within this Habitat will be subject to Incidental Take consistent with the plan. Of this, approximately 890 acres (2 percent) of potential Habitat are located within Rural/Mountainous designation areas. This does not represent a significant contribution to the conservation of the Williamson's sapsucker and the areas are located outside of the important breeding Habitat for the species.
    Wilson's warbler
    Wilsonia pusilla
    This species is know to nest in montane meadows and riparian scrub, woodlands and forests. Implementation of the Protection of Species Associated with Riparian/Riverine Areas and Vernal Pool Policy (see Section 6.1.2) would benefit this species. Approximately 15,700 acres (6%) of breeding habitat would be conserved within the Criteria Area. Approximately 116,780 acres (28%) of transient movement habitat would be conserved within the Criteria Area. Foraging areas in lowlands occurring within the Criteria Area would be used by this species during migration. The Incidental Take of the Wilson's warbler is difficult to quantify due to our limited knowledge of its distribution and abundance within the Plan Area. The maximum level of Incidental Take of Wilson's warblers can be anticipated by the loss of the number of acres of potential Habitat that will become unsuitable for this species. About 71,030 acres (26 percent) of potential breeding Habitat for the Wilson's warbler will be outside the Criteria Area and Public/Quasi-Public Lands designations and individuals within these areas will be subject to Incidental Take consistent with the Plan. Of this, approximately 39,460 acres (15 percent) will be within Rural/Mountainous designation areas. About 219,680 acres (53 percent) potential transient migratory movement Habitat for the Wilson's warbler will be outside the Criteria Area and Public/Quasi-Public Lands designations. Of this, approximately 58,800 acres (14 percent) will be within Rural/Mountainous designation areas. Although these areas will not be part of the managed MSHCP Conservation Area, the anticipated levels of development in these areas may be consistent with the continued presence of the Wilson's warbler.
    MAMMALS
    San Bernardino flying squirrel
    Glaucomys sabrinus californicus
    Funding for the MSHCP Plan includes provisions for transfer of local funding for management that will benefit the entire MSHCP Conservation Area. About 9,404 acres (33 percent) of suitable habitat in the San Jacinto Mountains Bioregion is on private ownerships outside of the MSHCP Conservation Area. This suitable habitat is on private lands in the areas of Pine Cove, Idyllwild, Mountain Center, Hemet Lake and various other private inholdings within the forest. Any proposed Incidental Take of habitat on USFS or State Park lands would be consistent with approved activities for those lands.
    PLANTS
    Beautiful hulsea (
    Hulsea vestita ssp.
    callicarpha)
    Approximately 5,400 acres (4%) of suitable habitat would be conserved within the Criteria Area. In accordance with Species Objective 2 for this species, 12 known occurrences will be conserved, including occurrences at Lake Hemet. Approximately 36,060 acres (25 percent) of potential habitat for beautiful hulsea will not be conserved. According to the UCR database and herbarium records, 19 of the mapped locations are located on private lands and will not be conserved. Of these 19 mapped locations, however, 18 are dated 1970 or earlier.
    California beardtongue
    Penstemon californicus
    Approximately 7,160 acres (4%) of suitable habitat would be conserved within the Criteria Area.
    • Although the majority of known occurrences are on Forest Service lands, other known localities include Hemet Valley, the vicinity of Diamond Valley Lake, Tenaja Road in the Santa Rosa Plateau, Aguanga and Sage.
    Approximately 52,100 acres (31 percent) of potential habitat for California beardtongue will not be conserved. According to the UCR herbarium and UCR database, three of the mapped locations, including one locality in the San Jacinto Mountains and the two outliers in Cactus Valley and north of Sage will not be conserved. According to the CNDDB, one of the mapped locations is within a private in-holding in the San Jacinto Mountains approximately two miles north of the intersection of Highway 74 and Highway 371 and will not be conserved.
    California bedstraw1
    Galium californicum ssp.
    primum
    Funding for the MSHCP Plan includes provisions for transfer of local funding for management that will benefit the entire MSHCP Conservation Area. Approximately 9,180 acres (18 percent) of potential habitat for California bedstraw will not be conserved and will be subject to impacts consistent with the Plan. Within the UCR database, two of the mapped locations are located outside of the MSHCP Conservation Area within San Timoteo Canyon west of Beaumont and within the vicinity of the Diamond Valley Lake. According to the CNDDB, one of the mapped locations within the San Jacinto Mountains is located within a private in-holding and will not be conserved.
    California muhly
    Muhlenbergia californica
    This species occurs near mesic seeps or along streambanks. Implementation of the Protection of Species Associated with Riparian/Riverine Areas and Vernal Pool Policy (see Section 6.1.2) and General Management Measure 4, maintenance of wetland habitat conditions, would benefit this species Approximately 112,180 acres (19%) of suitable habitat would be conserved within the Criteria Area. Approximately 221,350 acres of potential habitat will not be included in the MSHCP Conservation Area. This species occurs at Sage, Aguanga, Estelle Mountain, Gavilan Hills, Gavilan Plateau, near Prado Dam, La Paz Canyon, Temescal Canyon, and Sitton Peak in the Santa Ana Mountains (U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service, Unpublished Data). Some or all of the occurrences at these localities may be conserved within the MSHCP Conservation Area.
    chickweed oxytheca
    Oxytheca caryophylloides
    Funding for the MSHCP Plan includes provisions for transfer of local funding for management that will benefit the entire MSHCP Conservation Area. Approximately 9,200 acres (33 percent) of potential habitat for chickweed oxytheca will not be conserved. According to the UCR database and herbarium records, four of the mapped locations are located on private lands or within road right-of-way and will not be conserved. Of these four mapped locations, however, three are dated 1924 and the third dates from 1978.
    Cleveland's bush monkeyflower1
    Mimulus clevelandii
    Funding for the MSHCP Plan includes provisions for transfer of local funding for management that will benefit the entire MSHCP Conservation Area. Approximately 790 acres of potential habitat for Cleveland's bush monkeyflower will not be conserved in the MSHCP Conservation Area. One of the records (in the foothills of the Agua Tibia Mountains) will not be conserved.
    cliff cinquefoil
    Potentilla rimicola
    Funding for the MSHCP Plan includes provisions for transfer of local funding for management that will benefit the entire MSHCP Conservation Area. Approximately 10 acres (less than 1 percent) of potential habitat for cliff cinquefoil will not be conserved. None of the known occurrences will be located outside of the MSHCP Conservation Area.
    Hall's monardella
    Monardella macrantha ssp.
    hallii
    Approximately 15,260 acres (5%) of suitable habitat would be conserved within the Criteria Area. Approximately 83,530 acres (27 percent) of potential habitat for Hall's monardella will not be included within the Criteria Area or existing Public/ Quasi-Public Lands. None of the known occurrences for this species will be outside the MSHCP Conservation Area.
    lemon lily1
    Lilium parryi
    Funding for the MSHCP Plan includes provisions for transfer of local funding for management that will benefit the entire MSHCP Conservation Area. Approximately 1,170 acres (10 percent) of potential habitat for lemon lily will not be conserved. Of the records in the UCR database and the herbaria at UCR and Rancho Santa Ana Botanic Gardens, five of the mapped locations are located on private lands within the San Jacinto Mountains and will not be conserved.
    Mojave tarplant
    Deinandra mohavensis
    Approximately 7,150 acres (7%) of suitable habitat would be conserved within the Criteria Area. Approximately 27,850 acres (26 percent) of potential habitat for Mojave tarplant will not be conserved. According to the University of California, Riverside, GIS database, the mapped location along the Banning Idyllwild Panoramic Highway is located on private lands and will not be conserved. According to the CNDDB, an occurrence within the San Jacinto Mountains is located outside of the MSHCP Conservation Area (road right-of-way)and will not be conserved.
    ocellated Humboldt lily1
    Lilium humboldtii ssp.
    ocellatum
    Approximately 1,070 acres (9%) of suitable habitat would be conserved within the Criteria Area. Approximately 3,820 acres (33 percent) of potential habitat for ocellated Humboldt lily will not be included in the MSHCP Conservation Area. The two historic (1955 and 1966) localities in Horsethief Canyon and near Corona, will be located outside the MSHCP Conservation Area.
    Palomar monkeyflower
    Mimulus diffusus
    In accordance with Species Objective 2 for this species, 18 localities will be confirmed and managed within the Santa Rosa Plateau, Sage, French Valley, and east of Lake Skinner. Approximately 8,940 acres of (27 percent) the potential habitat for Palomar monkeyflower will not be included in the MSHCP Conservation Area. Of the 26 known locations (29 occurrences),11 of the mapped locations (six locations in the San Jacinto Mountains, one location in the Santa Ana Mountains, and four locations in the vicinity of Sage) are located outside of the MSHCP Conservation Area.
    prostrate spine flower
    Chorizanthe procumbens
    In accordance with Species Objective 2 for this species, 14 localities will be confirmed and managed in areas including Beaumont and French Valley. Approximately 5,250 acres (5%) of suitable habitat would be conserved within the Criteria Area. About 31,590 acres (33 percent) of potential habitat for the prostrate spine flower would be outside the MSHCP Conservation Area. Seven of the mapped locations (including Moreno Valley, Meadowbrook,Lake Elsinore, Murrieta, two localities along Temecula Creek, and the foothills of the Santa Ana Mountains) are located outside of the MSHCP Conservation Area; however, several of these occurrences are suspect and should be verified.
    San Jacinto Mountains bedstraw
    Galium angustifolium ssp.
    jacinticum
    This species would be surveyed in accordance with the Narrow Endemics Plant Species Surveys (see Section 6.1.3). Approximately 8,545 acres (41 percent) of potential habitat for San Jacinto Mountains bedstraw will not be conserved. One of the localities is within private in-holdings within the San Jacinto Mountains and will not be conserved. It is important to note, however, that this potential habitat and the mapped location are included within the Narrow Endemic Plant Species survey area and conservation of this potential habitat and known location will be addressed in accordance with the procedures presented in the Narrow Endemic Plant Species policy described in Section 6.1.3 of the MSHCP, Volume I.
    shaggy-haired alumroot1
    Heuchera hirsutissima
    Funding for the MSHCP Plan includes provisions for transfer of local funding for management that will benefit the entire MSHCP Conservation Area. Approximately 2,210 acres (22 percent) of potential habitat for shaggy-haired alumroot will not be conserved.
    sticky-leaved dudleya1
    Dudleya viscida
    Approximately 3,800 acres (4%) of suitable habitat would be conserved within the Criteria Area. Approximately 26,740 acres (27 percent) of potential habitat for sticky-leaved dudleya would not be included in the MSHCP Conservation Area. There is one known population cluster of this species in the San Mateo Wilderness. No known undisputed populations occur outside the MSHCP Conservation Area.
    1 These species will be considered to be adequately conserved when a Memorandum of Understanding is executed with the Forest Service that addresses management for these species on Forest Service Land.

     

     

    A-4 The Lead Agencies are unaware of what "commitments to owners of existing mitigation banks" have been made, or are not being honored, and are unable to respond. The MSHCP anticipates that lands identified as conservation banks will be conserved, whether through the sale of credits or through other mechanisms. However, the Permittees are not obligated to purchase any credits in any existing conservation bank or mitigation area. Owners of conservation banks and mitigation areas may also choose to initiate the HANS Process as set forth in Section 6.1.1 of the Draft MSHCP.

     

     

    A-5 As described in Section 3.1 of the Plan and in Responses R-19, R-20, R-21 and R-25, the Plan is not based on "what is achievable" but rather on an iterative process that began with identification of an initial Conceptual Conservation Scenario that, as directed by stakeholders, addressed the conservation needs of up to 164 species as well as NCCP requirements. The iterative planning process that resulted in identification of the Criteria Area incorporated use of the best scientifically and commercially available data, as described in Section 2.1 of the Plan.

    Species occurrence data were available for review by the public at the UCR website and RCIP website. In addition, the MSHCP species accounts were made available for review by the public throughout the Plan preparation process in the August 9, 1999 Draft MSHCP Proposal, in the October 4, 2000 Alternatives Development Document, in the March 7, 2002 Administrative Draft MSHCP distributed to the MSHCP Advisory Committee and in the November 15, 2002 Draft MSHCP distributed for public review.

    The data characterization portions of the species accounts described in detail the species occurrence data for each species, and the discussions of conservation levels and Take in each species account note the locations of occurrences anticipated to be conserved and those expected to be located outside the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    A-6 As described in Response D-18, the species analyses incorporated a variety of ecological data bases, specific to the analysis of each species. Ecological data bases used included vegetation, uncollapsed vegetation, select soils, elevation, Bioregions, and other data such as aerial photography. The best scientific and commercial data available were used, in accordance with the applicable federal and state requirements.

    A-7 See Responses A-5 and A-6.

    A-8 The No Surprises Rule (50 CFR 17.3, 17.22(b) and 17.32(b)) is a legal assurance that applies to HCPs provided that the MSHCP, IA and Permits are properly implemented. The No Surprises Rule as it is presented in the MSHCP conforms with legal requirements and is not overly broad or inclusive. The Lead Agencies acknowledge that certain groups are not in favor of the No Surprises Rule but, at this time, it is an assurance that is available to the Permittees and has been properly applied in the MSHCP.

    A-9 Changed circumstances are addressed in Section 6.8.3 of the Plan. Since more specific comments are not given, a more specific response cannot be provided. See Responses A-17, A-18 and A-30.

    A-10 See Responses C-65, C-66, D-23 and D-72 for discussion of Conservation of the San Jacinto River floodplain as incorporated in the MSHCP. Since a more specific comment is not given, a more specific response cannot be provided.

    A-11 The level of Development surrounding areas identified as Constrained Linkages vary. For Constrained Linkage 19, the constraining factors were considered to be existing agricultural operations within the area. It is acknowledged that a wider connection with Live-In Habitat is possible and is proposed, as compared to other Constrained Linkages identified in the Plan.

    A-12 See Response K-5. The IA and the MSHCP make specific provisions allowing the Cities to adopt an adequate alternative to the HANS Process to ensure compliance with the Criteria and acquisition of Additional Reserve Lands. As stated repeatedly, the MSHCP does not preempt local land use authority. (MSHCP, § 6.2.2; see also Response H2-40.) It will be up to the Cities to determine if eminent domain and condemnation will constitute an adequate alternative process to HANS.

    A-13 Section 6.1 of the Draft MSHCP states that the County will implement the MSHCP through incorporation of the relevant terms and requirements into its General Plan, which is currently in the process of being updated. If the new General Plan and MSHCP are both adopted and Permits issued, the MSHCP will constitute the mitigation in the General Plan for impacts to biological resources for Covered Species in the Plan Area. If the General Plan is approved but the MSHCP is not adopted, there are alternate mitigation requirements proposed for the General Plan to address biological impacts. The IA is the agreement that ensures that the Permittees will implement the terms and conditions of the MSHCP. Thus, if the County executes the IA, it will be required to implement the MSHCP as set forth in Section 11.1.2 of the IA, which states that the County will establish in each Area Plan policies for Covered Species.

    A-14 This comment does not sufficiently explain its reference to the "Board requirement on page 25" regarding creation of the RCA to allow a response. A separate joint powers authority can be formed under the auspices of an existing joint powers authority even if the governing board make up and voting requirements differ. At this point, it is contemplated that the RCA will be a separate joint powers authority. A decision has not been made whether the RCA should be under the WRCOG umbrella.

    A-15 The Farm Bureau specifically requested the addition of the first sentence of the referenced paragraph. With regard to the 10,000 acres of New Agricultural Land, see Responses C-56 and F-12.

    A-16 The paragraph states that the RCA shall seek an amendment to increase the 10,000-acre New Agricultural Lands Cap. However, the Wildlife Agencies will make the final determination regarding whether the New Agricultural Land Cap will be increased. Accordingly, the Lead Agencies believe that the language in Section 11.3.7 of the IA should remain unchanged. See Response F-16 and Section 6.2G of the MSHCP for a detailed discussion of the criteria for raising the New Agricultural Lands Cap.

    A-17 Water management activities that would alter the flow of waters of the United States downstream of a dam would require permitting by the ACOE and would involve consultation with the USFWS. Changes in discharges from reclaimed water sources would be monitored by the RCA in accordance with the provisions of Section 5 of the MSHCP and any changes that would affect Covered Species would be addressed through appropriate actions. The Final MSHCP includes language to provide this clarification. In the event of decreased water levels, operational activities that would change the water level of a reservoir would not be anticipated to have impacts to Covered Species.

    A-18 See Response A-17.

    A-19 See Response K-145.

    A-20 The correct citation is actually Section 7.3.5 pages 7-37 and 7-38. The IA will be revised to reflect the correct citation.

    A-21 The IA states that if a City is a Permittee and thus receives Take Authorization pursuant to the MSHCP, it will have to ensure that there are no General Plan or Area Plan inconsistencies that conflict with the provisions of the IA. As such, the IA states in Section 13.2(A) that the Cities have the obligation to "amend their general plans as appropriate" to effectuate the IA and fulfill the requirements of the Plan. These requirements are also included in the Draft EIR/EIS in Table 1A on page 1.4-1.

    A-22 The existing MOU may be obtained from RCFCWCD. The MOU referenced in the Final MSHCP has not yet been executed; it will be available from RCFCWCD upon completion.

    A-23 The commentor misunderstands the point of the Caltrans Banking Agreement. In the event that Caltrans has unused credits due to Permit suspension, revocation or termination, this section allows Caltrans to use the credits for other projects. Take Authorization would have to be obtained through a vehicle other than the MSHCP. At that time, appropriate species coverage would be determined by Caltrans and the Wildlife Agencies.

    A-24 The management results associated with Caltrans and with State Parks are anticipated to be very similar, but are achieved somewhat differently. With regard to Caltrans, the lands acquired and managed will be independent of any other land managed by Caltrans. As a result, the level of staffing and estimated costs is higher. The Draft MSHCP (page 8-12) identifies the estimated cost for 3 positions for management and monitoring is $350,000 annually. State Parks' mitigation lands will be within or adjacent to other State Parks lands. As a result, State Parks' personnel, including enforcement personnel, will assist in carrying out State Parks' management responsibilities. The two State Parks funded positions for management and monitoring identified in the MSHCP (Draft MSHCP p. 8-13) are dedicated positions without other responsibilities. The estimated annual costs for the positions are $250,000 annually (Draft MSHCP p. 8-13). The responsibilities for management and monitoring their respective mitigation lands and assisting with implementing the MSHCP monitoring program are the same.

    A-25 The Lead Agencies disagree with this comment. Species objectives address methods for obtaining the information required to consider these species Covered Species Adequately Conserved. The Wildlife Agencies will consider this and all other information in the administrative record before them including public comment, to determine if the MSHCP provides information adequate to issue the Permits.

    A-26 This Section says that "after opportunity for public review and comment, based upon the best available current scientific and commercial data, the USFWS has found..." This is merely draft language in the IA that will not be signed by the Service until all other requirements of FESA and NCPA have been met, including preparation of the Final MSHCP, Final EIR/EIS and a Biological Opinion. The clause objected to by commentor regarding CEQA and NEPA merely states that the Service will not take a subsequent position that may contradict the goals and purposes of the MSHCP. This provision does not restrict the ability of the Service to comment on future CEQA/NEPA documents.

    A-27 The commentor does not specify why Section 14.19 does not create an independent cause of action and, thus, a response is not required. This section states that "to the maximum extent allowable" future biological opinions will be consistent with the MSHCP biological opinion. This section also states that "to the maximum extent appropriate," any reasonable and prudent measures in a future biological opinion will be consistent with MSHCP and IA implementation measures. If other measures are legally required, then they would have to be imposed.

    A-28 The Lead Agencies disagree with the comment. This section states that "to the maximum extent allowable after public review and comment" lands within the Plan Area will not be designated Critical Habitat. This section also states that the Service will reassess and revise the boundaries of Critical Habitat within the MSHCP "to the maximum extent allowable after public review and comment." This does not make federal policy or new law - it merely allows the Service to act within the confines of existing law when making this determination.

    A-29 See Response A-8. The referenced language limits the responsibilities of the Permittees for Unforeseen Circumstances. However, this language does not preclude land acquisitions or other actions by the Service.

    A-30 See Responses A-17 and A-18 for discussion of specific comments regarding Changed Circumstances. The commentor has not indicated how this section is "redundant with other portions of the Implementing Agreement" and thus, the Lead Agencies are unable to respond.

    A-31 After numerous discussions with the Wildlife Agencies, County, Cities and stakeholders, it was determined that an Implementing Agreement and Permit term of 75 years would be appropriate and legally adequate to implement all the goals and objectives of the MSHCP given its scope and breadth. (See IA, §19.0)

    A-32 A Plan Amendment is not automatically necessary if a Permittee withdraws from the MSHCP. See Section 20 and 22 of the IA. In that event, the RCA will meet and confer with the Wildlife Agencies to determine to what extent, if any, Take Authorization may continue to be provided to the remaining Permittees. In making this determination, the RCA and/or any other Party may decide that an Amendment is necessary to continue implementing the Plan.

    A-33 The MOU that will be executed by all agencies that own and/or manage land in the MSHCP Conservation Area shall contain specific commitments that will ensure that the referenced agencies will not take actions that would lead to the revocation or suspension of all or a portion of the Permits. Moreover, the Corps of Engineers, FHWA, FEMA, and FERC do not currently own PQP Lands. If these agencies propose projects on PQP Land, the PQP property owner would have to ensure compliance with the MSHCP. The MSHCP contributes funds to management on federal PQP Lands. Additionally, future federal funds may be committed to PQP Lands which could be used for PQP Lands.

    A-34 The Lead Agencies agree with the comment that the CDFG can defend itself against lawsuits arising from its obligations. However, the commentor misinterprets Section 27.8 of the IA. This Section does not state that the CDFG will defend the County, Cities or other Permittees. It only states that "[u]pon request, the CDFG will, to the extent authorized by California law, provide appropriate support to the Permittees in defending, consistent with the terms of the MSHCP, lawsuits arising out of the Permittees' adoption of the MSHCP and/or this Agreement." Accordingly, this Section does not impose any inappropriate requirements on CDFG.

    A-35 This Section of the IA does not prevent adequate funding for the MSHCP. It merely provides assurances to the Wildlife Agencies that federal and state funding will have to be authorized, and that local governments will not be financially responsible from general fund sources unless expressly authorized. In order to satisfy FESA Section 10 Permit issuance requirements, the Permittees must provide adequate funding assurances. See Section 8.0 in the Draft MSHCP for a detailed discussion of MSHCP funding sources.

    A-36 Copies of the Final MSHCP, IA and EIS/EIR will be made available to the commentor when complete.


    Comment Letter A2 - City of Lake Elsinore, January 15, 2003

    A2-1 The comment period on the MSHCP, IA and EIS was extended by the United States Fish and Wildlife Service. The Lead Agencies have responded to all comments received during the extended comment period.


    Comment Letter A3 - Jerry Geller on behalf of Upper Santa Margarita Alliance, January 14, 2003

    A3-1 Section 8.0 of the Draft MSHCP provides a funding plan to acquire the called for Conservation over the next 25 years and allows for the use of incentives through the HANS Process. The commentor does not identify specific requested changes or areas where the funding plan should be revised.

    A3-2 The MSHCP does not rely on new regulation. The HANS Process lays out the time lines for property acquisitions (see Section 6.11 of the Draft MSHCP). The funding mechanisms listed by the commentor are all possible outcomes of the HANS negotiations. All lands acquired will be from willing sellers at fair market values established through an established appraisal process. The Lead Agencies disagree that MSHCP funding is not adequate to provide the necessary assurances for issuance of the Permits.


    Comment Letter A4 - Bennett Realty Group, February 28, 2003

    A4-1 It appears that the property referenced in this comment is SP315. The County is currently reviewing the draft SP, and processing is currently in the early stages, with several planning issues that are unresolved. Based on their initial review, County staff believes that there are no major issues related to the proposed project's ability to comply with MSHCP requirements, and the MSHCP review process will take into consideration the applicants discussion with the USFWS concerning the proposed open space.


    Comment Letter A5 - KB Homes, February 11, 2003

    A5-1 This comment does not raise any issues related to the Draft MSHCP, the IA or the Draft EIR/EIS, and therefore no additional response is necessary.

    A5-2 See Responses S2-2 through S2-6.

    A5-3 The MSHCP provides a process through which a flood control project may be considered a Covered Activity under the Plan (Section 7.3.7). In the event that a flood control project is advanced that meets the criteria identified in the Plan, that project would be considered to be consistent with the Criteria.

    A5-4 See Response A5-3.

    A5-5 See Responses S2-6, S2-8 and S2-10.

    A5-6 A flood control project that meets the criteria set forth in Section 7.3.7 of the Plan, is thus a Covered Activity, and would not require a Minor Amendment.

    Comment Letter B

    Comment Letter B San Bernardino Valley Audubon Letter, January 9, 2003

    B-1 See Response A-10.

    B-2 See Response A-12.

    B-3 See Response A-13.

    B-4 See Response A-14.

    B-5 See Response A-15.

    B-6 See Response A-16.

    B-7 See Response A-17.

    B-8 See Response A-18.

    B-9 See Response A-19.

    B-10 See Response A-20.

    B-11 See Response A-21.

    B-12 See Response A-22.

    B-13 See Response A-23.

    B-14 See Response A-24.

    B-15 See Response A-25.

    B-17 See Response A-27.

    B-18 See Response A-28.

    B-19 See Response A-29.

    B-20 See Response A-30.

    B-21 See Response A-31.

    B-22 See Response A-32.

    B-23 See Response A-33.

    B-24 See Response A-34.

    B-25 See Response A-35.

    B-26 The Lead Agencies appreciate the commentor's participation. Additional comments will be responded to as they are received; however, the Lead Agencies cannot guarantee that responses to comments received after the close of the public comment period will be included in the Final EIR/EIS.


    Comment Letter B2-City of Murrieta, January 15, 2003

    B2-1 It is understood that the Criteria address Conservation of a subset of the area proposed for Murrieta Creek Flood Control Project. The Project, as it is currently contemplated would be consistent with the Criteria, as it would conserve a slightly larger area than addressed in the Criteria. Therefore, it is anticipated that consistency of the Project with the MSHCP can be demonstrated without any modifications to either the Project or the MSHCP Criteria.

    B2-2 The percentages of Conservation within each Cell proposed in the Area Plan Criteria are intended to be interpreted as one criterion and are not intended to set minimum and maximum conservation acreages. Evaluation of individual projects and circumstances may yield Conservation that is consistent with the Criteria that do not precisely match the Cell percentages.

    B2-3 See Response B2-2. The Draft MSHCP anticipates that Development that has occurred since collection of data used in developing the Area Plan Criteria may affect Reserve Assembly, and will be considered on a case-by-case basis as development applications are reviewed and processed, and as Reserve Assembly proceeds.

    B2-4 See Responses B2-2 and B2-3.
     


    Comment Letter B3 - Anne E. DeBevoise-Abel, January 15, 2003

    B3-1 See Responses W2-1 and Y2-3. The MSHCP respects property rights of individual property owners and assures that property needed for Conservation will be acquired from willing sellers at a fair market price.

    B3-2 The MSHCP does not establish zoning on any property. The question of an appropriate zoning designation can be addressed through the General Plan or subsequently when the County undertakes a consistency zoning study. The Lead Agencies disagree that inclusion of property within the Criteria Area is "improper or discriminatory."

    B3-3 The vegetation map depicted in the Draft EIR/EIS and the Draft MSHCP represent "collapsed" or generalized vegetation types. It is expected that vegetation coverage on the ground may vary from this generalized mapping. A more detailed breakdown of the vegetation map was used in the analysis performed for the MSHCP. The level of detail provided in the vegetation mapping represents the best scientific and commercially available data, and is considered appropriate for landscape-level conservation planning. See Responses D-17 through D-19.

    B3-4 See Response B3-2.

    B3-5 The commentor should contact the Riverside County Planning Department to discuss the Williamson Act designation on their property. The comment does not relate to the MSHCP, IA or the EIR/EIS.

    B3-6 See Responses B3-2 and B3-5.

    B3-7 See Response Y2-3. If all or a portion of the property is desirable for Conservation under the MSHCP, the HANS Process includes an appraisal methodology to determine fair market value.

    B3-8 The request for a zoning change is not related to the MSHCP. The commentor should contact the Riverside County Planning Department to discuss the process for changing the zoning on a property. If the property owner processes a development application, the HANS Process would result in a determination as to whether all or any portion of the property is necessary for inclusion in the MSHCP Conservation Area and allow for negotiation on the appropriate mix of development and Conservation based on the MSHCP Criteria if only a portion is needed for inclusion.

    B3-9 The MSHCP and EIS comment period was extended to March 14, 2003 by the Service.


    Comment Letter B4 - Grainger, March 3, 2003

    B4-1 The comment letter is included in the administrative record for the MSHCP and the EIR/EIS and specific responses to the specific comments presented in this letter are provided below.

    B4-2 Criteria pertaining to the referenced Cell 168 and other Cells and Cell Groups for which Delhi Sands flower-loving fly is the primary species of concern have been revised in the Final MSHCP. Rather than including specific Reserve Assembly guidance, the Criteria in the Final MSHCP simply refer to the species-specific objectives for the fly. The species-specific objectives for the fly have been revised in the Final MSHCP.

    B4-3 This comment consists of a report from Thomas Olsen Associates, Inc. documenting the results of a Habitat Suitability Evaluation on the subject property.

    B4-4 See Response B4-2.


    Comment Letter B5 - Friends of the Northern San Jacinto Valley, March 4, 2003

    B5-1 See Response C5-1. The Lead Agencies do not believe that the requested maps are necessary to provide adequate public disclosure of potential effects associated with the MSHCP.

    B5-2 See Response C5-1. The Lead Agencies do not believe that the requested overlays are necessary to provide adequate public disclosure of potential effects associated with the MSHCP.

    B5-3 See Response B5-2. The Draft EIR/EIS provides an analysis of potential impacts to land use resulting from the implementation of the MSHCP. Additionally, the Plan (Sections 5.0 and 7.0) provides a discussion of management considerations and allowable uses within the MSHCP Conservation Area. It is unclear what further information the commentor is asking for. Thus, the Lead Agencies are unable to provide any further response.

    B5-4 Notice of actions and meetings related to the MSHCP will be provided as required by law.

    Comment Letter C

    Comment Letter C - California Native Plant Society, January 15, 2003

    C-1 CNPS's contributions to the conservation planning process for the MSHCP are acknowledged.

    C-2 The MSHCP does not provide "clearance" for the public and private development projects referenced in the comment. Such projects will be subject to project specific CEQA review by their respective lead agencies. "Clearance" provided by the MSHCP is limited to Take Authorization for MSHCP Covered Species as long as the project under consideration is determined to be consistent with the MSHCP. Review for consistency of the types of projects noted will be conducted by the Permittee and in accordance with the joint project review process described in Section 6.6 of the MSHCP.

    It is assumed that the comment regarding Public/Quasi-Public (PQP) Lands is referring to the discussion in Section 3.2.1 of the Plan which calls for verification of the precise acreage, location and amount of PQP Lands within five years of Permit issuance. This discussion does not imply that the existing PQP data base is "very tentative" but rather provides for a verification process for conservation value. Indeed, as described in the Plan, the existing PQP data base is parcel-specific and appears to have a high level of accuracy. Analysis of the GIS attribute data conducted to date indicates that less than 1% of the identified PQP Land may change as part of the verification process.

    C-3 Features incorporated in the MSHCP provide for Conservation of core populations of plant species. For plant species for which core populations are known, Conservation of those populations is called for in the species-specific objectives. For plant species for which such information is insufficiently known at this time, surveys are required with appropriate avoidance and minimization requirements. Of the 63 plants proposed to be Covered Species, surveys will be required for 27 of them and an additional 13 species will not be considered to be Covered Species Adequately Conserved until specific conservation requirements are met within the MSHCP Conservation Area. This reflects the rigorous features incorporated in the MSHCP to assure Conservation of Covered Species including plant species proposed to be Covered Species.

    It is uncertain how the five-year period referenced in the comment would benefit Conservation of plant species. The Reserve Assembly process is anticipated to extend for 25 years and Development is anticipated to occur during the 75-year term of the Permit(s). Potential impacts of Development within the Criteria Area would therefore not be known within a five-year period nor would a final review of the total conserved area be possible at that time.

    C-4 As defined in Section 3.2.3 - Cores and Linkages within the MSHCP Conservation Area, "Planning Species are subsets of Covered Species that are identified to provide guidance for Reserve Assembly in Cores and Linkages and/or Area Plans." Not all of the Narrow Endemic Plant Species were considered to be Planning Species. There are a variety of reasons why a species may not be considered to be a Planning Species.

    For example, Hammitt's clay-cress is not considered to be a Planning Species. Hammitt's clay-cress, a Narrow Endemic Plant Species, is currently only known to occur near Elsinore Peak within existing PQP Lands in Existing Core B. There were a number of other sensitive species that occur in Existing Core B whose known distribution and potential Habitat were used to guide the Reserve Assembly. Hammitt's clay-cress limited distribution was not a guiding factor in Reserve Assembly.

    Spreading navarretia, a Narrow Endemic species, is considered to be a Planning Species for Proposed Core 4, Existing Core H and Proposed Noncontiguous Habitat Block 6. Eleven of the 14 known populations of spreading navarretia comprise three Core Areas (the San Jacinto Wildlife Area, the floodplains of the San Jacinto River from Ramona Expressway south to Railroad Canyon and the upper Salt Creek drainage area west of Hemet). Due to the known distribution of spreading navarretia Core Areas, potential Habitat and dependence on fluvial processes, spreading navarretia was determined to be a Planning Species and was used to guide the Reserve Assembly. Subsequently, the three Core Areas are proposed for Conservation within the Criteria Area and existing PQP Lands.

    C-5 It is acknowledged that survey requirements for plants are documented in two separate sections of the MSHCP - Section 6.1.3 - Protection of Narrow Endemic Plant Species and Section 6.3.2 - Additional Survey Needs and Procedures, and that plants that may be considered to be Narrow Endemics appear on both lists. The rationale for dividing the lists of plants for which surveys are required was based on consideration of those plants for which surveys would be required within appropriate locations of the broad Narrow Endemic Plant Species survey area (Draft MSHCP, Figure 6-1) and those plants for which surveys could be confined to appropriate locations within the Criteria Area (Draft MSHCP, Figure 6-2). Survey methods and avoidance, minimization and mitigation requirements are the same for both lists of plants so the ways in which these plant species are addressed in the Plan do not differ based on whether they appear on the Narrow Endemic Plant Species survey list or the Additional Survey Needs and Procedures list. In preparing the Plan, it was recognized that having survey requirements appear in several different sections of the document may be somewhat cumbersome. For this reason, a Summary of MSHCP Species Survey Requirements was prepared and is included in Appendix E to Volume I of the Plan. The plant species survey requirements are combined and consolidated in this Appendix.

    In addition, Section 6.1.2 - Protection of Species Associated with Riparian/Riverine Areas and Vernal Pools - would provide benefits to a number of plant species that occur in wetlands. It is acknowledged that the list of plant species in Section 6.1.2 that would benefit from the protection of Riparian/Riverine Areas and Vernal Pools within the MSHCP Plan Area does overlap with those plant species listed in Sections 6.1.3 and 6.3.2 and in Table 6-1; however, the list of plant species in Section 6.1.2 focuses on plants that occur in wetlands. Not all of the plant species listed in Section 6.1.2 are included in Table 6-1, nor are all of the plant species listed in Table 6-1 included in Section 6.1.2.

    C-6 Take Authorization is provided for Covered Species at the time the Permit(s) are issued subject to the Permittee(s) implementing the requirements of the Plan. There is no requirement that "a portion of a habitat type be designated" for Conservation prior to impacts to Covered Species such as a plant population. Conversely, public and private development projects would not benefit from the Take Authorization granted by the Permit(s), unless they were consistent with the Plan. For plant species, consistency with the Plan requires conducting surveys for most of the Covered Species, as noted in Response C-2, avoiding and minimizing impacts to identified populations in accordance with the requirements of Sections 6.1.3 and 6.3.2, and meeting the Conservation Strategy for each Covered Species, including the species-specific conservation objectives, as described in Section 9.2. New information gathered as a result of surveys will be used to guide the Reserve Assembly process to assure that the areas likely to provide the most benefit for species conservation are acquired for the MSHCP Conservation Area; this is an important foundation of the criteria-based approach incorporated in the MSHCP which identifies an approximately310,000-acres Criteria Area from which approximately 153,000 acres of land will be acquired for Conservation. Implementation of these requirements will lead to achievement of the CNPS goal of conserving plants at known or to be discovered extant locations.

    C-7 See Response A-33.

    C-8 As described in Section 9.2 of the Plan, a Conservation Strategy is identified for each Covered Species that consists of four components: 1) a global biological goal; 2) global biological objectives; 3) species-specific objectives; and 4) management and monitoring requirements. The Conservation Strategy for each Covered Species encompasses the standard that must be met.

    C-9 In addition to the substantial public and stakeholder participation that has occurred during the preparation of the MSHCP, the IA, the associated joint EIR/EIS and related documents, the public will continue to have meaningful input and review in the post-MSHCP adoption planning process. The RCA, which will oversee implementation of the MSHCP, will be a joint powers authority and will hold regularly scheduled public meetings in compliance with the Brown Act open meeting requirements (see Draft MSHCP, Section 6.6.2). Public participation will be permitted and encouraged at these meetings, as well as through the public processes held by the Permittees as part of the normal individual development review application process. See Responses F-43, F-75 and F-78. In addition, each Permittee will implement their public review procedures in review of individual public and private development projects.

    C-10 The Lead Agencies appreciate the comment that plant species accounts have been greatly improved. See Responses C-88 and C-93 for examples of species that occur in various Vegetation Communities in association with particular soil types and Response C-90 for species that occur in various Vegetation Communities within dry canyons or ephemeral stream channels.

    C-11 The referenced data sources will continue to be used throughout the MSHCP implementation process to ensure that the best information is used to assemble and manage the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    C-12 Contrary to the comment, as noted in the species account, beautiful hulsea is not proposed for Conservation only in Core M but will also be conserved in Core K. As noted in the comment, most of the distribution of beautiful hulsea lies within Core K. Although beautiful hulsea occurs in both Core K and Core M, it was considered a Planning Species for Core M but not for Core K. Core K contains potential habitat and known occurrences for a far greater number of sensitive species than does Core M. As defined in Section 3.2.3 - Cores and Linkages within the MSHCP Conservation Area, "Planning Species are subsets of Covered Species that are identified to provide guidance for Reserve Assembly in Cores and Linkages and/or Area Plans." Therefore, the distribution and potential habitat for beautiful hulsea had a greater influence in identification of Core M than of Core K.

    C-13 It is recognized that an existing connection along Temescal Wash is present from the portion of lower Temescal Wash within the Criteria Area to the Santa Ana River. This area is shown as PQP lands on the MSHCP Plan map (Figure 3-1). The Criteria Area identifies the area from within which 153,000 acres of Additional Reserve Lands will be acquired. Since this area is already in PQP Lands, it was not included in the Criteria Area.

    The amount of edge anticipated to occur within the MSHCP Conservation Area is not related to use of the quarter-section approach in development of the Criteria. In fact, all of the Cell Criteria identify areas connectivity requirements between Cells and Cell Groups. Reserve Assembly is also guided by the Cores and Linkages descriptions in Section 3.2.3 of the Plan. A review of the estimated interior and edge acres for the Cores and Linkages, and the anticipated perimeter to area ratios, indicate those features that are anticipated to have more or less edge. The discussion in Section 3.2.3 of the Plan acknowledges that certain Cores and Linkages will require special management measures to address edge conditions.

    C-14 No PQP Lands are identified for acquisition. The Criteria Area extends over certain isolated PQP Lands within the Plan Area so as not to have "holes" in the Criteria Area. A review of the specific Criteria for Cells and Cell Groups including PQP Lands will show that those lands are not identified for acquisition as part of Reserve Assembly.

    C-15 The word "area" in the referenced statement refers to the "approximate total area (acres)" given for each Core and Linkage in the individual descriptions of the Cores and Linkages. This will be clarified in the text of the Final MSHCP.

    C-16 The Lead Agencies are not in receipt of the referenced article, and therefore a response is not required.

    C-17 With the exception of the Non-Contiguous Habitat Blocks, the Cores and Linkages are planned to be connected. Without specific reference to areas that are not connected, a more specific response cannot be provided.

    C-18 As noted above in Responses C-4 and C-12, the definition of Planning Species as described in Section 3.2.3 - Cores and Linkages within the MSHCP Conservation Area, is as follows: "Planning Species are subsets of Covered Species that are identified to provide guidance for Reserve Assembly in Cores and Linkages and/or Area Plans." It is not true that the plant species listed in this comment "are not mentioned as occurring in any of the existing/proposed cores and linkages," but rather these species were not considered to be Planning Species. There are a variety of reasons why these species were not considered to be Planning Species and conservation of these species will be achieved upon implementation of the species Objectives listed in the species accounts.

    For example, Coulter's matilija poppy is restricted to the eastern slopes and foothills of the Santa Ana Mountains. Most of the records for this species are outside of the proposed MSHCP Conservation Area and the existing records are not believed to be indicative of the distribution of this species. Therefore, this species was not used to guide the Reserve Assembly for Core B or Linkage 1.

    For a discussion of why Hammitt's clay-cress is not considered to be a Planning Species see Response C-4.

    Another example is heart-leaved pitcher sage. The only population of heart-leaved pitcher sage identified at this time within the Plan Area is the complex within San Mateo Canyon. This population is located within the existing PQP Lands within the San Mateo Canyon Wilderness Area. Thus, heart-leaved pitcher sage was not considered a guiding factor in Reserve Assembly for Core B.

    C-19 As noted above in Responses C-4, C-12 and C-18, not all species were considered to be Planning Species. As defined in Section 3.2.3 - Cores and Linkages within the MSHCP Conservation Area: "Planning Species are subsets of Covered Species that are identified to provide guidance for Reserve Assembly in Cores and Linkages and/or Area Plans." Simply because a species was not identified as a Planning Species does not mean that species will not be conserved. Rather it means that the species was not considered to have guided Reserve Assembly in light of the other species which occur in the same Linkage or Core.

    With respect to major Covered Activities potentially affecting Cores and Linkages, the information provided in the referenced tables identifies those activities. The commentor has failed to provide a list of "potential major projects" that were not considered, and thus no additional response is possible.

    C-20 As noted above in Responses C-4, C-12, C-18, and C-19 not all species are considered to be Planning Species. Brand's phacelia is known from two localities along the Santa Ana River: at Fairmont Park and in the Santa Ana Wilderness Area. The species account identifies potential habitat as coastal sage scrub between 5 and 400 m in the Riverside Lowlands Bioregion. Species of Concern Area ID 7 on Figure 6-1 depicts the Narrow Endemic Plant Species Survey Area for Brand's phacelia. The Santa Ana River is a minor subset of the Narrow Endemic Plant Species Survey Area and Brand's phacelia was not a Planning Species for the Santa Ana River and Existing Core Area A.

    Smooth tarplant has a fairly scattered distribution, including Antelope Valley; Temescal Canyon; Lake Elsinore; Murrieta Creek; French Valley; Lakeview Mountains; Lake Skinner; Diamond ValleyLake;SycamoreCanyon Park; Alberhill Creek; Lake Mathews; the Santa Ana River; and the core locations at the San Jacinto Wildlife Area, the middle segment of the San Jacinto River and upper Salt Creek. This species does not appear to be concentrated along the Santa Ana River and did not guide Reserve Assembly in Existing Core A.

    C-21 It is acknowledged that Jaeger's milkvetch was incorrectly included as a Planning Species for Existing Core Area B and this will be corrected in the text.

    Regarding the list of species suggested as Planning Species for Existing Core Area B, see Responses C-4, C-12, C-18, C-19 and C-20. The species on this list are not considered Planning Species for Existing Core Area B.

    C-22 It is acknowledged that thread-leaved brodiaea was incorrectly included as a Planning Species for Existing Core Area C and this will be corrected in the text.

    Regarding the list of species suggested as Planning Species for Existing Core Area C, see Responses C-4, C-12, C-18, C-19 and C-20. The species on this list are not considered Planning Species for Existing Core Area C.

    C-23 See Response C-20 regarding the smooth tarplant. The smooth tarplant is not a Planning Species for Existing Core Area D.

    The reference should be to Alessandro and this will be corrected in the Final MSHCP.

    C-24 Regarding the list of species suggested as Planning Species for Existing Core Area E, see Responses C-4, C-12, C-18, C-19 and C-20. The species on this list are not considered Planning Species for Existing Core Area E.

    Existing Core Area E does not include the Alberhill Creek area. Proposed Linkage 2 includes the Alberhill Creek area.

    C-25 See Response C-24.

    C-26 It is acknowledged that California Orcutt grass was incorrectly included as a Planning Species for Existing Core Area H and this will be corrected in the text.

    Regarding the suggestion that mud nama is a Planning Species for Existing Core Area H, see Responses C-4, C-12, C-18, C-19 and C-20. This species is not considered a Planning Species for Existing Core Area H.

    C-27 Regarding the list of species suggested as Planning Species for Existing Core Area J, see Responses C-4, C-12, C-18, C-19 and C-20. The species on this list are not considered Planning Species for Existing Core Area J.

    C-28 Regarding the suggestion that slender-horned spine flower is a Planning Species for Existing Core Area J, see Responses C-4, C-12, C-18, C-19 and C-20. This species is not considered a Planning Species for Existing Core Area J.

    C-29 As noted above in Responses C-4, C-12, C-18, and C-20, not all species were considered to be Planning Species. As defined in Section 3.2.3 - Cores and Linkages within the MSHCP Conservation Area: "Planning Species are subsets of Covered Species that are identified to provide guidance for Reserve Assembly in Cores and Linkages and/or Area Plans." Simply because a species was not identified as a Planning Species does not mean that species will not be conserved. Rather it means that the species was not considered to have guided preparation of the Criteria in light of the other species which occur in the same Linkage or Core. Conservation of these species will be achieved upon implementation of the species objectives listed in the species accounts.

    C-30 It is acknowledged that Wright's trichocoronis is a Planning Species for Proposed Extension of Existing Core Area 4 and the text will be edited to reflect this.

    C-31 The lists of Planning Species for Area Plan Subunits sometimes differ from the lists of Planning Species for Cores and Linkages in similar areas because of the different geographic boundaries of the Subunits and Cores and Linkages. See Responses C-4, C12, C-18, C-20 and C-29.

    C-32 There is no acreage coverage for playas and vernal pool Vegetation Communities in the Elsinore Area Plan map. The Nichols Road wetlands lie within Cells 4067 and 4166.

    The difficulty of producing report-size, hard-copy maps that are fully legible is recognized. For this reason, the County has made a GIS query system available to the public through the RCIP website (http://rcip.org/PDFlib/rcip/apn_search.asp) and Cell information may be retrieved from that source.

    C-33 See Response C-32 regarding the difficulty in reading maps. The requested cross-reference information is provided in the descriptions of Area Plan Subunits and Criteria for Cells and Cell Groups which specifically identify applicable Cores and Linkages. This is not necessary for the Rough Step Analysis Units or the preliminary Management Units as the large size of these units would incorporate many Cores and Linkages and such a table would not be meaningful.

    C-34 The sample form referenced in the comment, entitled Form for Assessment of Upland and Wetland Habitat Conditions is from Section 5.2.1 of the Draft MSHCP - Proposed Management Activities. As explained in Section 5.2.1, the purpose of the sample form is to provide consistency in how and what data are collected in accordance with General Management Measures 3 and 4. These measures require the maintenance and management of Upland Habitats and Wetland Habitats, respectively, within the MSHCP Conservation Area. However, the form is not intended to be absolute; it may be used as is or modified at the discretion of the Reserve Manager. The habitat conditions will be measured at regular intervals as identified in Section 5.3.5 -Vegetation Community/Wildlife Habitat Inventory and Monitoring. Section 5.3.5 further describes the monitoring methods to be used, including the CNPS "Vegetation Rapid Assessment Protocol" (CNPS 2002) and "Relevant Protocol" (CNPS 1998).

    C-35 As described in General Management Measure 8 of Section 5.2.1 of the Draft MSHCP Proposed Management Activities, management activities must ensure that species presence and continued use shall be maintained at 75% of the locations identified in the species account for each species, as measured at a minimum of once every eight years. The comment requests additional information for the terms "presence," "75%," and "locations." In this sense, 75% means three out of four, location means population or locality as referenced in the species objectives and presence means observed to be present.

    C-36 There is no mention of General Management Criteria 4 on page 5-7 of the Draft MSHCP. If the commentor is referring to General Management Measure 4, the General Management Measures are outlined in Section 5.2.1 - Proposed Management Activities.

    C-37 The commentor requests that Special Considerations and Management Actions in Table 5-1, Factors to be Considered in Management Responses to Disturbance Regimes, be clarified so that the considerations and actions are not open to prevent interpretation. However, as described in General Management Measure 9 of the Draft MSHCP, it is the intent of Table 5-1 not to prescribe management activities but to identify a common list of potential actions and considerations for Reserve Managers to evaluate. Because preexisting conditions, post-disturbance conditions and special considerations may vary considerably by reserve location, it is imperative to provide flexibility in the ability of Reserve Managers to respond to disturbance.

    Regarding the question on the relationship between the columns Pre-existing/Post-Disturbance columns, the two columns are not tied together. For example, "availability of irrigation"is not tied to a specific Pre-existing/Post-disturbance column entry but is one of many special considerations in response to a fire disturbance. Based on the type of habitat to be restored, the Reserve Manager may determine that irrigation would be a benefit or not.

    Regarding the statement "Determine target vegetation to re-establish" in the Special Considerations column for fire, the Management Action includes the establishment of native plants and exotic species control. Management Actions in Table 5-1 do not include the re-establishment of non-native vegetation.

    "Presence of sensitive plant species - bulb, etc." is a Special Consideration for Fire and Disturbed Habitat. It is acknowledged that this Special Consideration should be added to the remaining Disturbance Source categories: Exotic Plant Invasion, Sedimentation and Erosion. Table 5-1 will be revised accordingly.

    C-38 This definition of revegetation anticipates that non-native annual species could contribute to revegetation efforts as a "nurse" crop in erosion control mixes. The nurse crop species would not be anticipated to persist longer than one or two seasons.

    C-39 Table 5-2 includes "persecution" as a threat of the bald eagle. Persecution in this sense means systematic hunting due to a perceived threat, typically to livestock.

    C-40 Please review the Definitions and Acronyms section that follows the Table of Contents and precedes Section 1 - Introduction. The definition of "Vegetation Community(ies)" is: A group of plants that tend to occur together in consistent, definable groups based on typical constituents as depicted on the MSHCP Vegetation Map, Figure 2-1 of the MSHCP, Volume 1.

    The definition of "Habitat" is: The combination of environmental conditions of a specific place providing for the needs of a species or a population of such species.

    C-41 "Change Detection for Vegetation Communities and Wildlife Habitats" is an element of the long-term monitoring phase and would be implemented every eight years. This element of the monitoring is intended to detect changes in the Vegetation Communities and Wildlife Habitats.

    C-42 As described in the Long-Term Monitoring of Covered Species subsection of Section 5.3.5 -Vegetation Community/Wildlife Habitat Inventory and Monitoring, a "community approach will be used to the extent possible for the long-term monitoring program." This subsection goes on to state "Species that cannot be grouped together or be sampled at a common sampling station because of rarity of occurrence, seasonality, geographic location, or other restriction may require a different monitoring strategy." A sample list of such species is included within the Long-Term Monitoring of Covered Species subsection. As discussed in Section 5.3.3 - Monitoring Program Implementation Sequence, long-term monitoring strategies will be developed during years two through four. These strategies include schedules, protocols, time intervals and multi-species approaches, where appropriate. During years three through five, intensive monitoring will be conducted for Covered Species with additional information needs. In years six through eight and beyond, this intensive monitoring will continue to be conducted for Covered Species with additional information needs. It is acknowledged that a number of annual plant species are dependent on rainfall and other sources of hydrology. As annual plant species are evaluated in years two through four, those considered to have additional information needs will require more intensive monitoring. As indicated above, rarity of occurrence and seasonality will affect the monitoring strategy. See complete Responses to Comment Letter J.

    C-43 There are no gaps in Table 5-8; however, there are columnar categories that do not apply to all of the species in this table. As described in Section 2.1.4 - Species Considered for Conservation in the MSHCP, of the 146 Covered Species included in the MSHCP, 130 species are Covered Species Adequately Conserved. The 16 remaining species will be considered adequately conserved at such time as the species-specific conservation requirements are met. These objectives are in the species accounts and in Section 9.0 Conservation and Take Estimates. These 16 species have a check mark in the column "Demonstrate Conservation."

    C-44 Table 5-8, Summary of Survey Requirements for Covered Species as per the Species Objectives, includes only those survey requirements that are included in the species objectives, or the default survey requirement of at least once every eight years. As discussed in Response C-42, the monitoring schedule for each species will be determined in years two through four and those species that require more frequent surveys will be identified at that time. Regarding the column Demonstrate Conservation, see Response C-43.

    Regarding reproduction/recruitment assessments, the Plan proposes this for only one plant species: Engelmann oak. As noted in Objective 3 in the Engelmann oak species account, recruitment must be maintained at a minimum of 80 percent of the conserved populations within the MSHCP Conservation Area, measured by the presence/absence of seedlings and/or saplings over five consecutive years. However, the MSHCP states that currently no other plant species require reproduction/recruitment monitoring but that conservation is demonstrated through achieving species-specific objectives pertaining to minimum conservation of potential habitat acreage, known and/or future locations, floodplain processes, etc. If it is determined through implementation of Section 5.2 MSHCP Management and Adaptive Management Programs and 5.3 - Biological Monitoring Program that certain plant species require reproduction/recruitment monitoring in order to attain the species-specific objectives then reproduction/ recruitment monitoring would be carried out on a species by species basis.

    The 8-year interval is the cycle when all monitoring activities will have occurred at least once and is used as an index for establishing a new baseline distribution and at least an index of abundance for all Covered Species. However, a number of the Covered Species are being monitored more frequently in accordance with species-specific objectives. Table 5-8 illustrates the sampling intervals for each species and Section 5.3.9 Anticipated Levels of Effort and Estimate Costs identifies the proposed survey/ monitoring teams in the Initial Inventory and Assessment Phase and Long-Term Monitoring Phase. Please note that these teams are separate from the Reserve Management teams.

    As discussed in Section 5.3 of the Draft MSHCP, the decision to use an 8-year monitoring cycle is based on RCFCWCD rainfall data for the years 1880-1999 indicating that wet and dry periods in the Plan Area occur in 7 to 10 year cycles. The 8-year cycle will therefore capture data within the historic normal wet and dry cycles in the Plan Area.

    The monitoring plan also includes provisions to change monitoring intervals based on new information during the long-term MSHCP implementation process.

    From a species perspective, a 7-yearinterval was initially considered, related to perceived climate patterns (partially supported by Riverside County rainfall data). The interval was later modified to an 8-year interval to provide for a greater opportunity to examine correlative relationships of vegetation change with species trends (species monitored every 1, 2, or 4 years would have common data points with vegetation status every 8th year; because 7 is a prime number, a 7-year cycle offers less opportunity to simultaneously link data within a given year).

    Based on CDFG's extensive experience with, and knowledge of, monitoring mammal species, the 8-year cycle was determined to be appropriate, balancing information needs and costs of monitoring.

    C-45 The phrase "three 3-person crews" contains a typographical error. The text will be corrected to reflect three 2-person crews as budgeted.

    C-46 The three seasonal positions referenced are for the rapid assessment surveys, which is separate from species-specific surveys. It is acknowledged that a larger effort for species-specific plant surveys may be required in the spring following a high rainfall year. Since surveys for all Covered Species will be staggered from year to year, it is anticipated that crews that have been budgeted for other surveys, but will not in fact be used that year, can be used for spring plant surveys. In the event that more staff is needed, the use of the 10% contingency fund will be considered.

    C-47 See Response C-46.

    C-48 See Response C-5.

    C-49 See Response C-5.

    C-50 As described in Section 3.3.1 of the Plan, the Area Plan boundaries are institutional boundaries and are not biologically based. It would not be appropriate to have Rough Step Analysis Units based on units that are not biologically meaningful. In contrast, the Cores and Linkages are biologically meaningful units and the Rough Step Analysis Units are based on appropriate assemblages of the identified Cores and Linkages.

    C-51 The discussion of property acquisition is included in the Property Owner Initiated Habitat Evaluation and Acquisition Negotiation Strategy (HANS) since it is anticipated that a significant amount of the property will be acquired through this process. The Lead Agencies do not agree that a discussion of how property will be acquired is appropriate for inclusion in the species accounts. The purpose of the species accounts is to specify the biological goals and objectives for each species. These goals and objectives may only be achieved if property is in fact conserved or set aside through acquisition of fee title or the imposition of deed restrictions or conservation easements.

    C-52 Yes. See Section 8.4.2 of the Draft MSHCP for a discussion of conservation tools not requiring full acquisition.

    C-53 As set forth on page 6-4 of the Draft MSHCP, the initial application review period for proposed projects within the Criteria Area may be extended beyond the 45-day period upon the mutual consent of the parties. In addition, the Joint Project/Acquisition Review Process described on pages 6-78 et seq. of the Draft MSHCP will also occur.

    C-54 The second paragraph of page 6-12 of the Draft MSHCP states that any approved development application that precludes compliance with MSHCP Conservation Criteria will result in suspension or revocation of the Permits terminating Third Party Take Authorization. This suspension or revocation can occur as appropriate and may cover all or a portion of the Plan Area, Covered Species, etc. The commentor does not indicate why or how this section could be clearer.

    C-55 These entities can take fee title to property, if appropriate.

    C-56 See Responses F-12, F-14, F-15, F-16.

    C-57 The plants noted in the comment will be added to the list of plants in the Purpose portion of Section 6.1.2 in the Final MSHCP.

    C-58 Parish's meadowfoam (Limnanthes gracilis var. parishii), Orcutt's brodiaea (Brodiaea orcuttii), San Diego button-celery (Eryngium aristulatum var. parishii) and vernal barley (Hordeum intercedens) are already listed in Section 6.1.2 as species that would benefit from the protection of Riparian/Riverine Areas and Vernal Pools within the MSHCP Plan Area.

    As suggested, the following species will be added to the list of plant species in Section 6.1.2 that would benefit from the protection of Riparian/Riverine Areas and Vernal Pools within the MSHCP Plan Area.

    Brand's phacelia (Phacelia stellaris)
    California walnut (Juglans californica)
    Coulter's matilija poppy (Romneya coulteri)
    Engelmann oak (Quercus engelmannii)
    Fish's milkwort (Polygala cornuta var. fishiae)
    graceful tarplant (Holocarpha virgata ssp. elongata)
    lemon lily (Lilium parryi)
    Mojave tarplant (Deinandra mohavensis)
    mud nama (Nama stenocarpum)
    ocellated Humboldt lily (Lilium humboldtii ssp. ocellatum)
    San Miguel's savory (Satureja chandleri)
    slender-horned spineflower (Dodecahema leptocerus)
    smooth tarplant (Centromadia pungens)

    It should be noted that the only species for which survey requirements are identified in Section 6.1.2 are those birds and invertebrates/crustaceans listed under the Survey, Mapping and Documentation Requirements portion of Section 6.1.2. See Sections 6.1.3 and 6.3.2 of the Draft MSHCP for identification of plant species for which surveys are required. Appendix E to Volume I of the MSHCP also provides a summary of survey requirements.

    C-59 As stated in the Survey, Mapping and Documentation Requirements portion of Section 6.1.2, mapping of riparian/riverine areas and vernal pools will be required "as projects are proposed within the Plan Area,...as currently required by CEQA." As lead agencies under CEQA for both public and private projects, Local Permittees will be required to ensure that the Survey, Mapping and Documentation Requirements are implemented.

    C-60 As mentioned above in Response C-58, mud nama and smooth tarplant will be added to the list of plant species in Section 6.1.2 that would benefit from the protection of Riparian/Riverine Areas and Vernal Pools within the MSHCP Plan Area. Prostrate navarretia will also be added to this list.

    C-61 As mentioned above in Response C-5, it is acknowledged that survey requirements for plants are documented in two separate sections of the MSHCP - Section 6.1.3 Protection of Narrow Endemic Plant Species and Section 6.3.2 - Additional Survey Needs and Procedures, and that plants that may be considered to be narrow endemics appear on both lists. The rationale for dividing the lists of plants for which surveys are required was based on consideration of those plants for which surveys would be required within appropriate locations of the broad Narrow Endemic Plant Species survey area (Draft MSHCP, Figure 6-1) and those plants for which surveys could be confined to appropriate locations within the Criteria Area (Draft MSHCP, Figure 6-2). Survey methods and avoidance, minimization and mitigation requirements are the same for both lists of plants so the ways in which these plant species are addressed in the Plan do not differ based on whether they appear on the Narrow Endemic Plant Species survey list or the Additional Survey Needs and Procedures list.

    C-62 The Nichols Road wetlands are included in Narrow Endemic Plant Species Survey Area 1. Coulter's goldfields, Davidson's saltbush, Parish's saltbush and San Jacinto Valley crownscale are not included in Section 6.1.3 as Narrow Endemic Plant Species and therefore these species do not appear on Figure 6-1, Narrow Endemic Plant Species Survey Area with Criteria Area. Regarding San Diego ambrosia, this species is known to occur in this area and will be added to Figure 6-1 for Survey Area 1. Regarding spreading navarretia and Wright's trichocoronis, although these species are known to be associated with alkali soils they are not known to occur in the Alberhill area and have not been included in Survey Area 1 for that reason.

    C-63 The text will be corrected to reflect the correct scientific name for Parish's brittlescale.

    Section 6.1.3 - Protection of Narrow Endemic Plant Species includes a list of plants for which surveys are required within appropriate locations of the broad Narrow Endemic Plant Species survey area (Figure 6-1). Parish's meadowfoam (Limnanthes gracilis var. parishii), small-flowered microseris (Microseris douglasii var. platycarpha), Santa Ana River woolly-star (Eriastrum densiflorum var. sanctorum), San Diego button-celery (Eryngium aristulatum var. parishii) and Orcutt's brodiaea (Brodiaea orcuttii) were not included on the Narrow Endemic Plant Species list in Section 6.1.3 for reasons discussed below.

    Parish's meadowfoam and San Diego button-celery are restricted to ephemeral wetlands and vernal pools on the Santa Rosa Plateau and are not expected to occur elsewhere in the Plan Area. Because the only known and expected occurrences of these two species are conserved within the Santa Rosa Plateau Nature Conservancy Preserve, it was determined that Conservation of these two species would not be dependent upon conserving additional locations within the broad Narrow Endemic Plant Species survey area.

    The known extant localities (four occurrences) of the Santa Ana River woolly-star would be conserved in the MSHCP Conservation Area with connectivity along the Santa Ana River. This species is not expected to occur elsewhere in the Plan Area and therefore it was determined that conservation of this species would not be dependent upon conserving additional locations within the broad Narrow Endemic Plant Species survey area.

    At least eight of the known locations of small-flowered microseris will be conserved in the MSHCP Conservation Area at Lake Matthews, in the Cleveland National Forest, at Lake Skinner and at Vail Lake. However, this species has a fairly scattered distribution and the existing records are not believed to be indicative of the distribution of this species; it was not possible to determine a Narrow Endemic Plant Species survey area for small-flowered microseris. Rather than identify a particular survey area, it was determined that coverage of this species would not be included in this Permit until Conservation of the species in the Plan Area has been demonstrated by confirming 10 localities (locality in this sense is not smaller than one quarter section) with at least 1,000 individuals (unless a smaller population has been demonstrated to be self-sustaining).

    Three populations of Orcutt's brodiaea are known to occur within the Plan Area of which two lie within PQP Lands. The Core Area and associated watershed are conserved within the Santa Rosa Plateau Nature Conservancy Preserve and the Miller Mountain population is located partially within the San Mateo Wilderness. The third record along the San Jacinto River will be conserved in the MSHCP Conservation Area. This species is not expected to occur elsewhere in the Plan Area and therefore it was determined that Conservation of this species would not be dependent upon conserving additional locations within the broad Narrow Endemic Plant Species survey area.

    Section 6.1.3 - Protection of Narrow Endemic Plant Species includes a list of plants for which surveys are required within appropriate locations of the broad Narrow Endemic Plant Species survey area (Figure 6-1). California bedstraw (Galium californicum ssp. primum), Jaeger's milk-vetch (Astragalus pachypus var. jaegeri) and sticky dudleya (Dudleya viscida) were not included on the Narrow Endemic Plant Species list in Section 6.1.3 for reasons discussed below.

    California bedstraw was incorrectly identified as a Narrow Endemic in the species accounts (page 24); this error will be corrected in the text. The range of G. californicum ssp. primum is generally described as limited to the San Jacinto Mountains (CNPS 2001; Dempster 1993; Munz 1974). Of the five known localities in the San Jacinto Mountains, four are conserved. Because this species is not expected to occur outside the San Jacinto Mountains, it was determined that Conservation of this species would not be dependent upon conserving additional locations within the broad Narrow Endemic Plant Species survey area.

    Jaeger's milk vetch has a fairly scattered distribution (Vail Lake near Kolb Creek, on the south side of Aguanga Valley, in the vicinity of Sage, Temecula Canyon, in the vicinity of Castile Canyon, in a canyon west of Portrero Creek, and at the base of Agua Tibia Mountain)and is also known to occur in northern San Diego County. Of the nine localities of Jaeger's milk vetch, seven of the nine localities will be conserved: Aguanga Valley, San Jacinto Mountains, Potrero Creek, Sage, Temecula Canyon, and the core location at Vail Lake and the base of the Agua Tibia Mountains. Of the two localities not to be conserved, one is historic and probably not extant: Beaumont (dating from 1897); the remaining locality (foothills of the Agua TibiaMountains) not conserved dates from 1997. In addition, 53% (249,440 acres) of the suitable habitat for this species will be included within the MSHCP Conservation Area. Given the high level conservation of known localities and the fairly scattered distribution, it was determined that Conservation of this species would not be dependent upon conserving additional locations within the broad Narrow Endemic Plant Species survey area.

    The undisputed known occurrences of sticky dudleya are concentrated within the San Mateo Wilderness Area of the Santa Ana Mountains within USFS Lands. This species is not expected to occur elsewhere in the Plan Area and therefore it was determined that conservation of this species would not be dependent upon conserving additional locations within the broad Narrow Endemic Plant Species survey area.

    C-64 As indicated above in Response C-63, Section 6.1.3 - Protection of Narrow Endemic Plant Species includes a list of plants for which surveys are required within appropriate locations of the broad Narrow Endemic Plant Species survey area (Draft MSHCP, Figure 6-1). Orcutt's brodiaea, San Diego button-celery and parish's meadow foam were not included on the Narrow Endemic list for reasons explained above in Response C-63. Brand's phacelia, California Orcutt grass, many-stemmed dudleya and Hammitt's clay-cress are already identified as Narrow Endemic Plant Species in Section 6.1.3, Table 6-1 and Figure 6-1.

    Regarding the listing of species in Table 6-1, the species are ordered alphabetically. The first half of the table lists the Narrow Endemic Plant Species alphabetically and the second half of the table lists the Criteria Area Survey plant species alphabetically.

    C-65 The Sedco Hills are addressed in Subunit 4 of the Elsinore Area Plan and Proposed Linkage 8. Regarding the "high number of endemic plant species" in Sedco Hills, only prostrate spine flower and long-spined spine flower, neither of which are Narrow Endemics Plant Species, are known to occur in Sedco Hills. None of the Narrow Endemic Plant Species included in Section 6.1.3 are known to occur in Sedco Hills.

    The target species listed in the "Species of Concern Area ID" of Figure 6-1 are correct. The comment mentions that San Jacinto Valley crownscale and thread-leaved brodiaea are not mentioned as target species in Area 3 and San Jacinto Valley crownscale and Coulter's goldfields are not mentioned as target species in Area 2. None of these species mentioned is listed as a Narrow Endemic Plant Species and therefore are not included on Figure 6-1, which depicts only the Narrow Endemic Plant Species Survey Areas overlaying the Criteria Area. Regarding Wright's trichocoronis, this Narrow Endemic Plant Species may possibly occur in the alkali wetlands near Nichols Road in the vicinity of Lake Elsinore and was therefore included in Area 2 on Figure 6-1.

    As stated in Section 6.3.2, surveys are required by the MSHCP for species where additional information is necessary to determine measures that would avoid, minimize and mitigate impacts of a project. In the case of the portion of the San Jacinto River referenced in the comment and depicted on Figures 6-1 and 6-2 recent, comprehensive, property-specific survey data are available and sufficient information exists to evaluate a proposed action in this area. Since the purpose of the survey requirements has already been filled in this area, the MSHCP allows, as noted on Figures 6-1 and 6-2, that survey requirements be waived in the future if a project determined to be consistent with the criteria for the San Jacinto River project presented in Section 7.0 of the MSHCP is proposed and accepted. If this requirement is not met, survey requirements would apply in this area.

    C-66 If impacts greater than 90% cannot be avoided and achievement of overall MSHCP conservation goals for the particular species have not yet been demonstrated, then a determination of biologically equivalent or superior preservation is required in accordance with Section 6.1.3 - Protection of Narrow Endemic Plant Species. The biologically equivalent or superior alternative must be determined to provide benefits with respect to MSHCP Conservation Area design and configuration and shall be considered in the context of the following factors:

    • effects on Habitat with long-term conservation value to Narrow Endemic Plant Species
    • effects on the populations of the Narrow Endemic Plant Species
    • effects on Linkages and function of the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    Due to the stringent analysis required to make such a determination, it is not necessary to replace "avoided" with "prohibited."

    C-67 The bullets referenced on page 6-40 specifically state that the biologically equivalent or superior alternative must consider "effects on Habitat with long-term conservation value to Narrow Endemic Plant Species" and "effects on populations of the Narrow Endemic Plant Species." These requirements will assure that the focus of the biologically equivalent or superior alternative is on plants.

    C-68 See Response C-55.

    C-69 It is acknowledged that different types of agricultural use may have differing impacts to biological resources. Habitat values on existing agricultural lands are considered in the species analyses.

    C-70 The comment is overly speculative and describes events that are unlikely to occur during the Permit's term. If all habitat value is removed as a result of agricultural land conversion and Take Authorization no longer meets state and federal issuance criteria, the Wildlife Agencies have remedies identified in Section 23 of the IA.

    C-71 As the comment itself recognizes, existing zoning, previous trends (see Section 7.3.2 of the MSHCP), and the number of existing legal lots makes it unlikely that applications for the development of a large number of single family homes in the Criteria Area would be submitted at any one time. For this reason, it is unnecessary for the MSHCP to specifically limit the number of single family homes that can be built within the Criteria Area. Further, as explained by the Draft MSHCP at pp. 6-17 through 6-18, the location of a single family home or mobile home on an existing legal lot is determined by a number of factors, which act to restrict where a home may be built. With this understanding, the MSHCP limits Criteria Review for the 90-day period to a determination of the location of the building footprint and necessary access roads. Because of these existing restrictions, the review process, and the low number of such applications expected, there is no need to impose any other biological restrictions upon single family housing on existing legal lots in the Criteria Area.

    C-72 The comment does not offer information on how Section 6.3.2 is confusing and a more detailed response is not possible.

    See the last paragraph of Response C-65 for discussion of the rationale for waiving survey requirements along a portion of the San Jacinto River. These requirements would be waived only if a project consistent with the requirements set forth in Section 7.0 of the MSHCP is proposed and accepted.

    As noted in Section 6.3.2 - Additional Survey Needs and Procedures, plant species listed as Criteria Area Survey Plant Species in Table 6-1 and depicted in Figure 6-2 will require surveys within appropriate habitat in the Criteria Area. Potential habitat is defined in Table 6-1. The habitat suitability assessment procedures described in Section 6.1.3 are referenced in Section 6.3.2. Given the known distribution of these plant species, the Wildlife Agencies feel that it is appropriate to confine surveys for these plants to appropriate locations within the Criteria Area.

    If impacts greater than 90% cannot be avoided and achievement of overall MSHCP conservation goals for the particular species have not yet been demonstrated, then a determination of biologically equivalent or superior preservation as described in Section 6.3.2 - Additional Survey Needs and Procedures. The biologically equivalent or superior alternative must be determined to provide benefits with respect to MSHCP Conservation Area design and configuration and shall be considered in the context of the following factors:

    • effects on conserved habitats supporting the identified species
    • effects on the populations of the identified species
    • effects on habitat linkages and function of the MSHCP Conservation Area
    • effects on MSHCP Conservation Area configuration and management.

    Due to the stringent analysis required to make such a determination, the Lead Agencies feel that this process will result in adequate Conservation for these plant species. See also Response C-66.

    C-73 See Responses F-79, F-80 and F-82 for discussion of the ways in which the effects of Covered Activities are addressed in the MSHCP. The last paragraph of Response F-79 discusses the ways in which indirect effects of Covered Activities are addressed in the MSHCP. With respect to the SR-79 realignment from Newport Road to Gilman Springs Road, pages 7-25 through 7-28 of the Draft MSHCP specifically address this facility and require concurrence by the Wildlife Agencies on any alignment selected. Requirements incorporated in the MSHCP will assure that the alignment selected avoids, minimizes and fully mitigates impacts to Covered Species.

    With respect to the degree that the MSHCP would "cover these projects, and would potentially not allow for further mitigation or additional listings to protect these species," it should be noted that the MSHCP requires measures to avoid, minimize and mitigate impacts to Covered Species associated with Covered Activities as required by the FESA HCP issuance criteria. With respect to Covered Species, "further mitigation" would not be needed. No features of the MSHCP would limit the ability to petition for future listings within the Plan Area.

    C-74 The only location within which there is a potential to waive survey requirements is in the reach of the San Jacinto River identified in Figures 6-1 and 6-2 of the Draft MSHCP. See the last paragraph of Response C-65 for discussion of the rationale for the potential to waive survey requirements in that area.

    As noted in Table -2 of the Draft MSHCP, thirteen of the plant species on the Covered Species list would not be considered to be Covered Species Adequately Conserved until certain conservation requirements are met.

    C-75 The purpose of the equivalency analysis is to consider impacts to Covered Species in the MSHCP, not to analyze non-Covered Species. If additional analysis is triggered under CEQA or NEPA due to impacts on non-Covered Species, the Lead Agencies (RCTC and FHWA) would prepare such analysis prior to approval.

    C-76 See Response C-75.

    C-77 The analysis in Section 7.3.2 of the MSHCP concludes that an expedited review process for single family homes would not result in significant impacts to Reserve Assembly. With respect to seasonality, the habitat assessment referenced in Section 6.1.1 of the MSHCP does not relate to focused surveys for species but rather to a general assessment of habitat features of the site in order to determine appropriate placement of the structure or any appurtenant facilities. As stated in Section 7.3.2, based on historic trends and the annual review requirements incorporated in the MSHCP, the level of potential impact is not anticipated to be of a magnitude that would preclude effective assembly of the MSHCP Conservation Area consistent with MSHCP requirements. It is acknowledged that the quantitative data presented in Section 7.3.2 are based on a prediction of anticipated single family home activity and that actual activity may differ from the data presented. However, the predictions presented are based on best available data using historictrends. The referenced "monitoring and reporting" of single family home activity will be included in annual reports prepared by the RMOC as required in Sections 6.6 and 6.11 of the Draft MSHCP. The purpose of providing and reviewing this information on an annual basis is to determine if acquisition priorities should be modified in response to single family home activity in a certain area to assure that such activities do not preclude Reserve Assembly consistent with MSHCP requirements. Moreover, as part of the expedited review process, the Permittees may negotiate with the property owner to acquire the subject lot, or to provide other incentives. The Draft EIR/EIS contains an evaluation of related direct, indirect and cumulative effects. See Responses H2-5, H2-15 and H2-309 through H2-315.

    C-78 See Responses C-69, F-12, F-13 and F-84. The Lead Agencies do not believe that conversion of up to 10,000 acres within the Criteria Area to agricultural use would result in the loss of "significant habitat" and, thus, it would not be appropriate or feasible to impose new requirements for the regulation of Agricultural Operations. In the highly unlikely event that this scenario occurs, the Wildlife Agencies may implement the remedies set forth in Section 23 of the IA.

    C-79 Nothing in the MSHCP would preclude project-specific environmental review of the SR79 northern alignment referenced in this comment, and it is expected that the CEQA lead agency for this project will undertake such review. The Lead Agencies believe that the 60-day review period is adequate.

    C-80 It is not possible to confine freeway improvements to locations outside the Criteria Area. The existing freeways that need to be improved traverse the Criteria Area. Freeway improvements will be subject to project specific review and must implement the avoidance, minimization and mitigation requirements incorporated in the MSHCP.

    As with freeways, certain CETAP corridors follow existing corridors that traverse the Criteria Area and improvements would need to occur within the Criteria. In addition, for several of the potential new corridors, it has been determined that it is not possible to meet the mobility objectives of these corridors without some portion traversing the Criteria Area. As with the freeways, the CETAP corridors will be subject to project specific review and must meet the CETAP corridor-specific and the overall avoidance, minimization and mitigation requirements incorporated in the MSHCP. The Wildlife Agencies have agreed to the 90-day review period and believe it to be adequate.

    C-81 The MSHCP requires that the Permittees affirmatively assemble the MSHCP Conservation Area within the San Jacinto River, through implementation of the Criteria, with or without a flood control project. The Lead Agencies believe the Conservation Strategies identified for the Covered Species identified in this comment are adequate and there are sufficient requirements in the MSHCP to assure that the Conservation Strategies identified for those species are met. Wildlife Agency concurrence is required for any flood control project that would be considered as a Covered Activity.

    C-82 It is acknowledged that distribution of the species referenced in this comment is limited and therefore, mitigation may occur within a limited geographical area. Regardless of where the mitigation is located, it would need to meet the objectives for the species. Options are provided flexibility in Reserve Assembly, but would need to meet the stated objectives. The language provided in the MSHCP is sufficient to meet Permit issuance criteria for the referenced species.

    C-83 Translocation of thread-leaved Brodiaea south of the I-215 is only proposed to occur if no other alternative has been successful.

    C-84 The referenced statement regarding Criteria adjustments refers to the Criteria Refinement Process and MSHCP amendment processes already included in the MSHCP. If such adjustments are necessary, the San Jacinto River project would be subject to the same MSHCP requirements as other applicants for public and private development projects.

    C-85 The Table of Contents text will be corrected to include the correct page number for Munz's onion.

    C-86 As mentioned above in Responses C-5 and C-61, it is acknowledged that plants that may be considered to be Narrow Endemics Plant Species appear in Section 6.1.3 - Protection of Narrow Endemic Plant Species and Section 6.3.2 - Additional Survey Needs and Procedures. The rationale for dividing the lists of plants for which surveys are required was based on consideration of those plants for which surveys would be required within appropriate locations of the broad Narrow Endemic Plant Species survey area (Figure 61) and those plants for which surveys could be confined to appropriate locations within the Criteria Area (Figure 6-2). Survey methods and avoidance, minimization and mitigation requirements are the same for both lists of plants so the ways in which these plant species are addressed in the Plan do not differ based on whether they appear on the Narrow Endemic Plant Species survey list or the Additional Survey Needs and Procedures list.

    See Response C-65. None of the Narrow Endemic Plant Species included in Section 6.1.3 are known to occur in Sedco Hills.

    Each of the plants mentioned includes a habitat-based objective and a locality-based objective. Moreover, each of these plant species requires additional surveys in accordance with Section 6.1.3 - Protection of Narrow Endemic Plant Species and Section 6.3.2 - Additional Survey Needs and Procedures. Survey methods and avoidance, minimization and mitigation requirements as described in Section 6.1.3 and Section 6.3.2 will ensure that the species on these two lists will be adequately conserved.

    C-87 The organization of the referenced table reflects the organization of survey requirements in the MSHCP and does not need to be changed. See Response C-5 for additional discussion of this issue.

    As described in Response C-5, Section 6.1.2 - Protection of Species Associated with Riparian/Riverine Areas and Vernal Pools will provide benefits to a number of plant species that occur in wetlands. The table is correct that surveys for California Orcutt grass will only be required as indicated in Figure 6-1 in Section 6.1.3 of the Draft MSHCP. See Response C-58 for additional discussion of this issue.

    C-88 As described in the species account for many-stemmed dudleya, potential habitat for many-stemmed dudleya is considered to include chaparral, coastal sage scrub, and grasslands that occur on clay soils of the Auld, Altamont, Bosanko, Claypit, and Porterville series and within the Riverside Lowlands and Santa Ana Mountains Bioregions. The clay soils information available for purposes of the analysis was prepared by the U.S. Department of Agriculture, Soils Conservation Service (Knecht 1971) and the mapping was general. See the Soils Discussion and Figure 2-4 of Section 2.1.1 - Data Sources and Limitations for a discussion of soils data. Based on the clay soils mapping source, it is possible for there to be small patches of clay inclusions throughout the chaparral, sage scrub and grasslands within the MSHCP Plan Area. Therefore, the conservation analysis was based on both the vegetation communities and clay soils being conserved. This is reflected in Objective 1 of the species account.

    The same circumstances are true for the other species that are associated with clay soils. The conservation analyses for these species were also based on conservation of both Vegetation Communities and clay soils.

    As discussed in Response C-86 (third paragraph), the conservation analyses for the plant species include a habitat-based objective and a locality-based objective. For a few plants (e.g., Parish's meadowfoam) for which there is no acreage coverage (e.g., vernal pools habitat), the conservation analysis focused on conservation of localities. Whenever possible, based on the distribution data available, core locations were identified and these were also addressed in the conservation analyses and species objectives.

    C-89 Page 3 of the beautiful hulsea species account states that at least 85,500 acres (60 percent) of the potential habitat will be conserved. The 60 percent was a minimum standard for species primarily restricted to Forest Service lands. Objective 1 states that at least 106,440 acres of suitable habitat shall be conserved, which is greater than the minimum 60 percent. The species objectives for the plant species, including beautiful hulsea, constitute the MSHCP's requirements for Conservation and, ultimately, Take Authorization.

    It is acknowledged that Objective 2 indicates that at least 12 of the known occurrences shall be conserved within the MSHCP Conservation Area. However, Objective 3 indicates that this species will not receive Take Authorization until 16 localities (locality in this sense is not smaller than one quarter section) with no fewer than 50 individuals each (unless a smaller population has been demonstrated to be self-sustaining) are conserved. Based on species distribution and locality size, this level of Conservation is considered adequate for beautiful hulsea.

    Objective 3 requires that 16 localities be confirmed within the MSHCP Conservation Area. Section 5.2 - MSHCP Management and Adaptive Management Programs and 5.3 Biological Monitoring Program will apply to these localities to ensure Conservation of beautiful hulsea.

    With respect to forest species, see Response A-3.

    C-90 As noted in the species account, Coulter's matilija poppy occurs in dry washes and canyons below 1,200 m in open, mildly disturbed sage scrub, chaparral and along rocky drainages. The quantification of suitable habitat for this species in the MSHCP is limited to elevations below 1,200 m characterized by the habitats noted, based on the uncollapsed MSHCP vegetation data base. Since the uncollapsed data base does not specifically map dry washes and canyon, it is not possible to narrow the quantification of suitable habitat further.

    C-91 Objective 2 states that the three known localities of Davidson's saltscale at Salt Creek, the San Jacinto River and the San Jacinto Wildlife Area shall be conserved within the MSHCP Conservation Area. Furthermore, the Conservation Summary states that two potential locations (Nichols Road wetlands and near Murrieta Hot Springs) shall be conserved within the MSHCP Conservation Area. The comment states that "the species conservation fails to note the existing conditions, and the importance of known localities on undisturbed lands." Given Objective 2 and the Conservation Summary and the fact that all known localities and two potential localities will be conserved, it is not apparent how the species account fails note existing conditions.

    Regarding the SR-79 and San Jacinto River flood control project, when these projects are proposed, a detailed analysis of how the species objectives will be accomplished.

    As stated in response to the first paragraph of Comment C-91, the Conservation Summary states that the potential location near the Nichols Road wetlands (presumed to be the Alberhill locality mentioned in the comment) shall be conserved within the MSHCP Conservation Area. Regarding the mention of a core locality near Lake Skinner, if this refers to the locality near Murrieta Hot Springs, that locality is conserved within the MSHCP Conservation Area as described in the Conservation Summary. If this is a new locality, the existing database does not include this information and the Lead Agencies request that the CNPS provide information regarding this locality.

    C-92 The Habitat and Habitat Associations section has been reviewed for typographical errors and spelling errors but none were found. Specific information was not provided in the comment regarding typographical errors, spelling errors or missing citations.

    C-93 Munz's onion is not known to occur in Sedco Hills nor does the soils data indicate that the Narrow Endemic Plant Species Survey Area 1 should be increased to include Sedco Hills or expand Survey Area 1 west to the Santa Ana National Forest.

    As described in the species account for Munz's onion, potential habitat for this species includes grasslands, coastal sage scrub, chaparral, and peninsular juniper woodland that occur on clay soils between 300 and 1,000 m within the Riverside Lowlands and Santa Ana Mountains Bioregions. The clay soils information available for purposes of the analysis was prepared by the U.S. Department of Agriculture, Soils Conservation Service (Knecht 1971) and the mapping was conducted on a large scale. Based on the clay soils mapping source, it is possible for there to be small patches of clay inclusions throughout the grasslands, coastal sage scrub, chaparral, and peninsular juniper woodland within the MSHCP Plan Area. Therefore, the conservation analysis was based on both the Vegetation Communities and clay soils being conserved. This is reflected in Objective 1 of the species account. Objective 2 takes into account the existing populations and requires the conservation of at least 13 of the 15 known localities.

    The Conservation Summary will be revised to identify which populations will be conserved.

    Regarding the possibility of conserving 21,000 acres of potential habitat and missing the actual species localities, all of the species objectives designated in the species account must be met in order for this species to receive Take Authorization. Objective 1 describes the minimum conservation of potential habitat, Objective 2 describes the minimum Conservation of known localities and Objective 3 describes the surveys required in accordance with Section 6.1.3 - Protection of Narrow Endemic Plant Species. The Wildlife Agencies have determined that Take Authorization can be met by meeting all three species objectives for Munz's onion.

    With regard to the ninth paragraph, species occurrence mapping will be updated with completion of initial monitoring surveys.

    The Sycamore Creek population is anticipated to be included in the MSHCP Conservation Area as noted in species-specific Objective 2 for Munz's onion. The conservation analysis for this species does not imply that 21,000 acres of survey area equates to 21,000 acres of Conservation.

    Corrections to map errors will be made as part of the monitoring plan during the long-term MSHCP implementation process.

    C-94 The comment states that "[t]here are currently only two extant populations of this species and one of these may have been reduced to a seed bank population. This species has not been relocated at the third site from the San Jacinto River." Objective 2 and the Conservation Summary of the Parish's brittlescale species account note that the core location, three populations at upper Salt Creek west of Hemet, will be conserved within the MSHCP Conservation Area. The Conservation Summary also notes that the San Jacinto River locality, although not believed to be extant, will also be conserved within the MSHCP Conservation Area. The Take analysis states that the Winchester Valley locality, if still extant (observed in 1996), will not be conserved within the MSHCP Conservation Area. It is unclear from the comment which population may be reduced to a seed bank.

    The comment also includes a suggestion to revise Objective 1 of the Parish's brittlescale species account to require Conservation of all known localities for this species. The Wildlife Agencies have determined that Take coverage can be met through implementation of the following species objectives: Objective 1 describes the minimum Conservation of potential habitat, Objective 2 describes the minimum Conservation of known localities, Objective 3 describes the surveys required in accordance with Section 6.3.2 - Additional Survey Needs and Procedures and Objective 4 describes minimum Conservation of the San Jacinto River floodplain.

    Effects of Covered Activities are addressed in the MSHCP and not in the individual species accounts. It is therefore not necessary to discuss the SR-79 project as requested in the comment.

    As discussed in the first paragraph of Response C-94, the Wildlife Agencies have determined that Parish's brittlescale will be conserved through meeting the four species objectives. In addition, adaptive management and monitoring measures will be met implemented in accordance with Section 5.2 - MSHCP Management and Adaptive Management Programs and 5.3 - Biological Monitoring Program.

    C-95 As described in the San Jacinto Valley crownscale species account, the conservation analysis includes a review of the known occurrences. As noted in the Species Conservation Analysis, eleven of the 12 populations constitute the three Core Areas (Mystic Lake, the San Jacinto River and the upper Salt Creek drainage), all of which will be conserved within the Criteria Area and PQP Lands. The core locations were determined, in part, on total number of plants recorded. The twelfth population at Alberhill Creek near Lake Elsinore is believed to be located in the Criteria Area. The exact location of the Alberhill Creek population is uncertain. However, implementation of the five species objectives for this species, including Conservation of the three core locations (11 populations), will ensure that this species is conserved.

    It is acknowledged that survey requirements described in species Objective 3 would be waived within the portion of the Criteria Area along the San Jacinto River (as depicted on Figure 6-2), provided the proposed project is found to be consistent with the San Jacinto River project presented in Section 7.0. In addition, implementation of species Objective 4 will ensure the Conservation of San Jacinto Valley crownscale by maintaining fluvial processes along the San Jacinto River.

    "Existing and continual land disturbances on private land" are not Covered Activities under the MSHCP and therefore, it is not necessary to analyze the effects of these activities in the MSHCP. In addition, as noted in the second to last paragraph of Response C-94, effects of Covered Activities are discussed in the MSHCP and not in the individual species accounts so it is not necessary to discuss the referenced projects in the species account.

    C-96 The information in Table 3 of the thread-leaved brodiaea species account was the best data available at the time the conservation analysis was conducted. The Monitoring Plan provides for continual updates of the database. See Section 5.3 of the Draft MSHCP.

    The thread-leaved brodiaea species account Species Conservation Analysis does address the known localities on the Santa Rosa Plateau. The species account also acknowledges that this species occurs on non-alkali soils. However, as acknowledged in the species account, there is no acreage coverage for vernal pools within the Santa Rosa Plateau. Nor was digital soils information available for the Santa Rosa Plateau area.

    As discussed above in the response to the first paragraph of this comment, the information in Table 3 of the thread-leaved brodiaea species account was the best data available at the time the conservation analysis was conducted.

    As discussed in Responses C-94 and C-95, the effects of individual Covered Activities are not addressed in the species accounts.

    C-97 The Lead Agencies believe that effective strategies are incorporated in the MSHCP to conserve the unique flora of western Riverside County.


    Comment Letter C2 - City of Perris, January 14, 2003

    C2-1 While it is recognized that certain roads and other facilities exist and/or will be constructed within the Criteria Area, the rights-of-way for those facilities would be excluded from the MSHCP Conservation Area. As such, the facilities would be essentially "carved out" and would remain outside of the MSHCP Conservation Area through the completion of Reserve Assembly. Therefore, the facilities, in some cases may be adjacent to the MSHCP Conservation Area on one or both sides, but would not be counted in the total acreage of Additional Reserve Lands.

    C2-2 The area where Evans/Ellis Road intersects the I-215 is outside of the Criteria Area. As stated in Section 7.1 of the Draft MSHCP, public and private Development, including construction of buildings, structures, infrastructure and all alterations of the land, that are carried out by Permittees, such as the City of Perris and Caltrans, are permitted under the Plan, subject to consistency with MSHCP policies that apply outside of the Criteria Area.

    C2-3 Future facilities that may be proposed by a non-Permittee public facility provider are provided a process by which they may be considered Covered Activities, as described in Section 7.3.8 of the Draft MSHCP and Section 11.8 of the Draft IA.

    C2-4 See Response C2-3.

    C2-5 The Lead Agencies acknowledge the comment and believe that the suggested thresholds of significance were identified and used in the Draft EIR/EIS. The MSHCP does not propose or authorize any physical development. The MSHCP Conservation Area will be assembled from undeveloped lands. Accordingly, the Draft EIR/EIS concluded that the MSHCP will not cause the division of an established community. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 1.5-8.) The Draft EIR/EIS includes a brief description of impacts to land use in Section 1.5.5, as required by State CEQA Guidelines section 15128.

    The Lead Agencies disagree with the commentor's conclusion because the MSHCP will not negatively impact or significantly divide any established communities. The proposed Core Areas and Linkages identified in Figure 4.1.3 of the Draft EIR/EIS are only intended to describe one possible configuration of the MSHCP Conservation Area that is consistent with the Plan Criteria. (See Response F-8.) It is, by no means, a hardline determination of the MSHCP Conservation Area or the precise Linkages. In fact, Linkages cannot be identified until after the Cores are identified and assembled.

    Accordingly, the Linkages do not have hardline conservation boundaries at this point in time and will be assembled in the most efficient manner possible. See Response K-8. In addition, the proposed San Jacinto River Linkage depicted in Figure 4.1.3 is a Constrained Linkage. This means that it is a constrained connection that will provide for movement of species while also considering existing patterns of use. The San Jacinto River is an existing feature in the City of Perris and the MSHCP will not alter the existing configuration of that feature nor will it preclude the referenced facilities.

    C2-6 Section 7.0 of the MSHCP provides coverage of operation and maintenance of existing transportation facilities, as well as for construction of new circulation element facilities. Section 7.0 also addresses coverage for future facilities, including utilities, and provides a process for evaluation of consistency for any future facility proposed within the MSHCP Plan Area. See Response C2-3, regarding railways and utilities proposed by non-Permittees.

    C2-7 A response to this comment letter will be provided to the commentor at least 10 days prior to County certification of the Final EIR.


    Comment Letter C3 - Franklin A. Motte, Received on January 15, 2003

    C3-1 See Responses W2-3 and W2-4.

    C3-2 See Response W2-5.


    Comment Letter C4 - Jackson DeMarco & Peckenpaugh, Supplemental Comments on behalf of Murdock, March 7, 2003

    C4-1 See Response H2-252.

    C4-2 As discussed in Responses to the January 28, 2003 Comment Letter (Responses N3-1 through N3-5), the vegetation map submitted by Murdock for the Outlet Mall Expansion property actually confirmed the accuracy of the MSHCP vegetation data base, and its purpose in providing a landscape-level guidance in assembly of the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    Based on the Pacific Clay aerial photograph, and the property-specific vegetation map, it appears that areas of chaparral have been disturbed since the MSHCP vegetation map was prepared. The MSHCP would accommodate such changedconditionsinconjunction with review of individual projects. It also appears that some large areas shown as disturbed habitat/developed on the Pacific Clay property map indicate a discrepancy in mapping conventions that is more throughly discussed in Response H2-252.

    While there are some discrepancies between the Pacific Clay vegetation map submitted by Murdock and the MSHCP vegetation database, as with the Outlet Mall Expansion vegetation map, the Pacific Clay map again confirms the purpose of the MSHCP vegetation data base in providing a landscape-level guidance in Reserve Assembly. The MSHCP fully acknowledges limitations in the data base and incorporates many features to address those limitations during the long term Reserve Assembly and MSHCP implementation process. Those features will be described in detail in the formal responses to comments as data base issues have been raised by a variety of other commentors. Some of these features are mentioned below:

    • One of the first tasks called for in the MSHCP Monitoring Plan is an update to the vegetation map using a rapid assessment methodology described in Section 5.0 of the MSHCP
    • The criteria-based approach to Reserve Assembly as described in the MSHCP is clearly directed at responding to project-specific information as it is brought forward during the individual project review process.
    • The MSHCP Monitoring and Management Plan and the annual reporting process call for incorporation of new data into the MSHCP throughout the life of the Permit.

    The MSHCP vegetation data base for the Pacific Clay property was queried based on a property boundary provided earlier to the County by Murdock representatives. It should be noted that this property boundary appears to differ somewhat from the property boundary depicted in the March 7 letter although a general comparison can still be made. Based on review of the MSHCP vegetation data base for the property, the following general comments can be made on the quantitative vegetation comparison presented in this comment:

    • From the broad, landscape perspective, both vegetation maps show a large area of chaparral across the western portion of the Pacific Clay property. This is generally the area identified as desirable for Conservation in the MSHCP Criteria and, from this landscape perspective, the property-specific map provided with this comment confirms that this is the portion of the property with the most habitat value.
    • The area mapped as Riversidean alluvial fan sage scrub (AFS) in the northwestern portion of the site in this comment appears to be consistent with the same area mapped as AFS on the MSHCP vegetation map. It should be noted that the MSHCP vegetation data base shows this AFS adjacent to an area of chaparral to the northwest, and the Pacific Clay map shows the AFS adjacent to disturbed/developed habitat. This appears to indicate a discrepancy in mapping conventions that is more throughly discussed in Response H2-252.
    • The MSHCP vegetation data base shows large isolated areas of chaparral and coastal sage scrub in the eastern portion of the main polygon on the property, and isolated patches of coastal sage scrub, chaparral and AFS in the central and northern portions of the main polygon. Based on the aerial photograph, and the property-specific vegetation map, it appears that these areas contain a higher percentage of annual grassland than shown in the MSHCP vegetation map, but are mapped as developed/disturbed habitat by Murdock, again indicating the discrepancy in mapping conventions. The MSHCP would accommodate such changed conditions in conjunction with review of individual projects and, as noted above, this would not be an issue for this particular property as the landscape-level criteria provided in the MSHCP focus on the larger portion of chaparral across the western portion of the property, and not on the isolated areas of chaparral and scrub noted on the MSHCP vegetation map.
    • The MSHCP vegetation data base shows some areas of coastal sage scrub and chaparral in the polygon immediately east of the largest polygon. Similar to some of the areas on the largest polygon, it appears that these areas also contain a higher percentage of annual grassland than shown in the MSHCP vegetation map, but are mapped as developed/disturbed habitat by Murdock. With this particular property, the larger, unfragmented portion of chaparral in the western portion of the property would be the focus of Conservation, not the areas of scrub and chaparral in the smaller polygon as shown in the MSHCP vegetation data base.
    • The MSHCP vegetation data base shows the easternmost polygon containing a large area of coastal sage scrub, and the Pacific Clay properties map shows the same area mainly as grassland. Unlike the previously mentioned areas where there is a discrepancy, this polygon does not appear to have been disturbed since the MSHCP vegetation map was prepared. It is not apparent why these two areas are mapped differently. As mentioned earlier, the MSHCP has many features incorporated to address limitations in the database. If the discrepancy in this particular vegetation classification is due to an error in the MSHCP vegetation data base, it is anticipated that features incorporated into the MSHCP would address these issues. Further, with this particular property, the overall focus of Conservation would be on the large amount of chaparral in the western portion of the property, not on the isolated areas of scrub, chaparral, or grassland in the easternmost polygon.

    As discussed above, comparison of the vegetation mapping of Murdock's Pacific Clay property with the MSHCP vegetation data base confirms the accurate application of the landscape-level guidance of the MSHCP data base.

    C4-3 See Responses N3-4 and N3-5. The Wildlife Agencies will make a decision on Permit issuance after the final documents have been prepared and submitted to them. The commentor's recommendations concerning future provisions and versions of the MSHCP will be submitted to the decision makers.


    Comment Letter C5 - Sierra Club by George Hague w/ attachment, 2/03/03

    C5-1 It is not necessary to include the maps suggested in the comment in the Final EIR/EIS. The MSHCP is a criteria-based plan and the Criteria incorporated in the MSHCP will be applied, consistent with the policies and incentives in the MSHCP, to guide Reserve Assembly regardless of underlying land use designations and entitlements. The policies and incentives incorporated in the MSHCP provide that lands assembled for the MSHCP Conservation Area will be from willing sellers in accordance with the HANS Process included in Section 6.1 of the MSHCP. Flexibility is incorporated in the Criteria to provide for assembly of the MSHCP Conservation Area in a manner that provides the greatest benefit for Covered Species while reflecting "on the ground" conditions at the time of Reserve Assembly. Progress toward Reserve Assembly will be evaluated on an annual basis as part of the Reserve Assembly Accounting process described in Section 6.7 of the MSHCP. If certain Reserve Assembly options are constrained or potentially precluded due to existing entitlements or other factors, such circumstances will become known as part of the annual Reserve Assembly Accounting process and appropriate remedies can be identified.

    C5-2 Release of water from the Hemet Dam was not identified in the MSHCP planning process as an action required to address the needs of Covered Species. Maintenance of existing hydrologic processes along the San Jacinto River is called for in the MSHCP to benefit several Covered Species such as San Jacinto crownscale.

    C5-3 The following Responses C5-4 through C5-17 were prepared in response to a letter sent to the Army Corps of Engineers on the San Jacinto River Project and not the MSHCP.

    C5-4 The MSHCP addresses 146 Covered Species including species associated with the San Jacinto River. Species associated with the San Jacinto River are identified as Planning Species in the applicable Area Plan Subunits of the Lakeview/Nuevo, Mead Valley and San Jacinto Area Plans and individual Conservation Strategies are identified for each of those species in the MSHCP. Criteria for inclusion of a flood control project along the San Jacinto River as a Covered Activity are presented in Section 7.3.7 of the Draft MSHCP. All of this information is contained in the Draft MSHCP which was distributed for public review on November 15, 2002.

    C5-5 Section 7.3.7 of the Draft MSHCP incorporates criteria for a potential flood control project along the San Jacinto River that would also address the needs of Covered Species. A specific project is not addressed in the MSHCP. It is likely that a variety of projects could be designed consistent with the criteria in the MSHCP.

    C5-6 Any future flood control project proposed along the San Jacinto River would be subject to CEQA review, separate and apart from the MSHCP, and would need to address alternatives in accordance with CEQA requirements. If such a project were determined to be consistent with the criteria for a San Jacinto River flood control project in Section 7.3.7 of the Draft MSHCP, it could be considered to be a Covered Activity under the MSHCP. Project-specific CEQA review, however, would still be required.

    C5-7 The MSHCP acknowledges that portions of the San Jacinto River provide core habitat for Covered Species and calls for maintenance of existing hydrologic processes to support those species as appropriate. With the exception of southern grasshopper mouse, all of the species listed on the referenced attachment are on the MSHCP Covered Species list.

    C5-8 The MSHCP recognizes the presence of alkali playa and vernal pool habitat along the San Jacinto River and in the vicinity of Hemet. Conservation in these areas is proposed in the MSHCP to meet the needs of Covered Species.

    C5-9 See Response C5-7. The species noted in the comment are on the MSHCP Covered Species list and the MSHCP is intended to address direct, indirect, cumulative and growth-inducing effects to these species associated with projected growth in the Plan Area.

    C5-10 Public health and safety issues associated with a flood control project along the San Jacinto River would need to be addressed as part of project-specific review of such a proposal. See Response C5-6.

    C5-11 See Responses C5-4 through C5-10.

    C5-12 The MSHCP does not propose or address construction of homes as referenced in the comment. See Responses C5-6 and C5-10.

    C5-13 See Responses C5-4 and C5-6. The Lead Agencies disagree with the conclusion that there has been a lack of public comment of review of the MSHCP. Throughout the development of the MSHCP, the Lead Agencies have encouraged public involvement and comment. (Draft EIR/EIS, p.1.5-1) Additionally, the Lead Agencies acknowledge that additional species may be listed as endangered or threatened in the future. Accordingly, the MSHCP attempts to limit the potential effects on Plan implementation associated with newly listed species by including a large number of Unlisted Species as Covered Species. If such Unlisted Species are subsequently listed, the MSHCP will continue to be implemented in the same manner without the need to follow the procedures set forth on pages 6-103 and 6-104 of the Plan. In those narrow circumstances where there is a new listing of a species not covered by the MSHCP, an amendment to the MSHCP will be required. During the processing of the amendment, it is both logical and required by law that the Permittees and the Third Parties Granted Take Authorization not unlawfully Take such species.

    Accordingly, the Lead Agencies do not believe that revocation of any previously granted approval is necessary or appropriate. As explained in the preceding responses, and elsewhere in the Final EIR/EIS, neither the Draft MSHCP nor the Draft EIR/EIS contain any new information or inaccuracies that require recirculation of either document. Additionally, the Lead Agencies are not aware of any facts that require revision or recirculation of the Draft EIR/EIS.

    C5-14 The purpose of the MSHCP is to address cumulative and growth-inducing impacts from development throughout the Plan Area, and as such encompasses any growth-related and cumulative impacts associated with the referenced project.

    C5-15 The MSHCP recognizes the presence of alkali playa and vernal See Responses C5-7, C5-8 and C5-9.

    C5-16 The Sierra Club is on the list to receive MSHCP documentation as it is made available for public review.

    C5-17 See Response C5-7.

    C5-18 This comment appears to be an article regarding sensitive species in the San Jacinto Valley. It is assumed that the information is provided as a general reference as it makes no specific comments regarding the MSHCP. No additional response is considered to be necessary.

    Comment Letter D

    Comment Letter D - Center for Biological Diversity, January 15, 2003

    D-1 Responses to specific comments made by the commentor are provided in Responses D-2 through D-88. The public review period for the Draft MSHCP and Draft EIS/EIR closed on January 15, 2003. However, the NEPA review period for the Plan and EIS/EIR was reopened on February 28, 2003 and closed on March 14, 2003. The comment regarding integration of the MSHCP, General Plan and CETAP is noted. The County believes these plans are integrated as part of the overall Riverside County Integrated Project (RCIP). Since specific comments are not provided regarding integration, a more specific response is not possible.

    D-2 The vision statement for the RCIP acknowledges the development pressure being experienced in western Riverside County and the resulting conflicts with species protection.

    D-3 The Lead Agencies agree that the MSHCP is a large complex plan and is an enormous undertaking. The Lead Agencies believe that regional habitat conservation planning provides unique benefits to species and habitat that cannot be achieved through project-by-project mitigation scenarios. The FWS Section 10 Handbook takes a similar view. See Response H2-132. The Lead Agencies disagree that the MSHCP and the joint EIR/EIS rely upon insufficient or inadequate mitigation. To the contrary, the MSHCP provisions in essence "self mitigate" most impacts to biological resources on an extremely large scale that benefits Covered Species to the maximum extent practicable. The lands to be conserved as part of the Additional Reserve Lands are not theoretical and are set forth in substantial detail in Section 4.0 of the MSHCP. See Responses G-7 and G-8 for a discussion of the MSHCP's binding commitments to assure Reserve Assembly. Conformance with MSHCP requirements in review, approval and implementation of Covered Activities is mandatory for Permitees and Third Parties, not voluntary. Use of fees, such as the Local Development Mitigation Fees, to fund regional habitat conservation plans is not only allowed, it is common and lawful. See Response H2-11. With regard to the adequacy of funding for the MSHCP, see Responses H2-224, K-140 and Z3-17.

    Regarding the literature referenced in the second sentence of this comment, the commentor inappropriately applies the conclusion of a study on Recovery Plans to Habitat Conservation Plans. FESA provides for both Recovery Plans and Habitat Conservation Plans, but identifies entirely different purposes for each. The MSHCP is not intended to meet the standards of a Recovery Plan under FESA. The MSHCP does not rely on a "theoretical reserve system premised on the voluntary actions of third parties and unsecured funding sources." See Responses G-7 and G-8 for discussion of binding requirements incorporated in the MSHCP to assure assembly of the MSHCP Conservation Area consistent with specific conservation requirements including configuration requirements incorporated in Cores and Linkages descriptions in Section 3.2.3 of the MSHCP, and the specific Conservation Strategy developed for each Covered Species as presented in Section 9.2 of the MSHCP. Conformance with MSHCP requirements in review, approval and implementation of Covered Activities is mandatory for Permittees, not voluntary.

    D-4 The majority of these comments were submitted on preliminary draft work products subject to change and were clearly identified as such. The Lead Agencies believe that all issues that were raised in past correspondence have been considered and if appropriate, reflected in the EIR/EIS and the MSHCP, and that these documents fully comply with all applicable laws and regulations. With regard to the comment's statement that there is an "under-representation" of grasslands and coastal sage scrub habitats, see Responses G-16 and G-17. With regard to the other general allegations, see Responses H2-231 and M-103 regarding the MSHCP's use of the most current data available, and Responses G-7 and G-8 regarding the MSHCP's binding commitments to ensure Reserve Assembly. This comment overall lacks sufficient specificity to allow the Lead Agencies to provide any further specific response.

    D-5 The Lead Agencies believe that the EIR/EIS has presented information on the MSHCP in a clear and concise manner in full compliance with CEQA and NEPA. The MSHCP is a complex document and accordingly the EIR/EIS analysis is also complex. With regard to the comment regarding how the Criteria for particular lands was developed, see MSHCP Section 3.3.1. With regard to mitigation fee and funding issues, see Section 8.0 of the MSHCP for a detailed discussion of MSHCP funding sources, and Response I-7 regarding adequacy of funding. With regard to the alternatives analysis, the Draft EIR/EIS discusses a range of reasonable alternatives in detail in Section 2 as is required by both CEQA and NEPA. (14 Cal. Code Regs. § 15126(a); 40 CFR § 1502.14; see also Response H2-18) The Final EIR/EIS and MSHCP will fully comply with all legal requirements. With regard to the other allegations in this comment, the commentor has not provided enough detailed information to allow a more detailed response.

    D-6 The Lead Agencies believe the MSHCP fully complies with all applicable laws and regulations. The comment does not provide any examples of alternatives or mitigation measures to ensure more conservation and thus, no further response is required.

    D-7 The Lead Agencies believe that all issues that were raised in past correspondence have been considered and if appropriate, reflected in the EIR/EIS and the MSHCP and that these documents fully comply with all applicable laws and regulations. The comment misstates the MSHCP acreage amounts - the MSHCP Conservation Area will be approximately 500,000 acres. The Additional Reserve Lands will consist of 153,000 acres and the Criteria Area is approximately 310,000 acres.

    D-8 See Response D-3. The MSHCP requires that Conservation is assured throughout the entire MSHCP Conservation Area. The MSHCP adopts an accepted conservation planning approach that is consistent with the principles of conservation biology, of defining what needs to be conserved, identifying gaps in conservation, and planning a preserve to fill the gaps. The MSHCP is appropriately augmenting the existing reserves and providing the connections to ensure their biological values. The MSHCP does not provide the Permittees with "credit" for lands already in Conservation. See Section 9 of the Draft MSHCP, documenting Take and Conservation for Covered Activities. In addition, the MSHCP is providing a regional coordinating mechanism and funding for management of existing reserves. Current management entities do not have an obligation to manage existing reserves for the benefit of multiple species.

    This is a criteria-based plan, and not a plan with hardline boundaries. The Conceptual Reserve Design was merely one way that the Additional Reserve Lands could be assembled, not a hardline boundary. There is no requirement that a hard line reserve be provided in a regional habitat conservation plan. See Response H2-85. The Lead Agencies disagree with the comment that the "conservation for which the public is assured" is limited. The Permittees must implement the Plan to meet these requirements, thus ensuring Conservation. With regard to use of the Public and Quasi-Public Lands, see Response J4-34.

    D-9 Section 3.2.3 of the MSHCP provides a description of all existing and proposed Cores and Linkages including dimensional data and Planning Species for each Core and Linkage. The dimensional data include a target approximate total acreage, anticipated acreage of edge and interior, and perimeter to area ratio. For Cores, an anticipated distance to the next connected Core is provided.

    As defined in the MSHCP, the Criteria Area is an approximately 310,000 acre area from which approximately 153,000 acres of private land will be conserved. This approach is not different than that used in other multiple-species planning efforts such as the focused planning area (FPA) concept, or the multiple species planning area concept (MHPA) incorporated in the San Diego MHCP and MSCP respectively. Those FPA and MHPA approaches define boundaries from within which various levels of Conservation are anticipated to occur - sometimes ranging from 50% to 90%, as the MSHCP Criteria Area defines the area from within which approximately 153,000 acres of land will ultimately be conserved. See Responses F-46, F-47, F-48 and F-50 for discussion of guidance and requirements incorporated in the MSHCP to assure that the Additional Reserve Lands are acquired in a manner consistent with the conservation goals of the MSHCP.

    The survey requirements presented in Sections 6.1.3 and 6.3.2 of the MSHCP call for Conservation of species locations identified as a result of surveys if it is determined that those locations would contribute have long-term conservation value for the MSHCP. As stated in the MSHCP, results of surveys will also be used to identify and prioritize acquisition efforts for Additional Reserve Lands.

    Contrary to the comment, the MSHCP does not have to comply with CEQA or NEPA. It is the EIR/EIS that must, and does comply with these laws.

    D-10 Section 2.1.1 of the MSHCP discloses data sources used to develop the MSHCP and their limitations. As described in Section 2.1.1, features have been incorporated in the MSHCP to address limitations in the data. The existing data are adequate for purposes of the landscape-level planning conducted for the criteria-based MSHCP. As noted in Sections 2.1.1 and 5.3, preparation of an updated vegetation map will be one of the initial tasks undertaken as part of the monitoring program. With respect to species occurrences, many of the species-specific objectives call for conserving existing and newly observed species locations. For example, survey requirements for southwest willow flycatcher and western yellow-billed cuckoo require that any new observations of these species resulting from survey efforts be conserved.

    The MSHCP is based on the best scientific and commercial data available, in accordance with federal and state standards for information used in considering Permits pursuant to FESA and the NCCP Act. As such, "focused surveys for species covered by the MSHCP prior to designating the Criteria Area" are not required. The Conservation and Take summaries provided in Table 9-2 of the Plan disclose species populations and habitat areas expected to be located within and outside the MSHCP Conservation Area. It is acknowledged that the MSHCP must meet issuance criteria that call for demonstration that the expected take will not appreciably reduce the likelihood of survival and recovery of Covered Species. The USFWS must address this specific issue as a part of their decision to issue the Section 10(a) Permit.

    D-11 The MSHCP vegetation map documents the presence of grasslands south of March ARB. As part of Step 3 of the Conceptual Conservation Scenario portion of the conservation planning process (see Section 3.1.6 of the Draft MSHCP, pg 3-10), it was apparent that substantial areas of grassland south of March ARB had been developed since the MSHCP vegetation map was prepared. In addition, it is understood that this area was considered for inclusion as one of the SKR reserves in the SKR HCP but was not ultimately identified as an area to be conserved within the SKR HCP. The MSHCP focused on additional SKR Conservation only in portions of the MSHCP Plan Area outside the SKR HCP planning area and so this area was not considered for SKR protection in the MSHCP.

    The MSHCP species occurrence data base does not indicate the presence of burrowing owl and California horned lark in this area although the remaining grassland in the area likely provides suitable Habitat for these species and conservation requirements for these species are being met in other locations planned to be included in the MSHCP Conservation Area. (For burrowing owl, the data base has very few points west of I-215 with one recent point south of Cajalco Road in the Mead Valley area and one old point on Cajalco Road. For horned lark, the data base has a number of points near Murrieta Hot Springs, on March ARB, and a couple of points in the vicinity of Cajalco Road but not points southwest of March ARB.) See Responses F-72 and G-16 for additional discussion of these species. Due to ongoing urbanization in this area and existing Habitat fragmentation, this area was not identified as important for wildlife movement and a connection between Sycamore Canyon/Box Springs and Lake Mathews/EstelleMountain was not identified as an important linkage in the conservation planning process for the MSHCP.

    D-12 The comment is overly vague and prohibits a response. For a discussion of grasslands, see Response G-16.

    D-13 Conservation in the Gavilan Plateau area is planned to occur as part of assembly of Proposed Linkage 3. As discussed in Section 3.2.3 of the MSHCP, this Linkage is generally comprised of upland areas in the Gavilan Hills, Harford Springs and North Peak Conservation Bank and provides a connection between proposed Core 1 and the Lake Mathews/Estelle Mountain reserve. SKR is among the Planning Species identified within this Linkage; southern California rufous-crowned sparrow has been added to the list of Planning Species for this Linkage in the Final MSHCP.

    D-14 The MSHCP requires maintenance of hydrologic processes along the San Jacinto River for Narrow Endemic Plant Species. For example, species-specific Objective 4 for San Jacinto Valley crownscale states the following: "Include within the MSHCP Conservation Area the floodplain along the San Jacinto River consistent with Objective 1. Floodplain processes will be maintained along the river in order to provide distribution of species to shift over time as hydrologic conditions and seed bank sources change..." This same objective is included in the species-specific objectives for other Narrow Endemic Plant Species present in the San Jacinto River floodplain.

    D-15 It is assumed that this comment is referring to the Quail Valley area located in the vicinity of Railroad Canyon and Kabian Park. These areas are incorporated in the MSHCP as part of Proposed Linkage 7. Planning Species identified for Proposed Linkage 7 include California gnatcatcher, Cooper's hawk and loggerhead shrike. Burrowing owl will be added to the list Planning Species for this Linkage in the Final MSHCP.

    D-16 The Final MSHCP, Section 3 incorporates Special Linkage Areas for the San Gorgonio and Palomar-Santa Ana Linkages referenced in the comment. This information includes the following language incorporated respectively in The Pass and Southwest Area Plans:

    From The Pass Area Plan:

    Special Linkage Area: This Special Linkage Area will contribute to assembly of a portion of the San Gorgonio River/San Bernardino-San Jacinto Mountains Linkage. Tribal coordination regarding American Indian Lands will be necessary in this area. The San Gorgonio River/San Bernardino-San Jacinto Mountains Linkage includes locations within and outside the MSHCP Plan Area. Features of the entire linkage area are described in Missing Linkages: Restoring Connectivity to the California Landscape (Penrod, K., November 2, 2000). A copy of this report is attached as Exhibit 24 to Comment Letter D in Volume V of the MSHCP. Local Permittees will apply the following rebuttable presumption of significance, taken from Appendix G to the 1998 State CEQA Guidelines, in CEQA review of proposed public and private projects within this Special Linkage Area and apply mitigation measures as appropriate: "Would the project interfere substantially with the movement of any native resident or migratory fish or wildlife species or with established native resident or migratory wildlife corridors, or impede the use of native wildlife nursery sites?" Draft and Final CEQA documentation prepared by Local Permittees for projects within this Special Linkage Area will be forwarded to the RCA for informational purposes to provide for MSHCP coordination regarding this area.

    From the Southwest Area Plan:

    Special Linkage Area: This Special Linkage Area will contribute to assembly of a portion of the Santa Ana-Palomar Mountains Linkage for the benefit of Covered Species. Tribal coordination regarding American Indian Lands will be necessary in this area. The Santa Ana-Palomar Mountains Linkage includes locations within and outside the MSHCP Plan Area. Features of the entire linkage area are described in the Santa Ana-Palomar Mountains Linkage Conservation Design Plan Working Draft (SDSU Field Station Programs and South Coast Wildlands Project, February 2003). A working draft of the Conservation Design Plan is attached to Comment Letter X3 in Volume V, of the MSHCP. Local Permittees will apply the following rebuttable presumption of significance, taken from Appendix G to the 1998 State CEQA Guidelines, in CEQA review of proposed public and private projects within this Special Linkage Area and apply mitigation measures as appropriate: "Would the project interfere substantially with the movement of any native resident or migratory fish or wildlife species or with established native resident or migratory wildlife corridors, or impede the use of native wildlife nursery sites?" Draft and Final CEQA documentation prepared by Local Permittees for projects within this Special Linkage Area will be forwarded to the RCA for informational purposes to provide for MSHCP coordination regarding this area.

    D-17 The MSHCP vegetation map is adequate for the landscape level planning undertaken for the MSHCP and represents the best available scientific and commercial data available for regional vegetation mapping. It is not necessary to have an updated vegetation map prior to identifying a Criteria Area. Many biological factors were considered in identification of the Criteria Area, not just vegetation mapping. As described in Section 3.1 of the MSHCP, identification of the Criteria Area was the result of an iterative conservation planning process that began with assembly and review of a variety of data including vegetation mapping. These data included species occurrence data, a coastal sage scrub quality model, digitized select soils data, elevation data, wetlands mapping from a variety of sources, bioregions identification and mapping, and evaluation of existing edge conditions and fragmentation based on the existing landscape. The iterative process included a series of habitat assessment workshops with local biologists and a day-long workshop of local biologists sponsored by UCR, as well as review of species accounts and the MSHCP Alternatives Development document by the Scientific Review Panel (SRP). Wildlife Agencies biologists also participated in the iterative conservation planning process as the initial narrative Conceptual Conservation Scenario evolved into mapped schematic Conservation Analysis Units (see March 9, 2000 Technical Memorandum, DUDEK) and then into the schematic alternatives maps (see October 4, 2000 Alternatives Development Document, DUDEK). These iterations were subject to ongoing refinement and resulted in the Criteria Area identified in the Draft MSHCP.

    Input from comment letters and review of project specific information as it has become available during the MSHCP planning process have generally confirmed the reliability of the vegetation map, as augmented by other MSHCP data used in the planning process, for landscape-level planning purposes and the general configuration of the Criteria Area. As noted in the Responses to Comment Letter N3, what is represented as the project-specific information in that letter generally confirms the suitability of the MSHCP data for landscape-level planning purposes. In Comment G-14, the Conservation Biology Institute states: "Despitemy reservations about these issues (reserve configuration issues noted earlier in the letter), it does appear that the conceptual reserve configuration captures the majority of high-priority biological resource areas and linkages. For example, major landscape linkages and wildlife movement corridors identified by the California Missing Linkages Project...seem generally contained within the conceptual reserve design."

    The criteria-based foundation of the MSHCP allows for flexibility in Reserve Assembly to respond to new information as it becomes available, to assure acquisition of the most appropriate lands for the MSHCP Conservation Area, and to consider adjustments to the Criteria Area based on new information. The Criteria Refinement Process (CRP) described in Section 6.5 of the MSHCP provides opportunities to consider conservation options outside the Criteria Area subject to concurrence by the Wildlife Agencies. An amendment process is described in Section 6.10 of the MSHCP that could also result in adjustments to the Criteria Area as appropriate.

    D-18 The MSHCP Vegetation Communities were not inappropriately collapsed. Both the collapsed and uncollapsed Vegetation Communities were used throughout the MSHCP planning. The collapsed Vegetation Communities were used to display generalized MSHCP vegetation mapping in reports and documents and to quantify generalized vegetation acreages inside and outside potential conservation boundaries as part of the alternatives development and analysis process. For the species analyses, uncollapsed Vegetation Communities and other factors such as soils, elevations and Bioregions, were used to defined suitable Habitat for individual species; species-specific definitions of suitable Habitat were combined with species occurrence data and other data, such as aerial photography where appropriate, as part of the conservation analysis for each species. In addition, the MSHCP Conservation Area description in Section 3.2 of Volume II, Section A of the MSHCP provides a complete description and analysis of the MSHCP Conservation Area based on the uncollapsed Vegetation Communities. See Response D-17 for additional discussion of the adequacy of the MSHCP vegetation map for landscape-level planning in the MSHCP.

    D-19 The species occurrence data described in Section 2.1.1 of the MSHCP is the best available data. The data were assembled and digitized by UCR and augmented throughout the MSHCP planning process by data supplied by the Wildlife Agencies and herbaria data collected specifically for the MSHCP. Access to private lands was not available to conduct the focused species surveys described in the comment. Where additional survey data was determined to be needed to meet conservation requirements for individual species, survey requirements are incorporated in the MSHCP as described in Section 6.1.3 and 6.3.2 of the Plan.

    D-20 See Responses G-16 and G-17 for discussion of grassland and coastal sage scrub within the MSHCP Plan Area.

    D-21 As set forth in Section 15.5 of the IA, the MSHCP does not provide Take Authorization under the NCCP Act for fully protected species. There is no reason therefore to drop these species from the list of Covered Species.

    D-22 It is an incorrect statement that there will be no assessment of riparian/riverine areas and vernal pool areas until development projects are proposed in those areas. Substantial attention was given to these areas in the MSHCP planning process as they provide important Habitat for Covered Species and are often key components of wildlife movement Linkages. As described in Section 2.1.1 of the Plan, a separate coverage of MSHCP mapped wetland resources was prepared as part of the conservation planning process which included data from the MSHCP vegetation map as well as surface waters data developed for the County General Plan hazards mapping and a separate riparian coverage by UCR research assistants. As also noted in Section 2.1.1, a planning level wetland delineation for the San Jacinto and Santa Margarita watersheds was completed as part of the ACOE Special Area Management Plan (SAMP) process underway in portions of those watersheds in western Riverside County and those data will be available during the MSHCP implementation process. In addition, wetlands mapping will be included in the updated vegetation mapping to be undertaken as part of the monitoring plan described in Section 5.3 of the MSHCP. These mapping efforts will occur in addition to the project specific mapping of riparian/riverine and vernal pool areas called for in Section 6.1.2 of the MSHCP.

    The mapping to be conducted in accordance with the requirements of Section 6.1.2 of the MSHCP is likely to identify suitable Habitat for all the species listed in Section 6.1.2 that may benefit from implementation of the Section 6.1.2 requirements, including the species mentioned in the comment. As is typical for biologists during mapping, it is likely that anecdotal observations of species will be required. However, as stated in the comment, focused surveys in accordance with accepted protocols, will be required only for the six species identified in the comment, since these were the species for which it was determined focused survey data would be needed to assure that MSHCP conservation requirements are met for these species.

    This Plan provides Take Authorization, not development approvals. The referenced requirements will be done when and if development is proposed and prior to impacts. It is completely unrealistic to expect a plan covering 1.26 million acres to survey and assess every riparian/riverine or vernal pool habitat, whether or not impacts will occur. A general assessment of potential Plan impacts to these resources has already occurred as part of the MSHCP analysis and in conformance with applicable state and federal law.

    D-23 A four component Conservation Strategy is identified for each Covered Species in Section 9.2 of the MSHCP, including Narrow Endemic Plant Species and plant species on the Criteria Area surveys list. The strategy for these species incorporates survey requirements as described in Sections 6.1.3 and 6.3.2 of the MSHCP, recognizing that site-specific data regarding these species is required to assure that acquisition boundaries and priorities are properly defined and avoidance and mitigation measures are properly implemented. See Response C-5 regarding the definitions/differences for plant species on the Narrow Endemics and Criteria Area surveys lists. All of the species referenced in this comment are on one of these lists and would be subject to surveys according to Sections 6.1.3 and 6.3.3 with the exception of Bergia texana. This species is not a Covered Species and is not considered to be a Narrow Endemic, with a large range extending from Texas west to California and north to Washington state.

    The requirements for the San Jacinto River Flood Control Project that must be met for that project to receive Take Authorization under the MSHCP are presented in Section 7.3.7 of the MSHCP. In addition to these requirements, the Project must be consistent with the Conservation Strategy, including the species-specific objectives, for Covered Species present along the San Jacinto River. As noted in Response D-14, species-specific objectives for Narrow Endemic Plant require maintenance of hydrologic processes along the San Jacinto River. See Response C-65 for additional discussion of the San Jacinto Flood Control Project.

    The excerpt from the referenced December 4, 2000 USFWS letter noted that flood control activities in general could affect the species listed in the letter excerpt, not a specific project along the San Jacinto River. Although it is recognized that the San Jacinto River supports a variety of sensitive species, including Narrow Endemic and Criteria Area plant species, the species noted in the comment (least Bell's vireo, southwestern willow flycatcher, arroyo toad, southwestern pond turtle, and western yellow-billed cuckoo) are not present along the portion of the San Jacinto River affected by the San Jacinto River Flood Control Project or in downstream areas that could be affected by the Project.

    D-24 The MSHCP conservation analysis for coast range newt concludes that approximately 67% of the primary breeding Habitat and 70% of the secondary Habitat for this species would be located within the MSHCP Conservation Area. For purposes of analysis, suitable Habitat was defined as areas within the Santa Ana Mountains Bioregion, below elevation 1,830 m. In addition to capturing approximately two thirds of the identified suitable Habitat, species-specific objectives for coast range newt call for maintenance of ecological processes in areas occupied by the newt within the MSHCP Conservation Area, documentation of successful reproduction at 75% of the occupied areas, and maintenance of a 100 m buffer, where possible, around emergent vegetation areas. The 100 m buffer distance is considered to be a best estimate based on available information. The coast range newt is identified as a species that will benefit from implementation of the riparian/riverine mapping and avoidance and minimization requirements incorporated in Section 6.1.2 of the MSHCP. These requirements will apply throughout the Plan Area, including lower elevation drainages. The combination of these features incorporated in the MSHCP will achieve the MSHCP Conservation Strategy for coast range newt.

    As documented in the species account for coast range newt (Draft MSHCP, Volume II) of the suitable Habitat to be conserved for coast range newt, approximately 87% of the primary Habitat and 93% of the secondary Habitat occurs on Public/Quasi-Public Lands including Cleveland National Forest and Santa Rosa Plateau. Conservation benefitting this species resulting from the riparian/riverine requirements in Section 6.1.2 of the MSHCP would occur on private lands. As required by the MSHCP, these lands will be managed for the benefit of Covered Species. Contributions for management will come from local, state and federal sources.

    The reference to threats to be addressed by the Forest Service noted in the comment does not constitute deferral of mitigation. See Response A-33. To be consistent with MSHCP requirements, all lands within the MSHCP Conservation Area will be managed for the benefit of Covered Species in accordance with the Conservation Strategy for each Covered Species, including species-specific objectives and management activities identified in the MSHCP. See Response D-22 regarding deferral of mitigation.

    D-25 The conservation analysis for western pond turtle used uncollapsed Vegetation Communities data, elevational data, and a 2km distance for definition of suitable upland Habitat to define overall suitable Habitat for this species in a manner reflective of the microhabitat requirements referenced in the comment. Monitoring and management activities for this species are addressed in the MSHCP and will address these microhabitat needs in greater detail. In addition to protection of suitable Habitat in specific locations, species-specific objectives for this species include protection of named riparian/wetland areas as well as overland dispersal areas. As stated in Section 6.1.2, this species will also benefit from implementation of the riparian/riverine areas policies incorporated in the MSHCP. The species-specific objectives also call for maintenance of continued use by this species at 75% of the Core Areas identified in Objective 2 as measured at 3-year intervals. Management activities identified for this species include maintenance of ecological processes in identified locations. In addition, Section 7.3.5 of the MSHCP (page7-50 of the Draft MSHCP) calls for specific features to be incorporated in the designs of wildlife crossings, including features benefitting small mammalian,reptilianandamphibian species. These features incorporated in the MSHCP will assure that the Conservation Strategy for this species is met.

    D-26 The MSHCP does not "authorize destruction" of riparian habitats. The referenced portions of the conservation analyses for yellow warbler and yellow-breasted chat simply state the proportions of these Vegetation Communities anticipated to be located outside the MSHCP Conservation Area to appropriately disclose to the public areas potentially occupied by these species within Take authorized areas. However, these areas will be subject to the requirements for riparian/riverine areas included in Section 6.1.2 of the MSHCP and yellow warbler and yellow-breasted chat are identified as species that would benefit from implementation of the requirements of Section 6.1.2. As stated in Section 6.1.2, existing state and federal wetland regulations would continue to apply throughout the Plan Area. See Response D-18 regarding use of collapsed and uncollapsed Vegetation Communities.

    The MSHCP management plan recognizes invasion by exotics and nest parasitism as threats to yellow warbler and yellow breasted chat. General Management Measure 4 calls for maintenance of wetland Habitat within the MSHCP Conservation Area in condition similar or better that the condition of the Habitat at the time lands are conveyed to the MSHCP Conservation Area. General Management Measure 9 of the Draft MSHCP calls for directing management activities to areas disturbed due to natural or anthropogenic causes. Specific management activities identified for these species call for control of exotic plants and animals (including brown-headed cowbirds).

    D-27 The MSHCP addresses the factors affecting least Bell's vireo in the Plan Area by protecting nesting Habitat within the MSHCP Conservation Area, implementing policies to avoid and minimize impacts to riparian/riverine areas and implementing management measures to address threats associated with habitat degradation and nest parasitism by brown-headed cowbirds. These are features incorporated in the MSHCP and the EIS/EIR impact analysis is based on such incorporation. Therefore, these features are not identified as mitigation measures in the EIS/EIR.

    The basis for the comment that 57 percent of the recent point locations will be subject to urban development is not known. The Conservation Levels and Data Characterization discussions for least Bell's vireo in the MSHCP species account note that the MSHCP species occurrence data base includes 28 high precision data points within the last 10 years. Of these, 19 (68%) would be within the MSHCP Conservation Area. In addition to the locations recorded in the UCR species occurrence data base, as stated in the species account, the 336 pairs of this species recorded within the Prado Basin would be within the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    The Arundo/Riparian Forest component was not uncollapsed from the Riparian Scrub, Woodland, ForestVegetation Community category for the least Bell's vireo conservation analysis because the MSHCP species occurrence data base has a number of data points in this category and it appears to support vireos in the Plan Area.

    D-28 The MSHCP addresses the factors affecting the southwestern willow flycatcher in the Plan Area by protecting nesting Habitat within the MSHCP Conservation Area, implementing policies to avoid and minimize impacts to riparian/riverine areas, implementing management measures to address nest parasitism by brown-headed cowbirds, and most importantlythrough maintenance and restoration of riparian Habitats. The recovery plan for the southwestern willow flycatcher includes increasing and improving breeding habitat by restoring, mimicking, and/or recreating natural physical and biotic process that influence riparian ecosystems. See Response D-26 regarding the comment related to "destruction" of Habitat.

    D-29 The purple martin will occur in a variety of Habitats, but potential nesting areas occur in riparian, oak woodland, and montane coniferous Habitats. Monitoring for the purple martin is included in the list of species that occur primarily at high elevation (generally Forest Service lands) as that monitoring category best fits the overall Habitat for this species. The MSHCP includes site specific considerations to conserve nest site locations, and species specific management conditions to address factors affecting the purple martin in the Plan Area. The management condition for the purple martin includes removal of house sparrows or European starlings competing for nest cavities, and the management of known and future identified nesting localities and protection of micro-Habitat in potential nesting Habitat. Management and monitoring of nesting localities would include management within oak and riparian woodlands.

    D-30 The MSHCP addresses the factors affecting western yellow-billed cuckoo in the Plan Area by implementing policies to maintain or, if feasible, improve the riparian/riverine areas and vernal pool Habitats within recent documented locations of the species, implementing measures to address threats associated with habitat degradation, and by protecting nesting Habitat within the MSHCP Conservation Area. These are features incorporated in the MSHCP, and the EIS/EIR impact analysis is based on such incorporation. Therefore, these features are not identified as mitigation measures in the EIS/EIR.

    D-31 Conservation for San Diego horned lizard will be achieved by preserving large blocks of suitable Habitat within the MSHCP Conservation Area, including 13 Core Areas. These Core Areas are provided with numerous connections to Existing and Proposed Cores. The MSHCP will maintain the continued use of 75 percent of the Core areas. The MSHCP considers Conservation of this species from a landscape perspective because the species is found throughout the Plan Area, and may occur in a variety of habitats. There are definable locations for focusing conservation efforts, but there does not appear to be any key populations that would be essential for Conservation of the species. The species is susceptible to adverse impacts near urbanized areas. However, the large habitat blocks provided in the MSHCP are anticipated to support viable populations.

    D-32 The MSHCP conservation analysis for Belding's orange-throated whiptail includes coastal sage scrub, chaparral, desert scrub, Riversidean alluvial fan sage scrub, and riparian scrub and woodland below 1,040 meters as potential Habitat for this species. These Habitats include floodplains and streamside terraces. The MSHCP includes monitoring and management actions into the Conservation Strategy for Belding's orange-throated whiptail so that suitable Habitat, including microhabitat, will be maintained within the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    D-33 The MSHCP addresses the factors affecting northern red-diamond rattlesnake by preserving chaparral and coastal sage scrub primary Habitat below 1,520 feet, including 10 Core Areas, and by including Linkages between the Core Areas facilitated by upland and riparian connections. Including Linkages will address the species' susceptibility to road mortality. Management and monitoring actions will also be incorporated into the Conservation Strategy for this species so that Habitat conditions will be maintained. These are features incorporated into the MSHCP and the EIS/EIR impact analysis is based on such incorporation. Therefore, these features are not identified as mitigation measures in the EIS/EIR.

    D-34 MSHCP conservation objectives for the cactus wren includes Conservation of suitable Habitat including desert scrub, Riversidean alluvial fan sage scrub, and coastal sage scrub in specific Core Areas and interconnecting Linkages. In addition to protection of suitable Habitat in specific locations, Conservation of the cactus wren also requires species-specific conservation measures consisting of conserving the microhabitat for this species, which is composed of cactus patches within the Cores Areas within the MSHCP Conservation Area, via a number of methods that may include fire suppression, enhancement, or revegetation with cacti. Monitoring and management activities for this species are addressed in the MSHCP and will address microhabitat needs in greater detail and include a program to enhance and/or create cactus patches within Core Areas and baseline surveys to determine the number of acres occupied by cactus wren within each Core Area. These are features incorporated into the MSHCP and the EIS/EIR impact analysis is based on such incorporation. Therefore, these features are not identified as mitigation measures in the EIS/EIR.

    The MSHCP is based on best scientific and commercial data available and as such, it is not necessary to require an updated, fine-scaled vegetation map and associated habitat suitability modeling and analysis. It is acknowledged that the MSHCP must meet issuance criteria that call for demonstration that the expected Take will not appreciably reduce the likelihood of survival and recovery of Covered Species.

    D-35 Fire management will be an important factor in addressing the Conservation of southern California rufous-crowned sparrow. Large scale fires damagehabitat for a relatively long length of time, and fire may assist with providing additional suitable Habitat for this species. Conservation for the southern California rufous-crowned sparrow will preserve large areas of suitable Habitat within the MSHCP Conservation Area that will be necessary to provide refugia for birds and to supply dispersing individuals to a recovering area. Duplicate Linkages also provide for the temporary loss of function of the coastal sage scrub Habitat in the event of a fire. Response D-34 addresses the comment regarding fine scaled vegetation maps.

    D-36 The coastal California gnatcatcher is a coastal sage scrub species and areas conserved for this species are reflective of the magnitude, extent and distribution of coastal sage scrub Conservation within the Plan Area. The MSHCP will conserve 77,070 acres of suitable Habitat for this species in 13 Core Areas within large blocks of Habitat in the MSHCP Conservation Area, with the remaining suitable Habitat preservation occurring in scattered patches throughout the MSHCP Plan Area. The species-specific objectives for this species require at least 13 of the Core Areas and interconnecting Linkages within nine Core and Linkage areas, and continued use of and successful reproduction at 75 percent of the Core Areas. While providing for Conservation of coastal California gnatcatcher within the Plan Area, implementation of these species-specific objectives will also provide for coastal sage scrub preservation in large habitat blocks across diverse locations within the Plan Area. Management activities forthisspecies includes particular emphasis on fire and fire suppression activities, and domestic animals.

    D-37 Bells' sage sparrow is widely but sparsely distributed throughout Riverside lowlands, Santa Ana Mountains, Desert Transition and San Jacinto Foothills Bioregions. This species is well known for using coastal sage scrub and chaparral Habitats. The species-specific objectives for this species include Conservation of at least 245,750 acres of suitable Habitat including coastal sage scrub, chaparral, and desert scrubs, and inclusion of at least 12 of 14 Core Areas and interconnecting Linkages for Bell's sage sparrow. These objectives will be monitored and analyzed to determine if they are producing the desired result, i.e., Conservation of suitable habitat. Based upon this information, the objectives will be adjusted if appropriate as new information is gathered during Plan implementation. The Adaptive Management Program will be used to identify alternative strategies for meeting the MSHCP's biological goals and objectives. While providing for Conservation of Bell's sage sparrow within the Plan Area, implementation of these species-specific objectives will also provide for coastal sage scrub preservation.

    D-38 Species specific conservation objectives for the Los Angeles pocket mouse include Conservation of at least 14,000 acres of suitable habitat within specific Core Areas in the MSHCP Conservation Area and Conservation of at least 10,000 acres of suitable habitat outside of the probable Core Areas but within the Criteria Area. Additionally, surveys for Los Angeles pocket mouse will be conducted as part of the project review process for public and private projects within the mammal species survey area where suitable habitat is present. Survey and site-specific conservation efforts will continue until there is a minimum of seven Core Areas with at least 2,000 acres of suitable habitat within each Core Area. It is acknowledged that the MSHCP must meet issuance criteria that call for demonstration that the expected Take will not appreciably reduce the likelihood of survival and recovery of Covered Species.

    D-39 The MSHCP addresses the factors affecting Aguanga kangaroo rat by conserving 81 percent of occupied or suitable Habitat within the historic floodplains of Temecula Creek and Wilson Creek in the MSHCP Conservation Area, and conducting surveys as part of the project review process for public and private projects within the mammal species survey area where suitable Habitat is present. Species-specific objectives also require that within the conserved Habitat, at least 75 percent of the total must be occupied and at least 20 percent of the occupied Habitat must support a medium or higher population density of the species measures across any 8-year period.

    Access to private lands was not available to conduct the focused species surveys described in the comment. Where additional survey data was determined to be needed to meet conservation requirements for individual species, survey requirements are incorporated in the MSHCP as described in Section 6.1.3 and 6.3.2 of the Plan.

    D-40 Species Objective 2 for the mountain lion includes Conservation of Habitat Linkages and movement corridors within the MSHCP Conservation Area between large habitat blocks. These Habitat Linkages and movement corridors allow dispersal and movement of mountain lions through the Plan Area and to areas outside of the Plan Area. The conserved habitat connections and corridors are specifically listed in Species Objective 2 and provide connection from the Santa Ana Mountains to the Palomar Range, and connection between the San Bernardino Mountains and the San Jacinto Mountains.

    D-41 The MSHCP conservation analysis for western spadefoot concludes that approximately 85 percent of primary Habitat and approximately 55 percent of secondary Habitat within the MSHCP Plan Area would be conserved. General Management Measure 4 for the western spadefoot requires that Reserve Managers will revegetate or rehabilitatepotential Habitat that is degraded by infestations of exotic plants and animals and will evaluate the condition of the sites and vegetation within the Core Areas and maintain a program to enhance and/or create primary Habitats within the Core Areas which may include limiting roads or providing toad walls and culverts for safe dispersal. Successful reproduction is measured by the presence/absence of tadpoles, egg masses, or juvenile toads.

    D-42 The MSHCP conservation analysis for grasshopper sparrow concludes that once Conservation of suitable Habitat has been achieved, and specific locations that support Core Areas are known, it is anticipated that this species will respond well to a landscape level of management with site-specific requirements. Because the grasshopper sparrow does not tolerate fragmentation and most of the grassland in the Plan Area will be lost, Incidental Take of this species is not included in the Permit until Conservation of the species in the Plan Area has been demonstrated by reaching Objective 2.

    D-43 The California horned lark is relatively widely-distributed throughout the MSHCP Plan Area within its suitable habitat. There appear to be several Core Areas for this species including Mystic Lake/San Jacinto Wildlife Area, the grasslands within Prado Basin, Wasson Canyon area, Moreno Valley/March ARB, and Murrieta/Murrieta Hot Springs area. The MSHCP addresses the factors affecting California horned lark by conserving 153,750 acres of suitable foraging and nesting Habitat, including at least 3 Core Areas and a portion of a fourth Core Area preserving grasslands around the Prado Basin, Wasson Canyon, Mystic Lake/San Jacinto Wildlife Area, and a portion of the Core Area in the Murrieta/Murrieta Hot Springs area. Management activities for this species include managing known and future occurrences of this species for pesticide use and Habitat fragmentation and destruction. Because California horned lark is well known for using open, sparsely vegetated habitats, but has specific locations that appear to be Core Areas, it responds well to a landscape level of management with site specific requirements.

    D-44 The northern harrier occurs in a widely scattered distribution predominantly throughout the lowland and foothills Bioregions but may occur sparsely within suitable habitat in the mountain Bioregions and rarely as a wintering bird within the Desert Transition Bioregion within the Plan Area. The northern harrier uses a relatively wide variety of Habitats, including agriculture lands and grasslands, playa, alkali marsh, marshlands, coastal sage scrub, chaparral, and other scrub Habitat. The MSHCP addresses the factors affecting northern harrier in the Plan Area by protecting nesting Habitat within the MSHCP Conservation Area, implementing policies to avoid and minimize impacts to riparian/riverine areas, and implementing management measures to ensure successful nesting and breeding, and to prevent Habitat loss and conversion. The northern harrier is included in the grasslands (and open fields) Vegetation Community long-term monitoring grouping. Further refinement of the groupings will occur as the MSHCP is implemented.

    D-45 The MSHCP conservation analysis concluded that Swainson's hawk has a sparse and widespread distribution throughout the MSHCP Plan Area within almost every Habitat that occurs within the Plan Area. This species occurs within the Plan Area as a transient in the spring and fall and may occasionally winter within the area. It does not require specific conditions or locations for nesting because it does not nest in the region. It is an opportunistic predator that may forage anywhere in the Plan Area. Conservation for this species will be accomplished through Conservation of suitable foraging, perch, and roost Habitat within the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    D-46 The MSHCP vegetation map is considered to be adequate for the landscape level planning undertaken for the MSHCP and represents the best scientific and commercial data available. It is not necessary to have an updated vegetation map prior to identifying a Criteria Area. The main areas within which this species has been observed, Prado Basin/Santa Ana River and Mystic Lake/San Jacinto Wildlife Area, will be conserved in the MSHCP Conservation Area. It is acknowledged that the MSHCP must meet issuance criteria that call for demonstration that the expected Take will not appreciably reduce the likelihood of survival and recovery of Covered Species, including ferruginous hawk.

    D-47 The MSHCP conservation analysis concludes that white-tailed kite typically uses riparian scrub, forest and woodland, and oak woodland and forest for breeding and uses a wide variety of more open grassland/agriculture land and scrub habitat lands for foraging. Species-specific objectives for this species call for Conservation of suitable breeding Habitat including 10 identified core breeding areas and Conservation of suitable foraging Habitat within the MSHCP Conservation Area. The objectives also call for maintenance of 75 percent of core breeding areas, and protection and buffer for the known winter roost area along San Timoteo Creek, and any winter roost locations identified in the MSHCP Conservation Area in the future. As noted in Responses to Comment Letter N3, the MSHCP data has been confirmed for landscape-level planning purposes.

    D-48 Response F-72 addresses the adequacy of the MSHCP's Conservation of the burrowing owl.

    In addition to the locations mentioned in Comment D-48, burrowing owl nest locations are preserved in Existing Core A (Santa Ana River), Proposed Linkage 2, Proposed Core 5, Proposed habitat block 7, Proposed habitat block 6, and Proposed Core 3 of the MSHCP Conservation Area. One of the proposed habitat blocks is in a playa west of Hemet. Of these other preserved locations, the Santa Ana River is areas are within existing Public/Quasi-Public Lands but the others are all new proposed preserve areas. See Response D-72.

    Surveys for the burrowing owl are required throughout the Plan Area within Riverside Lowlands which includes agriculture and grasslands. Additional locations for burrowing owl may be picked up in these surveys that have not been previously recorded. The MSHCP's relocation strategy for the burrowing owl follows the published methodology recommended by CDFG for mitigation for burrowing owls (CDFG Staff Report on Burrowing Owl Mitigation).

    A Population Viability Analysis was not conducted for burrowing owl as there is insufficient data to conduct such an analysis. There are 82 point locations dated within the past 10 years, 38 of these are considered to have sufficient accuracy for planning purposes. The population goal of 120 provides for approximately 50 % more than the current population estimate. Surveys will be conducted in accordance with the objectives for this species as the MSHCP is implemented.

    D-49 The MSHCP addresses the factors affecting San Diego black-tailed jackrabbit by conserving suitable Habitat and Habitat Linkages in the MSHCP Conservation Area. A focused survey to census the population of the species in western Riverside County has not been done. Even in principle a complete census would be difficult because of the natural population fluctuations exhibited by the species; populations may dramatically vary in size and distribution in relation to reproduction and shifting distributions and densities of food resources. The MSHCP Conservation Area includes large habitat areas and adequate habitat Linkages that will allow for the natural fluctuations in population densities and distribution of the jackrabbit.

    D-50 BLM lands are included with the core reserves for SKR under the Long-Term SKR HCP. The MSHCP contemplates that such existing reserve lands, which are part of the Public/Quasi Public Lands addressed in the MSHCP, will be part of the overall MSHCP Conservation Area and managed in cooperation with the Additional Reserved Lands to be acquired by the Lead Agencies. However, as explained in Responses N-5, N-17, I4-10 and T4-7, such existing Public/Quasi-Public Lands are not counted as part of the local mitigation required to obtain Take Authorization under the Plan.

    Additional funds have been raised through the collection of SKR mitigation fees to acquire SKR habitat to complete the SKR HCP. As set forth in Section 16.2 of the IA, the MSHCP does not impact or change the SKR HCP.

    D-51 The analysis in the EIS/EIR is predicated on the fact that features incorporated in the MSHCP will be implemented. These features include implementation of the four component Conservation Strategy for each Covered Species that addresses assembly of the MSHCP Conservation Area as well as implementation of management and monitoring measures. Other features incorporated in the MSHCP that are a predicate of the analysis in the EIS/EIR are the avoidance and minimization measures for Covered Activities presented in Section 7.0 of the MSHCP as well as the implementation policies and procedures presented in Section 6.0 of the Plan. See Responses F-79, F-80 and F82 for discussion of the ways in which the effects of Covered Activities, including Edge Effects, are addressed in the MSHCP. The MSHCP does not defer management activities but rather includes a management and monitoring plan that will be carried out as part of MSHCP implementation.

    D-52 The 75% figure referenced in the form noted in the comment is consistent with the requirements of General Management Measure 8 presented in Section 5.2 of the Draft MSHCP (page 5-7 of the Draft MSHCP). With respect to the 75% figure, General Management Measure 8 states the following: "The identified 76% threshold is the default lower limit (unless otherwise specified) and may be modified as new data are collected over time. Thresholds shall be determined by the RMOC which will meet five years after permit issuance and every year thereafter to evaluate new data and review species-specific trigger points. It is anticipated that sufficient data will be available to determine species-specific trigger points for management activities by Year 15 after permit issuance."

    D-53 The MSHCP does not improperly defer CEQA analysis. See Response D-51.

    D-54 Congress, the California Legislature and the Wildlife Agencies encourage local agencies to develop regional habitat conservation plans in order to establish an ecosystem-based approach to species protection. See Responses F-2 and H2-27. Project by project review of new development proposals under applicable environmental laws will not lead to the preservation of Bioregions, corridors, Linkages and other features beneficial to species that are available under a larger HCP. This point is made obvious by examining land uses vis-a-vis open space in coastal communities across the State of California. The MSHCP and the EIR/EIS provide substantial biological and other information to support the protection of Covered Species.

    The MSHCP has been formulated to provide mitigation and acquisition of habitat for Covered Species to the maximum extent practicable. Nowhere does the FESA or the NCCP Act require that a 1:1 ratio be maintained. Moreover, the MSHCP must be viewed as a plan that will lead to the permanent management of more than 500,000 acres for the benefit of species and habitat in the Plan Area. The Plan integrates review of potential environmental impacts covered by CEQA and NEPA to provide maximum benefit to species and maximum efficiency to the regulated community. Nevertheless, it must be noted that CEQA and NEPA principles play a large role in implementation of the MSHCP and its consistency requirements. Moreover, avoidance and minimization and other environmentally-oriented principles remain a significant part of the process. Unique or rare habitat areas are eligible for conservation through the HANS and other MSHCP-related processes.

    D-55 See Response D-54. Restoration is included as a part of future management activities pursuant to Section 5 of the Plan.

    D-56 The public funding to be used to acquire and manage MSHCP Conservation Areas is not uncertain. As set forth in Section 8.0 of the MSHCP, funding will come not only from the Local Development Mitigation Fee, landfill tipping fee, sales tax revenue, and Measure A, but also from other federal, State and local sources. The Permittees thus meet the Section 10(a) requirement that they will ensure that adequate funding for the plan is provided. (See Section 10 HCP Handbook, pp. 3-34 to 3-35.) The Permittees will be legally required to collect the Local Development Mitigation Fee and use them in addition to other funding sources, for MSHCP purposes. Moreover, private landowners within the Criteria are subject to the HANS and other MSHCP processes, and a system has been established to provide substantial incentives to facilitate the acquisition of important habitats and property by the County and participating Cities. These processes have been developed by the Permittees, in consultation with the Wildlife Agencies, and are based upon successful systems used in other regional habitat conservation plans. The comment implies that no property owners will want to sell their property. To the contrary, the County has over 65 willing sellers who have already voluntarily submitted their lands for acquisition. The comment reflects a fundamental misunderstanding of the conflict resolution process in HANS. Any dispute is resolved through mediation or arbitration, not the Board of Supervisors.

    D-57 See Responses F-46 through F-50.

    D-58 The goals of the MSHCP would not be considered to be met if the Cores and Linkages are not assembled and managed according to the parameters presented in Section 3.2.3 of the MSHCP (as required in Global Biological Objective 1 presented in Section 9.2 of the MSHCP) and the Conservation Strategy presented in Section 9.2 for each Covered Species is not implemented. Implementation of these MSHCP requirements will ensure that populations and locations of species anticipated to be conserved in the species accounts are conserved within the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    The comment references only one element of the Criteria identified for Cells and Cell Groups in Sections 3.3.2 through 3.3.17 of the MSHCP and mistakenly assumes that the geographic component of the Cell Criteria is the only requirement that must be met. In those sections, Reserve Assembly guidance is provided in the form of target acreages of Conservation for each Area Plan and Area Plan Subunit, Planning Species and biological considerations for each Area Plan Subunit and specific Criteria for each Cell or Cell Group related to assembly of the relevant Core or Linkage within which the Cell or Cell Group is located, Vegetation Communities anticipated to be conserved within each Cell or Cell Group, connectivity associated with Conservation in each Cell or Cell Group, and general geographic Conservation anticipated in each Cell or Cell Group (the "50-%-60% on the western portion" reference in the comment). See Response G-7 for additional discussion of this issue.

    With respect to Narrow Endemic Plant Species, surveys are required in accordance with the requirements of Sections 6.1.3 and 6.3.2 of the MSHCP. As stated in these sections, the results of surveys for these species will guide Reserve Assembly to assure that populations are conserved and the individual Conservation Strategies for these species are met.

    D-59 The descriptions of the Cores and Linkages in Section 3.2.3 of the MSHCP indicate anticipated planned land uses adjacent to the MSHCP Conservation Area for each Core and Linkage and note those areas where more intensive management may be needed to reduce Edge Effects. The MSHCP Plan map presented in Figure 3-1 depicts rural mountainous land use designations in the Plan Area to schematically indicate where these land use types may occur adjacent to the MSHCP Conservation Area; for some species, rural mountainous land uses adjacent to the MSHCP Conservation Area would provide a compatible edge. In addition, Section 6.1.4 of the MSHCP presents Guidelines Pertaining to the Urban/Wildlands Interface to assure that the MSHCP Conservation Area is treated as a "sensitive neighbor" when land uses are proposed in proximity to it; this section addresses factors such as night lighting. As discussed in Response D-25, Section 7.3.5 of the MSHCP includes guidelines for wildlife crossings that address the needs of small mammal, reptile and amphibian wildlife. See Responses F-73, F-80, and F-82 for additional discussion of Edge Effects and treatment of Covered Activities in the MSHCP.

    D-60 The MSHCP contains numerous provisions to protect Covered Species and Habitat from Edge Effects and other potentially harmful effects from adjacent land uses. See Response D-59 for discussion of the ways in which the MSHCP addresses land use activities in proximity to the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    D-61 As called for in the MSHCP, Conservation and management of the MSHCP Conservation Area will be assured in perpetuity through acquisition and protection of Additional Reserve Lands (Section 6) and long-term financing for management (Section 8). The MSHCP does provide conservation measures for the life of the Permits.

    D-62 With respect to burrowing owl, see Responses D-48, F-15, F-72 and F-103 for discussion of this species.

    D-63 This comment purports to summarize state and federal law, and the comment does not require further response.

    D-64 The Modified Reserve Configuration Alternative was not carried forward because it did not constitute a feasible alternative that would substantially lessen any significant impacts and it conflicted with the MSHCP's function to streamline the permitting process while accommodating growth. For example, under the Modified Reserve Configuration Alternative the number of species to be conserved remains the same and the percentage of take is very similar. (See Volume IV, Appendix B, pp. B-5, B-7.) This alternative would also require the Conservation of significantly more private land (218,000 acres) than the Proposed MSHCP (153,000 acres). This results in the conservation of an additional 65,000 acres, more than 40% more than the MSHCP. Using these additional lands for Conservation could also represent the loss of up to 227,500 low-density residential units. (See Volume IV, Appendix B, p. B-9.) Additionally, the Modified Reserve Configuration Alternative would be infeasible because of cost. It would take at least a 40% increase in cost to acquire the additional acreage contemplated in the Modified Reserve Configuration Alternative. This additional area would also likely result in the need for additional staff to monitor and maintain the areas, resulting in additional long-term expenses. (See EIR/EIS, App. B, p. B-10). Setting aside an additional 65,000 acres for Conservation could also represent the loss of up to 227,500 low-density residential units. (See App. B, p. B-9). The loss of developable land under the Modified Reserve Alternative is relevant because one of the project objectives is to "provide incidental take authorization for the transporation, infrastructure, housing and employment base needed to accommodate projected growth in western Riverside County." Developable land is necessaryto accommodate projected growth in the County. Thus, the Modified Reserve Alternative would impair the County's responsibility to meet housing needs but would not result in the Conservation of additional species or reduce the level of Take.

    Moreover, 65,000 acres of land would not pay the Local Development Mitigation Fee. Thus, the Conservation of these additional acres would directly affect the availability of local funds to finance the MSHCP and conflicts with the objective requiring that the preferred alternative include a fee-based funding program that will generate sufficient revenue to contribute to the reserve's funding needs. Additionally, the Modified Reserve Configuration Alternative would conflict with project objectives because it would not be economically efficient and it would not limit the expenditure of public and private funds to the amount necessary to maintain a reserve. Because the Lead Agencies must balance the number of acres to be conserved with the availability of funds to manage the MSHCP Conservation Area, the Modified Reserve Configuration Alternative was determined infeasible and screened out from further consideration as a project alternative (see Volume IV, Appendix B, p. B-10.)

    D-65 See Responses D-4 and D-64. The comments and memoranda previously submitted by the Scientific Review Panel and others have been considered in the preparation of the public review draft documents. The commentor's assertion that the County only rejected the Modified Reserve Configuration Alternative because the proposed MSHCP conserved the same number of species with a similar degree of Take on less land is inaccurate. As explained above in Response D-64, the Lead Agencies rejected the Modified Reserve Configuration Alternative becausethey determined that the acquisition of an additional 65,400 acres was infeasible for financial reasons, conflicted with the MSHCP's goal to accommodate growth, and did not protect any more species or reduce Take. Thus, they concluded that the Modified Reserve Configuration Alternative would greatly increase the cost of the Plan without significantly increasing the conservation value of the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    D-66 The comment purports to cite FESA and its implementing regulations, and no further response is required.

    D-67 The Lead Agencies believe that the Plan's approach to Critical Habitat is acceptable. See Response A-28.

    D-68 The Lead Agencies do not believe that the assurances provided by the MSHCP are unlawful. See Responses A-8 and A-28. The Lead Agencies are aware of federal case law in which it has been held that the Service failed to designate Critical Habitat within the time frames established by FESA; however, the County is unaware of case law - and no citations are provided in the comment - holding that the Service has failed "to properly implement" Critical Habitat. Accordingly, no further response is required.

    D-69 The MSHCP's proposed requirements with respect to future recovery plans fully comply with applicable law. The commentor implies that, in developing future recovery plans, the Service should ignore input from Permittees. The Lead Agencies are not aware of any statutory, regulatory, or case law authority to support this contention. To the contrary, FESA specifically requires that recovery plans be subjected to public review prior to approval and mandates that the Service consider all comments received on the draft recovery plan. 16 U.S.C. § 1533(f)(4)-(5). Given that this statutory provision requires consideration of any input received from the Permittees -- and anyone else -- on future draft recovery plans, the Lead Agencies disagree with the commentor's suggestion that the Permittees' input should be ignored.

    D-70 The Lead Agencies disagree that Modified Reserve Configuration Alternative was improperly rejected. See Responses D-64 and D-65. The County is currently preparing a nexus study pursuant to the requirements of California Government Code, section 66000 et seq. to justify the amount of habitat mitigation fees. The suggestion that all of the Criteria Area be zoned agricultural is infeasible and is not a function of the MSHCP. Good land use planning would not arbitrarily include all property regardless of its site characteristics and location in an agricultural zone. Moreover, the General Plan establishes land use designations, not zoning.

    D-71 To the extent that the comment purports to summarize state and federal law, these laws speak for themselves. The Draft EIR/EIS provides a full analysis of all potential environmental effects of the MSHCP. See Response D-59. Edge Effects are comprehensively addressed in the discussion of Cores and Linkages (Section 3.2.3) and in the individual species analyses.

    D-72 As discussed in Responses D-14 and D-23, species-specific objectives for plant species potentially affected by the San Jacinto River Flood Control Project call for maintenance of hydrologic processes to allow seed bank sources to shift over time. Based on existing available information, it is not anticipated that achievement of this objective will require preserving the entire 100-year floodplain for the river which extends essentially across the Perris Valley; however, project specific analysis will need to be completed to demonstrate that the objective of maintaining hyrdologic processes to allow seed bank sources to shift over time is met.

    Edge treatments associated with the San Jacinto River Flood Control Project would be subject to the Guidelines Pertaining to the Urban/Wildlands Interface presented in Section 6.1.4 of the MSHCP and such treatments may vary depending upon the type of land use proposed in proximity to conserved areas along the river. The reference to the "analysis of Edge Effects" in the MSHCP appears to be taken from the Description of the MSHCP Conservation Area presented in Section 3.2.2 (page 3-22 of the Draft MSHCP). This information is provided for descriptive purposes and is not intended to indicate significance of Edge Effects. The referenced discussion notes that portions of the MSHCP Conservation Area within the Riverside Lowlands Bioregion, within which the San Jacinto River Flood Control Project would be located, would be the most subject to Edge Effects. The MSHCP acknowledges that management actions will need to be undertaken in these areas to minimize these effects and provide for the needs of Covered Species. See also Response D-59.

    D-73 See Responses F-46, F-47, F-48, F-49 and F-50 for discussion of the ways in which reserve configuration requirements are incorporated in the MSHCP to avoid and minimize habitat fragmentation.

    D-74 The descriptions of planned adjacent land uses for the Cores and Linkages in Section 3.2.3 of the MSHCP and the Guidelines Pertaining to the Urban/Wildlands Interface in Section 6.1.4 of the MSHCP recognize that Edge Effects are different based on the matrix surrounding reserves as well as the extent of uses within reserves. The species-specific Conservation Strategies, the threats to Covered Species identified in the species accounts and in Section 5.2 of the MSHCP, and the guidelines for wildlife crossings presented in Section 7.3.5 of the MSHCP recognize that these effects vary among species. Within the MSHCP Conservation Area, General Management Measure 9, presented in Section 5.2 of the Draft MSHCP, will be implemented to address disturbance regimes, including those related to fragmentation and Edge Effects. As presented in Sections 5.2 and 5.3, monitoring and management activities will be undertaken within the MSHCP Conservation Area to document continued use and successful reproduction of Covered Species. Triggers for management action are incorporated in General Management Measure 8 of the Draft MSHCP and within the species-specific objectives for Covered Species. The combination of these features incorporated in the MSHCP will provide for implementation of the Global Biological Objective of the MSHCP which is: "In the MSHCP Plan Area, Conserve Covered Species and their Habitats."

    D-75 Domestic pets are identified as a threat to certain Covered Species as presented in Table 5-2 of the MSHCP. As discussed in Response D-74, configuration of the MSHCP Conservation Area in a manner consistent with the Cores and Linkages descriptions in Section 3.2.3 and implementation of the Guidelines Pertaining to the Urban/Wildlands Interface in Section 6.1.4 will address threats such as domestic pets by configuring the MSHCP Conservation Area to minimize edge to the extent feasible, and incorporating appropriate treatments in the design of land uses in proximity to the MSHCP Conservation Area. In addition, provision of Linkages as proposed by the MSHCP will maintain native predator populations.

    D-76 The MSHCP recognizes the effects associated with roads and the threats to species noted in the comment. See Response D-74 for discussion of features incorporated in the MSHCP to address these threats. See Responses F-73, F-80 and F-82 for discussion of the ways in which the effects of Covered Activities, including roads, are addressed in the MSHCP. In reference to language that may be repeated in more than one species account, that language was appropriate and applicable to more than one species.

    D-77 Global warming is a global phenomenon and it would be speculative to specifically analyze the effects of this phenomenon in the context of the proposed MSHCP. In a general sense, Section 6.8.3 of the Draft MSHCP addresses actions associated with identified Changed Circumstances such as flooding, fire and drought which could be indirectly related to global warming. With respect to the summary provided at the conclusion of the comment, see Responses D-73 through D-76.

    D-78 As discussed in Response D-56 the MSHCP discusses the use of the Local Development Mitigation Fees, as well as other local, state and federal funds, to provide for the acquisition, management and other costs associated with MSHCP implementation meets the issuance requirements under FESA for funding assurances. According to the HCP Section 10 Handbook, the Service "must ensure that funding sources and levels proposed by the applicant are reliable and will meet the purposes of the HCP, and that measures to deal with unforseen circumstances are adequately met." (HCP Handbook, p. 7-4.) The MSHCP meets the funding assurances requirements of FESA. In addition to the provisions of Section 8.0 of the MSHCP, the particular funding requirements of the MSHCP are more particularly described in the County nexus study currently being prepared. Whether private landowners have a commitment to sell their lands for conservation is not especially relevant to the funding issue. In general terms, when existing land uses are converted to new Development, development impact fees will be due and payable. Such funds will be used to acquire MSHCP Conservation Areas and for other appropriate purposes. Until land is converted, impacts to species are not expected to occur. In the unlikely event a landowner were able to opt out of the Plan, and an amendment to the MSHCP were required, the landowner would not be entitled to Take Authorization. If listed species are nevertheless found on the landowner's property, separate FESA, CEQA and CESA mitigation would be required.

    The Lead Agencies also note that it is disingenuous for the Center to argue, on pages 31 and 32 of its Comment Letter (Comment D-78), that it would be problematic from a species protection perspective to "revert to a piecemeal (i.e., project by project) approach" to conserving species, when the Center made the opposite argument in Comment D-54 on page 20 of its Comment Letter by stating that a project by project approach would lead to greater conservation.

    D-79 This comment reiterates and summarizes the preceding comments, for which responses are provided. The Lead Agencies believes that the analysis of baseline, scientific and other data, alternatives, significant impacts, and mitigation measures is sufficient under all applicable laws.

    D-80 The Lead Agencies disagree with each of vague and unsupported allegations made in this comment. First, the growth-inducing impacts of the MSHCP are fully discussed in Sections 5 and 6 of the Draft EIR/EIS. (See Draft EIR/EIS, pp. 5.1-6 through 5.1-10; 6.1-4 through 6.1-5.) Pursuant to State CEQA Guidelines section 15126.2, the Draft EIR/EIS specifically discusses the MSHCP's potential to induce growth on pages 6.1-14 and 6.1-5 of Section 6 and also includes the growth inducing effects of the MSHCP in the discussion of cumulative impacts on pages 5.1-6 through 5.1-10. As the Draft EIR/EIS notes,the growth-inducing potential of a project would be considered significant only if it fosters growth or a concentration of population in excess of what is assumed in relevant master plans, land use plans or in projections made by regional planning agencies. The MSHCP does not itself propose any growth or development; it merely provides a regional plan to address the biological effects of existing and anticipated future market-driven growth in western Riverside County. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 5.1-9.) Further, the Draft EIR/EIS concludes that not only will the establishment of the MSHCP Conservation Area enhance the quality of life in western Riverside County, but also that neither the proposed MSHCP nor any of the project alternatives contain components that would directly generate residential, commercial, or industrial development or induce population growth within the Plan Area. (See Draft EIR/EIS at p. 6.1-5.) Additionally, the Draft EIR/EIS also recognizes that the MSHCP would remove an impediment to growth by authorizing Take of Covered Species and allowing development outside the MSHCP Conservation Areas. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 5.1-9.) Thus, the MSHCP is growth-accommodating, not growth-inducing. All feasible mitigation measures were considered in the Draft EIR/EIS and the commentor fails to suggest any. See Response H2-15.

    Second, the Draft EIR/EIS adequately discusses air quality, water quality, loss of open space and aesthetic impacts. As supported by the evidence in the record, not all issues analyzed in the Draft EIR/EIS were significant or cumulatively considerable. Adoption of the proposed MSHCP and issuance of a Take Permit under FESA and the NCCP Act would permanently conserve portions of land in western Riverside County and would permit Take of Covered Species. Since the MSHCP does not authorize any physical Development, it was determined in the Draft EIR/EIS that implementation of the proposed MSHCP would not result in any significant environmental effects relating to the following issue areas: aesthetics, air quality, hydrology and water quality, or land use. As required by CEQA, the Draft EIR/EIS briefly discusses these insignificant environmental issues in Section 1.5.5. (State CEQA Guidelines, § 15128.) For example, because the proposed MSHCP does not entail physical development, implementation of the proposed MSHCP would not create additional sources of light or glare affecting aesthetics. Likewise, since there is no proposed development, adoption of the proposed MSHCP would not alter the rate or amount of growth projected for western Riverside County, it has no impact on water quantity or quality that can be determined at this time. The MSHCP might cause an indirect effect on water quality outside the MSHCP Conservation Area. However, the Lead Agencies cannot address these potential indirect impacts in the Draft EIR/EIS for the MSHCP because it would be speculative to try to determine where, and if, any particular future development wouldbeconstructed. CEQA does not require speculation. Additionally, State CEQA Guidelines section 15145 specifically states that speculation is not required in an EIR. Likewise, NEPA does not require an analysis of impacts that are too speculative to identify. (See, e.g., Kootenai Tribe of Idaho v. Veneman (2002) 313 F.3d 1094.) The Draft EIR/EIS discusses hydrology and water quality on page 1.5-8. Also, because the MSHCP Conservation Area will not propose any physical construction, there is no impact on open space. To the extent that it might cause an indirect effect in the future, such an analysis is too speculative to be analyzed appropriately. For this reason, there is no significant cumulative impact on aesthetics, air quality, hydrology and water quality, or open space. (See Draft EIR/EIS, pp. 1.5-5 through 1.5-11.)

    Third, traffic and circulation impacts are discussed in detail in the Draft EIR/EIS in Section 3.5. If the commentor suggests a particular mitigation measure, the Lead Agencies would be able to provide a more specific response. Fourth, as explained in more detail in Responses M-14, M-16, M-34 and M-40, the MSHCP does not result in the loss of agricultural land. Finally, the Draft EIR/EIS contains adequate cumulative impact analysis. See Responses H2-5 and H2-309 through H2-314.

    D-81 See Responses D-9, D-10 and D-17 for discussion of surveys, core populations and data gaps and the ways in which these issues are addressed in the MSHCP. The MSHCP recognizes the unique biodiversity in the Plan Area. Since more specific comments regarding biodiversity hot spots and source-sink populations are not provided, a more specific response is not possible.

    D-82 Of the 146 Covered Species, analysis in the MSHCP concludes that 130 species would be Covered Species Adequately Conserved at the time of initial permit issuance. This coverage will be based on implementing the Conservation Strategy identified for each Covered Species which includes assembling additional species information to fill data gaps over the long-term implementation process for the MSHCP. For the remaining 16 Covered Species, it was determined that additional species information is required before these species can be considered to be Covered Species Adequately Conserved. Since more specific comments regarding the species that should be omitted from the list of Covered Species is not provided, a more specific response is not possible.

    D-83 The analysis of the Modified Reserve Alternative demonstrated that an alternative that provides for the acquisition of more land for the MSHCP Conservation Area does not substantially lessen any impacts. However, such an alternative is prohibitively expensive. The MSHCP cannot bear the cost of acquiring or managing additional lands. Thus, the Lead Agencies determined that the MSHCP does reserve the maximum acreage of land practicable based on fiscal constraints and the fact that the acquisition of additional land will not in fact lead to the Conservation of more species. See Response D-64. Moreover, the MSHCP is a criteria-based plan, and as such conserves Vegetation Communities that are most likely to provide habitat for Covered Species instead of conserving arbitrary amounts of various Vegetation Communities. See Response G-15, G-16 and G-17 for discussion of Conservation of grassland anticipated under the MSHCP.

    D-84 See Responses D-3 and D-17 for discussion of the Criteria Area and features incorporated in the MSHCP to alter the Criteria Area.

    D-85 As discussed in Response F-59, the Guidelines pertaining to the Urban/Wildlands Interface presented in Section 6.1.4 of the MSHCP will be employed, as appropriate, to maintain lands surrounding and in proximity to the MSHCP Conservation Area based on the particular interface factor of concern.

    D-86 See Response Z3-17.

    D-87 No Local Development Mitigation Fee amount has yet been adopted so it cannot be raised. The nexus study being prepared by the County will be used to support an appropriate fee amount. The commentor should note that unsupportably high levels of mitigation fees could violate the requirements of the Mitigation Fee Act.

    D-88 The Draft EIR/EIS complies with all applicable state and federal rules and guidelines. See Responses D-79 and D-80.


    Comment Letter D2-City of Temecula, January 15, 2003

    D2-1 The Lead Agencies appreciate the information provided. The MSHCP is a regional landscape-based plan. Factors considered in identifying areas desirable for Conservation include overall reserve configuration, as well as vegetation type and other factors that may contribute to habitat value. Project level vegetation mapping and information that is provided by property owners through the development application process is expected to vary from the MSHCP vegetation database in its level of accuracy and in its depiction of conditions that may have changed since the original landscaped-based mapping was completed. The MSHCP provides for a flexible Reserve Assembly process that would accommodate such changed conditions in conjunction with review of individual projects. Therefore, it is not anticipated that the changed vegetation conditions identified in this comment would adversely affect the ability to assemble the MSHCP Conservation Area in a manner consistent with the MSHCP.


    Comment Letter D3 - Charles Burney, January 13, 2003

    D3-1 The MSHCP Conservation Area is based on the best available scientific and commercially available information, not on parcel sizes or parcel arrangements. See Response H2-46.

    D3-2 Without more specific information regarding the location of the parcel in question, it is not possible to provide a specific response related to the location of a proposed Linkage to the parcel or to provide any rationale for designation of a Linkage. Such determinations will be made if and when the property owner proposes development or approaches the RCA or other appropriate Permittee to sell the property for conservation purposes.

    D3-3 See Response D3-2.


    Comment Letter D4 - California Department of Parks and Recreation, March 7, 2003

    D4-1 This comment raises no issues related to the Draft MSHCP, the Draft EIR/EIS or the Draft IA, and no further response is necessary.

    D4-2 This comment raises no issues related to the Draft MSHCP, the Draft EIR/EIS or the Draft IA, and no further response is necessary.

    D4-3 This comment raises no specific issues related to the Draft MSHCP, the Draft EIR/EIS or the Draft IA, and no further response is necessary.

    D4-4 Section 13.9c of the IA contemplates this currently.

    D4-5 The suggestion that agricultural uses be retained in areas adjacent to State Parks is outside of the scope of the MSHCP. The MSHCP does not regulate land use or propose changes in land use designations as the proposed General Plan update does.

    D4-6 The Lead Agencies agree that State Parks endeavors to manage its resources at similar levels to those defined in the MSHCP and that management of existing State Parks' land (absent new facilities) is an appropriate contribution to meeting the conservation goals for Covered Species. The County and other Local Permittees will support efforts by State Parks to obtain the resources needed to fund its resource management program at the needed level. With regard to the Monitoring Program, the primary role of State Parks is to provide access to State Parks' land for monitoring purposes and to provide data State Parks collects as part of its monitoring program. To the extent possible, State Parks should utilize the monitoring protocols developed as part of the MSHCP.

    D4-7 The commentor suggests that the Final EIR/EIS for the MSHCP should include maps that show all of the RCIP components (land use, CETAP circulation routes, and Criteria Area) on a single map. Each of the environmental documents (and each RCIP component) is designed to be stand-alone (compatible with, but not reliant upon, the other components) and their processing is on slightly different time frames, such a map was not included as it might be misconstrued to indicate that the documents and components are not stand-alone and that they will all be approved simultaneously.

    From its inception, the three components of RCIP were designed to use a common database, and to have coordinated policy direction; however, there was never any intent to adopt the General Plan, MSHCP, and CETAP simultaneously. The County created the RCIP as a model to help determine future land use, transportation, and conservation needs for the County. RCIP consists of three integrated but distinct planning efforts: (1) update the County's General Plan to anticipate future growth over the long term; (2) create an MSHCP for the western portion of the County; and (3) identify transportation corridors to meet the County's future transportation needs (CETAP). As noted in the Draft EIR, adoption of the General Plan is the sole responsibility of the County of Riverside, while adoption of the MSHCP also requires approval of 14 Cities within the western portion of the County, Caltrans, State Parks, RCTC, the California Department of Fish and Game, and US Fish and Wildlife Service. Adoption of CETAP is the responsibility of the RCTC and the Federal Highway Administration. While they are coordinated, the update of the County's General Plan, the MSHCP, and CETAP have independent utility, and could be adopted regardless of actions taken in relation to the other projects.

    CEQA does not require an analysis in the EIR of "each and every activity carried out in conjunction with a project." (Native Sun/Lyon Communities v. City of Escondido (1993) 15 Cal.App.4th 892, 909-910.) In Native Sun, the court upheld an EIR for a complex development project despite a claim that the EIR failed to discuss a proposed development agreement that was "part of the project description." The court stated that the "EIR's straight forward reference to the development agreement alerted persons interested in that document to its relevance in the decision making process." Like the lead agency in Native Sun, the County has complied with CEQA and alerted the public to the importance of related documents. The commentor has not provided specifics about how the environmental analysis is inadequate or improperly defers environmental review and thus a more specific response cannot be provided.

    To the extent that agricultural programs (Williamson Act, etc.) can be used to conserve agricultural lands next to the MSHCP Conservation Area, agricultural lands will provide the benefits identified by the commentor. Agricultural practices would not be restricted by the MSHCP. Some agricultural land use may be allowable within the MSHCP Conservation Area, after such land is acquired, if it benefits the species for which that particular area would be managed. The MSHCP is not a land use plan and would not re-zone land.

    The proposed General Plan land use designations were developed with consideration of existing development, public input, environmental constraints including hazards and natural resources, and existing and planned transportation facilities. During the Riverside County consistency zoning that will take place subsequent to the adoption of the proposed General Plan (if it is adopted), if the MSHCP has also been adopted, low-density and/or agricultural zoning may be applied near existing and planned conservation areas consistent with the County's adopted General Plan designations.

    Third, the commentor states that agricultural land can serve as a buffer to conservation areas, and can provide connectivity, foraging areas for species, and adequate habitat for some species. Many types of agricultural land in the MSHCP area do provide these benefits for certain species. However, the value of agricultural land can vary with the type of agricultural crops produced. For example, crop areas associated with dairies often provides raptor foraging habitat whereas row crops may not. As the County does not regulate which crops a farmer grows, it is not possible to ensure that agricultural lands near conservation lands (including State Park land) would provide the desired benefits for the species requiring conservation. As a result the MSHCP was designed to provide the conservation benefits for the Covered Species without it relying on the benefits of the agricultural lands for some species.

    The commentor states that the potential benefits offered by agricultural lands will be lost if agricultural land designation is not used as a conservation tool. The MSHCP is designed to provide adequate habitat conservation by conserving the land within the MSHCP Conservation Area. It is anticipated that much of the land not conserved, particularly land outside the Criteria Area, would lose some or all of its habitat value. The County has provided, through policies in the MSHCP, and policies in the proposed General Plan, for the continuation of agricultural practices throughout the County. Agricultural land is not subject to mitigation requirements under the MSHCP in most instances, and will be a Covered Activity in all areas where it presently occurs, as well as all lands in the Agricultural Foundation Component in the proposed General Plan.

    Finally, the commentor states that agricultural land contiguous to MSHCP Conservation Area would keep reserves connected, and would protect reserves from encroachment and invasion by non-native species. The MSHCP reserve design incorporates connectivity into the MSHCP Conservation Area configuration, through the use of Cores, Linkages, and Constrained Linkages. While some types of agricultural land can provide a degree of connectivity, this cannot be assured (due to changes in cropping patterns, construction of agricultural facilities (dairy barns, etc.) on developed agricultural land, the use of fences, presence of livestock, etc.). Furthermore, while some types of agricultural lands would potentially protect reserves from invasion by non-native species (if some non-invasives are kept out of the crop) to a greater extent than landscaped land uses adjacent to conservation areas, the "edge effects regulations" in the MSHCP would serve to ensure that non-agricultural uses adjacent to the MSHCP Conservation Area would not introduce or utilize invasive non-native species.

    D4-8 Section 6.1.4 of the Draft MSHCP states that the Guidelines Pertaining to the Urban/ Wildlands Interface will be implemented by the Local Permittees in conjunction with their review of individual public and private development applications. The specific measures for each project will be specified in its environmental document.

    D4-9 See Response H2-98. The Lead Agencies agree that additional vegetation mapping is needed as the basis for the Monitoring Program and it will also help inform the Reserve Assembly process. As discussed in Section 5.3 of the Plan, updated vegetation mapping will be completed as one of the first tasks in the Monitoring Plan.

    D4-10 A complete rationale for coverage of each species is provided in the Draft MSHCP, which is incorporated by reference in the Draft EIR/EIS. Also as fully detailed in the Draft MSHCP, additional surveys are required for certain species because the current database does not provide the level of detail sufficient to make decisions on which specific areas within the Criteria Area are the most critical to that species and in some instances to determine the extent of presence or distribution of the species outside of the Criteria Area. Burrowing owl is an example of a sensitive grassland species that is subject to the additional survey requirements.

    D4-11 See Response D4-7. The MSHCP and the proposed General Plan have been designed to be stand-alone components of the RCIP. The proposed General Plan allows for the conservation of land within the MSHCP Criteria Area to mitigate the impacts of the General Plan in the event that the MSHCP is adopted. The MSHCP does not require the adoption of the proposed General Plan.

    The commentor states that the planned land use in the proposed General Plan would reduce agricultural land. While the Agricultural Foundation Component does not encompass the entire area of existing agricultural land, the proposed General Plan would not restrict agricultural use in any area in which it presently occurs. By including existing agricultural land in other Foundation Components, the General Plan allows for the option of converting the land to another use at some point in the future. The General Plan does not require this conversion. If the County were to require that all areas presently utilized for agriculture remain as agricultural lands (with no other land uses allowed), it could create significant financial hardship to landowners who could no longer economically farm their lands.

    The County recognizes the commentor's request that the County improve Conservation of agricultural land as a buffer for State parks. The County has been and continues to be involved with representatives of the agricultural community of Riverside County, including the Riverside County Farm Bureau, to explore methods to conserve agricultural land and preserve the agricultural lifestyle within the County. The County will take the commentor's request into account during these discussions, and during the development of the consistency zoning following adoption of the proposed General Plan (if it is adopted).

    D4-12 See Response F-2.

    D4-13 As documented in Section 3.1.5 of the Draft MSHCP, habitat modeling was considered in the conservation planning process for the MSHCP, but not used because of the lack of adequate survey and population data available to accurately parameterize and validate the models. Use of existing reserves in the MSHCP is consistent with the objective of developing the most cost-efficient reserve system, and was used as a starting point for determining Conservation needs for each Covered Species. Species "hot spots" were determined based on a review of the species occurrence data, as noted in Section 3.1.3 of the Draft MSHCP.

    The comment that "it appears that the configuration of the proposed MSHCP is based in large measure on development constraints" is inaccurate. Sections 2 and 3 of the Draft MSHCP discuss in great detail the data and methods used in determining areas desirable for Conservation, which do not include "development constraints."

    The Draft MSHCP acknowledges the potential habitat value of agricultural lands. See Response G-16 for a complete discussion of the analysis related to grassland Conservation.

    D4-14 The 600 feet referenced in the comment is not used as a basis in the MSHCP on which to analyze Edge Effects. Edge Effects vary widely depending on species and the type of effect (i.e., wildfire, noise, lighting) as discussed in Sections 3.1.4 and 6.1.4 of the Draft MSHCP. See Responses G-20 and F-46 through F-50.

    D4-15 The commentor states that reserves should be large enough to support Covered Species without Linkages to other reserves. The MSHCP utilizes large Cores connected by Linkages as needed for species populations in a reserve to be a part of a meta population. This is consistent with the accepted tenets of conservation. By securing the Linkages between the reserve areas, including State Parks lands, the MSHCP increases the likelihood that State Parks' land will continue to be capable of sustaining its current biological diversity. The Planning Species were selected because they were representative of species the functions the Cores and Linkages would need to provide for one or more species. The commentor requests that the analysis of Cores and Linkages provide a specific justification for each reserve component for each of the Planning Species. The definition of the term Planning Species is included in the Definitions Section, and Section 3.2.3 of the Draft MSHCP. The analysis of individual species is based on the entire MSHCP Conservation Area, not limited to individual reserve components. A species by species analysis for each reserve component in isolation would not be informative for making decisions on the document and associated EIR/EIS.

    D4-16 The commentor provides a good overview of the functions that Cores and Linkages need to provide and these are discussed in detail in Section 3.2.3 and their consideration is a part of the Reserve Assembly process. The Lead Agencies appreciate the offer of assistance and State Parks will be included in developing the information that will be compiled on methods/designs that work for maintaining habitat connectivitywhere future infrastructure traverses the Criteria Area and MSHCP Conservation Area.

    D4-17 It is assumed that this comment is referring to the dimensional data provided for Cores and Linkages in Section 3.2.3 of the MSHCP (Draft MSHCP, p. 3-25). The 250-foot measurement was used to calculate subsets of acreage within the total acreages of Cores and Linkages to provide guidance for Reserve Assembly not to calculate a total area of Edge Effects. As stated in Section 3.2.3 of the Draft MSHCP, it is acknowledged that Edge Effects vary depending on species under consideration, adjacent land uses and other factors.

    D4-18 See Responses F-46 through F-50.

    D4-19 The Lead Agencies disagree with this comment and believe that the designation of the referenced areas as Cores is appropriate in consideration of how Cores are defined in the context of the MSHCP and the species that will be conserved in them. As is often the

    case with biological systems, an area that is a Linkage for one species is core habitat for another.

    D4-20 Existing Core A includes approximately 10,740 acres within Prado Basin and along the Santa Ana River including approximately 2,600 acres of grassland and agricultural habitat suitable for burrowing owl. The MSHCP species occurrence data base assembled by UCR has three high accuracy burrowing owl locations along the Santa Ana River from 1974 to 1999. The primary Vegetation Communities within Existing Core A are riparian scrub and grassland which provide suitable primary and secondary Habitat for this species.

    D4-21 The Lead Agencies do not agree that Existing Core E is small or isolated. As noted in Section 3.2.3 of the MSHCP, Existing Core E is comprised of 3,010 acres including 2,730 interior acres and 280 acres of edge. It is recognized that Existing Core E includes the open water within Lake Elsinore which, of course, does not provide Habitat for burrowing owl. However, Conservation within Existing Core E is proposed to be augmented by Extension of Existing Core 3 which is comprised of 1,290 acres including 880 interior acres and 410 acres of edge. This area is comprised primarily of grassland Habitat. The MSHCP species occurrence data base has two high accuracy burrowing owl locations in this area from 1989 to 1998.

    Noncontiguous Habitat Block 6 is comprised of 330 acres including 220 interior acres and 110 acres of edge. It is recognized that this Noncontiguous Habitat Block is smaller than other habitat blocks planned for Conservation and would be isolated from other conserved areas, increasing the potential for Edge Effects. However, in addition to the three recent, accurate records for burrowing owl in this area, it is proposed to be managed for vernal pool resources under the MSHCP. The level of management anticipated to be provided for the vernal pool resources would also benefit burrowing owl.

    The Lead Agencies concur that mortality from vehicle collisions and domestic predators represent a threat to burrowing owl as cited in the comment. Conservation of burrowing owl within larger habitat blocks such as Existing Core A, Existing Core E plus Extension of Existing Core 3 and Existing Core F is planned to minimize these threats. Other management activities identified for burrowing owl on Table 5-2 of the MSHCP include controlling use of pesticides and rodenticides.

    D4-22 As noted in Response D4-21, it is anticipated that Extension of Existing Core 3 would augment Conservation within Existing Core E. This extension is anticipated to provide

    more benefit for burrowing owl than would Linkage 2 or Linkage 8. Linkage 2 consists of Collier Marsh and the portion of Linkage 8 in proximity to Existing Core 3 consists of a channelized portion of the lower San Jacinto River.

    D4-23 It is assumed that the reference in the second sentence of the comment is to Existing Core E. The Lead Agencies do not agree that Existing Core F is small or isolated as apparently indicated in the comment. As noted in Section 3.2.3 of the MSHCP, Existing Core F consists of the Santa Rosa Plateau and is comprised of 8,360 acres including 7,900 interior acres and 460 acres of edge. Existing Core F includes extensive areas of grassland and vernal pool Habitat suitable for burrowing owls including 2,900 acres of grassland and 30 acres of playas and vernal pools. In addition, the MSHCP data base has three accurate occurrences of burrowing owl in this area from 1989. These characteristics support the conclusion that this area would provide long-term benefit for burrowing owl.

    D4-24 The Lead Agencies concur with the comment regarding burrowing owl within Existing Core H and burrowing owl will be listed as a Planning Species for this Core in the Final MSHCP. The five occurrences for burrowing owl in Existing Core H in the MSHCP species occurrence data base range from 1972 to 1998.

    With respect to cactus wren, this species is recorded within Existing Core H in the cactus wren literature and sufficient suitable habitat appears to be present, based on the MSHCP data base, to support this species. Management activities for this species identified in Table 5-2 of the Draft MSHCP call for maintenance, enhancement and/or creation of cactus patches which could provide additional habitat for this species within Existing Core H.

    The MSHCP species occurrence data base does not include records of pond turtle at Lake Perris; however, suitable habitat is present for this species in that area.

    D4-25 While a more robust connection in this area may be desirable, it was not found to be necessary for Conservation of Covered Species.

    D4-26 The Lead Agencies concur with the comments. The PQP Lands database will be updated during implementation of the MSHCP as called for in Section 3.2.1 of the Plan.

    D4-27 There is some existing Development in the area proposed for inclusion in the Criteria Area but the connection already exists and is within the area shown as PQP Lands.

    D4-28 It is not clear what areas are being proposed for inclusion in the Criteria Area that are not already included. The Criteria Area within the Proposed Core 5 includes a majority of the contiguous non-developed areas, including areas south of SR-74.

    D4-29 The language describing Existing Constrained Linkage C is intended to convey the fact that a constraining factor for the Linkage is Development. However, it is noted that there is intermittent Development within the area and that PQP Lands already link the areas and that much of Mystic Lake is PQP Lands. Additionally, the Department of Fish and Game has acquired through fee title or easement much of the high value habitats with Mystic Lake.

    D4-30 The location of Proposed Constrained Linkage 23 is based on connections to portions of the Oak Valley Specific Plan that are proposed for Conservation as a result of a settlement agreement between the property owners and environmental groups. Since this Conservation will likely occur, there does not appear to be a need for an alternative Linkage.

    D4-31 The Lead Agencies agree that connection should be made along the San Gorgonio River across I-10 and between western San Diego Riverside County and San Diego County (between the Palomar Mountains/Agua Tibia Wilderness and the Santa Ana Mountains) consistent with information contained in the referenced Missing Linkages Project report. These connections involve coordination with American Indian tribes. Additions have been made to the Criteria Area in the Final MSHCP to address these connections in the context of coordination with American Indian tribes. See Response D-16.

    D4-32 See Response D4-31 and Response D-16. Additionally, since a portion of this Linkage is outside the MSHCP Plan Area, the robustness of this Linkage will be partly dependent on the North San Diego County Amendment to the San Diego Multiple Species Conservation Program being prepared by the County of San Diego.

    D4-33 See Responses D4-15 through D4-32.

    D4-34 This issue will be addressed in the Final MSHCP.

    D4-35 See Response G-16.

    D4-36 Federal permit issuance criteria does not require the MSHCP to demonstrate that it will lead to the recovery of Covered Species and State permit issuance requires that a plan provide for the Conservation of a species within the Plan Area. The Plan has been formulated to provide mitigation and acquisition of habitat for Covered Species to the maximum extent practicable and to provide for the Conservation of Covered Species within the Plan Area. The Plan will provide for the permanent protection and management of an additional 153,000 acres in a configuration which allows for the existing PQP Lands (including State Parks' land) to be more effective for Conservation of Covered Species. Together, new acquisitions and PQP Lands provide approximately 500,000 acres for the benefit of species and habitat. See Response E-3.

    D4-37 The Permittee decides whether a Biologically Equivalent or Superior Determination is appropriate. In the event that the Wildlife Agencies disagree with the Determination, processes for issue resolution are provided in Section 6.6 of the Draft MSHCP. See Responses D4-38, D4-40 and D4-41.

    D4-38 Maintenance of ecological processes are considerations for Conservation of certain species and where appropriate, are included in the Criteria for implementation of the MSHCP. Review of individual projects will require consideration of hydrologic processes for Narrow Endemic Plant Species where specified in the species-specific conservation objectives or in specific criteria for Covered Activities, as outlined in Section 7 of the Draft MSHCP.

    D4-39 See Responses D4-7 and D4-11.

    D4-40 The Lead Agencies disagree with this comment and believe that the required surveys will detect the species as anticipated in the MSHCP and achieve the conservation objectives identified for each Covered Species and meet the issuance criteria for the Permits. See Responses F-61 and F-72.

    D4-41 The burrowing owl is included as one of the species for which additional surveys are required. Limitations on impacts to occupied habitat are required until conservation objectives are met. The conservation objectives established for the Covered Species are adequate to meet the issuance criteria for the Permits. See Response F-72.

    D4-42 The Final MSHCP will include additional detail related to design of wildlife crossings.

    D4-43 A specific flood control project for the San Jacinto River is not analyzed in the Draft MSHCP. Rather, the Plan identifies a process by which a future project may be considered a Covered Activity, subject to specific Criteria. The Lead Agencies believe that the Criteria would yield an MSHCP Conservation Area that would provide adequate Conservation for Covered Species including the Planning Species identified for the San Jacinto River area.

    D4-44 The suggested wording will be included in the State Parks Section of the IA and MSHCP.

    D4-45 See Response D4-44.

    D4-46 See Response D4-44. With respect to maintaining "continued use of and successful reproduction" of conserved areas for certain species, these requirements are part of the overall species objectives throughout the MSHCP Conservation Area. Annual MSHCP reporting will assess the degree to which overall objectives are being met and the RMOC will address these issues on a Plan Area basis.

    D4-47 See Response G-16.

    D4-48 The Lead Agencies have previously responded to all specific species comments, and without further detail, are unable to provide a more detailed response.

    D4-49 The species accounts for the referenced raptor species include scrub and shrub as foraging Habitats. The reference to the shrub and scrub in the species accounts is from Zeiner (1990): "Inhabits herbaceous and open stages of most habitats mostly in cismontane California. " as well as Waian and Stendell (1970) "It uses herbaceous lowlands with variable tree growth, shrubs, sparse chaparral, almost any upland with sparse cover of shrubs to grassland with a dense population of voles."

    D4-50 See Response F-72.

    D4-51 The Lead Agencies have previously responded to all specific EIR/EIS comments, and without further detail, are unable to provide a more detailed response.

    D4-52 The commentor references a discussion and summary of surrounding conservation planning efforts contained in the introduction to the analysis of impacts. In addition to that description, the discussion of impacts related to each of the alternatives addressed in the Draft EIR/EIS contains an analysis entitled "Relationship to Adopted or Approved HCPs and NCCPs." These discussions provide the analysis requested by the commentor.

    D4-53 The MSHCP is a criteria-based plan and Reserve Assembly will occur through HANS and other processes identified in the MSHCP regardless of General Plan land use designations. Therefore, there would be no inconsistencies between the MSHCP and either the existing or proposed County General Plans. With respect to the type and intensity of land use designations adjacent to the MSHCP Conservation Area, such an analysis is not possible since a map of the MSHCP Conservation will not exist until Reserve Assembly is complete. General information regarding anticipated planned land uses adjacent to identified Cores and Linkages is provided in Section 3.2.3 of the Plan to provide guidance for Reserve Assembly.

    D4-54 See Response H2-15.

    D4-55 See Response D4-52.

    D4-56 See Response H2-15.


    Comment Letter D5 - Van Blarcom Representing Tava Development, March 14, 2003

    D5-1 This comment provides a general reference to information provided later in the letter. Responses to specific issues referenced in this comment are provided below.

    D5-2 The Draft MSHCP acknowledges that site-specific mapping of resources is not expected to precisely match the landscape level of analysis performed for the 1.26 million-acre MSHCP Plan Area. As noted throughout the Draft MSHCP and these Responses, mechanisms are provided to assess conservation value on a site-specific basis, including most importantly the flexibility of the Area Plan Criteria and Reserve Assembly process. Therefore, it is anticipated that site-specific biological studies would produce more detailed and possibly varied information that would be taken into consideration as Development and Reserve Assembly proceeds. Comment D5-14 provides a map of the site consisting of an aerial photograph with a vegetation mapping overlay. The comment does not however provide any reference to actual documentation of the studies undertaken, identifying at a minimum the methodology of the surveys (standard industry practice is to document field survey methodologies including names of surveyors, times of survey, survey conditions, survey methodology such as vegetation mapping conventions/classification standards used, mapping unit used, field map used, etc.).

    The commentor also suggests that since portions of the subject property have been previously cultivated, that the property be removed from its designated Cell Group and have the applicable Criteria revised. Conservation value has been determined based on a number of factors, including but not limited to vegetation coverage, species occurrence, soils composition, slope and elevation, in addition to reserve design considerations that include habitat block size, configuration and linkage. Therefore, as the comment appears to note, the fact that a site-specific biology study indicates that vegetation mapping differs from the MSHCP database would not necessarily lead to a determination that the property does not contain conservation value because factors in addition to vegetation characteristics will be considered in the overall Reserve Assembly process. The Lead Agencies believe that the most appropriate mechanism for addressing this issue is through development application review, pursuant to the process identified in Section 6.0 of the Plan.

    D5-3 The commentor inappropriately draws conclusions on the anticipated outcome of a Criteria Review of the property based on an interpretation of the Criteria that does not consider all of the factors or the process for review identified in Section 3.0 of the Plan. For example, the commentor assumes that no site specific biological information would be considered in the review, and that essentially the only determination of conservation value for the property would be based on the acreage percentages contained in the Criteria. In addition, if the site-specific studies clearly demonstrate that the conservation value sought in the Criteria cannot be achieved because of 1) the absence of resources, 2) the substantial alteration to a linkage by offsite Development; or 3) other reasonable factors, then a Permittee could make a determination that Development within areas proposed for Conservation would not be inconsistent with the Criteria, regardless of the acreage percentages identified for any particular Cell or Cell Group.

    D5-4 The Cell Criteria complies with both state and federal laws. See Responses D5-2, D5-3 and P2-4.

    D5-5 This comment's broad invocation of the "rational nexus" constitutional standard is misplaced. The line of constitutional law cases that developed these standards is limited to certain types of exactions, and not to compliance with the mandates found under the Federal Endangered Species Act and California Endangered Species Act. The MSHCP is a vehicle of compliance with Section 10(a)(1)(b) of the FESA, the (CESA) and the NCCP Act of 2001, and not an exaction regarding a particular piece of property. This comment's reference to the case of Dolan v. City of Tigard (1994) 512 U.S. 374, 391 is misplaced. The MSHCP is a vehicle of compliance with FESA and the NCCP Act, and is not an exaction regarding a particular piece of property. See Response H2-242.

    D5-6 The MSHCP Covered Species list includes bobcat as well as other unlisted mammals. See Responses D5-2 and H2-204 through H2-207.

    D5-7 See Response J4-11. There is no evidence to suggest that the proposed Conservation within Proposed Core 1, Proposed Extension of Existing Core 2, or any other Conservation feature of the Plan would not be achieved through Reserve Assembly. Therefore, it is not reasonable for the MSHCP to speculate on the necessity of each Conservation feature of the Plan.

    D5-8 The commentor presumes certain conclusions reached by the County in the Draft General Plan are related directly to biological resources. While the MSHCP is part of the RCIP planning process, conservation value for Covered Species was not determined based on existing or proposed General Plan land use designations. Conservation value was appropriately based on the best scientific and commercial data available related to biological considerations.

    D5-9 See Response D5-2. The Lead Agencies disagree that designation of a specific Cell and Criteria are appropriate for the subject property. Section 3.3.1 of the MSHCP describes the methodology under which Cells were aggregated into a Cell Group or retained as individual Cells.

    D5-10 The commentor incorrectly interprets language from the Plan to say that agricultural land "in not a type of habitat' and that "Agricultural Operations directly compete with conservation." Agricultural land is a Holland vegetation classification depicted on the MSHCP Vegetation Map. Agricultural Operations refer to land use activities and are a defined term in the MSHCP. For certain species, agricultural land can provide benefits to Conservation. See also Responses D5-2 and D5-8.

    D5-11 See Response D5-2.

    D5-12 See Response D5-2.

    D5-13 See Responses D5-2 and D5-3.

    D5-14 This comment consists of a map of the property in question and is presumed to be provided as a general reference. As it raises no specific issues related to the MSHCP, no additional response is necessary.

    Comment Letter E

    Comment Letter E - Center for Biological Diversity on Behalf of Audubon Society, January 15, 2003

    E-1 The comment does not raise issues that require a response. The Lead Agencies acknowledge that this MSHCP is "perhaps one of the most important in the United States."

    E-2 The Lead Agencies believe that all issues raised in past correspondence have been considered, analyzed and if appropriate, reflected in the Draft EIR/EIS and the MSHCP. The allegation that "major concerns have not been incorporated" lacks sufficient specificity to allow the Lead Agencies to provide further response.

    This comment summarizes several of the later comments mentioned to which responses are provided below. See Responses E-3 through E-43. The Lead Agencies believe that the MSHCP adequately complies with FESA, the NCCP Act, CEQA and all other state and federal laws.

    Additional surveys are required in certain situations. (Draft MSHCP, § 6.3.2.) Criteria Area boundaries can be adjusted if warranted. (See Section 6.5 of the Draft MSHCP) The Lead Agencies do not believe condemnation is required to obtain property for Reserve Assembly. See Response Z3-17.

    E-3 The comment confuses the standards for approval of a regional "habitat conservation plan" and approval of Take Authorization under Section 10(a) of FESA and the definition of the more generic term "conservation" set forth in Section 3 of FESA. Issuance criteria under Section 10(a) require that the HCP applicant "minimize and mitigate" the impacts of any incidental taking authorized by a Section 10 permit, and that the issuance of the permit not "appreciably reduce the likelihood of the survival and recovery of the species in the wild." (16 U.S.C. § 1539(a)(2)(B); Section 10 HCP Handbook, p. 3-20.) The Section 7 issuance requirements are nearly identical. (See Section 10, HCP Handbook, p. 3-20.) Based upon these standards, issuance of the Section 10 permit must not "appreciably reduce" the likelihood of survival and recovery of the species in the wild; however, this standard does not explicitly require an HCP to recover listed species nor contribute to their recovery objectives outlined in a recovery plan. (Ibid.) Instead, HCP applicants are encouraged but not required to develop HCPs that produce a net positive effect for the species or contribute to recovery plan objectives. (Ibid.)

    The Lead Agencies believe the MSHCP fully complies with all applicable laws and regulations. As required by both CEQA and NEPA, the Draft EIR/EIS discusses a range of reasonable alternatives in detail in Section 2. (14 Cal. Code Regs. § 15126(a); 40 CFR § 1502.14; see Response H2-18.) The comment does not provide any examples of alternatives or mitigation measures to ensure more conservation and thus, no further response is required.

    E-4 See Response D-7.

    E-5 See Response D-8.

    E-6 See Response D-9.

    E-7 See Response D-10.

    E-8 See Response D-11.

    E-9 See Response D-15.

    E-10 See Response D-13.

    E-11 See Response D-14.

    E-12 See Response D-16.

    E-13 See Response D-50.

    E-14 Section 7.3.7 of the Draft MSHCP discusses a process by which a flood control project for the San Jacinto may be considered as a Covered Activity. Coverage for such a project is not automatic. The Draft MSHCP does not address a single defined project, but provides a process of analysis based on specific criteria to determine if a future proposed project could become a Covered Activity under the Plan. The criteria include specific considerations for sensitive plants, including Atriplex coronata var. notatior. See Section 7.3.7 of the Draft MSHCP for additional detail regarding the criteria and process related to obtaining coverage for a flood control project in the San Jacinto River. Also please note that the entire San Jacinto River is either within existing Public/Quasi-Public Lands or within the Criteria Area.

    E-15 See Response D-17.

    E-16 See Response D-18.

    E-17 See Responses D-19 and D-17.

    E-18 See Responses G-16 and G-17 for discussion of grassland and coastal sage scrub within the MSHCP Plan Area.

    E-19 See Response D-23.

    E-20 See Responses D-48 and D-42, respectively.

    E-21 See Responses F-106 and D-36, respectively.

    E-22 See Response D-14.

    E-23 The detailed analysis of each Covered Species is included in the Draft MSHCP, Volume II, Species Accounts. The Draft EIR/EIS is one volume of a four-volume set and appropriately includes a summary of that information.

    E-24 The comment is overly vague and prohibits a detailed response.

    E-25 See Response D-48. In addition, Response F-72 also addresses the Conservation of the burrowing owl.

    E-26 See Responses D-48 and F-72.

    E-27 The Cells within the Criteria Area are specifically designed to protect species, which is one of the goals of the MSHCP. See Responses F-46 through F-50. Not all known populations of every Covered Species will be protected; hence, the need for Take Authorization.

    E-28 See Responses D-48 and D-58.

    E-29 The comment incorrectly refers to MSHCP definitions. The Criteria Area is approximately 310,000 acres. The MSHCP Conservation Area will be approximately 500,000 acres. The rest of the comment is correct.

    E-30 See Response D-63. The comment purports to cite legal requirements, and no further response is required.

    E-31 The Modified Reserve Alternative would conserve an additional 65,400 acres of private land in addition to the 153,000 acres of private land conserved under the proposed MSHCP. While the additional 65,400 acres would include property identified as Critical Habitat, the alternative was found to be financially infeasible. See Responses D-64 and D-65.

    E-32 See Response D-65.

    E-33 See Responses D-66 and D-67. The MSHCP does not allow FWS to "evade" any duty it has under FESA regarding designating Critical Habitat. In issuing a Section 10(a) permit for the MSHCP, FWS will ensure that the constituent elements of habitat will not be altered or destroyed by proposed activities to the extent that the survival and recovery of affected species would be appreciably reduced. (See Section 10 HCP Handbook, p. 3-18.) As set forth in the Section 10 Handbook:

    "It is possible to approve an HCP that authorizes land use or development activities within an area designated as critical habitat. The activities approved under an HCP could include a variety of land or natural resource use activities that modify critical habitat on a large scale without the activities being deemed an adverse modification contrary to the requirements of section 7(a)(2) [of the FESA]. The authorization of activities in critical habitat through the HCP process is possible because the adverse modification of critical habitat is analyzed by determining the effects on the entire area designated as critical habitat or an administrative part or unit of the critical habitat, not on a small scale of particular individual acres. In addition, the HCP permittee must minimize and mitigate for any effects caused by the authorized activity, which would offset or reduce the significance of adverse effects to the critical habitat. Thus, the overall net effect [sic] of authorized land use activities for a particular HCP can be brought within the range of effects which is allowable under Section 7." (Section 10 HCP Handbook, p. 3-19.)

    Significantly, then, in issuing a Section 10(a) permit, FWS must examine the effects of the proposed activities on all Covered Species in the Plan, including listed and unlisted species, and determine that adequate mitigation has been provided. As part of this review process, effects on the species and their habitat will necessarily be examined.

    In addition, at the time of the issuance of Take Authorization for the MSHCP, the Permittees (and Third Parties Receiving Take Authorization) will receive No Surprises assurances. Under the No Surprises Policy, the Permittees cannot be held financially responsible for any Unforeseen Circumstances related to the Plan. Thus, were FWS to designate new Critical Habitat in the Plan Area, such designation would have practical effect in limited circumstances; in most cases, even if it were found that a Permittee activity was adversely affecting such newly designated Critical Habitat, the Permittee could not be held directly financially responsible due to the No Surprises Policy. Instead, any potential adverse effects to listed species and their habitat are resolved by the MSHCP in advance, and mechanisms are put in place, such as adaptive management, so that any biological/habitats issues can be addressed as they arise during Plan implementation.

    E-34 This comment does not address the MSHCP EIR/EIS. The County's proposed General Plan was developed based on a number of factors including existing land uses and entitlements, public input, review by the General Plan Advisory Committee. During development of the General Plan, the Board of Supervisors took the general position that the intensity of development would not be increased in areas important to the implementation of the MSHCP. However, the County would also not decrease density only because of potential MSHCP impacts. Less than half of the Criteria Area will be needed for conservation. Much of the remaining portion will develop to urban levels.

    E-35 See Response E-34. Land uses are determined by many factors. Basing land use only on proximity to a proposed conservation area ignores the many factors that go into good land use planning. Given the size of the proposed conservation areas and their proximity to existing Development and infrastructure, a variety of lands uses must exist in proximity to conserved lands.

    E-36 This comment references a publication regarding small mammals and burrowing owls to support the recommendation provided in Comment E-35. No additional response is required.

    E-37 See Response D-70. The Proposed Riverside County General Plan does propose higher density mixed use centers to reduce urban sprawl and the loss of rural lands as well as to aid in the development of transit. The proposed General Plan attempts to balance the need for housing opportunities to meet the needs of our future residents while supporting preservation of rural areas, the conservation of species and their habitats, and improving mobility within the region by both building new roads and encouraging transit alternatives.

    E-38 The Draft EIR/EIS provides a full analysis of all potential environmental effects of the MSHCP in Sections 4.0 and 5.0. The specific issues raised in the comment with regards to Edge Effects, domestic pets, roads and increased air pollution on plants and animals are addressed in Responses E-39 through E-42. Moreover, the guidelines pertaining to the Urban/Wildlands Interface are applicable to virtually all new Development in the Plan Area and will be used to address and limit indirect impacts and Edge Effects. (See MSHCP, § 6.1.4. and Response D-59)

    E-39 See Response D-74.

    E-40 See Response D-74.

    E-41 See Response D-74.

    E-42 This comment provides information and references regarding Edge Effects related to domestic pets. Domestic pet predation is identified in Section 5 of the Draft MSHCP as a management issue for species that are particularly susceptible to such impacts, such as coastal California gnatcatcher. Management plans will includes measures to address the management activities identified in Section 5.

    E-43 The Lead Agencies disagree with the comment that the funding for the MSHCP is speculative. See Response D-78 with regard to funding issues. See also Response E-29.

    E-44 See Responses D-9, D-10 and D-17 for discussion of surveys, core populations and data gaps and the ways in which these issues are addressed in the MSHCP. The MSHCP recognizes the unique biodiversity in the Plan Area. Since more specific comments regarding biodiversity hot spots and source-sink populations are not provided, a more specific response is not possible.

    E-45 See Response D-82.

    E-46 See Response D-83.

    E-47 See Responses D-3 and D-17 for discussion of the Criteria Area and features incorporated in the MSHCP to alter the Criteria Area.

    E-48 See Response D-85.

    E-49 See Response D-86.

    E-50 No Local Development Mitigation Fee has yet been adopted so the amount cannot be raised. The nexus study being prepared by the County will be used to support an appropriate fee amount. It should be noted that unsupportably high levels of mitigation fees could violate the requirements of the Mitigation Fee Act.
     


    Comment Letter E2 - Elsinore Valley Municipal Water District, January 15, 2003

    E2-1 The County has met with the EVMWD regarding the referenced projects, and has been presented with information on the projects prior to release of the Draft MSHCP and the Draft EIR/EIS. The County and its consultants have a general understanding of the projects, including the proposed locations and character of the facilities, as well as the basic operational aspects of the projects. The County is not, however, in possession of any site specific biological information for the projects and has not conducted a thorough environmental review of the proposed projects at this time.

    E2-2 The Draft MSHCP and the accompanying IA contemplate the need for future facilities that are proposed by non-Permittees, such as the projects proposed by EVMWD, and provides a mechanism for such future facilities to receive Take Authorization pursuant to Section 11.8 of the IA.

    E2-3 As noted, the MSHCP considers conservation values from Public/Quasi-Public Lands, and provides mechanisms for coordination of management of such lands with the overall MSHCP Conservation Area. However, the MSHCP is a locally initiated Habitat Conservation Plan/Natural Community Conservation Plan and cannot control the action of federal agencies except as may be agreed to.

    E2-4 The MSHCP supports a Permit that would be issued under Section 10(a)(1)(B) of the Federal Endangered Species Act (FESA). Section 10(a)(1)(B) of FESA provides for Take of federally listed species related to non-federal actions. Projects that involve federal actions that may have an effect on federally listed species are not permitted Take Authorization through Section 10(a)(1)(B), and must pursue Take under Section 7 of FESA. Therefore, a project that involves a federal action that may affect federally listed species would be subject to the federal consultation process outlined in Section 7 of FESA. Under the current proposed structure of the Draft MSHCP and the Draft IA, assuming the District requires Take Authorization for listed species under FESA, it may elect to either obtain such Take Authorization through the MSHCP or through independent FESA Section 10 (a) or 7 processes. If the District elects not to pursue Take Authorization through the MSHCP, it would not be subject to the requirements of the MSHCP.

    E2-5 See Response E2-4.

    E2-6 This comment states an accurate interpretation of provisions for Participating Special Entities.

    E2-7 The suggested clarifications will be made in Section 7.0 of the Final MSHCP.

    E2-8 The comment merely purports to quote from the IA and MSHCP and as such, this comment does not require any further response.

    E2-9 If EVMWD seeks to become a Participating Special Entity, a mutually agreeable mitigation program would need to be negotiated. If EVMWD did not agree that the mitigation was reasonable, they could choose not to utilize the MSHCP, and could seek Take Authorization independently from the appropriate agencies.

    E2-10 References to the term "practicable" in Section 7.0 of the Draft MSHCP will be made consistent with the defined term "Feasible" in the Final MSHCP.

    E2-11 See Response E2-1.


    Comment Letter E3 - Eugene Gabrych, January 15, 2003

    E3-1 As noted in the Draft MSHCP, the Criteria Area represents the area within which the Criteria will be applied, and is larger than the actual area desired for Conservation. It is acknowledged that agricultural lands occur within the Criteria Area. Conservation will only be sought for those areas described in the Criteria. The Draft MSHCP describes the process by which development projects will be reviewed against the Criteria to determine consistency.

    E3-2 See Response E3-1.

    E3-3 This comment consists of information related to the two properties addressed in this letter. See Response E3-1.


    Comment Letter E4 - Eastern Municipal Water District, March 10, 2003

    E4-1 Section 3.2.1 of the MSHCP calls for verification of PQP Lands within the existing database. The Lead Agencies will work with the District to determine the precise boundaries of the referenced property, to determine its status with respect to the PQP Lands database, and to adjust the PQP as provided for in the Plan. Furthermore, EMWD is not a Permittee under the MSHCP, and as such, is not subject to its requirements. If EMWDowns lands identified as desirable for Additional Reserve Lands, such Additional Reserve Lands would only be acquired from willing sellers in accordance with the processes incorporated in the MSHCP. However, EMWD may receive Take Authorization through the MSHCP, if it so desires, in accordance with the provisions outlined in Section 7.0 of the Plan.

    E4-2 The Permittees would be happy to work with EMWD to coordinate land acquisitions and management that would be mutually beneficial to both conservation plans. As noted in Response E4-1, EMWD could choose to receive Take Authorization for their activities through the MSHCP if it so desires.

    E4-3 See Responses E4-1 and Response E4-2. The Lead Agencies do not believe that the requested actions are necessary to meet EMWD's stated objectives given the information provided in the referenced responses.

    E4-4 See Response E4-3.
     


    Comment Letter E5 - Orange County Water District, 3/14/03

    E5-1 The Lead Agencies welcome the involvement of OCWD during the long-term MSHCP implementation process. The MSHCP provides for the Conservation of Covered Species through the assembly, management and monitoring of the MSHCP Conservation Area. The MSHCP incorporates a comprehensive Adaptive Management Plan along with the monitoring activities referenced in the comment.

    E5-2 This comment describes the purpose and service parameters of OCWD, and as it raises no issues related to the Draft MSHCP, IA or EIR/EIS, no further response is necessary.

    E5-3 This comment raises no issues related to the Draft MSHCP, IA or EIR/EIS, and no further response is necessary.

    E5-4 The Lead Agencies acknowledge the great contributions of OCWD to conservation efforts in the Santa Ana River. This comment however, raises no issues related to the Draft MSHCP, IA or EIR/EIS, and no further response is necessary.

    E5-5 See Response E5-1.

    Comment Letter F

    Comment Letter F -Endangered Habitats League, January 14, 2003

    F-1 Individual responses to the concerns identified in the letter and referenced in the comment are provided for each individual numbered comment below.

    F-2 The Lead Agencies believe that the IA Recitals accurately reflect the purposes and benefits of the MSHCP. With regard to the comment that the MSHCP Conservation Area was "outcome driven," see Response G-6. The Plan is intended to address the impacts associated with, and provide mitigation for, public and private development in the Plan Area. This includes regional infrastructure development. In contrast to project-specific or "low effect" habitat conservation planning efforts, the HCP Section 10 Handbook explicitly contemplates that applicants have flexibility when drafting regional or multi-species HCPs. Indeed, the Handbook affirmatively states that: "a second guiding principle of this handbook is that FWS and NMFS will continue to encourage state and local governments and private landowners to undertake regional and multi-species HCP efforts as appropriate and will assist such efforts to the maximum extent practicable." (HCP Handbook, p. 1-15 emphasis in original.) To this end, the benefits of regional or multi-species HCPs include: (1) providing maximum flexibility and available options in developing mitigation programs; (2) reducing the economic and logistic burdens of these programs on individual landowners by distributing their impacts; (3) reducing uncoordinated decision making, which can result in incremental habitat loss and inefficient project review; (4) providing the permittees with long-term planning assurances and increase the number of species for which assurances can be given; (5) bringing a broad range of activities under the permit's legal protection; and (6) reducing the regulatory burden of FESA compliance for all affected participants. (HCP Handbook, pp. 1-14 to 1-15.)

    The Lead Agencies disagree that the Plan could not meet issuance criteria. The Service encourages HCP applicants to consider as large and comprehensive a plan area as is feasible and consistent with their land or natural resource use authorities. (HCP Handbook, p. 3-11.) Identification of the most comprehensive range of activities within the Plan Area to receive Take Authorization, whether those activities are project-based or land use activity based, is also encouraged. (Ibid.; HCP Handbook, p. 3-12.) Inclusion of such a broad range of activities and Take Authorization allows for the analysis of a wider range of factors affecting listed species, maximizes flexibility needed to develop innovative mitigation burdens, and minimizes the burden of individual project review under FESA by replacing it with comprehensive, area-wide review. (HCP Handbook, p. 3-11.) In addition, inclusion of such a broad range of activities maximizes the permittees' long-term planning assurances, broadens legal coverage, and minimizes the possibility that some future activity will not be covered by an issued permit. (HCP Handbook, p. 3-12.) Moreover, the FESA Section 10 requirement that the HCP minimize and mitigate the impacts of the taking, "to the maximum extent practicable" is a more flexible concept in the context of regional or multi-species plans. According to the Handbook: When the Service evaluates an HCP, "[t]his finding typically requires consideration of two factors: adequacy of the minimization and mitigation program, and whether it is the maximum that can be practically implemented by the applicant. To the extent that the minimization and mitigation program can be demonstrated to provide substantial benefits to the species, less emphasis can be placed on the second factor." (HCP Handbook, p. 7-3.) The Lead Agencies believe that the Draft EIS/EIR and Plan have mitigated potential impacts in full compliance with CEQA, NEPA, FESA and the NCCP Act. Moreover, certain mitigation requirements will continue even after assembly of the MSHCP Conservation Area has occurred. See Responses M-21 and H2-37. For these reasons, the Lead Agencies do not believe it is appropriate to change the language of the referenced recital.

    F-3 Section 3.99 of the IA references the State assurances found in the NCCP Act of 2002. Similar to the "No Surprises" provision in FESA, CDFG will not require additional mitigation unless jeopardy could occur to a Covered Species or as required by law, and thus, NCCP Permit revocation or suspension would result. This is not "double dipping" as referenced in the comment. Instead, this is an assurance that is available to Permittees through the NCCP process. Moreover, in issuing the NCCP Permit, CDFG will be required to make certain findings including that the Plan provide for the protection of habitat, natural communities and species diversity through the creation and long term management of habitat reserves or other equivalent measures. Prior to issuing the NCCP Permit, CDFG will also be required to make a finding that the Plan's Conservation Strategy fully complies with the NCCP Act, including determinations that adequate mitigation has been imposed.

    F-4 The Lead Agencies do not believe it is appropriate or necessary to amend the definition of Urban/Wildlands Interface to include agriculture. As noted in MSHCP Section 6.1.4 "the [Urban/ Wildlands Interface] presented in this section are intended to address indirect impacts associated with locating development in proximity to the Conservation Area, where applicable" (page 6-41). [Emphasis Added.] The intent of the guidelines pertaining to the Urban/Wildlands Interface is to address effects that are associated with locating Development near the MSHCP Conservation Area, not agriculture. As explained in Response F-15, ongoing agricultural operations are not necessarily incompatible with species and habitat conservation. Finally, in most instances the County and the Cities do not regulate ongoing agricultural uses. The commentor fails to provide adequate detail on the intent of the suggested language "other human uses and development occur..." referenced in the comment, and no further response is possible.

    F-5 The Lead Agencies disagree with the proposed change, as there is no conflict in the sentences. However, to clarify the intent of this section, the following change will be made: "Approximately 56,000 acres will be acquired and approximately 41,000 acres otherwise conserved through the development review process."

    F-6 Applicants that comply with the terms of the MSHCP will receive Take Authorization through the Permittees as specified in the IA. Therefore, granting such authorization would not be an incentive under HANS, but instead would be the result of MSHCP compliance.

    F-7 The comment identifies a typographical error, and the IA will be revised to say "affected conservation subunits."

    F-8 A draft nexus report has been prepared by the County pursuant to the requirements of Government Code section 66000 et seq., as well as all other applicable legal requirements. This report will assist in the determination of the Local Development Mitigation Fee by the County Board of Supervisors. Prior to approval of the amount of the MSHCP, the County and Cities will make findings as required by California Government Code Sections 66000 et seq., namely that there exists a "reasonable relationship" between the "fees" that will be imposed and the impacts related to land development or use. Further, findings must be made that there is a "reasonable relationship" between the fees and the cost of land acquisition. The nexus report will be available for public review prior to County Board of Supervisors' final consideration of the Plan.

    F-9 Most Existing Agricultural Operations have been farmed for at least one of the past five years. As noted in Response F-10, the RCA has defined requirements to determine the validity of requests to be included in the Existing Agricultural Database. If the Agricultural Operations are clearly "bogus," then the requirements for being placed in the Existing Agricultural Operations Database would not be met. The RCA therefore has the ability to prevent property from being added to the Database. See Response F-10 for a discussion of how the requirements will to determine the "veracity" of such a claim. The requirement was not written based upon the premise that farming for four of the past five years was standard practice, but based simply on the premise that farmers do not always farm parcels every year or even for multiple years but such operations are still legitimate agricultural operations. It is inappropriate to compare the MSHCP with the San Diego MSCP because that document does not establish rules or requirements for other MSHCPs outside San Diego County. There is no evidence that the MSHCP requirements for agricultural operations are inappropriate for Western Riverside County.

    F-10 The Agricultural Commissioner is not beholden to agricultural producers but is rather an independent County department. It is inappropriate and without merit to claim that a County department is biased or subjective. In order to verify the location of Existing Agricultural Operations, as defined pursuant to Section 6.2(A) of the MSHCP, the County will be responsible for establishing an Existing Agricultural Operations Database that includes such lands. The County will not inspect every parcel but will take all necessary steps to fulfill its obligation to create the Database pursuant to the defined criteria.

    After the compilation of this initial Database, any landowner wishing to have property included in the Database must proceed according to the provisions of Section 6.2(D of the MSHCP). The RCA will ensure the veracity of the information concerning land proposed for inclusion in the Database and conduct a thorough review of the detailed information provided prior to adding property to the Database. First, a property owner must submit a request to be added to the Database. (Draft MSHCP p. 6-56.) This written request must be submitted to the RCA within 36 months of the Effective Date of the agreement. The MSHCP states specifically that the information must be supported by "adequate factual evidence" which may include, but is not limited to:

    1. Agricultural permits obtained from, and/or registrations filed with the County, State of California or other appropriate public agency;
    2. An approved Agricultural Grading/Clearing Exception Form as defined by County Ordinance No. 457;
    3. Business, tax and property records;
    4. Agricultural Preserve and Williamson Act contract information;
    5. Aerial photographs and other relevant business records and information.

    (See Draft MSHCP, p. 6-56.)

    The burden for establishing that land should be included in the Database is "solely upon the property owner, operator or other appropriate party." (Ibid. p. 6-57.) If the County or the RCA cannot determine that a particular parcel of land meets the requirements for Existing Agricultural Operations, it will not issue the Certification of Inclusion to the responsible party until such time as "adequate factual evidence" is provided. If the County or the RCA determines that information provided by a responsible party is inadequate, then "adequate factual evidence" does not exist to support a party's request to be issued a Certificate of Inclusion, and the County or the RCA would deny the request.

    F-11 Within the Criteria Area, a limited amount of acreage (10,000 acres during the 75-year term of the MSHCP) may be designated as "New Agricultural Lands." These lands could consist of new farming activities that do not require a discretionary permit or action. To constitute New Agricultural Lands, a farmer must complete the process set forth in Section 6.2(f) of the MSHCP and show: (1) submission and approval of an Agricultural Grading/Clearing Exception Form as set forth in Ordinance No. 457; and (2) either an execution of a Williamson Act contract or City or County approval of any other mechanism providing for equal or better assurance that the proposed New Agricultural lands will in fact be used for agricultural purposes. A Certificate of Inclusion must be issued prior to beginning Agricultural Activity that could have species impacts. Outside the Criteria Area, Agricultural Operations may expand without any limitation. See Response M-47 regarding the New Agricultural Lands Cap.

    F-12 The Lead Agencies disagree that the New Agricultural Lands Cap precludes Reserve Assembly. The Criteria Area is approximately 310,000 and is significantly larger than the Additional Reserve Lands requirement of 153,000 acres. Therefore, a maximum of 10,000 acres of New Agricultural Land in a Criteria Area consisting of over 300,000 acres will not preclude assembly of the MSHCP Conservation Area. Rather, the vast majority of the Criteria Area will still be available for Reserve Assembly. Moreover, although the New Agricultural Lands Cap is 10,000 acres, this amount of land may never be farmed. The recent data indicate that very little land is currently being converted to agricultural uses. Within the Criteria Area, approximately 270 acres annually are converted to agricultural uses. Finally, agricultural operations that may occur on New Agricultural Lands may, in many instances, be compatible with habitat conservation and/or may be temporary in nature. Thus, the comment is speculative and without evidentiary support.

    The Pre-approved Mitigation Area referenced in the comment is not equivalent to the Criteria Area. The Pre-approved Mitigation Area essentially represents what a hardline reserve might look like in areas with a Pre-approved Mitigation Area. As noted in the MSHCP, the Criteria Area is an approximately 310,000-acre area from which approximately 153,000 acres of Additional Reserve Lands will be assembled.

    F-13 See Response F-12. The Lead Agencies disagree with the commentor's assertion that there will be "total and unrestricted exemption" for Agricultural Lands within the Criteria Area. In fact, the Farm Bureau believes the 10,000-acre cap is much too restrictive and should be significantly increased. See Response F-9 for a discussion of the requirements to be deemed an Existing Agricultural Operation. See Response F-12 regarding the impact that the 10,000- acre New Agricultural Lands Cap will have on the goals of the MSHCP.

    F-14 This comment, by referencing a "5-year minimum for agricultural use," appears to be referring to the Plan's requirement that development would be restricted on New Agricultural Land. The Lead Agencies believe that the five-year limitation is adequate and will discourage "bad actors" who attempt to use the agricultural provisions of the MSHCP to benefit future development. Given current farming patterns and practices in Riverside County, a ten-year provision would be unduly burdensome to legitimate farmers.

    The MSHCP specifically addresses this comment's concern regarding determining "true hardship" by conditioning any hardship exemption from development restrictions when there is a "documented" showing of "severe economic hardship," that is "beyond the control of the property owner or operator as determined by the appropriate Permittee." (Draft MSHCP, p. 6-58.) Therefore, if a land speculator "plants inappropriate crops" or is not "farming well," presumably to be able to invoke the "true hardship" exemption, such exemption would not be granted because such activity is apparently within that land speculator's control.

    F-15 To clarify, expansion of Agricultural Operations outside the Criteria Area requiring discretionary or certain City ministerial approvals will be subject to many of the terms and conditions of the MSHCP. See Section 11.3.5 of the IA. The Lead Agencies have concluded that expansion of Agricultural Operations outside the Criteria Area without the need for a discretionary approval will not, in most instances, have adverse impacts on Covered Species. Many types of agriculture contribute to Conservation for certain Covered Species. For example, agriculture benefits some widely distributed grassland species such as California horned lark and provides foraging for raptors such as the merlin. The MSHCP species accounts identify agriculture as a prime habitat for these, and other, species. Agriculture is also identified in the MSHCP Species accounts as a secondary habitat for burrowing owl. See Response F-72. Additionally, historic trends show that very little acreage is being converted to agricultural uses; rather, farmers are converting their land to residential and commercial development. It will be the responsibility of the Wildlife Agencies to determine whether Permit issuance is appropriate based upon the analysis in the MSHCP. See Section 7.3.3 of the Draft MSHCP for an analysis of the 10,000 acres of New Agricultural Land allowed in the Criteria Area.

    F-16 The Lead Agencies believe that the baseline information is adequate and complies with applicable laws. To increase the New Agricultural Lands Cap from 10,000 acres, a Minor Amendment must be granted but only if it meets the requirements for a Minor Amendment pursuant to Section 6.10.2 of the MSHCP and Section 20.4 of the IA and if it can be demonstrated to the satisfaction of the Wildlife Agencies that such an increase does not: (1) preclude Reserve Assembly, (2) significantly increase the cost of MSHCP Conservation Area management or assembly, and (3) preclude achieving Covered Species conservation and goals. (IA, section 11.3.7) These requirements will ensure that even with an increase in acreage, the New Agricultural Lands will not adversely impact the MSHCP Conservation Area. Therefore, the recommended language change is not necessary.

    F-17 The Funding Plan starts with the projection of what funds are necessary for Reserve Assembly and management called for by the MSHCP. The Conservation of 103,000 acres and funding for the long-term management and monitoring of these lands plus 55,000 acres of conservation lands already under local control provide mitigation under the MSHCP for activities covered under the Plan. These costs are allocated to the entities that will benefit from and/or receive Take Authorization under the MSHCP. Roughly speaking, one-half of the local costs for implementing the MSHCP will come directly from new Development and one-half will come from other capital and infrastructure projects that will utilize the MSHCP for mitigation. Transportation projects generally have mitigated less than the proposed 3% to 5%. Therefore, like new residential and commercial development, infrastructure will be paying as much or more than they have in the past to mitigate for environmental impacts. Section 8.6 acknowledges that should funding expectations not meet the projections or the implementation costs exceed projects, the Permittees would re-evaluate funding sources and may make adjustments. The proposed funding plan equitably distributes the costs for MSHCP over as broad a base as possible.

    F-18 The mitigation fees paid by new Development will be established by the Cities and the County after receiving the nexus study required by the Mitigation Fee Act set forth in Government Code Section 66000 et seq. It is anticipated that a per acre fee will apply to commercial projects, to certain regional infrastructure projects, and local capital construction projects. These projects (generally buildings) will have impacts similar to a private commercial projects.

    F-19 The MSHCP and IA will be revised to eliminate the third and fourth options. The County and Cities maintain control over their public projects and will determine appropriate mitigation. The MSHCP does not transfer such control to the Wildlife Agencies or the RCA. Moreover, the County and Cities, by signing the IA, adopting ordinances and resolutions, and taking other relevant actions, are agreeing to implement the terms and conditions of the MSHCP. The County and Cities are also legally required to comply with the provisions of CEQA. The Wildlife Agencies will be notified of all public and private projects and will have the opportunity to provide comments. In the event the Wildlife Agencies believe any of the Permittees have not met their obligations under the Plan, the Wildlife Agencies have the duty to take appropriate action pursuant to the documents and state and federal law.

    F-20 See Response F-17. The Flood Control District, working with the RCA, will make the determination of what, if any, offset there should be allowed on an individual project. It is the Permittee's responsibility to fund their mitigation. The Wildlife Agencies should not interfere in local funding decisions. If the Local Permittees do not meet their obligations under the IA, the Wildlife Agencies have a responsibility to take appropriate actions as provided in the Plan and under state and federal law.

    F-21 See Response F-17. County Parks can choose to mitigate using the alternatives listed in amended Section 13.5B of the IA. As a Permittee, the Parks District is responsible for their compliance with the Plan.

    F-22 The Caltrans contribution of 2,000 acres in the eastern portion of the Plan Area and 1,000 acres in the western portion of the Plan Area were determined to be an appropriate contribution based upon total impacts of approximately 1,500 acres resulting from its Covered Activities.

    F-23 The Lead Agencies agree with this statement. In addition, the right of the Federal Government to purchase or protect additional land for the benefit of species, whether or not there are unforseen circumstances, is set forth in 50 C.F.R. § 17.22(a)(6).

    F-24 FESA does not require that all mitigation land needed to offset impacts associated with a regional or multi-species HCP be set aside in advance of any development. (See Section 10 Handbook, p. 3-22.) As stated therein, "the HCP applicant may need to conduct activities prior to the time when replacement habitats can be provided. This is acceptable so long as the HCP provides legal or financial assurances that the permittee will fulfill the HCP's obligations... Mitigation funds have often been used in regional HCPs in which the responsible party for habitat mitigation under the HCP is a state or local government agency... In such cases, the responsibilities of individual contributors may end with the payment, and any additional performance requirement would either be waived or would belong to the permitted agency." (Ibid.) Accordingly, Third Party Take Authorization is properly granted under the MSHCP once the Local Development Mitigation Fee is paid and all other requirements of the MSHCP are fully satisfied by that third party.

    F-25 The commentor appears to be adding a requirement that Third Parties may only retain Take Authorization after an amendment or other revision to the MSHCP with Wildlife Agencies' and Permittee approval. This is not the intent of Section 17.4 of IA. Rather, the intent is to provide assurances to Third Parties that provided they fully comply with MSHCP, amendments or other revisions to the MSHCP that occur after granting of Third Party Take Authorization shall not affect the Take conferred or the level of compensation without the approval of the Third Party. There is no legal requirement to make the change suggested by the commentor.

    F-26 The Lead Agencies disagree with this comment. Lands annexed into the jurisdiction of participating Cities would have previously been within the County, and thus already subject to the MSHCP requirements. It is unclear from the comment how simply shifting jurisdictional lines could preclude Reserve Assembly or achieving conservation goals.

    F-27 See Response F-26. Additionally, the Lead Agencies are unclear why the commentor would be against annexing as much property as possible into the Plan Area, thereby ensuring habitat conservation and species protection.

    F-28 The Lead Agencies believe that the language of this Minor Amendment is sufficient to limit its applicability to very restricted circumstances, i.e., only applicable to those situations where topographical conditions may preclude keeping the entire graded slope area within the anticipated right-of-way. Moreover, if situations arise where the use of this Minor Amendment will result in "abuse," then the requirements of the MSHCP would not be met and the Wildlife Agencies would take appropriate action.

    F-29 Concurrence as a Minor Amendment is required for the Cajalco Road Improvements, State Route 79 Road Improvements and the San Jacinto River Project. The Lead Agencies disagree that concurrence is or should be required for the other Minor Amendments. The listed Minor Amendments will have minimal, if any, impacts to the Covered Species and thus, Wildlife Agency concurrence for any such amendment is merely bureaucratic and provides few biological benefits. The Wildlife Agencies have a two-month period to submit comments and institute the meet and confer process of Section 23.6 of the IA if they have serious concerns.

    F-30 The MSHCP gives the Permittees the right to terminate the MSHCP. (See IA, Section 22.1.) Moreover, the MSHCP and the IA contain assurances that Conservation will be achieved. Indeed, the IA contains the following binding commitment: "In the event of termination, consistent with the requirements of 50 Code of Federal Regulations sections 17.32(b)(7) and 17.22(b)(7), the Permittees will remain obligated to fulfill any existing and outstanding minimization and mitigation measures required under the terms of the Permits for Take that occurs prior to such termination and such minimization and mitigation measures as may be required pursuant to the terms of this Agreement and the MSHCP." (IA, § 21.2.) FESA allows for the termination of a permit when activities authorized thereunder cease, provided certain requirements are met. (See 50 C.F.R. § 17.22(b)(7).) Of course, Take of Covered Species would then be prohibited. (Ibid.) Moreover, minimization and mitigation measures conducted to that point would be reviewed by the Service to ensure they were commensurate with the amount of Take that occurred during the term of the Permit. (Ibid.; HCP Handbook, p. 6-30.) If the Take occurred during the initial stages of implementing the Permits, but the minimization and mitigation measures occur throughout the term of the Permit, the Service is required to ensure that the remainder of those measures are implemented before the Permit is terminated. (Ibid.) There is no evidence that termination would be used as a method of avoiding responsibilities since the Permittees are still obligated under Section 21.2 of the IA. Additionally, the IA sets forth an accounting mechanism and other actions that would be triggered upon termination of the Permit. (IA, § 21.)

    F-31 Section 21.2 of the IA does not allow Permittees to "renege" on their commitments. (See Response F-30.) If a Permittee terminates Plan participation before any Take has occurred, then there is no nexus for the imposition of measures to mitigate such Take.

    F-32 See Responses F-30 and F-31. The majority of the property acquisitions will occur in the first 25 years of the Permits, so it is highly unlikely that withdrawal of a Permittee late in the Permit term would have significant adverse results. Moreover, as previously noted, Section 21.2 of the IA would not allow a Permittee to renege on Reserve Assembly obligations if it has received Take Authorization. Based on the language of Measure A, a Local Permittee who withdraws will not lose funds previously allocated, but lose any future funds. It is important to note that Measure A funds will not be allocated until 2008, at the earliest.

    F-33 See Responses F-30, F-31 and F-32. Section 22.2 of the IA specifically prohibits parties from reneging on their commitments.

    F-34 The relevant provision of the IA states: "[F]or those Covered Activities within th[e Terminating] Permittee's jurisdiction that have been issued a grading permit or have commenced grading activities or have been issued a Certificate of Inclusion, Take Authorization shall continue under the Permits provided all relevant obligations have been met pursuant to the MSHCP, this Agreement and the Permittee's land use entitlements." (IA, § 22.2.) Once an individual developer has paid the Local Development Mitigation Fees and met the remaining obligations of the MSHCP, Take Authorization would be granted and remain valid pending completion of his/her project. The section does not allow for any illegal grading, as individual land use jurisdictions maintain separate legal requirements for grading permits, which are not affected by the MSHCP. "Default" under the MSHCP refers to a breach of material provisions, while termination refers to voluntary return of Take Authorization meeting the requirements of the IA and FESA. The Lead Agencies will propose adding the following to the second sentence: "...or have commenced legal grading activities..." for the purpose of clarification.

    F-35 The Lead Agencies disagree with the comment because many of the mitigation obligations associated with the MSHCP will continue even if one or more Permittees terminate their participation in the Plan. See Responses F-30 to F-34.

    F-36 First, the fee ordinances and resolutions attached to the IA are in draft form only and may be revised. Second, Section 1J of Exhibit G merely states that "to ensure fair implementation of the development impact fees established in the Ordinance, it may be necessary for the City to defer or waive such fees in special cases as may be permitted in accordance with procedures and guidelines established by the Western Riverside County Regional Conservation Authority." Because the RCA has not been formed, such procedures and guidelines have not yet been developed. After formation, it is expected that there will be standards for fee waiver or deferral, including funding issues, in the relevant procedures and guidelines.

    F-37 The Mitigation Fee Act requires that mitigation fees in most instances may only be collected prior to final inspection or certificate of occupancy. See Government Code Section 66007. It is anticipated that any requirement to pay the adopted fee would be imposed upon issuance of the building permit not upon issuance of a grading permit and that payment of such fee would be required prior to final inspection or certificate of occupancy. That being said, there is nothing that prohibits developers from paying fees at the building permit stage.

    F-38 The secondary unit fee exemption states as follows: "The following types of construction shall be exempt from the provisions of this ordinance:...Secondary residential units, constructed on developed residential property and meeting all stateand Cityrequirements for such units."[Emphasis added.] This exemption contemplates that these types of projects will not have any impacts to biological resources as they are limited to developed residential property.

    F-39 Section 10E states that the fee will not be imposed on "Development on a Project Area that is currently or has been previously improved." As with the secondary units addressed in Response F-38, such projects will not impact biological resources. These exemptions do not limit the fee to impacts on pristine areas but instead carve out a very narrow number of exemptions for certain projects with limited impacts. Agricultural land converted to other uses will be subject to the fee just like any other development. (See Response M-22) The Permittees will consider at the time of fee adoption whether a reduced fee would be appropriate for infill, redevelopment and reuse projects.

    F-40 Section 11 states: "Any Local Development Mitigation Fee credit that may be applicable to a Development Project, or any partial or full waiver of a Local Development Mitigation Fee that may be applicable to a Development Project, shall be determined by the City only in accordance with such authority, rules, and procedures as may be established by the Regional Conservation Authority." If the RCA does not authorize a fee credit or waiver, then no credit or waiver shall be issued by the City. The RCA shall establish appropriate procedures and guidelines that will consider fee credits and waiver, and related funding issues.

    F-41 Both ordinances and resolutions are legally binding and have the same force and effect. (See, Guyton v. Phillips (9th Cir. 1981) 532 F.Supp. 1154, 1162. "[r]esolutions are legislative enactments entitled to the same recognition as ordinances"].) Exhibits H and I are offered as proposed boilerplate documents for the Cities to use depending on the individual City's practice and do not otherwise differ in their enforcement power. Moreover, upon execution of the IA, the Cities are bound to enforce the Plan.

    F-42 As defined in Exhibit H, a "Project" means any action or activity that is subject to the City's ministerial or discretionary approval, or any action or activity undertaken directly by the City, for the purpose of developing or improving real property. The list of examples is merely illustrative and not exclusive. See Response F-37.

    F-43 The Lead Agencies disagree with the comment. The Permittees are public entities whose actions are subject to public and judicial review. Further, Permittees are required to comply and implement the terms of the MSHCP. If a Permittee fails to comply with the MSHCP, the IA or the Permits, the Permittee's Take Authorization will be revoked. To ensure that the requirements of the MSHCP and the IA are properly met, a Joint Project/Acquisition Review Process will be instituted by the RCA. The purpose of the Joint Project/Acquisition Review Process is to allow the RCA to facilitate and monitor implementation of the MSHCP. The Wildlife Agencies will be notified of all projects within the Criteria Area and will meet with RCA on a quarterly basis.

    F-44 See Response F-2.

    F-45 See Responses G-15, G-16 and G-17 for a detailed discussion of Conservation of grassland and coastal sage scrub anticipated under the MSHCP.

    F-46 The reference to the text on page 3-117 under "Results," excerpts the end of a sentence which states that the MSHCP is intended to result in a reserve configuration as cited in the comment. The preamble to that phrase in the sentence referenced in the comment states: "Implementation of the Reserve Assembly guidance incorporated in the MSHCP including the guidance provided in the descriptions of the MSHCP Conservation Area, the Cores and Linkages, the Area Plan Subunit Biological Issues and Considerations and Planning Species, and the Cell and Cell Group Criteria are intended to result in a reserve configuration..." These referenced sections of the MSHCP contain extensive guidance as to the ways in which the MSHCP Conservation Area is to be assembled to achieve the stated objective of a reserve configuration that "provides significant blocks of habitat, minimizes internal fragmentation and edge effects, and maximizes the ratio of surface area to perimeter." Examples of this guidance are the target acreages for Cores and Linkages presented in Section 3.2.3 of the Draft MSHCP. Section 3.2.3 also calls out approximate interior and edge acreages, approximate perimeter to area ratios, and approximate distances to the nearest connected core for each Core and Linkage. These conservation targets for Cores and Linkages are specifically referenced on page 3-18 of the Draft MSHCP which states: "Achievement of the conservation targets as part of the overall Reserve Assembly process will be an important measuring and monitoring tool for the MSHCP." Further examples of Reserve Assembly guidance referenced in the text on page 3-117 may be found in the identification of Biological Issues and Considerations for each Area Plan Subunit. As an example, the Biological Issues and Considerations for Subunit 1 of the Elsinore Area Plan identify issues such as: "Maintain core habitat for bobcat; maintain core and linkage habitat for Stephens' kangaroo rat east of I-15; maintain core and linkage habitat for Quino checkerspot butterfly..." In addition to these features, the MSHCP includes specific conservation and management objectives for each Covered Species. When Reserve Assembly guidance is provided in the MSHCP that refers to specific species, further guidance may be found in the species-specific conservation objectives included in the MSHCP.

    It is not correct that terms like core habitat are never defined in terms of configuration. Definitions for Core Area, Linkage and other relevant terms are provided in the Definitions section of the MSHCP, Volume I and in the introduction to the cores and linkages discussion on page 3-23, Section 3.2.3 of the Draft MSHCP. As an example, the definition for Core Area calls for "a block of habitat of appropriate size, configuration (emphasis added), and vegetation characteristics to generally support the life history requirements for one or more Covered Species." The definition of Linkage calls for "a connection between Core Areas with adequate size, configuration (emphasis added), and vegetation characteristics to generally provide for Live-In Habitat and/or provide genetic flow for identified Planning Species." Live-In Habitat is defined as "habitat that contains the necessary components to support key life history requirements of a species; e.g., year-round habitat for permanent residents or breeding habitat for migrantspecies." These definitions clearly refer to configuration factors to be considered in the assembly, design and management of Cores and Linkages.

    The MSHCP is a layered and sequential criteria-based plan with planning units generally ranging from the overall MSHCP Conservation Area, to the Cores and Linkages, the Area Plans, the Area Plan Subunits, and finally, the individual Cells and Cell Groups. The Cell Criteria referenced as the crux of the problem in the comment are the last step in the sequential Reserve Assembly guidance provided in the MSHCP. Initial guidance is provided by the description of the overall MSHCP Conservation Area provided in summary fashion in Section 3.2.2 of the MSHCP and in detail in Section A of the MSHCP Reference Document - Volume II of the MSHCP. Among the factors described that relate to fragmentation are those such as patch size and edge affected land after completion of Reserve Assembly (see pages 3-21 and 3-22 of the Draft MSHCP). Similar guidance is provided in the conservation targets for Cores and Linkages and Biological Issues and Considerations for Area Plan Subunits as described above. These guidance features are specifically referenced in the Cell Criteria identified as a concern in the comment. In addition to the "conservation to range from 40% to 60%" factor referenced in the comment, the Criteria for each Cell and Cell Group make specific reference to the Core or Linkage within which the Cell or Cell Group is located. A typical example is: "Conservation within this cell will contribute to assembly of Proposed Core 1." As described in the MSHCP, this guidance within the Cell Criteria is intended to refer the reader to the description of conservation targets for Proposed Core 1. (As noted above, conservation targets for each Core and Linkage are presented in Section 3.2.3 of the MSHCP.) The next two components of the Criteria for each Cell or Cell Group focus on the type of habitat to be conserved within the Cell or Cell Group and connectivity issues associated with the Cell or Cell Group. A typical example is: "Conservation on this cell will focus on riparian scrub, woodland and forest habitat associated with Alberhill Creek and recovery of adjacent coastal sage scrub habitat. Areas conserved within this Cell will be connected to coastal sage scrub, riparian scrub, woodland and forest habitat proposed for conservation in Cell Groups L to the north and O to the east." These components of the Cell Criteria are intended to address the fragmentation concerns related to reserve configuration referenced in the comment. As noted above, similar guidance is provided for each Area Plan Subunit and this guidance is to be used in combination with the Criteria for Cells and Cell Groups during the Reserve Assembly process.

    The comment expresses concern that the RCA may allow "scattered roads, driveways and estate lots within the conservation area." Uses such as these are not addressed in the Reserve Assembly guidance provided throughout the MSHCP, as noted above, but rather in the guidance for Covered Activities/Allowable Uses included in Section 7.0 of the MSHCP. As described in Section 7.0, Covered Activities must be designed, maintained and operated in accordance with the requirements of the MSHCP. Those requirements are intended to avoid and minimize fragmentation and Edge Effects potentially associated with Covered Activities. Applications for Covered Activities will be reviewed by the Permittees for consistency with the requirements of the MSHCP and will be submitted to the RCA for review as part of the Joint Review Process as called for in Section 6.6 of the MSHCP.

    F-47 See Response F-46. Reserve Assembly guidance is provided throughout the Plan. Guidance regarding the configuration of the overall MSHCP Conservation Area is provided in Section 3.2.2. Guidance regarding configuration of Cores and Linkages is provided in Section 3.2.3 of the MSHCP. Guidance regarding Biological Issues and Considerations and Planning Species for each Area Plan Subunit is provided in Sections

    3.3.2 through 3.3.17 of the MSHCP. Guidance regarding habitat conservation and connectivity is provided for each Cell and Cell Group in the Cell Criteria in sections 3.3.2 through 3.3.17.

    F-48 See Responses F-46 and F-47. Appropriate guidance for Reserve Assembly is provided in the MSHCP. Oversight to ensure that Reserve Assembly is occurring in accordance with the Reserve Assembly guidance provided throughout the Plan is provided through several features incorporated in the MSHCP including the Reserve Assembly Accounting procedures described in Section 6. 7 of the Plan and the Annual Review and Oversight requirements in Section 6.11 of the Plan. The Reserve Assembly Accounting procedures state the following: "The MSHCP Additional Reserve Lands will be assembled over time and when assembly is completed, must be in a configuration and contain key Vegetation Communities (both location and acres) that provide for the Conservation of Covered Species." The procedures further go on to state that as the MSHCP Conservation Area is assembled, the Parties and the public must be able to determine that lands being conserved support habitats necessary for Covered Species; development on lands within the Criteria Area is not reducing opportunities to assemble Additional Reserve Lands in accordance with the guidance provided in the Plan; and acquisition priorities are appropriately focused. The Reserve Assembly Accounting procedures divide the Plan Area into eight Rough Step Analysis Units and identify key Vegetation Communities within each Rough Step Analysis Unit for which conservation targets are established to ensure that Conservation and loss of key Vegetation Communities is occurring in rough step proportionality according to the rough step parameters defined in Section 6.7. Section 6.7 states (page 6-92), "If the Rough Step rule is not met during any analysis period, the Permittees must conserve appropriate lands supporting a specified Vegetation Community within the Analysis Unit to bring the Plan back into the parameters of the rule prior to authorizing additional loss of the Vegetation Community for which the rule was not achieved." Section 6.7 defines the analysis period as annually and Section 6.11 (page 6-113) requires that "Documentation of Reserve Assembly activities in relationship to the Rough Step formulas presented in Section 6.7" be included in annual reports. Additional oversight is called for in Section 6.6.2 F.2 (page 6-81) of the Plan which calls for status meetings with the Wildlife Agencies as follows: "During the first three (3) years of implementation of the MSHCP, Regional Conservation Authority staff and Wildlife Agencies representatives shall meet every ninety (90) days, at a minimum, to review the status of Plan implementation." This additional oversight requirements will occur during the initial three year period when it is anticipated key Reserve Assembly activities will be underway. In summary, the MSHCP includes both extensive and appropriate Reserve Assembly guidance and extensive and appropriate oversight requirements to ensure that Reserve Assembly occurs according to the guidance provided.

    F-49 See Responses F-46, F-47 and F-48. The Reserve Assembly guidance provided in the MSHCP and referenced in these responses is available to inform Participants, mediators, and arbitrators during the HANS Process.

    F-50 See the third paragraph of Response F-46. Guidance regarding conservation of habitat blocks and minimization of internal fragmentation and Edge Effects is specifically provided in the Cell Criteria. The Criteria for each Cell and Cell Group specifically identify the Core or Linkage within which the Cell or Cell Group is located and conservation targets for each Core and Linkage identify approximate acreage targets for interior and edge area for each Core and Linkage, perimeter to area ratio for each Core and Linkage, and distance to nearest connected core for each Core and Linkage.

    F-51 See the second paragraph of Response F-46. Definitions for cores and linkages are provided in the Plan. The dimensional data for each Core and Linkage provided in Section 3.2.3 of the Plan also provide guidance regarding approximate interior to edge dimensions and perimeter to area ratios targeted for each Core and Linkage. With respect to prohibition for "internal pods of development" it should be noted that private development is not a Covered Activity within the MSHCP Conservation Area. According to Section 7.4 of the Plan, allowable uses within the MSHCP Conservation Area are limited reserve management, monitoring and scientific research activities; emergency safety and public services; and public access and recreation. Internal pods of development are not a covered activity within the MSHCP Conservation Area and would not occur.

    F-52 Sections 13.27 and 13.28 of the Code of Federal Regulations provide that the Service may suspend or revoke all or part of the privileges authorized by a Take permit if the Permittee does not comply with the conditions of the permit or with applicable laws and regulations governing the permitted activity, or if fees, penalties, or other costs owed to the Federal Government are not paid. (See also, IA § 23.5.) That only certain activities may be listed as potential grounds for revocation or suspension of the Plan does not preclude the Service from exercising the discretion it retains by law to suspend or revoke permits.

    F-53 Language regarding criteria consistency review requirements and findings has been included in Section 3.3.1 of the Final MSHCP.

    F-54 The Annual Report will include information regarding configuration and meeting the overall conservation goals.

    F-55 See Response F-6.

    F-56 The text in the Final MSHCP has been revised to clarify the intent of this discussion that successful mediation would result in the mediated resolution being complied with.

    F-57 The text in the Final MSHCP has been revised to reflect the commentor's suggestion.

    F-58 The text in the Final MSHCP has been revised to reflect this comment.

    F-59 As noted in the comment, the issue of buffers for riverine/riparian/vernal pool areas is addressed in the MSHCP through the Guidelines Pertaining to the Urban/Wildlands Interface presented in Section 6.1.4 which call for sensitive edge treatments for all conserved areas. Rather than impose arbitrary quantitative standards that may or may not apply in project-specific situations, the guidelines presented in Section 6.1.4 are intended to address the indirect effects that may adversely affect conserved wetlands and other conserved areas. These potential indirect effects, as identified on page 6-23 of the Draft MSHCP, include lighting, noise, trash/debris, urban and stormwater runoff, toxic materials, exotic plant and animal infestations, dust, trampling and unauthorized recreational vehicle use. The guidelines presented in Section 6.1.4 recognize that these indirect effects may be related to uses both adjacent to and in proximity to conserved areas and may need to be addressed in a broader context rather than through application of an arbitrary, quantitative buffer standard. For example, the drainage guidelines in Section 6.1.4 notes the potential effects of urban runoff from development "in proximity to" the MSHCP Conservation Area and calls for stormwater runoff containing urban pollutants to be directed away from the MSHCP Conservation Area. This guideline takes into consideration issues that would not necessarily be addressed by a quantitative buffer requirement.

    For riparian/riverine/vernal pool areas conserved outside the MSHCP Conservation Area, the guidelines presented in Section 6.1.2 would apply. These guidelines call for imposition of mitigation requirements in accordance with CEQA. Section 6.1.2 (page 6-22) states that applicants must focus first on avoidance alternatives and make findings of equivalency in an avoidance alternative is determined to be infeasible. If the avoidance alternative is selected, Section 6.1.2 states that: "measures shall be incorporated into the project design to ensure the long-term conservation of areas to be avoided, and associated functions and values." Section 6.1.2 (page 6-22) further states that the Guidelines Pertaining to the Urban/Wildlands Interface will be applied to riparian/riverine/vernal pool areas to be avoided outside the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    The avoidance, minimization and mitigation approach incorporated in Section 6.1.2 of the MSHCP, along with the requirement to incorporate measures in design of avoidance alternatives that ensure long-term conservation of areas to be evaluated, maintenance of associated functions and values, and incorporation of appropriate edge treatments in project designs, is equivalent to the no net loss approach cited in the comment. Further, the MSHCP acknowledges that "Projects that affect wetland Vegetation Communities will be required to comply with the applicable regulatory standards related to wetlands functions and values." (Draft MSHCP, page 6-24).

    F-60 As noted in Response F-59, the avoidance, minimization and mitigation approach incorporated in Section 6.1.2 of the MSHCP is equivalent to the no net loss approach. With respect to determination of biologically equivalent or superior preservation, as stated on page 6-23 of the Draft MSHCP, such determinations will be made only for projects for which avoidance has been determined to be infeasible. To make the biologically equivalent or superior preservation findings, the alternative project must be determined to be equivalent or superior to the avoidance alternative that was determined to be infeasible. Since the MSHCP includes and equivalent no net loss standard for the avoidance alternative, this standard would also apply to the project alternative determined to be biologically equivalent or superior.

    F-61 The comment correctly notes that the Narrow Endemic Plant Species subject to the Protection of Narrow Endemic Plant Species requirements in Section 6.1.3 of the MSHCP are Group 3 species. Species-specific conservation objectives are identified for the Group 3 species that go beyond landscape level thresholds or a fixed number of localities. It is assumed that this comment is specifically referring to the portion of Section 6.1.3 (Draft MSHCP, p. 6-39) which states: "For Narrow Endemic Plant Species populations identified as part of the survey process, impacts to 90% of those portions of the property that provide for long-term conservation value of the identified Narrow Endemic Plant Species shall be avoided until it is demonstrated that the Conservation goals for the particular species are met. Individual species Conservation goals are presented in Section 9.0 of this document." This statement indicates that all of the species-specific conservation goals (identified as objectives in Section 9.0) must be met for the particular species prior to discontinuing surveys. A review of the species-specific conservation objectives for these species in Section 9.0 of the MSHCP reveals that these objectives go beyond "solely" landscape level thresholds. Examples are provided below and a review of the species-specific objectives in Section 9.0 of the MSHCP will reveal similar approaches to all of Narrow Endemic Plant Species identified in Section 6.1.3. In addition, language has been added to Sections 6.1.3 and 6.3.2 of the Final MSHCP to require review by the RMOC and MPA of findings supporting conclusions that species-specific conservation objectives have been met and surveys may be discontinued.

    • For California Orcutt grass, species-specific conservation objectives call for conservation of 6,680 acres of habitat in at least three specifically identified locations. Objective 4 calls for maintenance of hydrologic condition at the vernal pool complex on the Santa Rosa Plateau and the vernal pool occurrences at Skunk Hollow and Upper Salt Creek. Features of these objectives that go beyond "solely" landscape thresholds include conservation of specifically identified core areas and requirements to maintain hydrologic processes at specific locations. These site-specific conservation objectives are consistent with the approach to be taken for Group 3 species as identified in the MSHCP.
    • For Munz's onion, species-specific conservation objectives call for Conservation of 21,260 acres of Habitat at 13 localities including 12 Core Areas. In addition to habitat conservation, specific conservation targets for certain clay soils are identified. Features of these objectives that go beyond "solely" landscape thresholds include Conservation of specifically identified core areas and clay soils areas. These site-specific conservation objectives are consistent with the approach to be taken for Group 3 species as identified in the MSHCP.
    • or spreading navarretia, species-specific conservation objectives call for conservation of 6,900 acres of Habitat at 13 specifically-identified locations. Objectives 4 and 5 further call for maintenance of hydrologic processes at conserved locations along the San Jacinto River and Upper Salt Creek. Features of these objectives that go beyond "solely" landscape thresholds include conservation of specifically-identified locations and requirements to maintain hydrologic processes at identified locations. These site-specificconservation objectives are consistent with the approach to be taken for Group 3 species as identified in the MSHCP.

    F-62 See Response F-19.

    F-63 See Response F-20.

    F-64 See Responses F-19 and F-21.

    F-65 See Response F-17.

    F-66 See Response F-9.

    F-67 See Response F-10.

    F-68 See Response F-11.

    F-69 The Lead Agencies disagree with the comment's conclusion that the provisions allowing development of New Agricultural Lands within the Criteria Area (Draft MSHCP, Section 6.2(F)) means that Reserve Assembly is no longer assured. See Response F-12. The commentor suggests that the development of New Agricultural Lands within the Criteria Area should be based on a factual finding that Reserve Assembly options are "not appreciably reduced on an individual and cumulative basis." This factual finding is not necessary because of the limited amount of land that can be converted to New Agricultural Lands within the Criteria Area (10,000 out of 310,000 acres, or about 3%). See Section 7.3.3 of the Draft MSHCP.

    The provisions of 6.2(F) already provide that for a Certificate of Inclusion to be granted allowing Take Authorization, there must either be the execution of a Williamson Act contract or an equivalent assurance of agricultural intent by the respective City or the County. This should prevent the "bogus" clearing of land.

    The Western Riverside County MSHCP and the San Diego MSCP are different plans with different provisions. The City of San Diego and County of San Diego IAs both generally state that the agricultural landowner must apply to the City for a certificate of inclusion which must be accompanied by a map including the parcel number, acreage and owner. The only areas covered by this provision are the lands mapped as agriculture on the MSCP map. Total mapped agricultural land in the MSCP is 28,000 acres of a total undeveloped area of 367,000 acres. The small amount of land available for New Agricultural Lands will not hinder Reserve Assembly. See Response F-12. Regarding the 5-year minimum for agricultural use, see Response F-14. Regarding the application of Take Authorization to Agricultural Operations, and the statutory requirements for mitigation, see Response F-15.

    F-70 See Response F-16.

    F-71 A determination of biologically equivalent or superior preservation will examine a variety of factors, including the amount of acreage to be gained and lost for a given project. The Lead Agencies fully expect that there will be no net loss of acreage associated with the determination in most cases; however, in some cases, biologically equivalent or superior preservation may be able to be achieved through preservation of areas of more sensitive or better habitat, even if those areas are smaller in size than the area to be impacted. Indeed, in some cases, preservation of smaller, but better habitat may be preferred. For this reason, the MSHCP has been written to provide sufficient flexibility to allow appropriate "on the ground" decisions to be made.

    F-72 The comment correctly notes that the species for which additional survey requirements are identified in Section 6.3.2 of the MSHCP are Group 3 species. Species-specific conservation objectives are identified for Group 3 species that go beyond landscape level thresholds. It is assumed that this comment is specifically referring to the portion of Section 6.3.2 (Draft MSHCP, p. 6-63) which states: "For locations with positive survey results, 90% of those portions of the property that provide for long-term conservation value for the identified species will be avoided until it is demonstrated that Conservation goals for the particular species are met. Individual species Conservation goals are presented in Section 9.0 of this document." This statement indicates that all of the species-specific conservation goals (identified as objectives in Section 9.0) must be met for the particular species prior to discontinuing surveys. A review of the species-specific conservation objectives for these species in Section 9.0 of the MSHCP reveals that these objectives go well beyond "arbitrary" landscape thresholds referenced in the comment. Examples are provided below and a review of the species-specific objectives in Section 9.0 of the MSHCP will reveal similar approaches to all of the species identified for additional survey requirements in Section 6.3.2. In addition, language has been added to Sections 6.1.3 and 6.3.2 of the Final MSHCP to require review by the RMOC and MPA of findings supporting conclusions that species-specific conservation objectives have been met and surveys may be discontinued.

    • For burrowing owl, species-specific objectives call for Conservation of 49,590 acres of primary and secondary habitat in at least five core areas. Core areas are specifically identified along with target acreages and include Lake Skinner/Diamond Valley Lake, playa west of Hemet, San Jacinto Wildlife Area/Mystic Lake, Lake Mathews, Santa Ana River. The MSHCP Conservation Area will include at least 27,470 acres of suitable primary Habitat for the burrowing owl including grasslands. Objective 3 calls for the Conservation of at least 22,120 acres of suitable secondary Habitat for the burrowing owl including playas and vernal pools, and agriculture outside of the Core Areas identified above. Areas where additional suitable Habitat could be conserved include west of the Jurupa Mountains, near Temescal Wash (i.e., vicinity of Alberhill), near Temecula Creek, within the Lakeview Mountains, Banning, the Badlands, Gavilan Hills, and Quail Valley. (Appendix E, p. E-9). These identified core areas are to support a combined total breeding population of 120 burrowing owls with no fewer than five pairs in any one core area. The conservation objectives further require that known nesting locations specifically identified in Objective 4 are included in the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    This species is also on the Additional Survey List. (EIR/EIS, p. 6.3.2) Surveys for this species will be conducted prior to disturbance for all public and private projects where suitable habitat is present. Surveys for the burrowing owl are required throughout the Plan Area within Riverside Lowlands which includes agriculture and grasslands. (Appn. E, p. E-9). Additional locations for burrowing owl may be picked up in these surveys that have not been previously recorded. The MSHCP's relocation strategy for the burrowing owl follows the published methodology recommended by CDFG for mitigation for burrowing owls (CDFG Staff Report on Burrowing Owl Mitigation). Burrowing owl localities found as a result of survey efforts shall be conserved in accordance with the procedures described in Section 6.3.2 of the MSHCP. (EIR/EIS, p. 4.1-4.6). For locations with positive survey results, 90% of those portions of the property that provide for long-term conservation value for the burrowing owl will be avoided until it is demonstrated that species-specific conservation objectives are met. Findings of equivalency shall be made demonstrating that the 90% standard has been met. If it is determined that the 90% threshold cannot be met, the Permittee(s) must make a Biologically Equivalent or Superior Determination (Appn. E, p. E-9).

    Pre-construction presence/absence surveys for burrowing owl within the survey area where suitable Habitat is present will be conducted for all Covered Activities through the life of the Permit (Appn. E, p. E-9). Surveys will be conducted within 30 days prior to disturbance. Take of active nests will be avoided. Passive relocation (use of one way doors and collapse of burrows) will occur when owls are present outside the nesting season. (Ibid.) Objective 7 calls for translocation sites for burrowing owl to be created within the MSHCP Conservation Area for the establishment of new colonies. Features of these objectives that go beyond "arbitrary" landscape thresholds include conservation of specifically identified core areas and nest locations, identification of a minimum population in each core area, and identification of a minimum total breeding population. Reserve Managers will consult with the Wildlife Agencies regarding site selection prior to translocation site development. These site-specific conservation objectives are consistent with the approach to be taken for Group 3 species as identified in the MSHCP.

    Moreover, the Lead Agencies have concluded that Agricultural Operations will not, in many instances, have adverse impacts on Covered Species, including the burrowing owl. Agricultural Operations and vegetation can actually contribute to Conservation for burrowing owl. The MSHCP species accounts identify agriculture as a secondary habitat for burrowing owl, and other species. (MSHCP, Table 5.21 EIR/EIS, Table 4C).

    • For southwestern willow flycatcher, species-specific objectives call for Conservation of 10,580 of habitat within six specifically identified core areas with interconnecting linkages. Target acreages are identified for the core areas along with a requirement to conserve at least 100 meters of undeveloped landscape adjacent to conserved riparian woodland and scrub habitat. Objective 3 calls for demonstration that at least 2 core areas contain a minimum of ten successful breeding pairs and at least 4 additional Core Areas support 5 breeding pairs. Objective 4 calls for continued use of and successful reproduction within the 75% of identified Core Areas at least once every three years. Features of these objectives that go beyond "arbitrary" landscape thresholds include Conservation of specifically identified Core Areas, identification of a minimum population in each Core Area, and requirements to demonstrate successful reproduction at 3 year intervals. These site-specific conservation objectives are consistent with the approach to be taken for Group 3 species as identified in the MSHCP.

    • For Los Angeles pocket mouse, species-specific objectives call for Conservation of 14,000 acres of habitat including at least 2,000 acres within each of seven specifically identified Core Areas, as well as an additional 10,000 acres outside the Core Areas. Objective 4 calls for demonstration that each of the seven Core Areas supports a stable or increasing population that occupies at least 4,200 acres as measured over any 8-year consecutive period. Features of these objectives that go beyond "arbitrary" landscape thresholds include conservation of specifically identified Core Areas, and requirements to demonstrate presence of a stable or increasing population in each of the Core Area at 8-year intervals. These site-specific conservation objectives are consistent with the approach to be taken for Group 3 species as identified in the MSHCP.

    • For red-legged frog, species-specific objectives call for Conservation of 766 acres of occupied and historic breeding habitat, plus 9,028 acres of Core Area in two specifically-identified locations, plus 30,964 acres of intervening lands between the Core Areas, plus 39, 147 acres of upland habitat adjacent to occupied or suitable breeding habitat in specifically-identified locations. Objective 5 calls for maintenance or, if feasible, restoration of ecological processes in a minimum of six locations. Objective 6 calls for determination as to whether successful reproduction is occurring once a year for the first five years and at minimum 8-year intervals following. Features of these objectives that go beyond "arbitrary" landscape thresholds include conservation of specifically identified Core and Linkage areas, maintenance of ecological processes, and determination as to whether successful reproduction is occurring. These site-specific objectives are consistent with the approach to be taken for Group 3 species as identified in the MSHCP.

    • For San Jacinto Valley crownscale, species-specific objectives call for Conservation of 6,900 acres of habitat in three specifically-identified Core Areas. Objectives 4 and 5 call for maintenance of floodplain processes along the San Jacinto River and Salt Creek. Features of these objectives that go beyond "arbitrary" landscape thresholds include conservation of specifically identified core areas and requirements to maintain floodplain processes. These site-specific objectives are consistent with the approach to be taken for Group 3 species as identified in the MSHCP.

    • For arroyo toad, species-specific objectives call for Conservation of 1,602 acres of suitable breeding habitat, plus inclusion of at least nine specific Core Areas and 7,005 acres of necessary suitable upland Habitat. Objective 5 calls for maintenance or, if feasible, restoration of ecological processes in occupied Habitat and suitable new areas within the Criteria Area. Objective 6 calls for maintenance of breeding populations at a minimum of 80 percent of the conserved breeding locations as measured by the presence/absence of juvenile toads, tadpoles, or egg masses across any five consecutive years. Features of these objectives that go beyond "arbitrary" landscape thresholds include Conservation of specifically identified Core Areas, maintenance of ecological processes, and maintenance of successful reproduction. These site-specific objectives are consistent with the approach to be taken for Group 3 species as identified in the MSHCP. With respect to the perceived "arbitrary" nature of the conservation "thresholds," it should be noted that a number of the species-specific conservation objectives call for documentation of species presence and continued use at 75% of identified locations as measured at 8-year intervals. This conservation objective is also identified as General Management Measure 8 on page 5-7 of the Draft MSHCP. General Management Measure 8 recognizes that this threshold may need to be refined as more information is gathered during the long-term implementation process for the MSHCP. As stated on page 5-8 of the Draft MSHCP: "The identified 75% threshold is the default lower limit (unless otherwise specified) and may be modified as new data are collected over time. Thresholds shall be determined by the RMOC which will meet five years after initial permit issuance and every year thereafter to evaluate new data and review species-specific trigger points. It is anticipated that sufficient data will be available to determine species-specific trigger points for management activities by Year 15 after permit issuance."

    With respect to references to the San Diego MSCP, it is incorrect to state that the MSHCP permits discontinuation of survey requirements once reserve assembly criteria are met. As noted above, the species-specific conservation objectives for the relevant species must be met before surveys may be discontinued and the species-specific conservation objectives require more than achievement of Reserve Assembly criteria. With respect to burrowing owl, Objective 6 for this species states: "Pre-construction presence/absence surveys for burrowing owl within the survey area where suitable habitat is present will be conducted for all Covered Activities through the life of the permit (emphasis added). Surveys will be conducted within 30 days prior to disturbance. Take of active nests will be avoided. Passive relocation (use of one way doors and collapse of burrows) will occur when owls are present outside the nesting season." Objective 7 calls for creation of translocation sites within the MSHCP Conservation Area. These requirements are equivalent to the requirements from the San Diego MSCP cited in the comment. In addition, language has been added to Sections 6.1.3 and 6.3.2 of the Final MSHCP to require review by the RMOC and MPA of findings supporting conclusions that species-specific conservation objectives have been met and surveys may be discontinued.

    F-73 Section 6.5 of the Draft MSHCP includes the Wildlife Agencies in the notification process for Criteria Refinements with a 60-day review and response period and a 30-day meet and confer period, if needed. As noted on page 6-71, Wildlife Agencies concurrence is required for Criteria Refinements proposed to develop new Criteria outside the Criteria Area.

    F-74 The Lead Agencies appreciate the commentor's recommendation. The Lead Agencies and CDFG have discussed the project review period in depth and feel that the current deadlines are both realistic and achievable. Moreover, these deadlines help further the goal of the MSHCP to provide a streamlined approach to project approval. This encourages stakeholder support and facilitates the project approval process.

    F-75 The MSHCP process encourages public participation. The RCA will hold regularly scheduled public meetings in compliance with the Ralph M. Brown Act Open Meeting requirements to encourage public participation and review of the MSHCP. (Draft MSHCP, p. 6-77.) Additionally, findings made by the Permittees are public records and are available to the public for their review and comment as are the required reports. Comments may be made either in writing or orally at the meetings. Further, for all public and private projects within the MSHCP Conservation Area that are subject to CEQA, and a negative declaration or EIR is prepared, the public has the opportunity to comment and participate in the process. The Lead Agencies agree that a standardized form is appropriate and will recommend that such a form be developed by RCA staff.

    F-76 If all project approvals have been granted, there is no mechanism for a Permittee to impose fees.

    F-77 Minor Amendments are amendments to the MSHCP of a minor or technical nature where the effect on Covered Species, levels of Take and Permittees' ability to implement the MSHCP are not significantly different than those described in the MSHCP as originally adopted. A list of minor amendments is included in the IA in Section 20.4.1 and Section 6.10.2 of the MSHCP. Moreover, existing roads within the Criteria Area are not anticipated to be included in the total acreage of Additional Reserve Lands. (Draft MSHCP, p. 3-16.) Therefore, the Lead Agencies anticipate that the listed Minor Amendments will have minimal, if any, impacts to the Covered Species and thus no increase in the MSHCP Conservation Area is necessary for the minor extension of cut or fill slopes outside of the right-of-way limits for covered roadways.

    F-78 The Lead Agencies agree that the review opportunities raised in the comment should be added to Section 6.11 of the MSHCP.

    F-79 The Covered Activities discussed in Section 7.0 of the MSHCP are those for which Take of Covered Species would be authorized under the MSHCP. The MSHCP authorizes only Take of Covered Species associated with the Covered Activities. Any other environmental impacts associated with construction of the Covered Activities would be addressed as part of project-specific review of those activities.

    The effects of Covered Activities on Covered Species for which Take will be authorized in the MSHCP have been addressed in a variety of ways. All Covered Activities would be subject to the requirements of the MSHCP and the Permittee authorizing the Covered Activities would need to comply with MSHCP requirements including design of projects consistent with the MSHCP Criteria, survey and other requirements. In addition, Section 7.0 of the MSHCP incorporates measures to avoid and minimize effects of Covered Activities on Covered Species both within and outside the Criteria Area. Within the Criteria Area, siting, design, construction, operations and maintenance guidelines are presented for Covered Activities to ensure that they are designed and operated in accordance with MSHCP requirements. For roads that are considered to be Covered Activities within the Criteria Area but not within PQP Lands, acreage estimates for those activities have been quantified and netted out of the Additional Reserve Lands criteria and calculations to ensure that Additional Reserve Lands are acquired for conservation and are not used for construction of Covered Activities. For Covered Activities within PQP Lands, a tradeout provision is incorporated in the MSHCP that requires that acreage be added to the MSHCP Conservation Area to compensate for any acreage reductions associated with construction of Covered Activities on PQP Lands. A similar tradeout provision is incorporated in MSHCP Section 7.0 for future facilities that may be proposed within the Criteria Area but cannot be defined at this time. Covered Activities both inside and outside the Criteria Area will be required to comply with the Narrow Endemics, riparian/riverine/vernal pools, and additional survey needs and procedures requirements of the MSHCP. In addition to these features incorporated in the MSHCP, Section 4.1 of the MSHCP EIR/EIS discusses the effects of Covered Activities on biological resources with respect to Vegetation Communities, listed Covered Species, non-listed Covered Species, non-covered species, Cores and Linkages, relationship to adopted or approved HCPs and NCCPs and Edge Effects. See also Response G-5.

    F-80 Net reserve acreage was adjusted for planned road and trail facilities for which it was possible to develop quantitative estimates at this time. These net reserve acreages are shown in Tables 7-4, 7-5, 7-6, 7-7, 7-8, 7-9, 7-10, 7-11, 7-12 and 7-18 of the MSHCP. Planned facilities for which it is not currently possible to develop quantitative estimates are defined as future facilities in Section 7.3.8.

    The comment refers to a table on page 7-6 of the Draft MSHCP and notes references to 12 feet of graded shoulder and other factors on that table. The hard-copy published draft MSHCP does not include a Table on page 7-6 but rather a discussion of maintenance of existing roads within PQP Lands. The Plan allows ongoing maintenance of existing roads within existing rights-of-way within PQP Lands and within the Criteria Area subject to guidelines included in Section 7.3.5. Effects on biological resources associated with these existing roadways are not expected to change from existing conditions due to maintenance activities conducted according to the guidelines in the MSHCP.

    Since acreage of known planned facilities has been netted out of the Additional Reserve Lands calculations and a tradeout provisions for PQP Lands is incorporated in the MSHCP for future facilities, over-counting referenced in the comment would not occur.

    The comment also makes reference to "edge-impacted areas" that should be netted out of the Additional Reserve Lands acreage. This issue is addressed in the MSHCP in several ways. For those planned facilities for which acreages could be quantified and an acreage netted out of the Additional Reserve Lands, rights-of-way larger than actual disturbance areas were assumed in the acreage calculations. In addition, the Final MSHCP Section 7 includes additional language for specific facilities within areas where Edge Effects are particularly important considerations. For future facilities for which a tradeout provision is incorporated in the MSHCP, the analysis would focus on both direct and indirect effects. In addition, guidelines for siting, design, construction, operation and maintenance of Covered Activities include factors to address indirect effects such as Edge Effects.

    F-81 As noted in the first paragraph of Section 7.2.3, this section addressing a potential Cajalco Road realignment and widening was added to disclose the fact that the transportation agencies are considering this option as part of the ongoing analysis of CETAP Alternative 1.

    It is acknowledged that this alignment would bisect the existing Lake Mathews multi-species reserve and could affect wildlife movement. For this reason, Section 7.2.3 does not identify the Cajalco Road realignment and widening as a Covered Activity but rather "outlines the proposed process to include the Cajalco Road realignment and widening as a Covered Activity" in the future. The process as defined in Section 7.2.3 would address the concerns expressed in the comment including effects on species, effects on connectivity and effects on the existing Lake Mathews reserve. The process also acknowledges, as referenced in the comment, that project-specific mitigation for Cajalco Road "will require Conservation of land in addition to the Additional Reserve Lands" (Draft MSHCP, page 7-11). The language in the Final MSHCP with respect to demonstrating equivalency has been changed from the "will" language referenced in the comment to "shall," to make it clear that a pre-decisional conclusion has not been made. The analysis of coverage provided in the MSHCP does not constitute or circumvent the CEQA/NEPA process for CETAP.

    F-82 A comparison of the MSHCP to the ways in which future facilities are addressed in the Orange County and San Diego NCCPs is not valid due to the fact that the referenced NCCPs are hard-line plans with a reserve boundary defined at the outset while the MSHCP is a criteria-based plan. The MSHCP appropriately addresses future facilities in two ways. Section 7.2.4 addresses future facilities within PQP Lands and Section 7.3.8 addresses future facilities inside the Criteria Area. Future facilities within PQP Lands may be considered to be analogous to future facilities within a defined hard-line reserve area and, as discussed, in Section 7.2.4, concurrence by the Wildlife Agencies is required for such future facilities. Future facilities within the Criteria Area addressed in Section 7.3.8 take into consideration the fact that the 153,000 acres of Additional Reserve Lands are anticipated to be assembled from within the approximately 310,000 acre Criteria Area. Given this context, a variety of future facilities could be located within the Criteria Area that would not affect the MSHCP Conservation Area. In fact, since such facilities would not be allowable uses within the MSHCP Conservation Area (see the last paragraph of Response F-46), they could not result in fragmentation nor could the MSHCP Conservation Area be considered to be a "convenient dumping ground" for such projects.

    F-83 Section 7.3.2 acknowledges that single-family home construction should be evaluated to ensure that Reserve Assembly options are not precluded by such construction. As noted in the last paragraph of Section 7.3.2, and in Section 6.11, reporting of the accumulated single-family home construction will occur on an annual basis to "insure that appropriate assembly of the MSHCP Conservation Area is occurring." Given the existing trends reported in Section 7.3.2, it was determined that this frequency of reporting and monitoring would be sufficient to evaluate the accumulated effects of such single-family home construction and adjust Reserve Assembly priorities if determined to be appropriate. With respect to the fragmentation issues raised in the comment, see Response F-46 for discussion of the ways in which fragmentation and configuration will be addressed during the Reserve Assembly process.

    F-84 As discussed in Section 7.3.3, effects on Reserve Assembly associated with the potential conversion of 10,000 acres of New Agricultural Lands within the Criteria Area will be evaluated on an annual basis using a comprehensive digital data base of existing agricultural lands developed by the County and review of digital aerial topography that can be compared with the existing agricultural lands data base. This approach incorporates the necessary technical information to identify and characterize new agricultural uses on an annual basis. Annual review was determined to be an appropriate interval for review base on current trends in new agriculture and the size of individual agricultural operations in western Riverside County. In addition, agricultural activities that could result in addition of substantial structures or other uses that may permanently degrade resources would likely require discretionary approvals by the County and would therefore be subject to the terms and conditions of the MSHCP. It is recognized that such new agriculture could occur in areas later acquired for the MSHCP Conservation Area and that management strategies may need to be employed to assure conservation value. These factors would need to be considered at the time such lands were evaluated for Reserve Assembly. The adaptive approach to Reserve Assembly would provide opportunities to adjust for appropriate reserve design considerations. The 50% assumption referenced in the comment was based on the relationship of the acreage of Additional Reserve Lands (153,000 acres) to the acreage of the Criteria Area (310,000 acres). It is recognized that agricultural activities often occur on more gently sloping, lowland areas but not all these areas are proposed to be conserved.

    F-85 The referenced maintenance activities would occur within rights-of-way that have been analyzed and accounted for in the MSHCP Plan and would not reduce acreage of the MSHCP Conservation Area. As noted in Table 7-3 of the Draft Plan, of the 1,393 miles of existing roads within the Criteria Area, only approximately 33 miles are unpaved. Paving would occur within rights-of-way that have been analyzed and accounted for in the Plan. Paving would not result in changes to the classifications of these roads and substantial increases in trips are not anticipated to occur. Given these factors, impacts associated with paving are anticipated to be negligible and are accounted for in the Plan.

    F-86 It is assumed that this comment references the second bullet on page 7-41 which refers to replacement with equivalent conservation lands of any portion of any Orange County/Riverside County corridor alignment that affects PQP Lands. This bullet simply refers to general criteria for this corridor and is not intended to imply that fragmentation by highways through the MSHCP Conservation Area can be compensated by simple replacement. The specific criteria/considerations for each corridor alignment presented later in the discussion provided in the Plan would need to be addressed in the consistency determinations in addition to the general replacement criterion referenced in the comment.

    F-87 The non-tunneled portions of the identified alignments are generally outside of the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    F-88 Whether amendment of the Central/Coastal NCCP would be required to facilitate the projects addressed on pages 7-41 to 7-42 of the Draft MSHCP is an issue to be resolved by the permittees involved in that NCCP process and the Wildlife Agencies, not the Permittees under the MSHCP.

    F-89 It is unclear what the commentor's reference to a "conceptual consistency findings" refers. Numerous provisions have been included in the MSHCP to ensure that the Permittees and Third Parties Granted Take Authorization avoid, minimize and mitigate adverse impacts associated with their activities. (See MSHCP, Section 6.0 et seq.) Indeed, in order to issue Take Authorization under the Plan, USFWS must find that the Permittees will, to the maximum extent practicable, minimize and mitigate the impacts of any Take. (See 16 U.S.C. § 1539(a)(2)(B)(ii).)

    The Lead Agencies believe that the Plan adequately self mitigates impacts through its provisions including, acquisition of Additional Reserve Lands, restraints on impacts to sensitive species and areas, and the other conditions and requirements set forth in the MSHCP to fully offset any adverse impacts on Covered Species. Moreover, the Wildlife Agencies hands are not "tied." The Wildlife Agencies will ultimately determine whether the MSHCP meets state and federal Take Permit issuance criteria.

    F-90 As stated in Section 7.3.7, siting options for flood control facilities are limited since the locations for these facilities are largely dictated by drainage features and topography. Efforts will, however, be undertaken to avoid and minimize impacts in the siting, design, construction, operation and maintenance of flood control facilities. The current and routine activities referenced in the comment are addressed in a maintenance agreement between RCFCWCD and CDFG. The maintenance agreement is currently in the process of being updated and extended and is referenced in the Final MSHCP.

    F-91 New electric transmission lines would be regarded as future facilities. As discussed in Response F-82, future facilities would be subject to a tradeout provision.

    F-92 At 310,000 acres, the Criteria Area is approximately double the 153,000 acres of Additional Reserve Lands. Development is anticipated to occur in those portions of the Criteria Area not acquired as Additional Reserve Lands and such Development would need to be supported by infrastructure. Therefore, it is not reasonable to require that future facilities be located outside the Criteria Area as a first priority.

    F-93 See the last paragraph of Response F-80 for discussion of the ways in which Edge Effects of Covered Activities, including recreational and interpretive facilities, have been addressed in the MSHCP. As also discussed in the first paragraph of Response F-80, estimated acreages for such recreational and interpretive facilities have been netted out of the Additional Reserve Lands.

    F-94 It is recognized that equestrian and mountain bike uses may have effects on resources in the MSHCP Conservation Area. For this reason, the guidelines on page 7-75 call for equestrian and mountain bike use, to be limited and call for development of an access control system if mountain bike use becomes heavy and problematic. This issue will need to be addressed by Reserve Managers, as will the issue of pets, if it becomes a problem.

    F-95 The LDMF will still be required after completion of Reserve Assembly. Fees collected may be used to retire debt resulting from land acquisitions, or to fund capital expenditures associated with management activities.

    F-96 The assembly of the reserve system to allow effective and efficient management is anticipated. However, given the location of remaining habitat and the need to provide linkages to new and existing Core Areas, management costs should not be underestimated.

    F-97 See Response F-6.

    F-98 The use of the incentive programs is intended to account for a portion of the Conservation called for in the Plan. The commentor's observations do not take into account the ability to use acquisition to stitch together rural lands into a coherent configuration to meet the criteria and reserve design objectives. Further, Section 8.6.4 recognizes the potential for the Conservation resulting from one or more of the "Conservation Tools" or incentives to fall short of projections. If this occurs, the funding plan will need to be adjusted to offset the shortfall. Conservation through the use of incentives is a critical element of the MSHCP and should be encouraged.

    F-99 Caltrans' contribution to the Plan is consistent with the overall funding plan for local mitigation of new Development. Mitigation for new Development, including Caltrans and State Parks, will result in the conservation and management of 103,000 acres. Caltrans represents an important component of the funding plan, not only in terms of total dollars but also in the potential for early funding to bank mitigation. Funding available in the early years of implementing the Plan will be especially important both in terms of meeting property owner expectations and also in lessening the impacts of inflation by purchasing lands earlier rather than latter. Caltrans will also contribute to the Management and Monitoring Program either by providing staff or funding.

    F-100 See Response F-17. Overall, the 3% to 5% proposed represents more than projects have historically paid in mitigation. The reduction in the time to complete environmental review may partially offset the increase in mitigation. However, exceeding 5% would make mitigating under the MSHCP problematic by further reducing funding for the planning, design and construction of critical infrastructure. The proposed funding plan accomplishes the implementation of the MSHCP. See Sections 8.6.1 to 8.6.5 of the Draft MSHCP for additional funding information.

    F-101 See Responses F-59 and F-60 for discussion of the relationship of the MSHCP to the "no net loss" concept referenced in this comment. It is not correct to state that surveys could be discontinued for southern willow flycatcher when it is determined that 40 pairs are protected. See Response F-72 for discussion of the circumstances under which surveys for willow flycatcher could be discontinued. In addition, language has been added to Sections 6.1.3 and 6.3.2 of the Final MSHCP to require review by the RMOC and MPA of findings supporting conclusions that species-specific conservation objectives have been met and surveys may be discontinued.

    With respect to the Riverside fairy shrimp, while it is accurate that an approximately 33 percent of Riverside fairy shrimp habitat would be located outside MSHCP Conservation Area and subject to Take, 85 percent of existing vernal pool and playa habitats would be preserved within the MSHCP Conservation Area. It should be noted that a majority of the habitat subject to Take is located along the San Jacinto River in an area consisting mainly of playa habitat, not vernal pool habitat. Take would occur, but approximately 5/8 of the known population would be preserved.

    With respect to tri-colored blackbird, the 74% reference in the comment is an excerpt from the conservation analysis for this species that is misleading when considered in isolation. The Take discussion for tri-colored blackbird in Table 9-2 states that Take of the tricolored blackbird is difficult to quantify due to limited knowledge of its distribution and abundance within the Plan Area. The MSHCP conservation analysis for this species acknowledges this lack of information and designates tri-colored blackbird as a Group 3 species for which species-specific conservation objectives are required. Among these are objectives to include five Core Areas in the MSHCP Conservation Area, maintain at five year intervals continued use and reproduction within at least one of the identified Core Areas, ensure habitat support functions by maintaining hydrologic processes in the identified Core Areas, and including within the MSHCP Conservation Area 100-foot buffers around any known nesting locations. The conservation analysis notes that this species has specific primary habitat requirements for breeding (dense emergent vegetation) and uses a wide variety of open habitats as secondary habitat for foraging. This species breeds in colonies in unpredictable locations so the extent and location of secondary habitat used by the species cannot be specifically located or quantified. The 74% reference in the comment refers to the portion of the Take statement that describes the acreage of available secondary habitat that would be outside the MSHCP Conservation Area. This acreage includes the wide variety of open habitats that could be used by tri-colored blackbird for foraging including agriculture, a Vegetation Community that is not a focus for Conservation in the MSHCP. In fact, of the 193,180 acres of secondary habitat for this species identified in the Take discussion as being outside the MSHCP Conservation Area, 101,090 acres are agriculture, as shown in the conservation analysis for tri-colored blackbird in Volume II, Section B of the MSHCP. The Take discussion in Table 9-2 goes on to note that only 60 acres, or 13%, of the identified primary habitat for this species would be located outside the MSHCP Conservation Area, and these areas would be subject to the Section entitled Protection of Species Associated with Riparian/Riverine Areas/Vernal Pool policies in Section 6.1.2 of the MSHCP. It is a consideration of all of these factors that results in the determination that this species will be conserved under the MSHCP.

    F-102 See Responses F-61 and F-72 for discussion of the circumstances under which survey requirements may be discontinued. The disposition of lands conserved as a result of surveys that could be "released" if and when survey requirements are discontinued would be determined on a case-by-case basis. It should be noted that the extent of such lands is anticipated to be minimal due to the fact that the thresholds for Conservation of such lands are based on the determination that such lands would have long-term conservation value. This indicates that most of the lands conserved as a result of surveys would also be determined to be desirable for acquisition for the MSHCP Conservation Area. Conservation of disjunct populations is not considered to be of value to long-term conservation. The approach to surveys and the circumstances under which survey requirements could be discontinued in combination with achieving species-specific conservation objectives have been determined in the species-specific conservation analyses to be adequate for Conservation of the relevant Covered Species and additional avoidance or mitigation has not been determined to be necessary to offset the Take authorized under the MSHCP. In addition, language has been added to Sections 6.1.3 and 6.3.2 of the Final MSHCP to require review by the RMOC and MPA of findings supporting conclusions that species-specific conservation objectives have been met and surveys may be discontinued.

    Participation in the MSHCP does not relieve Permittees of their obligation to review projects under CEQA, nor does it usurp the Permittees' ability to control the CEQA process for the projects they are considering. However, it is the Lead Agencies' position that the impacts of future projects to Covered Species within the MSHCP Plan Area will be reduced below a level of significance through the MSHCP. This includes impacts to Narrow Endemic and "additional survey" species.

    F-103 See Response F-72 for discussion of burrowing owl, arroyo toad and Aguanga kangaroo rat. In addition to the specific discussion of burrowing owl at the beginning of the response, the response notes that Objective 6 of the conservation analysis for the burrowing owl calls for pre-construction surveys in perpetuity 30 days prior to grading within suitable habitat for burrowing owl and passive relocation of any owls observed. This would avoid the possibility that animals could be "bulldozed in their burrows." It is acknowledged that majority of primary and secondary habitat for the burrowing owl would be outside the MSHCP Conservation Area under the MSHCP. However, this species is designated a Group 3 species with species-specific conservation objectives and management actions because it is recognized that specific actions will be necessary for this species to persist in the Plan Area.

    F-104 See Response F-102.

    F-105 See Responses G-15, G-16 and G-17 for discussion of conservation of grassland anticipated under the MSHCP. Rural Mountainous areas outside the MSHCP Conservation are not used as partial justification for coverage for any species. Rural Mountainous areas outside the MSHCP Conservation Area are depicted on the MSHCP Plan map (Figure 3-1) and quantified in the tabular summaries for individual species analyses in Volume II, Section B of the Plan to provide context in understanding the types of land uses that might be located adjacent to the MSHCP Conservation Area. No assumptions regarding conservation within these areas are made in the MSHCP and it is not assumed these areas would contribute to Conservation of Covered Species. With respect to California horned lark, the Take discussion for this species referenced in the comment reflects the fact that this species is widely distributed throughout the Plan Area in open habitats. As with the discussion of tri-colored blackbird in Response F-101, this factual excerpt from the Take statement needs to be considered in the context of the overall conservation analysis for this species, which indicates that the species appears to occupy several core areas within the Plan Area and respond well to landscape level management. Three of the identified core areas and a portion of the fourth core area would be conserved for this species as would other identified locations including Lake Elsinore grasslands, Santa Rosa Plateau and Wilson Valley. The conservation analysis for this species notes that it appears to be present repeatedly in these conserved locations and is expected to persist in these areas if they are managed as part of the overall MSHCP Conservation Area.

    As with California horned lark, the Take discussion for loggerhead shrike referenced in the comment needs to be considered in the context of the overall conservation analysis for this species. This species is widely but patchily distributed throughout the lower elevations of the Plan Area and uses open habitats, including agriculture. Of the 318,540 acres of open habitat outside the MSHCP Conservation Area identified in the conservation analysis for this species, 143,320 acres (or 44%) are agriculture. Despite this loss of open habitat suitable for this species, it is considered to be conserved under the MSHCP because the MSHCP Conservation Area would include 167,590 acres of suitable habitat for this species and would conserve at least 6 of 12 identified breeding areas. In addition, Objective 3 for this species requires maintenance of continued use and reproduction at 75% of the Core Areas as measured at 8-year intervals. Recommended management actions include management of linkages between Core Areas to allow for dispersal and movement of loggerhead shrike throughout the Plan Area and to locations outside the Plan Area.

    Similar considerations apply to the conservation analysis and Take discussion for a grasshopper sparrow as for California horned lark and loggerhead shrike. In addition, as stated in conservation analysis summary for this species in Table 9-2, this species will not be considered to be a Covered Species Adequately Conserved until the requirements of Objective 2 for this species have been met. These requirements include demonstration of conservation and occupation of seven Core Areas. Three of the seven Core Areas must contain a minimum of 2,000 acres of grassland and the remaining four Core Areas must contain a minimum of 500 acres of grassland. The larger Core Areas must be demonstrated to support at least 20 grasshopper sparrow pairs. Meeting these thresholds will be required before Take for grasshopper sparrow is authorized within the Plan Area.

    F-106 The focus of the conservation analysis summaries in Table 9-2 is primarily to describe the Conservation proposed for the species in the MSHCP and then to disclose the anticipated level of Take, not to justify the loss of Habitat such as is referenced in this comment. In the Biological Opinion analysis to be undertaken by the U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service prior to permit issuance, the focus of the analysis will be on assessing the Take associated with the proposed action and then determining if the measures incorporated in the Plan adequately offset the impacts of the Take. With respect to Quino checkerspot butterfly, such an analysis might begin with the recognition that Take of Quino checkerspot butterfly would be authorized within 38% of identified potential Habitat within the Plan Area and at 32% of the point locations identified for this species in the species occurrence data base. This Take is proposed to be offset in the MSHCP by inclusion of 67,493 acres of managed Habitat in the MSHCP Conservation Area, supporting 7 core populations, and 12 satellite occurrence complexes in 6 areas, in a configuration that provides for connectivity between occurrence areas. In addition, Reserve Managers will document the distribution of Quino within the MSHCP Conservation Area on an annual basis and will undertake an adaptive program to maintain and/or enhance Quino habitat to increase the value of the Habitat for Quino. The conservation analysis for this species in the MSHCP concludes that this level of Conservation will achieve the overall biological goal of the Plan for each species which is: "In the Plan Area, Conserve Covered Species and their Habitats."

    F-107 Analyses completed for the MSHCP do not indicate that Conservation of additional grassland, coastal sage scrub, riparian and woodland is necessary to make the findings for species coverage. With respect to grasslands and coastal sage scrub, see Responses G-15, G-16 and G-17. Regarding riparian and woodland communities, inclusion of 74% of these communities within the MSHCP Conservation Area coupled with the requirements for protection of riparian/riverine areas in Section 6.1.3 of the Plan and species-specific Conservation requirements were determined to be adequate to address Covered Species associated with these Habitats. To the extent that the referenced "sensitive species" are on the MSHCP Covered Species list, the MSHCP will serve as mitigation under CEQA for direct, indirect and cumulative effects to those species associated with buildout of the Plan Area. Species not on the Covered Species list would need to be addressed on a case by case basis.

    F-108 Table 9-2 presents substantial information in addition to the "broad brush use of potential suitable habitat" referenced in the comment. The Conservation Analysis Summary and Species Objectives columns refer to specifically named core areas and point locations. As an example, the Conservation Analysis Summary column for Bell's sage sparrow discloses that 12 of 14 Core Areas for this species will be conserved and notes the locations of the Core Areas. It also states that 34 recent and high precision locations will be conserved. The Take column discloses point locations anticipated to be located outside the MSHCP Conservation Area based on the MSHCP species occurrence data base. The Management Activities Summary column presents a brief description of management activities recommended for this species. In addition to the summary information presented in Table 9-2, the complete species accounts and conservation analysis for each species are presented in Volume II, Part B of the MSHCP, The Reference Document.

    F-109 See Response D-54.

    F-110 The Lead Agencies disagree with the comment. As required by both CEQA and NEPA, the Draft EIR/EIS discusses a range of reasonable alternatives in detail in Section 2. (14 Cal. Code Regs. § 15126(a); 40 CFR § 1502.14.) The County and the Service, as Lead Agencies, have the discretion to determine how may alternatives constitute a reasonable range. (See Citizens of Goleta Valley v. Board of Supervisors (1990) 52 Cal. 3d 553, 556.) Although an infinite number of alternatives and variations could be identified, neither EIRs nor EISs are required to evaluate all possible alternatives or "consider an alternative whose effects cannot be reasonably ascertained and whose implementation is considered to be remote and speculative." (14 Cal. Code Regs. § 15126(d)(5)C; 40 CFR § 1502.14(a).) As a result, the alternatives analysis in the Draft EIR/EIS focuses on those options that could be implemented and which, if implemented, would have the potential to reduce or avoid any significant adverse environmental effects associated with the proposed project. The selection of alternatives is discussed in the Alternatives Screening Document (Appendix B to the Draft EIR/EIS). The Alternatives analyzed in the Draft EIR/EIS are: the Listed, Proposed and Strong Candidate Species Alternative; the Listed and Proposed Species Alterative; the Existing Reserves Alternative; and the No Project Alternative. The four alternatives identified in the Draft EIR/EIS were chosen to foster informed decision-making and public participation.

    The Lead Agencies disagree with the comment that the "Modified Alternative" should have been discussed in more detail in the Draft EIR/EIS. The Draft EIR/EIS does discuss a Modified Reserve Configuration Alternative, which contemplated the Conservation of 165 species. However, this alternative was "screened out" prior to preparation of the document. See Response D-64. The Lead Agencies concluded that the Modified Reserve Configuration Alternative was infeasible, conflicted with Project objectives, and would not avoid or substantially lessen the Project's significant environmental impacts. (See Draft EIR/EIS, Appendix B.) The Lead Agencies are unaware of any stated goal "to produce the smallest reserve possible and still obtain species coverage." Instead, it is the goal of the MSHCP to enhance and maintain biological diversity and ecosystem processes while allowing future economic growth.

    F-111 The commentor's assertion that the levels of impact to various Vegetation Community is "significantly beyond" impacts authorized under other Southern California NCCPs is somewhat misleading. The commentor is relying on the percentages of acres impacted as compared to conserved. The 1.26 million-acre Plan Area and 500,00- acre MSHCP Conservation Area proposed by the MSHCP are considerably larger than other Southern California NCCPs and the absolute acreage of protection of various Vegetation Communities is generally greater than in other NCCPs in Southern California. See Responses G-15, G-16, and G-17.

    See Response F-59 for discussion of the MSHCP's compliance with the "no net loss" of wetlands standard referenced in the comment.

    F-112 As shown in Table 9-1, the MSHCP vegetation map includes 1,020 acres of meadows and marshes within the Plan Area of which 510 acres would be located within the MSHCP Conservation Area and 510 acres would be located outside the MSHCP Conservation Area. Of the acreage located outside the MSHCP Conservation Area, virtually all of the mapped areas are located within private inholdings in the San Bernardino National Forest in the eastern portion of the Plan Area. The majority of this acreage is Lake Hemet.

    F-113 See Responses G-15, G-16, and G-17 for a discussion of Conservation of grassland and coastal sage scrub anticipated under the MSHCP. See also Response F-111. The Lead Agencies believe that the MSHCP reduces impacts to Covered Species, including grassland-dependent species and raptors, below a level of significance through the MSHCP's self-mitigating components. Therefore, no mitigation is required. See Response F-102.

    F-114 See Responses F-61, F-72, and F-102 for discussion of the circumstances under which survey requirements could be discontinued. As discussed in these Responses, the full range of species-specific conservation requirements would need to be met prior to discontinuing survey requirements for Narrow Endemic Plant Species and additional survey species. These conservation requirements are to be met within the MSHCP Conservation Area and the species conservation analyses in the MSHCP do not assume or rely on permanent conservation of Covered Species outside the MSHCP Conservation Area. Therefore, the EIS/EIR need not analyze the effects of discontinuation of survey requirements for these species. In addition, language has been added to Sections 6.1.3 and 6.3.2 of the Final MSHCP to require review by the RMOC and MPA of findings supporting conclusions that species-specific conservation objectives have been met and surveys may be discontinued.

    With respect to the MSHCP Section 6.1.2 riparian policies referenced in the comment, protection of riparian areas conserved in accordance with Section 6.1.2 is assumed to be permanent. As stated in Section 6.1.2 (Draft MSHCP page 6-22), "If an avoidance alternative is selected, measures shall be incorporated into the project design to ensure the long-term Conservation of the areas to be avoided, and associated functions and values, through the use of deed restrictions, conservation easements, or other appropriate mechanisms." Permanently conserving these areas will provide for Conservation of species in these areas documented and conserved as a result of survey efforts in accordance with the species-specific conservation requirements for those species. For the three fairy shrimp and for least Bell's vireo these requirements call for permanent Conservation of 90 percent of the occupied portions of the property that provide for long-term conservation value. For southwestern willow flycatcher and western yellow-billed cuckoo, these requirements call for permanent Conservation of 100 percent of the occupied portions of the property that provide for long-term conservation value. See Response F-102 for discussion of the disposition of lands conserved as a result that could be "released" if and when species objectives are met. Sections 6.1.3 and 6.3.2 of the Final MSHCP incorporate language requiring review by RMOC and the MPA if proposals are brought forward to release 90% conservation areas resulting from surveys if and when species objectives are met.

    F-115 With respect to Delhi fly, the species-specific conservation objectives in the Final MSHCP have been revised to require Rough Step proportionality between Conservation and loss of fly habitat if Objective 1A is selected and surveys with required Conservation for positive survey results if Objective 1B is selected. See Response F-114 for discussion of conservation measures for southwestern willow flycatcher.

    F-116 See Response F-83 for discussion of the single-family home issue and Response F-46 for discussion of Reserve Assembly.

    F-117 See Response F-84.

    F-118 As discussed in Section 7.3.3 of the Draft MSHCP, certain agricultural activities do not require discretionary approvals by the County or Cities and it would therefore not be possible to make a finding that Reserve Assembly options are not precluded on an individual basis. Instead, this will be done on an annual basis as called for in Sections 7.3.3 and 6.11 of the Draft MSHCP. See Response F-12. Because the Draft EIR/EIS concludes that the proposed MSHCP would result in the most Conservation and would provide more organized and usable habitat conservation than the Existing Reserves Alternative and the No Project Alternative, it is the Environmentally Superior/Environmentally Preferable Alternative per CEQA and NEPA (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 6.1-6). The MSHCP will not result in significant impacts to agriculture that require mitigation under CEQA or NEPA. Additionally, the MSHCP provides a process to ensure that New Agricultural Operations are in fact bona fide agricultural operations. See Section 6.2 of the Draft MSHCP and Responses F-11, F-12 and F-14. The Lead Agencies determined that five years was a significant time period to ensure that bad actors would be discouraged from taking advantage of the protections afforded Agricultural Operations under the MSHCP. See Response H2-18.

    F-119 See Response F-114 for discussion of the discontinuation of surveys in the Final EIS/EIR. In addition, language has been added to Sections 6.1.3 and 6.3.2 of the Final MSHCP to require review by the RMOC and MPA of findings supporting conclusions that species-specific conservation objectives have been met and surveys may be discontinued.

    The conclusion that impacts to non-listed Covered Species is less than significant is supported by the analysis presented in the EIS/EIR and the information presented in the MSHCP and the MSHCP Reference Document. These documents describe in detail the impact avoidance and minimization features incorporated in the MSHCP, which the EIR/EIR concludes would reduce potential impacts to non-listed Covered Species to a level below significance.

    F-120 The MSHCP has been designed to serve as mitigation for impacts resulting from Development and to meet the issuance criteria for Take Authorization for listed Covered Species. For reasons described in Table 4D on pg. 4.1-89 of the Draft EIR, impacts to the non-Covered Species could not be considered fully mitigated by the Plan. As Development is proposed, subsequent environmental review will serve to indicate whether significant impacts to non-Covered Species will occur. Because compliance with the MSHCP may not be sufficient to mitigate impacts and it is impossible to determine potential impacts with any specificity at this time, it was concluded that significant impacts to non-Covered Species could occur even if the provisions of the MSHCP were fully implemented.

    F-121 The referenced area is comprised of 1,500-2,000 acres and is within the Elsinore Area Plan. This area is overlain with the Rural Mountainous land use designation and would be subject to Riverside County General Plan guidelines with respect to such lands. In addition, this area is isolated from the remainder of the Plan Area by Cleveland National Forest and access to this area is provided from the Verdugo Canyon area of Orange County. Future use of this area will therefore be guided by both the land use designations in the Riverside County General Plan and ongoing planning efforts on adjacent lands in Orange County.

    F-122 See Response F-80 for discussion of conservation acreages and Edge Effects associated with Covered Activities.

    F-123 The 1:1 mitigation ratios for biological resources are not policies in the Draft County General Plan. The mitigation ratios are proposed mitigation measures in the EIR that analyzed the impacts of the Draft General Plan. The mitigation is proposed for impacts to habitat for, and direct mortality of, individuals of listed, proposed, or candidate species or loss of habitat occupied by such species and is as follows:

    "Preserve habitat at minimum of 1:1 replacement ratio in locations that provide long-term conservation value for impacted resource. This could involve acquisition of habitat occupied by the affected species, acquiring a key parcel that fills in a missing link or gap in a reserve that provides conservation for the species, or acquisition of credits in a mitigation bank (endorsed by the USFWS and/or CDFG) that has been established to provide conservation value for the species. Implementation of the mitigation measure shall include provisions for the preservation of such areas in perpetuity."

    F-124 The Lead Agencies do not believe that a larger MSHCP Conservation Area would reduce the potential impacts from housing and population. Instead, any potential impacts from intensification of Development outside the MSHCP Conservation Area could be increased.

    F-125 Specific impacts from Development outside the MSHCP Conservation Area will be analyzed on a project-by-project basis. It would be too speculative at this time to analyze the impacts from Development that has not occurred, in a location as yet undecided at a time to be determined at some point in the future. It is partially for this reason that the Draft EIR/EIS states that future development proposals will undergo environmental review and the project's potential environmental impacts will be identified, analyzed and mitigated. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 1.5-6.) See Response D-80.

    F-126 See Response F-95. The Local Development Mitigation Fee that may be adopted are the result of a general legislative enactment, and are not imposed to "conveniently to fit a predetermined reserve size" as purported by the comment. A nexus study is currently being prepared for the Local Development Mitigation Fee. Prior to approval of the MSHCP, the County and Cities will make the findings required by California Government Code Sections 66000 et.seq., namely that there is a "reasonablerelationship" between the "fees" that will be imposed and the impacts related to land development or use. Further, findings will have to be made that there is a "reasonable relationship" between the fees and the cost of land acquisition. Neither the MSHCP nor the EIR/EIS anticipates reducing the amount of the Local Development Mitigation Fee or counting the Additional Reserve Lands as mitigation for projects that do not participate in the MSHCP.

    F-127 See Responses G-15, G-16 and G-17 for discussion of issues pertaining to grasslands conservation and foraging habitat for raptors. The Lead Agencies believe that the MSHCP and EIR/EIS adequately address cumulative impacts to raptor species through Conservation provided in the Plan.

    F-128 The Lead Agencies believe that the loss of developable land under the Modified Reserve Alternative is relevant because one of the project objectives is to "provide incidental take authorization for the transportation, infrastructure, housing and employment base needed to accommodate projected growth in western Riverside County." Developable land is necessary to accommodate projected growth in the County. The Modified Reserve Configuration Alternative was not carried forward because it did not constitute a feasible alternative that would substantially lessen any significant impacts and it conflicted with the MSHCP's function to streamline the permitting process while accommodating growth. For example, under the Modified Reserve Configuration Alternative the number of species to be conserved remains the same and the percentage of Take is very similar. (See Appendix B, pp. B-5, B-7.) This alternative would also require the Conservation of significantly more private land (218,000 acres) than the Proposed MSHCP (153,000 acres). This results in the Conservation of an additional 65,000 acres, more than 40% more than the MSHCP. Using these additional lands for Conservation could also represent the loss of up to 227,500 low-density residential units. (See Appendix B, p. B-9.) Additionally, the Modified Reserve Configuration Alternative would be infeasible because of cost. It would take at least a 40% increase in cost to operate and manage the Modified Reserve Configuration Alternative. Moreover, 65,000 acres of land would not pay the Local Development Mitigation Fee. Thus, the Conservation of these additional acres would directly affect the availability of local funds to finance the MSHCP and conflicts with the objective requiring that the preferred alternative include a fee-based funding program that will generate sufficient revenue to contribute to the reserve's funding needs. Additionally, the Modified Reserve Configuration Alternative would conflict with project objectives because it would not be economically efficient, and it would not limit the expenditure of public and private funds to the amount necessary to maintain a reserve. Because the Lead Agencies must balance the number of acres to be conserved with the availability of funds to manage the MSHCP Conservation Area, the Modified Reserve Configuration Alternative was determined infeasible and screened out from further consideration as a project alternative. (See Appendix B, p. B-10.)


    Comment Letter F2 - Western Municipal Water District, January 14, 2003

    F2-1 The Lead Agencies are aware of the facts stated in this comment.

    F2-2 This comment expresses a concern that the designation of Cells pursuant to the implementation structure of the MSHCP will affect future operations of WMWD. The Draft MSHCP Sections 6.6 and 7.3.8 and the Draft IA, Section 11.8 provide a mechanism whereby a non-Permittee public facility provider may elect to participate in the MSHCP and thus receive Take Authorization for Covered Species when found to be in compliance with the MSHCP. Non-Permittees that do not wish to participate in the MSHCP and require no discretionary or certain City ministerial approvals from the Local Permittees are not subject to compliance with the MSHCP.

    F2-3 This comment does not raise issues relevant to the MSHCP, and therefore no further response is required.

    F2-4 See Response F2-2.

    F2-5 See Response F2-2.

    F2-6 This comment provides detail on the activities of WMWD, which is noted.

    F2-7 See Response F2-2.

    F2-8 WMWD is under no obligation to participate in the MSHCP. See Response F2-2. WMWD could choose to obtain Take Authorization under the MSHCP rather than from the Wildlife Agencies under separate processes.


    Comment Letter F3 - Joy Hale, January 7, 2003

    F3-1 The commentor appears to be addressing the County's General Plan. While the General Plan is not the subject of the MSHCP EIR/EIS, it should be noted that the General Plan has been the subject of fourteen Planning Commission hearings and three days of hearings before the Riverside County Board of Supervisors. Additionally over 2,000 written comments have been received. The General Plan has been revised in response to the public input received to date.

    The development of the MSHCP and other RCIP components has been an in-depth and multi-year process. Throughout the development of the MSHCP, the Lead Agencies have encouraged public involvement and comment. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 1.5-1.) Public involvement is an essential element of preparing a regional HCP such as the proposed MSHCP. To ensure that the proposed MSHCP reflects the priorities and vision of the County's residents, a community outreach program was a major focus of the MSHCP planning process. The County gathered initial community input throughout 1999 with public meetings and surveys. Several series of forums were also presented to residents of the County throughout 1999 and 2000. The County also arranged a web site (http:\\www.rcip.org) to serve as an information portal for the public to learn about the status of the MSHCP, upcoming meetings, and to read and/or download documents produced during the planning process. There were numerous workshops, which were open to the public and advertised widely, before the Riverside County Board of Supervisors. Numerous presentations were made at City Council meetings. Each of the fourteen City Councils and residents of each of the fourteen Cities were given the opportunity to comment on the formation of the MSHCP, as well as other elements of RCIP.

    The RCIP documents are not "anti-agriculture." To the contrary, the MSHCP provides unprecedented coverage for Agricultural Operations. The MSHCP expressly allows all existing agricultural lands in the entire MSHCP Conservation Area to continue to be used for agriculture indefinitely, including agricultural lands within the Criteria Area. As a result of implementation of the MSHCP, Existing Agricultural Operations will gain the added benefit of Take Authorization for ongoing Agricultural Operations. Additionally, Existing Agricultural Operations are exempt from the payment of Local Development Mitigation Fees or other measures. Moreover, at least 10,000 acres of New Agricultural Land can be converted within the Criteria Area. Thus, the RCIP documents, including the General Plan and the MSHCP, are clearly not anti-agriculture.

    F3-1 The Plan specifically states that the RCA does not usurp local land use controls. (See Draft MSHCP, § 6.6.2.) In fact, both the MSHCP and the IA both state that the RCA "shall not limit County or City local land use authority, or prevent a Permittee from approving a Discretionary Project." (See Draft MSHCP §§ 6.5 and 6.6.2.) Accordingly, the Lead Agencies do not believe that the County is gaining "too much control" or that local land authority will be compromised by implementation of the MSHCP. (See Response H2-40; Draft MSHCP, § 6.2.2.)

    F3-2 Every effort has been made to make the Draft EIR/EIS and the MSHCP clear and understandable. It is, however, a large plan that is complex. The Lead Agencies disagree with the implication that public comment has been discouraged. In fact, to ensure that the proposed MSHCP reflects the priorities and vision of Riverside County's residents, a community outreach program was a major focus. (See Draft EIR/EIS, § 1.5.1.) In addition to the substantial public and stakeholder participation that has occurred during the preparation of the MSHCP, the IA, the associated joint Draft EIR/EIS and related documents (see Response F3-1) the public will continue to have meaningful input and review in the post-MSHCP adoption planning process. The RCA, which will oversee implementation of the MSHCP, will be a joint powers authority and will hold regularly scheduled public meetings in compliance with the Brown Act open meeting requirements. (See Draft MSHCP, § 6.6.2.) Public participation will be permitted and encouraged at these meetings, as well as through the public processes held by the Permittees as part of the normal individual development review application process. See Responses F-43, F-75 and F-78.

    F3-3 An EIR is required to evaluate only the environmental impacts of a project. (Pub. Res. Code, § 21100.) See Response L-1. There are no anticipated impacts to recreation; however, the development of a specific project may have an impact on recreation. Therefore, future development proposals will undergo environmental review and the project's potential environmental impacts will be identified, analyzed and mitigated. (Draft EIR/EIS, pp. 1.5-6.)

    F3-4 The MSHCP covers an area of approximately 1.2 million acres. Approximately 347,000 acres of this area is already in public ownership. With the addition of the Mitigation Lands, the Plan will mitigate for impacts to Covered Species from future Development of the remaining portion of western Riverside County, both public infrastructure and private Development. It is anticipated that the acquisition of these lands will occur through the HANS Process and will be obtained from willing sellers.

    F3-5 The comment is unclear as to what the other "cost" is. To the extent that the other cost is the management of the MSHCP Conservation Area, those costs are addressed in the MSHCP funding plan.

    F3-6 Management of the MSHCP Conservation Area will be shared by local, state and federal governments. The local lands may be managed by County Parks or other public or private entity selected by the RCA made up of elected officials from the County and fourteen western Riverside County Cities.

    F3-7 One of the stated objectives of the MSHCP is to minimize the existing regulatory burden by streamlining development authorizations under FESA and CESA. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 1.2-4.) Compared to the current process where a property owner must negotiate with local, state and federal agencies at numerous points in the development process to address endangered species issues and obtain appropriate permits, the MSHCP provides a "one-stop" approach. The Plan also provides limited actions that will be required, including the requirements within the Criteria Area, that are necessary to enable issuance of Take Authorization under FESA and the NCCP Act. See Responses H2-193 and M-19.


    Comment Letter F4 - California Legislature, March 3, 2003

    F4-1 The County has met with Farm Bureau representatives on numerous occasions. The County believes that the Farm Bureau's major concerns have been addressed.

    F4-2 The statement that the proposed MSHCP Criteria Area represents a moratorium on Development does not accurately characterize the Implementing Mechanisms proposed in the Draft MSHCP. Section 6 of the Draft MSHCP clearly establishes a process whereby applications for Development within the Criteria Area will be expeditiously processed. Under no circumstances will Development be held in abeyance for lack of funds to purchase property.

    F4-3 The MSHCP provides great benefits to agriculture when compared with any other multiple species HCP. The MSHCP also provides more benefits to agricultural land owners than to any other class of property owners under the MSHCP. The MSHCP provides virtually automatic Take Authorization for all Existing Agricultural Operations in western Riverside County including within the Criteria Area. Contrary to the comment, the MSHCP provides Take Authorization for unlimited New Agriculture outside the Criteria Area. Additionally, 10,000 acres of New Agricultural Operations can occur within the Criteria Area.

    F4-4 An in-depth response has been prepared to the comments submitted by the Farm Bureau and other property owner groups, including but not limited to, Comment Letters M, L, H2, I2 and H4. As set forth in those letters, the Lead Agencies believe that the Plan does encompass the majority of the goals of the Planning Agreement. The Lead Agencies look forward to working with and resolving any outstanding issues with the Farm Bureau and other interested parties.
     


    Comment Letter F5 - Alhadeff and Solar on behalf of Ranco Real Estate Group, March 7, 2003

    F5-1 This comment raises no issues related to the Draft MSHCP, the Draft EIR/EIS or the Draft IA and no further response is necessary.

    F5-2 See Response J4-2.

    F5-3 See Response J4-2.

    F5-4 See Response K-13.

    F5-5 See Responses K-2 and K-3.

    F5-6 See Response J4-7.

    F5-7 See Responses J4-3 through J4-13.

    F5-8 See Responses J4-3 and J4-8.

    F5-9 It is not clear what is meant by the "prognosis...for Existing Core J's conservation efforts." Existing Core J provides Conservation for those Covered Species identified in Section 3.2.3 of the Plan as discussed in the analysis of the those species contained in Volume II of the MSHCP. In addition, the Plan describes the function of Existing Core J and explains the rationale for inclusion of additional land in Proposed Extension of Existing Core 6, as a means for providing connectivity between existing Conservation to the north and west. As noted in Section 3.1 of the Plan, Conservation proposed by the Plan is of an estimated quantity of land and generally proposed to be configured in a manner that would provide for the most efficient MSHCP Conservation Area possible. None of the Additional Reserve Lands are considered to be a "luxury that would be nice to have."

    Regarding the comment that "the Plan does not provide any analysis of these or any other alternatives" is unclear, as no alternatives are mentioned. The Plan does however provide an analysis of alternatives considered in the Plan development process (Draft MSHCP, Section 3.1). In addition, the cited acreage figure for Proposed Extension of Existing Core 6 is an estimate provided in the context of other estimated dimensional information for this conservation feature to provide guidance in Reserve Assembly. As noted throughout the Plan, considerable flexibility has been provided in the Reserve Assembly process to allow for variation in the ultimate configuration of the MSHCP Conservation Area, provided that the stated conservation objectives are met.

    F5-10 Proposed Extension of Existing Core 5 and Proposed Extension of Existing Core 6 provide entirely separate connectivity functions, and therefore a comparative analysis of the two proposed conservation features would not be meaningful. Proposed Extension of Existing Core 5 would ultimately contribute to connectivity between Proposed Core 2, via Existing Constrained Linkages A and E to Johnson Ranch in the northern and western portion of the Johnson Ranch parcels, and then to the western Lake Skinner area. Proposed Extension of Existing Core 6 provides connectivity from the eastern end of the Johnson Ranch parcels to the southern portion of the Lake Skinner area. Both of these features are considered to be important in maintaining connectivity within the area noted, and are not duplicative in function.

    F5-11 A discussion of avoidance and minimization of impacts related to Covered Activities, including proposed circulation element roadways, is contained in Section 7.0 of the Plan. See also Response F5-9 regarding Reserve Assembly flexibility.

    F5-12 See Responses J4-3 through J4-13.

    F5-13 See Responses K-4 and K-5.

    F5-14 See Response K-6.

    F5-15 See Response K-6.

    F5-16 See Responses K-7 and K-8.

    F5-17 See Response J4-19.

    F5-18 See Response J4-19.

    F5-19 See Response J4-19.

    F5-20 See Response K-9.

    F5-21 See Response K-10.

    F5-22 See Response K-11.

    F5-23 See Response K-12.

    F5-24 See Response J4-22.

    F5-25 See Response J4-24.

    F5-26 See Response J4-25.

    F5-27 See Response J4-26.

    F5-28 See Response J4-26.

    F5-29 See Responses J4-27 and J4-28.

    F5-30 See Response J4-29.

    F5-31 See Responses F5-9 and F5-10.

    F5-32 See Response J4-30.

    F5-33 See Responses J4-29 and J4-30.

    F5-34 See Response J4-32.

    F5-35 See Response J4-32.

    F5-36 See Responses K-7 and K-8. The purpose of the Criteria is to provide guidance in Reserve Assembly as lands are proposed for Development, or are offered for purchase. The Criteria are not intended to be used to assemble a map of the MSHCP Conservation Area prior to Reserve Assembly.

    F5-37 See Response J4-32.

    F5-38 See Response J4-33.

    F5-39 See Response J4-33.

    F5-40 See Response J4-33.

    F5-41 See Response J4-34.

    F5-42 See Response K-18.

    F5-43 See Responses K-19 through K-21.

    F5-44 See Response K-22.

    F5-45 See Response K-25.

    F5-46 See Response K-26.

    F5-47 See Response K-27.

    F5-48 See Response K-28.

    F5-49 See Response K-29.

    F5-50 See Response K-30.

    F5-51 See Response K-31.

    F5-52 See Response K-32.

    F5-53 See Response K-33.

    F5-54 See Response K-34.

    F5-55 See Responses K-35 through K-37.

    F5-56 See Response K-38.

    F5-57 See Responses K-39 through K-42.

    F5-58 See Response K-43.

    F5-59 See Response K-44.

    F5-60 See Response K-45.

    F5-61 See Response K-46.

    F5-62 See Response K-47.

    F5-63 See Response K-48.

    F5-64 See Response K-49.

    F5-65 See Response K-50.

    F5-66 See Response K-51.

    F5-67 See Response K-52.

    F5-68 See Response K-53.

    F5-69 See Response K-54.

    F5-70 See Response K-55.

    F5-85 See Response K-70.

    F5-86 See Response K-71.

    F5-87 See Response K-72.

    F5-88 See Response K-73.

    F5-89 See Response K-74.

    F5-90 See Response K-75.

    F5-91 See Response K-76.

    F5-92 See Response K-77.

    F5-93 See Response K-78.

    F5-94 See Response K-79.

    F5-95 See Response K-80.

    F5-96 See Response K-81.

    F5-97 See Response K-82.

    F5-112 See Response K-97.

    F5-113 See Response K-98.

    F5-114 See Response K-99.

    F5-115 See Response K-100.

    F5-116 See Response K-101.

    F5-117 See Responses K-51 and K-93.

    F5-118 See Response K-103.

    F5-119 See Response K-104.

    F5-120 See Response K-105.

    F5-121 See Response K-106.

    F5-122 See Response K-107.

    F5-123 See Response K-108.

    F5-124 See Response K-109.

    F5-125 See Response K-110.

    Comment Letter G

    Comment Letter G - Conservation Biology Institute, 14 January 2003

    G-1 Specific responses to the general statements in this comment are provided in response to the individual comments below.

    G-2 The process used to develop the biological components of the Plan is described in Section 3.1 of the Plan and the supporting documents referenced in Section 3.1. See also Responses R-19, R-20, R-21, and R-25 for additional discussion of the process used to develop the biological components of the Plan. It is uncertain what the comment is referring to with respect to the process used to analyze the Plan. With respect to Covered Species, the species accounts presented in Volume II, Section B of the Plan and in summary fashion in Section 9.0 of the Plan provide the conservation requirements for the Covered Species and describe the ways in which those conservation requirements are met by features incorporated in the Plan. In addition, the MSHCP Conservation Area Description presented in Volume II, Section A of the Plan and in summary fashion in Section 3.2.2 of the Plan describes the ecosystem features incorporated in the Plan including factors such as representativeness of Bioregions, Vegetation Communities, soils, patch size of conserved areas and edge affected land after Reserve Assembly. Analysis of the degree to which the Plan meets legal requirements is properly included in the findings supporting ultimate Permit issuance. Since specific comments are not given on the perceived shortcomings of the process used to develop and analyze the Plan, a more detailed response is not possible.

    G-3 See Response G-2 regarding information in the Plan on the methods used to develop and analyze the MSHCP Conservation Area. It is acknowledged that the Plan is a criteria-based plan and does not include a reserve design map. This is an acceptable approach for a multiple species HCP and/or NCCP. See Response D-8. Specific requirements to assure reserve integrity are incorporated in the Plan. In particular, a four-component Conservation Strategy for each Covered Species was developed as described in Section 9.2 incorporating a global biological goal, global biological objectives, species-specific objectives, and monitoring and management activities. These requirements are binding for each Covered Species. In addition, Section 6.0 of the Plan includes detailed implementation measures, many of which address specific biological issues, that are binding on the Permittees. Since specific comments are not given on the assumptions, methods and policy implications, a more detailed response is not possible.

    G-4 See Responses G-2 and G-3 for discussion of features incorporated in the Plan that describe the conservation planning and analysis process. Since specific comments are not given regarding input from the Scientific Review Panel that was not considered, a specific response to that comment cannot be provided. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of: Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003.

    G-5 See Responses F-79 and F-80 for discussion of the ways in which direct and indirect effects of Covered Activities were considered in evaluating levels of Take under the Plan. With respect to the "new roads" referenced in the comment, a new Table 7-4 will be included in Section 7.0 of the Final MSHCP that demonstrates that the vast majority of road improvements within the Criteria Area are anticipated to involve improvements to existing roadways and not construction of new roadways. Fragmentation and Edge Effects associated with the existing roadways already exists within the Plan Area. In some cases, roadway improvements may provide opportunities to improve existing roadway designs for the benefit of Covered Species.

    See Response R-20 for discussion of the process used to arrive at the approximately 500,000 acre size for the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    Analysis in the Plan is not limited to "gross habitat acreages inside the conceptual reserve design" but rather on specific requirements identified for Cores and Linkages and for species-specific conservation objectives. For Cores and Linkages, specific conservation targets are identified for total acres, interior and edge areas and perimeter to area ratios. For species conservation objectives, requirements for suitable total suitable habitat to be conserved are given along with number, location and size of Core Areas, as appropriate, populations or localities of species to be conserved, and measurements of reproductive success.

    Since specific comments are not provided on the species for which levels of conservation are "unjustifiably low" a specific response cannot be provided. Specific conservation requirements are identified for each Covered Species as noted in Response G-3.

    G-6 See Responses R-19, R-20, R-21 and R-25 for discussion of the process used to determine the 500,000 acre size of the MSHCP Conservation Area. This was not a top-down process but rather a process that began with stakeholder direction to develop an initial Conceptual Conservation Scenario that would conserve the maximum number of species on species lists developed by the Wildlife Agencies in concert with the MSHCP Advisory Committee and address NCCP requirements. The initial Conceptual Conservation Scenario represented a first-cut "bottoms-up application of the principles of reserve design and the requirements of the species and habitats in question" that was refined over time through analysis and stakeholder direction and resulted in the reserve design incorporated in the Draft MSHCP.

    As noted in Section 3.1.3, the conservation planning process described in Section 3.1 of the Plan incorporates 1) identification of overall MSHCP goals; 2) compilation of existing data; 3) identification of applicable conservation planning principles; 4) review of reserve selection models and methods; 5) development of an initial Conceptual Conservation Scenario; 6) completion of an informal gap analysis; 7) identification of alternatives and selection of a proposed alternative; 8) development and refinement of the Conceptual Reserve Design/Criteria -Based Plan. This is a typical planning approach and is consistent with many conservation planning processes. Since specific comments are not provided on accepted standards and precedents of regional conservation plans, a more specific response cannot be provided.

    G-7 Section 3.2.3 of the Plan targets total acreages, edge and interior acreages, and perimeter to area ratios for the Cores and Linkages to be incorporated in the MSHCP Conservation Area. In addition, for each Area Plan presented in Sections 3.3.2 through 3.3.17, an acreage target is provided for the entire Area Plan, and for each Subunit within the Area Plan. Planning Species and Biological Issues and Considerations are also defined for each Area Plan Subunit. These parameters will specifically direct Reserve Assembly. See Responses F-46, F-47, F-48 and F-50 for additional discussion of the Reserve Assembly process. The MSHCP Conservation Area Description and Species Accounts in Volume II, Sections A and B, respectively, of the Plan are based on achieving the conservation targets for Cores and Linkages and Area Plans and Area Plan Subunits noted in Sections 3.2.3 and 3.3.2 through 3.3.17. As noted in Response G-3, a specific Conservation Strategy isidentified for each Covered Species and binding implementation policies are incorporated in the Plan. Section 3.1.5 of the Plan discusses reserve selection models and methods and the relationship of those models and methods to the conservation planning process for the Plan.

    G-8 See Response F-46, F-47, F-48 and F-50 for discussion of the ways in which assurances are incorporated in the Reserve Assembly process. As noted in Response G-7, standards to be met are incorporated in the Cores and Linkages descriptions in Section 3.2.3 of the Plan, in the Conservation Strategy for each Covered Species, and the implementation measures in Section 6.0 of the Plan, not in the Area Plan Criteria referenced in the comment.

    G-9 The Core and Linkage map presented in Section 3.2.3 is based on the evolution of the Conceptual Conservation Scenario presented in the August 9, 1999 MSHCP Draft Proposal (DUDEK, 1999) which was followed by preparation of a March 9, 2000 Technical Memorandum that included identification of initial Conservation Analysis Units. As described in Section 3.1.7 of the Plan, this process included an informal gap analysis that was biologically based and did not consider planned land uses. Ongoing refinements incorporated the Conservation Analysis Units into Alternative 1 as presented in the MSHCP Alternatives Development Document (DUDEK, October 4, 2000). These various iterations all referenced Cores and Linkages which were ultimately represented on the schematic Cores and Linkages map presented in Figure 3.2.3 of the Plan. This process was biologically based and reflected existing conditions on the ground, including existing land uses. Planned land uses were not a factor in the identification of Cores and Linkages.

    With respect to identification of particular areas included or excluded, and the implications on species protection, this information is available for review in several ways. The range of alternatives presented in the Alternatives Development Document depicts alternative conservation scenarios that exclude certain Cores and Linkages and the implications on species protection are clearly noted in the document. This information is expanded upon in Section 4.1 of the MSHCP EIS/EIR along with a discussion of the relationship of the proposed Plan to the missing linkages identified in the California Wilderness Coalition report (November 2000).

    G-10 The Draft MSHCP analyses incorporated the use of the best scientific and commercial data available. No additional data is provided in this comment that could potentially affect the analyses performed. See Response D-17. Data sources and limitations used to develop the Plan are described in Section 2.1 of the Plan. As noted, these data included substantial information in addition to "vegetation communities broadly lumped together" and these lumped Vegetation Communities are not used as proxies for species habitats or distributions. These data sources include a coastal sage scrub habitat quality model developed specificallyfor the Plan Area; uncollapsed Vegetation Community data that were used in many sub-analyses in the species accounts; specific soils and elevation data that were used in many of the sub-analyses for the plant species accounts; and species occurrence data from a wide variety of sources. As described in Section 2.1.2, Bioregions were specifically identified and mapped for the Plan Area and used in the analysis process to evaluate the representativeness of various alternative scenarios.

    G-11 Requirements for baseline surveys and ongoing data collection regarding habitat conditions and Covered Species presence and reproductive success are incorporated in the Monitoring Plan presented in Section 5.3 of the Plan. Surveys conducted as part of the Monitoring Plan will be conducted for the term of the Permit as described in Section 5.3 See Responses F-61 and F-72 regarding the circumstances under which survey requirements by public and private applicants for development projects may be discontinued. In addition, language has been added to Sections 6.1.3 and 6.3.2 of the Final MSHCP to require review by the RMOC and MPA of findings supporting conclusions that species-specific conservation objectives have been met and surveys may be discontinued.

    G-12 The MSHCP is a criteria-based plan and therefore, a specific reserve map is not included in the Plan. However, guidance and requirements are incorporated in the Plan to assure that Reserve Assembly occurs in accordance with the requirements of the Plan and that the Conservation Strategy for each Covered Species is met. See Responses G-7 and G-8 for additional discussion of this issue.

    There was no policy decision to not explicitly map biological resource distributions. Summary biological resource maps are presented in Sections 2.0, 3.0 and 9.0 of the Plan in Volume II Sections A and B. Species occurrence maps for the Covered Species are not presented in the Plan due to the volume of the data and the difficulty in portraying it in a readable fashion. Digital species occurrence data were publically available during the MSHCP planning process on the UCR MSHCP website.

    G-13 PQP Lands are comprised of many different ownerships. In some instances, the lands are currently managed under existing HCPs. Only limited (if any) additional management may be required for these lands to contribute to the MSHCP Conservation Area. The majority of the PQP Lands are in the National Forests. The County, USFWS, and CDFG have discussed with the Forest Service the desirability for their new Forest Management Plans to reflect the conservation objectives of the MSHCP. The Forest Service is obligated under the National Forest Management Act to manage their lands for the benefit of species. Moreover, the Lead Agencies will work with the Forest Service to develop and enter into an MOU regarding management of Forest Service land. Other PQP Lands are held by public entities that may have different responsibilities to manage their lands consistent with the goals of the MSHCP. A responsibility of the RCA once formed will be to work with these entities to achieve agreements on how their lands will be managed. The Lead Agencies fully expect that MOUs or other agreements will be utilized to document the way lands are to be managed in the future. Management and Adaptive Management funds may be made available to these entities when agreement is reached on how they will manage their lands.

    It is important to realize that the lands identified as PQP are highly unlikely to be developed in the future and currently provide habitat value to a wide variety of species. It is unlikely that these lands will be materially altered to the point that they would lose their current value to species.

    G-14 The Lead Agencies concur with the comments regarding reserve design capturing "the majority of high-priority biological resources areas and linkages." Responses to the remainder of the comment are more specifically addressed below.

    G-15 The focus of the conservation analysis for the MSHCP is on the conservation requirements of the individual Covered Species and not on achieving particular percentage targets for Vegetation Communities. As discussed in Response R-33, the individual species analyses incorporate a variety of species requirements including Conservation of suitable Habitat, Conservation of core populations and other localities, reserve configuration issues and management issues such as addressing known threats. See Responses G-16, G-17 and G-18 for discussion of specific Vegetation Communities mentioned in this comment. As discussed in Responses G-2, G-3, G-4, G-6, G-7 and G8, the conservation planning process for the MSHCP was not based on arbitrary efforts to capture a particular percentage of Habitats or Vegetation Communities but rather involved initial identification of a Conceptual Conservation Scenario addressing the needs of multiple species from a species list developed by the MSHCP Advisory Committee in concert with the Wildlife Agencies. This initial Conceptual Conservation Scenario was refined through an iterative review and analytic process involving the application of NCCP tenets and conservation biology principles that culminated in the criteria-based plan presented in the Draft MSHCP.

    G-16 As discussed in Response G-15, the conservation planning process for the MSHCP was not based on achievement of particular percentage targets for Vegetation Communities. Specifically, the process did not consider percentages of particular Vegetation Communities conserved in other multiple species plans and set those as targets for the MSHCP. This approach would not take into consideration the unique characteristics of the planning areas for various multiple species plans and their suites of habitats and species. It is not appropriate or meaningful, for example, to compare grasslands Conservation in the MSHCP to the San Diego MHCP or the MSCP. The MSHCP Plan Area is much larger than the planning areas for these two programs and, in absolute acreages, is conserving four to six times more grasslands than these programs; the percentage of habitat conservation is less relevant to species conservation than the amount and distribution of the grasslands conserved. In terms of available habitat for grassland species, which on a crude scale and without regard to spatial distribution should support larger populations, it can be argued that the MSHCP provides for more conservation than do MHCP and MSCP. The focus of the analysis in the MSHCP is how much Habitat is conserved, in what configuration, and what species can be supported, not on an arbitrary percentage. The analysis for Conservation of grasslands in the MSHCP incorporated a variety of factors including representativeness of the grasslands conserved, configuration of the grasslands conserved, and consideration of those factors with respect to species-specific conservation requirements for grassland species. These factors are summarized below. The information provided herein is not new information, but rather a summary and focused presentation of information contained in the Draft MSHCP.

    Representativeness of grasslands was examined in several ways including the following: evaluation of anticipated grassland Conservation within the lower elevation Bioregions Riverside Lowlands and San Jacinto Foothills; evaluation of grasslands and agriculture Conservation using the uncollapsed vegetation coverage (agriculture was analyzed in addition to grasslands because these areas may provide foraging habitat for raptors); evaluation of grasslands inside and outside the MSHCP Criteria Area; and evaluation of grasslands Conservation based on areas that appear to have been developed since the MSHCP vegetation map was prepared (see Step 3, Draft MSHCP, page 3-10).

    Table G-16A summarizes anticipated grasslands Conservation within the Riverside Lowlands and San Jacinto Foothills Bioregions as compared to the entire Plan Area. As shown, grasslands Conservation within the MSHCP Conservation Area would be representatively distributed between the lower elevation Riverside Lowlands and San Jacinto Foothills Bioregions and the remaining upper elevations Bioregions with about 79% (33,600 acres) of the total grasslands Conservation occurring in the lower elevation Bioregions. This percentage is generally consistent with the existing distribution of grasslands in the Plan Area with about 80% (123,755 acres) of the existing grasslands located in the lower elevation Bioregions.

    Table G-16B summarizes anticipated grasslands and agriculture Conservation within the MSHCP Plan Area based on the uncollapsed MSHCP vegetation map (see Section 2.1.2 of the MSHCP for discussion of collapsed and uncollapsed vegetation communities mapping). As shown, approximately 96% of the mapped valley and foothill grassland would be within the MSHCP Conservation Area along with 27% of the mapped nonnative grassland. Of the total 20,020 acres of mapped agriculture within the MSHCP Conservation Area, approximately 17,185 acres (86%) are within the field croplands category. This category is regarded as having the greatest value for raptor foraging when compared with the other agriculture categories - dairy/livestock/feedyards and grove/ orchard. The focus of grasslands and agriculture Conservation are therefore on the higher value valley and foothill grasslands category and the higher value (for raptor foraging) field croplands agriculture category.

    TABLE G-16A - SUMMARY OF GRASSLANDS CONSERVATION IN THE RIVERSIDE LOWLANDS AND SAN JACINTO FOOTHILLS BIOREGIONS
    Bioregion Total MSHCP Plan Area (Acres) Inside MSHCP Conservation Area Outside MSHCP Conservation Area
    Additional Reserve Lands (Acres) Public/Quasi-
    Public (Acres)1
    Total Within MSHCP Conservation Area (Acres) Rural Mountainous (Acres) American Indian Lands (Acres) Outside MSHCP Conservation Area and not Rural Mountainous or American Indian Lands (Acres) Total Outside MSHCP Conservation Area (Acres)
    Riverside Lowlands 111,490 12,815 14,645 27,460 5,645 1,545 76,840 84,030
    San Jacinto Foothills 12,265 4,655 1,485 6,140 1,350 465 4,310 6,125
    Remainder of Plan Area 30,380 2,540 6,675 9,215 5,225 5,255 10,685 21,165
    TOTALS 154,135 20,010
    (13%)
    22,805
    (15%)
    42,815
    (28%)
    12,220
    (8%)
    7,265
    (5%)
    91,835
    (59%)
    111,320
    (72%)
    1 Includes 600 acres mapped as grasslands on the MSHCP vegetation map under the Lake reserve category, but now under the Public/Quasi-Public category

     

     

     

     

    TABLE G-16B - SUMMARY OF UNCOLLAPSED GRASSLAND AND AGRICULTURE CONSERVATION IN THE MSHCP PLAN AREA
    Vegetation Type Total MSHCP Plan Area (Acres) Inside MSHCP Conservation Area Outside MSHCP Conservation Area
    Additional Reserve Lands (Acres) Public/Quasi-
    Public (Acres)
    Total Within MSHCP Conservation Area (Acres) Rural Mountainous (Acres) American Indian Lands (Acres) Outside MSHCP Conservation Area and not Rural Mountainous or American Indian Lands (Acres) Total Outside MSHCP Conservation Area (Acres)
    Grassland
    Non-native Grassland 151,400 19,705 20,485 40,190 12,135 7,265 91,810 111,210
    Valley & Foothill Grassland 2,735 305 2,320 2,625 90 -- 20 110
    TOTAL 154,135 20,010
    (13%)
    22,805
    (15%)
    42,815
    (28%)
    12,220
    (8%)
    7,265
    (5%)
    91,835
    (59%)
    111,320
    (72%)
    Agricultural Land
    Dairy & Livestock Feedyards 5,855 335 200 535
    (9%)
    100 -- 5,220 5,320
    (91%)
    Field Croplands 124,875 7,250 9,935 17,185
    (14%)
    820 1,105 105,765 107,690
    (86%)
    Grove/Orchard 38,745 955 1,345 2,300
    (6%)
    6,400 10 30,035 36,445
    (94%)
    TOTAL 169,475* 8,540
    (5%)
    11,480
    (7%)
    20,020
    (12%)
    7,320
    (4%)
    1,115
    (1%)
    141,020
    (83%)
    149,455
    (88%)
    * Includes 3,330 acres mapped as agriculture and 600 acres mapped as grassland on the MSHCP vegetation map but now within Diamond Valley Lake.

     

     

     

     

    Table G-16C summarizes anticipated grasslands Conservation inside and outside the MSHCP Criteria Area. The Criteria Area includes the area with the highest biological value and from within which the MSHCP Conservation Area will be assembled. Flexibility is incorporated in the MSHCP to adjust acquisition from within the Criteria Area to respond to conservation priorities during the long-term MSHCP implementation process. As shown in Table G-16C, approximately 62,720 acres (43%) of the total grassland within the MSHCP Plan Area is located within the Criteria Area, providing opportunities to increase the level of grasslands Conservation as Reserve Assembly progresses.

    TABLE G-16C - SUMMARY OF GRASSLANDS CONSERVATION
    INSIDE AND OUTSIDE OF THE MSHCP CRITERIA AREA
    Vegetation Type Total MSHCP Plan Area (Acres) Total American Indian Lands (not a part of the MSHCP) (Acres) Net MSHCP Plan Area (less American Indian Lands) (Acres) Inside Criteria Area Outside Criteria Area (and not American Indian Lands or PQP Lands) (Acres)
    Criteria Area (Acres) PQP Lands Inside & Outside Criteria Area (Acres)* Total Inside Criteria Area and/or PQP Lands (Acres)
    Valley & Foothill Grassland 2,740 - 0 - 2,740 405 2,320 2,725
    (99%)
    15
    (1%)
    Non-native Grassland 151,395 7,335 144,060 39,555 20,440 59,995
    (99%)
    84,065
    (1%)
    TOTAL 154,135
    (100%)
    7,334
    (5%)
    146,800
    (95%)
    39,960
    (27%)
    22,760
    (16%)
    62,720
    (43%)
    84,080
    (57%)
    * Includes 600 acres mapped as grassland on the MSHCP vegetation map but now within Diamond Valley Lake.
    ** 100% net total for comparison to columns to the right

    Table G-16D summarizes anticipated grasslands Conservation based on the MSHCP vegetation map with adjustments based on assessment of areas apparently developed since preparation of the MSHCP vegetation map (up to 1998/99 - date of baseline data for RCIP). As shown, it appears that approximately 14,325 acres of grasslands have been developed since preparation of the MSHCP vegetation map including approximately 12,095 acres (84%) outside the MSHCP Conservation Area and approximately 2,230 acres (16%) inside the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    TABLE G-16D - COMPARISON OF GRASSLAND CONSERVATION IN THE MSHCP PLAN AREA BASED ON MSHCP VEGETATION MAP (1995) AND AREAS DEVELOPED SINCE PREPARATION OF MSHCP VEGETATION MAP (1998)
    Vegetation Type Total MSHCP Plan Area (Acres) Inside MSHCP Conservation Area Outside MSHCP Conservation Area
    Additional Reserve Lands (Acres) Public/Quasi-Public (Acres) Total Within MSHCP Conservation Area (Acres) Rural Mountainous (Acres) American Indian Lands (Acres) Outside MSHCP Conservation Area and not Rural Mountainous or American Indian Lands (Acres) Total Outside MSHCP Conservation Area (Acres)
    MSHCP Vegetation Map 154,135* 20,010
    (13%)
    22,805
    (15%)
    42,815
    (28%)
    12,225
    (8%)
    7,265
    (5%)
    91,830
    (59%)
    111,320
    (72%)
    MSHCP Vegetation Map Incorporating Developed Areas (1998)** 139,810 18,850 21,735 40,585
    (29%)
    11,705 7,160 80,360 99,225
    (71%)
    * Includes 600 acres mapped as grassland on the MSHCP vegetation map but now within Diamond Valley Lake.
    ** See Step 3 (pg.3-10 of MSHCP) for process used to assess areas developed between 1995 and 1998.

     

     

    In summary, anticipated grasslands Conservation within the MSHCP incorporates representativeness among Bioregions and focuses on higher value native grasslands and higher value agriculture (for raptor foraging). Flexibility is incorporated in the Criteria Area and the Reserve Assembly process to take advantage of opportunities to provide for additional grasslands Conservation as the MSHCP is implemented. Development since the MSHCP vegetation map was prepared appears to have occurred primarily in areas not identified for Conservation in the MSHCP.

     

     

    Configuration of grasslands Conservation was also a consideration in development of the MSHCP with a focus on conserving the larger polygons of grassland that could best support grassland species. The Stephens' kangaroo rat (SKR) is a grassland species and the existing SKR core reserves form a good foundation for grasslands Conservation in the Plan Area because identification of potential reserve areas in the SKR HCP was keyed to areas with substantial grasslands. The existing core reserves that conserve some of the largest polygons of existing grassland in the Plan Area include the Lake Mathews/Estelle Mountain reserve, the Southwestern Riverside County Multi-Species Reserve, Sycamore Canyon, the San Jacinto Wildlife Area/Lake Perris and Steele Peak. While it no longer supports SKR, the existing Santa Rosea Plateau reserve also has substantial grassland. These areas will be augmented by new Core Areas with substantial grassland including Proposed Core 3 in the Badlands Area (24,940 acres total with about 10,000 acres of grassland in Potrero Valley), Proposed Core 6 in Anza Valley ( 4,290 acres total, nearly all grassland), Proposed Core 2 in the French Valley area (5,050 acres total with about 1,500 acres of grassland) and a portion of Extension of Existing Core 3 adjacent to Lake Elsinore which includes substantial several hundred acres of grassland (Cores 2 and 3 are not known to be occupied by SKR but do have substantial grassland supporting other grassland species. Grassland that occurs in a mosaic with other habitats such as coastal sage scrub will also be conserved throughout the Lake Skinner/Lake Mathews linkage (Proposed Linkage 8) and within Proposed Core 7 in the Vail Lake/Wilson Valley/Sage Aguanga area. The planned total acreages of Proposed Linkage 8 and Proposed Core 7 are 5,470 acres and 50,000 acres respectively. These mosaics provide habitat for a variety of grassland species such as SKR, grasshopper sparrow, red-diamondrattlesnake and many raptors. Additional grasslands Conservation will occur within Proposed Linkage 14 which includes a portion of the Cactus Valley area (the total planned area of this Linkage is 4,320 acres). While it is recognized that substantial areas of grassland, albeit mostly fragmented by existing land uses, will be lost, particularly in the Riverside Lowlands Bioregion, these existing and planned locations for Conservation represent key remaining grassland areas in the Plan Area.

    Species-specific analyses for grassland species and raptors, for which it is important to maintain grassland and open vacant lands such as agricultural lands for foraging, are presented in the individual species accounts. The species accounts conclude that features incorporated in the MSHCP including habitat Conservation, reserve configuration, achievement of species-specific objectives and implementation of monitoring and management measures would achieve the overall MSHCP biological goal for each grassland Covered Species which is: "In the MSHCP Plan Area, Conserve Covered Species and their Habitats." Some examples are provided below:

    • Burrowing owl: A discussion of measures incorporated in the MSHCP to provide for Conservation of burrowing owl is provided in Response F-72.
    • Stephens' kangaroo rat: This species is a grassland species and areas conserved for this species are reflective of the magnitude, extent and distribution of grasslands Conservation within the Plan Area. The MSHCP will conserve 22,400 acres of suitable Habitat for this species including 18,000 acres of occupied Habitat in nine Core Areas (7 existing and 2 new Core Areas), with the remaining suitable Habitat preservation occurring in scattered patches throughout the MSHCP Plan Area. The species-specific objectives for this species require that occupation of Habitat occur across all Core Areas with no single Core Area accounting for more than 30 percent of the total required medium (or higher) population density area. While providing for Conservation of Stephens' kangaroo rat within the Plan Area, implementation of these species-specific objectives will also provide for grassland preservation in large habitat blocks across diverse locations within the Plan Area.
    • Grasshopper sparrow: Grasshopper sparrow is on the list of Covered Species but will not be on the list of Covered Species Adequately Conserved until species-specific conservation objectives are met. These objectives call for preservation of 38,690 acres of suitable Habitat including at least 8,000 acres in 7 potential Core Areas. Three of the 7 Core Areas must consist of grassland Habitat or grassland-dominated Habitat (<20 percent shrub cover) and the other 4 Core Areas must consist of at least 500 acres of grassland Habitat or grassland-dominated Habitat. Five of the 7 Core Areas must support at least 20 grasshopper sparrow pairs with successful reproduction demonstrated at five year intervals. Management activities include implementation of a program to maintain the percent cover of grassland within 10% of the baseline value in the identified Core Areas. While providing for Conservation of grasshopper sparrow within the Plan Area, implementation of these species-specific objectives will also provide for grassland preservation in large habitat blocks across diverse locations within the Plan Area.
    • California horned lark: This species is distributed within all open habitat areas, including grassland and agriculture (field/croplands). The species-specific objectives for this species call for preservation of 3 Core Areas and a portion of a fourth Core Area including grasslands around the Prado Basin and adjacent to the Santa Ana River (about 9,650 acres), grasslands in Proposed Core 2 in the Murrieta/Murrieta Hot Springs area (5,050 acres of which about 1,500 acres are grassland), Lake Elsinore grasslands, and grasslands in Santa Rosa Plateau and Wilson Valley. While providing for Conservation of California horned lark within the Plan Area, implementation of the species-specific objectives will also provide for grassland preservation in areas in addition to those identified for Stephens' kangaroo rat and grasshopper sparrow, such as Prado Basin/Santa Ana River grasslands, Lake Elsinore grasslands, and Wilson Valley grasslands.
    • White-tailed kite: This species is an example of a raptor that is widely distributed in the Plan Area and uses grassland/agricultural land and scrub lands for foraging. As is typical of many raptors, this species forages within large blocks of grassland or agriculture Habitat as well as within areas characterized by a mosaic of upland Habitats including grassland/agriculture, scrub and chaparral. The species-specific objectives for white-tailed kite call for preservation of 281,890 acres of suitable foraging Habitat including these upland Habitats as well as cismontane alkali marsh, playas and vernal pools, and freshwater marsh within the Riverside Lowlands, San Jacinto Foothills and Santa Ana Mountains Bioregions. While providing for preservation of foraging Habitat for this species, the species-specific objectives also highlight the magnitude, extent and broad distribution of foraging Habitat to be conserved within the Plan Area.
    • Golden eagle: This species is an example of a large raptor that is widely distributed as a foraging species throughout the MSHCP Plan Area within all Bioregions and in virtually all Habitats except dense conifer woodlands at high elevations. Thespeciesspecific objectives for golden eagle call for preservation of 164,390 acres of suitable foraging Habitat including grasslands, playas and vernal pools, desert scrubs, Riversidean alluvial fan sage scrub, oak woodlands and forests and coastal sage scrub, distributed through all Bioregions of the Plan Area. While providing for preservation of foraging Habitat for this species, the species-specific objectives also highlight the magnitude, extent and broad distribution of foraging Habitat to be conserved within the Plan Area.

    Through these examples, it can be seen that species-specific requirements for grassland species have been fully addressed in the Plan and it has been determined that the Plan will achieve the overall all biological goal and species-specific objectives for these species. This species-specific approach is more appropriate than targeting an arbitrary percentage for Conservation of particular Vegetation Communities.

    G-17 As discussed in Response G-15, the conservation planning process for the MSHCP was not based on achievement of particular percentage targets for Vegetation Communities. Specifically, the process did not consider percentages of particular Vegetation Communities conserved in other multiple species plans and set those as targets for the MSHCP. This approach would not take into consideration the unique characteristics of the planning areas for various multiple species plans and their suites of habitats and species. It is not appropriate or meaningful, for example, to compare coastal sage scrub Conservation in the MSHCP to the San Diego MHCP or the MSCP. The MSHCP Plan Area is much larger than the planning areas for these two programs and, in absolute acreages, is conserving four to six times more coastal sage scrub than these programs; the percentage of habitat conservation is less relevant to species conservation than the amount and distribution of the coastal sage scrub conserved. In terms of available habitat for coastal sage scrub species, which on a crude scale and without regard to spatial distribution should support larger populations, it can be argued that the MSHCP provides for more conservation than do MHCP and MSCP. The focus of the analysis in the MSHCP is how much Habitat is conserved, in what configuration, and what species can be supported, not on an arbitrary percentage.

    The analysis for Conservation of coastal sage scrub in the MSHCP incorporated a variety of factors including representativeness of the coastal sage scrub conserved, configuration of the coastal sage scrub conserved, and consideration of those factors with respect to species-specific conservation requirements for coastal sage scrub species. These factors are summarized below.

    Representativeness of coastal sage scrub was examined in several ways including the following: evaluation of anticipated coastal sage scrub Conservation within the lower elevation Bioregions - Riverside Lowlands and San Jacinto Foothills; evaluation of coastal sage scrub Conservation using the uncollapsed vegetation coverage; evaluation of coastal sage scrub inside and outside the MSHCP Criteria Area; and evaluation of coastal sage scrub Conservation based on areas that appear to have been developed since the MSHCP vegetation map was prepared (see Step 3, Draft MSHCP, page 3-10).

    Table G-17A summarizes anticipated coastal sage scrub Conservation within the Riverside Lowlands and San Jacinto Foothills Bioregions as compared to the entire Plan Area. As shown, coastal sage scrub Conservation within the MSHCP Conservation Area would be representatively distributed between the lower elevation Riverside Lowlands and San Jacinto Foothills Bioregions and the remaining upper elevations Bioregions with about 87% (70,895 acres) of the total coastal sage scrub Conservation occurring in the lower elevation Bioregions. This percentage is generally consistent with the existing distribution of coastal sage scrub in the Plan Area with about 87% (136,110 acres) of the existing coastal sage scrub located in the lower elevation Bioregions.

    Table G-17B summarizes anticipated coastal sage scrub Conservation within the MSHCP Plan Area based on the uncollapsed MSHCP vegetation map (see Section 2.1.2 of the MSHCP for discussion of collapsed and uncollapsed Vegetation Communities mapping). As shown, approximately 52% of the mapped coastal sage scrub would be within the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    TABLE G17-A - SUMMARY OF COASTAL SAGE SCRUB CONSERVATION IN THE RIVERSIDE LOWLANDS AND SAN JACINTO FOOTHILLS BIOREGIONS
    Bioregion MSHCP Plan Area (Acres) Additional Reserve Lands (Acres) Public/Quasi-
    Public (Acres)1
    Total Within MSHCP Conservation Area (Acres) Rural Mountainous (Acres) Indian Lands (Acres) Outside MSHCP Conservation Area (Acres) Total Outside MSHCP Conservation Area (Acres)
    Riverside Lowlands 108,615 28,320 22,245 50,565 17,340 1,715 38,995 58,050
    San Jacinto Foothills 27,495 15,375 4,955 20,330 2,395 1,290 3,480 7,165
    Remainder of Plan Area 20,335 3,465 7,355 10,820 6,505 760 2,250 9,515
    TOTAL 156,445 47,160
    (30%)
    34,555
    (22%)
    81,715
    (52%)
    26,240
    (17%)
    3,765
    (2%)
    44,725
    (29%)
    74,730
    (48%)
    1 Includes 705 acres mapped as coastal sage scrub on the MSHCP Vegetation Map under the Lake reserve category, but now under the Public/Quasi-Public category.

     

     

    TABLE G17-B - SUMMARY OF UNCOLLAPSED COASTAL SAGE SCRUB CONSERVATION IN THE MSHCP PLAN AREA
    Bioregion MSHCP Plan Area (Acres) Additional Reserve Lands (Acres) Public/Quasi-
    Public (Acres)1
    Total Within MSHCP Conservation Area (Acres) Rural Mountainous (Acres) Indian Lands (Acres) Outside MSHCP Conservation Area (Acres) Total Outside MSHCP Conservation Area (Acres)
    Coastal Sage Scrub
    Coastal Scrub 4,680 80 1,815 1,895
    (40%)
    850 955 980 2,785
    (60%)
    Diegan Coastal Sage Scrub 15,815 1,375 5,185 6,560
    (41%)
    6,630 265 2,360 9,255
    (59%)
    Riversidean Sage Scrub 135,950 45,710 27,550 73,260
    (54%)
    18,760 2,540 41,390 62,690
    (46%)
    TOTAL 156,445 47,165
    (30%)
    34,550
    (22%)
    81,715
    (52%)
    26,240
    (17%)
    3,760
    (2%)
    44,730
    (29%)
    74,730
    (48%)
    1 Includes 705 acres mapped as coastal sage scrub on the MSHCP Vegetation Map under the Lake reserve category, but now within Diamond Valley Lake.

     

     

     

     

    Table G-17C summarizes anticipated coastal sage scrub Conservation inside and outside the MSHCP Criteria Area. The Criteria Area includes the area with the highest biological value and from within which the MSHCP Conservation Area will be assembled. Flexibility is incorporated in the MSHCP to adjust acquisition from within the Criteria Area to respond to conservation priorities during the long-term MSHCP implementation process. As shown in Table G-17C, approximately 64,115 acres (42%) of the total coastal sage scrub within the MSHCP Plan Area is located within the Criteria Area, providing opportunities to increase the level of coastal sage scrub Conservation as Reserve Assembly progresses.

     

     

    TABLE G-17C - SUMMARY OF COASTAL SAGE SCRUB CONSERVATION INSIDE AND OUTSIDE OF THE MSHCP CRITERIA AREA
    Vegetation Type Total MSHCP Plan Area (Acres) Total American Indian Lands (not a part of the MSHCP) (Acres) Net MSHCP Plan Area (less American Indian Lands) (Acres) Inside Criteria Area Outside Criteria Area (and not American Indian Lands or PQP Lands) (Acres)
    Criteria Area (Acres) PQP Lands Inside & Outside Criteria Area (Acres)* Total Inside Criteria Area and/or PQP Lands (Acres)
    Coastal Scrub 4,680 955 3,725 135 1,815 1,950
    (52%)
    1,775
    (48%)
    Diegan Coastal Sage Scrub 15,815 260 15,555 2,720 5,190 7,910
    (51%)
    7,645
    (49%)
    Riversidean Sage Scrub 135,955 2,545 133,410 61,260 27,550 88,810
    (51%)
    44,600
    (33%)
    TOTAL 156,450
    (100%)
    3,760
    (2%)
    152,690
    (98%)
    64,115
    (42%)
    34,555
    (23%)
    98,670
    (65%)
    54,020
    (35%)
    * Includes 705 acres mapped as coastal sage scrub on the MSHCP vegetation map but now within Diamond Valley Lake.
    ** 100% net total for comparison to columns to the right.

    Table G-17D summarizes anticipated coastal sage scrub Conservation based on the MSHCP vegetation map with adjustments based on assessment of areas apparently developed since preparation of the MSHCP vegetation map (up to 1998/99 - date of baseline data for RCIP). As shown, it appears that approximately 4,040 acres of coastal sage scrub have been developed since preparation of the MSHCP vegetation map including approximately 2,500 acres (62%) outside the MSHCP Conservation Area and approximately 1,540 acres (38%) inside the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    TABLE G-17D - COMPARISON OF COASTAL SAGE SCRUB CONSERVATION IN THE MSHCP PLAN AREA BASED ON MSHCP VEGETATION MAP (1995) AND AREAS DEVELOPED SINCE PREPARATION OF MSHCP VEGETATION MAP (1998)
    Vegetation Type Total MSHCP Plan Area (Acres) Inside MSHCP Conservation Area Outside MSHCP Conservation Area
    Additional Reserve Lands (Acres) Public/Quasi-
    Public (Acres)
    Total Within MSHCP Conservation Area (Acres) Rural Mountainous (Acres) American Indian Lands (Acres) Outside MSHCP Conservation Area and not Rural Mountainous or American Indian Lands (Acres) Total Outside MSHCP Conservation Area (Acres)
    MSHCP Vegetation Map 156,445* 47,165
    (30%)
    34,550
    (22%)
    81,715
    (52%)
    26,240
    (17%)
    3,760
    (2%)
    44,730
    (29%)
    74,730
    (48%)
    MSHCP Vegetation Map Incorporating Developed Areas (1998)** 152,405 46,385 33,790 80,175
    (29%)
    25,875 3,675 42,680 72,230
    (71%)
    * Includes 705 acres mapped as coastal sage scrub on the MSHCP vegetation map but now within Diamond Valley Lake.
    ** See Step 3 (pg.3-10 of MSHCP) for process used to assess areas developed between 1995 and 1998.

     

     

    In summary, anticipated coastal sage scrub Conservation withinthe MSHCP incorporates representativeness among Bioregions and focuses on higher value native coastal sage scrub. Flexibility is incorporated in the Criteria Area and the Reserve Assembly process to take advantage of opportunities to provide for additional coastal sage scrub Conservation as the MSHCP is implemented. Development since the MSHCP vegetation map was prepared appears to have occurred primarily in areas not identified for Conservation in the MSHCP.

     

     

    Species-specific analyses for coastal sage scrub species are presented in the individual species accounts. The species accounts conclude that features incorporated in the MSHCP including habitat Conservation, reserve configuration, achievement of species-specific objectives and implementation of monitoring and management measures would achieve the overall MSHCP biological goal for each coastal sage scrub Covered Species which is: "In the MSHCP Plan Area, Conserve Covered Species and their Habitats." Some examples are provided below:

    • coastal California gnatcatcher: This species is a coastal sage scrub species and areas conserved for this species are reflective of the magnitude, extent and distribution of coastal sage scrub Conservation within the Plan Area. The MSHCP will conserve 77,070 acres of suitable Habitat for this species in 13 Core Areas within large blocks of Habitat in the MSHCP Conservation Area, with the remaining suitable Habitat preservation occurring in scattered patches throughout the MSHCP Plan Area. The species-specific objectives for this species require at least 13 of the Core Areas and interconnecting Linkages within nine Core and Linkage areas, and continued use of and successful reproduction at 75 percent of the Core Areas. While providing for Conservation of coastal California gnatcatcher within the Plan Area, implementation of these species-specific objectives will also provide for coastal sage scrub preservation in large habitat blocks across diverse locations within the Plan Area.
    • San Diego horned lizard: This species is widespread throughout the Plan Area primarily in scrub, chaparral, and grassland Habitats except where adjacent to urban situations. The species-specific objectives for this species include conservation of at least 407,036 acres of scrub, chaparral, woodland and grassland Habitat and inclusion of at least 13 Cores Areas which are composed of large blocks of Habitat within the MSHCP Conservation Area. The Core Areas are provided with numerous connections of Proposed and Existing Cores. The species-specific objectives will provide for Conservation of the San Diego horned lizard within the Plan Area while providing for coastal sage scrub preservation in large blocks within the Plan Area.
    • Bell's sage sparrow: This species is widely but sparsely distributed throughout Riverside lowlands, Santa Ana Mountains, Desert Transition and San Jacinto Foothills Bioregions. This species is well known for using coastal sage scrub and chaparral Habitats. The species-specific objectives for this species include conservation of at least 245,750 acres of suitable Habitat including coastal sage scrub, chaparral, and desert scrubs, and inclusion of at least 12 of 14 Core Areas and interconnecting Linkages for Bell's sage sparrow. While providing for Conservation of Bell's sage sparrow within the Plan Area, implementation of these species-specific objectives will also provide for coastal sage scrub preservation

    Through these examples, it can be seen that species-specific requirements for coastal sage scrub species have been fully addressed in the Plan and it has been determined that the Plan will achieve the overall all biological goal and species-specific objectives for these species. This species-specific approach is more appropriate than targeting an arbitrary percentage for Conservation of particular Vegetation Communities.

    G-18 The comment is correct in noting that most of the cismontane alkali marsh within the Plan Area is located on American Indian Lands. Of the 1,260 acres of cismontane alkali marsh in the Plan Area, 1,110 acres (88%) are located on American Indian Lands. Of the remaining 150 acres, 40 acres (26% of 150 acres) would be conserved. The remaining 110 acres are located east of the Cahuilla Indian Lands and would not be included in the MSHCP Conservation Area. Table 3-1 and Table 9-1 of the Plan will be revised to indicate acreages and percentages of Vegetation Communities on American Indian Lands. See also Response R-27 for additional discussion of this issue.

    The GIS analysis for the species accounts and the conservation area description are not oversimplified as can be seen by a review of the analyses in Volume II, Sections A and B of the MSHCP and as discussed in Response G-10. The uncollapsed Vegetation Communities and other sub-analyses, such as select soils and elevation, were used for the species analyses and MSHCP Conservation Area description. This is the core of the biological analysis in the Plan. As discussed in Responses G-15, G-16 and G-17, it is an oversimplification to focus on target percentages for Vegetation Community preservation as the measure of the effectiveness of the conservation plan.

    G-19 As discussed in Responses G-3, G-5 and G-7, the Plan requires that the MSHCP Conservation Area be assembled and managed in a manner that achieves the target acreages and configurations identified for the Cores and Linkages. This is a key component of the Conservation Strategy identified for each Covered Species all of which incorporate the global biological objectives presented in Section 9.2 of the Plan. As stated in Global Biological Objective #1: "...The MSHCP Conservation Area will incorporate the Cores and Linkages as well as the habitat distributions generally as presented in the MSHCP Conservation Area Description in Section A of the MSHCP Reference Document, Volume II." The dimensional data presented for the Cores and Linkages in Section 3.2.3 of the MSHCP make clear those that are expected to have large areas of edge and will require more management to maintain function for the purposes for which they are intended. Planning Species are identified for each Core and Linkage to provide guidance regarding their expected functions; major Covered Activities potentially affecting the Cores and Linkages are also identified as are planned adjacent land uses, again to provide guidance regarding anticipated management issues for the Cores and Linkages.

    The general management measures identified in Section 5.2 of the Draft MSHCP identify some of the measures to be undertaken to improve functionality of the Cores and Linkages. Specifically, General Management Measure 9 identifies management efforts to be implemented in response to natural and anthropogenic disturbance regimes.

    G-20 See Responses F-46 (last paragraph), F-50, F-79, F-80 and F-84 for discussion of analysis of Covered Activities, including roads and utilities, internal fragmentation and allowances for agricultural clearing. It is assumed that the reference to lands more than 600 feet from urban or agricultural land as not affected by edge is taken from the end of Section 3.2.2 of the Draft MSHCP. This section provides a description of the MSHCP Conservation Area and is not intended to set a boundary within which Edge Effects will be addressed but rather to give a general overview of the proportions of the MSHCP Conservation Area anticipated to be strongly, to somewhat, to not affected by edge. As discussed in Response F-59, the Guidelines Pertaining to the Urban/Wildlands Interface presented in Section 6.1.4 of the Plan will be employed, as appropriate, for areas in proximity to the reserve based on the particular interface factor of concern.

    G-21 See complete Responses to Comment Letters P3, Q3 and X3.

    G-22 It is uncertain what stepping-stone linkage is referenced between preserve areas "northwest of March ARB and the Home Gardens, Lake Mathews and Gavilan Hills areas." The existing Sycamore Canyon preserve is located north of March ARB and the existing Box Springs Canyon preserve is located across I-215 northeast of Sycamore Canyon. Proposed Constrained Linkage 7 is identified to provide a connection between these areas. The Home Gardens, Lake Mathews and Gavilan Hills areas are located southwest of March ARB. Proposed Linkage 3 is identified to provide Conservation in the Gavilan Hills area and to provide a connection between Proposed Core 1 and the existing Lake Mathews/Estelle Mountain reserve (Existing Core C).

    It is uncertain what stepping-stones are references between the Eastside Reservoir (Diamond Valley Lake) and the Quail Valley and Antelope Valley areas. Portions of the Antelope Valley (French Valley) area west of Diamond Valley Lake are included within Proposed Core 2 and Proposed Constrained Linkages 17 and 18 would provide connections between this Core and Diamond Valley Lake (Existing Core J). Proposed Linkages 13 and 14 provide connections east of Diamond Valley Lake to Proposed Cores 4 and 7 and ultimately to San Bernardino National Forest.

    G-23 Extension of existing cores through acquisition of private inholdings and "rounding out" the boundaries of existing reserves was considered in the conservation planning process. Specifically, Extensions of Existing Cores 2, 4, 5, 6 and 7 have been identified on Figure 3-2 to augment the existing LakeMathews/EstelleMountain, Diamond Valley Lake/Lake Skinner, and San Jacinto Wildlife Area/Lake Perris core reserves. The referenced private inholdings in San Bernardino and Cleveland National Forests and checkerboard BLM lands in the southeast corner of the Plan Area were reviewed but determined not to support Covered Species in substantial numbers and not to provide substantial conservation value.

    G-24 See Responses G-12 through G-23 for discussion of these issues. Requirements are incorporated in the Plan to address these issues. The circumstances described in this comment would constitute non-compliance (see Section 23.5 of the Draft IA) under which the Permits may be suspended or revoked.

    G-25 The Plan is not proposed to be implemented without survey requirements. As noted in the comment, survey requirements have been identified for 30 species for which it has been determined that additional information is needed to assure Reserve Assembly in a manner that conserves these species. With respect to the information need for continued protection and management of Covered Species, such information will be gathered through implementation of the Monitoring Plan which incorporates surveys for all Covered Species.

    It is not correct to state that not requiring surveys for every Covered Species is "unprecedented" or "counter to CEQA requirements." For many of the Group 1 and Group 2 Covered Species such as coyote, brush, rabbit, sharp-shinned hawk, double-crested cormorant, downy woodpecker, San Diego horned lizard, surveys are not typically required for CEQA review of development projects although anecdotal observations of such species are typically recorded. This will likely be the case for development projects within the MSHCP Plan Area when project-specific biological information is assembled.

    G-26 See Responses F-60 and F-72 for discussion of the conditions under which survey requirements may be discontinued. In addition, language has been added to Sections 6.1.3 and 6.3.2 of the Final MSHCP to require review by the RMOC and MPA of findings supporting conclusions that species-specific conservation objectives have been met and surveys may be discontinued. Although specific examples are not given, the reference to criteria-driven NCCPs that incorporate survey and avoidance measures may be to draft proposals such as that for the San Diego MHCP where species conservation requirements emphasis is placed on survey and avoidance with an indeterminate standard for preservation. The species-specific objectives for the MSHCP identify determinate standards that must be achieved for each species to maintain coverage.

    Responses F-60 and F-72 provide discussions of burrowing owl, southwest willow flycatcher, Los Angeles pocket mouse, and red-legged frog. With respect to San Bernardino kangaroo rat, Aguanga kangaroo rat and mountain yellow-legged frog, discussion is provided below.

    • San Bernardino kangaroo rat: For San Bernardino kangaroo rat, species-specific objectives call for conservation of 4,440 acres of habitat. Objective 3 calls for at least 75 percent of the total (3,330 acres) to be occupied and that at least 20 percent of the occupied Habitat (approximately 666 acres) supports a medium or higher population density of the species as measured across any 8-year period. Objective 4 calls for maintenance or if feasible, restoration, of ecological process within the historic flood plains of the San Jacinto river and Bautista Creek, and other suitable new areas within the Criteria Area. Features of these objectives that go beyond "arbitrary" landscape thresholds include maintenance of ecological processes, and conservation of specifically identified occupied Habitat that supports a medium or higher population density across an 8-year period. These site-specific conservation objectives are consistent with the approach to be taken for Group 3 species as identified in the MSHCP.
    • Aguanga kangaroo rat: For Aguanga kangaroo rat, species-specific objectives call for conservation of 5,484 acres of habitat. Objective 3 calls for at least 75 percent of the total (4,113 acres) to be occupied and that at least 20 percent of the occupied Habitat (approximately 823 acres) supports a medium or higher population density of the species as measured across any 8-year period. Objective 4 calls for maintenance or if feasible, restoration, of ecological processes within the historic floodplains of Temecula Creek and Wilson Creek, and other suitable new areas within the Criteria Area. Features of these objectives that go beyond "arbitrary" landscape thresholds include maintenance of ecological processes, and conservation of specifically identified occupied Habitat that supports a medium or higher population density across an 8-year period. These site-specific conservation objectives are consistent with the approach to be taken for Group 3 species as identified in the MSHCP approach to be taken for Group 3 species as identified in the MSHCP.
    • mountain yellow-legged frog: For yellow-legged frog, species-specific objectives call for conservation of 335 acres of primary breeding habitat, plus inclusion of Core Areas and 32,399 acres of secondary wooded habitat above 370 meters at the North Fork of the San Jacinto River, Hall Canyon, Fuller Mill Creek and other perennial water streams in the San Jacinto Mountains. Objective 5 calls for maintenance or, if feasible, restoration of ecological processes in occupied Habitat and suitable new areas within the Criteria Area. Objective 6 calls for determination as to whether successful reproduction is occurring once a year for the first five years and at minimum 8-year intervals following. Features of these objectives that go beyond "arbitrary" landscape thresholds include conservation of specifically identified core areas, maintenance of ecological processes, and determination as to whether successful reproduction is occurring. These site-specific objectives are consistent with the approach to be taken for Group 3 species as identified in the MSHCP.

    G-27 The MSHCP does not "rely" on existing state and federal wetland regulations to conserve wetland vegetation and biological functions and values. Although the MSHCP does not directly require the conservation of "wetlands", it does provide for the protection of riparian/riverine areas and vernal pools which may include wetlands. Furthermore, the MSHCP establishes procedures to ensure that the biological functions and values of these areas are maintained throughout the MSHCP Plan Area such that the habitat values for certain Covered Species inside the MSHCP Conservation Area are maintained. See Section 6.1.2 of the MSHCP. See Responses F-59 and F-60 for discussion of the relationship of MSHCP requirements to the no net loss standard.

    G-28 The HANS Process is not intended to include reserve configuration guidance but is simply intended to describe an incentives-based process through which lands will be acquired for the MSHCP Conservation Area. Guidance and assurances regarding Reserve Assembly are provided in other portions of the Plan as discussed in Responses F-46, F-47, F-48 and F-50.

    G-29 Rather than establish an arbitrary buffer requirement, Section 6.1.2 of the MSHCP requires that avoidance and minimization measures incorporated in project designs potentially affecting riparian/riverine areas ensure protection of functions and values of the riparian/riverine areas to be avoided. Section 6.1.2 states that incorporation of edge treatments in project designs will be necessary to provide such assurance and notes that the type and extent of edge treatments will be evaluated on a project-by-project basis. Edge treatment design must consider indirect effects including lighting, noise, trash/debris, urban and stormwater runoff, toxic materials, exotic plant and animal infestations, dust, trampling, and unauthorized recreational use. As noted in Response G-20, the Guidelines Pertaining to the Urban/Wildlands Interface in Section 6.1.4 of the MSHCP will be implemented to ensure that appropriate edge treatments are incorporated in project designs.

    G-30 The definition of vernal pools in Section 6.1.2 of the MSHCP includes watersheds for the pools and the avoidance measures incorporated in Section 6.1.2 referenced in Response G-29 will also be employed in assuring vernal pool avoidance in a manner that maintains long-term conservation value for these areas.

    G-31 The characterization that the analysis of species coverage was based on a process that involved "seeing how many acres will be conserved, then claim that level was the plan's objective" is incorrect. As noted in Responses G-2, G-5 and G-6, the reserve design process began with the biological goals of identifying an initial Conceptual Conservation Scenario that would incorporate NCCP reserve design tenets and preserve as many species as possible from lists developed by the MSHCP Advisory Committee in concert with the Wildlife Agencies. The relationship between the reserve design concepts and species conservation was considered throughout the iterative reserve design process as documented in the August 9, 1999 Draft MSHCP Proposal, the March 9, 2000 Technical Memorandum identifying the conservation analysis units, the October 4, 2000 Alternatives Development Document, the March 7, 2002 preliminaryadministrative draft MSHCP, and the November 15, 2002 Draft MSHCP. The species accounts and analyses were evaluated in a concurrent iterative process with the reserve design and there were no "predetermined givens" with respect to particular percentage conservation levels. As noted in Responses G-15, G-16 and G-17, such target percentages are not meaningful measures of whether or not a particular species will be protected. As noted in Response G-3, a Conservation Strategy is presented in the MSHCP for each Covered Species and this represents the standard against which species protection is assessed.

    G-32 The analysis does assume that 100% of the resources targeted for preservation will be preserved in the sense that, as described in Responses G-3 and G-7, the MSHCP requires Reserve Assembly that meets the target acreages and configurations described in the Plan. The Plan does not assume that all conserved areas will maintain 100% of their biological value; indeed, as noted in Response G-19, the perimeter to area ratios and edge and interior acreages given for certain Cores and Linkages acknowledge that certain areas will require more active management to maintain biological values. The Plan must meet these requirements regardless of the methods used to conserve land for the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    The mechanisms for ensuring that the 347,000 acres of PQP Lands will be coordinated and managed as part of the MSHCP are explained in the discussion of the RMOC. See Response W-23.

    G-33 The referenced species objectives are not outcomes. As discussed in Response G-31, the species analyses and reserve design process occurred concurrently throughout the iterative conservation planning process for the MSHCP. This is a valid conservation planning approach. It is not necessary to establish "a priori" biological objectives that must be met. The stakeholders examined many options including the potential for more efficient reserve designs or a reduced species list. As noted in Response R-20, the species list was modified during the conservation planning process with species dropped from the list when it was determined that sufficient data were not available to proceed with conservation planning or a reserve could not be designed that met the needs of a species. The Conservation Strategy for each species is based on species-specific needs and requirements with generally greater requirements to demonstrated achievement of the global biological goal for Group 3 species than for Group 1 species. For 28 species, additional specific conservation requirements must be met before these species can be considered to be Covered Species Adequately Conserved. Rather than a circular approach as referenced in the comment, this iterative approach provided for continual feedback between reserve design concepts and species needs and permitted stakeholders to make informed choices regarding reserve design options.

    G-34 The global biological goal for all species, as stated in Section 9.2 of the MSHCP is: "In the MSHCP Plan Area, Conserve Covered Species and their Habitats." This goal must be met for all Covered Species regardless of any arbitrary target percentage habitat preservation requirements. In the case of the Delhi Sands flower-loving fly, a series of objectives are identified consistent with the global biological goal. All of those objectives are directed toward achievement of the global biological goal and not to an arbitrary standard of percentage of habitat preservation. The Conservation Strategy for each Covered Species is biologically based and does not reflect other economic and land use objectives of the Plan.

    G-35 The factors noted in the comment have been provided in the analysis for each species including estimating acreages or populations sizes and percentages of suitable habitat expected to be adversely affected as well as those to be managed in perpetuity. As noted in Response R-33, this information is included in summary fashion in Table 9-2 of the Plan and in detail in the species accounts in Section B of Volume II. Effects of the Take authorized by the Plan are analyzed in the EIS/EIR and will be presented in the findings for the Permits. The Plan sets forth the goals to be achieved and the methods to achieve those goals, and is based on achievement of those goals. It is not a requirement of the Plan to identify goals that will not be achieved or to "document and explain why" such goals are not achieved. The reference to identification of "hardline reserve areas as only 90% or 95% conserved" in other plans is not relevant to the MSHCP. As noted in Response G-32, the Plan requires that lands acquired for the MSHCP Conservation Area will be conserved in accordance with the Plan. Uncertainties regarding Edge Effects associated with certain reserve features, such as Constrained Linkages, or with Covered Activities, are accounted for in the Plan.

    G-36 See Responses G-3, G-32 and G-35 regarding a reserve map, and expectations of preservation on lands to be acquired. Processes are incorporated in the MSHCP to address circumstances such as instances where "a Linkage is broken or a Core Area becomes internally fragmented such that the requirements of the MSHCP cannot be met" including proposing biologically superior or equivalent alternatives for specific issues such as narrow endemic species or riparian/riverine areas, using the Criteria Refinement Process presented in Section 6.5 of the Draft MSHCP, or using the MSHCP amendment processes presented in Section 6.10 of the Draft MSHCP.

    G-37 See Responses F-79 and F-80 for discussion of analysis of Covered Activities, including roads, and associated Edge Effects. With respect to the scope of Covered Activities for the MSHCP, it should be noted that the MSHCP addresses activities associated with implementation of the General Plans and associated land use and circulation elements of the Permittees. This is consistent with the scope of Covered Activities addressed in other multiple species plans such as the San Diego MSHCP and MHCP. The MSHCP also provides a more detailed analysis of Covered Activities than the referenced plans. The analysis of each species accounted for Edge Effects, and therefore the suggested addition of 10% of Additional Reserves Lands is not considered necessary.

    G-38 The MSHCP does not assume preservation on any rural mountainous lands not acquired for inclusion in the MSHCP Conservation Area. As noted in Response F-105, Rural Mountainous areas outside the MSHCP Conservation Area are quantified and mapped only to provide context in understanding the types of land uses that might be located adjacent to the MSHCP Conservation Area. This type of information was requested by the Scientific Review Panel and is also given for each Core and Linkage in Section 3.2.3 of the Draft MSHCP.

    G-39 As noted in Response G-10, the species analyses do not rely solely on estimates of gross acreages of Vegetation Communities within the MSHCP Conservation Area. Where appropriate, sub-analyses were undertaken to quantify as best as possible the amount of suitable Habitat for particular species within the MSHCP Conservation Area. For may species, uncollapsed Vegetation Communities were analyzed. For a number of plant species, analyses focused on concurrent occurrence of Vegetation Communities, select soils and elevations. For other species, only certain Bioregions were considered to have suitable Habitat.

    G-40 Tables 3-1 and 9-1 of the Final MSHCP will be revised to include acreages of Vegetation Communities on American Indian Lands.

    G-41 General Management Measure 9 in the Draft MSHCP addresses invasive exotics. The Guidelines for Construction of Wildlife Crossings in Section 7.5.2 of the Draft MSHCP address avian wildlife, large mammalian wildlife, small mammalian, reptile and amphibian wildlife, and insects.

    G-42 The Plan does not require mitigation for conversion of habitat to agriculture. The 10,000 acres could occur within the Criteria Area. The Plan assumes that approximately 5,000 of these acres could occur within areas later acquired for the MSHCP Conservation Area. See Response F-84 for further discussion of this issue.

    G-43 As discussed in Responses G-6 and G-9, the reserve design process incorporated an initial Conceptual Conservation Scenario that was not mapped and proceeded to schematic mapping of conservation analysis units and conceptual alternatives. These narrative reserve descriptions and schematic maps are presented and depicted in the August 9, 1999 Draft MSHCP Proposal, the March 9, 2000 Technical Memorandum and the October 4, 2000 Alternatives Development Document. The Alternatives Development Document was submitted to the SRP for review. See also Scientific Review Panel correspondence - Review of: Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003.

    G-44 Freeways were factored in the analysis of areas affected by urban or agricultural edges. See Responses G-38 and G-42 regarding agricultural expansions and rural mountainous areas. The Core and Linkage descriptions in Section 3.2.2 of the Plan note those areas expected to be strongly affected by edge and identify particular Covered Activities of concern in certain Cores and Linkages. Requirements are incorporated in Sections 6.0 and 7.0 of the Plan to provide for design Covered Activities to avoid and minimize Edge Effects.

    G-45 The general issues noted in the comment are addressed in the responses to specific Comments G-1 through G-44.


    Comment Letter G2 - Santa Ana Watershed Association of RCD's, January 14, 2003

    G2-1 Properties will be managed as they come into the MSHCP Conservation Area. Management does begin immediately. The Lead Agencies disagree that enhancement and/or restoration activities must occur immediately given the scope and size of the Plan.

    G2-2 Adaptive Management is anticipated to begin after the first five years. Adaptive Management will be based on results achieved through both Management and Monitoring activities.

    G2-3 Section 6.8.3 of the Draft MSHCP discusses Changed Circumstances, including fire and flood conditions. As noted in the Plan, the Adaptive Management Program includes consideration for Changed Circumstances.

    G2-4 See Responses J2-8 and J2-10.

    G2-5 See Response J2-8.

    G2-6 California Department of Fish and Game will act as Monitoring Program Administrator for the first eight years of the Permits.

    G2-7 As noted in Section 5 of the Draft MSHCP, the Adaptive Management Program presented in the MSHCP is intended to be a framework for future management activities within the MSHCP Conservation Area. Section 5.2.2 of the Plan identifies preliminary Management Units and explains that, if determined appropriate by the RCA, Reserve Management Plans will be prepared for each Management Unit. In addition, Table 5-2 provides a summary of management considerations that are more fullydetailed in Special Biological Consideration section for each species in the individual Species Accounts contained in Volume II of the MSHCP.
     


    Comment Letter G3 - Barry Cannata, December 31, 2002

    G3-1 The comment does not specifically reference features of the MSHCP, IA or EIR/EIS and no further response is necessary.

    G3-2 The construction of a single family home on an existing parcel is a Covered Activity (allowed) under the MSHCP. See Sections 6.2 and 7.0 of the Draft MSHCP.

    G3-3 See Response G3-2. A conservation easement or other mutually agreeable conservation mechanisms could be utilized to conserve a portion, if that is of interest to the property owner, while allowing development on the remaining portion. Based on the description of the property and the proposed use as a single family residence, there should be no conflict with the goals of the MSHCP.


    Comment Letter G4 - Congress of the United States, March 2, 2003

    G4-1 Responses to the letter from the Riverside County Farm Bureau, Inc., dated March 6, 2003 referenced in the comment are contained in the complete Responses to Comment Letter H4. See also complete Responses to Comment Letter F4.


     


    Comment Letter H

    Comment Letter H - Sierra Club, December 12, 2002

    H-1 The Planning Commission did not consider the MSHCP in the land use analysis of the General Plan because the MSHCP has not been approved by the Board of Supervisors and thus, is not an adopted existing plan. However, the proposed General Plan does include language concerning incorporation of the MSHCP, if in fact, the MSHCP is ultimately approved by the Board of Supervisors.

    H-2 See Response H-1. If the MSHCP is ultimately adopted by the Board of Supervisors, the Planning Commission will consider proposed land use designations in the General Plan and their effect upon the MSHCP in connection with future development projects.

    H-3 See Responses H-1 and H-2.

    H-4 The elements of the RCIP have been developed using a common base of information. At every step, the County, RCTC, and the consultants have shared information and looked for solutions to complex problems by considering all three elements of the Plan. However, no one element was allowed to dictate to any other element. Therefore, land use proposals were based on a variety of factors, only one of which was the conservation proposed under the Draft MSHCP. The Planning Commission had information from staff on whether proposed changes to the land use maps would be in conflict with the Draft MSHCP. Using an MSHCP that had not been through public hearing and has not been adopted as a filter for land use decisions would not be any more appropriate than using land use as a filter to determine whether a property had long-term conservation value. The RCIP makes much more information available to all parties than could ever be achieved in a normal sequential planning effort.

    H-5 As stated in the Draft MSHCP, a transportation corridor that would connect Western Riverside County to Orange County is not currently contemplated in the Draft General Plan Circulation Element, but has been identified as a mitigation measure in the Draft EIR for the General Plan as a mitigation measure to reduce the significant traffic impacts associated with the General Plan. The Draft MSHCP describes a process by which such a future facility could be considered a Covered Activity under the Plan. The discussion of the future facility in no way implies that the project is currently being proposed, nor does it imply that additional study and environmental clearances would not be required.

    H-6 The comment states that the Draft EIR/EIS must remove its claim that the MSHCP adequately describes impacts to the Orange County NCCP. It is unclear as to which section of the Draft EIR/EIS the comment refers. The Lead Agencies are not aware of any claim in the Draft EIR/EIS that indicates that impacts to the Orange County NCCP are described. Section 4.1 briefly describes existing conservation efforts, including those in Orange County, surrounding the MSHCP Plan Area. The Draft EIR/EIS does state that the MSHCP was specifically designed to augment and complement existing HCPs and NCCPs. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 1.5-8.) The MSHCP's relationship to adopted and proposed HCPs and NCCPs is also discussed in Section 4.1. (See also Draft EIR/EIS, Figure 4.1.2 [depicting MSHCP in regional context with adopted and proposed HCPs and NCCP]). Because of this, the Lead Agencies expect that impacts to the Orange County NCCP will be insignificant. Absent more specific information, a more detailed response cannot be provided.

    H-7 This comment makes a false statement. Nowhere in the text of Section 7 of the Draft MSHCP is it stated that "the most environmentally damaging alternative would be selected." In fact, for facilities that have not reached a point in the planning and design process that would afford a detailed analysis of impacts, the Draft MSHCP provides siting and design criteria that are based on avoidance of impacts to biological resources to the greatest extent feasible.

    H-8 The purpose of the analysis contained in Section 7 and throughout the Draft MSHCP is to analyze the effects of activities proposed by the Permittees upon Covered Species. The Covered Activities as proposed by the Permittees are considered in the Take statements contained in Section 9 of the Draft MSHCP, and the conservation analysis performed for all of the Covered Species has considered the effects of that Take. In consideration of these analyses, the Draft MSHCP has determined that coverage for the 146 species analyzed can be achieved, subject to all of the applicable policies and requirements of the MSHCP.


    Comment Letter H2 - Jackson, DeMarco & Peckenpaugh on behalf of David H. Murdock, January 15, 2003

    H2-1 The Lead Agencies appreciate the commentor's general support of the RCIP efforts. Commentor's introductory remarks summarize Comments H2-9 through H2-354, for which Responses are provided below. The Lead Agencies believe that the MSHCP fully complies with all applicable laws and does not limit property development beyond what would otherwise be required to mitigate development impacts. (Draft MSHCP, p. 1-4) Local Permittees will implement the MSHCP through their normal land use, planning and approval processes. (MSHCP, §§ 6.1.1, 6.2.2; See Responses H2-36, 150, and 151.)

    H2-2 The Lead Agencies believe the Draft EIR/EIS fully complies with all the provisions of CEQA and NEPA. Commentor's introductory remarks summarize Comments H2-71 through H2-354, for which Responses are provided below.

    H2-3 The Draft EIR/EIS fully discusses and analyzes potential impacts of adopting and implementing the MSHCP. This Draft EIR/EIS is intended to assess the Plan's significant environmental impacts, including unavoidable adverse and cumulative impacts related to the adoption and implementation of the proposed MSHCP. The proposed MSHCP is designed to provide a framework for future decisions and actions. Commentor's introductory remarks summarize Comments H2-71 through H2-354, for which Responses are provided below.

    H2-4 The Lead Agencies do not believe that CEQA or NEPA requires that a revised Draft EIR/EIS needs to be prepared. Commentor's introductory remarks summarize Comments H2-71 through H2-354, for which Responses are provided below.

    H2-5 All of the information requested from the County has been provided. The County has procedures in place with regard to the provision of GIS data. It would be inappropriate to waive the procedures for one party. The Service is in the process of responding to the FOIA request submitted by the commentor.

    H2-6 The County has not been provided with a copy of UCR's response to the referenced Public Record Act request. Nor has the County been contacted by the commentor requesting such information.
     

    H2-7 The Service is in the process of responding to the FOIA request submitted by the commentor.

    H2-8 See Responses H2-5, H2-6 and H2-7. The Riverside County Board of Supervisors declined to extend the comment period under CEQA. Given the amount of public exposure that the MSHCP has received over the past three plus years, the County believed that 60 days represented a reasonable review period. The public review period for the Draft MSHCP and Draft EIS/EIR closed on January 15, 2003. However, the NEPA review period for the Plan and EIS/EIR was reopened by the USFWS on February 28, 2003 and closed on March 14, 2003. As a result, the public has been allowed to submit comments for a period of approximately 120 days. The Lead Agencies have responded to all comments received during this extended review period.

    H2-9 The MSHCP does not require any landowner to conserve their lands nor stop Development. Instead, the MSHCP sets forth a broad array of incentives to encourage Conservation. Where incentives are not sufficient, the MSHCP advocates purchasing certain property from willing sellers. In fact, one of the stated objectives of the MSHCP is to minimize the existing regulatoryburden by streamlining development authorizations under the federal and state endangered species acts. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 1.2-4.) Compared to the current process where a property owner must negotiate with local, state and federal agencies at numerous points in the development process to address endangered species issues and obtain appropriate permits, the MSHCP provides a one-stop approach. The Plan also provides a defined amount of mitigation that will be required, including the plan requirements within the Criteria Area, that are necessary to enable the Wildlife Agencies to issue permits under FESA and NCCP Act. The Criteria are supported scientifically and are not onerous. See Response H2-171.

    H2-10 There is no standardized format utilized or mandated for the preparation of Environmental Impact Reports and/or Environmental Impact Statements. State CEQA Guidelines, Section 15120(a) states, "Environmental Impact Reports shall contain the information outlined in this article, but the format of the document may be varied. Each element must be covered, and where these elements are not separated into distinct sections, the document shall state where in the document each element is discussed." Information required in an Environmental Impact Report includes: Table of Contents (Section 15122); Summary (Section 15123); Project Description (Section 15124); Environmental Setting (Section 15125); Consideration and Discussion of Environmental Impacts (15126, 15126.2, and 15126.4); Alternatives (15126.6), Effects Not Found to be Significant (Section 15128); Organizations and Persons Consulted (15129); and Discussion of Cumulative Impacts (15130).

    The required elements stated above are clearly presented in the EIR/EIS in its Table of Contents: Executive Summary (Section ES); Project Description (Section 2.0); Environmental Setting/Affected Environment (Section 3.0); Environmental Consequences (Section 4.0); Alternatives (Section 4.0); Issues Not Considered Significant and Not Selected for Detailed Analysis Effects (Section 1.5.5); Organizations and Persons Consulted (Section 7.0); and Cumulative Impacts (Section 5.0).

    H2-11 The Lead Agencies believe the MSHCP project description fully complies with applicable laws, is sufficiently detailed, and accurately reflects the MSHCP requirements and potential impacts. This introductory comment generally summarizes Comments H282 through H2-246, for which Responses are provided below. The Lead Agencies believe the project description completely and accurately discusses the project location, and contains all necessary information required by State CEQA Guidelines section 15124 and by section 1502.10 of the CEQ Guidelines. Specifically, the project description includes the following required elements:

    1. The precise location and boundaries of the project (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 2.1-2, and Figures 1.2, 2.1, 2.2);
    2. A detailed map and a map showing the project's location in a regional perspective (Draft EIR/EIS, Figures 1.1, 1.2);
    3. A statement of project objectives (Draft EIR/EIS, pp. 1.2-2 - 1.2-5);
    4. A general description of the project's technical, economic and environmental characteristics (Draft EIR/EIS, § 2.0); and
    5. A statement describing the intended uses of the Draft EIR/EIS. (Draft EIR/EIS, §§ 1.2.3 and 1.4.)

    The Draft EIR/EIS analyzes the MSHCP, a document that is designed to provide a framework for future decisions and actions. The description of the proposed MSHCP adequately addresses all integral parts of the Project. Thus, the Project description is accurate and allows meaningful evaluations of the Project's environmental effects. See Responses H2-36, H2-150 and H2-151.

    The comment also seems to confuse the term "HCP boundaries" and "conservation and criteria areas." First, establishing "hard line" boundaries, or identifying the precise parcels to be included in, the MSHCP Conservation Area, Cores and Linkages, and Edge Effects is not required by the FESA or CEQA. (See FESA §10(a)(2)(A)(ii) (applicant is to identify steps to be taken to minimize and mitigate impacts); accord Section 10 HCP Handbook, p. 7-3; see generally Section 10 Handbook, p. 3-22 (it is acceptable for HCP applicants to conduct activities prior to the time when replacement habitat can be provided, particularly in the context of regional HCPs where mitigation fees will be used as a funding mechanism).) Indeed, because regional HCPs are often funded through collected habitat mitigation fees and other revolving sources of funding, mitigation lands could be and are not all purchased "up front." Instead, conservation lands are purchased in a timely manner as funds become available. This method of conservation of land acquisition forms the basis of most regional HCPs. Because the precise mitigation lands that might be available for acquisition in the coming years cannot be adequately predicted at this time, and due to other legal constraints, the MSHCP properly identifies the Core Areas and Criteria Area to facilitate future acquisition of Additional Reserve Lands. Moreover, many of the stakeholders specifically did not want a hardline boundary in the MSHCP. See Section 3.1.The lack of a hardline boundary does not in any way limit or adversely impact the ability of the decision-makers to use the Draft EIR/EIS to adequately analyze potential project impacts. The Criteria Area is defined in the MSHCP. (Draft MSHCP, p. 3-16.) Figure 3-1 in the MSHCP depicts the Criteria Area within the Plan Area and represents the MSHCP Plan map. See Responses D-8, D-17, G-3, and H2-85.

    The MSHCP is based on the most accurate and complete scientific data available. The development of the MSHCP was predicated on the use of this information. The Planning Agreement that initiated the planning effort called for the use of this data. In addition, the adaptive management and vegetation data base update provisions of the MSHCP will allow for science to play a substantial role in the MSHCP Conservation Area development process. (See generally MSHCP, §§ 5.0 et seq., 6.3 et seq.) See Responses G-10, H2-93 through H2-122 and N3-1 through N3-3. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of : Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003.

    With regard to projects with actual vesting rights, see Response H2-270.

    The Lead Agencies believe the MSHCP fully complies with project objectives enumerated in the EIR/EIS and all applicable state and federal laws, as set forth in more detail in Responses H2-102 through H2-246.

    H2-12 The Environmental Setting/Affected Environment of the area covered by the MSHCP is detailed in Section 3.0 of the Draft EIR/EIS. This section provides a detailed description of the biological setting (Section 3.1) and transportation system (Section 3.2) within the Plan Area. Additionally, the MSHCP includes a description of the existing biological setting (Section 2.1), and existing land use (Section 2.2). Combined, the MSHCP and its EIR/EIS provide an adequate description of the physical environment within the area covered by the MSHCP.

    H2-13 The commentor states that the conclusions reached in the Draft EIR/EIS are unsupported by facts and analysis. Analysis and facts supporting the conclusions reached in the Draft EIR/EIS can be found in Sections 3.0, 4.0, 5.0 and 6.0 of the document. In the absence of specific examples, no further response is possible.

    H2-14 See Response H2-304.

    H2-15 Section 5 of the Draft EIR/EIR fully discusses cumulative impacts to the extent that the MSHCP's incremental effects combined with the effects of other projects is "cumulatively considerable" and "cumulatively significant" (State CEQA Guidelines, § 15130(a); 40 CFR § 1508.8, 1508.25.) The State CEQA Guidelines only require an EIR to discuss and analyze cumulative impacts if the impact is cumulatively considerable. (Communities for a Better Environment v. California Resources Agency (2002) 103 Cal.App.4th 98, modified by 2002 Cal. App. LEXIS 5015 ("CBE").) Insignificant impacts only need to be discussed briefly. (State CEQA Guidelines, § 15128; Sierra Club v. Gilroy City Council (1990) 222 Cal.App.3d 30, 46.) Similarly, federal agencies are required to analyze whether a proposed action is "related to other actions with individually insignificant but cumulatively significant impacts." (40 CFR § 1508.8, 1508.25.) Insignificant impacts do not need to be analyzed.

    The State CEQA Guidelines set forth two methods for satisfying the cumulative impacts analysis requirement. (State CEQA Guidelines, § 15130(b)(1)(A-B).) The EIR/EIS uses the summary of projections approach and bases the projections upon Southern California Association of Governments (SCAG) regional population growth forecasts for 2025 for unincorporated western Riverside County and the Cities within western Riverside County. (State CEQA Guidelines, § 15130(b)(1)(B); Draft EIR/EIS, p. 5.1-2.) Similarly, the EPA's advisory memorandum entitled "Consideration of Cumulative Impacts in EPA Review of NEPA documents" suggests the modeling and trends analyzing method for analyzing cumulative effects. The EPA suggests that a cumulative impacts analysis should include a discussion of (1) resources and ecosystem components; (2) geographic boundaries and time periods; (3) past, present and reasonably foreseeable future actions; (4) condition of the environment; and (5) thresholds to assess resource degradation. The cumulative impacts analysis in the Draft EIR/EIS fully discusses impacts to biology, land use, agricultural resources, mineral resources, housing, population and employment, public services, parks and recreation, and transportation. (See Draft EIR/EIS, pp. 5.1-6 5.1-10.) Forecasts of population, housing, and employment for the proposed MSHCP cities are shown in Tables 5A, 5B and 5C of the Draft EIR/EIS. The Draft EIR/EIS also establishes thresholds of significance and discusses past, present and reasonably foreseeable future actions that may have a cumulative effect on the environment.

    As supported by the evidence in the record, not all issues analyzed were significant or cumulatively considerable. Adoption of the proposed MSHCP and issuance of a Take permit under FESA and the NCCP Act would permanently conserve portions of land in western Riverside County and would permit Takeof Covered Species. Since the MSHCP does not authorize any physical development, it was determined that implementation of the proposed MSHCP would not result in any significant environmental effects relating to the following issue areas: Aesthetics, Air Quality, Cultural Resources, Geology and Soils, Hazards and Hazardous Materials, Hydrology and Water Quality, Land Use, Noise, Public Services (with the exception of fire protection and parks), Utilities, and Environmental Justice. As required by CEQA, the Draft EIR/EIS briefly discusses these insignificant environmental issues in Section 1.5.5. (State CEQA Guidelines, § 15128.) For example, because the proposed MSHCP does not authorize Development, implementation of the proposed MSHCP would not create additional sources of light or glare affecting aesthetics. The Draft EIR/EIS discusses aesthetics on pages 1.5-5 and 1.5-6. Likewise, since there is no authorized Development, adoption of the proposed MSHCP would not alter the methods used to generate, use, transport, or dispose of hazardous materials. There would be no adverse impacts to cultural resources, hydrology and water quality, or geology and soils as no ground-disturbing or building activities would be directly authorized by the Plan. The MSHCP also would not alter land use designations or increase the areas designated for Development in any general plan. Thus, no adverse impacts to land use, noise, public services, utilities, or environmental justice would occur. For these reasons, there are no significant cumulative impacts on aesthetics, air quality, cultural resources, geology and soils, hazards and hazardous materials, hydrology and water quality, noise, utilities or environmental justice.(See Draft EIR/EIS, pp. 1.5-5 1.5-11.)

    The growth inducing impacts of the MSHCP are fully discussed in Sections 5 and 6 of the Draft EIR/EIS. (See Draft EIR/EIS, pp. 5.1-6 - 5.1-10; 6.1-4 - 6.1-5.) Pursuant to State CEQA Guidelines section 15126.2, the EIR/EIS specifically discusses the MSHCP's potential to induce growth on pages 6.1-14 and 6.1-5 of Section 6 and also includes the growth inducing effects of the MSHCP in the discussion of cumulative impacts on pages 5.1-6 through 5.1-10. As the EIR/EIS notes, the growth inducing potential of a project would be considered significant only if it fosters growth or a concentration of population in excess of what is assumed in relevant master plans, land use plans or in projections made by regional planning agencies. Further, the Draft EIR/EIS concludes that not only will the establishment of the MSHCP Conservation Area enhance the quality of life in western Riverside County, but also that neither the proposed MSHCP nor any of the project alternatives contain components that would directly generate residential, commercial, or industrial development or induce population growth within the Plan area (See EIR/EIS at p. 6.1-5.).

    However, the analysis does recognize that if development cannot occur where it is currently proposed or at levels currently permitted by the County and Cities, such growth must be accommodated elsewhere. Thus, on page 6.1-5 of the Draft EIR/EIS, the conclusion was made that the MSHCP may have an indirect growth inducing effect, because it will accommodate and streamline the approval process for future developments within those areas of western Riverside County outside the limits of the MSHCP Conservation Area. "[O]ut of an abundance of caution, the Lead Agencies [also] determined that the [MSHCP] will have significant indirect impacts on Population, Housing, and Employment." (See Draft EIR/EIS, p. 5.1-9.) However, the County cannot address these potential indirect impacts in the Draft EIR/EIS for the MSHCP because it would be speculative to try to determine where, and if, any particular future development would be constructed. CEQA does not require speculation. To the contrary, State CEQA Guidelines Section 15145 specifically states that speculation is not required in an EIR. Likewise, NEPA does not require an analysis of impacts that are too speculative to identify. (See, e.g., Kootenai Tribe of Idaho v. Veneman (2002) 313 F.3d 1094.)

    Additionally, the Draft EIR/EIS also recognizes that the MSHCP would remove an impediment to growth by authorizing Take of Covered Species. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 5.1-9.) Thus, the MSHCP is growth-accommodating, not growth inducing. The MSHCP's impacts associated with the potential relocation or development outside the MSHCP Conservation Area are discussed in detail in Section 5.1 and in Responses D-80, K-123, I-43, H2-300, and H2-304.

    H2-16 The commentor states that feasible mitigation measures are not identified in the EIR/EIS, particularly to mitigate impacts to Vegetation Communities, non-covered species, and cumulative impacts to mineral resources. The MSHCP is intended to serve as a method of mitigating impacts to biological resources that will result from future Development. The MSHCP would not directly cause those impacts, but would provide Take Authorization for listed species through the USFWS and would conserve Covered Species. Impacts to non-covered species resulting from Development will be analyzed in the environmental documentation for each development project. If the MSHCP does not provide sufficient mitigation, additional mitigation may be required to reduce those impacts on a project-by-project basis. Cumulative impacts to mineral resources would result if substantial amounts of land with extractable mineral resources is set aside for conservation purposes. The MSHCP Conservation Area would consist of existing Public/Quasi-Public Lands and private land acquired from willing sellers. No feasible mitigation measures are available to address cumulative impacts to extractable mineral resources and therefore, no measures are identified or considered in the EIR/EIS. See Response K-122 for further discussion of mineral resources. See Responses H2-13 and H2-14 with regard to additional impacts not discussed in the EIR/EIS.

    H2-17 The Lead Agencies disagree with the commentor's statement that the EIR/EIS improperly defers analysis and development of mitigation measures, and maintains that the impacts disclosed in the Draft EIR/EIS are accurate, adequate, and appropriate. Since specific examples are not provided in the comment, a more specific response cannot by provided.

    H2-18 As required by both CEQA and NEPA, the Draft EIR/EIS discusses a range of reasonable alternatives in detail in Section 2. (14 Cal. Code Regs. § 15126(a); 40 CFR § 1502.14.) The County and the Service, as lead agencies, have the discretion to determine how many alternatives constitute a reasonable range. (See Citizens of Goleta Valley v. Board of Supervisors (1990) 52 Cal.3d 553, 556.) Although an infinite number of alternatives and variations could be identified, neither EIRs nor EISs are required to evaluate all possible alternatives or "consider an alternative whose effects cannot be reasonably ascertained and whose implementation is considered to be remote and speculative." (14 Cal. Code Regs. § 15126(d)(5)C; 40 CFR § 1502.14(a).) As a result, the alternatives analysis in the Draft EIR/EIS focus on those options that could be implemented and which, if implemented, would have the potential to reduce or avoid any significant adverse environmental effects associated with the proposed Project, met project objectives and are potentially feasible. The selection of alternatives is discussed in the Alternatives Screening Document of the Draft EIR/EIS (Appendix B) and in the MSHCP Alternatives Development Document (Dudek, Oct, 4, 2000). The Alternatives analyzed in the Draft EIR/EIS are the Proposed MSHCP; the Listed, Proposed and Strong Candidate Species Alternative; the Listed and Proposed Species Alterative; the Existing Reserves Alternative; and the No Project Alternative. The four alternatives identified in the Draft EIR/EIS were chosen to foster informed decision-making and public participation.

    The Draft EIR/EIS's conclusion that the proposed MSHCP is the Environmentally Superior/Environmentally Preferable Alternative is supported by the discussion alternatives in both Section 2.0 and on pages 6.1-5 - 6.1-6. Specifically, the Draft EIR/EIS concludes that the proposed MSHCP conserves the greatest numbers of acres of habitat in usable configurations, conserves the most species, and would provide a management structure for maintaining the viability of the habitat. The Existing Reserves and No Project Alternatives would conserve land on a project-by-project basis, and would not result in a system for management or increased conservation. The Listed, Proposed, and Strong Candidate Species and Listed and Proposed Species Alternatives would have usable configurations for the MSHCP Conservation Areas, and would also include a management structure for overseeing the MSHCP Conservation Areas, but ultimately they would conserve less habitat than the proposed MSHCP. Because the Draft EIR/EIS concludes that the proposed MSHCP would result in the most conservation and would provide more organized and usable habitat conservation than the Existing Reserves Alternative and the No Project Alternative, it is the Environmentally Superior/Environmentally Preferable AlternativeperCEQAand NEPA. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 6.1-6.)

    H2-19 From its inception, the three components of RCIP were designed to use a common database, and to have coordinated policy direction. The County created the RCIP as a model to help determine future land use, transportation, and conservation needs for the County. RCIP consists of three integrated but individually distinct planning efforts: (1) update the County's General Plan to anticipate future growth over the long term; (2) create an MSHCP for the western portion of the County; and (3) identify transportation corridors to meet the County's future transportation needs (CETAP). As noted in the Draft EIR/EIS, adoption of the General Plan is the sole responsibility of the County of Riverside, while adoption of the MSHCP also requires approval of 14 Cities within the western portion of the County, Caltrans, State Parks, RCTC, the California Department of Fish and Game, and US Fish and Wildlife Service. Adoption of CETAP is the responsibility of the RCTC and the Federal Highway Administration. While they are coordinated, the update of the County's General Plan, the MSHCP, and CETAP have independent utility, and could be adopted regardless of actions taken in relation to the other projects.

    CEQA does not require an analysis in the EIR of "each and every activity carried out in conjunction with a project." (Native Sun/Lyon Communities v. City of Escondido (1993) 15 Cal.App.4th 892, 909-910.) In Native Sun, the court upheld an EIR for a complex development project despite a claim that the EIR failed to discuss a proposed development agreement that was "part of the project description." The court stated that the "EIR's straight forward reference to the development agreement alerted persons interested in that document to its relevance in the decision making process." Like the lead agency in Native Sun, the County has complied with CEQA and alerted the public to the importance of related documents. The commentor has not provided specifics about how the environmental analysis is inadequate or improperly defers environmental review and thus a more specific response cannot be provided.

    H2-20 The County Board of Supervisors will be considering approval of the General Plan in months to come and considering actions on staff recommendations to alter the MSHCP references in the General Plan to include provisions which indicate that the MSHCP would only be applicable if adopted. Compliance with CEQA's procedures will ensure that the County has fully considered the scope and implications of the MSHCP. It is common and in fact typical for a Lead Agency to select a preferred project for analysis. It is only after the public comment period, however, that the Lead Agency could certify the EIR and approve a project. (14 C.C.R. §§ 15090, 15092.) Further, the Lead Agencies disagree that the submittal of a mere application for an Incidental Take permit commits the Lead Agencies to approving the MSHCP as drafted. This would be tantamount to making the argument that merely submitting an application for some type of development approval would commit a lead agency to approving a project in the form submitted with the application.

    H2-20A See Responses H2-10 through H2-20.

    H2-21 County staff and members of the Board of Supervisors have met with Murdock (staff and consultants employed by the family of Murdock Companies) several times over the past year. At each of these meetings, the County has expressed its willingness to work with Murdock to maximize their development potential while addressing environmental concerns. As recently as late January 2003, Murdock met with members of the Riverside County Board of Supervisors to discuss Murdock's concerns with the MSHCP and its potential impact on Murdock properties. The County will meet as often as necessary in an effort to resolve issues involving the development of Murdock properties.

    H2-21A The MSHCP planning process has been ongoing for over 4 years with the review and input of the scientific review panel and a wide range of stakeholders. This input will continue throughout the MSHCP approval process. Given this length of time and input, the Lead Agencies disagree that the process should be slowed. See Responses H2-22 through H2-25.

    H2-22 The commentor appears to confuse the MSHCP terms. The MSHCP Conservation Area will include the approximately 500,000 acres of PQP and Additional Reserve Lands that will be managed. The precise boundary of the MSHCP Conservation has not yet been fully defined. The Criteria Area consists of approximately 310,000 acres from which the Additional Reserve Lands will be conserved allowing flexibility in Reserve Assembly. See Response H2-270 regarding property with vested rights. With regard to the scientific data, see Responses G-10, H2-93 through H2-122 and N3-1 through N3-3. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of : Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003. With regard to ongoing mining operations, see Responses H2-23 and H2-127.

    H2-23 In general, existing legal uses such as mining may continue operating as they have historically done. The MSHCP has no effect on these existing legal uses although Take Authorization can only be granted under the MSHCP if the applicant received such authorization from a Local Permittee. If these existing activities expand or significantly change and discretionary or certain ministerial approvals are required, the MSHCP terms and conditions would be applicable.

    H2-24 With regard to the scientific data, see Responses G-10, H2-93 through H2-122 and N3-1 through N3-3. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of : Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003. With regard to the resource value of certain properties owned by Murdock, see Response H2-128 and responses to Comment Letters N3 and C4. The MSHCP was developed as a regional plan to conserve blocks of habitat and linkages. The habitat types used to develop the plan are generalized to reflect the basic building blocks of the MSHCP Conservation Area. Project-level information provided by Murdock confirms that the generalized habitat types are sufficiently accurate for development of the regional plan. A determination as to whether particular parcels may be suitable habitat will be made as part of the HANS and consistency review processes. The processes ensure that an early determination will be made as to what property within the Criteria Area are needed for the Additional Reserve Lands that the owners of property needed for conservation are compensated, and that owners of land not needed will receive take authorization for Covered Species. (MSHCP, § 6.1.1) Accordingly, the rights of landowners in the Criteria Area -- with and without potentially suitable habitat for Covered Species -- are protected under the process.

    H2-25 The MSHCP does not say that "geographic descriptions for each Cell...will take precedence over the actual biological conditions present." The HANS and consistency review processes have been established to encourage willing seller - willing buyer transactions. The MSHCP does not put the burden on property owners to prove that actual biological conditions conflict with the MSHCP's geographic and species/habitat descriptions for Cells, including those for the Elsinore and Temescal Canyon Area Plans. The "burden" on property owners is simply to negotiate in good faith to achieve the objectives of the MSHCP in return for certainty in their ability to develop. (See MSHCP, § 6.1.1.) The MSHCP, the HANS and the Criteria Refinement processes do not violate federal or state law, as explained in more detail in Responses below. The comment does not provide any indication of what specific state or federal laws are allegedly being violated, prohibiting further response.

    H2-25A See Responses H2-26 through H2-37.

    H2-26 The MSHCP does not impose new regulations beyond what exist in current law. Since specific comments are not provided, a more specific response cannot be given.

    H2-27 Criteria Areas have been established in which suitable habitat lands will be conserved for the benefit of listed and unlisted species covered by the Plan that are impacted by construction and operation of regional improvements and private development projects. The FESA not only deems it appropriate to include listed, proposed, candidate and unlisted species in an HCP, FESA actually encourages such inclusion. (Section 10 Handbook, pp. 4-1 et seq. ("[t]he Services should explain to any applicant the benefits of addressing unlisted species in the HCP and the risks of not doing so, and should strongly encourage the applicant to include as many proposed and candidate species as can be adequately addressed and covered by the permit.") As stated in the Section 10 Handbook, "There are also advantages in addressing unlisted species in the HCP (proposed and candidate species as a minimum), particularly those that are likely to be listed within the foreseeable future or within the life of the permit. Doing so can protect the Permittee from further delays--e.g., having to revise the HCP and amend the permit-should species that were not listed at the time the original HCP was approved subsequently become listed. In addition, the 'No Surprises' policy...applies to listed as well as unlisted species if they are adequately addressed in the HCP." (Section 10 Handbook, p. 3-7; see also, p. 4-1.) Moreover, "the decision about what species to include in the HCP is always the applicant's." (Section 10 Handbook, p. 1-16, 4-1.)

    To the extent the comment raises issues related to covered plant species, see Response H2-204. The Lead Agencies do not understand the comment that physical features may be exempt or not regulated under state or federal law and are unable to further respond.

    The comment also states that the MSHCP requires "set asides of private land for species that do not necessarily occur on that land." No matter where it occurs in western Riverside County, new Development produces direct, indirect and cumulative impacts to species and habitat for which mitigation must be provided. The Plan covers well over 100 species that inhabit various types of habitat throughout western Riverside County.

    As exhaustively detailed in the species accounts provisions of the MSHCP, habitat for these Covered Species exists in each of the evaluated areas. Even lands that a particular developer might consider to be unoccupied still can have effects on Covered Species in terms of edge and other harmful effects. Perhaps even more importantly, the MSHCP is intended to address the impacts to species and their habitats of the construction, maintenance and operation of roadways and other public improvements in western Riverside County. To offset the impacts associated with such regional infrastructure, the acquisition and permanent management of blocks of habitat and linkages is required by the FESA, CESA and other applicable laws. Thus, the MSHCP will facilitate the timely development of local and regional infrastructure critical to all development in western Riverside County, whether that development occurs on lands now occupied or not.

    H2-28 All discretionary County and City approvals related to Development shall be subject to the MSHCP. Certain ministerial approvals by Cities that will result in grubbing, clearing and grading of habitat and other species impacts will also be subject to the MSHCP. All discretionary and ministerial approvals will be required to pay the Local Development Mitigation Fee. Issuance of grading permits for single family homes or mobile homes on existing legal lots will be subject to expedited review. (Ibid.)

    H2-29 The MSHCP provides an expedited path to project approval over what exists today. For projects outside the Criteria Area, payment of a fee and (if applicable) completing limited surveys would meet compliance with the MSHCP and would provide mitigation under CEQA for impacts to Covered Species. Inside the Criteria Area, the HANS process allows a property owner to quickly (within 45 days) determine how their project relates to the MSHCP, and what portion (if any) of the property is needed for Conservation. If none of the property is needed for Conservation, the applicant proceeds with the project as they would outside the Criteria Area. If all or a portion of the applicant's property is needed for Conservation, it is up to the applicant at that point to determine if they wish to propose a development project consistent with the MSHCP, what lands would be conserved through dedication, whether incentives would provide compensation for some or all of the conservation lands, and to enter into negotiations to sell portions needed for Conservation that would not be conserved through dedications or the application of incentives. The length of time required to reach agreement is largely in the hands of the property owner. However, HANS sets maximum time lines of 120 days for this process.

    In all cases, this process can be quicker and less complicated than dealing with a mix of local, state, and federal agencies with no assurances that either the applicant will be able to develop their property or they will receive fair compensation for the lands they cannot develop.

    H2-30 The MSHCP does not place "a cloud over hundreds of thousands of privately-owned property...because restrictions on property are not easily discernable." The MSHCP, while comprehensive and complex given the scope of the Plan, is not unduly complicated. Implementation of the MSHCP will be overseen, administered and enforced by a joint regional authority formed by the County and participating Cities pursuant to the requirements of the California Government Code and other applicable legal authorities. The MSHCP adopts an incentive based program implemented by the Permittees to conserve some property located in the Criteria Area over time as a means to accumulate large conservation areas to benefit species and habitat. See Responses H2-27 and H2-29.

    The HANS process was carefully drafted to reflect stakeholder input as well as meet all legal requirements. (See generally Tahoe-Sierra Preservation Council, Inc. v. Tahoe Regional Planning Agency, 535 U.S. 302 (April 23, 2002, Case No. 00-1167).) The HANS and Criteria application processes, and in some cases the Criteria Refinement Process, will be used as the means for acquisition of fee title, conservation easements and other interests in property. To the extent feasible, other processes will run concurrently with regular development approval processes. Thus, the MSHCP processes does not place burdensome restrictions on private property. See Responses H-132, H-138, H-140 and M-17.

    Moreover, the MSHCP does not require any landowner to conserve their lands. Instead, the MSHCP incorporates a broad array of incentives to encourage conservation on privately owned lands. (See MSHCP, § 6.1.1.) Additionally, it is a stated goal of the MSHCP to properly compensate private landowners for participating. As stated in Section 1.0 of the Draft EIR/EIS, the implementation strategy relies heavily on incentives to encourage private property owners to conserve their land if appropriate for Reserve Assembly. These incentives include, but are not limited to, the waiver and/or reduction of certain development fees, monetary compensation for entering into an option agreement, fast track processing, density bonuses, clustering, density transfers and property reassessment and tax credits, if determined to be feasible. Where these incentives are insufficient, the MSHCP encourages purchase of properties at fair market value from willing sellers. The proposed MSHCP does, therefore, anticipate compensating landowners. Accordingly, the MSHCP does not place a "cloud" on privately-owned property.

    H2-31 The HANS process was developed in cooperation with all stakeholders, including property owners, to address how the MSHCP would be implemented. The intent is to assure that property owners are fairly compensated for properties acquired for Reserve Assembly. HANS would not result in a property owner being delayed a maximum of six years if they want to develop their property. The six year period could only occur if they have entered into an agreement to sell their property for Reserve Assembly purposes. If they do not enter into such an agreement, their project would proceed through hearings and either be approved or denied. Acquisitions will proceed as quickly as agreement can be reached, subject to the availability of funds. It will be desirable to leverage as much of the acquisition funding into the first five to ten years of the Plan. A mechanism to finance acquisition costs and thereby assure an adequate flow of funds to complete acquisitions on a timely basis may be necessary.

    HANS was set up to assure that no property owner is unduly delayed in either obtaining compensation for their property or having their development proposal acted on by the local jurisdiction. If the property is not acquired during the term of the purchase agreement, then the project may proceed to hearing or the property owner can agree to extend the term of the purchase agreement.

    H2-32 The origin of the 840,000 acre and the 67% figures referenced in the comment is not clear to the Lead Agencies. All discretionary and certain City ministerial actions in the Plan Area will need to demonstrate consistency with the MSHCP. In return, Take Authorization will be given to projects within the Plan Area.

    H2-33 The Plan estimates that approximately 310,000 acres of privately-owned land is within the Criteria Area and Additional Reserve Lands will be assembled from this acreage. The HANS process is not overly time consuming or unacceptable. In fact, the MSHCP stakeholders had extensive involvement in shaping the HANS process. See also Responses H2-29 and H2-31. The comment does not provide any indication of what specific state or federal laws may allegedly be violated, prohibiting further response.

    H2-34 The MSHCP cannot interfere with ongoing existing legal land uses. The Wildlife Agencies recognize existing Section 7 Agreements and Section 10 Permits and do not require further review for consistency with the MSHCP.

    H2-35 Land acquisition costs were estimated based on available land sales data derived from the records of the Riverside County Assessor. Additionally, this information was compared to actual acquisition costs for conservation lands acquired over the past two years. The land sales were analyzed by General Plan Area Plan and further broken down by development type - Urban, Rural, Agricultural and Open Space. A second projection of land costs will come out of the nexus study currently being developed. The nexus study will consider any additional land acquisition costs provided by the commentor for inclusion and analysis in the study. Clearly land prices will change over time. Implementation costs and revenue estimates will need to be updated periodically. Section 8.6 discusses the potential actions that local entities could take if revenues are not keeping up with costs. The fee is currently projected to be approximately $1500 per residential unit. Approximately a $700 increase over existing open space fees charged to new Development in the unincorporated County area. Significantly less than other mitigation fees currently imposed that often range from $2,500 to $10,000 or more per lot.

    H2-36 The appropriate Local Permittee with jurisdiction over the project area will be the final decision-maker on development applications, not the Wildlife Agencies. The Plan specifically states that the RCA does not usurp local land use controls. (See MSHCP, § 6.6.2.) It is true that the Plan gives the Wildlife Agencies the ability to revoke the Permits pursuant to state and federal law. However, these Agencies already have, through state and federal law, the ability to revoke the Permits through failure to comply with the Plan. The role of the federal and State governments during the MSHCP implementation process is thus not to "have the final say in every development application" but instead to track the implementation process to ensure that the terms and conditions of the MSHCP and related documents are met.

    H2-37 The MSHCP is intended to obtain Take Authorization and provide mitigation for impacts to Covered Species resulting from both public and private Development. An important component of the Plan is to mitigate for impacts to Covered Species associated with the construction and expansion of regional infrastructure, including roadways.Publicfacilities will be constructed in accordance with applicable infrastructure plans. The MSHCP is not intended to affect the extent to which local development interests may elect to enter into development or other agreements with land use jurisdictions to actually construct needed public facilities. Local Permittees will be responsible for ensuring compliance with the MSHCP for public and private projects. The Lead Agencies are unclear regarding the statement that infrastructure will be subject to the MSHCP without consideration of the land uses those facilities are to serve and are unable to provide further response.

    H2-38 See Response H2-35 regarding land values. See Response F-98 regarding the use of incentives. There is no requirement or indication that more than 56,000 acres will need to conserved by the Local Permittees.

    H2-39 The Wildlife Agencies will sign the appropriate documentation and issue the Permits authorizing the Take of Covered Species once they have made the findings required by FESA Section 10(a)(2) and the NCCP Act, Fish and Game Code section 2080, et seq., NEPA and CEQA. One of the required findings that must be made by the Wildlife Agencies prior to Permit issuance is that adequate funding is available for Plan implementation. The Wildlife Agencies will be contractually obligated to take certain actions for Plan implementation. (See IA, § 14.0 [USFWS Obligations] and 15.0 [CDFG Obligations].) No features of the MSHCP require input from the Wildlife Agencies for "every ministerial and discretionary land use proposal". The joint review process found in Section 6.6 of the MSHCP merely provides that the Wildlife Agencies will receive copies of project applications proposed within the Criteria Area. Estimates have been made of staffing requirements for implementation of the Monitoring Plan. These estimates are presented in Section 5.3 of the Plan.

    H2-40 The MSHCP process has been designed to be as straight-forward, unburdensome and timely as possible given the size and scope of the Plan and to run parallel to and in conjunction with existing development application processes. For a plan of this unprecedented scope, there must be an entity that has responsibility to ensure compliance. A joint powers authority was determined to be the appropriate mechanism because it would include representation from the County and participating Cities. However, these public agencies, not the RCA, will continue to have primary responsibility for review (and conditioning, as appropriate) of individual land use applications and issuing permits. As stated in the MSHCP, "the Regional Conservation Authority shall not limit County or City local land use authority, or prevent a Permittee from approving a Discretionary Project." (MSHCP, § 6.6.2, pp. 6-74, 6-78.) Given the size and scope of the Plan, it would be inefficient and unruly not to have a separate agency oversee the implementation of the Plan.

    H2-41 The County and participating Cities will comply with relevant statutory time frames. For example, the time needed for conducting the MSHCP's narrow endemic and other species surveys, the "HANS" process, and other requirements of the Plan will not prevent the County or Cities from complying with CEQA and the Permit Streamlining Act ("PSA"). Submission of a project application is the first step in the streamlined permitting process under the PSA. (Cal. Gov. Code § 65943) The PSA does not apply to negotiations that occur between the local public agency and the project developer prior to the acceptance of an application as complete. If a developer wishes, a project application may be submitted prior to completion of the HANS process. However, the application will not likely be deemed complete until the HANS process has been finalized. The PSA's time limits for processing permits and environmental documents are thus not applicable. Similarly, the first step in the CEQA process is a preliminary review, which must be completed within 30 days of receiving a project application. (14 Cal. Code Regs.§§ 15060, 15101.) Again, because a project application will not be deemed complete until the HANS process is complete, the time limits established under CEQA for processing project applications are not applicable.

    The MSHCP requirements will not violate any statutory protections. For example, Government Code Section 65858, limiting moratoriato a maximum two-year period, does not apply to the MSHCP because the HANS process is not a moratorium. A moratorium is defined by Government Code Section 65858 as an interim ordinance prohibiting uses of land which may conflict with a general plan, specific plan, or zoning proposal that the local agency is considering implementing, without following the procedures otherwise required for the adoption of a zoning ordinance. The MSHCP is simply not the sort of temporary freeze as is described by Section 65858, for the purpose of studying of alternatives to the general plan. As such, the requirements of this code section do not apply.

    Further, the procedures established under the MSHCP are not a constitutional "taking". The United States Supreme Court held in the recent case of Tahoe-Sierra Preservation Council, Inc. v. Tahoe Reg'l Planning Agency, (2002) 535 U.S. 302, that even a complete temporary building moratoria is not a per se takings. California courts have long held that planning functions are within a local agency's police powers, and are not takings. As was noted in the case of First English Evangelical Lutheran Church of Glendale v. County of Los Angeles, (1987) 482 U.S. 304, 321, the discussion of a temporary takings does not even apply "in the case of normal delays in obtaining building permits, changes in zoning ordinances, variances, and the like," which the Court views as properly a matter of state property law. Several California cases have held that no taking occurs simply because a governmental agency refuses to allow development until the procedural conditions and substantive requirements for development have been met. (See e.g., Landgate, Inc. v. California Coastal Commission, (1998) 17 Cal.4th 1006, 1027; Calprop Corp. v. City of San Diego, (2000) 77 Cal.App.4th 582.) As noted in Landgate, development delay "is an incident of property ownership and not a taking of property." (Id. at 1031) At issue in Calprop was the City of San Diego's change in regulation of specific property based in part on a Multi-Species Conservation Plan and compliance with CEQA and other environmental laws. The court noted that:

    "the differences between the city staff and plaintiff over the applicability and impact of the state and local environmental measures is just the sort of threshold dispute which the court in Landgate held is part of the normal regulatory process." (Id. at 33.)

    Morever, the court went on to say, "because the delay in developing a plan was...part of the normal regulatory process, the delay did not give rise to any takings claim.." (Id. at 34.) Under Calprop, it is clear that compliance with environmental laws and programs such as Habitat Conservation Plans are difficult pre-development matters to resolve, and that such resolution will legitimately take some time. The time it takes to make the appropriate decision under the MSHCP is simply a normal incident of property ownership and not a taking.

    Further, Seiber v. United States, (2002) 53 Fed. Cl. 570 specifically held that a period of time during which the plaintiff sought an incidental take permit as well as a HCP was not a temporary taking. Finally, in the case of Guinnane v. City and County of San Francisco, (1987) 197 Cal.App.3rd 862, the court rejected a claim that the designation of property as open space, to be studied for possible acquisition as a public park, amounted to unreasonable pre-condemnation activity. The court held that mere planning activities of the city did not entitle the plaintiff to require the city to condemn the property in question and pay the landowner the market value of the property before the threat of condemnation arose. Neither the MSHCP generally, nor the HANS process specifically, results in a taking.

    H2-42 See Response H2-20.

    H2-43 The Criteria-based plan provides exactly the flexibility that is raised by the commentor. Because the Criteria Area is approximately 310,000 acres, the Additional Reserve Lands require about 50%. Thus, there is inherent flexibility for Reserve Assembly. The HCP Handbook states that "HCP boundaries should encompass all areas within the applicant's project, land use area, or jurisdiction within which any permit or planned activities likely to result in incidental take are expected to occur...For regional HCPs, the size and configuration of the plan area will depend on various factors. Sometimes a regional HCP boundary will simply be a county line because a county government is the applicant... Generally, HCP applicants should be encouraged to consider as large and comprehensive a plan area as is feasible and consistent with their land or natural resource use authorities." (HCP Handbook, p. 3-11.) Consistent with these requirements, the MSHCP Plan Area encompasses all areas within the jurisdiction of the County and the participating Cities in which activities resulting in Take are expected to occur. The MSHCP clearly and specifically delineates these Plan boundaries. (See MSHCP, pp. 1-1, and Figures 2-9 and 3-3.) Even if property with vested rights is in the Criteria Area but cannot be conserved, Reserve Assembly is still feasible.

    H2-44 See Response F-98 regarding the use of incentives. The funding plan anticipates that up to 41,000 acres can be conserved through dedications required to address open space, topography, and physical constraints or through the application of incentives. It is speculative to say that more than 56,000 acres of privately owned property will need to be purchased by the Local Permittees for Reserve Assembly.

    H2-45 The comment states information from the MSHCP, and no further response is required.

    H2-46 See Responses G-10, H2-93 through H2-122 and N3-1 through N3-3. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of : Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003. The commentor's statement that there is "inadequate science" does not represent a meaningful or relevant standard for information required in an HCP or an NCCP. The federal standard for information in HCPs requires that the best scientific and commercial data available be used, and the State Fish and Game Code requires the use of the best scientific and other information that is reasonably available. These standards were met in the Draft MSHCP.

    With regard to soils data, discernable natural changes in soil composition and characteristics occur over extremely long periods of time, greatly exceeding 30 years. Therefore, the fact that some of the soils data used in some of the species analyses for the Draft MSHCP date back 30 years, has no material effect on those analyses.

    H2-47 Adaptive Management has always been a fundamental element in the MSHCP planning effort, and is considered by the scientific community to be the best approach for managing reserves in an urban matrix. See Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of : Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003. Both the current and earlier drafts of the MSHCP accurately characterize the experimental nature of Adaptive Management programs. This is a well-documented characteristic of Adaptive Management. The proposed MSHCP utilizes a well-funded long-term Management and Monitoring Program to respond to dynamic changes expected over time within the MSHCP Conservation Area; changes that are related to both natural processes and human induced factors.

    H2-48 See Response H2-35 regarding land values. See Responses F-98 and H2-44 regarding incentives.

    H2-49 See Response H2-21A. The MSHCP is in compliance with existing Local, State and Federal Laws and Regulations and does not impinge on or violate any constitutional rights.

    H2-50 The Lead Agencies are fully committed to reviewing and considering each comment. However, it is up to the Lead Agencies to determine which comments and resulting proposed changes to the Plan are feasible and appropriate, and would still allow Permit issuance by the Wildlife Agencies. As explained in the responses to comments contained herein and elsewhere, the MSHCP does not violate CEQA, NEPA, FESA, CESA or any other applicable state and federal laws. The comment is not sufficiently specific to provide further response.

    H2-51 The County has met with the commentor several times to attempt to craft a development scenario for the vast majority of the referenced property while addressing existing environmental constraints. The Lead Agencies encourage the commentor to continue this effort to quickly resolve outstanding issues. See Responses H2-23 and H2-270.

    H2-52 Covered Activities are described in Section 7 of the MSHCP. Review of private projects for consistency with the MSHCP will occur through the HANS process. Flexibility is incorporated in the HANS process which may allow modifications to be made to projects without "triggering a second full MSHCP review."

    H2-53 See Responses H2-41 and H2-181. Thus, no revisions are required.

    H2-54 See Response H2-52. The Lead Agencies do not agree that it is appropriate to exempt subsequent permit and project approvals from a "second review under the MSHCP" in that it is necessary to determine if the subsequent permit or project approval is consistent with any determination or agreement that resulted from a first review under the MSHCP.

    H2-55 The County would not require that the acquisition of the conservation portion of a proposed project be completed before processing the development application on the remainder. HANS encourages this approach by entering into a purchase agreement for the lands to be acquired and concurrently processing the development portion of the project.

    H2-56 See Response H2-28. The Lead Agencies anticipate that most if not all, in the case of the County, ministerial permits are exempt from the provisions of the MSHCP. Only limited City ministerial approvals that could have impacts on Covered Species will be subject to the MSHCP. For the same reason, grading permits, whether discretionary or ministerial, will be subject to the provisions of the MSHCP.

    H2-57 See Response H2-34 regarding existing permitted land uses. The MSHCP does not propose applying these procedures and guidelines to existing land uses.

    H2-58 The Draft MSHCP does not propose "buffers." The Urban/Wildlands Interface Procedures and Guidelines are considerations that are intended to guide decisions

    regarding the selection of appropriate landscaping materials, fencing and other design considerations in appropriate circumstances where urban uses are proposed in proximity to lands that have been incorporated into the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    H2-59 The Draft MSHCP, Section 6.1.3, provides a complete discussion of the rationale for the need for the Narrow Endemic Plant Species Procedures and Guidelines to support coverage for those species. Many of the species that rely on the Narrow Endemic Plant Species Procedures and Guidelines for coverage are not currently listed as federal or state endangered or threatened. Based on the information available for these species, coverage for these species, as currently proposed in the Draft MSHCP, could not be demonstrated without the Narrow Endemic Plant Species Procedures and Guidelines.

    H2-60 The Draft MSHCP, Section 6.1.2, discusses the process through which Conservation of Covered Species that rely on Riparian, Riverine and Vernal Pool habitat resources will be achieved. The mechanism identified for carrying out this process is identified as being the existing CEQA process. Limitation of the discussion to ACOE jurisdictional areas only would not fully address the issues related to all of the Covered Species identified.

    H2-61 The Plan encourages the use of incentives and anticipates additional incentives being developed. The commentor is encouraged to propose additional incentives that would benefit property owners and further the implementation of the MSHCP. See Response F-98.

    H2-62 The comments and memoranda previously submitted to the County by Murdock and Mr. Myshak have been responded to elsewhere.

    H2-63 The Lead Agencies concur that the boundaries of the properties described in the comment are located within the Criteria Area. Information regarding the current entitlement process for these properties is noted and no further response is necessary.

    H2-64 With regard to property subject to a development agreement with vested rights, see Response H2-270.

    H2-65 This comment describes the location, size and features of the commentor's proposed "Outlet Mall Expansion" project and no further response is required. See Response H2-270.

    H2-66 See Responses H2-64 and H2-270.

    H2-67 The comment identifies the commentor's ownership and land use operations on the property referred to as the "Pacific Clay Property," and no further response is required.

    H2-68 The MSHCP does not interfere with on-going existing permitted uses. See Response H2-23.

    H2-69 This comment describes the location, size and features of the commentor's proposed "El Cerrito Specific Plan" project and no further response is required.

    H2-70 See Response H2-171.

    H2-71 The commentor is purportedly restating the project description in the Draft EIR/EIS and the description of the Western Riverside County MSHCP and no further response is required.

    H2-72 The Draft EIR/EIS fully complies with both state and federal law, as set forth in more detail in this comment letter. The language of the California Public Resources Code, the State CEQA Guidelines and case law speak for themselves and the comment therefore does not require further response.

    H2-73 This comment purports to restate federal and case law and no further response is required.

    H2-74 This comment purportedly restates state law; however the commentor mischaracterizes the courts opinion in Sundstrom v. County of Mendocino (1988) 202 Cal.App.3d 296. CEQA allows lead agencies to adopt mitigation measures to be implemented after completion of further studies and evaluations of the mitigation measures provided that performance standards are specified in the mitigation measure. (See, Sacramento Old City Ass'n v. City Council (1991) 229 Cal.App.3d 1011, 1021.) In the case cited by commentor, the court recognized that environmental review must be performed at the "earliest feasible stage in the planning process" thereby implicitly recognizing that some studies can be conducted after project approval. (Sundstrom v. County of Mendocino (1988) 202 Cal. App. 3d 296, 307.) A lead agency may rely on future studies to define how a mitigation measure will be designed and implemented. This approach is appropriate to tailor the mitigation measures to fit the actual environmental conditions.

    (See National Parks & Conserv. Ass'n v. County of Riverside (1999) 71 Cal.App.4th 1341, 1366.) Additionally, the language of the California Public Resources Code and the State CEQA Guidelines speak for themselves and no further response is required.

    H2-75 This comment purports to summarize state, federal and case law and no further response is required.

    H2-76 This comment purports to summarize state, federal and case law and no further response is required.

    H2-76A See Responses H2-77 through H2-84.

    H2-77 As stated in Response H2-10, there is no standardized format utilized or mandated for the preparation of Environmental Impact Reports. The document's Executive Summary summarizes the purpose of the EIR/EIS (Section ES.1), introduces the reader to the RCIP process (Section ES.2), describes the project location (Section ES.3), states the purpose of and need for the EIR/EIS (Section ES.4), summarizes the proposed MSHCP (Section ES.5), outlines the goals of the MSHCP process (Section ES.6), identifies alternatives to the MSHCP (Section ES.7), discusses issues raised during the MSHCP process (Section ES.8), and summarizes potential impacts/consequences associated with implementation of the MSHCP (Section ES.9). The EIR/EIS includes a summary of potential impacts/consequences and their significance after implementation of the proposed action, and each alternative (Table ES-B).

    The MSHCP is "self-mitigating." With the exception of impacts to upland vegetation, non-covered non-listed species, mineral resources and the population/growth projections (which remain significant and unavoidable) implementation of the management and monitoring programs outlined in the MSHCP document would mitigate all other potential impacts/ consequences of the Proposed Action to a less than significant level. For the impacts that remain significant after implementation of the MSHCP, no feasible mitigation measures exist to reduce impacts to a less than significant level. The Proposed Action assumes the adoption of the MSHCP and the implementation of the policies, strategies, and programs identified therein. As the MSHCP is "self-mitigating," no additional mitigation measures were identified or required in the EIR/EIS.

    H2-78 The commentor states that the Draft EIR/EIS is inadequate because the Table ES-B in the Executive Summary does not differentiate between the MSHCP's project-specific and cumulative impacts. Such a differentiation is not required by CEQA (Guidelines, Section 15123) or NEPA, nor is the inclusion of a summary table (such as Table ES-B). To provide clarification, however, the text on page ES-11 in Section ES.9 has been modified as follows:

    Table ES-B summarizes the significance of direct and indirect impacts under each alternative after the incorporation of mitigation measures for each resource area discussed in this EIR/EIS. Cumulative impacts are discussed in Section 5.0.

    H2-79 Table ES-B provides a summary of the impacts/consequences resulting from implementation of the Proposed Action and each alternative, as well as the level of significance of said impacts. As CEQA Guidelines Section 15123(c) states an EIR's summary, "...should normally not exceed 15 pages." A detailed analysis of the impacts/consequences of the Proposed Action and each alternative is provided in Section 4.0 of the EIR/EIS.

    Under State CEQA Guidelines section 15126.6, an "alternatives matrix" is not required. Moreover, if a lead agency elects to prepare a matrix, it can include any information it deems relevant. Table ES-B summarizes potential impacts/consequences that would result from implementation of the Proposed Action and the various alternatives, and is not intended to act as a mitigation monitoring or compliance program. As stated in Response H2-12, the MSHCP is "self-mitigating." With the exception of impacts to upland vegetation, non-covered non-listed species, mineral resources and the population/growth projections (which remain significant and unavoidable) implementation of the Management and Monitoring Programs outlined in the MSHCP would mitigate all other potential impacts/consequences of the Proposed Action to a less than significant level.

    H2-80 See Response H2-79. Table ES-B summarizes potential impacts/consequences that would result from implementation of the Proposed Action and the various alternatives, and is not intended to act as a mitigation monitoring or compliance program. As stated in response H2-12, the MSHCP is "self-mitigating." With the exception of impacts to upland vegetation, non-covered non-listed species, mineral resources and the population/growth projections (which remain significant and unavoidable) implementation of the management and monitoring programs outlined in the MSHCP document would mitigate all other potential impacts/consequences of the Proposed Action to a less than significant level.

    Table ES-B provides a summary of the impacts/consequences resulting from implementation of the Proposed Action and each alternative, as well as the level of significance of said impacts. As CEQA Guidelines Section 15123(c) states an EIR's summary, "...should normally not exceed 15 pages." A detailed analysis of the impacts/consequences of the Proposed Action and each alternative is provided in Section 4.0 of the EIR/EIS.

    H2-81 The commentor does not explain why the Executive Summary is confusing and fails to identify the information that is lacking as required by CEQA. As CEQA Guidelines Section 15123 states, an EIR's summary shall contain the following:

    1. An EIR shall contain a brief summary of the proposed actions and its consequences. The language of the summary should be a clear and simple as reasonably practical.
    2. The summary shall identify:
      1. Each significant effect with proposed mitigation measures and alternatives that would reduce or avoid that effect;
      2. Areas of controversy known to the Lead Agency including issues raised by agencies and the public; and
      3. Issues to be resolved including the choice among alternatives and whether or how to mitigate the significant effects.
    3. The summary should normally not exceed 15 pages.

    Sections 21083, 21087 and 21061 of Public Resources Code. The document's Executive Summary summarizes the purpose of the EIR/EIS (Section ES.1), introduces the reader to the RCIP process (Section ES.2), describes the project location (Section ES.3), states the purpose of and need for the EIR/EIS (Section ES.4), summarizes the proposed MSHCP (Section ES.5), outlines the goals of the MSHCP process (Section ES.6), identifies alternatives to the MSHCP (Section ES.7), discusses issues raised during the MSHCP process (Section ES.8), and summarizes potential impacts/consequences associated with implementation of the MSHCP (Section ES.9).

    Table ES-B provides a summary of the impacts/consequences resulting from implementation of the Proposed Action and each alternative, as well as the level of significance. A detailed analysis of the impacts/consequences of the Proposed Action and each alternative is provided in Section 4.0 of the EIR/EIS. The Lead Agencies believe the Executive Summary provides the public with an adequate summary of the project and all requisite information required by CEQA and NEPA. See also Responses H2-77 through H2-80.

    H2-82 State CEQA Guidelines section 15124 states that the description of the project must contain the following information but should not supply extensive detail beyond that needed for evaluation and review of the environmental impact: "(a) The precise location and boundaries of the proposed project shall be shown on a detailed map, preferably topographic. The location of the project shall also appear on a regional map; (b) A statement of the objectives sought by the proposed project. A clearly written statement of objectives will help the lead agency develop a reasonable range of alternatives to evaluate in the EIR and will aid the decision makers in preparing findings or a statement of overriding considerations, if necessary. The statement of objectives should include the underlying purpose of the project; (c) A general description of the project's technical, economic, and environmental characteristics, considering the principal engineering proposals if any and supporting public service facilities; [and] (d) A statement briefly describing the intended uses of the EIR." The comment purports to restate state, federal and case law and no further response is required.

    H2-83 This comment purports to quote case law and no further response is required.

    H2-84 This comment purports to quote case law and no further response is required.

    H2-84A See Responses H2-85 through H2-130.

    H2-85 See Responses H2-11 and H2-82. The MSHCP clearly and specifically delineates the Plan boundaries. (See Draft EIR/EIS p 2.1-2, and Figure 2.1; see also Draft MSHCP, pp. 1-1, and Figures 2-9 and 3-3.) The commentor seems to confuse the establishment of the MSHCP boundaries with the boundaries for the MSHCP Conservation and Criteria Areas. (See Response H2-43.) Establishing "hard line" boundaries, or identifying the precise parcels to be included in, the Conservation Area, the Criteria Area, Cores and Linkages, and Edge Effects is not required by the FESA or CEQA. (CITE ; see generally Section 10 Handbook, p. 3-22 [it is acceptable for HCP applicants to conduct activities prior to the time when replacement habitat can be provided, particularly in the context of regional HCPs where mitigation fees will be used as a funding mechanism]. (State CEQA Guidelines, § 15145 [due to the scope of the project it is too speculative to identify with certainty the exact boundaries].) Indeed, because regional HCPs are often funded through collected habitat mitigation fees and other revolving sources of funding, mitigation lands are not all purchased "up front." Instead, conservation lands are purchased in a timely manner as funds become available. However, because the precise mitigation lands that might be available for acquisition in the coming years cannot be adequately predicted at this time, and due to other legal constraints, the MSHCP identifies Core Areas and conservation Criteria to facilitate future acquisition of mitigation lands for the Plan.

    Additionally, under the MSHCP, a clear path to either Conservation or Development is defined, which allows property owners to determine the extent of the MSHCP's potential impacts to their property. The commentor is correct that the MSHCP calls for 153,000 acres of additional Conservation that will be obtained from the approximately 310,000 acre Criteria Area. This is why the EIR/EIS states that the precise boundaries of the Additional Reserve Lands have not yet been determined. Any property owner can immediately ascertain at this point in time whether their property is within the Criteria Area and thus determine the Criteria requirements (http://www.rcip.org/PDFlib/ rcip/apn_search.asp).

    H2-86 See Response H2-11. Also, note that the Criteria Area is depicted for each Area Plan in Figures 3-4 through 3-35 of the Plan.

    H2-87 See Responses H2-3, H2-11, H2-85, and H2-86.

    H2-88 See Responses H2-3, H2-11, H2-85, and H2-86.

    H2-89 The commentor states that the Draft EIR/EIS underestimates the size of the Criteria Area. The Draft EIR-EIS states that the Criteria Area is "approximately 300,000 acres." This is consistent with the approximated acreage provided in the MSHCP. The outer boundary of the Criteria Area depicted on Figure 3-1 of the November 15, 2002 Draft MSHCP is calculated through GIS to be 310,000 acres. Not all of the Cells are precisely 160 acres, based on USGS mapping. Therefore the commentor's calculation of the size of the Criteria Area is not correct. The impacts analyzed in the Draft EIR/EIS were based on the estimated 153,000 acres that would be conserved from within the Criteria Area, not on the entire extent of the Criteria Area. Therefore, the approximate nature of the description of the Criteria Area's extent does not affect the outcome of the analysis. The Criteria Area has been refined and modified as new information has become available. The purported statement by DUDEK estimating the size of the Criteria Area as approximately 350,000 acres during a consultation between Murdock and Dudek in October 2002 would have reflected that the process of refinement was still ongoing at that time.

    H2-90 Figure 4.1.3 does not, as commentor suggests, necessarily identify the 153,000 acres of private land that will be conserved as Additional Reserve Lands. Linkages are only one part of such acreage. Figure 3-2 of the MSHCP and Figure 4.1.3 of the Draft EIR/EIS are intended to demonstrate the interrelationship between Linkages and other aspects of the MSHCP Conservation Area, such as Cores and Noncontiguous Habitat Blocks. The proposed Cores and Linkages depicted in Figure 3-2 of the MSHCP and Figure 4.1.3 of the Draft EIR/EIS are based on a potential reserve design developed for analytical purposes -- they are not "hard-line" boundaries. Likewise, the quantitative information presented with each Core or Linkage is based on a potential reserve design. The potential reserve design used to form Figure 3-2 of the MSHCP and Figure 4.1.3 of the Draft EIR/EIS was merely an analytical tool intended to describe one possible way in which the MSHCP Conservation Area could be configured consistent with MSHCP Criteria and to demonstrate to the decision-makers how Linkages would be utilized; it does not represent the only possible reserve that could be assembled consistent with the MSHCP Criteria. Flexibility is essential to assembly of the MSHCP Conservation Area to enable new information and data to be incorporated as part of the long-term MSHCP implementation process. Accordingly, the scale of the figures is sufficient to demonstrate how the Cores and Linkages interrelate. See Responses H2-3, H2-11, H2-43, H2-85, and H2-86.

    H2-91 As explained in Response H2-90, the precise boundaries of the MSHCP have not been determined. However, in order to illustrate the various concepts involved in the Conservation Area Assembly, Figure 4.1.3 of the Draft EIR/EIS and Figure 3-2 of the MSHCP depict how Cores and Linkages interrelate. These figures only represent one possible configuration consistent with MSHCP Criteria. See Responses H2-3, H2-11, H243, H2-85, H2-86, and H2-90.

    H2-92 The Draft MSHCP does in fact, provide a clear and specific definition of Edge Effects, which is contained in the "Definitions" section of Volume I of the Draft MSHCP (pg. Def/Acr-vi).

    Section 3.1.4 of the Draft MSHCP further defines Edge Effects, and provides citations to scientific literature on the study of Edge Effects. These studies additionally belie the commentor's assertion that Edge Effects are "amorphous," as they have been subject to extensive scientific analysis, review and corroboration.

    Regarding the assertion that Edge Effects are "uncertain" or that the Draft EIR/EIS and Draft MSHCP "fail to provide any description of the extent of the edge effects boundaries," Section 3.2.3 of the MSHCP, beginning on page 3-31 and continuing through page 3-108 provides extensive discussions of the anticipated Edge Effects for each of the existing and proposed Cores and Linkages associated with the MSHCP Conservation Area, including quantification of the total estimated edge area, the interior area, and the perimeter to area ratio for each component of the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    Edge Effect boundaries are not described in the Draft EIR/EIS or the MSHCP because no such boundaries are established by the MSHCP. The commentor correctly notes measures identified in the Draft EIR/EIS and the MSHCP to minimize Edge Effects.

    H2-93 This comment appears to summarize state law; however, the case cited in the comment, Berkeley Keep Jets Over the Bay Com. v. Board of Port Cmrs. (2001) 91 Cal.App.4th 1344, is not instructive in this instance. At the time the EIR at issue in Berkeley Keep Jets was written, the 1991 profile was the most recently published profile. After the draft EIR was circulated for public review and comment, the use of this speculation profile was criticized as "outdated" because the 1991 profile had been replaced by a 1994 speculation profile. Because newer information existed prior to the publication of the draft EIR, the court held that the use of the older profile was inappropriate. (Id. at p. 1367.) In contrast, the data used in the Draft EIR/EIS for the MSHCP is the most recent and accurate information available for the entire Plan Area and satisfies CEQA's requirement that the County make "a good faith effort at full disclosure." See Response H2-22. Since the comment does not raise an issue regarding environmental impacts, no further response is required.

    H2-94 This comment purportedly summarizes federal law and no further response is required.

    H2-95 This comment purportedly summarizes federal and case law and no further response is required.

    H2-96 The comment is purportedly a restatement of certain documents and Fish and Game Code Section and no further response is required.

    H2-97 The MSHCP utilizes the best scientific and commercial data available, as explained in detail in Responses G-10, H2-93 through H2-122 and N3-1 through N3-3. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of : Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003.

    H2-98 The Draft MSHCP and Draft EIR/EIS fully acknowledge the limitations associated with the database and conclude that the database is adequate for the purposes of the Draft MSHCP. The Draft MSHCP, Section 2.1.1 states the following:

    The MSHCP incorporates features to update the vegetation map as new information is obtained, such as the development of a new vegetation map as part of the MSHCP Monitoring Program. The timing and methodology for developing this map is described in Section 5.3 of this document. This approach is compatible with the criteria-based format of the MSHCP which calls for assembly of 153,000 acres of Additional Reserve Lands from within an approximate 300,000-acre Criteria Area.

    The Draft MSHCP incorporates this and other features to address the data limitations during the long term Reserve Assembly and MSHCP implementation process, including the following:

    • One of the first tasks called for in the MSHCP Monitoring Plan is an update to the vegetation map using a rapid assessment methodology described in Section 5.0 of the MSHCP;
    • The criteria-based approach to Reserve Assembly as described in the MSHCP is clearly directed at responding to project-specific information as it is brought forward during the individual project review process;
    • The MSHCP Monitoring and Management Plan and the annual reporting process call for incorporation of new data into the MSHCP throughout the life of the Permit.

    H2-99 The Draft MSHCP, Section 2.1.1 acknowledges the limitations of the Coastal Sage Scrub Quality Model. The conservation analyses conducted for each of the species that are associated with coastal sage scrub habitats consider the limitations of the data available from this model, along with all other pertinent available data.

    H2-100 Page 3.1-3 of the Draft EIR/EIS refers to the data source for species and provides a UCR public website reference. These data are also available on the RCIP website (www.rcip.org). The website provides detailed information, including record sources, locations and dates, where such information is available. In some cases, records consist of museum voucher specimens for which no collection dates were available, or records from undated sources. It is well documented in both the UCR database and the Draft MSHCP that the species occurrence data are from a variety of sources with a variety of precision levels (location, dates, etc.). It is also well documented in the species accounts included in Volume II Section B of the MSHCP that the precision of the individual data points were considered in the analysis conducted for the Draft MSHCP.

    H2-101 See Response H2-100.

    H2-102 The Draft MSHCP, Section 2.1.1 acknowledges the limitations of the wetlands data. The conservation analyses conducted for each of the species that are associated with wetland habitats consider all relevant available data.

    H2-103 This comment merely states the sources of soil data noted in the Draft MSHCP and Draft EIR/EIS. It is assumed that the commentor is again taking issue with the age of the soils data. If so, the following reiteration of a portion of Response H2-46 also applies: With regard to soils data, discernable natural changes in soil composition and characteristics occur over extremely long periods of time, greatly exceeding 30 years. Therefore, the fact that some of the soils data used in some of the species analyses for the Draft MSHCP date back 30 years, has no material effect on those analyses.

    H2-104 This comment merely states the source and date of vegetation data used in the Draft MSHCP, as noted in the Draft MSHCP and Draft EIR/EIS. If the purpose of this comment is to reiterate the commentor's previous comments related to the age of the vegetation data, see Response H2-98.

    H2-105 See Response H2-98.

    H2-106 This comment summarizes information contained in the Draft MSHCP regarding the limitations of the vegetation data base. It is assumed that the commentor is reiterating concerns raised regarding the vegetation database. If such is the case, see Response H2-98.

    H2-107 This comment summarizes information contained in the Draft MSHCP regarding the limitations of the vegetation data base. It is assumed that the commentor is reiterating concerns raised regarding the vegetation data base. If such is the case, see Response H2-98.

    H2-108 See Responses H2-47 and H2-100.

    H2-109 This comment refers to selected language from a discussion of potential impacts to San Diego button celery. To understand the actual meaning of the language, it is important to note the broader context of the discussion, which is presented as follows:

    No known localities would be within the area subject to Take Authorization. Although no Take of known occurrences would occur as part of the MSHCP, certain areas located outside the MSHCP Conservation Area may contain vernal pool Habitat that could support this species. Precision is lacking within the vegetation database and, therefore, the precise level of impact cannot be quantified at this time.

    The MSHCP acknowledges that the landscape level of planning being undertaken for the 1.26 million-acre Plan Area cannot provide sufficient evidence to support a conclusion that all potential occurrences of this plant species are within the MSHCP Conservation Area, particularly since the ability to observe the species is seasonally limited. Therefore, in an attempt to fully disclose the potential impacts to this species, the EIR/EIS acknowledges that there is a possibility for the species to occur outside of the areas anticipated to be conserved. However, the MSHCP has determined that, based on Conservation of sufficient habitat resources within the MSHCP Conservation Area, in addition to MSHCP Policies (this species occurs in association with vernal pools, which are subject to additional survey requirements both within and outside of the Criteria Area) that the species is considered to be adequately conserved.

    H2-110 The commentor has restated information contained in the Draft EIR/EIS. The referenced statement supports the determination that impacts to non-covered species are considered to be significant and not mitigated, for the very reason that adequate data were not available and could not be obtained to support coverage for these non-covered species. Therefore, it is not clear what comment is represented by the reiteration of this factual information.

    H2-111 The analysis contained in the Draft MSHCP uses the best scientific and commercial data available to support its conclusion of coverage for the non-listed Covered Species (see Responses G-10, H2-93 through H2-122 and N3-1 through N3-3; see also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of : Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003). For purposes of full public disclosure under CEQA and NEPA, the Draft EIR/EIS acknowledges that there may be occurrences of species that are not contained in the existing species database. However, this acknowledgment does not undermine the analysis and conclusions of the Draft MSHCP, since the analysis included a variety of factors, including but not limited to species occurrence data to support coverage of species. It is well documented that the limitations of the species occurrence data were a consideration in the analysis conducted for the Draft MSHCP.

    H2-112 See Responses H2-101 and H2-111.

    H2-113 The factual information from the Draft MSHCP that the commentor reiterates explains the purpose for Narrow Endemic Plant Species policies. It is well documented that the limitations of the species occurrence data were a consideration in the analysis conducted for the Draft MSHCP. For the identified Narrow Endemic Plant Species, the policies contained in Section 6.1.3 of the Draft MSHCP provide for collection of site specific data that could not feasibly be compiled for the entire 1.26 million-acre Plan Area in advance of the regional planning effort. The proposed policies provide a rational process for collecting additional data and incorporating those data into the flexible Reserve Assembly process to achieve Conservation within the most efficient reserve design possible.

    H2-114 See Response H2-113. The need for surveys and rationale for approach to coverage for the species that are addressed in the section of the MSHCP from which this comment quotes are the same as for the Narrow Endemic Plant Species.

    H2-115 The commentor confuses the dependencyrelationship between the vegetation map and the 1995 report prepared by PSBS/KTU&A. It is not the vegetation map that relies on the report, but rather it is the report that is partly reliant on the vegetation map. At the time of publication of the 1995 report, the then Advisory Committee recommended that additional groundtruthing and refinements should be completed to verify the information in the 1995 report. However, in the MSHCP Planning Agreement, the then Advisory Committee recognized that the MSHCP would be based on the best available scientifically and commercially available data which includes the MSHCP vegetation map. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of : Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003.

    H2-116 Regarding the reference to the Wildlife Agencies' comments on the vegetation map, the Draft MSHCP, Section 3.1.6 identifies considerations made for development that has occurred since the vegetation database was compiled:

    Areas developed since the MSHCP vegetation map was prepared (1995) were defined using the Existing Land Use coverage developed in 1999 for the RCIP. The Existing Land Use coverage is based on 1998 aerial photography and 1997 SCAG database. Acreage estimates were determined for areas that appear to have been developed since the MSHCP vegetation map was prepared and these acreages were deleted from the overall acreage totals.

    In addition, Section 5.5.3 of the MSHCP identifies the process through which the vegetation database will be continually updated through the life of the Plan. An initial task of the Biological Monitoring Program will be to conduct an inventory of the distribution and abundance of Vegetation Communities and wildlife Habitats to create a baseline Vegetation Community GIS layer and map and updates will be made every eight years. In addition, the criteria-based approach to Reserve Assembly as described in the Draft MSHCP is clearly directed at responding to project-specific information as it is brought forward during the individual project review process. The MSHCP Monitoring and Management Plan and the annual reporting process also call for incorporation of new data into the MSHCP throughout the life of the Permit.

    Regarding the reference to the CNPS letter dated March 21, 2002, the commentor has taken the referenced language out of context. The entirety of the CNPS comment should be noted for the record:

    We are greatly concerned about the quality of the material presented within the proposed plan. There are a large number of errors and inconsistencies between sections that should be corrected before the release of the draft. (Emphasis added)

    The inconsistencies between sections of the March, 2002 Preliminary Draft MSHCP have been corrected in the Draft MSHCP. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence Review of : Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003.

    H2-117 The Lead Agencies do not agree that the statements indicated in the comment accurately reflect discussions that occurred during the referenced meeting. With respect to use of best scientificallyand commercially available data, see Responses G-10, H2-93 through H2-122 and N3-1 through N3-3. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of : Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003.

    H2-118 The MSHCP was designed to cover the broadest range of species possible to provide the greatest certainty to property owners and Permittees that no new regulation will impose additional burdens to maximize the benefits of the land conserved. As stated in Section 2.1.4 of the Draft MSHCP, the initial list of species considered for Conservation included 247 species. These 247 species were those for which the Wildlife Agencies, working with the MSHCP Advisory Committee initially determined could potentially exist within the MSHCP Plan Area, based on the best available species occurrence data and habitat information at that time. Early in the planning process, it was determined that sufficient information did not exist for many of these species to proceed with conservation planning. The initial list of 247 species was reduced to 165 species as a result of extensive analysis of all 247 species conducted as a part of the August 9, 1999 Draft MSHCP Proposal prepared by DUDEK. The list was further refined to 146 species as the MSHCP planning process proceeded and research determined that sufficient information needed to proceed with conservation planning could not be obtained for certain species. Information used to determine species coverage throughout the Draft MSHCP planning process represents the best scientific and commercial data available for those species.

    H2-119 See Responses H2-11, H2-85, H2-86, H2-90 and H2-96 through H2-117.

    H2-120 Inputting the Assessors Parcel number into the web site will tell a property owner if his/her property is in the Criteria Area and within a Cell. This effort should take a matter of minutes and can be done today. See Responses H2-11, H2-85, H2-86, and H2-90.

    H2-121 The Lead Agencies believe that the MSHCP and the Draft EIR/EIS fully comply with applicable state and federal law. See Response H2-93 regarding compliance with CEQA. The data used in the Draft EIR/EIS for the MSHCP is the most recent and accurate information available for the entire Plan Area and accordingly, satisfies NEPA's requirement that the Lead Agencies provide "a full and fair discussion of significant environmental impacts." See Responses G-10, H2-93 through H2-122 and N3-1 through N3-3. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of : Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003.

    The Lead Agencies disagree with the commentor's conclusion that the adaptive management and vegetation data base update provisions of the MSHCP are an improper deferral. State CEQA Guidelines section 15146, cited in the comment, does not address deferral of analysis. Instead, it states that the "degree of specificity required in an EIR will correspond to the degree of specificity involved in the underlying activity which is described in the EIR." Additionally, case law holds that deferral of more detailed analysis is legitimate "where practical considerations prohibit devising such measures early in the planning process (e.g., at the general plan amendment or rezone stage), the agency can commit itself to eventually devising measures that will satisfy specific performance criteria articulated at the time of project approval... [Citation.]" (Sacramento Old City Assn. v. City Council (1991) 229 Cal.App.3d 1011, 1029.)

    The adaptive management and vegetation data base update provisions of the MSHCP are not an improper deferral but instead are a means by which newly discovered science may be included in the MSHCP Conservation Area development process. Considering the amount of time that it may take to assemble the MSHCP Conservation Area, the County and the Wildlife Agencies determined that it was impractical to rely on vegetative and species data created in the beginning stages of the conservation planning process.

    Additionally, the Draft EIR/EIS states that the management and monitoring programs incorporated in the MSHCP would be implemented to mitigate to the extent feasible any significant effects remaining after application of the minimizing measures incorporated in the MSHCP. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 4.1-159.) These "self-mitigating" project components avoid, minimize, rectify, reduce or compensate for environmental impacts in conformity with NEPA. (40 CFR 1508.20; 40 CFR 1502.16(h).) Consistent with NEPA regulations, USFWS' record of decision will also state whether all practicable means to avoid or minimize environmental harm from the alternative selected have been adopted, and if not, why they were not. (40 CFR 1505.2(c).)

    H2-122 This comment purportedly restates information contained in the Draft MSHCP, the Draft IA and the Draft EIR/EIS regarding the requirements and the process through which the Permittees will receive Take Permits. No further response is required.

    H2-123 The documents speak for themselves and no further response is required.

    H2-124 See Responses H2-23, H2-64, H2-65 and H2-270. Although projects with vested rights may not be subject to the provisions of the MSHCP, an MSHCP consistency review must still occur when Development is proposed.

    H2-125 See Response H2-270.

    H2-126 The project description is adequate for CEQA. See Responses H2-3, H2-11 and H2-64 through H2-125.

    H2-127 The Draft EIR/EIS clearly identifies impacts to mineral resources. Approximately 19,500 acres in western Riverside County have been identified as State-designated Mineral Resource Zones (MRZs). The Draft EIR/EIS specifically states that "[a]ctive mineral extraction areas will not be incorporated into the Conservation Area." (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 5.1-8.) However, under the MSHCP, about 4,300 acres of land designated as MRZs that are not permitted for mineral extraction operation, will be incorporated into the MSHCP Conservation Area. (Draft EIR/EIR, p. 4.2-16.) This represents approximately 22 percent of MRZ land within the proposed Plan Area. Since 10,900 acres of MRZ lands would remain available for use, the proposed MSHCP will not result in the loss of a locally important mineral resource recovery site, as delineated on a General Plan or other land use plan. (Ibid.) However, the Draft EIR/EIS does recognize that the loss of any portion of MRZ, when considered with similar losses that may result from the implementation of other projects, such as the assembly of the existing reserves, represents a cumulatively significant and unavoidable impact. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 5.1-8.)

    H2-128 The vegetation map used in the analysis for the Draft MSHCP identifies mining activities as developed, disturbed land. Additional data regarding developed, disturbed lands that are not depicted on the vegetation map, but were considered in the MSHCP Criteria, were collected in 1999. Conservation sought under the MSHCP Criteria is based on conservation value, as described throughout the Draft MSHCP. The Criteria do not propose Conservation on lands within the developed, disturbed vegetation category, but may propose Conservation within Cells that contain some developed, disturbed land. However, the areas proposed for Conservation within those Cells are those areas that are not considered to be developed or disturbed.

    H2-129 It is unclear how excluding the commentor's Pacific Clay Property from the Criteria Area would be consistent with the Draft EIR/EIS or would create a more accurate project description.

    H2-130 The commentor lists the Project Objectives set forth in the Draft EIR/EIS on page 1.2-4. The commentor further states that the MSHCP fails to meet the objectives, and that this failure renders the project description in the Draft EIR/EIS inadequate. The Lead Agencies maintain that the Project Objectives stated in the Draft EIR/EIS are indeed those used to develop the MSHCP, and disagree with the commentor's opinion that the MSHCP fails to meet the objectives. The commentor makes more detailed statements in subsequent comments, which are answered below as outlined in the comment letter.

    H2-131 The MSHCP is designed to fulfill conservation objectives, which are based upon the requirements of FESA and the NCCP Act. See Response H2-130. The proposed MSHCP meets all project objectives identified in Section 1.2.2 of the Draft EIR/EIS. Specifically, the proposed MSHCP will:

    • Assemble a criteria-based MSHCP Conservation Area that will assist in the Conservation of Covered Species while allowing flexibility in the assembly and location of the MSHCP Conservation Area. (See Responses H2-52, H2-193, and H2312.)
    • To the maximum extent possible, streamline development authorizations under the federal and State Endangered Species Acts. (See Responses H2-140 through H2-177.)
    • Through regional habitat planning, conserve habitat in functional blocks, rather than on a piecemeal ad hoc basis. (See Responses H2-22, H2-231, and H2-287.)
    • Provide Take Authorization for the transportation, infrastructure, housing and employment base needed to accommodate projected growth in western Riverside County. (See Responses H2-36, H2-132, H2-140, H2-194, and H2-195.)
    • Coordinates and maximizes the value of expenditures of limited public and private funds in such a manner that assures assembly and maintenance of a MSHCP Conservation Area that conserves the Covered Species pursuant to state and federal law. (See Responses H2-36, H2-50, H2-72, H2-140, H2-148, H2-305, and H2-352.)
    • Develop a fee-based funding plan that will generate sufficient revenue to contribute to the MSHCP Conservation Area's funding needs. (See Response H2-224.)
    • To the maximum extent practicable, eliminate surprises by providing certainty to Permittees and third parties that the Take Authorization will cover additional species that may be listed while the Permits are in effect. (See Responses H2-132 and H2-194.)
    • To the extent legally possible, provide assurances that private parties will not be required to mitigate biological impacts except as specified in the Plan. (See Response H2-194.)
    • Expand the conservation value of existing Public/Quasi-Public resources for the benefit of Covered Species.
    • Comply with all applicable federal and State laws and constitutional requirements.

    The MSHCP clearly provides a Criteria-based MSHCP. That system has been designed to conserve Covered Species while allowing flexibility in the system and to landowners through the HANS and related processes. The RCA is necessary for a plan of this scope to be efficiently and effectively implemented. See Responses H2-132 through H2-139.

    H2-132 A plan of this size, scope and duration will necessarily involve several entities and processes to ensure compliance with the MSHCP. The RCA and the HANS processes have been designed to be straight-forward, unburdensome and timely processes that run parallel to existing development application processes. These processes will not create an onerous bureaucracy. Local jurisdictions will implement the MSHCP and process development applications through normal processes. The MSHCP creates a more biologically effective habitat and species conservation plan, and is more equitable and less expensive, than providing mitigation on a project-by-project basis. The Lead Agencies believe that there are adequate assurances and safeguards in the MSHCP to ensure Reserve Assembly. See Responses K-55and H2-1.

    H2-133 See Responses H2-28 and H2-32. The MSHCP will does not impose regulatory requirements greater than those existing prior to issuance of the Permits. (MSHCP, § 6.2) Moreover, private landowners and developers benefit from the MSHCP because it establishes Take Authorization for Covered Species; this modified permitting process will reduce uncertainty about the future and eliminate the duplication of effort that often occurs when projects are reviewed and permitted piecemeal by the Wildlife Agencies. In the absence of the MSHCP, development projects will be required to comply with the mandates of the FESA, CESA, and the NCCP Act of 2001. Accordingly, the MSHCP's streamlined process relieves existing regulatory burdens on property owners. (See Draft MSHCP, p. 4-2.) It should be noted that plan checks and geotechnical studies are part of the project processing requirements. Additionally, approval of a conditional use permit is not a ministerial action.

    H2-134 This comment purports to restate portions of Section 6.6 of the MSHCP and no further response is required.

    H2-135 See Responses G-10, H2-93 through H2-122 and N3-1 through N3-3. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of : Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003.

    H2-136 See Response H2-270.

    H2-137 See Response H2-118. As noted in the Draft MSHCP, the basis for determining areas desirable for Conservation did not rely solely on data indicating the presence of currently listed species. Factors considered in identifying areas desirable for Conservation included vegetation type, species occurrence, connectivity and overall configuration (patch size, Edge Effects, fragmentation, etc). All of these factors were weighed in evaluating the MSHCP Plan Area.

    H2-138 The Criteria-based system described in the Draft EIR/EIS and the MSHCP will assist in the Conservation of Covered Species while allowing flexibility in the assembly and location of the MSHCP Conservation Area. For example, the HANS, Criteria Review and Criteria Refinement components contain maximum flexibility in order to ensure the timely, orderly assemblage of MSHCP Conservation Area. Moreover, the HANS process is intended to be a collaborative process. See Responses H2-93 through H2-111 and H2131 through H2-137.

    H2-139 See Response H2-47. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of : Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003.

    H2-140 See Response H2-132.

    H2-141 This comment simply summarizes the duties of the RCA which are explained in detail in the Draft EIR/EIS on pages 2.10-1 through 2.10-7 and no further response is required. The MSHCP acknowledges the experimental nature of Adaptive Managment. See Response H2-47.

    H2-142 The MSHCP does not create a new "super-bureaucracy" or any "sub-bureaucracies." See Responses H2-132 and H2-140. The Funding Coordination Committee ("FCC") is designed to assist in implementing the MSHCP by providing input on local funding priorities and local MSHCP Conservation Area acquisitions. The FCC is described more fully in Section 2.10 of the Draft EIR/EIS and on pages 6-77 and 6-78 of the MSHCP. See Responses H2-120 and H2-132.

    H2-143 This comment purportedly reflects what is contained in the Draft EIR/EIS. Accordingly, no further response is required.

    H2-144 This comment purportedly reflects what is contained in the Draft EIR/EIS. Accordingly, no further response is required.

    H2-145 This comment purportedly reflects what is contained in the Draft EIR/EIS. Accordingly, no further response is required.

    H2-146 This comment purportedly reflects what is contained in the Draft EIR/EIS. Accordingly, no further response is required.

    H2-147 This comment purportedly reflects what is contained in the Draft EIR/EIS. Accordingly, no further response is required.

    H2-148 See Response H2-134. The MSHCP provides a streamlined process that necessarily involves several entities to ensure compliance with state and federal laws. To ensure that the requirements of the MSHCP and the IA are properly met, a joint project/acquisition review process will be instituted by the RCA. This process does not in any way limit or "usurp" the County's or Cities' local land use authority, prevent the County or a City from approving a project or change the provisions of the HANS process described in Section 6.1.1 of the MSHCP. Instead, the purpose of the Joint Project/Acquisition Review Process is to allow the RCA and the Authority's Director to facilitate and monitor implementation of the MSHCP to ensure compliance with all applicable state and federal laws. All proposed discretionary development projects within the Criteria Area will be subject to review under the HANS process and monitored through a uniform computerized tracking system. The issuance of a grading permit or site preparation permit for an individual single family home or mobile home on an existing legal lot will not be subject to review under the HANS process but will be subject to review under the procedures described in the Expedited Review Process for Single-Family Homes or Mobile Homes To Be Located on an Existing Lot Within the Criteria Area. This HANS process will not be construed as a limitation on the County's or the Cities' ability to approve or deny a development application except that a project consistent with this HANS process may not be denied solely because a development application does not comply with the MSHCP Conservation Criteria. See Response H2-120, H2-13 and H2-142.

    H2-149 The comment purportedly summarizes the joint review process procedures contained in the MSHCP. No further response is required.

    H2-150 It is speculative to state that a backlog will develop of applications to review. The time frames established on Section 6.0 of the MSHCP clearly set forth the actions expected of the RCA staff. Moreover, Local Permittees will submit the applications to the RCA as soon as they are received. Since it already takes local jurisdictions time to process and review such applications, no additional time will be added.

    H2-151 The MSHCP will not usurp or replace local control. (See Response H2-150.) This is a very important point for many of the stakeholders and thus, is reflected in the MSHCP. Given this fact, there is no way that any assurance can be given that all of the Local Permittees will handle projects in an identical manner, any more than they do today when processing development applications. An absolutely uniform approach would require elimination of local control.

    H2-152 Although proposed development projects within the Criteria Area will need to be reviewed in order to ensure compliance with the MSHCP Criteria, the Lead Agencies disagree that such review or the administrative review process itself is necessarily "onerous" or "burdensome". Additionally, the purpose of the HANS process is to establish procedures by which this review will occur and to appropriately compensate the property owner if property is in fact needed for inclusion in the reserve. The Lead Agencies disagree that there will be any delays in processing "development entitlements" as the HANS process contemplates that such entitlements may be processed concurrently.

    H2-153 See Response H2-152. Only proposed development projects within the Criteria Area which is approximately 310,000 acres in size will be subject to review under the HANS process. Proposed projects "adjacent" to the Criteria Area would not be subject to such review. The HANS process provides for an initial 45 day review period. If it is determined that none of the property covered by the proposed development project is needed for inclusion in the MSHCP Conservation Area, then the project may proceed through the normal development review process. If it is determined through the 45 day initial review period that all or part of the property is needed for inclusion in the MSHCP Conservation Area, then a 120 day period for the negotiation of terms and incentives commences. In the event the parties are unable to reach agreement during this 120 period, a conflict resolution may be initiated which provides for a 90 day appraisal review period for conflicts concerning the value of the property needed for inclusion in the MSHCP Conservation Area; and 90 day mediation and 180 day arbitration periods for conflicts involving proposed development options including the application of incentives as well as the application of the MSHCP Criteria. Upon completion of these time periods, the property owner will be compensated for property needed for inclusion in the MSHCP Conservation Area through the use of incentives and/or pursuant to the terms of a purchase agreement which has been entered into by the property owner.

    H2-154 See Responses H2-152 and H2-153. The comments indicated by the commentor are generally accurate statements concerning the HANS process.

    H2-155 The comments indicated by the commentor are generally accurate statements concerning the HANS process.

    H2-156 See Responses H2-152 and H2-153. The Lead Agencies strongly disagree that the HANS process set forth in the MSHCP falls short of its enunciated goals or that it "undermines an incentive-based MSHCP program".

    H2-157 See Response H2-153. The Lead Agencies strongly disagree that the time frames set forth in the HANS process are unworkable or illegal. Additionally, the HANS process does provide assurances that property owners will be compensated for property needed for inclusion in the MSHCP Conservation Area and/or that they will be able to develop the property subject to the receipt of project approval.

    H2-158 The Lead Agencies disagree that the 45-day initial application review process set forth in HANS is misleading in light of the time frames set forth in the Joint Project/Application Review Process conducted by the Regional Conservation Authority. The provisions of the Joint Project/Application Review Process specifically indicate that this process shall not in any way "change the provisions of the HANS process described in Section 6.1.1". See page 6-78 of the Draft MSHCP. The additional comments of the commentor concerning the time frames set forth in the Joint Project/Application Review Process are accurate statements.

    H2-159 The commentor does not accurately characterize the interaction between the HANS Process and the Joint Project/Application Review Process. Both processes will occur concurrently.

    H2-160 Mediation is only "required" if the conflict resolution process is initiated by the property owner or the County or City. Additionally, contrary to the comment, the RCA is not a participant in the mediation. Furthermore, the 30 and 90 day time periods for consultation with the Wildlife Agencies and within which to hold the mediation may only be extended with the consent of the property owner.

    H2-161 With respect to the valuation of property, the conflict resolution process would only be initiated by the property owner because only the property owner would dispute the contents of the County's or City's appraisal. Additionally, the commentor misrepresents the appraisal process. The RCA does not participate in the appraisal process set forth in HANS. Additionally, it is not whether the County or City "disagrees" with the second appraisal that a third appraiser is retained to review both appraisals. This review is only required when there are discrepancies between the appraisal prepared by the County or City and the appraisal prepared by the property owner.

    H2-162 The commentor again misrepresents the RCA's involvement in the conflict resolution process. The RCA does not participate in the arbitration. Additionally, the 180 day time period within which to conduct the arbitration may only be extended with the consent of the property owner.

    H2-163 The Lead Agencies disagree that it can take more than 2 ½ years to complete the HANS process. A more accurate time frame would be 1 ½ years to 2 years if the conflict resolution process were initiated and mediation and arbitration are pursued.

    H2-164 Acquisition of property is not limited to situations where all of the property is necessary for inclusion in the MSHCP Conservation Area. Although negotiations will focus on incentives in instances where only part of the property is needed for inclusion in the MSHCP Conservation Area, this does not preclude acquisition through monetary compensation if the incentives are not adequate to fully compensate to the property owner for the fair market value of the property. The Lead Agencies strongly disagree that the MSHCP in any way "forces" property owners to utilize incentives or that it prohibits development from moving forward to hearing for consideration by the appropriate hearing body.

    H2-165 Property owners are not in "deep freeze" during the HANS process. As previously indicated, proposed development projects can and will be processed concurrently with the HANS process. As the commentor should well know, property owners are not allowed to develop until their projects are approved by the County or City. It is not correct to say that they will not be allowed to develop until the HANS process is completed. Additionally, it will be the County or City, not the property owner, who is "burdened" with having to prove that the MSHCP should be amended if funding is not available to acquire the property. In response to the commentor's concerns about the amendment process and the resulting Section 7 consultation and to concerns raised by the U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service, the following revisions on pages 6-11 through 6-16 will be made the HANS process to provide clarification on this issue.

    "The County or City will confer with the property owner when drafting the proposed amendment to the MSHCP, and use its best efforts to insure completion of the amendment within this one (two, three or four) year time period or any longer period of time agreed to by the parties. Because the U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service will must conduct an internal formal consultation under Section 7 of the federal Endangered Species Act for any such amendment to the MSHCP, the U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service will provide a draft copy of its internal biological opinion for review and comment to the County or City prior to approval or denial of a the permit amendment. a Section 7 Consultation in connection with their consideration of the proposed amendment. As Part of that Section 7 consultation, the U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service will evaluate the effects on listed species covered by the MSHCP as amended, and will specifically address any Take associated with the property owner's proposed Development of the property. The County or City will share the draft biological opinion with the property owner and provide any comments from the property owners along with the County's or City's comments to the U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service. The property owner will have an opportunity to meet and confer with the U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service with regard to the effects of any proposed Development of the property the proposed amendment. Any conditions imposed on the proposed Development through the biological opinion will be subject to property owner approval, even if failure to approve such conditions results in a jeopardy opinion and denial of the amendment to the MSHCP to remove the property from the Criteria Area."

    It should also be noted that there would be no "second bite at the apple" as indicated by the commentor. As acknowledged by the commentor in this comment, the MSHCP specifically indicates that if suspension or revocation of the Permits occurs, "future Development applications will no longer be subject to the MSHCP Conservation Criteria". Consequently, should the Permits be suspended or revoked, any subsequently submitted development application on the property originally determined to be necessary for inclusion in the MSHCP Conservation Area, would not be subject to the MSHCP Conservation Criteria. Thus, no "second bite at the apple" would or could occur.

    H2-166 See Responses H2-152, H2-153, H2-157, H2-160, H2-162, H2-163, H2-164 and H2-165. The Lead Agencies disagree that the MSHCP which includes the HANS and Joint Project/Application Review processes will not streamline the development process. Many projects located outside the Criteria Area which are occupied by listed species will be able to merely pay a mitigation fee and proceed with development. Under existing conditions, these projects would be required to obtain Take Authorization pursuant to either Sections 7 or 10 of the federal Endangered Species Act and/or pursuant to the California EndangeredSpeciesAct or the Natural Communities Conservation Act. Often times these processes can take years to complete. Additionally, proposed projects within the Criteria Area in many instances will only be subject to the 45 day initial review period because the determination will be made that the property will not be needed for inclusion in the MSHCP Conservation Area. The commentor has also indicated that the property owner will be required to shepherd the amendment process if the RCA,County or City does not use its best effort to insure completion of the amendment. The "best efforts" language was included because the County and Cities are unable to require the U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service to approve or deny the amendment within the time frame specified. Nor would the Service agree to be bound by a specified time frame within which to approve or deny the amendment. Additionally, it should be noted that the MSHCP and specifically the HANS process does not provide for the RCA to process this type of an amendment.

    H2-167 The Lead Agencies strongly disagree that the MSHCP or the HANS process "wrests local land use control" from the County or any City or that the County or Cities will be "held hostage" to the RCA and the Wildlife Agencies. Section 6.6.2 of the MSHCP specifically states, "However, the Regional Conservation Authority shall not limit County or City local land use authority, or prevent a Permittee from approving a Discretionary Project." Additionally, as with any other habitat conservation plan, the Wildlife Agencies always have the ability to revoke Take Authorization if these agencies believe that the plan is not being properly implemented.

    H2-168 Government Code section 65858, limiting moratoria to a maximum two-year period, does not apply to the MSHCP because the HANS process is not a moratorium. See Response H2-41. Also, the reference to First English Evangelical Lutheran Church v. County of Los Angeles, (1987) 482 U.S. 304 is not applicable. The First English case specifically limited its ruling by stating that the discussion of a temporary takings does not even apply "in the case of normal delays in obtaining building permits, changes in zoning ordinances, variances, and the like," which are properly a matter of state property law. (Id. at p. 321) Moreover, in First English, the ruling was specifically premised upon the fact that a takings had already been established by a lower court, therefor the rule of the case only establishes what remedy is appropriate. (Id. at pp. 312-313) Indeed on remand, the lower court found that no taking had occurred. (First English Evangelical Lutheran Church v. County of Los Angeles, (1989) 210 Cal.App.3d 1353.) In the present case, the First English cases are inapplicable because there is no taking.

    H2-169 The purpose of the Criteria Refinement Process (CRP) is to provide flexibility to property owners who wish to pursue development projects that are determined to be inconsistent with the Criteria. The CRP is not a "bureaucratic hurdle," as the comment states, but rather a process that can provide an applicant for a development project a mechanism to amend the Criteria for their benefit, providing that the necessary findings can be met. Under no circumstances is a project applicant obligated to pursue a CRP. The CRP is intended to address situations where the landscape-level biological information can be supplemented with project specific information presented by an applicant in order to demonstrate equivalent or greater conservation value and acreage that is associated with the applicant's proposal, without subjecting the applicant to an amendment to the MSHCP.

    H2-170 It is not clear what objection is raised in this comment since it merely restates information contained in the Draft MSHCP. It is assumed by the placement of the word "However" at the beginning of the sentence, that exception is taken to the fact that the CRP cannot be used in conjunction with the HANS process, or to eliminate portions of the Criteria Area. If such is the case, it should be noted that both the HANS process and Criteria Area reductions have different purposes and implications that are outlined in Sections 6.1.1 and 6.10 of the Draft MSHCP, respectively. See also Responses K-77 and H2-169.

    H2-171 In response to the reference to "bad science", see Response H2-46. The Criteria developed for the Draft MSHCP are based on the best scientific and commercial data available. See Responses G-10, H2-93 through H2-122 and N3-1 through N3-3. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of : Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003.

    The commentor expresses concern that if, through site-specific biological studies, a property owner discovers that a property is "not suitable for conservation", that they burden would be on the property owner to provide alternative Conservation. As previously noted, conservation value has been determined based on a number of factors, including but not limited to vegetation coverage, species occurrence, soils composition, slope and elevation, in addition to reserve design considerations that include habitat block size, configuration and linkage. Therefore, the fact that a site-specific biology study indicates that, for example, species that are shown to occur in the MSHCP database were not determined to be present, or that site-specific vegetation mapping shows differences from the MSHCP database, would not necessarily lead to a determination that the property is "not suitable for conservation," because the proposed Conservation may relate to reserve design or other factors. However, if through a site-specific study, it is clearly demonstrated that the conservation value sought in the Criteria cannot be achieved because of the absence of resources, the substantial alteration to a linkage by offsite Development or other reasonable factors, then a Permittee could make a determination that Development within areas proposed for Conservation would not be inconsistent with the Criteria and would not rise to the level of a Criteria Refinement.

    H2-172 The process referenced in this comment refers to cases where refinements to the Criteria are desirable to facilitate Reserve Assembly. To streamline the entire process and to meet the MSHCP's goal to provide a flexible mechanism, refinements to the Criteria may be made without the need to amend the MSHCP where the refined Criteria result in the same or greater conservation value and acreage to the MSHCP Conservation Area. This allows for flexibility in the implementation of the MSHCP. See Responses H2-120 and H2-132.

    H2-173 This comment purportedly restates information contained in the Draft MSHCP and no further response is required.

    H2-174 This comment purportedly restates information contained in the Draft MSHCP and no further response is required.

    H2-175 The MSHCP minor and major amendment processes are straight-forward and potentially applicable in only narrow circumstances. (See MSHCP, §§ 6.5, 6.10.) Of course these provisions do not exist now because there is no Plan to have to amend. See Response H2-140.

    H2-176 This comment purportedly restates information contained in the Draft MSHCP and no further response is required.

    H2-177 The commentor's assertion that "every aspect of MSHCP implementation gives the Wildlife Agencies final say" is incorrect. Concurrence is required by the Wildlife Agencies is required in very limited circumstances, however in no instances do the Wildlife Agencies have final say over land use decisions. The joint review process found in Section 6.6 of the MSHCP merely provides that the Wildlife Agencies will receive copies of project applications proposed within the Criteria Area. As explained in Response H2-140, compared to the current process under which a property owner must deal with local, state and federal agencies to address endangered species issues, the MSHCP provides a one-step approach.

    H2-178 See Response H2-41.

    H2-179 See Response H2-41.

    H2-180 See Response H2-41.

    H2-181 See Response H2-41. The MSHCP will not preclude the County's and Cities' ability to comply with the requirements of state law. The County and the Cities will comply fully with all the requirements of these Acts when processing projects subject to the provisions of the MSHCP.

    H2-182 See Response H2-165. CEQA review of proposed projects will commence when the application for the project is submitted. The initial review period is 45 days and may only be extended with the consent of the property owner. Consequently, the time frames referenced by the commentor will not be exhausted.

    H2-183 This comment purportedly restates information contained in the Draft MSHCP and no further response is required.

    H2-184 This comment purportedly restates information contained in the Draft MSHCP and no further response is required. The likely range of values may exceed $100,000.

    H2-185 This comment purportedly restates information contained in the Draft MSHCP and no further response is required.

    H2-186 This comment purportedly restates information contained in the Draft MSHCP and no further response is required.

    H2-187 See Response H2-35. An independent estimate of the land costs will be included in the nexus study required by the Mitigation Fee Act as set forth in Government Code Sections 66000 et seq. The nexus study will provide a basis for establishing the Local Development Mitigation Fee amount. The MSHCP focuses Conservation in areas that have core habitat value, value as linkage or contain specific habitat types. Logically most of these lands will not exist in areas that have been subdivided and only in a very unusual situation would they exist on lands that have been subdivided and improved as single family residential lots. Therefore, in only a few areas would land values approach those offered by commentor.

    Based on acquisitions completed in the past two years, typical land values have averaged $13,000 (see Appendix B of the Draft MSHCP) per acre. The majority of the lands to be acquired will be rural lands with minimum infrastructure. As the Plan acknowledges, land values will vary both depending on location and over time. Section 8.6 of the Draft MSHCP discusses adequacy of funding.

    H2-188 See Response H2-187 for response on a nexus study.

    H2-189 The Density Bonus program was suggested by the development community as a component of an incentive program to be implemented under the County's Draft General Plan. The Density Bonus program is a potential funding source for the MSHCP as well as for other local infrastructure that would offset the local impacts of the increased density. The commentor notes in Comment H2-187 that land values for improved residential lots can exceed $100,000. This would seem to create a significant financial advantage to a developer to utilize the Density Bonus program to obtain an additional lot through an increase in density for $3,000 to $5,000 plus the incremental infrastructure costs. Likewise, density transfers from conserved properties would appear to have significant value if lot values are as offered by the commentor. See Responses H2-15 and H2-304.

    H2-190 The Density Bonus program under the General Plan is based on meeting criteria involving quality of the project and payment of a fee. Success of the program lies with the development community. As discussed in Response H2-189, there can be significant financial advantage to the Program.

    H2-191 Multiple funding sources are utilized to fund the implementation of the MSHCP. Additional funding sources that will likely contribute to the Plan have been identified but not included in the projections. A nexus study is currently being finalized. The MSHCP offers many incentives not the least of which is the simplicity of obtaining Take Authorization outside the Criteria Area. Within the Criteria Area, property owners will benefit from either being able to develop their property or be fairly compensated for Conservation of their property.

    H2-192 The Wildlife Agencies will have reduced involvement in development review in western Riverside County compared to what they have today. It is not anticipate that additional staff or other resources are required except as discussed under Monitoring Program. The costs are shown in Appendix B of the Draft MSHCP. See Response H2-39.

    H2-193 See Responses H2-93 through H2-122, H2-136 and H2-166. The commentor ignores the benefits to property owners both inside and outside the Criteria Area in terms of a more predictable development process.

    H2-194 See Response H2-177. The MSHCP provides "no surprises" assurances to the extent allowed by Federal and State law. The Plan provides federal and State Take Authorization for public and private projects in the Plan Area who pay fees and who otherwise comply with the requirements of the Plan. In conjunction with this authorization, the Service and DFG will provide "no surprises" assurances. (See IA, §§ 4.3(C) and 15.3; MSHCP, § 6.8.1; see also 50 C.F.R. §§ 17.22(b)(5), 17.32(b)(5).) Unforseen Circumstances leading to the need for further conservation and mitigation measures are not the responsibility of the Permittees. (See ibid.) The Wildlife Agencies have the burden of proof to show otherwise.

    H2-195 The No Surprises Assurances are only applicable if the Permittees, Participating Special Entities and Third Parties Granted Take Authorization are in compliance with the provisions of the MSHCP. If a City elects not to participate in the MSHCP, then a review of the Plan would be required to determine what impact this decision would have on the Plan. The revocation and suspension provisions of the MSHCP are set forth in Section 23.5 of the IA. Unforseen and Changed Circumstances are described in detail in the MSHCP and the IA. (See MSHCP, § 6.8.) "Unforseen circumstances" means "any significant, unanticipated adverse change in the status of species covered under the MSHCP or in their Habitats or any significant unanticipated change in impacts of the MSHCP or in other factors upon which the MSHCP is based." (Draft MSHCP, p. 6-94.) The definition of "Unforseen circumstances" relates directly to changes in species status or habitats, or in impacts related to the MSHCP. Contrary to the comment, there is no indication from the language set forth above that the potential failure of a Participating City to "cooperate" with a Wildlife Agency would constitute an "unforseen circumstance." Further, the "unforseen circumstances" provision relates to responsibility for providing extra mitigation in case conditions change after the MSHCP is adopted. "Unforseen circumstances" does not directly provide the Wildlife Agencies with the authority to revoke take authorization based upon the failure of a city member to cooperate.

    H2-196 The adaptive management approach is designed to provide maximum flexibility to implement conservation biological and other principles in conservation areas that actually "work on the ground". Adaptive management is thus not a stagnant process that may "fail." Instead, as circumstances on the ground dictate that different conservation measures be taken, such changes can actually be implemented. Under the federal "no surprises" policy, changed circumstances leading to the need for further mitigation or conservation measures not otherwise provided for in the applicable HCP are not the applicant's responsibility. Similarly, unforseen circumstances leading to the need for further conservation and mitigation measures are also ordinarily not the responsibility of the applicant. (See IA, § 4.3(C); MSHCP, § 6.8.1; see also 50 C.F.R. §§ 17.22(b)(5), 17.32(b)(5).)

    H2-197 The duties and obligations of the Wildlife Agencies, including revocation and suspension provisions derive from State and Federal law rather than the MSHCP. (See 50 C.F.R § 17.22(b)(7), (b)(8); 14 CCR 783.7.) The Wildlife Agencies may only revoke Take Authorization if the Permittees fail to implement the terms and conditions in conformance with law. See Response H2-166.

    H2-198 The purpose of the MSHCP is to convey Take Authorization under FESA and the NCCP Act to the Permittees. As noted in the comment, it is acknowledged in the Draft MSHCP that existing environmental laws and regulations in addition to FESA and the NCCP Act will continue to apply with the approval of the MSHCP and execution of the IA. Section 14.9 of the Draft MSHCP IA addresses the obligations and assurances to be provided by the USFWS related to FESA Section 7 consultations related to Covered Species and Covered Activities.

    H2-199 See Response H2-198. Even without the MSHCP, developers would have to obtain Clean Water Act, Porter-Cologne Water Quality Control Act and other permits separately from Take Authorization from the Wildlife Agencies. The Take Authorization under the MSHCP offers the side benefit of streamlining Section 7 consultations through consistency requirements outlined in Section 14.9 of the IA.

    H2-200 See Responses H2-23, H2-28, H2-34, H2-54, and H2-165.

    H2-201 The Service must find that the MSHCP complies with the requirements of FESA prior to Permit issuance and release of the Record of Decision.

    H2-202 The comment is correct, although a landowner may also obtain authorization to take a listed animal, in certain circumstances, through the FESA Section 7 process.

    H2-203 The comment purports to restate case law and no further response is required.

    H2-204 See Response H2-27. The MSHCP does not prohibit development of 153,000 acres of private property. The MSHCP is a plan designed to protect habitat lands for listed and unlisted species occurring in western Riverside County in order to mitigate for impacts associated with regional infrastructure/improvements and private development. 153,000 acres in the Criteria Area, not the Conservation Area, is the amount of land to be conserved by the Permittees as their share of the total mitigation obligation. The "occupied" status of lands within particular areas is set forth in Section 3.3 of the MSHCP and in related biological documentation.

    The comment ignores the issuance criteria for HCPs that requires the Service to make a finding that the Plan not threaten the continued existence of a wildlife or plant population. (See Section 10 Handbook, p. 7-1.) The comment further ignores that, in considering an HCP, the Service must engage in an "internal Section 7 consultation" to ensure that the action it is taking (namely, issuing a take permit) does not jeopardize the continued existence of any listed federal species. Thus, rather than ignore the potential effects of listed federal plant species, the MSHCP provides Take Authorization for such species. Moreover, consideration of impacts on federally-listed plant and animal species is also required under CEQA and NEPA in the EIR/EIS. Also, to the extent plant species are listed under both CESA and FESA, state law prohibits the taking of such listed plant species. Finally, listed federal plant species remain eligible to be listed under state law. Inclusion of such plant species ensures that the MSHCP provides Take Authorization when and if the plants are listed under CESA.

    H2-205 The comment seems to suggest that restrictions on habitat modification are prohibited under CESA. The commentor refers to a California Attorney General Opinion that concluded that habitat modification does not constitute "take" under CESA. This is a different issue than that being addressed in the MSHCP/NCCP, which is to provide adequate conservation to allow the issuance of a NCCP permit. The MSHCP/NCCP is not a CESA incidental take permit under Fish and Game Code section 2081. It is a planning document pursuant to which CDFG will grant "Take Authorization" for otherwise lawful actions in exchange for the assembly and management of the MSHCP/NCCP Conservation Area. (Draft MSHCP, p. 1-1)

    The MSHCP/NCCP's habitat-based approach is consistent with, and does not violate, CESA because it focuses on species protection by preserving their habitat. CESA specifically states that it "is the policy of the state to conserve, protect, restore, and enhance any endangered species or any threatened species and its habitat and that it is the intent of the Legislature, consistent with conserving the species, to acquire lands for habitat for these species." (Fish & Game Code, § 2052; emphasis added.) "Conserve" is further defined by Fish and Game Code section 2061 to mean "the use of, all methods and procedures which are necessary to bring any endangered species or threatened species to the point at which the measures provided pursuant to this chapter are no longer necessary. These methods and procedures include, but are not limited to, all activities associated with scientific resources management, such as research, census, law enforcement, habitat acquisition, restoration and maintenance, propagation, live trapping, and transplantation, and, in the extraordinary case where population pressures within a given ecosystem cannot be otherwise relieved, may include regulated taking." The methods outlined in the MSHCP/NCCP include measures to preserve and maintain the habitat essential for the conservation of endangered species, as authorized by CESA.

    H2-206 The comment cites to Fish and Game Code section 2080(b)(2). No such section exists. If the intent is to cite to Fish and Game Code section 2081(b)(2), that section is inapplicable because the Permittees are not seeking a Section 2081 Take Permit under CESA.

    The MSHCP/NCCP is based on the best scientific and commercial data available. See Responses H2-1, G-10, H2-93 through H2-122 and N3-1 through N3-3. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of : Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003.

    H2-207 For clarification, the Wildlife Agencies would issue Permits that grant Take Authorization to the Permittees which, in turn, would grant Take Authorization to individual developers as provided in the MSHCP.

    H2-208 This comment purports to summarize federal law and no further response is required.

    H2-209 This comment purports to summarize federal law and no further response is required. For clarification, the FESA gives the Secretary of the Interior discretion to, but does not require that she, list species as threatened or endangered.

    H2-210 This comment purports to summarize federal law and no further response is required.

    H2-211 This comment purports to summarize federal law and the Section 10 HCP Handbook and no further response is required.

    H2-212 This comment purports to summarize federal law and no further response is required.

    H2-213 This comment purports to summarize federal law and no further response is required.

    H2-214 See Responses G-10, H2-93 through H2-122, H2-201 and N3-1 through N3-3. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of : Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003.

    H2-215 See Responses H2-46, H2-98 through H2-114 and H2-270.

    H2-216 See Responses G-10, H2-46, H2-93 through H2-122, H2-201, H2-270 and N3-1 through N3-3. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of : Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003.

    H2-217 See Responses G-10, H2-11, H2-93 through H2-122, H2-201 and N3-1 through N3-3. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of : Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003.

    H2-218 The County is not aware of, nor has the extensive research conducted for the Draft MSHCP revealed the "plethora of new data" referenced in this comment. The Draft MSHCP was prepared using the best scientific and commercial data available. See Responses G-10, H2-93 through H2-122, H2-201 and N3-1 through N3-3. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of : Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003. In addition, the commentor misinterprets the purpose of data collection associated with the proposed Adaptive Management approach. It is not proposed that the Adaptive Management program will "update the science," but rather will provide a mechanism to continuously monitor the effectiveness of management actions and provide data that can be used to adjust management actions to address changing conditions in the field. Adaptive Management is not a "promise of future mitigation," it is a well-funded long-term Adaptive Management program to realize one of the goals of the MSHCP, to create a reserve system that will accommodate dynamic changes over time; changes that are related to both natural processes and human induced factors. Adaptive Management is considered to be the best approach for long-term management for multi-species planning.

    H2-219 HCPs may be developed for listed, proposed, candidate or unlisted species. (Section 10 Handbook, pp. 4-1 et seq.) "The decision about what species to include in the HCP is always the applicant's." (Section 10 Handbook, p. 1-16, 4-1.[emphasis added]) However, "[t]he Services should explain to any applicant the benefits of addressing unlisted species in the HCP and the risks of not doing so, and should strongly encourage the applicant to include as many proposed and candidate species as can be adequately addressed and covered by the permit." (HCP Handbook, p. 4-1-[emphasis added].) As stated in the Section 10 Handbook, "There are also advantages in addressing unlisted species in the HCP (proposed and candidate species as a minimum), particularly those that are likely to be listed within the foreseeable future or within the life of the permit. Doing so can protect the permittee from further delays--e.g., having to revise the HCP and amend the permit--should species that were not listed at the time the original HCP was approved subsequently become listed. In addition, the 'No Surprises' policy...applies to listed as well as unlisted species if they are adequately addressed in the HCP." (Section 10 Handbook, p. 3-7; see also, p. 4-1.) See Response H2-118.

    H2-220 See Response H2-219.This comment misrepresents the provisions of the HCP Handbook. According to the Handbook, HCPs may be developed for listed, proposed, candidate or unlisted species. (Section 10 Handbook, pp. 4-1 et seq.) "The decision about what species to include in the HCP is always the applicant's." (Section 10 Handbook, p. 1-16, 4-1.[emphasis added]) However, "[t]he Services should explain to any applicant the benefits of addressing unlisted species in the HCP and the risks of not doing so, and should strongly encourage the applicant to include as many proposed and candidate species as can be adequately addressed and covered by the permit." (HCP Handbook, p. 4-1-[emphasis added].) As stated in the Section 10 Handbook, "There are also advantages in addressing unlisted species in the HCP (proposed and candidate species as a minimum), particularly those that are likely to be listed within the foreseeable future or within the life of the permit. Doing so can protect the permittee from further delays--e.g., having to revise the HCP and amend the permit--should species that were not listed at the time the original HCP was approved subsequently become listed. In addition, the 'No Surprises' policy...applies to listed as well as unlisted species if they are adequately addressed in the HCP." (Section 10 Handbook, p. 3-7; see also, p. 4-1.)

    H2-221 In general, the purpose of the "Alternatives Analyzed" section of an HCP is to examine alternatives which would reduce Take below levels anticipated for the project proposal, and to examine the "no action" alternative. (HCP Handbook, p. 3-35.) The suggestion that the MSHCP "rank" species is not a proper alternative because it would not lead to reduced levels of Take of listed and unlisted species. That is, Take of listed species is not reduced merely because one or more listed species are removed from the "Covered Species" list. Additionally, the Draft EIR/EIS analyzes a reasonable range of project alternatives under both CEQA and NEPA. See Responses H2-18 and H2-331 to H2-337.

    H2-222 See Responses H2-35 and H2-187.

    H2-223 See Responses H235, H244, H2-187, and F-98.

    H2-224 The MSHCP provides for adequate funding, and details the funding provisions in Section 8 of the MSHCP. In order for the MSHCP to qualify as a Habitat Conservation Plan, adequate funding must be demonstrated, as is required under U.S.C. §1539(a)(2)(B)(iii), or a Take Permit will not be authorized. Thus, the Service must find the MSHCP provides adequate funding prior to permit issuance.

    The case of Sierra Club v. Babbitt (S.D. Ala. 1998), 15 F.Supp.2d 1274 is misconstrued by this comment. The holding of the court, in part, was that the U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service failed the "arbitrary and capricious" standard for its issuance of an incidental take permit of the Alabama field mouse by relying on "unnamed sources to contribute funds to make up for the inadequacy of the amounts of offsite mitigation funding required." Here, Section 8 of the MSHCP identifies anticipated revenue sources and responsible parties (See Table 8.5), includes procedures for reevaluating funding levels if a funding shortage were to develop (See MSHCP, §§ 8.6.1-8.6.5.), and even provides for debt financing if funding levels were to become inadequate. (See MSHCP, § 8.7.) The efforts of the MSHCP to delineate funding sources are far more specific than the "unnamed sources" found to be lacking in Sierra Club v. Babbitt.

    Further, the case of National Wildlife Federation v. Babbitt (E.D. Cal. 2000) 128 F.Supp.2d 1274 is not applicable because the MSHCP sets forth adequate funding to ensure implementation of the proposed MSHCP. The amount of the Local Development Mitigation Fee will be supported by the nexus study. Other funding mechanisms will also be used to conserve the Additional Reserve Lands and implement the MSHCP as set forth in Section 8 of the MSHCP. The MSHCP does not rely solely on the Local Development Mitigation Fee unlike the Natomas Basin HCP.

    H2-225 This comment purports to summarize federal law and no further response is required.

    H2-226 The RCIP has been a stakeholder driven effort from its inception. An Advisory Committee with representatives from the development community, property owners, environmentalists, and other interested parties has provided direction to the development of the MSHCP over the past four years. Additionally, the County has met with individual property owners and with groups representing land owner interests whenever requested. The RCIP has been recognized as a national model for partnering with public, private sector to plan for the future of Riverside County. The MSHCP reflects the creative ideas of a broad range of stakeholders. Specific elements of the Plan including the use of criteria rather than hardline conservation areas, the HANS, and the focus on incentives were developed by stakeholders to address the concerns about the regulatory approach to reserve assembly taken in other Regional HCP's. All of these aspects of the Plan came out of the "creative partnership" that is at the heart of the RCIP planning effort. The County's four yearsof work, more than $30 million expenditure and unprecedented public involvement have demonstrated the County's sincerity in creatively planning for the future.

    H2-227 This conclusory comment summarizes Comments H2-207 though H2-226, for which responses have been provided.

    H2-228 This comment purports to summarize portions of the MSHCP and EIR/EIS. See Responses H2-229 to H2-231.

    H2-229 This comment purports to summarize state law although misstates Fish and Game Code section 2080 and no further response is required.

    H2-230 This comment purports to summarize certain NCCP Act Guidelines and no further response is required.

    H2-231 See Responses G-10, H2-93 through H2-122 and N3-1 through N3-3. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of : Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003. The MSHCP/NCCP contains an adaptive management component to optimize plan implementation. (MSHCP, § 5.) The stated purpose of the adaptive management framework is "to use the results of new information gathered through the monitoring program of the plan and from other sources to adjust management strategies and practices to assist in providing for the conservation of covered species." (Draft MSHCP, p. 5-1.) The MSHCP/NCCP adaptive management process includes features to update the vegetation map as part of the MSHCP/NCCP Monitoring Program. (Draft MSHCP, p. 2-3 and § 5.3)

    The County and CDFG disagree with the comment's premise that the MSHCP improperly defers CEQA analysis. The level of analysis in the Draft EIR/EIS is commensurate with the significance of the impacts and fully complies with CEQA. State CEQA Guidelines section 15146 states that the "degree of specificity required in an EIR will correspond to the degree of specificity involved in the underlying activity which is described in the EIR." Moreover, deferral of more detailed analysis is legitimate "where practical considerations prohibit devising such measures early in the planning process (e.g., at the general plan amendment or rezone stage), the agency can commit itself to eventually devising measures that will satisfy specific performance criteria articulated at the time of project approval... [Citation.]" ( Sacramento Old City Assn. v. City Council (1991) 229 Cal.App.3d 1011, 1029.) The County and CDFG have not deferred analysis of any potential impact. The Adaptive Management provisions of the MSHCP do not constitute improper deferral, but instead, are a means by which newly discovered science may be included in the MSHCP Conservation Area development process.

    The comment provides insufficient information about the source of its cost estimates to provide a response because it does not state the basis for its conclusions or an internal reference to other places in the document where the conclusion is further stated. The commentor provides no empirical data for this claim. See Responses H2-183 through H2-188.

    In addition, a nexus study is currently being prepared for the development impact fee which will include an updated projection of land costs. Prior to MSHCP/NCCP approval, the County and cities must make the findings required by California Government Code §§ 66000 et seq., namely that there is a "reasonable relationship" between the "fees" that will be imposed and the estimated cost of land acquisition under the MSHCP/NCCP. (Draft MSHCP, p. 6-1) The MSHCP/NCCP makes conservative assumptions about density incentives. It assumes that only 10% of the units constructed during the next 25 years will participate in density incentives and that only 50% of funds received through that participation will be applied to mitigation. (Draft MSHCP, p. 8-15) The local government's fee ordinance will also be required to contain adjustment provisions. (Draft MSHCP, p. 8-14) See Responses H2-189 through H2-191.

    The Lead Agencies also disagree with the commentor's statements that the MSHCP/NCCP creates an "onerous bureaucracy" or that it offers "no assurances." See Responses H2-36 and H2-132.

    The Take Authorization, "no surprises" and other assurances provided by the Wildlife Agencies not only appear in the MSHCP/NCCP and the IA, they are also a part of Federal and State law. Thus, the Lead Agencies disagree with the comment to the extent it suggests that the assurances are "alleged." See Response H2-36.

    H2-232 The MSHCP does not include "restrictions" related to wetlands and other waters within the Plan Area. Instead, consistency determinations are to be made in order to comply with requirements for Take Authorization for Covered Species. Other state and federal regulations relating to such waters continue to be applicable. (See Response H2-199.)

    H2-233 The MSHCP does not impose or restrict "jurisdiction" of the Corps of Engineers. Instead, the purpose of the MSHCP is to comply with FESA and the NCCP Act and to grant Take Authorization for Covered Species. The United States Supreme Court decision in SWANCC affects the jurisdiction of the U.S. Army Corps of Engineers and the U.S. Environmental Protection Agency under the Clean Water Act. The case does not affect the jurisdiction of the State of California, which continues to regulate waters of the State, nor the jurisdiction of local governments. In addition, EPA and the Corps have recently issued an "Advanced Notice of Proposed Rulemaking" (68 Fed. Reg. 1991 (Jan. 15, 2003)) which makes clear that the actual extent of those agencies' jurisdiction over waters of the United States is still under review. The blanket statement that isolated streams and wetlands of the County are no longer subject to Corps' jurisdiction is thus still subject to considerable dispute.

    H2-234 The comment that "regulation of isolated wetlands is not allowed under federal or state law" is incorrect. Among other regulatory bodies, the Regional Water Quality Control Board has the authority to regulate discharges to "waters of the State," including wetlands. (See Cal. Water Code, §§ 13050(e), 13269.) See Responses H2-232 and H2-233.

    H2-235 The MSHCP assures adequate funding will exist, as is required under U.S.C. §1539(a)(2)(B)(iii). Section 8 of the MSHCP states anticipated revenue sources and responsible parties (See Table 8.5), includes procedures for reevaluating funding levels if a funding shortage were to develop (See Sections 8.6.1-8.6.5.), and even provides for debt financing if funding levels were to become inadequate. (See MSHCP, § 8.7.) These revenue sources will provide the funding necessary to acquire private lands. Therefore, there will not be any "taking" of private property. The commentor has not provided any information to support its claim that a "low-ball land value" has been used.

    Table 8-1 describes assembly of Additional Reserve Lands in terms of acreage attributed to local, state and federal acquisitions. The projected revenues from the Local Development Mitigation Fee are anticipated to be approximately $540 million over the next 25 years (Draft MSHCP, p. 8-15) not the $540,000 referenced by the commentor.

    The commentor's reliance on Lucas v. South Carolina is misplaced. Under the MSHCP private property will be acquired from willing sellers in exchange for fair market value or other incentives. See Response Q2-13.

    H2-236 The quote from HANS referenced in the comment has been misinterpreted by the commentor. This provision in HANS allows for a development application to be processed without further consideration of the Criteria only in those limited instances where the land "intended to be acquired" is unable to be acquired. Development applications on land determined not to be necessary for inclusion in the MSHCP Conservation Area may be processed and approved or denied in accordance with normal development processes.

    H2-237 See Response H2-236.

    H2-238 See Responses H2-41, H2-168 and H2-236.

    H2-239 The MSHCP provides flexibility in the selection of the land that will eventually comprise the Additional Reserve Lands. (See Responses H2-52, H2-132, H2-193, H2-196, H2-207 and H2-312.)

    H2-240 The MSHCP is not, as this comment recognizes, a plan with "hard-line" boundaries. See Responses H2-41 and H2-43. Consequently, there is no "taking" pursuant to state and/or federal law. Further, the County is not engaging in "activities to depress the value of property before condemning it". See Response H2-241.

    H2-241 Species habitat does not constitute "blight" on a neighborhood. The conduct at issue in the case of Klopping v. City of Whittier (1979) 8 Cal.3d 39, is far different than the coordinated regional planning efforts to be implemented by the MSHCP. In Klopping, the city made public announcements that it intended to acquire the plaintiff's land, terminated the proceedings, and then restarted eminent domain proceedings once the price of land had dropped. Worth noting is that the city specifically announced that the particular property owned by the plaintiff's was to be condemned. The MSHCP has made no such announcements regarding individual pieces of property. The exact property to be conserved will be determined through the application of the Criteria. The MSHCP incorporates a broad array of incentives to encourage Conservation of privately owned lands. (See MSHCP, § 6.1.1.) Additionally, it is the stated goal of the MSHCP to properly and justly compensate private landowners. Worth noting also is the case of Guinnane v. City and County of San Francisco (1987) 197 Cal.App.3d 862, wherein the court considered a landowner suit for damages based upon the designation of land as a possible site for a public park. The landowners claimed unreasonable precondemnation and cited the holding in Klopping. The court rejected this argument and held that "mere planning activities" did not act as a blight upon the property requiring condemnation. Further, for Klopping to be applicable there must be showing of a "bad faith" regarding the actions of the government agency. Because the Lead Agencies are not acting in "bad faith" in regard to the MSHCP, not such "bad faith" showing can be made. See Response H2-41 regarding why there can be no claim for a taking. See H2-11 regarding adequacy of project description under CEQA.

    H2-242 The comment purports to summarize state, federal and case law and no further response is required.

    H2-243 A nexus study is currently being prepared for the Local Development Mitigation Fee. See Response H2-242. Further, the "entire cost" of the MSHCP will not be funded by the Local Development Mitigation Fee. Other sources of funding include the Density Bonus Fees, mitigation for regional infrastructure, Landfill Tipping Fees, and other potential new revenue sources. (Please see Section 8.5.1 of the Draft MSHCP.)

    H2-244 The commentor is paraphrasing provisions of the Draft MSHCP. No response is required. Page 2.9-1 of the Draft EIR/EIS states that more than 100,000 residential units will be built over the next 20 years. This statement will be clarified to indicate that approximately 149,000 units are anticipated to be constructed in unincorporated western Riverside County by 2025. Table 3J on p. 3.3-3 of the Draft EIR/EIS refers to dwelling units within incorporated Cities, and does not include unincorporated western Riverside County. The combined number of dwelling units anticipated to be constructed by 2025 in unincorporated western Riverside County (149,000) and the Cities (181,000) is approximately 330,000.

    H2-245 The commentor offers a series of "may be" or "probably not" statements concerning the implementation of a Local Development Mitigation Fee. The commentor appears to recognize that these are the elements dealt with in the "NEXUS Study" required by California Law. Mitigation fees are utilized by many jurisdictions to mitigate for the impacts of new Development on infrastructure and on environmental resources. The questions are: 1) does new Development result in the loss of habitat and existing open space, rural and agricultural lands that support species?, and 2) how will that new Development mitigate for its impacts? The answers to both questions is Yes and are both well supported by the literature and by law. The amount of the mitigation and the procedures for implementation will be analyzed and developed in connection with the nexus study and set forth in ordinances adopted by the Cities and the County.

    H2-246 This comment reiterates and summarizes comments H2-82 through H2-246. See Responses H2-82 through H2-246. The Draft EIR/EIS does not contain any significant new information or inaccuracies that require recirculation of the Draft EIR/EIS. As explained in detail in the Responses H2-11, H2-82 through H2-246, the project description in the Draft EIR/EIS is adequate and fully complies with both CEQA and NEPA. Moreover, the Draft EIR/EIS "adequately apprise[s] all interested parties of the true scope of the project for intelligent weighing of the environmental consequences of the project." (City of Santee v. County of San Diego (1989) 214 Cal.App.3d 1438, 1454-1455.)

    H2-247 The comment purports to restate state and case law and no further response is required.

    H2-248 This is an inaccurate interpretation of the CEQA Guidelines. Because environmental conditions may vary from year to year and in some cases it is necessary to consider conditions over a range of time periods, the "date for establishing baseline cannot be a rigid one." (Save Our Peninsula Committee v. Monterey County Bd. of Supervisors (6th Dist. 2001) 87 Cal.App.4th 99, 125 (Save Our Peninsula).) As such, lead agencies have the discretion to determine the appropriate baseline.

    Section 15125 of the State CEQA Guidelines sets forth the general rule that environmental conditions existing at the time environmental analysis is commenced "normally" constitutes the baseline for purposes of determining whether an impact is significant. The commentor apparently relies on this section to conclude that CEQA statutorily requires the baseline to be set at the time the notice of preparation is published. However, the Legislature's use of the term "normally" in Section 15125 gives the lead agency discretion to deviate from the time-of-review baseline and establish a baseline that is more relevant to a determination of whether the project's impacts will be significant. (Fat v. County of Sacramento (2002) 97 Cal.App.4th 1270, 1278; Save Our Peninsula, supra at p. 125.)

    The baseline may start at any time, if there are sound reasons for the choice in the administrative record. (Save Our Peninsula, supra, at p. 125-126.) For instance, in Save Our Peninsula, the court stated that "where the issue involves an impact on traffic levels, the EIR might necessarily take into account the normal increase in traffic over time." (Ibid.) Additionally, analysis of the past may be used to establish future trends for analysis in baseline determinations. (County of Amador v. El Dorado County Water Agency (3rd Dist. 1999) 76 Cal.App.4th 931, 956.)

    The decision to use a baseline that deviates from the statutorily created norm, will be reviewed for abuse of discretion. "Abuse of discretion is established if the agency has not proceeded in a manner required by law or if the determination or decision is not supported by substantial evidence.' [Citations.]" (Save Our Peninsula Committee, supra, at pp. 116117.) "In reviewing whether agency procedures comply with CEQA, the test to be applied is 'whether an objective, good faith effort to so comply is demonstrated.'" (Sundstrom v. County of Mendocino (1988) 202 Cal.App.3d 296, 305.) "The agency is the finder of fact and [the court] must indulge all reasonable inferences from the evidence that would support the agency's determinations and resolve all conflicts in the evidence in favor of the agency's decision. [Citation.]" (Save Our Peninsula, supra, at p. 117.) The environmental setting is described and identified in Figure 2.1 on page 2.1-3 of the Draft EIR/EIS.

    H2-249 The Draft EIR/EIS provides a complete description of the environmental setting and affected environment and fully complies with both CEQA and NEPA. As the Draft EIR/EIS notes, the MSHCP covers a diverse landscape including urban cities to undeveloped foothills and montane forests, and stretches across the Santa Ana Mountains, Riverside Lowlands, San Jacinto Foothills, San Jacinto Mountains, Agua Tibia Mountains, Desert Transition, and San Bernardino Mountains Bioregions. Section 3.0 on pages 3.1-1 through 3.5-1 of the Draft EIR/EIS describes the existing biological, agricultural, population, housing and employment, public services, and transportation and circulation conditions in the proposed MSHCP. Existing land uses are summarized in Figure 2.1 and Figure 4.1.2 is a map that provides a regional perspective of the MSHCP. Section 3.0 also provides a complete discussion of impacts for each of these areas. For convenience, these impacts are summarized for each alternative in chart form in Table ES-B. See Responses H2-250 through H2-268.

    H2-250 See Responses G-10, K-110, M-11, H2-93 through H2-122 and N3-1 through N3-3. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of : Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003. For the reasons stated in these responses and the SRP Correspondence, the appropriate EIR/EIS baseline was utilized.

    H2-251 See Responses H2-46, H2-116, H2-218 and H2-247 through H2-250.

    H2-252 This comment provides an introduction to the following nine comments which purport to provide comparisons of acreages of various vegetation types based on the MSHCP vegetation data base and what purports to be property-specific vegetation mapping based on review of aerial photographs and limited field surveys. Actual vegetation maps have only been provided for three of the properties noted. Even for those properties where a map was provided, there is no reference to actual documentation of the studies undertaken, identifying at a minimum the methodology of the surveys (standard industry practice is to document field survey methodologies including names of surveyors, times of survey, survey conditions, survey methodology such as vegetation mapping conventions/classification standards used, mapping unit used, field map used, etc.). Variance in methodologies, particularly vegetation classification can yield vastly different analysis results.

    As an example of how vegetation classification methodology can result in dramatic differences between mapping efforts is the inclusion of what the commentor identifies as "disturbed habitat" in the same vegetation category as developed land. Table 2-1 in the Draft MSHCP Plan provides a detailed description of the "uncollapsed" vegetation categories that are subsets of the more generalized ("collapsed") vegetation classifications that are used for discussion purposes in the Draft MSHCP. The collapsed vegetation category identified in the Draft MSHCP as "Developed/Disturbed Land" includes the uncollapsed categories of "Residential/Urban/Exotics"; areas that clearly are non-natural and are considered to have no conservation value. This category does not include areas of natural habitat that show disturbance, as typically indicated by a low percentage of cover by the constituent plant species. The commentor acknowledges the distinction between "disturbed habitat" and "non-habitat Residential/Urban/Exotic" in the second bullet of Comment H2-255.

    Under the MSHCP vegetation mapping conventions, areas that are disturbed variations of a particular vegetation community would be included within their actual vegetation community designation, with no distinction regarding the percentage of cover of overall quality (pursuant to the landscape level of planning for the 1.26 milllion-acre MSHCP Plan Area). Therefore, the figures presented in the following comments drastically understate natural vegetation acreages by including "disturbed" variations of natural vegetation communities with developed land, such as residential and other urban uses. Taking into account this one example of misinterpretation of mapping methodologies would indicate that the site-specific mapping performed does not differ substantially from that provided in the MSHCP database.

    In addition, the Draft MSHCP Plan clearly acknowledges that site-specific mapping of resources is not expected to precisely match the landscape level of analysis performed for the 1.26 million-acre MSHCP Plan Area. As noted throughout the Draft MSHCP Plan and these Responses to Comments, mechanisms are provided to assess conservation value on a site-specific basis, including most importantly the flexibility of the Area Plan Criteria and Reserve Assembly process. Therefore, it is anticipated that site-specific biological studies would produce more detailed and possibly varied information that would be taken into consideration as Development and Reserve Assembly proceeds.

    The following comments also represent that some of the properties contain minimal vegetation cover and should therefore be removed from the Criteria Area. As previously noted, conservation value has been determined based on a number of factors, including but not limited to vegetation coverage, species occurrence, soils composition, slope and elevation, in addition to reserve design considerations that include habitat block size, configuration and linkage. Therefore, the fact that a site-specific biology study indicates that vegetation mapping indicates differences from the MSHCP database, would not necessarily lead to a determination that the property does not contain conservation value, because the proposed Conservation may relate to reserve design or other factors.

    H2-253 In reviewing the vegetation acreages and mapping provided by the commentor, it appears that the most prominent differences are related to the commentor's methodology for classification of "disturbed habitat" (see Response H2-252). As noted, the MSHCP vegetation map does not contain a "disturbed habitat" vegetation classification, and a comparison of this classification to the MSHCP classification of "developed/disturbed" is not appropriate. Many of the areas that the commentor identifies as "disturbed habitat" appear to identify qualitative variances in natural habitats. For example, in viewing the vegetation map provided in Comment H2-359, the southwest portion and the northern portion of the western parcel is mapped as "disturbed habitat" but appears to be similar to the adjacent chaparral habitat immediately to the east and south, respectively. This is consistent with the MSHCP vegetation map. However, as noted, it is not appropriate to compare these areas to areas mapped "developed/disturbed" in the MSHCP.

    Based on the information provided, it is not possible to verify whether the area mapped as coast live oak woodland is actually eucalyptus and Peruvian pepper trees. However, it should be noted that the portions of the property proposed for Conservation do not include this area. Resources sought for Conservation include coastal sage scrub, chaparral and grassland.

    As discussed in the responses to the January 28, 2003 comment letter (Responses N3-1 through N3-5), the vegetation map submitted by Murdock for the Outlet Mall Expansion property actually confirmed the accuracy of the MSHCP vegetation data base, and its purpose in providing a landscape-level guidance in assembly of the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    H2-254 See complete Responses to Comment Letters N3.

    H2-255 See complete Responses to Comment Letters N3.

    H2-256 See complete Responses to Comment Letters N3.

    H2-257 See complete Responses to Comment Letters C4.

    H2-258 See Response H2-252.

    H2-259 See Response H2-252.

    H2-260 See Response H2-252.

    H2-261 See Response H2-252.

    H2-262 See Response H2-252.

    H2-263 See Responses H2-118, H2-199, H2-204 and H2-219.

    H2-264 It is not clear what relevance the presence or absence of the 13 species (which are not identified in the comment) that were surveyed for on the identified properties bears on the adequacy of the Draft MSHCP or the number of species analyzed for coverage. The commentor appears to be attempting to illustrate the "overboard nature of such a large species list" by indicating that site surveys for 13 random species on the referenced properties were negative. Because it cannot be determined how the purported results of a survey for a limited and unidentified list of species on a limited number of properties relates to the species analysis throughout the 1.26 million-acre MSHCP Plan Area, no further response is provided.

    H2-265 See complete Responses to Comment Letters C4.

    H2-266 See Response H2-27.

    H2-267 See Responses H2-247 through H2-262.

    H2-268 This conclusory comment summarizes Comments H2-263 through H2-268, for which Responses are provided above. The Draft EIR/EIS does not rely on "outdated" or "inaccurate" data. See Responses H2-93 though H2-122.

    H2-269 See Response H2-270.

    H2-270 The Lead Agencies do not agree that properties subject to vesting tentative maps and/or development agreements should be removed from the Criteria Area. The rules, regulations, policies, ordinances and laws in effect at the time the application for the vesting tentative map is deemed complete and the terms of each development agreement will control as to whether the County or a City has the ability to require compliance with the provisions of the MSHCP. Vesting tentative and final maps as well as development agreements have a life or specified term. Once the life or specified term expires, any development of the property would be subject to the provisions of the MSHCP since the vested rights conferred would no longer be in effect. The County and each City will need to determine whether or not a proposed development project is required to comply with the provisions of the MSHCP in light of a vesting tentative/final map or development agreement on a case by case basis. However, if it is determined that the property included within the proposed development project is occupied by a listed species, incidental take of the species may not be conferred unless compliance with the MSHCP occurs. Thus, if a vesting tentative/final map or development agreement prevents the County or City from requiring compliance with the MSHCP and a proposed development project is occupied by a listed species covered by the MSHCP, the applicant may choose to obtain take authorization pursuant to either Sections 7 or 10 of the FESA and/or pursuant to the CESA or the NCCP Act directly from the Wildlife Agencies or through the MSHCP.

    H2-271 The Draft EIR/EIS provides a complete description of the environmental setting and affected environment and fully complies with both CEQA and NEPA. Regardless of whether property owners have vested rights, the environmental setting in the Draft EIR/EIS is adequate. See Response H2-270.

    H2-272 See Responses H2-28. Certain City ministerial approvals that could have impacts to Covered Species may be subject to the provisions of the MSHCP. However, the number of ministerial approvals that may be subject to the MSHCP is irrelevant to the Draft EIR/EIS project description.

    H2-273 See Response H2-32.

    H2-274 The commentor restates the conclusions presented in the Draft EIR/EIS that implementation of the proposed MSHCP could result in approximately 4,300 acres of land with known potential mineral extraction use to be set aside for Conservation, and that no areas currently used for mineral extraction would be set aside.

    H2-275 See complete Responses to Comment Letter N3. No lands which are actively utilized for mineral resource extraction are anticipated to be conserved. The inclusion of the property in question in the Criteria Area will not alter the existing land use or prevent the continuance of existing mineral resource extraction activities.

    H2-276 See Responses M-52, M-62 and M-75.

    H2-277 While the commentor is correct in stating that amount of land actively utilized for agricultural uses in the entire County totals 266,926 acres, this amount is reflective of agricultural operations that take place throughout the County, including the Coachella and Palo Verde Valleys. The EIR/EIS identifies potential impacts to agricultural within the MSHCP Plan Area (i.e., Western Riverside County); therefore, as stated in Response H2276, a baseline of 161,792 acres of active agricultural land is utilized.

    The baseline acreage for Agricultural Operations was derived from the interpretation of aerial photographs of the entire County. The land use interpretation included dairies, feedlots, fish farms, and agricultural related uses in the tabulation of land utilized for agricultural production throughout the County. As, this data was tabulated on a GIS database, the amount of agricultural land in Western Riverside County was extracted from the total amount of agricultural land in the County as a whole.

    H2-278 The tables referenced in the comment are contained within the Draft EIR/EIS, not in the MSHCP as cited in the comment. The sources of the information included in the tables are referenced in the footnotes for each table. These tables merely provide information reflecting the existing setting relating to transportation facilities, and it is not their purpose to analyze impacts. See Draft EIR/EIS Section 5.1.5 on p. 5.1-10 for discussion of cumulative transportation impactsincluding those associated with potential intensification of Development. See also Responses H2-247 through H2-277.

    H2-279 This comment purports to summarize state and federal law and no further response is required.

    H2-280 The commentor states that the conclusions reached in the Draft EIR/EIS are unsupported by facts and analysis. Analysis and facts supporting the conclusions reached in the Draft EIR/EIS can be found in Sections 3.0, 4.0, 5.0 and 6.0 of the document. See Responses H2-281 through H2-298.

    H2-281 The analyses contained in the Draft MSHCP and the Draft EIR/EIS use the best scientific and commercial data available to support its conclusion of coverage for the non-listed Covered Species (see Response H2-250). The Lead Agencies concur that the significance criterion referenced in Footnote 32 of the comment is not included in Appendix G of the CEQA Guidelines. This criterion was added to provide an analysis of potential Edge Effects. Moreover, the Lead Agencies have discretion to choose thresholds of significance utilized in CEQA/NEPA documents. See Responses M-67 through M-69.

    Footnote 33 contains in inaccurate reference to the comment document. Based on the comment contained in the footnote regarding the "complete list of admissions by the County" it is assumed that the commentor is referring to comments H2-106 to H2-114. See Response to those comments.

    H2-282 See Responses H2-253 through H2-262.

    H2-283 See Responses H2-115 and H2-116.

    H2-284 See Response H2-117.

    H2-285 See Response H2-250.

    The Lead Agencies also disagree with the commentor's conclusion that "hard-line" boundaries must be set. The Conservation Area, Criteria Area, cores and linkages, and Edge Effects are fully and accurately identified based on the best scientific and commercial data available. See Responses H2-11, H2-88, H2-91 and H2-92.

    As explained in detail in Responses H2-99 through H2-120, the MSHCP utilizes the best available scientific and commercial data. The establishment of "hard line" boundaries for the Conservation Area, Criteria Area, cores and linkages and Edge Effects is not required by FESA or the NCCP Act and, moreover, it would be impossible to achieve on the ground. As previously explained, the MSHCP sets up a process which largely relies upon willing buyer - willing seller transactions to acquire conservation property. As the process moves forward, incentives will be provided for property owners to transfer their property. However, it is impossible at this point to determine every parcel of land that is or may become available for such purposes.

    H2-286 See Response H2-27.

    H2-287 See Responses H2-93 through H2-120 and H2-280 through H2-284.

    H2-288 The Lead Agencies disagree with the commentor's conclusion. As more thoroughly explained in Response H2-22, the MSHCP is based upon the best available scientific and commercial data. Additionally, the adaptive management and vegetation database update provisions of the MSHCP are not improper deferral of mitigation but instead are a means by which new scientific information may be included in the Reserve Assembly process.

    Moreover, the commentor's reliance on Berkeley Keep Jets Over the Bay Com. v. Board of Port Cmrs. (2001) 91 Cal.App.4th 1344, is misplaced. The EIR at issue in Berkley Keep Jets used a 1991 scientific report when a more recent version was arguably available. Because newer information existed prior to the publication of the Draft EIR/EIS, the court held that the use of the older science was inappropriate. (Id. at p. 1367.) In contrast, the data used in the Draft EIR/EIS for the MSHCP is the most recent and accurate information available and satisfies CEQA's requirement that the County make "a good faith effort at full disclosure."

    H2-289 See Responses H2-290 through H2-339.

    H2-290 The commentor restates the premises on which the Draft EIR/EIS analyzes impacts to mineral resources, and states that Murdock's Pacific Clay property and a portion of its Alberhill Ranch Specific Plan property is designated MRZ-2. Therefore, no further response is necessary.

    H2-291 The commentor restates the facts presented in the Draft EIR/EIS that implementation of the proposed MSHCP could result in approximately 4,300 acres of land with known potential mineral extraction use to be set aside for conservation, and that no areas currently used for mineral extraction would be set aside. Therefore, no further response is necessary.

    H2-292 While portions of the commentor's property may be in the Criteria Area, the Criteria do not presume the Conservation of lands actively used for mineral resource extraction.

    H2-293 See Responses H2-291and H2-292.

    H2-294 The commentor appears to be stating that by setting aside land for Conservation that is potentially suitable both for mineral resource extraction and development, a land use incompatibility would occur. This is incorrect. Land use incompatibilities generally occur when adjacent land uses have adverse impacts on each other (such as industrial land use adjacent to residential, which can result in noise, light and glare, air quality, and hazard impacts). Designating vacant and undeveloped land, regardless of development potential, as an area to be considered for Conservation does not result in land use incompatibilities.

    H2-295 The commentor seems to be stating that the analysis of Population, Housing and Employment is inconsistent with the analysis of growth inducing impacts. The commentor is reiterating different statements from the MSHCP EIR/EIS without including any of the detail or explanation. Without the inclusion of the detail or explanation of these statements (which is included in the EIR/EIS) it would, of course, seem that the analysis is inconsistent.

    As stated on page 6.1-5 "a project that would reduce the supply of available land for development in one area may be considered to have indirect growth inducing effects if such a reduction would result in a shift in projected growth into an area not currently designated for such growth... if development cannot occur where it is currently proposed, or occurs at levels currently permitted by the County and local municipalities, it must be accommodated elsewhere. As a result, the project could redistribute growth in the region, as development may occur in areas where it is not currently anticipated." This is consistent with the statement on page 4.3-2 "... implementation of the proposed MSHCP will not change (either reduce or increase) the amount of development (dwelling units and/or employment facilities) allowed pursuant to local land use controls. Regardless of whether the MSHCP is adopted, then, the same number of dwelling units and commercial/industrial/office space will be developed." "In other words, the only difference the MSHCP will make to future development is to change the precise location of the anticipated land uses within western Riverside County."

    Also consistent with the above, page 6.5-1 states, "The intent of the plan...is for the Wildlife Agencies to grant "take authorization" to local jurisdictions for otherwise lawful actions such as development that may incidentally take or harm individuals of a species or its habitat outside of reserve areas, in exchange for each jurisdiction's support for the assembly of a coordinated reserve system. This would lessen the existing constraint on the development by streamlining the permitting process. Thus, the proposed MSHCP would have an indirect growth inducing effect, because it will accommodate and streamline the approval of future development within those areas of western Riverside County outside the limits of the MSHCP Conservation Area." This streamlining of the permitting process will not change the number of dwelling units and number of commercial/industrial/office spaces developed.

    H2-296 The MSHCP and the Draft EIR/EIS are consistent. The growth forecasts for western Riverside County are contained within two tables in the Draft EIR/EIS. Table 3J on page 3.3-3 indicates that residential units within the Cities of western Riverside County will increase to 466,845 units by 2025. See Responses H2-244 and H2-295.

    H2-297 The traffic analysis that is provided in Section 4.16 and Appendix C of the Riverside County General Plan Draft EIRfully complies with CEQA and NEPA. Potential locations identified for habitat conservation as a part of the MSHCP were used for several roadways, on the existing circulation element. Roadways on the circulation element were deleted or modified because of the potential conflicts with the MSHCP.

    H2-298 For clarification purposes, the Criteria Area is approximately 310,000 acres, not the 844,200 acres referenced by the commentor, within which approximately 153,000 acres of private land will be included within the MSHCP Conservation Area. The traffic analysis that is provided in Section 4.5 of the Draft EIR/EIS is based on the assumption that land uses that would occur in the153,000 acres of private lands would be shifted to areas outside the 153,000 acres. As stated on page 4.5.3 of the Draft EIR/EIS, "Approximately 5,840 acres of roads will be improved/constructed within the Criteria Area. The improvement/construction as well as the operation and maintenance of circulation element roadways are covered activities within the Criteria Area, subject to guidelines described in the MSHCP." Also stated on page 4.5-3 of the Draft EIR/EIS is the following, "Planned roadways are proposed within the County and cities to facilitate planned growth. Planned roadways identified in Section 7.3.5 of the MSHCP are covered activities within the Criteria Area. Roadways other than those identified in Section 7.3.5 of the MSHCP are not covered without an amendment of the MSHCP. The MSHCP includes design and sitting guidelines for planned roadways. The implementation of these guidelines will ensure that planned roadways are designed and constructed in a manner consistent with the objectives of the MSHCP, while providing for the efficient passage of persons and goods through western Riverside County, the alleviation of traffic congestion, the maintenance of level of service standards, and continuation of adequate emergency access/evacuation routes. Therefore, the proposed MSHCP would not have significant impacts on planned roadways."

    Under an analysis of significance on page 4.5-4 of the Draft EIR/EIS, the document states that the "MSHCP would avoid and minimize impacts to sensitive species and habitats known to occur in the vicinity of planned roadways, while permitting the construction, operation, and maintenance of roadways. The operation, maintenance, and construction of existing and planned roadways is necessary for the efficient and effective passage of persons and goods through western Riverside County, the alleviation of traffic congestion, the maintenance of level of service standards, and continuation of adequate emergency access/evacuation routes. As the operation, maintenance, and construction of existing and planned roadways, detailed in Section 7.0 of the MSHCP, are covered activities within the Conservation Area, potential transportation-related impacts resulting from implementation of the Proposed Action or its alternatives will be less than significant."

    The analysis in the Draft EIR/EIS assumes that area roadways will be constructed according to the approved circulation elements of the County and Cities. The circulation elements are based on projected land use within the County and Cities. Planned roadways will not occur within the MSHCP Conservation Area. The MSHCP will plan the MSHCP Conservation Area around the roadways. As stated above the planned roadways are allowed in the Criteria Area. The MSHCP will not preclude the Cities and the County from implementing their circulation elements to accommodate planned growth.

    H2-299 The Draft EIR/EIS states (on page 1.5-3) the Lead Agencies determined that the potential impacts that could result from implementation of the MSHCP to aesthetics, air quality, cultural resources, geology and soils, hazards and hazardous materials, hydrology and water quality, land use (with the exception of agriculture and extractive mineral resources), noise, public services (except fire and parks), utilities, and environmental justice would be less than significant. The Draft EIR/EIS provides a brief summary of the conclusions reached in the analysis as required by CEQA and NEPA. CEQA allows the preparation of an Initial Study for the purpose of focusing an EIR; however, an Initial Study is not required if the Lead Agency determines it is clearly required for the Agency to prepare an EIR (State CEQA Guidelines, § 15060(d)). The Draft EIR/EIS makes use of this provision according to State law and therefore an Initial Study was not prepared.

    H2-300 See Responses K-107, K-108, K-123, H2-301 and H2-314.

    H2-301 The Draft EIR/EIS fully discusses all potentially significant impacts. CEQA does not require an EIR to discuss insignificant effects in detail. (State CEQA Guidelines, § 15126.2; 15128.) The Draft EIR/EIS found that implementation of the proposed MSHCP would not result in significant environmental effects related to the following issue areas: Aesthetics, Air Quality, Cultural Resources, Geology and Soils, Hazards and Hazardous Materials, Hydrology and Water Quality, Land Use, Noise, Public Services (with the exception of fire protection and parks), Utilities, and Environmental Justice. As required by CEQA, the Draft EIR/EIS briefly discusses these insignificant environmental effects in Section 1.5.5. (State CEQA Guidelines, § 15128.) There is no requirement in CEQA that a lead agency consider speculative future plans. (See Chapparal Greens v. City of Chula Vista (1996) 50 Cal.App.4th 1134.) Likewise, NEPA does not require an analysis of impacts that are too speculative to identify. (See, e.g., Kootenai Tribe of Idaho v. Veneman (2002) 313 F.3d 1094.) See Responses H2-299 and H2-304.

    H2-302 The Lead Agencies concur that the conclusions reached in regard to cumulative biological impacts, population, housing and employment, and growth inducement are conservative in nature. See Responses H2-299, H2-301 and K-107.

    H2-303 The Lead Agencies reached a significance conclusion because of the information before them, not due to lack of information. See Response H2-250.

    H2-304 See Responses K-107, H2-15, and H2-301. The MSHCP will not change the land use designation of any property, nor does it authorize Development or relieve projects of the necessity of conducting environmental analysis and documentation of impacts pursuant to applicable State and federal laws. The conservative conclusion that was reached concerning the significant impact that could occur due to indirect growth inducement (as reflected in the population, housing, and employment discussion in Section 4.3 as well as in Sections 5 and 6 of the Draft EIR/EIS) stems from the possible 'removal of a barrier to growth,' in the form of streamlining the process of acquiring Take Authorization for projects. The significant indirect cumulative biological impact that was disclosed is also conservative, and reflects the granting of Take Authorization (and, hence, the permitted Take of Covered Species). These impacts are related to Development, but could potentially occur and be altered as an indirect result of Plan implementation.

    H2-305 The State CEQA Guidelines section cited in the comment does not prohibit deferral of analysis. Instead, it states that the "degree of specificity required in an EIR will correspond to the degree of specificity involved in the underlying activity which is described in the EIR." Moreover, deferral of more detailed analysis is legitimate "where practical considerations prohibit devising such measures early in the planning process (e.g., at the general plan amendment or rezone stage), the agency can commit itself to eventually devising measures that will satisfy specific performance criteria articulated at the time of project approval... [Citation.]" ( Sacramento Old City Assn. v. City Council (1991) 229 Cal.App.3d 1011, 1029.)

    The adaptive management and vegetation data base update provisions of the MSHCP are not an improper deferral but instead are a means by which newly discovered science may be included in the Reserve Assembly process. Additionally, the Draft EIR/EIS states that the management and monitoring programs incorporated in the MSHCP would be implemented to mitigate to the extent feasible any significant effects remaining after application of the minimizing measures incorporated in the MSHCP. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 4.1-159.) These potential mitigation measures avoid, minimize, rectify, reduce or compensate for environmental impacts in conformity with NEPA. (40 CFR 1508.20.) Each of these potential mitigation measures is a means to mitigate adverse environmental impacts in conformity with NEPA. (40 CFR 1502.16(h).) Consistent with NEPA regulations, USFWS' record of decision will also state whether all practicable means to avoid or minimize environmental harm from the alternative selected have been adopted, and if not, why they were not. (40 CFR 1505.2(c).) Finally, in accordance with state and federal law, a monitoring and enforcement program shall be adopted and summarized where applicable for any mitigation. (Ibid.)

    H2-306 The Draft EIR/EIS fully discusses all potentially significant impacts. Additionally, insignificant impacts are briefly discussed as required by CEQA. See Responses H2-299, H2-300, H2-301 and H2-304. Impacts from possible intensification of development are discussed in Section 5.0 of the EIR/EIS and in Responses D-80, H2-300, I-43, K-123 H2302 and H2-304.

    H2-307 A discussion and analysis of insignificant impacts can be found in the Draft EIR/EIS. See Responses H2-299, H2-300, H2-301, H2-304, H2-305 and H2-306.

    H2-308 See Responses H2-28, H2-133 and H2-272. The commentor fails to identify environmental impacts that could occur from the application of the MSHCP provisions to a limited number of City ministerial approvals. The commentor also fails to provide any support for the allegation that increased processing costs and increased housing costs could result.

    H2-309 The EIR/EIS contains adequate cumulative impact analysis. See Response H2-5. This comment primarily purports to summarize state and federal law; however commentor misinterprets the court's holding in Communities for a Better Environment v. California Resources Agency (2002) 103 Cal.App.4th 98, modified by 2002 Cal. App. LEXIS 5015 ("CBE"). The CBE court stated that "[t]he categories of probable future projects set forth in Guidelines section 15130(b)(1)(B)2 are drawn from controlling CEQA law. However, as the trial court found, to the extent this section lists these categories disjunctively and a lead agency may refer to only one of the categories in analyzing cumulative impacts, the section is inconsistent with CEQA law and is invalid." (Id. at p. 122 [emphasis added].)Thus, the comment mischaracterizes the meaning of the court by stating that a "lead agency must analyze all categories listed in CEQA Guidelines section 15130." The court actually held that the definition of "probable future project" requires that all the categories in Section 15130(b)(1)(B)2) be addressed. Similarly, the Lead Agencies disagree with the commentor's conclusion that "projects currently under environmental review unequivocally"qualify for consideration in a cumulative impacts analysis. The case cited by commentor, San Franciscans for Reasonable Growth v. City & County of San Francisco (1984) 151 Cal.App.3d 61, 74, actually states that "closely related projects that [are] currently under environmental review" and not all current projects, should be included in the cumulative impacts analysis. (Ibid.)

    Thus, the comment mischaracterizes the meaning of the court. The court only meant that the definition of "probable future project", a term under section 15130(b)(1)(A), requires that all the categories in 15130(b)(1)(B)(2) be addressed and not that both the (b)(1)(A) list method and the (b)(1)(B) projection method must be used. The Draft EIR/EIS properly uses the projection approach, as discussed in Response H2-310 below. San Franciscans for Reasonable Growth v. City and County of San Francisco (1984) 151 Cal.App.3d 61, 74, fn. 13 is also case decided for an EIR using the 15130(b)(1)(A) list method and not the projection method, so it is inapposite. The page cited by the commentor in Bozung v. Local Agency Formation Comm'n (1975) 13 Cal.3d 263 does not state the proposition asserted. However, the case, on page 284, at note 27, states, "where an individual project is a necessary precedent for action on a larger project, or commits the lead agency to a larger project, with significant environmental effect, an EIR must address itself to the scope of the larger project." For the reasons stated in Responses H215, and H2-310 to H2-318, the MSHCP is not a necessary precedent to a larger project and does not commit the County to a larger project.

    H2-310 The Draft EIR/EIS contains adequate cumulative impact analysis and discussion of connected actions on pages 5.1-1 through 5.1-10 of the Draft EIR/EIS. See Responses H25 and H2-19. Additionally, the Draft EIR/EIS specifically refers to the environmental documentation for both the General Plan Update and CETAP in order to inform the public and the decision-makers of the importance of these documents and potential impacts. (Draft EIR/EIS, § 1.1.5.) This reference complies with NEPA's requirement that materials be incorporated into an environmental impact statement by reference when the effect will be to cut down on bulk without impeding agency and public review of the action. (40 CFR, § 1502.21.) The MSHCP, the General Plan Update, and the CETAP are independent but interrelated projects which would be considered for implementation regardless of the outcome of the other two projects. (See Responses H2-311 through H2-313.)

    As the commentor notes, NEPA requires an EIS' environmental analysis to include connected actions and cumulative impacts. However, NEPA also requires that materials be incorporated into an environmental impact statement by reference when the effect will be to cut down on bulk without impeding agency and public review of the action. 40 CFR, § 1502.21. The EIR/EIS specifically refers to the environmental documentation for both the General Plan Update and CETAP. (EIR/EIS at § 1.1.5)

    The EIR/EIS uses the summary of projections approach and bases the projections upon Southern California Association of Governments (SCAG) regional population growth forecasts for 2025 for unincorporated western Riverside County and the Cities within western Riverside County. (State CEQA Guidelines, § 15130(b)(1)(B); Draft EIR/EIS, p. 5.1-2.) The cumulative impacts analysis fully discusses impacts to biology, land use, agricultural resources, mineral resources, housing, population and employment, public services, parks and recreation, and transportation. (See Draft EIR/EIS, pp. 5.1-6- 5.1-10.) See Response H2-15.

    The Lead Agencies disagree with the commentor's statement that the RCIP process is not considered in the MSHCP. The RCIP is considered at § 1.2.2 of the MSHCP. Furthermore, it is incorrect for the commentor to conclude that the forecasting-based approach is not a sufficient analysis of the incremental effects of the MSHCP when viewed in connection with other projects and is an inappropriate criteria. The choice to use the forecasting-based approach is at the discretion of the project proponent. (State CEQA Guidelines, § 15130(b)(1)(B)) The comment is also incorrect to state that the Draft EIR/EIS considers only the MSHCP and alternatives and does not consider MSHCP effects in connection with other RCIP components. The EIR/EIS specifically refers to the environmental documentation for both the General Plan Update and CETAP, which is sufficient under CEQA. (EIR/EIS, § 1.1.5; Native Sun/Lyon Communities v. City of Escondido (1993) 15 Cal.App.4th 892, 909-910).

    H2-311 See Responses H2-209 and H2-310. The EIR/EIS also contains adequate boundary descriptions. See Responses H2-11 and H2-310.

    The MSHCP, the General Plan Update, and the CETAP are independent but interrelated projects which would be considered for implementation regardless of the outcome of the other two projects. Indeed, the General Plan Update is required by state law. Gov. Code, § 65103.

    With respect to Footnote 37, the MSHCP does not rely on the General Plan OS-CH land use designation. The remainder of the footnote is a comment on the adequacy of the proposed General Plan land use element not the MSHCP and no further response is required for purposes of the MSHCP Draft EIR/EIS.

    H2-312 It is unclear to what project the commentor is referring when it refers to the "initial project" in this comment. As noted by the commentor, the General Plan Update and CETAP are projects contemplated by the MSHCP and sufficiently large changes in those projects will require evaluation under the MSHCP's adaptive management process, amendment process, and, if necessary, additional environmental review. It is partially for this reason that the Draft EIR states that, as required by CEQA, future development proposals will undergo environmental review and the project's potential environmental impacts will be identified, analyzed and mitigated. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 1.5-6.)

    Laurel Heights Improvement Ass'n v. Regents of University of California (1998) 47 Cal.3d 376, 396, cited by the commentor, held that an EIR must include an analysis of the environmental effects of future action if: (1) it is a reasonably foreseeable consequence of the initial project; and (2) the future action will be significant in that it will likely change the scope or nature of the initial project or its environmental effects. Even then, under Native Sun/Lyon Communities v. City of Escondido (1993) 15 Cal.App.4th 892, 909-910, environmental analysis may be incorporated by reference. CETAP and the General Plan Amendment do not meet the Laurel Heights test for collective analysis. While CETAP and the General Plan Amendment are proceeding concurrently with the MSHCP, none of the three projects is a consequence of the other. Each would be considered for implementation regardless of the outcome of the other two projects.

    Indeed, the General Plan Update is required by state law. Government Code § 65103. The MSHCP project description is adequate. Moreover, the MSHCP EIR/EIS specifically refers to the environmental documentation for both the General Plan Update and CETAP, which is sufficient under CEQA.

    Blue Ocean Preservation Soc. v. Watkins (1991) 754 F.Supp. 1450, 1457, merely restates the standard in 40 CFR 1508.25, which provides that actions are connected if they: (i) automatically trigger other actions that may require environmental impact statements; (ii) cannot or will not proceed unless other actions are taken previously or simultaneously; or (iii) are interdependent parts of a larger action and depend on the larger action for their justification. The MSHCP, CETAP and the General Plan Update do not trigger one another, can and will proceed independently and do not depend on each other for their justification. The drafters of the three documents have attempted to make them consistent, but this is just good planning, not prohibited piecemealing.

    H2-313 The Lead Agencies concur that the CETAP and General Plan components of the RCIP are reasonably foreseeable projects. Each of these projects is based on the growth projections in the SCAG RTP. The MSHCP EIR/EIS utilizes the SCAG projections, as well as all applicable general plans, for the cumulative impact analysis, and thus is consistent with the other elements in the RCIP.

    H2-314 The level of analysis in the Draft EIR/EIS is commensurate with the significance of the impacts and fully complies with CEQA. Not all issues analyzed in the Draft EIR/EIS were found to be significant or cumulatively considerable. Adoption of the proposed MSHCP and issuance of the Permits under Section 10(a)(1)(b) of the FESA and Section 2825 of the NCCP Act would conserve habitat and would allow Take of Covered Species, but would not directly authorize Development or eliminate the need for projects to conduct environmental review. Since the MSHCP does not authorize any physical development, it was determined in the Draft EIR/EIS that implementation of the proposed MSHCP would not result in significant adverse environmental effects relating to the following issue areas: aesthetics, air quality, cultural resources, geology and soils, hazards and hazardous materials, hydrology and water quality, land use, noise, public services (with the exception of fire protection and parks), utilities, and environmental justice. As required by CEQA, the Draft EIR/EIS briefly discusses these insignificant environmental issues in Section 1.5.5. (State CEQA Guidelines, § 15128.) See Response H2-304.

    For example, because the proposed MSHCP does not authorize Development, implementation of the proposed MSHCP would not create additional sources of light or glare affecting aesthetics. The Draft EIR/EIS discusses aesthetics on pages 1.5-5 and 1.5-6. Likewise, since there is no authorized Development, adoption of the proposed MSHCP would not alter the methods used to generate, use, transport, or dispose of hazardous materials. There would be no adverse impacts to cultural resources, hydrology and water quality, or geology and soils as no ground-disturbing or building activities would be directly authorized by the Plan. The MSHCP also would not alter land use designations or increase the areas designated for Development in any general plan. Thus, no adverse impacts to land use, noise, public services, utilities, or environmental justice would occur. For these reasons, there are no significant cumulative impacts on aesthetics, air quality, cultural resources, geology and soils, hazards and hazardous materials, hydrology and water quality, noise, utilities or environmental justice. (See Draft EIR/EIS, pp. 1.5-5-1.511.) The cumulative impacts analysis fully discusses impacts to biology, agricultural resources, mineral/extractive resources, housing, population and employment, parks and recreation, and transportation. (See Draft EIR/EIS, pp. 5.1-6 through 5.1-10.) See Responses H2-13, H2-14, H2-16, and H2-301.

    H2-315 The Draft EIR/EIS contains adequate cumulative impact analysis. See Responses H2-206, H2-250, H2-285 and H2-309 through H2-314. There is no requirement under CEQA or NEPA requiring that a hardline boundary be set for the MSHCP Criteria or Conservation Areas. In fact, neither CEQA nor NEPA require that a project be changed to allow less complicated analysis of project impacts. Instead, both CEQA and NEPA require that lead agencies analyze the proposed project regardless of how complex. Therefore, contrary to the Comment, the lack of hardline boundaries does not violate CEQA. The Wildlife Agencies will determine if the MSHCP adequately complies with FESA and the NCCP Act and thus whether permits can be issued.

    H2-316 See Responses H2-299 through H2-304.

    H2-317 See Responses H2-15, H2-301 and H2-316. Although the MSHCP has the potential to cause indirect impacts to Public Services because of the Development that may occur outside of the MSHCP Conservation Area, there is no requirement in CEQA that a lead agency consider speculative future plans. (See Chapparal Greens v. City of Chula Vista (1996) 50 Cal.App.4th 1134) It should be noted that the MSHCP does not authorize Development or eliminate the need for environmental review of Development projects.

    H2-318 See Response H2-121 regarding the mitigation and monitoring provisions of the Plan. The MSHCP is "self-mitigating", namely most project impacts were reduced to below a level of significance as a result of implementation of Plan components. The commentor fails to identify any mitigation measures that would reduce any project impacts, whether direct, indirect or cumulative. See Responses H2-13, H2-14, H2-16, H2-300 and H2-310 through H2-312.

    H2-319 The growth inducing impacts of the MSHCP are fully discussed in Sections 5 and 6 of the Draft EIR/EIS. See Responses H2-15 and H2-310.

    The Draft EIR/EIS recognizes that, if Development cannot occur where it is currently proposed or at levels currently permitted by the County and local municipalities, such growth must be accommodated elsewhere. The Draft EIR/EIS discusses, to the extent to which it is known or could be known, the possible effects of potential development shifting. Thus, on page 6.1-5 of the Draft EIR/EIS, the MSHCP concludes that it may have an indirect growth inducing effect, because it will accommodate and streamline the approval process for future developments within those areas of western Riverside County outside the limits of the MSHCP Conservation Area. "[O]ut of an abundance of caution, the Lead Agencies [also] determined that the [MSHCP] will have significant indirect impacts on Population, Housing, and Employment." (See Draft EIR/EIS, p. 5.1-9.) However, the Lead Agencies cannot address these potential indirect impacts in the Draft EIR/EIS for the MSHCP because it would be speculative to try to determine where, and if, any particular future development would be constructed. CEQA does not require speculation. To the contrary, State CEQA Guidelines Section 15145 specifically states that speculation is not required in an EIR.

    Additionally, the Draft EIR/EIS also recognizes that the MSHCP would remove an impediment to growth by authorizing Take of Covered Species and allowing Development outside the MSHCP Conservation Area. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 5.1-9.) Thus, the MSHCP is growth-accommodating, not growth inducing. The Draft EIR states that as required by CEQA, future development proposals will undergo environmental review and project's potential environmental impacts will be identified, analyzed and mitigated. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 1.5-6.)

    H2-320 The comment purports to summarize state, federal and case law and no further response is required.

    H2-321 See Response H2-320. The Draft EIR/EIS does not improperly defer any mitigation measures and fully analyzes all potential environmental impacts. In some instances, such as in analyzing impacts to population, housing and employment, the Draft EIR/EIS concludes that there are no feasible means of mitigating indirect impacts from the elimination of an obstacle to growth. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 4.3-7.) The Draft EIR/EIS identifies mitigation measures where they are feasible. For example, the Draft EIR/EIS discusses the MSHCP's requirement for the payment of fees as mitigation. A commitment to pay fees is adequate mitigation. (See Save Our Peninsula Comm. v. Monterey County Board of Supervisors (2001) 87 Cal.App.4th 99, 141.) Further, in its discussion of impacts to biology, the Draft EIR/EIS states that the management and monitoring programs incorporated in the MSHCP would be implemented to mitigate to the extent feasible significant effects remaining after the application of minimization measures incorporated in the MSHCP. Minimization measures are described in the Impact Analysis discussion in Section 4. For the purpose of analysis, it is assumed that the management and monitoring programs would be implemented according to the approaches and level of effort described in the Sections 5.0, 6.6, and 8.0 of the MSHCP, Volume I. The species-specific management and monitoring activities described in Section 5.0 of the MSHCP would be directed only toward the Covered Species identified for each particular alternative. A similar approach was specifically approved by the court in Save Our Peninsula Committee v. County of Monterey Bd. of Supervisors (2001) 85 Cal. App. 4th 99. In that case, the Court expressly found that the County could determine the nature and timing of required improvements after approval of the project. The County, as lead agency, has the discretion to determine which mitigation measures are appropriate for its jurisdiction and the projects it considers. The timing of implementation of mitigation measures for the proposed MSHCP, along with parties responsible for enforcement and oversight of all mitigation measures, will be detailed in the Project Mitigation Monitoring and Reporting Program (MMRP) which will be made available to the public prior to project approval. See Response H2-320.

    H2-322 The provisions of the MSHCP are "self-mitigating" and therefore no mitigation measures were proposed. The Draft EIR/EIS identified one significant direct impact related to biological resources (impacts to non-Covered Species) for which it was determined that no Feasible mitigation measures exist to reduce the identified impact to a less than significant level. There was an additional indirect impact identified resulting from the removal of an obstacle to growth. No Feasible mitigation measures exist to reduce this impact to below a level of significance.

    H2-323 See Responses H2-52, H2-242 and H2-320.

    H2-324 This comment purports to summarize state law. See Response H2-322.

    H2-325 CEQA allows lead agencies to adopt mitigation measures to be implemented after completion of further studies and evaluations of the mitigation measures provided that performance standards are specified in the mitigation measure. (See, Sacramento Old City Ass'n v. City Council (1991) 229 Cal. App. 3d 1011, 1021.) In Sundstrom v. County of Mendocino, one of the cases cited by commentor, the court recognized that environmental review must be performed at the "earliest feasible stage in the planning process" thereby implicitly recognizing that some studies can be conducted after project approval. (Sundstrom v. County of Mendocino (1988) 202 Cal. App. 3d 296, 307.) See Response H2-305 and H2-322.

    H2-326 See Responses H2-305, H2-320 and H2-322. The commentor seems to imply that the studies that are required by developers under the MSHCP should be done by the County before MSHCP approval. This is not improper deferral but rather establishes procedures to obtain information and ensure mitigation as projects are brought forward for Development. It is infeasible for a Plan of this size to even consider doing the analysis called for in the comment and also inefficient because it is too speculative to determine when and where Development will occur.

    H2-327 The Draft EIR/EIS does not improperly defer analysis of feasible mitigation measures. See Responses H2-305, H2-320, H2-322 and H2-326.

    H2-328 The County is available to meet with Murdock at their request. Despite the commentor's desire to propose mitigation measures, it should be noted that the Draft EIR/EIS does not identify significant impacts specifically related to Murdock's properties. Therefore, no specific mitigation measures related to these properties are considered to be necessary. See Response H2-320.

    H2-329 See Responses H2-305, H2-320 through H2-328.

    H2-330 This comment purports to summarize state and federal law and portions of the Draft EIR/EIS and no further response is necessary.

    H2-331 See Response H2-18. The MSHCP Planning process included extensive consideration of alternatives. The analysis of alternatives was not merely an exercise for the Draft EIR/EIS and the alternatives themselves were by no means "straw men", as characterized in the comment. The exhaustive analysis of project alternatives is clearly documented in the Draft MSHCP and is most markedly evident from the publication of the Alternatives Development Document, a nearly 500 page document prepared in October, 2000. A complete summary of the alternatives development process and consideration of alternatives is provided in the Draft MSHCP. The MSHCP Advisory Committee recommended and the Board of Supervisors elected not to pursue the Existing Reserves Alternative primarily due to the fact that it would not provide coverage for all of the existing listed species and would likely not qualify as an NCCP.

    H2-332 Connectivity to existing and proposed HCPs and NCCPs was a consideration in determining the significance of impacts, not overall feasibilityof alternatives.The analysis does not, nor is it required to, compare the proposed MSHCP to other existing or proposed HCPs/NCCPs. Additionally, the amount of private land proposed for conservation on the adjacent HCPs/NCCPs is entirely irrelevant to the topic of habitat connectivity. The Lead Agencies concur that the significance criterion referenced in the comment is not included in Appendix G of the CEQA Guidelines. This criterion was added to provide an analysis of potential Edge Effects. Moreover, the Lead Agencies have discretion to choose thresholds of significance utilized in CEQA/NEPA documents.

    H2-333 See Responses H2-331 and H2-332.

    H2-334 In conformity with State CEQA Guidelines Section 15126.6, cited by the commentor, the No Project Alternative does discuss existing conditions at the time the Notice of Preparation was published. The Lead Agencies agree with the commentor that the General Plan Update is not an existing condition. However, the planning efforts currently being conducted under the RCIP for the County's General Plan and Countywide circulation element could be adopted in the future. Whether it is adopted or not, activities involving Take of State and/or federal listed species would require individual permitting on a project-by-project basis, as is currently the case. Under the No Project alternative, which discusses the current General Plan, existing reserves would be retained with existing management strategies. See Response F-120.

    It is unclear what the commentor means in stating that the No Project Alternative should analyze those species that currently warrant protection under FESA and CESA in the Plan Area, and stating the number of those species at 27. The Draft EIR/EIS' No Project alternative analyzes only those 27 species referred to and not the 51 in the Draft General Plan.

    H2-335 See Responses H2-220 and H2-221. This comment describes a process by which the commentor's representatives ranked the species proposed for coverage in the Administrative Draft MSHCP and determined numbers and percentages of the species in accordance with that ranking. This comment does not provide any additional information relevant to the adequacy of the Draft MSHCP, the Draft EIR/EIS or the Draft IA, therefore no additional response is provided.

    H2-336 See Responses H2-220 and H2-221.

    Regarding the three species referenced in the comment, the great blue heron was not included in the March 7 Administrative Draft of the MSHCP reviewed by the commentor as the species had recently been added to the species list and a species account for this species had not yet been prepared. Complete information on great blue heron is included in the Draft MSHCP. The Nashville warbler and species account was not included in the March 7 Administrative Draft of the MSHCP reviewed by the commentor as the species account was undergoing revision at that time. The species account for Nashville warbler is included in Draft MSHCP. Likewise, Dulzura kangaroo rat was not included in the March 7 Administrative Draft of the MSHCP reviewed by the commentor as the species had recently been added to the species list and a species account for this species had not yet been prepared. Complete information on Dulzura kangaroo rat is included in the Draft MSHCP.

    H2-337 See Responses H2-220 and H2-221.

    The FESA not only deems it appropriate to include listed, proposed, candidate and unlisted species in an HCP, FESA actually encourages such inclusion. (Section 10 Handbook, pp. 4-1 et seq ("[t]he Services should explain to any applicant the benefits of addressing unlisted species in the HCP and the risks of not doing so, and should strongly encourage the applicant to include as many proposed and candidate species as can be adequately addressed and covered by the permit.") As stated in the Section 10 Handbook, "There are also advantages in addressing unlisted species in the HCP (proposed and candidate species as a minimum), particularly those that are likely to be listed within the foreseeable future or within the life of the Permit. Doing so can protect the Permittee from further delays--e.g., having to revise the HCP and amend the Permit--should species that were not listed at the time the original HCP was approved subsequently become listed. In addition, the 'No Surprises' policy...applies to listed as well as unlisted species if they are adequately addressed in the HCP." (Section 10 Handbook, p. 3-7; see also, p. 4-1.) Moreover, "the decision about what species to include in the HCP is always the applicant's." (Section 10 Handbook, p. 1-16, 4-1.)

    H2-338 See Responses G-10, H2-18, H2-93 through H2-122, H2-331 through H2-337 and N3-1 through N3-3. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of : Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003.

    H2-339 See Responses G-10, H2-18, H2-93 through H2-122, H2-331 through H2-337 and N3-1 through N3-3. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of : Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003.

    H2-340 The MSHCP, the General Plan Update, and the CETAP are independent but interrelated projects which would be considered for implementation regardless of the outcome of the other two projects. Indeed, the General Plan Update is required by state law. Gov. Code, § 65103. The MSHCP, CETAP and the General Plan Update do not trigger one another, can and will proceed independently and do not depend on each other for their justification. The drafters of the three documents have attempted to make them consistent, but this is just good planning, not prohibited piecemealing. The MSHCP project description is adequate. An EIR must include an analysis of the environmental effects of future action if: (1) it is a reasonably foreseeable consequence of the initial project; and (2) the future action will be significant in that it will likely change the scope or nature of the initial project or its environmental effects. Laurel Heights Improvement Ass'n v. Regents of University of California (1998) 47 Cal.3d 376, 396. While CETAP and the General Plan Amendment are proceeding concurrently with the MSHCP, none of the three projects is a consequence of the other.

    Burbank-Glendale-Pasadena Airport Authority v. Hensler (1991) 233 Cal.App.3d 577, cited by the commentor, is a case in which condemnation proceedings for expansion of an airport runway were enjoined because the project proponent had not complied with CEQA for the airport runway expansion. In fact, the proponent had adopted a negative declaration for an airport runway of expansion of more limited scope and had failed to perform additional environmental analysis when the scope of the project changed substantially. In Burbank, airport runway expansion was a consequence of the condemnation action and could not have proceeded without it. Blue Ocean Preservation Soc. v. Watkins (1991) 754 F.Supp. 1450, 1457, also cited by the commentor, merely restates the standard in 40 CFR 1508.25, which provides that actions are connected if they: (i) automatically trigger other actions that may require environmental impact statements; (ii) cannot or will not proceed unless other actions are taken previously or simultaneously; or (iii) are interdependent parts of a larger action and depend on the larger action for their justification. As stated above, The MSHCP, CETAP and the General Plan Update do not trigger one another, can and will proceed independently and thus, have independent utility and do not depend on each other for their justification.

    H2-341 See Response H2-340.

    H2-342 See Response H2-340.

    H2-343 See Response H2-340. The RCIP process is properly addressed in both the MSHCP and its EIR/EIS, as explained in Response H2-310.

    H2-344 The County disagrees with the commentor's conclusion that the MSHCP avoids analyzing the full extent of its impacts. In Los Angeles Unified School Dist. v. City of Los Angeles (1997) 58 Cal.App.4th 1019, 1028, cited by the comment, the Court of Appeal found that the City had initially conducted a noise impact analysis, which it subsequently, without justification, deleted from its EIR. It also found that the EIR adequately addressed residential noise impacts and could not find cause why, based on the same data underlying that analysis, the EIR could not make findings regarding noise impacts to schools. Accordingly, when it held that an agency must analyze an impact when it has "sufficient reliable data to permit preparation of a meaningful and accurate report on the impact", it did so under factual circumstances completely different than those described in the MSHCP for conducting additional analysis when it becomes feasible after more specific information becomes known. The references within the EIS/EIR cited by the commentor as evidence of segmentation refer to additional site-specific environmental review, adaptive management and monitoring and the MSHCP acquisition process.

    There is insufficient data to permit preparation of an accurate report at this time of the impact of all of the projects that could possibly be planned and implemented in the future. State CEQA Guidelines sections 15146 and 15151 state that the degree of specificity required in an EIR depends upon the degree of specificity involved in the underlying activity described in the EIR and that the sufficiency of the information contained in an EIR is reviewed in the light of what is reasonably feasible. The MSHCP is a foundational plan and the process for conserving habitat in western Riverside County. Accordingly, performing additional environmental review at the time it becomes feasible is not segmentation. As to adaptive management and monitoring, the justification for these policies and explanation of why they do not constitute deferred mitigation and, therefore, segmentation, see Response H2-231.

    As explained in Response H2-11, FESA contemplates that conservation lands will be purchased in a timely manner as funds become available. This method of conservation of land acquisition forms the basis of most regional HCPs. (See San Joaquin Plan, San Diego MSHCP, Orange County NCCP.) Because the precise mitigation lands that might be available for acquisition in the coming years cannot be adequately predicted at this time, the MSHCP properly identifies the Criteria Area and Criteria to facilitate future acquisition of mitigation lands for the Plan criteria. This is consistent with the intent of the conservation planning laws and does not constitute improper segmentation under CEQA because of the flexibility contained within State CEQA Guidelines sections 15146 and 15151.

    H2-345 It is not necessary to analyze the RCIP process within the MSHCP environmental review process for the reasons explained in Response H2-340. Regardless, the RCIP process is properly accounted for in both the MSHCP and its EIR/EIS, as explained Response H2-310. The County disagrees that the public has only had the opportunity to review the MSHCP in isolation since the General Plan Update review period was from August 20 through October 4, 2002, and the CETAP documents review period was from July 19 to November 15, 2002; and, in fact, the commentor has submitted comments on these documents and is thus aware of their contents. Also, the comment provides no support for its allegation that preparing separate MSHCP environmental documentation, which refers to CETAP and General Plan Update environmental review documents, results in an underestimation of environmental impacts. See Responses H2-15 and H2-340.

    H2-346 The Lead Agencies disagree with the comment that the MSHCP EIR/EIS is a "postapproval environmental review" of the MSHCP. MSHCP environmental review has been coordinated with project planning from its earliest stages, as required by CEQA and NEPA. CEQA requires environmental document preparation and review to be coordinated in a timely fashion with the existing planning, review, and project approval processes being used by each public agency. These procedures, to the maximum extent feasible, are to run concurrently, not consecutively. CEQA Guidelines § 15004(c). Federal agencies are required to integrate the NEPA process with other planning at the earliest possible time to insure that planning and decisions reflect environmental values, to avoid delays later in the process, and to head off potential conflicts. (40 CFR 1501.2.)

    Redevelopment Agency v. Norm's Slauson (1986) 173 Cal.App.3d 1121, cited in the comment, does not require the MSHCP process to be completely disengaged from the General Planning process in contravention of CEQA and NEPA. That case addressed legal issues concerning the State's power of eminent domain. Unlike the Norm's Slauson case, the County has not yet entered into any contracts for services to implement the MSHCP, CETAP or General Plan Update. Nor has the County issued revenue bonds to finance the project. In Norm's Slauson, the city had placed its good faith and credit (if not actually money from its coffers) at risk by issuing revenue bonds which it represented to the public would be repaid. The County has not made a commitment in reference to the MSHCP, CETAP or General Plan Update.

    In Citizens for Responsible Government v. City of Albany (1997), 56 Cal.App.4th, 1199, also cited in the comment, the City of Albany was found to violate CEQA for doing the opposite of what the County has done with the MSHCP. The Court of Appeals in City of Albany did not have concerns about the City approving a project per se. Their concern was that the City had performed no environmental review before approving the project. They cited to State CEQA Guidelines section 15004 for the proposition that environmental review should be integrated into project planning, as it has been with the MSHCP. It did not see concurrent environmental review as a binding commitment of discretion.

    The Federal Government in Metcalf v. Daley (9th Cir. 2000) 214 F.3d 1135, combined the two factual situations in the cases cited above. An agreement was actually executed before performing any NEPA environmental review. That is certainly not the case as to the MSHCP. Environmental review for the MSHCP has been integrated into project planning and is thorough, complying with all applicable laws. Moreover, the USFWS has not signed the IA and will not do so until all of the required documents and findings have been prepared. In contrast to the facts of the cases cited above, the MSHCP process has effectively integrated environmental analysis into project planning, as further explained in the Responses.

    H2-347 The hearings have occurred for the General Plan Update and the Board is considering the document at this time. The General Plan Update does not depend on MSHCP or CETAP implementation and recommendations have been made by staff to clarify the relationship between the MSHVP and the General Plan. Additionally, the General Plan provides mitigation for its impacts to biological resources independent of the MSHCP. See Responses H2-340 and H2-346.

    H2-348 It is unclear what concern is being expressed by this comment. Most EIRs are written contemplating the implementation of a particular project. The EIR is required to contain a range of reasonable alternatives to a proposed project. (State CEQA Guidelines 15126.6) The alternatives selected for consideration must meet most of the project objectives but which are capable of avoiding or substantially lessening any significant effects of the project, even if these alternatives would impede to some degree the attainment of the project objectives, or would be more costly. (Ibid.) Public input is solicited to determine if an alternative to the project should be selected, even if it impedes the attainment of some project objectives or is more costly. Theoretically, an alternative could be selected as part of that public deliberation.

    The process described above does not prohibit the preparation of an EIR for a proposed project. When the Supervisors instructed County Staff to design the MSHCP in accordance with "Alternative 1", they were providing Staff with a framework for analysis. This in no way taints the County's perception of the impacts for the other alternatives or commits the county to approving the MSHCP as currently envisioned any more than any other CEQA document that analyzes a proposed project.

    H2-349 The commentor confuses the significant distinction between the Service accepting an application and the Service approving the application. To approve the application, the Service will need to make numerous findings. Prior to issuing a Record of Decision for the EIS, the Service will be required to identify all alternatives considered by the agency in reaching its decision, specifying the alternative or alternatives which were considered to be environmentally preferable in conformity with the requirements of 40 CFR 1505.2. Additionally, a biological opinion must be prepared and a report must be written making the findings set forth in sections 7(b)(3) and 7(b)(4) of the ESA and 50 CFR 402.14(h)-(i). (HCP Handbook, p. 6-16.) The HCP Handbook contemplates that environmental documents will be in draft form when the take permit application is submitted. Section 6.B.2.b., at page 6-5 of the HCP Handbook states:

    "The formal application phase begins with receipt by the appropriate Regional Office of a 'complete permit application' package consisting, at a minimum, of the application form, application fee (if applicable), the proposed HCP, the Implementing Agreement (if required), draft NEPA analysis (EAM, EA, or EIS), which was submitted by the applicant, and a certification by the Field Office that it has reviewed these documents and finds them to be statutorily complete. Prompt submission of each of these documents is essential to efficient processing of the permit application because they either initiate the processing phase or are required for the Federal Register notice initiating the 30-day public comment period." (emphasis added)

    The County disagrees with the commentor's unsupported conclusion that the County's submittal of an application before comments are received taints the Service's perception of the impacts for the other alternatives considered. The Service has cooperated with the County in the MSHCP process as contemplated by Congress, as stated at page 3-1 of the HCP Handbook:

    "Congress intended the HCP process to be used to reduce conflicts between federally listed species and non-Federal development and land use, and to provide a framework for 'creative partnerships' between the public and private sectors in endangered species conservation. Congress also intended the FWS and NMFS to be not just regulators of the HCP program, but active participants in providing technical assistance, and that 'comprehensive' HCPs could be developed jointly by the FWS, NMFS, the private sector, and local, state, and Federal agencies, with the Services as a technical advisor (H.R. Rep. No. 97-835, 97th Congress, Second Session)."

    By cooperating in the MSHCP development and application process the Service is not tainted and the County is not pre-committed, as averred by the commentor. Instead, each is fulfilling its intended purpose under the Federal Endangered Species Act.

    The "Notice of Availability of a Draft Environmental Impact Statement/ Environmental Impact Report and Receipt of an Application for an Incidental Take Permit for the western Riverside County Multiple Species Habitat Conservation Plan" reported at 67 Federal Register 69236 (Nov. 15, 2002) is a notice that the Service is required to publish under FESA regulations. (See 50 C.F.R. §§ 17.22, 17.32(b)(1)(ii).) To the extent the comment suggests that the Notice constitutes Service "acceptance" of the MSHCP or the related take permit application, it is incorrect. The Notice states the Service has received an application for such a permit, not accepted or approved it yet. Soliciting comments from the public is intended to increase public awareness of the plan and the related environmental documents. The Service will review the MSHCP in light of the findings it is required to make under FESA. How the Service's "perception" might be "tainted" from receiving an application or issuing a notice is unclear. The County Board of Supervisors will ultimately determine whether to approve the MSHCP or an alternative, or take a different course of action. The County is not "essentially committed" to any particular course of action at this time.

    H2-350 See Responses H2-346 through H2-349. Neither Lead Agencies have committed themselves to taking any action whatsoever.

    H2-351 See Responses H2-1 through H2-350 and complete Response to Comment Letters N3 and C4. Since more specific comments are not given, more specific responses cannot be provided.

    H2-352 State CEQA Guidelines section 15088.5 subsection (a) states that, "[a] lead agency is required to recirculate an EIR when significant new information is added to the EIR." However, "[n]ew information added to an EIR is not "significant" unless the EIR is changed in a way that deprives the public of a meaningful opportunity to comment upon a substantial adverse environmental effect of the project or a feasible way to mitigate or avoid such an effect (including a feasible project alternative) that the project's proponents have declined to implement." (Ibid.) Further recirculation is not required where the new information added to the EIR merely clarifies or amplifies or makes insignificant modifications in an adequate EIR. ( State CEQA Guidelines, § 15088.5(b).)

    As explained in the preceding Responses, the Lead Agencies are not aware of any facts that require revision or recirculation of the Draft EIR/EIS. Nor does the commentor suggest any additional feasible mitigation measures or alternatives considerably different from others previously analyzed that would require recirculation under Section 15088.5. Although some minor modifications and clarifications to clarify the Draft EIR/EIS are being made, these changes are not significant new information requiring recirculation. The County believes that the MSHCP is a feasible and cost efficient plan that fully complies with both state and federal laws. Moreover, the Draft EIR/EIS "adequately apprise[s] all interested parties of the true scope of the project for intelligent weighing of the environmental consequences of the project." (City of Santee v. County of San Diego (1989) 214 Cal.App.3d 1438, 1454-1455.)

    H2-353 This comment purports to summarize case law and no further response is required.

    H2-354 As addressed in the previous responses, the County believes the MSHCP is a feasible and cost efficient plan that fully complies with both state and federal laws. See Response H2-352.

    H2-355 This comment reiterates pervious comments that have been previously responded to.

    H2-356 See Responses N3-4 and N3-5. The Wildlife Agencies will make a decision on Permit issuance after the final documents have been prepared and submitted to them. The commentor's recommendations concerning future provisions and versions of the MSHCP will be submitted to the decision makers.

    H2-357 The comments in this attachment relate specifically to the County's proposed General Plan. As such, these comments would in no way alter and do not relate to the Draft MSHCP or the analysis in the Draft EIR/EIS. It should be noted that based upon comments received on the General Plan, staff has recommended changes to how the MSHCP is referenced in the General Plan which is the subject of this attachment. See Staff Reports submitted to the Board on staff recommendations on revisions to the General Plan.

    H2-358 The comments in this attachment relate specifically to the County's proposed General Plan. As such, these comments would in no way alter and do not relate to the Draft MSHCP or the analysis in the Draft EIR/EIS. It should be noted that based upon comments received on the General Plan, staff has recommended changes to how the MSHCP is referenced in the General Plan which is the subject of this attachment. See Staff Reports submitted to the Board on staff recommendations on revisions to the General Plan.

    H2-359 This attachment appears to be a vegetation map of the Alberhill Ranch properties. See Response H2-253.


    Comment Letter H3 - John M. DeBevoise, January 15, 2003

    H3-1 The vegetation map depicted in the Draft EIR/EIS and the Draft MSHCP represent "collapsed" or generalized Vegetation Communities. It is expected that vegetation coverage on the ground will vary from this generalized mapping. A more detailed breakdown of the vegetation map was used in the analysis performed for the MSHCP. The level of detail provided in the vegetation mapping represents the best scientific and commercially available data, and is considered appropriate for landscape-level conservation planning.

    H3-2 See Response H3-1.


    Comment Letter H4 - Riverside County Farm Bureau, March 6, 2003

    H4-1 The MSHCP is structured to allow the Local Permittees to select an implementation mechanism that is consistent with the FESA Section 10(a) and the NCCP Act issuance criteria. The MSHCP does not propose new Riverside County General Plan policies, ordinances or other new regulation. The County of Riverside has developed an implementation structure for the MSHCP that relies on acquisition of property from willing sellers.

    H4-2 As noted in Section 4.4.2 of the Draft MSHCP, the federal government and State of California have committed to acquire and contribute in the aggregate approximately 56,000 acres, with 6,000 of these acres being attributable to mitigation for State Permittee projects.

    Comment Letter I

    Comment Letter I - Sierra Club, January 14, 2003

    I-1 The September 5, 2002 letter refers to an administrative draft of the MSHCP dated March 7, 2002. The submitted comments were reviewed and considered by the Lead Agencies in the preparation of the public review documents released November 15, 2002.

    I-2 The proposed OHV Park referred to by the commentor is currently the subject of a feasibility study that is being conducted by the Riverside County Economic Development Agency. The purpose of this study is to determine if the location of an OHV Park at the site currently under consideration is even feasible. Without a defined site location, the Lead Agencies are unable to identify or assess the impacts of this project on wildlife corridors and animal and plant communities. If and when an OHV Park is proposed at this or any other site within Riverside County, the impacts of that project will be reviewed and considered through the preparation of appropriate environmental documentation at that time.

    I-3 It is unclear why the commentor believes all toxic substances should be analyzed at the Lockheed Potrero and Laborde Canyon properties in connection with the proposed MSHCP and corresponding EIR/EIS.

    I-4 Connectivity between Lake Perris and the San Jacinto Mountains is provided in a number of ways, as described in detail in the Draft MSHCP, particularly within the discussion of Cores and Linkages, Section 3.2.3. Lake Perris is included with Existing Core H. Proposed Core 3 is located to the northeast of Existing Core H and provides connection to the San Jacinto Mountains (Existing Core K) in a northeast/southwest direction. Proposed Linkage 11 supplements this connection at the southern end of Proposed Core 3. Further south is the San Jacinto River, which is identified as Existing Constrained Linkage C, providing a portion of the connection between the southern portion of Existing Core H to Existing Core K further south. Completion of this connection is provided by Proposed Core 5. Opportunities for wildlife movement are provided through the combination of these existing and proposed Cores and Linkages.

    I-5 The Draft EIR/EIS provides a map of existing and proposed Linkages within the MSHCP Plan Area (Figure 4.1.3), and further, Section 3.2.3 of the MSHCP provides a complete description of existing and proposed Linkages. The MSHCP is Volume I of the four volume set that also includes the Draft EIR/EIS (Volume IV).

    I-6 The Draft MSHCP acknowledges the documented presence and habitat potential for certain plant species that have specific hydrologic affinities that are located within the area referenced. Conservation proposed for this area through the Area Plan Criteria considers hydrology requirements for these species. In addition, Section 7 of the Draft MSHCP identifies a process for inclusion of a San Jacinto Flood Control Project as a Covered Activity. That process requires criteria that include provision of hydrology for the continued survival of Covered Species.

    I-7 The Lead Agencies disagree with the contention that the MSHCP cannot support its implementation and administration costs, including the costs associated with management. One of the objectives of the MSHCP is to coordinate and maximize the value of expenditures of limited public and private funds in a manner that assures assembly and maintenance of an MSHCP Conservation Area that conserves the Covered Species pursuant to state and federal law. (Draft EIR/EIS, § 1.2.2; See Responses H2-36, H2-50, H2-72, H2-140, H2-148, H2-305, H2-352, and Z3-17.) The MSHCP provides for adequate funding, and details the funding provisions in Section 8 of the MSHCP Public Review Draft. In order for the MSHCP to qualify as a habitat conservation plan, adequate funding must be demonstrated, as is required under U.S.C. section 1539(a)(2)(B)(iii), or a Take Permit will not be authorized. In addition, recent federal case law has placed substantial emphasis on ensuring that regional habitat conservation plans provide adequate mitigation to truly conserve species, and that adequate funding assurances be provided to ensure that conservation is actually accomplished. (See National Wildlife Federation v. Babbitt, 128 F.Supp.2d 1274 (E.D. Cal. 2000); see also Gerber v. Norton, 294 F.3d 173 (D.C. Cir. 2002).) Without such assurances, the Secretary may be precluded from even approving the plan. Thus, the MSHCP will have adequate funding if it is approved. This MSHCP is a separate document from the Long-Term Stephens' Kangaroo Rat Habitat Conservation Plan ("SKR HCP") and the commentor's perceived concerns about that Plan are not applicable here. Moreover, the MSHCP describes that the Plan will provide Take Authorization for SKR outside the boundaries of the SKR HCP, but within MSHCP boundaries. (Draft MSHCP, p. 9-96.)

    With respect to the SKR Recovery Plan, it should first be noted that the April 1997 Draft SKR Recovery Plan has apparently never been finalized. In any event, the MSHCP conforms to the provisions of the Draft SKR Recovery Plan. The Draft Recovery Plan provides that the minimum criteria for delisting the SKR are the establishment of five reserves in western Riverside County encompassing at least 16,500 acres of occupied habitat that is permanently protected, funded and managed, as well as establishment of two reserves in San Diego County. (Draft SKR Recovery Plan, p. iv.) Obviously, the Western Riverside County Final MSHCP requirements of establishing reserves in San Diego County is outside the scope of the MSHCP. However, the MSHCP contemplates conserving 18,000 acres of occupied SKR habitat, comprised of 15,000 acres in the existing SKR HCP area and 3,000 acres outside the existing SKR HCP area. (Draft MSHCP p. 9-96.) The MSHCP also provides funding for the management of the 18,000 acres. Thus, the MSHCP conforms with the Draft SKR Recovery Plan.

    As explained above in Response I-5, because the exact MSHCP Conservation Area has not been identified yet, the Linkages and corridors have not been identified. The Linkages and corridors will, however, be sufficiently designed to protect species.

    I-8 The Lead Agencies disagree with this comment. The analysis of the direct and indirect impacts of a future corridor linking Riverside and Orange County provided in Section 7 of the Draft MSHCP is considered to be adequate for the purposes of identifying an appropriate process for determining whether the ultimate facility qualifies as a Covered Activity. The analysis provided in the MSHCP relates to Conservation of Covered Species, and does not intend nor imply full environmental analysis for construction of the facility as required by CEQA and NEPA. It is acknowledged that additional environmental analysis and review will be required for construction of any proposed Corridor to Orange County.

    I-9 See Response I-1.


    Comment Letter I2 - Jackson, DeMarco & Peckenpaugh on behalf of Domenigoni-Barton Properties, January 14, 2003

    I2-1 Section 3.3.1, page 3-118 of the Draft MSHCP states that certain projects were specifically considered in the drafting of the Area Plan Criteria. It is important to note the specific language contained in that section.

    During the conservation planning process for the MSHCP, a number of projects have proceeded through the entitlement process and have sometimes been modified to be consistent with the draft MSHCP Core and Linkage guidelines, Area Plan Subunit Biological Issues and Considerations and Cell Criteria. Several of these projects have received local and/or state or federal approvals, but have not yet commenced construction. Future construction of these projects in accordance with the relevant approvals would be considered to be consistent with the MSHCP guidelines and Criteria. Projects known to fall within this category are listed below.

    SP 310 is specifically listed in the Draft MSHCP as one of the projects that are identified to fall within this category of project. Therefore, it is not clear how the commentor can claim that "the MSHCP fails to adequately acknowledge...Specific Plan 310", or that "the MSHCP imposes increased regulatory burden on...Specific Plan 310", when the project has been determined to be consistent with the MSHCP guidelines and Criteria.

    Specific Plan 310 is the result of an applicant-initiated, voluntary process to develop land, and as a result of this voluntary action, the County has reviewed the applicant's proposed project design and determined it to be consistent with the MSHCP guidelines and Criteria. If approved, the benefits that may accrue to the applicant as a result of the MSHCP would be Take Authorization for any of the Covered Species that may be found within the project boundaries, relieving the applicant of the requirement to pursue any necessary Take Authorization through a separate regulatory process, thereby providing an incentive for the applicant to participate in the MSHCP planning process. Therefore, the commentor's assertion that "the MSHCP lacks a voluntary, incentive-based program" is not well founded, particularly for the referenced project.

    It should be noted that the documents relied upon for SP310 are currently the subject of unresolved litigation.

    I2-2 This comment provides information regarding Specific Plan 310, and as no issues related to the Draft MSHCP, the Draft IA or the Draft EIR/EIS are raised, no additional response is required. It should be noted however, that the description of areas of open space "devoted to species and habitat conservation" totaling approximately 151 acres is misleading, as a large majority of these areas contain title restrictions that restrict development.

    I2-3 TheLeadAgencies have reviewed and considered all comments submittedin conjunction with the MSHCP, including those previously submitted by the commentor, and have made changes where appropriate. The MSHCP reflects extensive input from all stakeholders during the planning process, including private landowner input. The Lead Agencies have made every effort to produce a document that addresses the concerns of all of the stakeholders, as well as be legally sufficient and thus, allow permit issuance by the Wildlife Agencies. The MSHCP has not been "submitted" to the Wildlife Agencies for permit issuance, but has merely submitted the MSHCP application. Only the Section 10 (a) application has been submitted to the Service and the Draft MSHCP released for public review.

    I2-4 See Response I2-15.

    I2-5 See Responses I2-14 and I2-15.

    I2-6 See Responses I2-27 through I2-34.

    I2-7 See Responses I2-15, I2-25, I2-26, and I2-35 through I2-41.

    I2-8 See Responses I2-42 through I2-46.

    I2-9 See Responses I2-15 and I2-47 through I2-53.

    I2-10 The Draft MSHCP does not propose land use "buffers." The Urban/Wildland Interface Procedures and Guidelines are considerations that are intended to guide decisions regarding the selection of appropriate landscaping materials, fencing and other design considerations in appropriate circumstances where urban uses are proposed in proximity to lands that have been incorporated into the MSHCP Conservation Area, and are appropriately described as considerations that should be made as new Development is proposed near areas that are already acquired for Conservation. These guidelines are intended to promote planning and design that would compliment proximate conservation areas, keep impacts on properties that are developed, and would not impose regulatory burdens on new Development. Therefore, the suggested deletion of these guidelines is not proposed.

    The Draft MSHCP, Section 6.1.3, provides a complete discussion of the rationale for the need for the Narrow Endemic Plant Species Procedures and Guidelines to support coverage for those species. Based on the information available for these species, coverage for these species, as currently proposed in the Draft MSHCP, could not be demonstrated without the Narrow Endemic Plant Species Procedures and Guidelines. Therefore, the suggested deletion of these procedures and guidelines is not proposed.

    The Draft MSHCP, Section 6.1.2, discusses the process through which Conservation of Covered Species that rely on Riparian, Riverine and Vernal Pool habitat resources will be achieved. Coverage for species that rely on these resources that are protected through existing laws and policies assumes that the laws and policies will remain in place. Therefore, the suggested deletion of these guidelines is not proposed. See Responses I255 through I2-62.

    I2-11 See Responses I2-10 and I2-59. Many of the species that rely on the Narrow Endemic Plant Species Procedures and Guidelines for coverage are not currently listed as federal or state endangered or threatened. Therefore, the suggested revisions to these procedures and guidelines would not provide the necessary support for coverage of those non-listed Narrow Endemic Plant Species. As such, the suggested revisions are not proposed.

    I2-12 See Responses I2-10 and I2-60.

    I2-13 See Responses I2-63 and I2-66.

    I2-14 Section 3.3.1 of the Draft MSHCP identifies SP 310 as meeting MSHCP Criteria. The MSHCP cannot legally preempt other legal requirements such as consultation under FESA Section 7 or consistency findings under the Fish and Game Code. However, Section 14.9 of the IA sets forth the procedure for processing Section 7 consultations within the Plan Area. Development which is in compliance with the MSHCP Criteria and the terms and conditions of the MSHCP is a Covered Activity under the Plan. See Response I2-15.

    I2-15 The MSHCP specifically states that Specific Plan 310 as designed has been deemed to be "consistent with the Criteria" if built out as planned, and would be considered a "covered" activity according to specific provisions of the MSHCP. Pages 3-117,118 of the Draft MSHCP state:

    During the conservation planning process for the MSHCP, a number of projects have proceeded through the entitlement process and have sometimes been modified to be consistent with the draft MSHCP Core and Linkage guidelines, Area Plan Subunit Biological Issues and Considerations and Cell Criteria. Several of these projects have received local and/or state or federal approvals, but have not yet commenced construction. Future construction of these projects in accordance with relevant approvals would be considered to be consistent with the MSHCP guidelines and Criteria.

    Immediately below this paragraph, Specific Plan 310 is listed as such project. Further, page 7-12 of the Draft MSHCP states:

    "As discussed in Section 3.0 of this document, public and private Development within the Criteria Area that is determined to be consistent with the Criteria is considered a Covered Activity."

    Based upon these specific provisions, no further application of the Criteria will be imposed on Specific Plan 310. Also, there will be no further application of the Urban/Wildlife Interface Guidelines, the Conservation of Narrow Endemic Plant Species, Riparian/Riverine Areas and Vernal Pools. Finally, interimagriculturaluses and similar compatible uses are deemed consistent by the MSHCP as they are clearly called for by Specific Plan 310. It is clear from the MSHCP that Specific Plan 310 was developed and approved with the anticipated provisions of the MSHCP in mind. The only MSHCP-related requirement that will be imposed on SP 310 is the Local Development Mitigation Fee. Any future off-site related projects, mitigation or infrastructure will, however, be subject to the requirements of the MSHCP.

    Certain modifications depending on their impact may be subject to review under the MSHCP. It does not subject the remaining portions to such review. If there are no additional impacts to biological resources, no further review under the MSHCP would be required.

    I2-16 See Response I2-15.

    I2-17 See Response I2-15.

    I2-18 See Response I2-14.

    I2-19 See Response I2-14.

    I2-20 See Response I2-14.

    I2-21 See Responses I2-14 and I2-15.

    I2-22 See Responses I2-15 and H2-270.

    I2-23 See Response I2-15.

    I2-24 See Response I2-15. Based on Response I2-15, the Lead Agencies do not believe the additional language is necessary.

    I2-25 Certain modifications depending on their impact may be subject to review under the MSHCP. It does not subject the remaining portions to such review. If there are no additional impacts to biological resources, no further review under the MSHCP would be required.

    I2-26 See Response I2-25. FESA and the decisions in Babbitt v. Sweet Home Chapter of Community for a Greater Oregon, 515 U.S. 687 ("Sweet Home") and its progeny speak for themselves. To the extent further Plan review may be required due to material modifications to a previously approved project, the Plan is not onerous. The Plan simply complies with the requirements of FESA.
     

    I2-27 The MSHCP complies with all relevant legal time frames, including those specified in the Permit Streamlining Act, the Subdivision Map Act, and CEQA. See Responses H241, H2-53 and I2-15.

    I2-28 See Response I2-15.

    I2-29 The HANS Process does not restrict the processing or approval of a development application on any property not needed for Conservation. When a determination is made that a portion of a property is needed for Conservation, the first discussion will be what incentives might compensate the property owner for the setting aside the conservation lands. If all or a portion of the conservation lands will be subject to acquisition, a purchase agreement will be negotiated. A purchase agreement or agreement on a package of incentives that would result in the Conservation called for under the MSHCP will be negotiated. During this process, the development application on the remaining development portion of the project would continue. Since the incentives would directly impact the design of a project, it is important that the final package of incentive and acquisition be completed before final project design is completed. Once this package is agreed to, the development application would be processed and a decision by the local jurisdiction on the project. No condition for completion of the acquisition would be placed on the Development.

    I2-30 See Responses H2-153, H2-157, H2-160, H2-162, H2-163, H2-181 and H2-182.

    I2-31 See Responses H2-41, H2-181 and H2-182.

    I2-32 As addressed in Responses H2-41 and H2-53, a project application will not be deemed complete until the requirements under the MSHCP, including the HANS Process, are complete. Because the time limits under CEQA do not begin to run until a project application has been accepted as complete, the time limits under CEQA are not applicable. Likewise, submission of a project application is the first step in the streamlined permitting process under the Permit Streamlining Act ("PSA"). (Cal.Gov.Code, §65943.) The PSA does not apply to negotiations that occur between the local public agency and the project developer prior to the acceptance of an application as complete. Similarly, the relevant time deadlines under the Subdivision Map Act commence once the application for development has been deemed complete, and after certification of the EIR, adoption of a negative declaration, or an exemption determination pursuant to CEQA. (Cal.Gov.Code, §§ 66452.1(c), 66452.2(c).) See Response H2-270.

    I2-33 While Specific Plan 310 has no legally "vested" rights, it was approved by the County Board of Supervisors, and it is assumed that this comment is addressed to projects similarly situated to Specific Plan 310 by its reference to an "already approved project." As discussed in Response I2-15, Specific Plan 310 has already been determined to be consistent with the MSHCP.

    I2-34 The Lead Agencies disagree that the alternatives analyzed in the Draft EIR/EIS are "flawed" and the permitting review time frame is "excessive." The MSHCP meets project goals and objectives by creating a streamlined and cost effective approach to Development by consolidating state and federal laws in a single application. In contrast, Development on a parcel by parcel basis, without the benefit of the MSHCP would be more costly and less efficient than the streamlined approach under the MSHCP because developers would need to separately comply with state and federal procedures in a manner that would be duplicative and expensive. See Responses H2-120 and H2-132.

    The MSHCP does not violate any legal time lines. As explained in Responses H2-41, H253, and I2-30 through I2-32 because a project application will not be deemed complete until the HANS Process is complete, the time limits established under CEQA and the Permit Streamlining Act for processing project applications are not applicable until after the HANS Process is finished and the application is deemed complete; thus the MSHCP does not violate any applicable laws specifying permit time-frames.

    See Responses I2-14 and I2-15.

    I2-35 See Responses I2-15, I2-25 and I2-26. Certain City ministerial approvals will be subject to the MSHCP. However, such requirements do not impact SP 310 which is within the unincorporated area. With regard to footnote 5, Best Management Practices will not be applied to SP 310. Additionally, BMPs, which will be applied as appropriate, will not result in environmental impacts, as they are intended to avoid or minimize environmental impacts and are routinely applied to many projects through existing regulatory processes.

    I2-36 See Responses I2-9, I2-15, I2-25 and I2-26. HANS is not applicable to SP 310 and other projects that have been deemed consistent with the MSHCP (See Section 3.3.1 of the Draft MSHCP).

    I2-37 See Responses I2-15 and I2-36. The case law on "exactions" in regard to the U.S. and California constitutional provisions is limited to a very narrow set of circumstances, and not to the MSHCP, which is a vehicle of compliance with the mandates of the FESA and the NCCP Act of 2001. See Responses H2-242 and H2-243.

    I2-38 This comment's broad invocation of the "rough proportionality" constitutional standard in exactions is mistaken. See Responses H2-242 and H2-243. A nexus study is currently being prepared for the Local Development Mitigation Fee as called for under the provisions of the MSHCP. See Response I2-37.

    The case of Ehrlich v. City of Culver City (1996) 12 Cal.4th 854 is wholly inapplicable to the MSHCP. The court therein specifically limited its ruling to a "relatively narrow class of land use cases" (Id. p. 868), and excluded the common situation where exactions are imposed pursuant to a general legislative act such as the MSHCP. (Id. p. 876.) The HANS Process is not the sort of "ad hoc" process with which Ehrlich was concerned. Ehrlich involved only a single piece of property, whereas, the MSHCP is broad-based throughout western Riverside County, and will be applied pursuant to Criteria throughout the Plan Area. (MSHCP, § 6.1.1.)

    I2-39 This comment misstates the MSHCP consistency-findings for Specific Plan 310 with what is necessary to fully comply with the requirements of the MSHCP. A Local Development Mitigation Fee will still be required because the cumulative impact on the environment of the massive development project underlying Specific Plan 310 is not mitigated by designing the project to be consistent with the Criteria Areas of the MSHCP. At no point has the County agreed to waive the Local Development Mitigation Fee for Specific Plan 310.

    As noted in Response H2-27, no matter where new Development occurs in western Riverside County, it produces direct, indirect and cumulative impacts to species and habitat for which mitigation must be provided by way of the measures such as Local Development Mitigation Fees. The Plan covers 146 species that inhabit various types of habitat throughout western Riverside County. As exhaustively detailed in the species accounts provisions of the MSHCP, habitat for these Covered Species exists in the evaluated areas. Even lands that a particular developer might consider to be unoccupied still can have dramatic effects on Covered Species in terms of edge and other harmful effects. Perhaps even more importantly, the MSHCP is intended to address the impacts to species and their habitats of the construction, maintenance and operation of roadways and other public improvements in western Riverside County that Specific Plan 310 needs and will benefit by. To offset the impacts associated with such regional infrastructure, the acquisition and permanent management of blocks of habitat and linkages is required by the FESA, CESA and other applicable laws.

    A nexus study is currently being prepared for the Local Development Mitigation Fee as called for under the provisions of the MSHCP. See Response I2-37.

    I2-40 As the comment implicates, Specific Plan 310 and similarly situated development projects, have already been specifically accommodated in the provisions of the MSHCP. See Response I2-15. No further application of the Criteria, or the Urban/Wildlands Interface Guidelines, the Conservation of Narrow Endemic Plant Species, Riparian/ Riverine Areas/Vernal Pools will be required if Specific Plan 310 and other similarly situated development projects are built out as approved.

    To the extent that the MSHCP requires additional application of the provisions of the MSHCP, see Responses I2-25 and I2-26. See also Response I2-39 regarding the applicability of fees to projects such as that underlying Specific Plan 310.

    I2-41 A nexus study is currently being prepared for the Local Development Mitigation Fee and will be released for public review prior to Board adoption of the MSHCP.

    I2-42 The commentor's introductory remarks summarize Comments I2-43 through I2-46, for which responses are provided below.

    I2-43 The MSHCP does not constitute a development moratorium. See Response H2-41. Further, the procedures established under the MSHCP are not a constitutional "taking". The United States Supreme Court held in the recent case of Tahoe-Sierra Preservation Council, Inc. v. Tahoe Reg'l Planning Agency, (2002) 535 U.S. 302, that even a complete temporary building moratoria is not a per se takings. California courts have long held that planning functions are within a local agency's police powers, and are not takings. See also Response H2-41. The comment's reference to First English Evangelical Lutheran Church v. County of Los Angeles, (1987) 482 U.S. 304 is mistaken. See Response H2-168. The HANS Process does not deprive landowners of all economic value of their property. Instead, the HANS Process is designed to only acquire property from willing sellers at fair market value.

    I2-44 The obligation to acquire lands for the MSHCP is a responsibility of the RCA. The commentor's statement that this burden is transferred to the land owner is not clear. The property owner can proceed with the processing of a development application on their lands if the acquisition is not completed pursuant to the terms of the purchase agreement and/or amendment to remove the property from the Criteria Area is not approved. The MSHCP would provide coverage for this project. The risk is that the State and/or Federal Agencies could rescind their permits. At that point, the Plan is no longer in effect and impacts to Covered Species could not occur without further mitigation. Take Authorization can only be provided through the MSHCP so long as the Permits are in place.

    I2-45 The commentor misstates the MSHCP. The obligation will be to demonstrate that the proposed criteria refinement or Plan Amendment is equivalent to the Conservation called for in the MSHCP. The equivalency does not relate to the whether the RCA purchased the property or not. The question is will the amendment or refinement provide comparable Conservation to what was proposed for Conservation under the MSHCP. If the provisions calling for initiation of a Section 7 consultation are implemented, the consultation would be conducted under federal law to provide the property owner coverage should the MSHCP Permits be revoked. The commentor presumes the outcome of the consultation which is speculative. Any response would be equally speculative.

    I2-46 See Responses H2-165 and I2-47. The HANS Process does not create a series of "rolling moratoria" on Development within the Criteria Area. Project applicants will either be allowed to proceed with development as indicated on page 6-5 of the Draft MSHCP, incentives will be negotiated with the applicant to voluntarily set aside property needed for inclusion within the MSHCP Conservation Area, or the property needed for inclusion within the MSHCP Conservation Area will be subject to purchase pursuant to the terms of a purchase agreement. Ultimately, if any agreed to purchase of the property is not consummated within the time frames set forth in Section 6.1 of the MSHCP, the development of the property would no longer be subject to the MSHCP Conservation Criteria. Additionally, once a proposed development project completes the HANS Process and receives approval by the County or City any subsequent discretionary permit/approval and in certain instances any City ministerial permit/approval would not be subject to further review under the HANS Process. Compliance with HANS and the MSHCP Conservation Criteria would be achieved at the time the project receives its original approval. The Lead Agencies strongly disagree that any "unconstitutional taking" would occur. Please see Landgate v. California Coastal Commission, 17 Cal. 4th 1006 (1998) wherein the California Supreme Court indicated that land use regulations that are part of a reasonable regulatory process designed to advance legitimate government interests are not takings.

    I2-47 The MSHCP will be imposed on discretionary approvals and certain City ministerial approvals that could have impacts to Covered Species. Where no previous project review considered MSHCP consistency, the MSHCP's provisions will be applied to certain City ministerial approvals as appropriate.

    I2-48 The Lead Agencies disagree with the comment's conclusion. As explained above in Responses I2-30 through I2-32, H2-41 and H2-53, because a project application will not be deemed complete until the HANS Process is complete, the time limits established under CEQA and the Permit Streamlining Act for processing project applications are not applicable until after the HANS Process is finished and the application is deemed complete; thus the MSHCP does not violate any applicable laws specifying permit timeframes.

    I2-49 The Lead Agencies disagree with the comment's conclusion. See Response I2-47. Additionally, the staffing needs for the RCA identified in the Draft MSHCP anticipated that certain City ministerial actions would be reviewed for MSHCP consistency; therefore no cost increase is anticipated. Moreover, development on a parcel by parcel basis, without the benefit of the MSHCP would be more costly and less efficient than the streamlined approach analyzed in the proposed MSHCP.

    I2-50 The Lead Agencies disagree with the comment's conclusions. The project description in the Draft MSHCP describes Reserve Assembly and management of the MSHCP Conservation Area. Therefore the Draft EIR/EIS includes a comprehensive discussion of the precise location and boundaries of the project and the area that will either directly or indirectly be affected by the proposed MSHCP. A discussion of the types of permits subject to the MSHCP is not required in the project description because processing these permits will not have environmental impacts. See Response H2-11.

    I2-51 See Response I2-50.

    I2-52 This comment purports to summarize state, federal and case law and no further response is required.

    I2-53 There will not be environmental impacts resulting from the MSHCP consistency review of certain City ministerial permits. Permit processing is a fee supported activity for most jurisdictions and therefore would not impact the availability of General Funds for other local services. The MSHCP does not make any land use decisions including within the context of the statute cited. It is not a land use document. Further, Section 65030.2 is a declaration of state policy and legislative intent in establishing the Office of Planning and Research. No cause of action arises under it. For example, at least one court has held that in rezoning property from agricultural to campus/industrial, a city council did not violate Gov. Code, §§ 65030.2 by failing to prepare and consider a financing plan for a new sewage treatment plant prior to approving the zoning. Further, the city was not required to produce substantial evidence demonstrating compliance with §§ 65030.2. Also, the record showed that the city did not fail to consider the fiscal implications of expanding the existing sewage treatment plant. (Towards Responsibility in Planning v City Council (1988, 6th Dist) 200 Cal App 3d 671.) See Response M-3 regarding CEQA analysis of economic effects. For similar reasons, the NEPA citation is also inapplicable.

    I2-54 The Lead Agencies do not foresee the possibility of expanding the MSHCP Conservation Area beyond the stated objective of 153,000 acres through the application of the MSHCP policies. Furthermore, it is premature to speculate on the eventual configuration of the MSHCP Conservation Area and the Cores and Linkages, because at this time no determinations have been made in regard to the eventual configuration of either.

    As the MSHCP states, existing local regulations are generally in place that are similar to the MSHCP policies. (See Draft MSHCP p.6-41.) Furthermore, the MSHCP does not act to preempt local land use authority. (See Response M-28.)

    I2-55 The MSHCP specifically states that Specific Plan 310, as currently designed, has been deemed to be "consistent with the Criteria", and would be considered a "covered" activity. If the project is built as designed, there will be no further application of the Urban/Wildlands Interface Guidelines, or the Conservation of Narrow Endemic Plant Species, Riparian/Riverine Areas/Vernal Pools guidelines. Any future off-site related projects, mitigation or infrastructure will, however, be subject to the requirements of the MSHCP. See also Response I2-15.

    I2-56 See Responses I2-15 and I2-55 for a discussion of how the Urban/Wildlands Interface Guidelines, Conservation of Narrow Endemic Plant Species Guidelines and Riparian/Riverine/Vernal Pools Guidelines interact with projects, like Specific Plan 310, that have already been deemed to be consistent with the MSHCP.

    I2-57 See Response I2-54.

    I2-58 The Lead Agencies believe that the MSHCP adequately complies with the FESA, the NCCP Act, CEQA, NEPA and all other state and federal laws and as such does not expand environmental laws throughout the County. The MSHCP does not create new law; it merely allows property owners and project applicants to develop their property through a streamlined approach rather than on a parcel by parcel basis. The Urban/Wildlands Interface Guidelines do not require additional Conservation of land beyond that provided in Additional Reserve Lands.

    I2-59 The MSHCP Covered Species List includes both listed and unlisted species. The reasons for including such a broad range of species, which is encouraged by FESA, are explained in Response H2-27. The comment correctly notes that take of federally-listed plants is only prohibited on federal lands. However, the comment ignores that the issuance criteria for HCPs require that the Service make a finding that the Plan not threaten the continued existence of a wildlife or plant population. (See Section 10 Handbook, p. 7-1.) The comment further ignores that, in considering an HCP, the Service must engage in an "internal Section 7 consultation" to ensure that the action it is taking (namely, issuing a take permit) does not jeopardize the continued existence of any listed federal species. Thus, rather than ignore the potential effects of listed federal plant species, the MSHCP provides Take Authorization for such species. In addition, should a project applicant be developing a project on federal land, Take Authorization for the covered plant species will be available. Moreover, consideration of impacts on federally-listed species is also required under CEQA and NEPA in the Joint EIR/EIS accompanying the MSHCP. Also, to the extent plant species are listed under both CESA and FESA, state law prohibits the Taking of such listed plant species. Finally, listed federal plant species remain eligible to be listed under state law. Inclusion of such plant species ensures that the MSHCP provides coverage for Take when and if the plants are listed under CESA.

    I2-60 The United States Supreme Court decision in SWANCC affects the jurisdiction of the

    U.S. Army Corps of Engineers and the U.S. Environmental Protection Agency under the Clean Water Act. The case does not affect the jurisdiction of the State of California, which continues to regulate waters of the State, nor local governments. For example, among other regulatory bodies, the Regional Water Quality Control Board has the authority to regulate discharges to "waters of the State," including wetlands. (See Cal. Water Code, §§ 13050(e), 13269.) In addition, these waters are also subject to evaluation and protection under CEQA. Further, EPA and the Corps have recently issued an "Advanced Notice of Proposed Rulemaking" (68 Fed. Reg. 1991 (Jan. 15, 2003)) which makes clear that the actual extent of those agencies' jurisdiction over waters of the United States is still under review. The blanket statement that isolated streams and wetlands of the County are no longer subject to Corps' jurisdiction is thus still subject to considerable dispute.

    I2-61 The provisions of the MSHCP that are purportedly summarized in this comment do not create de facto study areas or development moratoria because, as noted in the comment, development applications will continue to be processed. In contrast, the MSHCP provisions cited in the comment allow projects to be processed in compliance with the MSHCP and therefore receive Take Authorization. It is inappropriate to expect to receive Take Authorization for 1.26 million acres without conservation requirements.

    I2-62 See Responses I2-58 through I2-61.

    I2-63 The County believes that the incentive program is effective and sufficient. The incentive program is voluntary and if a property owner determines that incentives do not provide adequate compensation, then they may choose to not avail themselves of the incentives. The MSHCP proposes incentives that can be implemented by the Cities and County today. The tax incentives/credits that are suggested by the commentor would require new legislation and are not within the scope of the MSHCP. The MSHCP envisions the potential of such incentives but cannot offer them today above what exists in law today.

    I2-64 The use of "partially compensate" refers to situations when a combination of incentives and acquisitions would be utilized to fully compensate a property owner for the compensation of their lands. The MSHCP recognizes the need to provide "just compensation". It is the MSHCP's stated policy to fully compensate landowners for property acquired for the Additional Reserve Lands. As such, there will be no taking of property without just compensation pursuant to the U.S. Constitution and the California Constitution. See Response H2-41.

    I2-65 See Response H2-189. The incentives in the MSHCP will lead to Conservation of a percentage of Additional Reserve Lands. However, they are incentives, not mandatory. As set forth in the MSHCP, the per unit amount of the fee utilized for the funding section is approximately $1,500 per residential acre and $4,800 per acre of commercial or industrial development. (Draft MSHCP, p. 8-15.) The Density Bonus Fee, anticipated to be between $3,000 and $5,000 per additional unit, offers a significant incentive to developers because it allows developers to build more units per acre at a substantial savings compared to the cost of creating a new buildable lot. (Draft MSHCP, p. 8-15.) The value of an additional lot greatly exceeds the sum of the density bonus fee and the Local Development Mitigation Fee. The incentives would not result in a net increase in the total number of units in the region. For the same total number of units, more dense development requires less transportation infrastructure (not more) and can be better served by transit.

    I2-66 See Responses I2-63 through I2-65. The MSHCP does make a major commitment to the use of incentives. The goal of the Plan is to conserve approximately 41,000 acres using incentives. The Permittees are, therefore, highly motivated to make an incentives program work. The incentives as they are identified are in everyone's interest. The County intends to continue to seek new incentive programs that would help implement the MSHCP and encourages the commentor to submit additional incentives that would help achieve conservation goals and encourage property owner participation.

    I2-67 The Lead Agencies disagree with the commentor's conclusions that the Draft EIR/EIS does not fully discuss all potentially significant impacts. See Responses I2-68 through I273 and H2-301.

    I2-68 It is not necessary to analyze the fees associated with the RCIP process within the MSHCP environmental review process for the reasons explained in Response H2-340. There is no evidence presented that imposition of the Local Development Mitigation Fee will have any environmental impacts and such allegation is entirely speculative. See Response I2-53.

    I2-69 A nexus study is currently being prepared for the Local Development Mitigation Fee which will be released for public review prior to the Board of Supervisor's consideration of MSHCP approval. Additionally, prior to MSHCP approval, the County and Cities must make the findings required by California Government Code §§ 66000 et seq., namely that there is a "reasonable relationship" between the "fees" that will be imposed and the estimated cost of land acquisition under the MSHCP. (Draft MSHCP, p. 6-1)

    I2-70 See Response I2-69.

    I2-71 See Response I2-69. The Wildlife Agencies must make a finding that the MSHCP is adequately funded prior to Permit issuance. The County believes that the additional

    funding sources, in conjunction with the Local Development Mitigation Fee, do provide adequate funding for the MSHCP.

    I2-72 See Responses I2-69 and H2-20. Prior to approval of the MSHCP, the County and Cities will make the findings required by California Government Code Sections 66000 et.seq., namely that there is a "reasonable relationship" between the "fees" that will be imposed and the impacts related to land development. Further, findings will be made that there is a "reasonable relationship" between the fees and the cost of land acquisition. At that time, the Local Permittees will determine the appropriate amount of the mitigation fees. There is no evidence that the estimated fee will not comply with nexus or funding requirements.

    I2-73 See Response I2-72.

    I2-74 The Lead Agencies do not believe that recirculation is legally necessary. Draft written responses will be made available prior to the Board's public hearings. Final responses will be made available pursuant to the requirements of CEQA.

    I2-75 The Lead Agencies have reviewed and considered all comments submitted in conjunction with the MSHCP, including those previously submitted by the commentor, and have made changes where appropriate. The MSHCP reflects extensive input from all stakeholders during the planning process, including private landowner input. The Lead Agencies have made every effort to produce a document that addresses the concerns of all of the stakeholders, as well as be legally sufficient and thus, allow permit issuance by the Wildlife Agencies. See Response I2-2.

    I2-76 See Response I2-75.

    I2-77 Receipt of the commentor's letter concerning the Notice of Preparation to prepare the EIR/EIS for the MSHCP is acknowledged and all comments therein were considered when the EIR/EIS was prepared. See also Response I2-75.

    I2-78 See Response I2-75.

    I2-79 See Response I2-75. It should be noted that these comments refer to previous administrative drafts of the MSHCP which were identified as being subject to change and

    substantial revisions have been made to the public review draft released on November 15, 2002.

    I2-80 See Response I2-79.

    I2-81 See Response I2-79.

    I2-82 This comment consists of a Planning Agreement for the MSHCP. This comment does not provide any additional information or commentary regarding the Agreement, nor does it raise any issues related to the Draft MSHCP, the Draft IA or the Draft EIR/EIS. Therefore, no additional response is provided.

    I2-83 This comment consists of comments submitted on the Draft EIR prepared for the County's General Plan, have been responded to in that Final EIR and are not specifically related to the MSHCP.

    I2-84 This comment consists of comments submitted on the Draft EIR/EIS prepared for a CETAP corridor by RCTC and will be responded to in that Final EIR/EIS by that lead agency.

    I2-85 See Response I2-79.

    I2-86 See Response I2-79.

    I2-87 See Response I2-79.

    I2-88 See Response I2-79.


    Comment Letter I3 - Robert H. Vogel, Received January 15, 2003

    I3-1 The MSHCP offers greater certainty and local control than exists under existing state and federal enforcement of the Endangered Species Acts. The Plan supports the development of public infrastructure projects that are critical to the future economic health of the County and the Southern California Region. The funding plan identifies funding sources and a process for reviewing and updating the funding plan based on actual experience (see Section 8.0 of the Draft MSHCP).

    The commentor's recommendation will be forwarded to the Board of Supervisors.


    Comment Letter I4 - U.S. Environmental Protection Agency, March 13, 2003

    I4-1 The Lead Agencies appreciate the positive comments offered regarding Reserve Assembly, the Adaptive Management and Monitoring Programs, reserve design, policies, and species analyses.

    I4-2 The Lead Agencies appreciate EPA's strong support of the RCIP process. The RCIP is considered at Section 1.2.2 of the Draft MSHCP. RCIP consists of three integrated but distinct planning efforts: (1) update the County's General Plan to anticipate future growth over the long term; (2) create an MSHCP for the western portion of the County; and (3) identify transportation corridors to meet the County's future transportation needs ("CETAP"). As noted in the Draft EIR/EIS, adoption of the General Plan is the sole responsibility of the County of Riverside, while adoption of the MSHCP also requires approval of 14 Cities within the western portion of Riverside County, Caltrans, State Parks, RCTC, CDFG, and USFWS. Adoption of CETAP is the responsibility of the RCTC and the Federal Highway Administration. The Draft EIR/EIS specifically refers to the environmental documentation for both the Draft General Plan and CETAP. (Draft EIR/EIS at § 1.1.5) However, while they are coordinated, the update of the County's General Plan, the MSHCP, and CETAP have independent utility, and could be adopted regardless of actions taken in relation to the other projects. The MSHCP, CETAP and the Draft General Plan do not trigger one another, can and will proceed independently and do not depend on each other for their justification. The drafters of the three documents have attempted to make them consistent. Therefore, while the RCIP documents are discussed in the Draft EIR/EIS and the MSHCP, the analysis of impacts in the Draft EIR/EIS cannot fully integrate or rely on these documents because they have not been approved and in fact, may not be approved. See Responses H2-19, H2-213, H2310, H2-340, M-109 and Z-1.

    I4-3 The MSHCP does not rely on, but integrates PQP Lands with the MSHCP Conservation Area. Mitigation for future Development is provided through the Mitigation Lands. As set forth in Section 4.2.2 of the Draft MSHCP and Section 2.0 of the Draft EIR/EIS, local government managed conservation areas, PQP Lands, will significantly contribute to the Conservation of Covered Species through species and habitat management. The Lead Agencies intend to enter into a Memorandum of Understanding ("MOU") with all of the non-Permittees who own PQP property to ensureconsistent management and monitoring.

    Moreover, those lands will continue to be managed by the owners of those lands. (See Draft MSHCP, p. 4-13.) The mechanisms for coordination between the Lead Agencies, Permittees and existing reserves are explained in the discussion of the RMOC. (See Draft EIR/EIS, p. 2.10-3.) Specifically, the Draft EIR/EIS states that the RMOC will act as the intermediary between Reserve Managers and those who hold an equivalent position for existing reserves in order to ensure that wildlife management is coordinated in a comprehensive and organized manner. (Ibid.) Non-Permittees that own and/or manage property will be asked to sign an MOU to ensure that management of PQP Lands is consistent with the MSHCP. The actual details of the annual work plans will be developed after Permit issuance, with oversight and consistency provided by the RCA. Accordingly, the Lead Agencies believe that the issues relating to the management of PQP Lands is adequately addressed in the Draft EIR/EIS and in the MSHCP. See Responses N-5, N-9 and N-23.

    I4-4 Assurances that the conservation goals of the Plan are met is accomplished by a variety of means, including but not limited to oversight of MSHCP implementation by the RCA, quarterly meetings between the Wildlife Agencies and the RCA, Joint Project/Acquisition Review Process, annual reporting requirements, Wildlife Agency participation in the RMOC and the Funding Acquisition Committee, Adaptive Management, and cooperation among federal, state and local agencies, and landowners (Draft MSHCP, Section 6.6). In addition, public and agency input will be permitted and encouraged during the MSHCP implementation process. See Responses C-9 and F-75. As with any permit, revocation or suspension of the Permit would be the enforcement mechanism of last resort.

    I4-5 The SRP has been an important part of the MSHCP development and their input has been incorporated into the Plan. In addition, the SRP has reviewed the Draft MSHCP and provided comments (See Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of: Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003). The Draft EIR/EIS is Volume IV of a four volume set that comprises the MSHCP. Therefore, the scientific data used in the MSHCP is included in the Draft EIR/EIS.

    I4-6 The Indian Tribes were notified during the Notice of Preparation and Notice of Intent process and copies of the Draft MSHCP and MSHCP Draft EIR/EIS were made available to the Tribes and Bureau for Indian Affairs. Copies of the MSHCP and Draft EIR/EIS were sent to the following Tribes and Native America organizations; Morongo, Soboba, Cahuilla, Pechanga, Cabazon Band of Mission Indians, Agua Caliente, Pala, Torres-Martinez, twenty-nine Palms Band of Mission Indians, Native American Heritage Commission, Bureau of Indian Affairs and California Indian Legal Services.

    The MSHCP does not result in development or otherwise regulate land use patterns. The MSHCP is intended to acquire and conserve habitat and manage conserved lands. While certain development activities are "covered" (that is, given Take Authorization) under the MSHCP, these activities are not a part of the MSHCP itself, and are subject to additional environmental review. Thus, Development is not a necessary consequence of the Plan. Impacts resulting from the MSHCP would result primarily from the issuance of "take authorization" (which could adversely affect biological resources by permitting Development) or from the indirect growth-inducing impact which could result from removing an impediment to growth (which is discussed under Section 4.3 of the Draft EIR/EIS). The Draft EIR/EIS for the MSHCP included an analysis of indirect effects alongside the discussion of direct effects in Section 4.0 of the Draft EIR/EIS. Cumulative effects were analyzed in Section 5.0, and were based on SCAG growth projections and various City general plans.

    See Response K-107.

    I4-7 EPA will be notified per this request.

    I4-8 This comment provides a summary description of the proposed project and no further response is therefore necessary.

    I4-9 While the MSHCP is a component of the Riverside County Integrated Project work effort, it must also be a stand-alone document. The MSHCP has "independent utility," meaning that the adoption of any one component of the RCIP effort does not depend on the adoption of the others. This allows, that in the event either the CETAP or General Plan documents are not approved, the County would still possess an up-to-date legally adequate MSHCP. As required by State law, Government Code 65300, " .. the general plan and elements and parts thereof comprise an integrated, internally consistent, and compatible statement of policies for the adopting agency." The various elements presented in the General Plan meet this requirement. In addition, the MSHCP covers not only unincorporated western Riverside County but also 14 incorporated cities within western Riverside County.

    While the objective of the RCIP effort is to fully integrate the component plans, it does not necessarily follow that the various documents will be prepared, reviewed, or approved simultaneously. The General Plan requires adoption by the County of Riverside and has no federal approvals and is subject to CEQA only. The MSHCP and CETAP require both County and federal approvals and are subject to both NEPA and CEQA.

    Section 1.1.5 on page 1.1-16 of the Draft EIR states, "...While each element of RCIP would be subject to its own environmental document(s), the proposed MSHCP would benefit from programs implemented under the General Plan and analyzed in the General Plan EIR. Although the other components of RCIP are related through integration of the overall RCIP, the project description for the proposed MSHCP EIR/EIS is independent of the other two environmental documentation efforts."

    The commentor suggests that the FEIS should address whether the MSHCP provides mitigation for the potential impacts from the CETAP corridors. As stated on page 4.5.3 of the Draft EIR/EIS, "Approximately 5,840 acres of roads will be improved/constructed within the Criteria Area. The improvement/construction as well as the operation and maintenance of circulation element roadways are covered activities within the Criteria Area, subject to guidelines described in the MSHCP." Also stated on page 4.5-3 of the Draft EIR/EIS is the following, "Planned roadways are proposed within the County and cities to facilitate planned growth. Planned roadways identified in Section 7.3.5 of the MSHCP are covered activities within the Criteria Area. Roadways other than those identified in Section 7.3.5 of the MSHCP are not covered without an amendment of the MSHCP. The MSHCP includes design and siting guidelines for planned roadways. The implementation of these guidelines will ensure that planned roadways are designed and constructed in a manner consistent with the objectives of the MSHCP, while providing for the efficient passage of persons and goods through western Riverside County, the alleviation of traffic congestion, the maintenance of level of service standards, and continuation of adequate emergency access/evacuation routes. Therefore, the proposed MSHCP would not have significant impacts on planned roadways."

    As stated above, the MSHCP is intended to acquire and conserve habitats and manage conserved lands. While certain development activities are "covered" (that is, given Take Authorization) under the MSHCP, these activities are not a part of the MSHCP itself, and are subject to additional environmental review. The Draft EIR/EIS for the MSHCP does not analyze Development, because the MSHCP could be implemented in the absence of further development activities including CETAP. Therefore, Development is not necessarily a consequence of the Plan. Impacts resulting from the MSHCP would result primarily from the issuance of "take authorization" (which could adversely affect biological resources by permitting development) or from the indirect growth-inducing impact which could result from removing an impediment to growth (which is discussed under Section 4.3 of the Draft EIR/EIS). The EIR/EIS prepared for CETAP analyze all potential impacts, including impacts to biological resources. In contrast, the MSHCP EIR/EIS properly analyzes the impacts of Covered Activities on Covered Species. The Covered Activities include CETAP corridors that are appropriately analyzed in the MSHCP. As a Covered Activity in the MSHCP, the impacts from the CETAP corridors on Covered Species are mitigated through the implementation of the MSHCP.

    I4-10 The MSHCP does not propose to mitigate the impacts of Take on private land through Conservation on existing public lands. Through the implementation of the MSHCP including Reserve Assembly, private projects will mitigate their impacts. P.P. Lands are included in the MSHCP Conservation Area as a means to ensure that the Additional Reserve Lands and existing public lands function together to provide the most benefit to species and habitat. See also Responses N-5 and N-17. Numerous provisions have been included in the MSHCP to ensure that the Permittees and Third Parties Granted Take Authorization avoid, minimize and mitigate adverse impacts associated with their activities. (See Draft MSHCP, Section 6.0 et seq.) Indeed, in order to issue Take Authorization under the Plan, USFWS must find that the Permittees will, to the maximum extent practicable, minimize and mitigate the impacts of any Take (See 16 U.S.C. § 1539(a)(2)(B)(ii)). Section 9.3 of the Plan summarizes minimization and mitigation measures incorporated in the Plan.

    See Responses D-8, D-54, N-9 and N-17.

    Description of existing management activities on PQP Lands in Section 5.2.2 of the Draft MSHCP, which is Volume 1 of a four volume set, which includes the EIR/EIS. A process for ensuring such cooperation among Reserve Managers is provided for in the Plan, including participation by the Wildlife Agencies. Therefore, additional language in the Final EIR/EIS is not necessary. The Management and Monitoring Plan detailed in the MSHCP provides for monitoring and Adaptive Management that will respond to changing conditions in the field. Adjustments will be made to management strategies to ensure that Covered Species will be managed in accordance with the MSHCP.

    I4-11 Section 5.3 of the Plan provides a description of PQP Lands including existing ownership and management characteristics. In addition, the Existing Reserves Document (DUDEK, April 2000) prepared as part of the MSHCP planning process and referenced in the Plan provides a detailed description of all PQP Lands.

    PQP Lands are not counted as mitigation for new Development. As noted in Section 9.3 of the Draft MSHCP, components are incorporated into the Plan to mitigate for Take of Covered Species that cannot be avoided or minimized, and that will be undertaken by the Permittees include contribution of 103,000 acres (a portion of the Additional Reserve Lands that includes 97,000 acres for Local Permittees and 6,000 acres for State Permittees) to the MSHCP Conservation Area and adherence to the requirements of the MSHCP.

    I4-12 Future federal actions are subject to FESA Section 7. Section 14.9 of the IA outlines the process for consideration of Conservation provided in the MSHCP in future FESA Section 7 actions within the Plan Area, and for providing consistency with the MSHCP.

    I4-13 See Response I4-4. The grounds and circumstances potentially leading to revocation/ suspension of the Permits and the effects of revocation and suspension are set forth in detail in the MSHCP and the IA. (Draft MSHCP, Section 6.8; Draft IA, Sections 17.4,

    17.5 and 23.5.) The Local Permittees have the ability to impose building moratoriums if those moratoriums are in compliance with appropriate legal requirements. (See Cal. Gov. Code § 65858.).

    The RCA is charged with overseeing implementation of the MSHCP. RCA meetings will be open to the public and thus public and agency input will be permitted and encouraged. See also Responses C-9 and F-75.

    I4-14 See Response Z3-17. The MSHCP utilizes a variety of implementation tools. However, a fundamental basis concept was that the MSHCP would not utilize condemnation of lands for purposes of Conservation. Such a program would be in conflict with the willing seller concepts on which the MSHCP has been based. The cooperative partnerships that are essential for the success of the MSHCP would be destroyed if "mandatory requirement" were used as a basis of implementation. The HANS Process provides a description of how property owners can pursue development plans and how consistency with the MSHCP will be achieved.

    I4-15 See Response I4-5. The MSHCP does not assume 600 foot buffer zones between urban and agricultural land uses (See Response G-20) The Final SRP comments have been made part of the administrative record for the Final EIR/EIS. The determinations of no significant impact to Listed and Non-listed Covered Species in the EIR/EIS are based on the measures incorporated in the self-mitigating MSHCP with respect to these species and the scientific information supporting these determinations is included in the Plan particularly in the species accounts in Volume II, Section B. Attempting to summarize this information in the EIR/EIS would not yield meaningful information for a project of this magnitude.

    I4-16 The thresholds referenced in the comment are related to avoidance and minimization of impacts to Covered Species when survey results are positive. Application of the thresholds will occur in the context of other analyses required for survey species in the MSHCP when survey results are positive and more specific information is known regarding the population observed during the surveys. These other analyses include evaluation of the potential contribution of protection of the observed population to long-term conservation of the species. This is an appropriate approach based on the current level of information available for the species for which surveys are required. In addition, the MSHCP provides opportunities to incorporate new scientific information as it becomes available including changes in thresholds as noted in the following introduction to the species-specific conservation objectives for all of the MSHCP species accounts: "The species-specific conservation objectives developed for this species are based upon the best available scientific information at the time of MSHCP preparation. Pursuant to Section 5.0 which includes Management, Monitoring and the Adaptive Management Program, the MSHCP's mitigation requirements will be monitored and analyzed to determine if they are producing the desired results. Based upon this information, the species-specific conservation objectives will be adjusted if appropriate, as new information is gathered during Plan implementation. The Adaptive Management Program will be used to identify alternative strategies for meeting the MSHCP's general biological goals and objectives and, if necessary, adjusting future conservation strategies according to the information received."

    I4-17 See Response I4-6.

    I4-18 See Responses R-19, R-20, R-21 and R-25 for a detailed description of the conservation planning process. Maps of the Criteria Area overlain on various vegetation layers are included in Figure 9-4 through 9-6 of the Draft MSHCP. The MSHCP is a criteria-based plan and a map of the MSHCP Conservation Area does not exist and cannot be created until Reserve Assembly is complete. Therefore, it is not possible to provide a map of the MSHCP Conservation Area overlain on the vegetation map.

    I4-19 See Responses F-46, F-47, F-48, F-50 and F-51. The Draft EIR/EIS is Volume IV of a four volume set that comprises the MSHCP, and the set includes descriptions of the MSHCP management features referenced in the comment.

    I4-20 See Responses G-10, H2-93 through H2-122 and N3-1 through N3-3. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of: Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003. Section 6.1.2 of the Plan acknowledges that future SAMP data may also provide new information to assist in MSHCP implementation. Assuming the assertion "that many critical habitat areas [likely] will soon be or already have been lost or compromised" is not referring to the FESA definition and regulatory process, see Responses F-46, F-47, F-48, F-50 and F-51 for discussion of Reserve Assembly.

    I4-21 The Management and Monitoring Program included in Section 5.0 of the MSHCP fully acknowledges the dynamic nature of biological systems and incorporates measures to respond to expected changes over time. See complete Response to Comment Letter J2 and Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of: Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003.

    I4-22 The 491,300 acres referenced in the comment include lands within the Criteria Area that may be set aside for Conservation as Additional Reserve Lands.

    I4-23 To facilitate public review and understanding of the vegetation map for the scale of mapping necessary to address the 1.26 million-acre Plan Area, the form of the vegetation map and data depicted in the Draft MSHCP and Draft EIR/EIS includes "collapsed" vegetation categories. The analysis performed for individual species and reserve design efforts included consideration of the "uncollapsed" vegetation mapping, which provides for a distinction between playas and vernal pools. See Response G-10.

    I4-24 Fully protected species are adequately addressed in Section 15.5 of the IA. Additionally, Table 2G in the Draft EIR/EIS describes the listing status of each species covered under the MSHCP. Since the Draft EIR/EIS is one volume of a four volume set that includes the IA, there is no legal reason to add the IA language to the EIR/EIS.

    I4-25 The EIR/EIS does analyze the indirect and cumulative impacts of implementation of the MSHCP. The referenced Draft EIR/EIS pages discuss those potential impacts found to be less than significant and therefore not requiring further analysis. This is a project level EIR/EIS and no additional environmental review under CEQA and NEPA is anticipated for the MSHCP. However, as development projects are proposed, appropriate analysis under CEQA and/or NEPA is required prior to project approval.

    The MSHCP, the General Plan and CETAP and related EIRs/EISs all appropriately address buildout of the County based on the proposed County General Plan and applicable City General Plans. The MSHCP appropriately addresses impacts to Covered Species within the Plan Area. The MSHCP EIR/EIS addresses impacts to Covered Species and other environmental categories associated with the MSHCP Take Authorization. The General Plan EIR appropriately addresses impacts to the full range of environmental categories within the unincorporated portions of Riverside County. The CETAP EIR/EISs appropriately address impacts to the full range of environmental categories associated with construction of the CETAP corridors. Together, these documents fully address the indirect and cumulative impacts of the combined RCIP projects as noted above.

    The location and nature of future development would indeed be guided by the Riverside County General Plan and CETAP, as well as other City general plans, but ultimately would occur in response to market forces and builder choices, over an unforeseeable time period. While general plans and zoning ordinances serve to permit (and restrict) certain land uses in given areas, these documents are not sufficient to predict the nature (i.e., location, extent, timing, and type) of Development throughout the County and the Cities that would occur as a result of implementation of the MSHCP, if any (versus those that would occur in the absence of the MSHCP). As noted above, all subsequent development activities will be subject to additional environmental review as required by CEQA and potentially NEPA.

    I4-26 Land values in Riverside County are impacted by many factors, the primary ones being supply and demand for land to meet the need for new housing in Southern California. Changing state and nation economics have and will continue to impact local land values. These factors likely greatly overshadow any local impact either positively or negatively resulting from the potential conservation needs of the MSHCP.

    The MSHCP acknowledges that land values will change over time and that funding will need to be adjusted likewise. See Section 8.0 of the MSHCP.

    I4-27 The MSHCP does address prioritization of land acquisitions. The HANS Process will generate lists of acquisition properties from willing sellers. The completion of these acquisitions will be the first priority. Any additional funding that is available will be prioritized by the RCA based on recommendations from the Funding Coordination Committee. This committee will consider a variety of factors, including the results of the management program to guide future acquisitions.

    Section 8.6 of the Draft MSHCP describes how the Local Permittees would attempt to resolve funding shortfalls should they occur.

    Comment Letter J

    Comment Letter J - Riverside-Corona Resource Conservation District, 14 January 2003

    J-1 The Plan calls for management and monitoring to begin as lands are acquired. See Section 8 of the Draft MSHCP.

    J-2 Adaptive Management is scheduled to begin receiving funding in year 5. endowment would not be established until the acquisition phase is complete. The

    J-3 Management and Adaptive Management funds could be used to address the impacts of major natural disasters. Fire and flood are identified as Changed Circumstances in Section 6.8.3 of the Draft MSHCP and funding for management includes funding for Changed Circumstances. The Lead Agencies also recognize that natural disasters are just natural events that have occurred over time and will continue to occur. The size and distribution of the MSHCP Conservation Area will also provide a large degree of protection. It is unlikely that even major natural disasters would impact more than a small percent of the total MSHCP Conservation Area.

    J-4 The HANS Process provides a system of multiple appraisals to be used to determine fair market value as described in Section 6.1 of the Draft MSHCP.

    J-5 The measurement period of eight years is stated as a minimum and may be modified if determined necessary through the Adaptive Management Program. See Response C-44.

    J-6 The ultimate responsibility for management and monitoring rests with the Permittees. The duration and timing of baseline surveys will vary from species to species, depending on species-specific requirements. See Sections 5.2.1 and 5.3 of the Draft MSHCP respectively. See Responses C-42 and C-44.

    J-7 The Reserve Managers will be hired and paid by the entity managing the lands. If the lands are managed by the RCA, it would hire and pay the Reserve Manager. If the land is managed (for example) by the BLM, the BLM would assign the Reserve Manager. The Executive Director of the RCA and the RMOC may make recommendations on Reserve Managers.

    J-8 The RCA will be seeking input from a wide range of interested parties with specific expertise. The Resource Conservation District's expertise will be welcome.


    Comment Letter J2 - University of Nevada, January 12, 2003

    General Comment:

    Overall, the Lead Agencies appreciate the expertise the commentors brought to this evaluation and consider it a validation of much of the approach. This draft Monitoring Program was written by the Department of Fish and Game's Resource Assessment Program staff, and undertook a new approach to monitoring plan development that hopefully learns from past efforts. Instead of specific monitoring for specific species (i.e., number of plots, frequency of sampling, intensity of monitoring, & sampling locations), this program recognizes the a priori limitations in information upon which to base a rigid system that will be adopted. The flexibility (adaptability) of the monitoring design as new information is gained is necessary for success -- monitoring in this context is evolutionary rather than static -- and where feasible a multi-species approach will be implemented for efficiency and cost-saving. Through time and with gaining specific knowledge of species/habitat relationships, habitat models may be satisfactory surrogates of species status/trend.

    Concerns exist that the program does not explicitly lay out the what, where, when, & how monitoring will occur - this makes estimation of costs and understanding of commitments to monitor difficult to envision. Commitments by the County, CDFG, UCR, & USFWS during the initial years of the MSHCP have been made to ensure the Monitoring Program is started correctly, that the monitoring evolves during the first few years with intensive data collection, and that the program is supported by MSHCP Plan Participants.

    J2-1 The Lead Agencies agree with the comment about the unacceptability of an expensive, inefficient, and ineffective monitoring plan and directly or indirectly refer to cost and efficiency on pages 5-49, 5-50, 5-51, 5-52, 5-65, and 5-66. Regarding effectiveness, the Lead Agencies have worked to emphasize the need to gather adequate data on species and Habitats initially, upon which to base the long-term monitoring strategy of select species. An effective Monitoring Program that purports to link species status and trend in relation to stressors such as habitat loss must first determine baseline.

    J2-2 The role of the Monitoring Program section was to focus on a framework for monitoring species, Habitats, and communities, without confounding it with the socio-economic and political aspects of the management strategies that would be employed based on monitoring results (i.e., Adaptive Management). This section focuses on the monitoring, not Adaptive Management. The comment letter doesn't seem to identify the missing "critical elements" so it is not possible to respond to that part of the comment.

    J2-3 The intent of the Monitoring Program is to establish a framework for monitoring rather than a detailed monitoring plan that in and of itself would not be "adaptable." The entire message of this document is that it is impossible at the initiation phase to articulate how many plots, where to sample, how frequently, etc. without a scientific basis for establishing the monitoring strategy - that is what the initial years of the program intend to establish. It would not be appropriate to specifically articulate a precise monitoring strategy in advance of gathering objective data on species distributions and relative abundances.

    J2-4 Any "levels or thresholds" mentioned are based on professional judgments in the absence of scientifically-based data that would identify a "better" threshold or interval.

    J2-5 See Response J2-2.

    J2-6 The commentors are correct. The budget was estimated based on the level of effort that was identified in the framework program and with the assumptions given on pages 5-83 through 5-89 of the Draft MSHCP. The long-term objective of the Monitoring Plan is to use surrogate species for monitoring as appropriate. All parties agree that this is the best and most cost efficient approach to monitoring.

    J2-7 As stated in Section 5.2 of the Draft MSHCP, the management goal of the MSHCP "is to establish and maintain a self-sustaining MSHCP Conservation Area, that focuses on conserving Habitats and species and is consistent with the conservation objectives for the Covered Species." Note that the management goal of a self-sustaining MSHCP Conservation Area is tied to the conservation objectives for the Covered Species. As described in Section 9.2 of the Plan, a Conservation Strategy is identified for each Covered Species that consists of four components: 1) a global biological goal; 2) global biological objectives; 3) species-specific objectives; and 4) management and monitoring requirements. Through implementation of the species-specific goals, objectives and management and monitoring requirements, the overall management goal of a self-sustaining MSHCP Conservation Area will be met.

    J2-8 A conceptual framework for sampling and monitoring activities is provided in Table 5-8 of the Draft MSHCP, Summary of Survey Requirements for Covered Species as per the Species Objectives. Table 5-8 includes those survey requirements that are included in the species objectives, or the default survey requirement of at least once every eight years. As discussed in Response C-42, the monitoring schedule for each species will be determined in years two through four and those species that require more frequent surveys will be identified at that time.

    As discussed in Response C-44, the frequency of species monitoring and the various strategies that are proposed are described as follows. The 8-year interval is the cycle when all monitoring activities will have occurred at least once and is used as an index for establishing a new baseline distribution and at least an index of abundance for all Covered Species. However, a number of the Covered Species are being monitored more frequently in accordance with species-specific objectives. Table 5-8 illustrates the sampling intervals for each species and Section 5.3.9 - Anticipated Levels of Effort and Estimate Costs identifies the proposed survey/monitoring teams in the Initial Inventory and Assessment Phase and Long-Term Monitoring Phase. Note that these teams are separate from the Reserve Management teams.

    In addition, Section 6.6.6 states that a Monitoring Program Administrator will be selected by the RCA; this administrator shall be responsible for implementing the Monitoring Program described in Section 5.0 of the Plan.

    The UCR Center for Conservation Biology (CCB), in collaboration with CDFG, is working to "construct conceptual models and approaches for developing sampling strategies for species and communities, for habitat modeling, data management, and to generate a suite of models a priori in which to analyze collected data." (CCB, Interim Report to CDFG, January 2003)

    J2-9 See Section 3.0 and 4.0, Volume 1 of the Draft MSHCP with regard to details on conservation planning process and Reserve Assembly. Considerable effort has already been made to identify lands that would most contribute to species Conservation (see Section 3.1, Volume 1). Also see Section 6.0, Volume 1 of the MSHCP with regard to Implementation Structure. Biological resources will be identified and evaluated prior to land acquisition.

    J2-10 As described in Section 6.6.2 - Regional Conservation Authority, "Implementation of the MSHCP will be overseen, administered and enforced by a joint regional authority formed by the County and the Cities pursuant to the requirements of the California Government Code and other appropriate legal authorities." This Authority is the Regional Conservation Authority (RCA). As described in Section 6.6.4, the Reserve Management Oversight Committee (RMOC) shall serve as the intermediary between the Reserve Managers and the RCA. The Executive Director of the RCA shall serve as the RMOC chair. As described in Section 6.6.4, Subsection B - Duties and Responsibilities, the RMOC is responsible for overseeing and implementing not just the annual work plans but the Reserve Management Plans described in Section 5.0, the Adaptive Management Plan described in Section 5.2, the annual reports described in Section 6.11, and implementing the MSHCP Area Plans, as well as other additional responsibilities. The RMOC in concert with the RCA provide the overarching strategy needed to meet the MSHCP goals.

    J2-11 See Response J2-32.

    J2-12 See Response J2-53.

    J2-13 See Section 6.6, Volume 1 the Draft MSHCP regarding implementation of the management and Monitoring Program. As discussed in Section 6.6.1, "The Cooperative Organizational Structure facilitates cooperation among the Permittees and the Wildlife Agencies and assures that MSHCP Conservation Area management and monitoring will be consistent across jurisdictional boundaries."

    J2-14 See Response J2-53

    J2-15 See Response J2-7.

    J2-16 Section 5.2 of the Plan provides a description of the "learning by doing" approach. As discussed in Section 5.2, the Adaptive Management program is a flexible approach that is based on the framework provided in Section 5.1 and the monitoring program described in Section 5.3. The Adaptive Management program will "rely on monitoring efforts to detect changes in species, Habitats, and/or threats. When change is detected, Reserve Managers evaluate the information and can respond by initiating, modifying, or even ending a particular management strategy if necessary." Section 5.2.1 describes the general management activities: Habitat- or landscape-based management activities and species-specific management activities. In addition to general management activities, Section 5.2.1 also describes experimental Adaptive Management activities. Section 6.6 describes how the Adaptive Management Programs will be implemented.

    J2-17 The estimated cost for the Monitoring Program is considered a maximum as discussed on page 5-83 of the Draft MSHCP. The cost of the program escalates in relation to the amount of effort anticipated to fully implement the long-term monitoring phase. The reduced level of effort in the first 5 years of the MSHCP reflects the effort during the initial inventory phase and the anticipated lag time to hire and coordinate personnel into the Monitoring Program. After Year 7, there is no escalation of cost but rather a range of cost between $2,060,300 and $2,223,100 based on annual monitoring efforts. See Response J2-6.

    J2-18 See Responses J2-7 and J2-15.

    J2-19 As noted in the Limitations description in Section 5.2 of the Draft MSHCP, "Currently, quantitative distributional studies have not been conducted to determine accurate population numbers and trends." However, as noted later in this same paragraph, the initial objective of the Management Plan is to develop and quantify baseline data in the first five years of the MSHCP. The strategy to add lands to the MSHCP Conservation Area is described in Section 4.0 - Assembling the MSHCP Conservation Area. As described in Section 4.4.2, in determining which lands are to be acquired, the following factors will be considered: biological value, vulnerability to Development, and cost and proximity to existing Public/Quasi-Public Lands. Section 5.3.5 describes the monitoring of Vegetation Communities and Wildlife Habitats for purposes of determining which lands should be incorporated into the MSHCP Conservation Area. Moreover, General Management Measure 2, described in Section 5.2.1, requires that an initial baseline assessment of Additional Reserve Lands be undertaken with the first two to four years of conveyance to the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    Regarding a conceptual framework to guide monitoring activities, see Response J2-8.

    J2-20 See Response J2-19. Biological value will be considered as a factor in acquiring additional lands (see Sections 4.4.2 and 5.3.5 of the Draft MSHCP).

    J2-21 General Management Measures 3 and 4 in Section 5.2.1 of the Draft MSHCP describe management measures with respect to Upland Habitat and Wetland Habitat. Section 5.3.5 describes the Biological Monitoring Program with respect to an inventory of the distribution (i.e., location) and abundance (i.e., acreage) of Vegetation Communities and Wildlife Habitats. The habitat conditions will be measured at regular intervals as identified in Section 5.3.5 - Vegetation Community/Wildlife Habitat Inventory and Monitoring. Section 5.3.5 further describes the monitoring methods to be used, including the CNPS "Vegetation Rapid Assessment Protocol" (CNPS 2002) and "Releve Protocol" (CNPS 1998). Permanently located Rapid Assessment plots will provide qualitative data.

    As described in the Long-Term Vegetation Monitoring and Habitat Condition Assessment Monitoring Subsection within Section 5.3.5, the distribution, acreage and condition of the Vegetation Community and Wildlife Habitat will be used to determine whether the Vegetation Community, Wildlife Habitat, and species-specific goals and objectives are being met. Changes in the quantity or quality of habitat types will provide feedback to Reserve Managers; the Reserve Managers will then identify appropriate adaptive management actions. With regard to management actions to restore severely degraded lands, General Management Measure 9 in Section 5.2.1 of the Draft MSHCP describes management efforts in response to natural and anthropogenic disturbance regimes.

    J2-22 Raptor species will be monitored in accordance with the Long-Term Monitoring of Covered Species Subsection of Section 5.3.6. Table 5-8 describes the monitoring activities for each species, including raptors. The initial inventory and long-term monitoring will provide information to Reserve Managers to determine whether adaptive management measures are necessary to ensure that the species-specific objectives are met.

    J2-23 The sample form referenced in the comment, entitled Form for Assessment of Upland and Wetland Habitat Conditions, is from Section 5.2.1 - Proposed Management Activities. As explained in Section 5.2.1, the purpose of the sample form is to provide consistency in how and what data are collected in accordance with General Management Measures 3 and 4 of the Draft MSHCP. These measures require the maintenance and management of Upland Habitats and Wetland Habitats, respectively, within the MSHCP Conservation Area. However, the form is not intended to be prescriptive; it may be used as is or modified at the discretion of the Reserve Manager. See Response J2-21 for a description of the quantitative and qualitative monitoring of Vegetation Communities and Wildlife Habitat.

    J2-24 See Response J2-10 with regard to an overarching strategy for coordination and communication among Reserve Managers. The RMOC in concert with the RCA provide the overarching strategy for coordinated conservation planning.

    J2-25 As described in General Management Measure 8 of Section 5.2.1of the Draft MSHCP Proposed Management Activities, management activities must ensure that species presence and continued use shall be maintained at 75% of the locations identified in the species account for each species, as measured at a minimum of once every eight years. In addition to the 75% threshold, consistency with the Plan requires that the Conservation Strategy for each Covered Species be met, including the species-specific conservation objectives described in Section 9.2.

    With regard to the re-sampling interval, see Response C-42. Section 5.3.3 - Monitoring Program Implementation Sequence, indicates that long-term monitoring strategies will be developed during years two through four. These strategies include schedules, protocols, time intervals and multi-species approaches, where appropriate. During years three through five, intensive monitoring will be conducted for Covered Species with additional information needs. In years six through eight and beyond, this intensive monitoring will continue to be conducted for Covered Species with additional information needs. Rarity of occurrence and seasonality will affect the monitoring strategy.

    J2-26 Section 5.3.4 describes the considerations in the development of the inventory, monitoring and sampling locations and strategies. Subsection Sampling Design Considerations in Section 5.3.4 states that stratification of the sampling units is proposed, "most optimally on landscape strata unlikely to change over time (e.g., geologic features, elevation, aspect, soil properties)." Subsection Establishment of Long-term Monitoring Sampling Stations in Section 5.3.4 states that the "establishment of monitoring stations (plots/transects) will incorporate the stratified random sampling approach. The basis of this approach is to partition the suites of species, and populations in such a way that the units within a stratum are as similar as possible." At such time as the sampling units are developed, it may be determined that the preliminary management units described in Section 5.2.2 may be used to spatially stratify the sampling units.

    J2-27 See Responses J2-10 and J2-24 with regard to an overarching strategy for coordination andcommunication among Reserve Managers. The RMOC is responsible for overseeing and implementing the Reserve Management Plans described in Section 5.0 of the Draft MSHCP. The RMOC in concert with the RCA provide the overarching strategy for coordinated conservation planning.

    J2-28 Section 3.1.1 of the Draft MSHCP describes the elements of the conservation planning process. These elements include (but are not limited to) identification of overall MSHCP goals, compilation of existing data, review of reserve selection methods, development of an initial Conceptual Conservation Scenario, identification of alternatives, development of the Conceptual Reserve Design/Criteria Based Plan and analysis of the selected alternative. Section 3.2 of the Draft MSHCP provides a description of the MSHCP Conservation Area (including a discussion of Cores and Linkages); Section 3.3 provides a description of Area Plans; and Section 3.4 provides a description of alternative conservation strategies.

    J2-29 As described in Section 6.6.5, Reserve Managers shall implement the Reserve Management Plans pursuant to Section 5.0 of the Plan; evaluate data obtained from the Monitoring Program and make recommendations to the RMOC regarding Adaptive Management actions; prepare and submit annual reports to the RMOC; coordinate with other Reserve Managers, Independent Science Advisors, and the Monitoring Program Administrator. See Responses J2-10, J2-24 and J2-27 with regard to an overarching strategy for coordination and communication among Reserve Managers.

    J2-30 The Lead Agencies agree that the monitoring needs to be linked to the "goals of the HCP" and indicate this on page 5-50 of the Draft MSHCP with the statement describing "...thoughtfully constructed species... objectives..."; on page 5-51 of the Draft MSHCP under "Monitoring Goals and Objectives"; and on page 5-72 of the Draft MSHCP and the accompanying Table 5-8. The Lead Agencies suggest the monitoring purpose described by the commentors is not substantially different from the first paragraph of "Monitoring Goals and Objectives" (Draft MSHCP, p. 5-51) or the last paragraph on page 5-72 of the Draft MSHCP. The graphic on page 5-59 of the Draft MSHCP similarly links monitoring to species and conservation objectives of the MSHCP.

    J2-31 The Lead Agencies agree in part, and indicated that estimates of sampling effort "cannot entirely be made" (this is analogous to commentors' "preliminary" caveat) a priori. The Lead Agencies believe that sampling effort can be estimated for species if there is adequate information on their distribution in the Plan Area -- this will exist for several species. For most species however, the Lead Agencies would argue there is not adequate knowledge of how they are distributed throughout the Plan Area to design a sampling strategy.

    J2-32 The Lead Agencies agree with the comment. However, the page in question does not indicate "multi-species inventory and monitoring..." Still, throughout the Monitoring Program document, the Lead Agencies have tried to articulate a multi-species approach to inventorying and monitoring "where feasible" [page 5-51]; "use multi-species or community-level efforts where possible" [page 5-52]; "multi-species approaches" [page 5-53]; "multi-species, community approach will be used to the extent possible..." [page 5-66]; "...monitoring the wide variety of Covered Species..." [page 5-66].

    On page 5-56, 1st paragraph, the MSHCP describes the collaborative efforts among agencies/academics to "seek to develop...multi-species approaches" and fully recognize there is no such thing as a multi-species data point, but rather, there is opportunity to simultaneously, or nearly so, gather data on multiple numbers of species, vegetation, and abiotic attributes.

    J2-33 The Lead Agencies agree with the commentors that stressors should be monitored and have identified a few that will be addressed in the last question on page 5-52 ("percentage exotic versus native vegetation, disturbance and fire history, etc."), on page 5-61 ("soil type and texture, fire history, flooding, erosion, grazing intensity, and other natural or human-made disturbances") and ("bullfrogs, invasive exotic plant species, argentine ants, imported fire ants, etc.") and on page 5-79 ("brown-headed cowbird, European starling, bullfrog").

    J2-34 The Lead Agencies will work to incorporate a process or structure to track implementation of inventory and monitoring that still maintains the flexibility needed to deal with uncertainty.

    J2-35 The Vegetation Community classification was begun by CDFG in 2002, in advance of the MSHCP's adoption and will be completed by the end of 2004. The CNPS method enables aggregation to more general CWHR wildlife Habitats. Mapping is constrained by access to lands -- Public/Quasi-Public are being mapped in detail, while mapping of inaccessible lands (e.g., private) will be more generally inferred using geographical imagery. The mapping will occur throughout the Plan Area, and can be summarized for the entire area, or by reserve unit.

    Long-term monitoring will not be developed in advance of the vegetation/habitat base layers. Exceptions to this will exist for species whose distributions are already well known or will be known quickly [e.g., 1st sentence page 5-53 of the Draft MSHCP].

    The Lead Agencies agree that some species could be identified as potential surrogates earlier than 3 years. Whether they actually are reliable indicators of the condition or state is a different story [page 5-78 of the Draft MSHCP] that only time and monitoring can tell. The 3-year time frame enables synthesis of survey/inventory data, collaboration among species experts and plan managers, and reasoned decision-making regarding the likelihood of selecting indicators that will prove to be effective per Comment J2-1.

    J2-36 The 8-year interval is the cycle when all monitoring activities will have occurred at least once as is used an index for establishing a new baseline distribution and at least an index of abundance for all Covered Species. Recognize however that many of the Covered Species are being monitored more frequently consistent with species objectives. Table 5-8 in the Draft MSHCP illustrates the sampling intervals for each species and pages 587 to 5-89 list the proposed survey/monitoring teams - note these teams are separate from the reserve management teams.

    To work toward the consistency desired by the commentors, the CDFG has committed to take the lead on monitoring implementation for the initial 8-year period and the CDFG is in the second year of a planned long-term collaborative relationship with the UCR Center for Conservation Biology (CCB) to develop and implement protocols and monitoring strategies that will be used consistently throughout the Plan Area. A number of eminent researchers with local experience in Southern California environments are working with the CCB, including Drs. Michael Allen, John Rotenberry, Thomas Scott, Edith Allen, Richard Minnich, Richard Redak, and Bai-Lian Li.

    Independent of this plan, the CDFG initiated their Resource Assessment Program in 2001 to work toward the objectives identified by the commentors. Foremost is the collection of data in a consistent manner throughout the State and the development of a centralized database.

    J2-37 The Lead Agencies agree with the commentors regarding the questionable yield of additional useful information by monitoring all versus selected species [page 5-79].

    It is not clear whether the commentors consider "indicator" to be synonymous with "surrogate" in identifying species for monitoring. For the purposes of this comment, the Lead Agencies will assume they do. The commentors argue for, and the Lead Agencies agree, that a surrogate-based approach is appropriate ["optimize the number of species monitored..." page 5-50; "identify species as potential indicators..." page 5-53; "intensive monitoring of select species..." page 5-54; "not feasible to develop intensive monitoring strategies for all." page 5-65; "monitoring of a species as an indicator...surrogate...is proposed..." page 5-78; "monitoring an appropriate subset of species..." page 5-79].

    The commentors suggest that the Lead Agencies know enough to propose species for monitoring that "may be able to provide information on ecological condition" but then seemingly contradict this statement by indicating the "list of potential surrogate species is subject to change" based on new data. The Lead Agencies agree they may be able to provide information on ecological condition, however, the proposed strategy for this program is to take a little more time, gather the baseline data, conduct additional reasoned analysis of species, Habitat, and stressor relationships, and hopefully minimize the need to "drop" and "pick up" species that will serve as supposed indicators/surrogates.

    J2-38 A substantial reasoning for the 8-year interval was based on the intent for repeat vegetation mapping/inventory. The reason for this interval was a judgment call based on past CDFG experience with habitat mapping and change detection - a five-year interval was considered to be too frequent and labor intensive for the return on investment (i.e., little vegetative change). Conversely, a 10-year interval was judged as being too risky, with concern that substantial changes in acreages could occur in this time frame.

    From a species perspective, USFWS had initially proposed a 7-year interval as related to perceived climate patterns (partially supported by the Riverside County rainfall data). The Lead Agencies suggested modifying it to an 8-year interval to provide for a greater opportunity to examine correlative relationships of vegetation change with species trends (species monitored every 1, 2, or 4 years would have common data points with vegetation status every 8th year; being prime, 7 offers less opportunity to simultaneously link data within a year).

    Numerous species are proposed for more frequent monitoring than every 8 years [Table 5-8 of the Draft MSHCP].

    Lastly, there was some professional judgment by CDFG based on history/knowledge of monitoring mammal species for decades that influenced the 8-year selection as a balance or trade-off between information needs and costs of monitoring.

    J2-39 See Sections 3.0 and 4.0, Volume I of the Draft MSHCP with regards to details on conservation planning process and Reserve Assembly, and to Response J2-9. Inventory and monitoring information will be gathered on "new" lands as quickly as possible. The addition of new lands to the reserve system will largely be based on willing sellers within the identified MSHCP Conservation Area. The strategy also includes determining those Vegetation Communities that are least represented or most at risk, and animal species whose Habitat are least represented or are most at risk based on inventory and monitoring, so that emphasis on adding new areas comprised of those communities will occur to the extent possible [e.g., pages 5-55, 5-63].

    J2-40 The Lead Agencies agree with the need to develop some rapid (the Lead Agencies have also labeled it "initial") assessments [page 5-61]. In September 2002, the CDFG hosted a day-long meeting of scientists to discuss rapid assessment for wildlife species. Participants from Western Riverside County, Placer Legacy (Placer Co.), other agencies, and universities brainstormed on the issue. UCR, CDFG, and others are pursuing developing such a strategy that will be based on specific objectives because the type of initial and rapid assessment needed depends on how-far-along in the process the conservation plan effort has proceeded -- some are in the phase of identifying reserve areas for recommendation for consideration in the Plan (e.g., Placer Legacy), while others already have the potential reserve layout largely determined (e.g., western Riverside County).

    J2-41 The Lead Agencies agree that Additional Reserve Lands should be managed in an efficient manner that maximizes conservation benefits. In the case of the Local Permittees, acquired Additional Reserve Lands can be initially be conveyed to the Local Permittee in whose jurisdiction the land is located. These conservation lands may then be conveyed to the RCA, should the Local Permittee so desire.

    J2-42 The Lead Agencies agree and describe this on pages 5-60 and 5-61 of the Draft MSHCP. Modification of vegetation survey and use of geographic imagery has already occurred to increase the scope consistent with the comment.

    J2-43 The primary focus initially is more precise distribution and abundance, to build the foundation upon which a legitimate Monitoring Program can be based. Distribution and abundance are essentially repeated at 8 year intervals. Monitoring of many species occurs at more frequent intervals [Table 5-8] and information on reproductive success will be collected on at least 21 Covered Species as indicated. Collecting information on demography (birth, death, immigration/emigration, survival, etc.) is labor intensive and will only be collected as needed to determine if species objectives are being met. For the most part the species objectives do not state "persistence" of populations, but rather "demonstrate" and "maintain" populations at previously known occupied areas.

    J2-44 See Response J2-33. On page 5-62 of the Draft MSHCP is described some of the stressor-based monitoring that will be employed. Certainly, a primary factor will be the changing acreages by Vegetation Community/Habitat through time. This information will be tracked coincident with species monitoring. Monitoring of invasive species, Development, fire, flood, grazing, etc. are considered as components. Data collected by other agencies (fire, water quality, air pollution) is not part of this Monitoring Program per se, but is anticipated to be part of the analysis of causative factors influencing species trends.

    J2-45 The vegetation classification is described on pages 5-60 and 5-61 of the Draft MSHCP; CNPS protocols and documents are available at CNPS's website (http://www.cnps.org). The vegetation associations will determine the number of vegetation classes to be mapped, with some aggregation likely necessary. Minimum mapping units are approximately one acre.

    J2-46 Regarding differences between Vegetation Community and wildlife Habitat, the former is floristically-based and indifferent to how or whether animal species use it; the latter is based on the perceived contribution of the vegetation structure and composition to species reproduction, food, and cover requirements.

    On page 5-62 of the Draft MSHCP, the Lead Agencies describe that the detailed Vegetation Community classification can be easily cross-walked to the California Wildlife Habitat Relationships system. CDFG staff conducting the vegetation classification work in the same office as the CWHR personnel and have worked closely over the past several years to achieve this level of synergy. Abundant field plots are used to develop and refine vegetation polygons on ortho-photo quads -- note the method is not using satellite imagery.

    J2-47 The Lead Agencies agree and will use the pre-existing maps to the extent of their utility.

    J2-48 See Responses J2-41 through J2-47.

    J2-49 CDFG and program proponents are well aware of the limitations of CWHR and consider it merely one tool. It is most effective at a more general community level rather than at a specific species level. Given the lack of access to much of the land in the Plan Area, CWHR will be used as intended -- a predictive model that requires careful interpretation.

    J2-50 See Response J2-38.

    J2-51 Table 5-8 in the Draft MSHCP provides some basis for the intensive monitoring strategies. Strategies will be implemented "where" species distribution is determined. The monitoring needed/ proposed for a particular species is based on the species objective table in the Plan. Again, the specifics of how many plots/transects are needed and where they are needed will be based on an adequate foundation that has evaluated distribution throughout accessible lands.

    The CDFG is in the second year of a planned long-term collaborative relationship with the UCR Center for Conservation Biology (CCB) to develop and implement monitoring strategies. An interim report was recently provided to CDFG by CCB (January 2003) that initially identifies priorities and approaches that will be used based on rarity types and the occupancy approach (based on Hanski 2002).

    J2-52 The 10 percent change in acreage or distribution of a Habitat/Vegetation Community was professional judgment that a loss of 10 percent or more of a Habitat in the Plan Area may be significant, much like a p-value of <0.10 is considered significant. The Lead Agencies would welcome more science-based justification of an appropriate value on this if the commentors know of any. The Lead Agencies surmise the response is probably nonlinear.

    J2-53 This was an error made in the editing process. The Lead Agencies agree and recommend to the participating agencies that this be modified as originally intended to "numbers of populations and population size classes" rather than population size of each species.

    J2-54 The Lead Agencies agree and recognize the variation in life history strategies (page 5-51, 5-65 of the Draft MSHCP) will influence the sampling strategies (page 5-66 of the Draft MSHCP). The Lead Agencies anticipate that sampling for species will likely occur every year, and in some cases several times throughout the year, as opposed to surveying all species at the same time once every 8 years. Multi-species sampling is a complex and challenging endeavor. Where possible, data on multiple numbers of species, vegetation, and abiotic attributes will be collected simultaneously.

    J2-55 The Lead Agencies agree that coordination among Reserve Managers will be needed. The development of MSHCP-wide monitoring strategies, as mentioned on page 5-56 of the Draft MSHCP, and coordination of plan monitoring are required. See Section 6.6,

    Volume 1 of the Draft MSHCP regarding implementation of the management and Monitoring Program. As discussed in Section 6.6.1, "The Cooperative Organizational Structure facilitates cooperation among the Permittees and the Wildlife Agencies and assures that MSHCP Conservation Area management and monitoring will be consistent across jurisdictional boundaries."

    J2-56 Remote camera stations and track surveys were identified as one means of detecting use (page 5-55). However, the risk of camera theft is likely higher in Riverside County than it is along Highway 395 north of Reno where equipment used by CDFG for the very same purpose has been stolen. Case-by-case evaluation of the feasibility/logistics of equipment use will be made as the detailed monitoring strategies are developed (page 566).

    J2-57 The Lead Agencies agree (see Response J2-1) and so indicate on page 5-78 of the Draft MSHCP: "...seek to identify species that could fulfill these roles..."

    J2-58 See "General Comment" above. The Lead Agencies agree and the MSHCP intends to institute a process similar to the one described by the commentors. See Section 6.6, Volume I of the Draft MSHCP regarding implementation of the management and Monitoring Program. As discussed in Section 6.6.1, "The Cooperative Organizational Structure facilitates cooperation among the Permittees and the Wildlife Agencies and assures that MSHCP Conservation Area management and monitoring will be consistent across jurisdictional boundaries." See Section 6.6.4, Volume I of the Draft MSHCP for the responsibilities of the Reserve Management Oversight Committee and Sections 6.6.5 and 6.6.6 for the responsibilities of the Reserve Managers and Reserve Monitors.

    J2-59 The initial data are proposed to be collected during years 1-3, not just in year 1. The vegetation survey data already began in 2002. Year 8 monitoring should be clarified to explain that it reflects needed monitoring (essentially a re-inventory) of Covered Species that are not among the more frequently monitored species.

    It is important to gather as much of the varied forms of data during the same years as possible, so that linking species trends with habitat/vegetation trends can be directly compared. Seasonal employees (e.g., undergraduate/graduate students or recent graduates) are proposed to play a significant role in field data collection.

    The Lead Agencies agree with the commentors that the initial mapping effort will take more than 1 year to complete. The vegetation mapping effort was already begun in 2001 by CDFG. Because of the head start by CDFG, only 1 year was budgeted in the Monitoring Program. In Year 8 the mapping effort is anticipated to be less intense as it only requires updating vegetation that has changed from the map produced in Year 1. The wildlife rapid assessments are being developed such that they only require one field season of data collection, hence the use of the term "rapid."

    As discussed on page 5-86 of the Draft MSHCP, the Associate Botanist is intended to be a permanent, full-time position that will conduct specific species surveys as well as oversee the vegetation mapping effort once every 8 years. Since the Associate Botanist is a single position, it was only budgeted under the Covered Species Surveys (as an Associate Biologist, see page 5-88 and 5-89 for field crew breakdown) and not the Vegetation and Rapid Assessment Surveys (see footnote in Table 5-9 and 5-10). As described in the field crew breakdown on pages 5-88 and 5-89, the botanists activities are accounted for in the Covered Species surveys; however in Table 5-9 and 5-10 the botanists have been included under "Associate Biologist" and "Biologist" and were not separately named as botanists. The Lead Agencies apologize for the confusion.

    The Lead Agencies attempted to include all of the anticipated personnel needed to implement the Monitoring Program, with the appropriate level of oversight of seasonal aides by higher level staff. Seasonal aides that can operate independently in the field are not common and therefore more emphasis was given to the higher level staff with the option of "trading out" more seasonals for fewer Associate biologists if the opportunity arises. In the event that more staff is needed, the use of the 10% contingency fund will be considered.

    J2-60 The position levels for personnel to implement the Monitoring Program are given in Table 5-9 (e.g., Research Analyst I, Research Analyst II, Associate Biologist, Biologist, Seasonal Aide) with the level of pay indicated in Table 5-10. These levels are based on State and local government positions, salaries, and benefits. The Lead Agencies do not believe for the purposes of describing and estimating the costs associated with the Biological Monitoring Program that it is necessary to break out the operational costs from the personnel costs. The cost estimates are based on present dollars. No alternate monitoring strategies are proposed and therefore no costs associated with them are presented.

    J2-61 The Lead Agencies would add that access constraints will limit sampling as do funding constraints. The Lead Agencies agree with the comment (see page 5-66 of the Draft MSHCP) and worked to group species by community type (e.g., riparian) (see page 5-67 - 5-71). Consideration of rare/risk Habitats and species is mentioned on page 5-63 and will be accommodated in the monitoring.

    J2-62 The Lead Agencies consider the inventory to be a "snapshot" in time. The inventory methods will be instituted so that they are consistent over time, the only caveat being that the methods will need to be adaptable to future technologies/methods that can enhance information and/or efficiency (e.g., radio telemetry versus marking of animals when it evolved). The methods used for establishing baseline and conducting inventories will be subject to peer-review.

    J2-63 Surveys will be conducted to determine "presence" or "failure to detect." Surveys will not determine absence from a site. The Lead Agencies agree with the rest of the statement.

    J2-64 To the extent feasible, probabilistic sampling approaches will be used (pages 5-57, 5-58, 5-65, 5-66).

    The Lead Agencies agree that monitoring is not static (see "General Comment") and will be influenced by species that "move in and out" as well as by new lands added to the MSHCP Conservation Area over time.

    The Lead Agencies agree with the "moving target" comment. It is part of the justification for a data driven, flexible, adaptable, and evolutionary monitoring strategy.

    J2-65 The Lead Agencies agree with the statement.

    J2-66 The Lead Agencies agree with the statement.

    J2-67 The Lead Agencies agree with the comment, and the Monitoring Plan does not propose a "simple random selection of plots." See the Draft MSHCP, pages 5-56,5-57, 5-61, 5-64, 5-65, and 5-66 for some discussion of varied sampling strategies and approaches that will be used to achieve defensible data sets on species distributions, status, and trend. The commentors contradict themselves somewhat regarding knowledge of species is "not always available" (while J2-37 suggests "enough is known of species ecology to propose a set..."). See Response J2-37 as well. This obviously requires a case-by-case evaluation of species.

    J2-68 The Lead Agencies agree with the comment and assumed the detectability differences were reflected in the statements about varying life history strategies.

    J2-69 The Lead Agencies agree with the comment, and propose that this level of detail is, and will be developed during years 1-3.

    J2-70 The Lead Agencies agree with the comment, but did not state that replication will decline with an increase in plot size. To the contrary, the adaptive nature of the monitoring requires additional areas to be covered as land is added to the MSHCP Conservation Area, hence the general increase in costs over time.

    J2-71 The Lead Agencies agree with the statement, but would add that distribution (in addition to detectability and abundance) and the scope of the aforementioned "sample frame" at a species level is unknown prior to the inventory proposed in this plan.

    J2-72 The Lead Agencies agree with the statement.

    J2-73 The Lead Agencies will clarify the community-based sampling language and acknowledge no single transect, plot, or survey method can accommodate all animal species.

    J2-74 The Lead Agencies generally agree, but suggest there are more than two survey requirements of varying intensity (level) required to detect change. Table 5-8 in the Draft MSHCP illustrates some of this variability in survey/monitoring requirements.

    J2-75 The vegetation inventory is underway in advance of the MSHCP adoption to develop this strata. The proposed example by the commentors is one form of stratification and the Lead Agencies will retain their proposed strategy for future reference. This will be one means of stratifying (see Comment J2-67 suggesting no single type of stratification will suffice). The CDFG will also be investigating other means, such as basing stratification on species associations rather than habitat boundary (see Response J2-67).

    J2-76 The Lead Agencies agree with the statements, and propose that where feasible, Habitat is much easier to monitor over time than species, and if a "habitat of concern" approach is feasible for representing certain species, it would be used. The document will clarify the utility of monitoring Habitat in lieu of some species when feasible.

    The inventory phase will employ permanent logging of sample locations and will assist in developing the long-term Monitoring Program.

    J2-77 The Lead Agencies agree with the statement.

    J2-78 This comment is more of a textbook approach/recommendation for sampling a population than a comment on the Plan. The Lead Agencies appreciate the information and will use it as needed.

    The Lead Agencies emphasize the need to develop more robust estimators (i.e., population size class and number of populations) that will better fulfill land use decisions and conservation efforts than density estimates.

    There is inconsistency in the commentors' approaches that are first concerned with using detailed species monitoring protocols and cost-effectiveness; but then suggest monitoring in a fashion that establishes ecosystem/ecological relationships (far more costly). The Lead Agencies do not believe one can be done without the other. Ecosystem, or ecological relationships are rarely established for management purposes. This is what motivated the evolution of Adaptive Management, predictive modeling, and the stressor approaches. Given our acknowledgment, and the commentors' as well, that the Plan Area is already perturbed by human activity, it is doubtful that establishing complex biological relationships at a single or multi-species level can be accomplished with any certainty. Rather, the intent is to establish species community relationships and seek practical sampling approaches and the development of robust estimators relevant to conservation biology and the goals of the MSHCP.

    It is unclear what "conceptual model(s)" the commentors believe is lacking and needed. Effective monitoring data can be applied to any relevant stressor.


    Comment Letter J3 - Endangered Habitat League Additional Comments, January 23, 2003

    J3-1 See Responses I4-10, N-5, N-17 and T4-7.

    J3-2 A discussion of Existing Public and Quasi-Public Lands is included in Section 3.2.3 of the Draft MSHCP. These lands are designated as existing Cores and Linkages. The discussion of Proposed Cores and Linkages refers to the existing Cores and Linkages appropriately within the text.

    J3-3 The Lead Agencies disagree that the Public/Quasi-Public Lands have been "overcounted." See Responses I4-10, N-5, N-17 and T4-7. It is important to note that existing reserves and conservation areas (shown on Figure 2.3 on page 2.3-5 of the Draft EIR/EIS) are included in the MSHCP Conservation Area in order to create a coordinated approach to management that will provide the best coverage for species and best utilization of available resources. However, these lands are not being used to mitigate for future Development. See Responses N-2, N-3, N-5, N-7 and N-13. Out of the 153,000 acres of additional reserve land, the MSHCP will conserve 103,000 acres as mitigation land, comprised of 97,000 acres as the local mitigation component and 6,000 acres of mitigation land for State Permittees. The MSHCP itself is a vehicle for compliance with the requirements of FESA and the NCCP Act and seeks to minimize the regulatory burdens associated with Development by providing a defined amount of mitigation for endangered species impacts. An important component of the MSHCP is to establish policies and procedures to ensure that mitigation for impacts to species and habitat associated with future Development is provided. Accordingly, the Draft EIR/EIS appropriately refers to the MSHCP in identifying the mitigating provisions of the Additional Reserve Lands and the creation of the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    J3-4 See Response J3-2. A summary of existing reserves, including Metropolitan Water District's lands, is provided in a document entitled Description of Existing Reserves, Western Riverside County MSHCP (Dudek 2000), which is on file with the County and part of the Administrative Record. Because of the scope of the MSHCP, it is too speculative at this time to identify with any certainty the specific boundaries of the Core Areas and Linkages, or to analyze the relationship between Public/Quasi-Public Lands that may be included in the MSHCP Conservation Area and these Linkages. See Responses H2-3, H2-11, H2-43, H2-85, and H2-86. Within five years of Permit issuance, J3-1 the RCA will verify the precise acreage, amount, and location of the Public/Quasi-Public Lands in the MSHCP Conservation Area. (Draft MSHCP, p. 3-16)

    J3-5 See Responses I4-10, J3-1, N-5, N-17 and T4-7. The Lead Agencies believe that the Plan, as constituted, will provide protection to species and habitat. In any event, the MSHCP has built in mechanisms such as Adaptive Management and RCA oversight to address any implementation issues that may arise.


    Comment Letter J4 - Alhadeff and Solar on behalf of Anheuser-Busch, March 12, 2003

    J4-1 This comment raises no issues related to the Draft MSHCP, the Draft EIR/EIS or the Draft IA and no further response is necessary.

    J4-2 This comment raises no specific issues related to the Draft MSHCP, the Draft EIR/EIS or the Draft IA and no further response is possible. Specific responses to more detailed comments are provided below.

    J4-3 The MSHCP planning process has had a long history of extensive public involvement, beginning with the establishment of an Advisory Committee comprised of stakeholders with a wide diversity of backgrounds, representing a plurality of interests. Advisory Committee meetings have been held regularly and have been open to the public, noticed in accordance with Brown Act requirements. In addition, the County of Riverside has hosted numerous public workshops throughout the County featuring the MSHCP as a component of the broader RCIP program. The Draft MSHCP was made available for a public review for a period spanning approximately 120 days. Prior to the release of the public review draft, an administrative draft MSHCP was released to the public for informal review and comment in March 2002. Direction in the development and processing of the MSHCP has relied heavily on input from the general public, from stakeholders and from the Advisory Committee members throughout the four-year planning process. Based on this brief summary of the history of public involvement in the MSHCP planning process, it is clear that the federal standard for public involvement quoted in this comment from the CEQA regulations has not only been met, but has been far exceeded. See Response H2-30.

    The MSHCP is based on the best scientific and commercial data available. See Responses G-10, H2-93 through H2-122 and N3-1 through N3-3. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of: Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003.

    Regarding the comment that "providing such a (reference) list does not provide an adequate basis for facilitating public involvement," the commentor neglects to acknowledge the extensive compilation and summary of the research of these references into comprehensive species accounts, the quality of which are noted in Comment Letter G. In addition, the text of the MSHCP summarizes the pertinent scientific literature and explains how the findings of peer reviewed scientific studies have been applied in the MSHCP planning process.

    Regarding the comment that "there is little evidence...the scientific insight...was systematically applied," Section 3.1 of the Draft MSHCP, which documents the conservation planning process provides extensive literature citations and explains how and why scientific methods were either chosen or dismissed, based on their appropriateness in light of the information available and circumstances within the physical environment. The final comments of the SRP concur with the MSHCP's scientific approach. Given the size and magnitude of the Plan, it is necessarily complex. The information is presented in as clear a manner as possible.

    J4-4 This comment lacks sufficient clarity and specificity that would afford a detailed response. See Response J4-3.

    J4-5 See Responses D-8, D-9, G-3, H2-85.

    J4-6 The Lead Agencies disagree with this comment. See Response J4-3. The relationship to cited references and conclusions in the MSHCP is provided in a clear and comprehensive fashion in the species accounts (Volume II) and in the description of the conservation planning process (Section 3, Volume I). See Responses G-10, H2-93 through H2-122 and N3-1 through N3-3. See also ScientificReview Panel Correspondence - Review of: Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003.

    J4-7 As noted in the Draft MSHCP, opportunities for Linkages within the Plan Area are limited based on existing development patterns. Reserve planning for the MSHCP included an evaluation of existing Linkage opportunities and analysis of their potential function, based on the best scientific and commercial data available. Such an approach is consistent with the NCCP tenets and with the principles of conservation biology, as noted in the literature cited and summarized in Section 3 of the Draft MSHCP, and the species accounts. The conclusory statement suggested by the commentor would require empirical data that is not currently available, and would likely not become available in the absence of a monitoring program, such as is proposed in the Draft MSHCP.

    The commentor implies that NEPA requires a finite scientific justification of each Linkage proposed in the MSHCP. This is simply not true. NEPA is a public disclosure document that requires a complete analysis of the environmental effects associated with a proposed action. The proposed action in this case is the MSHCP. The form and content of the MSHCP is not guided by NEPA, but by FESA and the NCCP Act. As noted by the commentor, the information standard for Permit issuance under FESA (which is similar to the standard for the NCCP Act) is the use of best scientific and commercial data available. This standard is met in the MSHCP. The environmental effects of establishing and implementing the MSHCP are analyzed completely in the EIR/EIS in accordance with NEPA and CEQA.

    J4-8 The commentor's review of scientific information contained in the MSHCP appears to be limited to the discussion of Cores and Linkages contained in Section 3.2.3 of the Plan and the references contained in Volume II, Part 1, Section D. The commentor fails to recognize the extensive and comprehensive analysis, compilation and summary of scientific information for each Covered Species contained in the species accounts (Volume II, Part 2). The purported missing information is contained in extensive detail in those species accounts. Specifically, the species accounts include identification of core populations, and an analysis of Conservation provided by the Plan, including an analysis of reserve configuration issues. These analyses lead to well supported conclusions relating to the Conservation of Covered Species. Additionally, the commentor misquotes language contained in Section 3.2.3. The commentor states that "if a planning species is listed for a given Core Area, based on the definition of a Planning Species on page 3-26, the species should 'have important or key populations located in the area'" (emphasis added). The actual language from page 3-26 states that "...the species may have important or key populations.." (emphasis added). The commentor then incorrectly draws the conclusion that "we must assume a conclusion has been drawn that the proposed Core 2 design...accommodates habitat adequate to accommodate a viable population of each species listed." The Planning Species are identified to provide guidance for Reserve Assembly, not as species for which population viability has been determined within the respective reserve component. The MSHCP does not use the term "viable" in the context of species population persistence, as Population Viability Analyses were not, and cannot be performed using the available data. See Responses G-10, H2-93 through H2-122 and N3-1 through N3-3. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of: Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003.

    J4-9 See Response J4-8. The Draft MSHCP proposes to conserve large blocks of suitable habitat for Bell's sage sparrow that were documented to be occupied by the species. Within the Proposed Core 2, there are current and accurate locations identified for Bell's sage sparrow in the MSHCP database. The acreage identified for Proposed Core 2 in the species account indicates the approximate size of the Proposed Core, not the total area of suitable Habitat for the species. It is never stated that all of the approximately 5,050 acres within Proposed Core 2 is suitable Habitat for this species.

    The analysis for Bell's sage sparrow does not assume Habitat that is subject to Edge Effects will be occupied (i.e., used for breeding and maintaining a territory). However, it is reasonable to assume that the species may use the edge affected areas of Proposed Core 2 as well as the more interior areas, and thus the edge may serve important functions for foraging and dispersal. Proposed Core 2 is intended to function for Bell's sage sparrow because it provides a wide movement area, has suitable habitat, is currently occupied with a number of reliable localities, and has areas that are not affected by edge (that is areas that are interior to the 200 to 300-meter edge referenced in the species account for this species). These features all provide "function" for the species in a number of life history requirements which may include movement, foraging, breeding, and dispersal.

    J4-10 The dimensions of Linkages, as well as all other components of the Additional Reserve Lands, are provided through interpretation of the Criteria as Development and Reserve Assembly proceed. Section 3 of the Draft MSHCP provides guidance for the assembly of Linkages, including Proposed Constrained Linkage 16, to ensure that the Additional Reserve Lands provide for the anticipated function of the Linkage. As noted, opportunities for assembly of Constrained Linkage 16 are limited, which affects the existing and proposed function of the Linkage. As noted, the function of such Linkages is and will continue to be impaired. Widths and lengths of linkages are specifically not proscribed in the MSHCP to allow flexibility in Reserve Assembly and to benefit from property-specific information anticipated to become available during the long-term MSHCP implementation process. Section 3.2.3 of the MSHCP does provide dimensional data including total acreage for each Core and Linkage as well as anticipated interior and edge acreages and perimeter to area ratios. This information is provided to guide Reserve Assembly and to provide an understanding of the expectations for the MSHCP Conservation Area. Anticipated planned land uses adjacent to each Core and Linkage are also summarized in Section 3.2.3.

    J4-11 Analysis and application of available scientific data suggests that inclusion of more Linkages, rather than less provides net benefits for Conservation of species. As an example, Soule (1990) notes the importance of maintaining movement opportunities for coyote as a control mechanism for meso-predators. Riley et.al.(2003, April) note the importance of linkages in fragmented areas for bobcats and coyotes. There is no current quantitative measure of this effect in data that are available. As noted in Response J4-7, sufficient scientific data that would demonstrate such functions and values of Proposed Constrained Linkages would require collection of empirical data that would not likely occur outside of the context of a regional resource planning effort, such as the MSHCP. It is generally accepted and reasonable to assume that planning based on extrapolation of the best scientific and commercial data available is better then allowing opportunities for Conservation to be permanently foreclosed. The reference to "population sinks" is confusing in the context of this comment. Typically population sinks occur due to the lack of connectivity. It is not clear what rationale the commentor uses to relate the concept of population sinks to efforts to improve connectivity. See Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of: Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003.

    J4-12 The commentor cites information from the Quino checkerspot butterfly Draft Recovery Plan in an attempt to demonstrate that features of the existing landscape in and around the Proposed Core 2 area create a population sink for the species. However, the commentor fails to note that the Draft Recovery Plan identifies the Warm Springs Creek and Skinner/Johnson habitat complexes (within the Proposed Core 2 area), as part of the Southwest Riverside Recovery Unit. Recovery Criteria in the Draft Recovery Plan include "permanently protect habitat patches supporting known extant population distributions (habitat complexes) and possible landscape connectivity areas among them." (emphasis added). As previously noted, the list of Planning Species includes species that may be provided benefits from the proposed reserve feature and is not meant to imply that the specific needs of any one of the Planning Species prescribed the need for the feature.

    J4-13 See Response J4-12. While the list of Planning Species for Proposed Constrained Linkage 17 includes Quino checkerspot butterfly as a species that could benefit from establishment of the Linkage, it is acknowledged that recovery efforts for the species may require management activities to improve habitat resources (see Response L4-38). One issuance criterion for an HCP is that "the taking will not appreciably reduce the likelihood of the survival and recovery of the species in the wild" (FESA Section10(a) (2)(B) (iv)). In this regard, exclusion of Proposed Constrained Linkage 17 could result in permanent foreclosure of some of the opportunities for Conservation of the species within the Proposed Core 2 area potentially affecting recovery of the species in the Plan Area.

    J4-14 See Responses J4-3 through J4-13.

    J4-15 See Responses J4-3 through J4-13.

    J4-16 See Responses J4-3 through J4-13.

    J4-17 See Responses J4-3 through J4-13.

    J4-18 See Response J4-5.

    J4-19 The MSHCP does provide a funding plan for land acquisition, Management, Monitoring, and Adaptive Management. The commentor appears to be proposing that the only funding plan that would meet the federal guidelines would be an alternative plan that would put the full cost of the MSHCP on the backs of new local Development. While the MSHCP could have followed that path, the stakeholders have always requested a plan that balances local, state, and federal funding sources. The MSHCP meets this objective. Out of the 153,000 acres of additional reserve land, the MSHCP will conserve 103,000 as mitigation land, comprised of 97,000 acres as the local mitigation component and 6,000 acres of mitigation land for State Permittees. The remaining 50,000 acres are a state and federal contribution to reflect their obligations under the MSHCP. It must be recognized that no public entity can make commitments outside of the annual appropriations process. Despite this requirement, local, State, and federal governments fund a wide variety of programs year after year that impact all of our lives and form the basis for much of our society. It is well within reason to expect the state and federal governments to meet their commitments over the life of the Plan. Should they not, the Local Permittees and Wildlife Agencies would evaluate alternatives, one of which could be to increase local funding. However, it would be highly speculative to base a funding plan on that scenario. It is perhaps informative to note that state and federal funds have already conserved over 3,940 acres since development of the MSHCP began.

    J4-20 The HANS Process was developed in cooperation with the stakeholders to address the need for assurances that landowners would be compensated for their lands and that acquisitions would occur within a reasonable timeframe. The MSHCP provides alternatives to Plan suspension should funding not meet demands. Additionally, Section 8.6 describes alternatives for Local Permittees should funding not keep pace with costs. A financing plan will also be developed by the Regional Conservation Authority to provide an additional alternative should a scenario such as that proposed by the commentor develops. The proposed scenario is not one of an overall funding shortfall, but rather one of timing. The timing issue is created by the desire to provide assurances to local land owners. The proposed scenario could also be avoided by placing a greater burden on the local property owner which is not the intent of the plan but could be interpreted as the type of solution the commentor is proposing. See Response I4-14.

    J4-21 The General Plan is not the subject of this EIR/EIS. The commentor is attempting to forward their position on issues related to the County's new General Plan concerning minimum lot size into a comment on the MSHCP. The New General Plan does not limit density but will provide a minimum lot size for detached single family lots. This provision will not void the Density Bonus Program or the ability to offer a density bonus in return for conservation consistent with the MSHCP since the densities of a development include product types other than detached single-family units.

    J4-22 The proposed management costs are based on projections of costs to manage 97,000 acres of locally conserved lands within the MSHCP Conservation Area. Existing public landowners will continue to manage their lands. Some of the lands may well cost more per acre to manage than others based on their proximity to urban development and edge effects among many other factors. Likewise, some lands will be more remote and subject to less urban interface and may result in minimal management costs.

    The commentor incorrectly characterizes the San Diego MSHCP as having a "far less extensive" management program than the MSHCP. The San Diego MSCP includes a framework MSCP with detailed Subarea Plans prepared and implemented by individual jurisdictions (Permittees). Section 6.1 of the framework MSCP calls for inclusion of detailed management plans in Subarea Plans addressing the following parameters: type and location of resources to be protected; sensitivity to disturbance of the species to be protected (similar to threats as identified for each Covered Species in Table 5-2 of the Draft MSHCP); type of vegetation and topography; type and intensity of land uses and cumulative impacts of a combination of uses; type and intensity of human activity adjacent to the preserve. Section 6.4.2 of the framework MSCP calls for a biological monitoring plan implementing the following objectives that are similar to the MSHCP: document ecological trends; evaluate the effectiveness of management activities; provide new data on species populations and wildlife movement; evaluate the indirect impacts of land uses and construction. Similar to the MSHCP, the framework MSCP also calls for preparation and distribution of annual reports documenting management and monitoring efforts and providing an annual accounting of habitat acreage.

    J4-23 See Responses J4-19 to J4-22. The MSHCP and IA were developed in consultation with the Wildlife Agencies to meet all the requirements for issuance of the Permit.

    J4-24 This comment purports to interpret state and federal law. The Lead Agencies do not agree with the conclusions of the commentor.

    J4-25 As required by both CEQA and NEPA, the Draft EIR/EIS discusses a range of reasonable alternatives in detail in Section 2. (14 Cal. Code Regs., § 15126(a); 40 CFR § 1502.14.) The alternatives analysis in the Draft EIR/EIS is supported by substantial evidence in the record. A wide range of potentially feasible alternatives was considered. A Description of Preliminary Alternatives, including numerous suggestions from stakeholders and landowners was distributed in February 2000. The selection of alternatives for the Draft EIR/EIS is discussed in detail in the Alternatives Screening Document (Appendix B). The Alternatives analyzed in the Draft EIR/EIS are the Proposed MSHCP; the Listed, Proposed and Strong Candidate Species Alternative; the Listed and Proposed Species Alterative; the Existing Reserves Alternative; and the No Project Alternative. Since one of the project objectives identified in Section 1.0 of the Draft EIR/EIS is to conserve habitat and species, the alternatives include protection for both habitat and species. The Lead Agencies concluded that alternatives that resulted in Conservation of fewer species were infeasible for economic and other reasons, conflicted with the Project Objectives and would not avoid or substantially lessen the Project's significant environmental impacts. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 2.2-1.) See Responses D-63 through D-65, F-110, H2-18, and H2-331 through H2-337.

    J4-26 The Lead Agencies disagree with the statement that there was no meaningful consideration of alternative strategies. Most EIRs are written contemplating the implementation of a particular project. The EIR is required to contain a range of reasonable alternatives to a proposed project. (State CEQA Guidelines, § 15126.6.) The alternatives selected for consideration must meet most of the project objectives and be capable of avoiding or substantially lessening any significant effects of the project, even if these alternatives would impede to some degree the attainment of the project objectives, or would be more costly. (Ibid.) See Responses G-6, G-15 through G-17, G23, G-33, R-18 through R-20, R-25 and R-34.

    The process described above does not prohibit the preparation of an EIR for a proposed project. When the Supervisors instructed County Staff to design the MSHCP in accordance with the Cores and Linkages type of conservation system, they were providing Staff with a framework for analysis. This in no way taints the County's analysis of the impacts for the other alternatives or commits the County to approving the MSHCP as currently envisioned any more than any other CEQA document that analyzes a proposed project. The selection of alternatives for the Draft EIR/EIS is fully discussed in detail in the Alternatives Screening Document (Appendix B). The Alternatives analyzed in the Draft EIR/EIS include the Proposed MSHCP; the Listed, Proposed and Strong Candidate Species Alternative; the Listed and Proposed Species Alterative; the Existing Reserves Alternative; and the No Project Alternative. Both the Existing Reserves Alternative and the No Project Alternative discuss alternatives to the proposed core-linkage plan.

    As required by CEQA, the Draft EIR/EIS discusses a range of reasonable alternatives in detail in Section 2. (State CEQA Guidelines, § 15126(a).) As more thoroughly explained in Responses H2-93 through H2-122, the discussion of alternatives is based upon the best available scientific and commercial data. The range of alternatives considered was based on their feasibility, taking into account biological, land use, economic, regulatory, legal, and other considerations; their ability to reduce or avoid the MSHCP's significant environmental impacts; and their consistency with the objectives identified in Section 1.0 of the Draft EIR/EIS. See Response M-113.

    The Lead Agencies believe that the proposed MSHCP will adequately support Covered Species. The MSHCP and the EIR/EIS provide substantial biological and other information to support the protection of Covered Species. As set forth in Response D-6, the MSHCP is not required to demonstrate that it will lead to the recovery of all Covered Species. Nevertheless, the Plan has been formulated to provide mitigation and acquisition of habitat for Covered Species to the maximum extent practicable.

    See Responses J4-19 through J4-23.

    J4-27 See the complete Responses to Comment Letter L4.

    J4-28 As explained above in Response J4-24, the evaluation of alternatives according to NEPA is governed by the "rule of reason." Accordingly, CEQ Regulation 1502.14(c) only requires that the EIS include "reasonable alternatives" not within the jurisdictions of the Lead Agencies. As more thoroughly explained in Responses H2-93 through H2-122, the discussion of alternatives is based upon the best available scientific and commercial data. The range of alternatives considered was based on their feasibility, taking into account biological, land use, economic, regulatory, legal, and other considerations; their ability to reduce or avoid the MSHCP's significant environmental impacts; and their consistency with the objectives identified in Section 1.0 of the Draft EIR/EIS. One of the primary objectives of the MSHCP is to "[p]rovide incidental take authorization for the transportation, infrastructure, housing and employment base needed to accommodate projected growth in western Riverside County." (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 1.2-4.) See Response M-113.

    It is not reasonable, nor does it meet project objectives, to consider an alternative outside the jurisdiction of the Lead Agencies and therefore outside western Riverside County. Such an alternative may provide benefits in another jurisdiction, but it would not "provide incidental Take Authorization for the transportation, infrastructure, housing and employment base needed to accommodate projected growth in western Riverside County." Moreover, such an alternative would be infeasible for several reasons, not the least of which is that the County, Cities and other Permittees would not have any control over land use decisions outside their jurisdictions. Accordingly, the Draft EIR/EIS properly does not consider alternative locations.

    J4-29 See Response J4-7. A wide range of potentially feasible alternatives was considered in the Draft EIR/EIS, including several alternatives that differed from the proposed core-linkage plan. (See Draft EIR/EIS, § 2.0.) A Description of Preliminary Alternatives, including numerous suggestions from stakeholders and landowners was distributed in February 2000. The selection of alternatives for the Draft EIR/EIS is discussed in detail in the Alternatives Screening Document (Draft EIR/EIS, Appendix B). The Alternatives analyzed in the Draft EIR/EIS include the Proposed MSHCP; the Listed, Proposed and Strong Candidate Species Alternative; the Listed and Proposed Species Alterative; the Existing Reserves Alternative; and the No Project Alternative. Both the Existing Reserves Alternative and the No Project Alternative provide alternatives to the proposed core-linkage plan. (Draft EIR/EIS, § 2.7)

    USFWS regulations and the Section 10 HCP Handbook encourage the alternatives analysis in an HCP, and in the accompanying NEPA document, to be reasonable and manageable in terms of number of alternatives analyzed. The Handbook states: "For some HCPs, several alternatives may have been considered during project development. Each should be discussed in the 'Alternatives Analyzed' section; or, where they are too numerous, the principal ones should be discussed." (Section 10 Handbook, p. 3-35; see also p. 5-5 ("CEQA regulations encourage agencies to focus on the purpose of the NEPA process: making better decisions. Amassing needlessdetail is discouraged.")) However, USFWS does not have "the authority to impose a choice among the alternatives analyzed in the HCP." (Draft MSHCP, p. 3-36.) Thus, the comment's suggestion that the MSHCP must develop and evaluate conservation alternatives for the numerous subunits addressed in the MSHCP is unnecessary and an incorrect statement of FESA requirements.

    Also, local land use authority will not be compromised by implementation of the MSHCP. (See Response H2-40; MSHCP, § 6.2.2.)

    See also Response I4-18.

    J4-30 It is clearly noted in the Draft MSHCP that flexibility in implementing the Criteria varies depending on the resources sought for Conservation, reserve configuration considerations and constraints posed by existing Development. The example given applies to a Cell within Proposed Constrained Linkage 17. As noted in the Draft MSHCP and throughout the responses to this comment, Proposed Constrained Linkage 17 offers little flexibility in its assembly because of the lack of remaining resources. Development within all of the Cells have some flexibility through Criteria interpretation and ranges of conservation acreages.

    J4-31 See Responses J4-29 and J4-30.

    J4-32 The selection of alternatives for the Draft EIR/EIS is fully discussed and presented in a comparative format in the Alternatives Screening Document (Appendix B). While the Draft EIR/EIS does compare the alternatives in terms of their conservation benefits and effectiveness, it also discusses and compares each alternative with respect to impacts on biological resources (§ 4.1.4), agricultural and extractive resources (§ 4.2.1), population, housing and employments (§ 4.3.3), public services (§ 4.4.3), and transportation and circulation (§ 4.5.3). The specific geographic formation of the MSHCP Conservation Area is not currently known and is not necessary for a meaningful comparison of alternatives. (See Response J4-33.) Flexibility is essential to the MSHCP Conservation Area to enable new information and data to be incorporated as part of the long-term MSHCP implementation process; accordingly, because of the scope and size of the MSHCP it is too speculative at this time to identify with any certainty the specific boundaries of the proposed MSHCP Conservation Area. See Responses H2-3, H2-11, H243, H2-85, H2-86, and J4-33. Therefore, there is no hardline map of the MSHCP Conservation Area, nor can there be at this time. Lead Agencies are not withholding "the map behind the plan" as the commentor suggests.

    J4-33 The analysis of alternatives in the Draft EIR/EIS and in Appendix B contains sufficient information about the alternatives to allow a reasoned evaluation of the relative merits

    of each alternative and the MSHCP. (See Draft EIR/EIS, §§ 2.4 - 2.8.). Impacts relating to each alternative were evaluated with the same degree of detail as for the MSHCP, and are discussed in the same sections in the EIR/EIS as the MSHCP. The analysis for each alternative depended on the acres of varying vegetation communities to be conserved, which species were considered Covered Species, and the rough distribution of the conserved acreage throughout the Plan Area. This information is provided in Section 2 of the Draft EIR/EIS in the form of tables and maps for the MSHCP and for all of the alternatives.

    Flexibility is essential to the MSHCP Conservation Area to enable new information and data to be incorporated as part of the long-term MSHCP implementation process; accordingly, because of the scope and size of the MSHCP it is too speculative at this time to identify with any certainty the specific boundaries of the proposed MSHCP Conservation Area. See Responses H2-3, H2-11, H2-43, H2-85, and H2-86. Since it is entirely too speculative at this point to identify the precise boundaries of the proposed MSHCP Conservation Area, it is not possible to provide exact maps that can be used to identify site-specific and species-specific impacts from edge effects and fragmentation. Similarly, since the exact boundaries of the MSHCP Conservation Area and the location and type of future Development are unknown, the project description cannot provide exact information regarding the nature of Development adjacent to the MSHCP Conservation Area. Similarly, the exact boundaries of the Listed, Proposed, and Strong Candidate Species Alternative and the Listed and Proposed Species Alternative cannot be determined at this time; accordingly, the descriptions for these alternatives cannot address the nature of unknown future Development adjacent to their unknown boundaries. However, these two alternatives are generally depicted in Figures 2.6 and 2.7 and the Existing Reserve Alternative can be defined and is presented in map form (see Figure 2.8 in the Draft EIR/EIS). These figures can be compared with the proposed MSHCP and Figure 2.1, depicting existing land uses.

    The most relevant, up-to-date biological information has been used in preparing the MSHCP (See Responses H2-231 and M-103.).

    However, NEPA requires presentation of environmental effects in a comparative form, and does not require comparable mapping standards. An equivalent comparison of alternatives is afforded through acreage comparisons and narrative discussion of environmental effects in the Draft EIR/EIS.

    J4-34 As is set forth in Section 4.2.1 of the MSHCP, existing federal and state lands (including those managed by the U.S. Forest Service, the Bureau of Land Management, and the

    United States Army Corps of Engineers as mentioned by this comment) will contribute to the Conservation of Covered Species simply by virtue of their continued existence as reserve lands. Furthermore, through the MSHCP and its IA with the participating jurisdictions and special districts, the federal and state governments have agreed to partner with the participating local jurisdictions and the private sector in assembling, managing, and monitoring the MSHCP Conservation Area. (See Draft MSHCP p. 4-8.) However, Public/Quasi-Public property will continue to be managed by the owners of those lands. (See Draft MSHCP p. 4-13.) The Lead Agencies do not believe this will effect the conservation goals of the MSHCP since those lands will not be used for mitigation. The Permittees also intend to enter into a Memorandum of Understanding so that existing reserve areas can be managed in a cooperative fashion to ensure maximum benefit to species and habitat. (See Responses K-45, N-2 and N-3.) The RMOC will resolve any conflicts between new and existing management plans. See Response K-47.

    Consistent with existing law, federal and state agencies have agreed to mitigate any impacts of their projects within the MSHCP Plan Area through the purchase and/or protection of habitat within the Criteria Area. (See Draft MSHCP p. 4-12.) Examples given of such projects include federal and state highways and off-road vehicle recreation areas. (See Draft MSHCP p. 4-12.). It is also important to note that existing reserve land will not be used for mitigation purposes.

    J4-35 See Responses J4-1 through J4-34.

    Comment Letter K

    Comment Letter K - BIA, 15 January 2003

    K-1 Responses to the specific comments referenced in this letter are provided in Responses K-3 through K-152. See Response D-1 regarding the extension of the comment period.

    K-2 See Responses D-10, D-17, G-7, G-8, G-10 and G-12 for discussion of use of the best scientific and commercial data available in development of the MSHCP and designation of the Criteria Area as the focus area from which Additional Reserve Lands will be assembled. Data available to date indicate that the Criteria Area appropriately encompasses lands from which to assemble Additional Reserve Lands.

    K-3 The Lead Agencies disagree with this comment's assertion that the extent and location of the Criteria Area is "arbitrary." As discussed in Section 3.1.3 of the MSHCP, the biological and physical databases used to compile the Criteria for each Cell of the MSHCP were based on the best available scientific information. Additionally, these databases were augmented by literature reviews, data gathered from a variety of sources including workshops with local biologists and representatives from numerous institutions and organizations, and meetings and extensive consultations with representatives from the USFWS and CDFG. The Criteria based plan provides exactly the flexibility that is requested by the commentor. The Additional Reserve Lands will only comprise approximately 50% of the 310,000 acres included in the Criteria Area. Thus, there is inherent flexibility for Reserve Assembly. The large amount of documented and scientifically reliable information discussed, referenced and included in the MSHCP and Draft EIR/EIS demonstrates that the development of the Criteria Area was not "arbitrary." See also Response D-9.

    K-4 The MSHCP's success requires the cooperation of the County and fourteen participating Cities to ensure comprehensive and coordinated implementation. To ensure consistency in the implementation of the MSHCP, the Plan utilizes an organizational structure for implementation and management ("Cooperative Organizational Structure"). The Cooperative Organizational Structure and the Implementation Agreement establish the conditions under which the County and Cities will receive Take Authorization from the USFWS and the CDFG and other assurances that will allow the taking of Covered Species incidental to lawful uses authorized by the County and Cities. The RCA will provide the primary policy direction for the implementation of the Plan. Specifically, the RCA shall be responsible for coordinating implementation of the Plan by Permittees and the Wildlife Agencies, and is in the best position to ensure consistent application of the MSHCP terms and conditions. Given that many stakeholders have insisted that local control remain with the Local Permittees, imposing any greater restrictions on the County and the Cities could restrict such local control. In fact, representatives of the BIA have consistently insisted that local land use control to remain with the County and Cities. The Cooperative Organizational Structure is fully described in Section 6.6 of the Plan.

    Further, Permittees are required to comply with, and implement the terms of, the MSHCP and to incorporate these terms and conditions into their general plans and land use ordinances, as necessary. If a Permittee fails to comply with the MSHCP, the IA or the Permits, the Permittee's Take Authorization will be jeopardized and possibly revoked or suspended. To provide additional oversight to ensure that the requirements of the MSHCP and the IA are properly met, a joint project/acquisition review process shall be instituted by the RCA. See Response H2-36.

    K-5 The County and the majority of the Cities will implement the HANS process. The Lead Agencies do not believe it is warranted, appropriate nor feasible to force a municipality into implementing the HANS process, although agrees that a uniform adoption of HANS would be preferable. See Response K-4.

    K-6 The RCA will prepare a users guide to assist in the Permittees' implementation of the Plan. The RCA will incorporate the commentor's suggestions into the guide.

    K-7 See Response D-17, regarding the use of best scientific and commercial data available. The Draft MSHCP and Draft EIR/EIS consider a reasonable range of alternatives. In addition, Criteria included in the MSHCP offer considerable flexibility in Reserve Assembly. The Conceptual Reserve Design was merely one way that Reserve Assembly could be accomplished and does not lock in any particular reserve design. See Responses K-8, H2-18, H2-90 and H2-331 through H2-334.

    K-8 As described in Section 3.2.1 of the Plan, a possible MSHCP Conservation Area design was used to identify target conservation acreage and generate quantitative data for the MSHCP biological analyses. The Conceptual Reserve Design however was merely an analytical tool intended to describe one possible way in which the MSHCP Conservation Area could be configured. It does not represent the only possible MSHCP Conservation Area that could be assembled consistent with the MSHCP Criteria. Flexibility is essential to the MSHCP Conservation Area to enable new information and data to be incorporated as part of the long-term MSHCP implementation process. See Responses H2-3, H2-11, H2-43, H2-85, and H2-86.

    K-9 As signatories to the IA, the USFWS and the CDFG have obligations under the Plan. Clearly neither agency can bind Congress or the State Legislature to future funding allocations. The Wildlife Agencies have already committed approximately $55 million and acquired approximately 3,800 acres.

    The funding plan utilizes a variety of funding sources and implementation strategies. It also identifies other potential sources of funding that could contribute to the implementation of the Plan. Additionally, the Plan acknowledges that both funding estimates and projects of implementation costs will change over time. The Plan calls for periodic reviews and updating of the assumptions based on then current information. Lastly, the Plan in Section 8.6 identifies responses to changes in funding circumstances that could impact either revenues or costs or both.

    K-10 The Plan acknowledges that under California law, imposition of mitigation fees require the completion of a nexus study prior to a local jurisdiction's adoption of a mitigation fee. The amount of the fee will ultimately be justified by the nexus study. Should a fee lower than identified in the Plan be implemented, the Local Permittees remain responsible to revise the funding plan to assure local funding obligations.

    K-11 The funding plan assumes an annual % of the total lands will be acquired. The assumptions are that a higher percent of acquisitions will occur in the early years of plan implementation. The spreadsheet in Appendix B-O5 of the Plan provides the assumptions utilized and a cash flow showing both costs and revenue projections by year for the 75-year life of the Permit. Utilizing the commentor's example, the Plan anticipates over $270 million in revenues over the first 5 years from local sources. In addition to these revenues, State and Federal funding will be available to support acquisitions.

    The Plan recognizes that there could be cash flow issues, and the Plan addresses these issues by calling for the RCA to develop a financing mechanism to leverage future income to meet current demands. Lastly, the Plan identifies alternatives for the Permittees to take should revenues not be sufficient or costs increase faster than revenues. See Section 8.6 of the Plan.

    K-12 Section 8.6 of the Plan addresses the Local Permittees' response to changes in funding circumstances. The Permittees have an obligation to fund the Plan and can look to all available sources to accomplish this or can voluntarily withdraw from the Permit. If the

    Wildlife Agencies do not live up to their obligations under the Plan, withdrawal from the Permit is always an option. See also Response K-8.

    K-13 The MSHCP provides a process under which the Permittees and Third Parties receiving Take Authorization will be able to fully comply with FESA requirements for Covered Species, including the Section 7 federal agency obligation that there be no adverse effects to Critical Habitat, provided MSHCP consistency and other requirements are satisfied. As noted in the comment, Section 14.10 of the IA states:

    "The MSHCP and this Agreement provide for the protection of 'those physical and biological features essential to the conservation' of the Covered Species in a manner consistent with USFWS regulations concerning the designation of critical habitat. The USFWS agrees that, except as expressly provided in Section 14.12 of this Agreement and Section 6.8 of the MSHCP regarding Unforeseen Circumstances and to the maximum extent allowable after public review and comment, in the event that a critical habitat determination is made for any Covered Species, and unless the USFWS finds that the MSHCP is not being implemented, lands within the boundaries of the MSHCP will not be designated as critical habitat, and no subsequent evaluation of the Covered Species, nor any mitigation, compensation, conservation enhancement or other protective measures other than those set forth in the MSHCP will be required. Moreover, to the maximum extent allowable after public review and comment, the USFWS agrees to reassess and revise the boundaries of existing designated and proposed critical habitat of Covered Species within the MSHCP boundaries after its approval, although the Parties recognize that funding constraints may influence the timing of such regulatory action."

    Based upon the above, the Lead Agencies disagree with the commentor's suggestion that the Service will have a "second bite at the apple" by being able to "exact additional conservation measures." To the contrary, applicants will be provided FESA coverage to the maximum extent allowed by law, provided the requirements of the MSHCP are met. See Response H2-165.

    K-14 As noted in Section 6.1.4 of the MSHCP, the primary mechanism for implementing the guidelines related to Riparian and Riverine Areas, and Vernal Pools is the existing CEQA process. It should be noted that while the 404 and 1600 processes have the potential to provide benefits to Covered Species, additional measures, as currently implemented through CEQA, are necessary to provide the level of Conservation of Covered Species associated with Riparian and Riverine Areas, and Vernal Pools sufficient to meet the requirements for coverage outlined in the MSHCP. The commentor is correct in stating that project applicant will need to pursue 404 and 1600 permits separately, as those permits are authorized under different laws and do not authorize Take under FESA, CESA and the NCCP Act.

    K-15 The MSHCP does not represent an expansion of the local jurisdictions' obligations under CEQA. Instead, Section 6.1.2 describes the process through which protection of riparian/riverine areas and vernal pools will occur within the MSHCP Plan Area by avoiding significant impacts. Specifically, the MSHCP will have a significant impact if it has a substantial adverse effect on any wetlands or other sensitive natural vegetation or community identified in local or regional plans, policies, or regulations or by the Wildlife Agencies. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 4.1-11; see also State CEQA Guidelines, Appendix G.)

    As a required mitigation measure, an avoidance analysis must be conducted in order to determine whether an action should be avoided in order to minimize impacts. Under State CEQA Guidelines section 15370, mitigation includes "avoiding the impact altogether by not taking a certain action or parts of an action."As projects are proposed, an assessment of the potentially significant effects of those projects on riparian/riverine areas, and vernal pools will be performed as under then-applicable CEQA standards using available information augmented by project-specific mapping. Information necessary for the assessment includes identification and mapping of riparian/riverine areas and vernal pools and will consider species composition, topography/hydrology, and soil analysis, where appropriate. The assessment may be completed as part of the CEQA review process, as explained in the State CEQA Guidelines section 15060 et seq. (MSHCP, p. 6-21.) Accordingly, it is unclear why the commentor believes that the process will exceed CEQA requirements or rob the County or Cities of their discretion. There is no intent to elevate wetlands issues above other impacts considered under CEQA, nor limit any local jurisdiction's ability to determine impact significance or select project alternatives. Instead, consistency determinations are to be made in order to comply with FESA, NCCP Act, CEQA and NEPA requirements. Additionally, other state and federal regulations relating to such waters continue to be applicable. See Response H2-199.

    K-16 See Section 14.9 of the IA with regard to future Section 7 consultations. See Responses K-14, K-15 and K-17. The Biologically Equivalent or Superior Determination is made by the Permittee, not the Wildlife Agencies.

    K-17 The purpose of the Special Area Management Plan (SAMP) is to provide 404 permit coverage under the Clean Water Act for private and public development projects through a streamlined process. The MSHCP does not require local government to act as "wetland regulators." It does, however, provide Take Authorization for listed species that inhabit riparian/riverine areas and vernal pools. These areas may include wetlands. The Lead Agencies agree that any wetlands conserved through the MSHCP should be credited in the SAMP process.

    The Local Permittees anticipate that the MSHCP will provide much of the mitigation called for under the SAMP. Any additional mitigation called for under the SAMP permits would build on the MSHCP Conservation Area. The actual process for mitigating under the SAMP is not well defined at this time. The courts have found that an HCP cannot defer mitigation to other regulatory processes. Therefore, the MSHCP implements mitigation measures consistent with existing state and federal regulations.

    K-18 A definition of MSHCP Conservation Area is provided in the Definitions section of the Draft MSHCP.

    K-19 The information requested in the first sentence of this comment can be found in the Introduction to the Draft MSHCP, Section 1.0. Language will be added to Section 3.0 of the MSHCP to provide clarification regarding implementation of Area Plan Criteria.

    K-20 Consideration of the principles of conservation biology is clearly evident throughout Section 3 of the Draft MSHCP. Section 3.1 describes the conservation planning process in explicit detail. Section 3.2.2 provides detail on the specific analysis factors related to the applicable conservation biology principles. Section 3.2.3 then describes how the features of the MSHCP Conservation Area incorporate the analysis factors in consideration of the applicable conservation biology principles. The process used to develop the Conceptual Conservation Scenario is described in considerable detail in Section 3.1.6 of the Draft MSHCP.

    K-21 For clarification purposes, a footnote explaining the difference between the approximately 159,000 acres and the approximately 153,000 acres, similar to the note contained in Table 3-2, will be added to Table 3-1. The approximately 159,000 acres includes approximately 6,000 acres of roads and trails that occur within areas proposed for Conservation, but that ultimately will be excluded from the Additional Reserve Lands as Reserve Assembly proceeds.

    K-22 The specific function and purpose of each of the Linkages is described in detail in Section 3.2.3 of the Draft MSHCP. The descriptions of the individual Linkages provided in Section 3.2.3 indicate the unique wildlife movement and/or habitat Linkage function of each Linkage and provide specific information regarding the types of habitats and species that are associated with each individual Linkage.

    K-23 Existing Core D will not require any resources to be expended for acquisition, as the lands comprising Existing Core D are existing Public/Quasi-Public Lands. As noted in the Draft MSHCP, Existing Core D will require management for Edge Effects and considerations provided through the Urban/Wildland Interface Guidelines due to the size and configuration of the Core. However, the Core is considered to be a viable reserve component and management of the Core is within the scope of the anticipated management efforts for the MSHCP.

    K-24 Existing Constrained Linkage B will not require any resources to be expended for acquisition, as the lands comprising Existing Constrained Linkage B are existing Public/Quasi-Public Lands. As noted in the Draft MSHCP, Existing Constrained Linkage B will require management for Edge Effects due to its configuration, however, its importance to Narrow Endemic Plant Species is also noted. Management of the Existing Constrained Linkage B is considered to be within the scope of the anticipated management efforts for the MSHCP.

    K-25 The Lead Agencies believe the Cell Criteria will be feasible and an effective method for Reserve Assembly. In fact, the interim project review process currently implemented by the County indicates that application of the Criteria is workable in reviewing individual project applications. As discussed in Response F-8, the Conceptual Reserve Design is intended to describe one possible configuration of the MSHCP Conservation Area that is consistent with the Plan.

    K-26 The target acreages for each of the Area Plans are broken down by Area Plan Subunit and are presented in Table 3-2 of the Draft MSHCP in the form of a range of acres. It is anticipated that Reserve Assembly will yield Conservation within these ranges.

    K-27 Upon completion of Reserve Assembly, the Criteria would no longer be applied.

    K-28 The Criteria Refinement process, in Section 6.5 of the Plan, is available to address the scenarios raised in the comment. Given the flexibility inherent in the large Criteria Area, such situations can be addressed without adversely impacting Reserve Assembly.

    K-29 The Final MSHCP Section 4.0 includes language in response to this comment.

    K-30 The key number is that local mitigation will be 97,000 acres to mitigate the impacts of local new development. The mix of local funding sources is difficult to break out since new private development contributes to many funding sources beyond the mitigation fee. The commentor is correct in that sales taxes, transportation mitigation fees, landfill tipping fees, and other funding sources all have some contribution from "new development."

    K-31 Each local jurisdiction will sign the IA and be bound by it. The IA identifies how each jurisdiction intends to implement the MSHCP.

    K-32 Section 4.6.1 of the MSHCP identifies existing private conservation banks and mitigation areas and provides direction on their conservation. The Plan acknowledges the importance of these areas in Reserve Assembly. The HANS process offers an opportunity for these areas to be acquired.

    K-33 A specific definition for the term self-sustaining is not considered to be necessary, since the meaning of the term is self-evident, and since the term is not used in the context within which a specific definition is warranted.

    K-34 As noted in the Draft MSHCP, Section 5.2, management activities within the MSHCP Conservation Area will reflect an emphasis on maintaining and/or improving habitat conditions and ecosystem functions. It is acknowledged that certain species will require more intensive management than others. The Management and Monitoring Program for the MSHCP will address overall needs of the MSHCP Conservation Area as a whole as noted in General Management Measures in Section 5.2.1.

    K-35 This comment appears to imply that species-specific monitoring activities would conflict with, or direct resources away from general management activities. The Draft MSHCP identifies both monitoring and management as necessary elements of the Management and Monitoring Program. It is not anticipated that monitoring species status would preclude any of the anticipated management requirements. In fact, the results of monitoring are proposed to be used to determine the appropriate management activities. Therefore, the apparent concern expressed in the question: "Will species-specific monitoring be emphasized over broader activities that would address the health of the preserve as a whole" is not well founded.

    K-36 As noted in the Draft MSHCP, for a large number of Covered Species, a multi-species, community approach will be used for monitoring. To the extent that ecosystem state transitions (conversion of one habitat type to another) are noted through this monitoring effort, and are determined to have potentially adverse consequences for Covered Species, management efforts will be directed at addressing issues relevant to habitat type conversions. General Management Measure 9 and Table 5-1 of the Draft MSHCP provide specific detail regarding the proposed responses to ecosystem state transitions.

    K-37 Pursuant to Section 5.0 of the Plan, management activities will be implemented through the Reserve Managers and the RMOC. The RCA will have oversight over Plan implementation and will be responsible for resolving any conflicts between various management activities.

    K-38 As stated under General Management Measure 8 in the Draft MSHCP, the 75% threshold may be modified by the RMOC to reflect species specific triggers as new data are collected over time.

    K-39 Table 5-1 describes responses to existing or new conditions that can reasonably be anticipated to occur during the life of the Permit.

    K-40 As stated in the General Management Measure 9, contained in Section 5.2.1 of the Draft MSHCP, the factors listed in Table 5-1 are not intended to prescribe management activities, but to provide a list of considerations for Reserve Managers to consider in determining an action that is appropriate to each individual circumstance.

    K-41 A model was not used to develop the range of activities identified in Table 5.2. Instead, literature and information from various scientists and land managers were used. The Lead Agencies are not aware of a "model" available for management activities.

    K-42 It is not clear what issue this comment is intended to address. There are no population target levels identified in General Management Measure 9. See the species accounts, which establish species specific conservation objectives.

    K-43 The RCA will coordinate the activities of and work in conjunction with the RMOC and Reserve Managers in carrying out the management activities set forth in Table 5.2 of the Plan. Thus, Reserve Managers are not acting in a vacuum; rather, they are acting under the MSHCP Cooperative Organizational Structure that will ensure successful coordination. Moreover, the Plan provides precise guidelines to address the issues raised in the comment, such as maintaining occupancy, buffering species from adjacent uses, and imposing water quality. (See, e.g., MSHCP, Section 6.1.2 [protection of species associated with riparian/riverine areas and vernal pools]; Section 6.1.4 [Guidelines pertaining to the Urban/Wildlands Interface, including drainage].) Reserve Managers would not be responsible for activities outside his/her designated area.

    K-44 The comment disregards the fact that the RCA is the umbrella implementation body for the Plan and that the RMOC will act as the intermediary between the "on the ground" conservation/adaptive management activities conducted by Reserve Managers and the RCA. (See Draft MSHCP, p. 6-83.) Significantly, the RMOC will be comprised not only of local agencies, but also the Wildlife Agencies, BLM, USFS, DPR, and certain designated representatives from other entities that own and/or manage land within the MSHCP Conservation Area. The RCA will ensure a coordinated and efficient conservation and management strategy through overseeing the implementation of the MSHCP Management and Monitoring Program, monitoring budgets and reporting, and taking on the other oversight functions set forth in Section 6.6.4 of the MSHCP. Thus, reserve management will be coordinated in a comprehensive fashion. (See Draft MSHCP, p. 6-84.) Non-Permittees that own and/or manage property will be asked to sign an MOU agreeing to manage the property pursuant to the Plan, thereby ensuring compliance. The actual details of the annual work plans will be developed after permit issuance, with oversight and consistency provided by the RCA.

    K-45 Management and monitoring will occur throughout the MSHCP Conservation Area (see MSHCP, § 5.0). The Lead Agencies agree with the commentor that such coordinated monitoring is vital for the success of the Plan. Each agency that owns property within the MSHCP Conservation Area will have the ultimate responsibility for managing its respective property. (See Draft MSHCP, pp. 5-40 et seq., 6-84.) However, the RCA will have an oversight function with respect to implementing the management components of the Plan. Thus, management plans will be coordinated. (See also Response K-44.)

    In addition, the Permittees intend to enter into MOUs with non-Permittees that manage existing conservation lands within the Plan Area, including the Metropolitan Water District of Southern California and others, even if those entities elect not to directly participate in the MSHCP. The financing for management is described in Section 8.8 of the Plan. See Responses K-94 and K-95.

    K-46 The MSHCP Management and Monitoring Program does not require or propose Population Viability Analyses. The Draft MSHCP clearly identifies how management activities relate to both individual species requirements and overall reserve management by indicating the appropriate General Management Measures, species-specific management activities, species group designations and key management units within which management for the species is required. See Responses K-35 and K-37.

    K-47 Management plans will be prepared by the Reserve Managers. (Draft MSHCP, p. 5-36 and 6-86.) The RMOC will oversee and direct implementation of the management plans. (Draft MSHCP, p. 6-84.) The RMOC will resolve conflicts between new and existing management plans. See also Responses K-44 and K-45.

    K-48 Section 5.0 of the MSHCP provides a detailed discussion of the proposed Management and Monitoring Program which is specifically tailored to meet the needs of each individual species, and provides a more detailed and measurable approach to ensure appropriate management will be carried out for all of the Covered Species than the referenced "indicator species" approach.

    K-49 The Monitoring Program will be overseen by the RCA. More specifically, the RMOC and the RCA Executive Director will be responsible for assuring that the program stays within budget and meets the monitoring obligations of the Plan.

    K-50 Monitoring costs are accounted for in the Funding Plan. Monitoring costs will be shared by the Signatories to the IA and other entities owning and managing lands in the MSHCP Conservation Area. The RCA may allocate funding to facilitate the overall monitoring program for the reserve. See Responses K-9, K-11 and K-12 for responses on adequacy of funding.

    K-51 Funding for Management, Monitoring and Adaptive Management is based on current dollars. Adjustments for inflation will occur. Management, monitoring and adaptive management obligations for the Local Permittees are provided in Section 11.0, 13.0 and 27.11 of the IA.

    K-52 The IA specifically states that if a City wishes to benefit from the MSHCP's Take Authorization, it will have to ensure that there are no General Plan or Area Plan inconsistencies that conflict with the provisions of the IA. As such, the IA states, in Section 13.2(A) that the Cities have the obligation to "amend their general plans as appropriate" to effectuate the IA and fulfill the requirements of the Plan. The MSHCP at Section 6.1 provides further assurance that the Plan will be consistent with the general plan of each City. It does so by requiring the Cities to adopt a resolution or an ordinance establishing procedures and requirements for the implementation of the Plan's terms and conditions. These requirements are also included in the Draft EIR/EIS in Table 1A on page 1.4-1. See Responses A-13 and N-26.

    K-53 See Responses A-12 and K-5. The Cities have been active participants in the development of the MSHCP and the IA. Certain Cities do not believe it would be appropriate to adopt the HANS process for their individual jurisdictions. At the time the documents go before the City Councils for approval, stakeholders and other interested parties may provide written and oral testimony. Therefore, there will be the opportunity for "disclosure and public discussion".

    K-54 Incentive programs are intended to be refined by the Local Permittees to accomplish the objectives of the Plan. It is important that the incentive program be flexible and easy to modify as conditions change or as enhancements are proposed. The incentives offered by each jurisdiction will vary depending on their General Plans and on what works in their local jurisdiction. Developing implementation guidelines and working with local jurisdictions on incentive programs will be a responsibility of the RCA.

    K-55 The Lead Agencies agree that one of the most important streamlining benefits of the MSHCP is the unified plan for addressing biological impacts of Development. It is the intent of the MSHCP to provide full mitigation for Covered Species under both CEQA and NEPA, as well as FESA and the NCCP Act to the maximum extent allowed by law. However, the MSHCP cannot provide mitigation for projects regulated by entities or agencies not participating in the MSHCP. The agreements with the USFWS referenced at the bottom of page 6-3 of the MSHCP refer to any existing agreements, such as agreements pursuant to Section 1600 of the Fish and Game Code.

    K-56 Both Discretionary Project and Development have been defined in the MSHCP and the IA. Therefore, it would be redundant to provide another definition. Additionally, this section will also be applicable to certain City ministerial approvals as described in the IA.

    K-57 The definition of the project area is a description of the boundary and physical characteristics of the land, while the project description is a description of the proposed land use activities associated with the project.

    K-58 The information required for initial application review includes general biological information regarding the project site, not impacts of a proposed project. At this stage of the process, the project definition may or may not be sufficiently defined to assess impacts. However, general biological information regarding Habitats, Covered Species, and MSHCP Conservation Area configuration and management is necessary at this stage in order to make the appropriate determination as to whether all or a part of the property is needed for inclusion in the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    K-59 Although this is what is intended in the text, in order to clarify, the Lead Agencies agree that landowners should be able to propose incentives, although the application is at the discretion of the local jurisdiction.

    K-60 The definition of "negotiation period" is provided within the context of the discussion. It is not used elsewhere in the MSHCP, and therefore does not require a universal definition.

    K-61 Comment is not clear as to its intent. However, these items could be negotiated as part of the negotiation of terms and incentives process.

    K-62 The referenced discussion must be understood in the context of the paragraph preceding the statement referenced in the comment. Taken together, the two paragraphs on p. 6-6 of the MSHCP are intended to acknowledge that the Board of Supervisors or any City Council cannot be bound by staff recommendations. Negotiated solutions with landowners will not be "arbitrarily reversed or modified" by the Board or any City Council. Such decisions will be based on information provided through the project review and public hearing process.

    K-63 In order to ensure that a fair, timely appraisal is prepared, the MSHCP adopts a uniform policy under which the fair market value for a property in the Criteria Area and, that may be suitable for inclusion in the Conservation Area, is determined through an appraisal ordered by the County. (See Draft MSHCP, pp. 6-7 to 6-8.) A second appraisal may be conducted during the conflict resolution process if the parties cannot resolve any differences regarding valuation of property. (Draft MSHCP, pp. 6-9 to 6-10.) A third appraiser mutually agreed upon by both parties will review any discrepancies between the first and second appraisals. (Draft MSHCP, p. 6-10.) If that third appraiser cannot resolve the issue, the Presiding Judge of the Riverside Superior Court is to select the third appraisal. (Ibid.) The County believes the process established in the MSHCP is a fair one which treats all property owners equally. Of course, a property owner is not precluded from obtaining a separate appraisal which will be taken into consideration.

    K-64 The process for evaluation of properties for which a development application is not intended to be filed provides a mechanism for property owners within the Criteria Area to have their properties evaluated for potential inclusion in the Additional Reserve Lands without having to submit a full development application. (See Draft MSHCP, p. 6-7 to 6-8.) The evaluation also provides a mechanism for such a landowner to avoid the requirement to show compliance with the Criteria, if his or her land is not needed for inclusion in the Additional Reserve Lands. (Draft MSHCP, p. 6-8.) Contrary to the comment, a later submitted development application would not have to undergo criteria review anew, though a 45-day initial application review period would be required. (Ibid.) As indicated on p. 6-8 of the Draft MSHCP, the purpose of the 45-day review period is to assist the County or Cities in evaluating if circumstances have changed such that all or a portion of the property may assist in compiling the MSHCP Conservation Area. Also, should a particular landowner be contemplating submitting a development application, that landowner has the option of moving forward through the process set forth in Section 6.1.1(B) instead of the process in Section 6.1.1(C). It is up to the property owner, and not the Permittees, to determine at what time such an application is most appropriately filed.

    K-65 The funding necessary to purchase properties on the priority list referenced on page 6-12 of the MSHCP will come from the same source as the other funding used to acquire the 56,000 acres of Additional Reserve Lands by the Permittees. As set forth on page 6-12, a portion of the Local Development Mitigation Fees collected will be earmarked for acquisition of priority list properties and put into a separate fund to be only used for that purpose. The RCA will determine the appropriate allocation of funds. This section does not affect any of the Plan's funding assumptions.

    K-66 This section states that any approved development that precludes compliance with the Criteria will result in suspension or revocation of the Permits in their entirety or just for specified Area Plans, Covered Species or Lands or Covered Activities (Draft MSHCP pp. 6-16, 17). The Wildlife Agencies are bound by their general regulations regarding suspension or revocation. In addition, the Lead Agencies do not believe it appropriate to jeopardize the entire Plan based on a single incident.

    K-67 The hypothetical set of circumstances described in this comment relate to the characteristics of vernal pools, not the presence or absence of vernal pool plant species which are the subject of Section 6.1.3 of the MSHCP. Should this set of circumstances be present on a site, it is unlikely that a qualified biologist would determine that suitable habitat is present to warrant surveys for vernal pool plant species. Such determinations can be made at any time. If suitable habitat is determined to be present, the Plan states that plant surveys must be conducted during a normal rainfall year.

    K-68 Soil surveys alone would not provide sufficient data from which to conclude that focused surveys for Narrow Endemic Plant Species are not necessary. In many cases, anomalies in soil composition, such as clay lens that are important to Narrow Endemic Plant Species, but that are isolated within other soil types, may not be revealed through a random soil sample grid analysis. Therefore, it is necessary to conduct surveys during a normal rainfall year and at the appropriate time of year when the plant could be present.

    K-69 The information and procedures necessary for habitat suitability assessments are presented in Table 6-1 of the MSHCP and under the heading Habitat Suitability Assessments in Section 6.1.3 of the Plan. This information includes direction regarding the circumstances under which subsequent focused surveys would not be required. The information and procedures for focused surveys are presented under the heading Narrow Endemic Plant Species Survey, Mapping and Documentation Requirements in Section 6.1.3 of the Plan. As stated under that heading, "surveys shall be conducted in the appropriate season, in accordance with established protocols (for species for which protocols have been established)."

    K-70 Table 6-1 indicates the blooming period for plant species which is the period during which surveys should be conducted. Section 6.1.3 also states that plant species surveys shall be conducted in accordance with accepted protocols and biologists shall adhere to those such protocols for specific timing of surveys during the long-term implementation process for the MSHCP.

    K-71 The Lead Agencies agree that many Cities consider grading permits to be ministerial rather than discretionary. Certain ministerial approvals by the Cities that result in grading of habitat and other species impacts will still be subject to the MSHCP requirements. The issuance of a grading permit or site preparation permit for an individual single- family home or mobile home on an existing legal lot will not be subject to review under the HANS Process, but will be subject to review under the procedures described in the Expedited Review Process for Single-Family Homes or Mobile Homes To Be Located on an Existing Lot Within the Criteria Area. The HANS process will not be construed as a limitation on the County's or the Cities' ability to approve or deny a development application except that a project consistent with this HANS Process may not be denied solely because a development application does not comply with the MSHCP Conservation Criteria. See Responses H2-120 and H2-132.

    K-72 The suggested revision will be made in the Final MSHCP.

    K-73 The phrase "County and City projects" found at Section 6.1.6 on page 6-48 refers to public projects undertaken by the County or the Cities.

    K-74 The section referenced in this comment specifically identifies mitigation for public projects undertaken by the County or Cities as Permittees, and has been determined to be feasible and acceptable to those Permittees.

    K-75 The term Conservation is defined in the Definitions section of the Draft MSHCP and is sufficient to provide a clear understanding of long-term conservation value. Therefore, no further definition is provided. Long-term conservation value will be considered in the context of the parameters for evaluation of biologically equivalent or superior alternatives including Conserved Habitats, populations of Covered Species, habitat Linkages and functions of the MSHCP Conservation Area and MSHCP Conservation Area configuration and management. The Permittees will determine if this requirement has been met.

    K-76 With regard to Section 6.3, the only opportunity for Wildlife Agencies review would occur with preparation of biologically equivalent or superior alternative determinations as described on p. 6-67. With regard to the rest of the Plan, the comment does not provide specific references to afford specific responses. However, the Draft MSHCP identifies certain circumstances that require provision of notice to the Wildlife Agencies and others that require concurrence of the Wildlife Agencies.

    K-77 Changed biological conditions are addressed in several ways in the MSHCP - through updated vegetation mapping and species surveys conducted as part of the MSHCP Monitoring Plan and through project-specific biological data assembled as a result of species surveys, project data provided as part of the HANS process and project data provided as part of the CRP processes. Through all these processes, as described in the MSHCP, biologically equivalent or superior project alternatives and/or criteria refinements may be considered to reflect "on the ground" conditions.

    The initial project review process referenced in the comment is part of the HANS process which is different from the Criteria Refinement Process and it would be inappropriate to combine the processes. As described in Response K-64, the HANS process may be used for preliminary evaluation of projects for which a project application is not complete in order to provide initial feedback to landowners on the relationship of their properties to the MSHCP and possibly, to identify properties that may be available for acquisition and could contribute to Reserve Assembly and criteria refinements may be a potential outcome of the HANS process. The Criteria Refinement Process provides an opportunity for applicants with complete applications for actual, contemplated development projects to design their projects in a manner consistent with the MSHCP without necessitating an MSHCP amendment. Both processes provide opportunities to respond to project-specific biological information.

    K-78 See Response H2-171 for discussion of the ways in which changes in existing conditions may be reflected in the Criteria Refinement Process. No features of the MSHCP or any statements made by USFWS representatives at MSHCP Advisory Committee meetings should be construed to indicate that project proponents would be "retroactively penalized for past legalized activities."

    K-79 To clarify one issue raised in the comment, the Criteria Area is approximately 310,000 acres, the Additional Reserve Lands will be approximately 153,000 acres and the MSHCP Conservation Area will be approximately 500,000 acres. As stated in Section 6.6 of the MSHCP, the CRP cannot be used for Criteria changes that would result in reductions in the Criteria Area, not reductions in the MSHCP Conservation Area. The commentor misinterprets the prohibition on the use of the CRP process to reduce the Criteria Area and appears to imply that reductions in the Criteria Area would occur as Reserve Assembly proceeds. This is not the case. The Criteria Area would remain in place until Reserve Assembly is complete.

    K-80 The MSHCP and the IA both state that the RCA "shall not limit County or City local land use authority, or prevent a Permittee from approving a Discretionary Project." (See MSHCP sections 6.5 and 6.6.2.) The purpose of the RCA Board of Director process is to allow resolution of disagreements concerning a proposed Criteria Refinement and was specifically requested by numerous stakeholders. The RCA cannot stop a project. However, a project that violates the MSHCP may result in suspension or revocation of all or a portion of the Permits.

    K-81 The intent is to use the "Rough Step Rule" to help guide acquisition priorities. As the RCA looks at acquisitions to be funded outside of the HANS prioritization list, it would look to areas in danger of falling outside the Rough Step Rule. It is important to note that if the Permittees are implementing the Criteria, the Rough Step Rule will not be violated irrespective of the amount of lands developed because there would be sufficient lands available to assemble the MSHCP Conservation Area. In the unlikely event that the Plan is out of compliance with Rough Step, the remedy is to identify and prioritize lands for acquisition to ensure compliance. As called for in Section 6.11 of the Plan, documentation of Reserve Assembly activities in relationship to the Rough Step formulas must be included in the annual reporting for the MSHCP. See Responses K-9, K-11 and K-12 relative to adequacy of funding.

    K-82 As set forth on page 6-94 of the MSHCP, "In the event that the USFWS makes a finding of Unforeseen Circumstances and such Unforeseen Circumstances warrant the requirement of additional mitigation, enhancement or compensation measures, any such additional measures shall be restricted to modification of the management of the MSHCP Conservation Area, and shall be the least burdensome measures available to address the Unforeseen Circumstances." Thus, in the event that Unforeseen Circumstances adversely affect any of the MSHCP Covered Species during the life of the Plan, the Permittees, the Third Parties Granted Take Authorization and Participating Special Entities would not be required to provide additional financial compensation, land or land restrictions beyond those required by the Plan at the time of the issuance of the Section 10 Take Authorization, except in the case of Changed Circumstances described in Section 6.8.3 of the MSHCP. (See MSHCP, pp. 6-96 to 6-97; see IA Section 14.12.) The Changed Circumstances contemplated in the Plan are of a limited nature and generally require developing and implementing necessary monitoring programs and potential action plans if the adverse circumstances cannot be resolved. (See MSHCP, pp. 6-98 et seq.) Plans would be implemented through the existing Adaptive Management Plan. With regard to funding limitations, see Response K-148.

    It is unclear what habitat percentage targets referenced in this comment are established in Chapter 5 and how they could be affected by Changed or Unforeseen Circumstances. The only percentage target referenced in Chapter 5 is related to use or occupancy of conserved areas by species as noted in General Management Measure 8 of the Draft MSHCP. This target would not be affected by any of the Changed or Unforeseen Circumstances identified in the MSHCP.

    K-83 By federal law, the "No Surprises" Policy does not apply to projects with a federal nexus. (See 50 C.F.R. § 17.22(b)(5) ("The assurances in this paragraph (b)(5) apply only to incidental take permits issued in accordance with paragraph (b)(2) of this section where the conservation plan is being properly implemented, and only apply with respect to species adequately covered by the conservation plan. These assurances cannot be provided to Federal agencies."). ) However, Section 14.9 of the IA provides protections for developers in the Section 7 process because they can still rely upon the Plan's requirements for their mitigation obligation for Covered Species.

    K-84 The MSHCP attempts to limit the potential effects on Plan implementation associated with newly listed species by including a large number of Unlisted Species as Covered Species. If such unlisted Covered Species are subsequently listed, the MSHCP will continue to be implemented in the same manner without the need to follow the procedures set forth on pages 6-103 and 6-104 of the Plan. In those narrow circumstances where there is a new listing of a species not covered by the MSHCP, an amendment to the MSHCP will be required. During the processing of the amendment, it is both logical and required by law that the Permittees and the Third Parties Granted Take Authorization not unlawfully Take such species. For newly listed non-Covered Species, property owners in the Plan Area can pursue Take Authorization through Section 7 or 10 of FESA. This is not restricted by the Plan, recognizing that Take Authorization for newly listed non-covered species would not be authorized by the Plan until the Plan is amended pursuant to Section 6.8.4 of the Final MSHCP.

    The Permittees retain their local land use jurisdiction and responsibility for evaluating development permit applications for consistency with MSHCP requirements notwithstanding the Wildlife Agencies' annual review and oversight of Plan implementation. The Wildlife Agencies do not have veto power over any projects, and the Biologically Equivalent or Superior Determination findings and MSHCP modifications are made by the Permittees. To this end, the annual review and oversight function of the Wildlife Agencies is not only beneficial to ensuring species protection, it is proper and required by law.

    K-85 As stated in the Draft MSHCP, the precise alignment for the Cajalco Road Realignment and Widening project is not known at this time, and therefore the precise impacts cannot be calculated. The ratio of additional land required for mitigation will depend on the type and severity of impacts associated with the actual alignment and design features of the project.

    K-86 As stated in Section 7.3.5 of the Draft MSHCP, the process identified for SR-79 is intended to address deviation from the alignment and standards identified for the road as a General Plan Circulation Element facility. The comparison would be to a facility designed in accordance with the alignment and design standards of the Circulation Element.

    K-87 In addition to Alternatives 1 and 7, the County's proposed General Plan Circulation Element is addressed as a Covered Activity in the MSHCP. RCTC, not the County, is the lead agency for CETAP and will select the locally preferred alternative for the Winchester to Temecula corridor. The MSHCP will not limit RCTC's ability to select a locally preferred alternative. It is anticipated that any selected alternative would be covered either under the alternatives listed in Section 7.0 or in the Circulation Element.

    K-88 "Maintain habitat for" species means provide habitat to support the life history requirements of relevant species consistent with the baseline conditions, and no minimum or maximum linkage widths are identified at this time. As stated in Section 7.3.5 of the Draft MSHCP, the specific criteria for each of the alignment alternatives are based on information contained in the individual Species Accounts and on the discussion of Cores and Linkages contained in Section 3.2.3 of the Draft MSHCP. It is stated that those sections should be referenced for guidance in determining consistency. The purpose of these Criteria is to ensure that the alignment and design of the ultimate facility does not preclude the ability to achieve the level of Conservation assumed in the analysis for all of the affected species. Flexibility regarding how Conservation is achieved has been intentionally provided since specific alignment and design details are not currently available for any of the alignment alternatives.

    K-89 The referenced discussion on pg. 7-48 of the Draft MSHCP states that "design of planned roads will consider wildlife movement requirements" and references the Guidelines for Construction of Wildlife Corridors on pgs. 7-49 through 7-51 of the Draft MSHCP. The Guidelines for Construction of Wildlife Crossings acknowledge that different crossing designs are appropriate for different species. Generalized dimensional parameters will be added to these guidelines in the Final MSHCP to more clearly indicate some of these different requirements. Since specific design and alignment information is not yet available for planned roads, more specific design parameters cannot be provided at this time.

    K-90 As stated in section 7.3.5 of the Draft MSHCP, the Guidelines for Construction of Wildlife Crossings are provided for roads that have the potential to result in impediments to wildlife movement. Determination of potential impacts and appropriate measures will be made on a project-by-project basis. Thus, it is not possible to state with specificity at this time when such facilities will be needed and what the cost will be. The Guidelines for Construction of Wildlife Crossing in Section 7.0 include guidance for insects including Quino and Delhi fly.

    K-91 There is not a conflict between the Reserve Assembly Criteria presented in Section 3 and the facilities siting criteria in Section 7.3.8 (page 7-62 of the Draft MSHCP). The Reserve Assembly Criteria in Section 3 are directed toward review of projects in the context of identifying areas for inclusion in the MSHCP Conservation Area. This is different than the facilities siting criteria which are directed toward incorporation of measures in project designs to ensure consistency with the MSHCP. Flexibility is incorporated in the facilities siting criteria to enable project goals to be met while at the same time providing for consistency with the MSHCP.

    K-92 The facilities siting criteria do not call for "total avoidance of impacts." In general, the facilities siting criteria call for avoidance and minimization of sensitive areas "to the maximum extent practicable." As noted in Response K-91, flexibility is incorporated in the criteria to enable project goals to be met while at the same time providing for consistency with the MSHCP.

    K-93 See Response K-51 for discussion of limits on Management, Monitoring and Adaptive Management costs. For land acquisition, the limit on local Permittees' obligations is the conservation of 97,000 acres. The Plan acknowledges the need to adjust funding as necessary to accomplish the acquisition program and meet the Management, Monitoring and Adaptive Management obligations. See Responses K-9, K-11 and K-12.

    K-94 Management costs were estimated based on cost estimates developed by both the Center for Natural Lands Management and by the Riverside County Parks and Open Space District. See Appendix B-02A. For the "existing Conservation Lands", some level of management is in place today. Generally security, patrol, litter clean up, and basic management functions are in place. The $17 or approximately 30% of the per acre cost for management of new lands allows for any additional management function, such as removal of exotics or additional security requirements to address additional species management needs associated with the MSHCP. In some instances, no additional costs may be required; however, to provide a projection of costs that is not underestimated, the recognition of this potential cost was included.

    K-95 See Response K-94. The additional management costs are available to supplement the costs currently be expended to manage existing conservation lands. Management costs include both existing and new conservation lands. There is no "diversion" as both are anticipated to be funded.

    K-96 For conserved lands to count toward the 153,000 acres of Additional Reserve Land, the land must support the MSHCP Conservation Area. Compliance with the Criteria would determine if a parcel counts toward Conservation. Lands conserved under the incentive program for their MSHCP conservation value would be permanently conserved. Lands conserved for their MSHCP conservation value are not anticipated to be resold.

    In rural areas, the General Plan incentive program could be used to create open space areas to maintain the rural character of an area but not contribute to the MSHCP Conservation Area. Highly dispersed parcels broken up by numerous developed rural residential properties may have little, if any, conservation value. It is unclear what the commentor envisions as a situation where additional mitigation would be required when the incentive program has been utilized and a project has been approved.

    K-97 Section 8 of the MSHCP deals with mitigation for the impacts of new Development. Both Caltrans and State Parks are anticipated to develop new facilities that would require mitigation. The Lead Agencies are currently unaware of any new federal projects that would not be done in cooperation with a Local Permittee.

    K-98 The Local Permittees cannot control all state and federal land acquisition efforts. To count toward their 56,000 acre obligation, the state and federal acquisitions must meet the Criteria.

    K-99 See Response K-10. A draft nexus study has been prepared and will be available for public review prior to the adoption of the LDMF.

    K-100 The Density Bonus Fee Program is being developed as an implementation program under the County's New General Plan. The rules for where and when this program will be used will be determined by the Board of Supervisors and may be modified from time to time. Opposition to the use of a Density Bonus program could prevent or limit the implementation of the program.

    K-101 The fee is anticipated to be in addition to siting requirements. However, in the event the critical features of a specific project result in very high costs, conservation values may be increased by utilizing a portion of the project's fee to go toward the enhancement of the project. This does not relieve the Local Permittees from providing funding for the Conservation of 97,000 acres.

    K-102 See Responses K-51 and K-93.

    K-103 As always, the County is willing to meet with Building Industry officials to address this issue. See Response K-81. The annual Rough Step reporting will disclose if Conservation is outpacing Development in the unlikely event that this occurs, and appropriate measures can be determined in conjunction with review of the annual report.

    K-104 The index for the fee is the CPI. Increases above an annual CPI adjustment would require a new nexus study. The appropriate CPI to use will be determined when the Fee Ordinance is adopted.

    K-105 A split has not been identified, nor is it appropriate. Management and Monitoring have annual obligations that increase based on the number of acres conserved. See Responses K-51 and K-93.

    K-106 The actions uniformly expected of the Cities are execution of the IA, adoption of an enforcement mechanism and the Local Development Mitigation Fee, and approval of responsible agency findings under CEQA. It will be the responsibility of the Cities to determine what, if any, changes are required to their general plans or zoning ordinances. Other Permittees will be required to meet obligations as set forth in Section 13 of the IA. If and when Cities determine specific discretionary actions required to implement the MSHCP in their jurisdictions, they may evaluate this EIR/EIS to determine if it is adequate to cover such actions as stated in Section 1.4 of the EIR/EIS, or if other CEQA documentation is necessary. Those determinations will be made by the Cities at the time local approvals are considered by those jurisdictions. See also Response A-21.

    K-107 The EIR/EIS relied upon Appendix G of the State CEQA Guidelines for its thresholds of significance for analyzing land use impacts. Appendix G indicates that land use impacts to be considered in an environmental document are: (1) the physical division of an established community (which, as the commentor indicated, is addressed in the EIR/EIS), (2) a conflict with any applicable land use plan, policy, or regulation of an agency with jurisdiction over the project adopted for the purpose of avoiding/mitigating an environmental effect, and (3) a conflict with any applicable habitat conservation or natural community conservation plan. Thresholds 1 and 3 from Appendix G were addressed in the EIR/EIS text (see Section 1.5.5). Threshold 2 is not exceeded because the MSHCP would serve as a method of mitigating impacts of projects to Covered Species throughout the MSHCP Plan Area. Consistency of the MSHCP with any applicable land use plan, policy, or regulation of an agency with jurisdiction is assured through Section 13.2 of the IA.

    Impacts from the MSHCP relating to the acres of land designated by the proposed General Plan for employment or housing uses are addressed in Section 4.3 of the Draft EIR/EIS, Population, Housing, and Employment. Beyond the potential to indirectly induce growth, the EIR/EIS does not analyze the impacts of Development. The location, nature and timing of future Development will be guided by the Riverside County General Plan and CETAP, as well as City General Plans, but ultimately would occur in response to market forces and builder choices. While General Plans and zoning ordinances serve to permit (and restrict) certain land uses in given areas, these documents are not sufficient to predict the nature (i.e., location, extent, timing, and type) of Development throughout the County and the Cities that would occur as a result of implementation of the MSHCP (versus those that would occur in the absence of the MSHCP). The MSHCP will serve as mitigation for impacts to Covered Species that would result from Development. These impacts must still be stated and analyzed in environmental documents prepared for specific subsequent development projects. Further impacts resulting from Development, including impacts to transportation and traffic, public services, utilities, etc., will be addressed in subsequent environmental documents (which will serve to ensure that all direct, indirect, and cumulative impacts of each development activity are fully analyzed).

    K-108 The proposed MSHCP includes 120,200 acres within the County and 14,800 acres within the Cities of western Riverside County that are currently designated for housing units. (EIR/EIS, p. 4.3-2) It also includes 3,200 acres in the County and 2,900 acres within the

    Cities of western Riverside County that are currently designated for employment use. Implementation of the MSHCP will likely cause dwelling units and employment facilities previously planned for development within the Criteria Area to be shifted into areas that are not to be conserved. (Id.) However, implementation of the proposed MSHCP will neither reduce nor increase the amount of Development allowed pursuant to local land use controls. Regardless of whether the MSHCP is adopted, the same number of dwelling units and commercial/industrial/office space will be developed. Implementation of the MSHCP will simply change the location of development and possibly site-specific density within western Riverside County. (Id.)

    Section 13.2 of the IA states that the County and the Cities may "amend their general plans as appropriate." The Draft EIR/EIS fully discusses impacts to Development in its discussion of impacts to population, housing and employment in Section 4.3. Although the MSHCP could cause housing, commercial and industrial facilities previously planned for Development within the Criteria Area to be shifted to areas that are not to be conserved, it will not displace substantial numbers of housing units or commercial facilities. (Draft EIR/EIS, p.4.3-3) Additionally, implementation of the MSHCP will not exacerbate the jobs to housing imbalance within western Riverside County and Cities because implementation of the MSHCP will not reduce Development, it will only affect where future Development may occur. (Id.) Implementation of the proposed Plan will have the same effect on employment facilities as housing units, which is merely to modify future locations and densities of Development. (Id.) Accordingly, the MSHCP will not cause shortages in land available for Development. (Id.) Moreover, although implementation of the MSHCP will not cause growth in western Riverside County to exceed regional growth projections, out of an abundance of caution, the Project's indirect growth-inducing impacts are discussed in detail in Section 5.0 and are deemed to be significant but are not deemed to restrict Development. Finally, each of the Cities have been provided with Criteria Area maps and presumably do understand the Plan implications to Development within their boundaries.

    K-109 The Draft EIR/EIS fully discusses potential impacts on existing land uses. Existing land uses are summarized in Figure 2.1 and discussed in detail on pages 2.1-5 through 2.1-11. Section 4.0 also provides a discussion of significant environmental impacts. Potentially significant indirect impacts associated with land uses within an area immediately adjacent to the MSHCP Conservation Area are discussed in detail in Section 4.2.

    The Lead Agencies are unclear how establishment and management of the MSHCP Conservation Area next to private property could result in the establishment of wetlands on the adjacent property. In any event, to the extent wetlands, narrow endemics or listed species may become established on private property due to management of adjacent Conservation Lands, it is unclear how there could be significant indirect land use effects under CEQA. The EIR/EIS relied on Appendix G to the State CEQA Guidelines for its thresholds of significance for analyzing impacts to land use. See Response K-107. Both CEQA and NEPA only require an analysis of environmental effects. It is doubtful that the coincidental establishment of wetlands, narrow endemics or other species on property adjacent to a MSHCP Conservation Area would create significant adverse environmental effects.

    K-110 As long as there is substantial evidence to support the lead agency's choice of baseline, that agency's choice is not an abuse of its discretion. Fat, 97 Cal.App.4th at 1278; Save Our Peninsula Comm. v. Monterey County Bd. of Supervisors, 87 Cal.App.4th 99, 117 (2001). In some cases, conditions closer to the date the project is approved, rather than the existing environmental setting, may provide a more appropriate baseline for determining whether the project's impacts will be significant. Save Our Peninsula Comm., 87 Cal.App.4th at 125, citing Mira Monte Homeowners' Assn. v. County of Ventura, 165 Cal.App.3d 357 (1985).

    For this Project, substantial evidence supports the use of the General Plan update as the baseline for primarily agricultural resources. First, because this Project is a component of the RCIP process, and the RCIP process also involves the update to the County's General Plan, it would be absurd for the Lead Agencies to ignore the fact that the County's General Plan is being updated. The three components of the RCIP process (CETAP, the MSHCP and the General Plan Update) are being coordinated in an effort to improve long-term regional planning. The General Plan update is a central component of the RCIP process. Moreover, using the General Plan update as the baseline condition provides the most accurate assessment of the environmental impacts attributable to the MSHCP (as opposed to the General Plan update or some other project). Cf., Save Our Peninsula Comm., 87 Cal.App.4th at 125-26, and cases cited therein. Consequently, using the General Plan update as the baseline condition is appropriate. Additionally, the Lead Agencies did analyze impacts to agricultural resources based upon the existing County General Plan (see Response M-11).

    K-111 The Draft EIR/EIS fully discusses all potentially significant impacts but CEQA does not require an EIR to discuss insignificant effects in any detail. (State CEQA Guidelines, § 15126.2; 15128.) It was determined that implementation of the proposed MSHCP would not result in significant environmental effects related to hydrology and water quality. However, as required by CEQA, the Draft EIR/EIS briefly discusses these insignificant environmental effects in Section 1.5.5. (State CEQA Guidelines, § 15128.) The Draft EIR/EIS does recognize that an indirect effect of the proposed MSHCP would be an increase in development pressure outside of the MSHCP Conservation Area. This effect has the potential for both beneficial and adverse impacts on hydrology and water quality. On the one hand, encouraging dense Development would reduce the extent of lands from which erosion and non-point source pollution originate and would have a beneficial effect on water quality and water infiltration. However, land-clearing activities, such as grading, associated with Development, increase erosion and sedimentation. Additionally, runoff from developed uses generally causes an increase in the amount of debris, dirt, grease, and petroleum products, and pathogens in storm runoff. Accordingly, Development outside of the proposed MSHCP Conservation Area could result in adverse water quality impacts. Whether this occurs depends on the location of future Development, which cannot be predicted at this time. Since the location of future Development is too speculative to determine, further analysis is not required in this EIR/EIS pursuant to CEQA or NEPA. See Responses H2-15 and H2-319. Therefore, in compliance with CEQA and NEPA, potential hydrology and water quality impacts resulting from future Development will be determined during project-specific environmental analyses for those projects as they arise. The Lead Agencies are unclear as to the statement that there should be an analysis of future flood control projects that would need to be "changed" with the implementation of the MSHCP. If and when Flood Control decides to proceed with their projects, appropriate environmental review will be done at that time.

    K-112 The implementation of the Plan will be overseen and administered by the RCA. (MSHCP, § 6.6.2.) See Responses K-37 and K-44.

    K-113 The MSHCP clearly identifies coverage status for Circulation Element roads within the Plan Area and states that as Reserve Assembly proceeds, existing and planned roads including Circulation Element roads, would be excluded from the MSHCP Conservation Area. This does not mean that the road "will not be allowed." As clearly indicated in Section 7 of the Draft MSHCP, Circulation Element roads (as well as other roads as noted) are Covered Activities, and as such, their construction is not precluded, and they are provided Take Authorization for Covered Species. Therefore, no mitigation is required because there will be no loss of planned improvements.

    K-114 Impacts identified in Table 4A of the Draft EIR/EIS discuss acreages of Vegetation Communities within areas that would be subject to Take Authorization for species.

    These are the areas that would be outside of the MSHCP Conservation Area, and include impacts that are anticipated within the MSHCP Plan Area, including the Criteria Area.

    K-115 The commentor misstates the conclusions related to the analysis of impacts associated with Edge Effects. The Draft EIR/EIS does not state that "edge effects can be mitigated through the inclusion of various measures...", it states that features incorporated into the MSHCP reduce Edge Effects to less than significant levels, thereby obviating the need for mitigation. Additionally, Edge Effects are analyzed in the MSHCP and the Draft EIR/EIS. Section 3.2.3 of the MSHCP, beginning on page 3-31 and continuing through page 3-108 provides extensive discussions of the anticipated Edge Effects for each of the existing and proposed Cores and Linkages associated with the MSHCP Conservation Area, including quantification of the total estimated edge area, the interior area, and the perimeter to area ratio for each component of the MSHCP Conservation Area. A discussion of impacts associated with Edge Effects is also provided in 4.1.4 of the Draft EIR/EIS.

    K-116 The commentor acknowledges that analysis of potential impacts to non-covered species would be "speculative given the lack of information." This is consistent with the statement in the Draft EIR/EIS that analysis of non-covered species would involve speculation that is not required by CEQA or NEPA. See Response F-120.

    K-117 This comment is incorrect in stating that the Draft EIR/EIS fails to recognize benefits to non-covered species. Section 4.1.4 of the Draft EIR/EIS specifically states that it is assumed that the Conservation provided under the MSHCP could potentially benefit non-covered species, and that specific features of the MSHCP that could provide such benefits include maintenance of Cores and Linkages, impact avoidance and minimization policies, and Adaptive Management and Monitoring Programs. See Response F-120.

    K-118 The MSHCP is a vehicle for compliance with the requirements of the FESA and the NCCP Act that seeks to minimize the regulatory burden and assist developers by providing a defined amount of mitigation for endangered species impacts. The MSHCP's provisions are self mitigating through benefits to Covered Species. An important component of the Plan is to establish policies and procedures to ensure that mitigation for impacts to Covered Species and their Habitat associated with future Development is provided. Accordingly, the Draft EIR/EIS appropriately refers to the Plan in identifying the mitigating/avoidance provisions in the Plan. Thus, the Draft EIR/EIS does not refer to another document for mitigation measures. See Response R-3.

    K-119 The amount of agricultural land included within the limits of the proposed action, includes agricultural land within the MSHCP Conservation Area and includes agricultural land within PQP Lands. The estimate was based on the MSHCP Conservation Area as described in Section 3.1 of the Plan. As stated in Section 6.2B of the MSHCP, Take Authorization would apply to all land within the boundaries of the MSHCP that has been actively used for ongoing agricultural operations for at least one of the last five years preceding the effective date of the IA. These lands would be exempt from the payment of impact mitigation fees or other mitigation measures. See Response M-16.

    K-120 With implementation of the MSHCP, the only restrictions that would be placed on land uses would occur when such land uses require the issuance of a discretionary or certain City ministerial permits. Existing and ongoing agricultural operations which do not require such a permit would not be subject to MSHCP provisions, requirements, and restrictions. Therefore, although Reserve Assembly may be created adjacent to land uses such as agriculture or mineral extraction, these land uses would not be affected unless they expand or modify their activities such that a permit must be issued. Moreover, Reserve Managers would not have jurisdiction over adjacent land. Therefore, there are no impacts to analyze in the EIR/EIS. For any area that requires discretionary or certain City ministerial permit issuance, regardless of whether such an area abuts an existing or new conservation area, the provisions, requirements, and restrictions of the MSHCP will apply. See Response K-109.

    K-121 The MSHCP does not establish or otherwise grant land use authority. Depending on the desires of landowners, existing active agricultural uses may continue within the Conservation Area throughout the life of the MSHCP. No conversion of farmland to non-agricultural uses will. If the expansion of existing agricultural operations within the Criteria Area requires City or County discretionary authorization, the Criteria will be applied and appropriate mitigation imposed. Expansion projects within the Criteria Area will not be subject to Criteria and mitigation requirements if the expansion is limited to areas that have been recently and consistently disturbed and exhibit little or no habitat value. Because agricultural operations will be allowed to continue, no loss of agricultural operations, or the economic valued derived from such operations will occur.

    K-122 The Protection of Species Associated with Riparian/Riverine Areas and Vernal Pool guidelines incorporated in Section 6.1.2 of the MSHCP and the Guidelines for the Protection of Narrow Endemic Plant Species in Section 6.1.3 call for avoidance and minimization of impacts to riparian and riverine areas and Narrow Endemic Plant Species. To the extent that a new or expanded mineral extraction project is proposed, findings would need to be made to ensure consistency with the MSHCP. In addition, such an application would be reviewed in the context of the MSHCP Criteria in Section 3. However, the requirements of the MSHCP are comparable and complimentary to those that are already in place under the U.S. Army Corps of Engineers and CDFG regulations pertaining to wetlands and waters of the U.S.

    With regard to the availability of information related to the amount of aggregate that would be available under the MSHCP and in the absence of the MSHCP, such information is not readily available. The reasoning for using the acreage of MRZ-2 in the County to analyze impacts to mineral resources is stated clearly on page 4.2-16 of the Draft EIR/EIS:

    "The MRZ-2 designation does not specify the quality or quantity of mineral deposits, which may make the use of these areas for impact quantification potentially misleading. However, as the MRZ classifications represent the best available data for mineral resources (aside from current extraction data, which was provided in Section 3.2.2), the mineral resource impact analysis focuses on impacts to MRZ-2 areas."

    As stated in the EIR/EIS, the MRZ designation of an area is the best indication of whether potentially extractable mineral resources are present. With the exception of existing mineral extraction operations, which would not be affected by the MSHCP unless they required further discretionary action by the County and Cities, or certain ministerial City actions little is known about the quantity of aggregate (or indeed the definite existence of available aggregate) potentially available for extraction in MRZ-2 areas. Thus, a quantitative comparison of aggregate availability is not possible at this time.

    The MSHCP requires surveys and mapping to determine the locations of riparian/riverine areas and Narrow Endemic Plant Species. These surveys and mapping are necessary as the locations of these resources are not currently well defined on a project specific basis. As surveys and mapping are completed on a project by project basis, data from these efforts will be incorporated in design of individual projects to ensure consistency with the avoidance and minimization requirements incorporated in the MSHCP. It is not possible given the current level of mapping to quantify avoidance and minimization measures that might be implemented on a project-specific basis. However, flexibility is incorporated in the MSHCP requirements for riparian/riverine areas and Narrow Endemic Plant Species to allow for biologically equivalent or superior project alternatives if alternative and minimization measures cannot be met.

    K-123 As the comment notes, the growth-inducing impacts of the MSHCP are discussed in several places in the Draft EIR/EIS. Impacts on population, housing and employment are fully discussed in Section 4.3 and the growth-inducing impacts of the MSHCP are fully discussed in Sections 5 and 6. (See Draft EIR/EIS, § 5.1; pp. 6.1-4 to 6.1-5.) Pursuant to State CEQA Guidelines section 15126.2, the EIR/EIS specifically discusses the MSHCP's potential to induce growth on pages 6.1-14 and 6.1-5 of Section 6 and also includes the growth-inducing effects of the MSHCP in the discussion of cumulative impacts on pages 5.1-6 through 5.1-10. As the EIR/EIS notes, the growth-inducing potential of a project would be considered significant only if it fosters growth or a concentration of population in excess of what is assumed in relevant master plans, land use plans or in projections made by regional planning agencies. Therefore, as the comment notes, the MSHCP itself does not itself propose any growth or development; it merely provides a regional plan to address the biological effects of existing and anticipated future market-driven growth in Western Riverside County. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 5.1-9.) Further, the Draft EIR/EIS concludes that not only will the establishment of the MSHCP Conservation Area enhance the quality of life in Western Riverside County, but also that neither the proposed MSHCP nor any of the project alternatives contain components that would directly generate residential, commercial, or industrial development or induce population growth within the Plan Area. (See Draft EIR/EIS at p. 6.1-5.)

    The analysis does recognize that if development cannot occur where it is currently proposed or at levels currently permitted by the County and local municipalities, such growth must be accommodated elsewhere. Thus, on page 6.1-5 of the Draft EIR/EIS, the MSHCP concludes that it may have an indirect growth-inducing effect, because it will accommodate and streamline the approval process for future developments within those areas of Western Riverside County outside the limits of the MSHCP Conservation Area. "[O]ut of an abundance of caution, the Lead Agencies [also] determined that the [MSHCP] will have significant indirect impacts on Population, Housing, and Employment." (See Draft EIR/EIS, p. 5.1-9.) However, the Lead Agencies cannot address these potential indirect impacts in the Draft EIR/EIS for the MSHCP because it would be too speculative to try to determine where, and if, any particular future development would be constructed. Neither CEQA nor NEPA require a discussion of speculative impacts. See Responses K-109, H2-15 and H2-301.

    K-124 The commentor is correct that market conditions influence development; however, the MSHCP also includes provisions that will facilitate future unidentified development. The MSHCP is a streamlined process for complying with the mandates of the FESA, the NCCP Act, CEQA and NEPA. As such, it relieves existing regulatory obstacles to development. See Response H2-133.

    K-125 The Lead Agencies believe that the streamlined approach in the MSHCP will alleviate many of the regulatory burdens on Development, thereby expediting the development approval process. The MSHCP's streamlined approach facilitates this process by allowing developers to comply with state and federal law simultaneously according to clear and coordinated criteria instead of the expensive and often more time consuming alternative of mitigating on a parcel by parcel basis. See Response H2-133.

    K-126 The thresholds on page 4.5-1 of the Draft EIR/EIS used to determine potential impacts relating to transportation and circulation are as follows:

    The proposed MSHCP and alternatives would have a significant effect on the operation of transportation facilities if they:

    • Cause an increase in traffic that is substantial in relation to the existing traffic load and capacity of the street system (i.e., result in a substantial increase in either the number of vehicle trips, the volume to capacity ratio on roads, or congestion at intersections);
    • Exceed, either individually or cumulatively, a level of service standard established by the county congestion management agency for designated roads or highways;
    • Substantially increase hazards due to a design feature (e.g., sharp curves or dangerous intersections) or incompatible uses (e.g., farm equipment);
    • Result in inadequate emergency access; and/or
    • Conflict with adopted policies, plans, or programs supporting alternative transportation (e.g., bus turnouts, bicycle racks).

    In the Analysis of Significance discussion on p. 4.5-4 of the Draft EIR/EIS, it states that

    The operation, maintenance, and construction of existing and planned roadways is necessary for the efficient and effective passage of persons and goods through western Riverside County, the alleviation of traffic congestion, the maintenance of level of service standards, and continuation of adequate emergency access/evacuation routes. As the operation, maintenance, and construction of existing and planned roadways, detailed in Section 7.0 of the MSHCP, are covered activities within the Conservation Area, potential transportation-related impacts resulting from implementation of the Proposed Action or its alternatives will be less than significant.(emphasis added)

    As the project would not have an adverse impact to planned roadways, nor would it result in growth beyond what is planned for in the County and participating Cities' General Plans, it follows that it would not result in an adverse change pursuant to the thresholds listed on page 4.5-1. Specifically, it would notcause an increase in traffic (as it would not result in growth beyond what is planned for the area); it would not exceed a level of service standard for the same reasons; it would not substantially alter the design of future roadways (with the exception of wildlife undercrossings and similar features), and would thus not substantially increase hazards due to a design feature or incompatible uses; it would not result in inadequate emergency access; and finally, it would not conflict with adopted policies, plans, or programs supporting alternative transportation as it would not alter any policies, plans, or programs for providing such support.

    K-127 The Draft EIR/EIS contains adequate cumulative impact analysis. See Response H2-5. The assessment of the cumulative impacts is done qualitatively in the Draft EIR/EIS because it is difficult to predict timing and density of all projects. Accordingly, the Draft EIR/EIS also properly uses the projection approach, as discussed in Response H2-310.

    K-128 The sentence referred to by commentor was not intended to suggest that the Draft EIR/EIS was substituting an assumption for a cumulative impact analysis. In fact, cumulative impacts are discussed in detail in Section 5.0 of the Draft EIR/EIS. Cumulative impacts on biological resources in particular are discussed on pages 5.1-6 though 5.1-8. This sentence will be clarified in the final document. The specific impacts associated with individual future projects cannot however be determined at this time because the exact location of such future Development is unknown. Any analysis of these potential cumulative impacts is too speculative to include in the Draft EIR/EIS due to the number of acres involved and changing market conditions, among other things. See Responses H2-15, H2-301 and H2-304.

    K-129 Implementation of the MSHCP will result in cumulatively significant impacts on Non-Covered Species because the issuance of the Permits will remove an impediment to Development outside of the MSHCP Conservation Area. Non-Covered Species would receive little or no protection outside the MSHCP Conservation Area under existing ordinances and regulations. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 5.1-7.) Of course, Non-Covered Species will also benefit from conservation management practices to the extent they exist in the MSHCP Conservation Area. See Response F-120.

    K-130 The Draft EIR/EIS will be revised to conclude that no significant cumulative impacts relating to Edge Effects will occur because Section 6.1.4 of the Draft MSHCP provides guidelines addressing Edge Effects.

    K-131 The commentor states that according to CEQA and NEPA, socioeconomic impacts of a project must be considered when a project's physical effects will be caused by economic or social change. Implementation of the MSHCP would not result in an economic or social change. The MSHCP is a plan that provides a blueprint for conserving lands within the County, while streamlining the process of mitigating biological impacts for development. Such a plan will not result in additional growth beyond that which would normally occur. Nor would it result in adverse impacts on any existing permitted land uses within the County. Therefore, no economic or social changes would occur as a result of the adoption of the MSHCP. See Response M-6.

    K-132 The documents that are a part of the EIR/EIS are the MSHCP and References (as included in Volumes I and II) and the IA (Volume III). Because these are all volumes of the same document, it was not necessary to incorporate them by reference. The remaining documents referenced in Section 9.0 of the EIR/EIS are available for review as part of the administrative record and were relied upon for the drafting of the documents.

    K-133 Because of the size of the MSHCP, and the interrelatedness of the documents, it was determined to combine them into one document with many volumes so that cross-referencing could occur easily.

    K-134 The provisions of Section 8.6 identify the actions the Local Permittees will take if the Conservation anticipated to occur through the use of incentives and typical project dedications does not occur. The Local Permittees remain responsible for the contribution of 97,000 acres of Additional Reserve Lands. See Response F-98.

    K-135 See Response K-5.

    K-136 As stated in Section 5.2 of the Draft MSHCP (p. 5-63), comprehensive repeat inventory of Vegetation Communities and Wildlife Habitats is proposed to occur at 8-year intervals. This interval was selected based on the Riverside County Flood Control District's rainfall data for the years 1880 to 1999 indicating that wet and dry periods in Riverside County occur in 7 to 10 year cycles. For this reason, it is desirable for a single entity to carry out the monitoring effort for at least the first full 8-year cycle. At this time, the MSHCP calls for CDFG to be the initial monitoring entity. However, as noted in Section 6.6.6 of the MSHCP, in the event that CDFG is not adequately performing the duties of the Monitoring Program Administrator, the RCA Board of Directors shall select an alternative entity for this position.

    K-137 The Annual Reports are public documents and will be available for public review.

    K-138 To the extent such information is considered a public document, it will be available for public review. Information about the acquisitions made with Local Development Mitigation Fees should be included in the RCA's annual report.

    K-139 See Response K-5.

    K-140 In order to receive the Permits, the Permittees must provide adequate funding assurances. To this end, the Permittees will be asked to adopt the Local Development Mitigation Fee ordinance at the same time the MSHCP is adopted, or as soon thereafter as possible. A nexus study prepared pursuant to Government Code 66000 will be released for public review prior to consideration for adoption by the County Board of Supervisors.

    K-141 At this time, it is anticipated that the RCA will be a separate joint powers authority. Creating a brand new entity with a separate elected body would: 1) eliminate oversight by the County and Cities; and 2) greatly increase bureaucracy and cost. Section 6.6.2 of the MSHCP states that the RCA will hold regularly scheduled public meetings in compliance with the Ralph M. Brown Act Open Meeting requirements. This will ensure public participation.

    K-142 The duties and authority of the Funding Coordination Committee are described in Section 6.6.2 of the MSHCP. Final decision-making authority in establishing and implementing the local priorities for funding and acquisition is vested with RCA. The Funding Coordination Committee is an advisory committee to the RCA that will assist it in performing its duties under the MSHCP. Working committees, such as the Funding Coordination Committee, are an efficient way for larger organizations to manage and perform varied responsibilities. Moreover, the Wildlife Agencies will be part of this Committee, and it would be inappropriate for them to be part of the RCA.

    K-143 As set forth in Section 6.6.4 of the MSHCP, the RMOC must be comprised of, at a minimum, a representative of each of the Wildlife Agencies, staff members from the Riverside County Regional Parks and Open Space District, BLM, USFS, California Department of Parks and Recreation, RCA, and certain designated representatives from other entities that own or manage land within the MSHCP Conservation Area. Also, each representative must be at a Regional Manager or equivalent level for each of these organizations, so that individuals with policy and decision-making experience and authority will operate the RMOC.

    Because the RMOC consists of the Permittees and other agencies that will be effected by the decisions of the RCA, they will exercise their oversight function and act as an intermediary between the RCA and their respective agencies or organizations. Further, because of the management level roles that each member will have, the RMOC will have the ability to access the required data that must be provided pursuant to Section 6.4.4.

    The benefits of the advisory and oversight functions are substantial, and are described in Section 6.4.4 and discussed in Response K-143. See Responses K-148 and H2-224 regarding Permittees' funding obligations.

    K-144 Local Permittees' funding obligations are clearly stated including management obligations. See Responses K-51 and K-93.

    K-145 Section 11.4.4 describes the potential situation where an entity would use the power of eminent domain to condemn Additional Reserve Lands and Local Permittee owned PQP Land to which the conservation and mitigation measures apply, but for purposes other than those of the MSHCP. As such, this provision is not a separate process for eminent domain under the provisions of the MSHCP, but rather is a recognition of the autonomous land use authority that local agencies have under their police powers. If a third party acquires through condemnation Additional Reserve Lands or Local Permit owned PQP Lands, the proceeds from the condemnation action shall be used to purchase new compensatory Additional Reserve Lands.

    K-146 See Response K-84.

    K-147 The $58 million revenue assumption is based on the best information available to the County at this time. Section 8.6 of the MSHCP describes how Local Permittees would deal with a funding shortfall, whether resulting from the Density Bonus program or any other funding source. See Responses K-93 and K-100.

    K-148 The language found in the IA at Section 13.2(G) and 13.3(F) states that the funding obligations of Local Permittees and the RCA are limited to the fees collected, dedicated lands required pursuant to the IA and the MSHCP and other mitigation agreed to by the Parties. The obligations under the No Surprises Policy are set forth in Section 14.12 of the IA. These sections adequately set forth and limit local obligations.

    K-149 The Riverside County Transportation Commission is committed through Measure A to provide $153 million toward habitat conservation. This is the Measure's contribution to the MSHCP in return for the coverage provided to Measure A projects. In some instances, the Measure only provides partial funding for a project. In this case, when additional funding becomes available for the project, an additional amount of mitigation based on the 3% to 5% contribution for transportation projects would apply. It should be noted that the Measure anticipates funding through the State Transportation Commission for many Measure A projects; a portion of the $153 million (currently estimated at approximately $32 million) will be counted as mitigation on the State and Federal side of the ledger. Other new funding sources not covered by the Measure and State Transportation Improvement funds will contribute to the MSHCP above the $153 million.

    K-150 See Response K-55.

    K-151 Section 19.1 of the IA states: "This Agreement shall be effective upon issuance of the Permits. Any Permittee executing this Agreement after the Effective Date shall, upon execution, become a Party to this Agreement, with all rights and obligations of Parties defined herein, and this Agreement shall be enforceable between each later executing Permittee and all prior signing Parties." This provision is correct and comports with FESA. (See Section 10 HCP Handbook, p. 6-8.) The MSHCP does not contain any provisions relating to the Effective Date of the MSHCP.

    K-152 The meet and confer process in Section 23.6 of the IA could be implemented if the Parties have a disagreement concerning Covered Activities. It is a separate process from the HANS Process found in Section 6.1.1of the MSHCP. The HANS process is for use regarding property that may be needed for inclusion in the MSHCP Conservation Area, and is not a process for resolving disagreements concerning Covered Activities.


    Comment Letter KCoalition for Habitat Conservation, January 15, 2003

    K2-1 This comment states general concerns of the commentor which are more fully described in subsequent comments. Responses are provided accordingly.

    K2-2 The Lead Agencies are in receipt of the referenced study, and it is included as Comment J2, with appropriate responses provided.

    K2-3 This comment represents a summary of the issues discussed in detail in Comment J2 without providing detail on the commentors' specific additional contributions to the original comments. Therefore, see Responses J2-1 through J2-72 for a comprehensive response to the issues raised in this comment.

    K2-4 See Response J2-7.

    K2-5 See Response J2-12.

    K2-6 See Response J2-9.

    K2-7 See Response J2-13.

    K2-8 See Response J2-10.

    K2-9 See Response J2-11.

    K2-10 See Response J2-4.

    K2-11 See Response J2-14.

    K2-12 See the General Comment provided as a preface to the Responses to Comment Letter J2.

    K2-13 See the General Comment provided as a preface to the Responses to Comment Letter J2.


    Comment Letter K3 - City of Moreno Valley, January 13, 2003

    K3-1 The survey areas identified in Section 6.3.2 of the Draft MSHCP are based on generalized mapping of habitat resources and reflect the areas of potential occurrence for the species. The Additional Survey Needs and Procedures in Section 6.3.2 of the Draft MSHCP do not apply to developed lands.

    K3-2 For certain species, such as the burrowing owl, the Draft MSHCP requires surveys and potential Conservation of populations outside of the Criteria Area to provide for sufficient Conservation for Take Authorization of the species. However, the MSHCP does not require Conservation and equivalency findings except where surveys identify a substantial population of burrowing owl that would contribute to long-term conservation of the species in the Plan Area. See Response K3-6.

    K3-3 It is assumed that the comment is referring to language on p. 6-63 of the Draft MSHCP which states "90% of those portions of the property that provide for long-term conservation value..." In this context, the term property refers to the project site that was subject to surveys.

    K3-4 Actions of the City related to burrowing owl that would require reporting and review by the Wildlife Agencies pursuant to Section 6.11 of the Draft MSHCP would only be related to Biologically Equivalent or Superior Determinations made pursuant to Section 6.3.2.

    K3-5 Generally, outside the Criteria Area, landowners will pay a fee and, in some circumstances, policies for the protection of Narrow Endemic Plant Species and Riparian/Riverine Areas and Vernal Pools will apply and additional surveys will be required under these policies, as appropriate. (Draft MSHCP, § 6.3.2.) These additional requirements are necessary to provide Take Authorization for certain species. Long-Term Conservation Value is defined as Vegetation Communities and natural areas that contain Habitat which contributes to the Permittees' and the region's environmental resources.

    K3-6 One goal of the MSHCP is to avoid future regulatory requirements resulting from the listing of additional species. To accomplish this, the broadest range of species possible was proposed for coverage. The burrowing owl is a species that is currently petitioned for State listing. To not cover the species would leave Permittees and property owners at risk if this species is ultimately listed. At this time, the burrowing owl is on the list of species to be covered.

    K3-7 The nexus study will be available for review and comment by all participating Cities before any City considers the adoption of a Local Development Mitigation Fee.

    K3-8 At this time, no exemptions from the Local Development Mitigation Fee have been proposed. This is an issue that will need to be discussed once the nexus study is completed and final language for the Local Development Mitigation Fee ordinance is developed. The County and Cities can consider exemptions or reduced fees at that time.

    K3-9 All property owners benefit from the regional infrastructure provided Take Authorization under the MSHCP. However, reduced fees for infill projects could be considered. Additionally, all Development has cumulative and indirect impacts to biological resources that are mitigated by the Plan. See Responses K3-8, H2-27 and I2-39.

    K3-10 The MSHCP conserves many critical wetlands and provides protection for wetland species. While Section 7 consultations may be required for some properties, the MSHCP will greatly streamline this process. For a project that requires a 404 permit or state 1600 authorization, the SAMP, if approved, will also help to streamline this process. It is intended that the MSHCP will provide the base of mitigation under the SAMP. What additional mitigation may be required under the SAMP is yet to be determined. However, the property owners with wetlands still benefit from the MSHCP.

    K3-11 The trails specifically identified as Allowable Uses inside the MSHCP Conservation Area include only existing and future regional trails. Any trails outside the MSHCP Conservation Area would be Covered Activities.

    K3-12 The commentor states that the list of species in Table 2G of Section 2.3.4 of the Draft EIR/EIS incorrectly includes species that have additional survey requirements under the MSHCP. Table 2G is a list of Covered Species under the proposed MSHCP. Some Covered Species require additional surveys pursuant to the MSHCP in order to ensure Conservation. This includes the burrowing owl, the Los Angeles pocket mouse, Riverside fairy shrimp, and others. The requirement for additional surveys under the MSHCP does not affect these species' status as Covered Species pursuant to the Plan.

    K3-13 Interpretation of the Criteria on a project-by-project basis is anticipated to reveal some lands that have been developed that may not be accounted for in the Criteria. The Criteria would not apply to existing developed lands.

    K3-14 Section 3.2.1 of the MSHCP calls for verification of PQP Lands within the existing database. The Lead Agencies will work with the City to determine the precise boundaries of the referenced property, to determine its status with respect to the PQP Lands database, and to adjust the PQP as provided for in the Plan.

    K3-15 The analysis conducted for burrowing owl in Volume II of the Draft MSHCP indicates that additional surveys are required for inclusion of the species on the list of Covered Species, based on the distribution of the species within the MSHCP Plan Area in comparison to the proposed MSHCP Conservation Area.


    Comment Letter K4 - KB Home, March 13, 2003

    K4-1 See entire Response to Comment Letter M2. Project review under the MSHCP will consider any discussions related to the property with the Wildlife Agencies.

    K4-2 See Response K4-1.

    Comment Letter L

    Comment Letter L - Property Owners Association of Riverside County January 14, 2003

    L-0 The "deficiencies" referenced in this comment are not identified in the comment and a specific response cannot be provided. Responses to the specific comments raised in this letter are presented in Responses L-1 through L-8.

    L-1 An EIR is required to evaluate only the environmental impacts of a project. (Pub. Res. Code, § 21100.) The State CEQA Guideline section cited in the comment specifically states that "economic or social effects of a project shall not be treated as significant effects on the environment" that require analysis. (State CEQA Guidelines, § 15131(a).) Instead, this Section states that, "[e]conomic or social information may be included in an EIR or may be presented in whatever form the agency desires. (Ibid.) Additionally, CEQA requires that the impacts analyzed in an EIR be "related to a physical change." (State CEQA Guidelines,§ 15358(b).) Likewise, even though federal regulations specify that the environmental impacts to be addressed include direct and indirect effects that are "caused by the action," NEPA does not require an analysis of an effect unless it is traceable to an impact the project will have on the "natural and physical environment and the relationship of people." (40 C.F.R. § 1508.14.) Accordingly, NEPA specifies that economic or social effects are not intended by themselves to require preparation of an EIS. (Ibid; see also Hanley v. Mitchell (2nd Cir. 1972) 460 F.2d 640, 647 [holding that effects lacking an environmental nexus are outside scope of NEPA].) The MSHCP does not restrict existing uses or future development; in fact, the EIR/EIS concludes that the MSHCP is growth accommodating. Accordingly, the Lead Agencies do not believe that property assessments will be substantially impacted by the MSHCP to the extent that public services will be affected. Moreover, the MSHCP will develop a fee-based funding plan that will generate sufficient revenue to contribute to the MSHCP's funding and management costs. See Response H2-224.

    The commentor's hypothesis that implementation of the MSHCP "will likely" cause a reduction in property assessments that "could" lead to a reduction of public services that could affect the environment, is too speculative to analyze. Neither CEQA nor NEPA requires a more in-depth analysis of potential economic or social effects as they relate to the environment because such analysis is too speculative to discuss at this time. State CEQA Guidelines section 15145 specifically states that speculation is not required in an EIR. Likewise, NEPA does not require an analysis of impacts that are too speculative to identify. (See, e.g., Kootenai Tribe of Idaho v. Veneman (2002) 313 F.3d 1094; Hoosier Env'l Council, Inc. v. U.S. Army Corps of Engs. (S.D. Ind. 2000) 105 F. Supp.2d 953, 998 [concluding that economic growth from rural casino project was too speculative to require NEPA analysis].) See Response H2-15.

    L-2 The comment miscites the statistics in the Draft EIR/EIS. The Draft EIR/EIS states that the proposed MSHCP Conservation Area will include 120,200 acres (7%) of the 871,040 acres of vacant land in western Riverside County, not 22% as the comment states. (Draft EIR/EIS, pp. 2.1-2, 4.3-2) The commentor's use of the phrase "reduced supply of buildable land" is also misleading. Vacant land in the County would not all be developed even in the absence of an MSHCP. Some vacant land is unsuitable for Development (such as land in floodplains and on steep slopes). The MSHCP will not reduce the amount of future Development. The MSHCP will actually facilitate future Development by providing a streamlined approach to development approvals for Take Authorization. The Draft EIR/EIS specifically states on page 4.3-2 that "implementation of the proposed MSHCP will not change (either reduce or increase) the amount of Development (dwelling units and/or employment facilities) allowed pursuant to local land use controls." Therefore, regardless of whether or not the MSHCP is adopted, the same number of dwelling units and commercial/industrial/office space may ultimately be developed. Therefore, the Draft EIR/EIS concludes that the "only difference the MSHCP will make to future development is to change the precise location of the anticipated land uses within western Riverside County." (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 4.3-2.)

    L-3 The Lead Agencies cannot address potential indirect impacts from shifts in Development in the Draft EIR/EIS for the MSHCP because it would be speculative to try to determine where, and if, any particular future Development would be constructed. See Responses H2-15 and L-1. It is partially for this reason that the Draft EIR states that, as required by CEQA, future development proposals will undergo environmental review and the project's potential environmental impacts will be identified, analyzed and mitigated to the extent feasible. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 1.5-6.)

    L-4 See Response L-3.

    L-5 See Responses K-107, L-2 and L-3. The 2002 Riverside County General Plan and its related EIR analyze future land use in Riverside County.

    L-6 Encouraging infill development can help minimize impacts related to uncontrolled urban sprawl into undeveloped outlying areas. In general, urban services are readily available in infill areas, and these areas are closer to places of employment. To the degree that this is true for a particular area, infill development can often reduce the burden on local utilities by reducing the need for new facilities as well as the burden on roads by reducing trip generation. Encouraging infill development can, therefore, be an effective method of preserving land, water and other natural and man-made resources if there is a plan in place to preserve such resources in outlying areas. The MSHCP is such a plan.

    L-7 See Response K-2. The commentor refers to "more current biological data" being available but fails to identify any such data. With respect to spine flower, as noted in the Species Accounts (Draft MSHCP Volume II), there are documented occurrences of prostrate spine flower within the MSHCP Plan Area, and in addition, the Plan Area is considered to occupy a portion of the range of the species. Comments provided by the SRP in the October 2000 Alternatives Development Document have been addressed in the Draft MSHCP. Therefore, since the MSHCP is based on the best scientific and commercially available data, and the Draft EIR/EIS addresses the potential environmental effects associated with implementation of the MSHCP based on consistent data, the Draft EIR/EIS sufficiently meets the requirements of CEQA and NEPA.

    L-8 As required by CEQA and NEPA, the Draft EIR/EIS discusses a range of reasonable alternatives in detail in Section 2. As more thoroughly explained in Responses H2-93 through H2-122, the discussion of alternatives is based upon the best available scientific and commercial data. The range of alternatives considered was based on their feasibility, taking into account biological, land use, economic, regulatory, legal, and other considerations; their ability to reduce or avoid the MSHCP's significant environmental impacts; and their consistency with the objectives identified in Section 1.0 of the Draft EIR/EIS. The Lead Agencies have carefully reviewed previous comments made by agencies and incorporated their suggestions and recommendations into the Draft EIR/EIS. With regard to previous comments from the Scientific Review Panel, see Response G-4 and the Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of: Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003.


    Comment Letter L2 - Alhadeff and Solar on behalf of Anheuser-Busch, January 15, 2003

    L2-1 A complete rationale for the inclusion of Proposed Core 2 is provided in the Draft MSHCP, particularly within the discussion of Cores and Linkages, and within the individual species accounts for the Planning Species identified for Proposed Core 2.

    L2-2 Use of biological information in the Draft MSHCP and related documents is guided in part by federal standards promulgated under the U.S. Department of Commerce and Department of the Interior, Interagency Cooperative Policy on Information Standards Under the Endangered Species Act (FR 59, 34271). The federal interagency policy was established to provide criteria, establish procedures and provide guidance to ensure that decisions made by the USFWS under FESA represent the best scientific and commercial data available. Specific relevant language from that policy includes the following:

    The Services receive and use information on the biology, ecology, distribution, abundance, status, and trends of species from a wide variety of sources as part of their responsibility to implement the Act. Some of this information is anecdotal, some of it is oral, and some of it is found in written documents. These documents include status surveys, biological assessments, and other unpublished material (that is, "gray literature") from State natural resources agencies and natural heritage programs, Tribal governments, other Federal agencies, consulting firms, contractors, and individuals associated with professional organizations and higher educational institutions. The Services also use published articles from juried professional journals. The reliability of the information contained in these sources can be as variable as the sources themselves. As part of their routine activities Service biologists are required to gather, review, and evaluate information from these sources and evaluate information from these sources prior to undertaking listing, recovery, consultation and permitting actions.

    Therefore, the commentor is incorrect in stating that the UCR data should not be relied upon because it includes information from unpublished literature, since the guiding federal policy explicitly provides for consideration of such "gray literature."

    L2-3 The analysis of species Conservation provided in the Draft MSHCP is based on the best scientific and commercially available data. Neither FESA and related federal policy, nor the California Fish and Game Code, require the suggested "systematic surveys of the region."

    L2-4 See Response L2-2, specifically the acknowledgment within the federal interagency policy that relates to the consideration of the reliability of data. Such considerations were given in the analysis conducted for the Draft MSHCP.

    L2-5 See Response L2-4.

    L2-6 See Response L2-4.

    L2-7 See Response L2-4.

    L2-8 See Response L2-4.

    L2-9 See Response L2-4.

    L2-10 See Responses L2-4 and H2-98.

    L2-11 The UCR database does not identify "key populations" for species. The analysis conducted in the species account for Quino checkerspot butterfly (Volume II of the Draft MSHCP) includes consideration of the UCR species database. The species account identifies the Proposed Core 2 area as containing an important satellite population for the species, and includes Conservation of Proposed Core 2 as a Conservation Objective for the species.

    L2-12 See Response L2-11 regarding "key populations." See also Response L2-4, regarding consideration of the limitations of available data, as well documented in the Draft MSHCP. The analysis conducted in the species accounts for coastal California gnatcatcher, burrowing owl, western pond turtle, southern California rufous-crowned sparrow, Bell's sage sparrow, grasshopper sparrow, Swainson's hawk, Los Angeles pocket mouse, Munz's onion, San Diego ambrosia, California orcutt grass, and spreading navarretia (Volume II of the Draft MSHCP) include consideration of the UCR species database, and identify the Proposed Core 2 area as containing important habitat and/or species occurrence data for these species. Conservation of Proposed Core 2 will contribute to the Conservation of all of these species. It is not stated that any of these species rely solely on Conservation of Proposed Core 2, as implied in these comments.

    L2-13 See Response L2-12.

    L2-14 See Response L2-12.

    L2-15 See Response L2-12.

    L2-16 See Response L2-12.

    L2-17 See Response L2-12.

    L2-18 See Response L2-12.

    L2-19 See Response L2-12.

    L2-20 See Response L2-12.

    L2-21 See Response L2-12.

    L2-22 See Response L2-12.

    L2-23 See Response L2-12.

    L2-24 See Response L2-12.

    L2-25 See Response L2-12.

    L2-26 See Response L2-12.

    L2-27 See Response L2-12.

    L2-28 See Response L2-12.

    L2-29 See Response L2-12.

    L2-30 See Response L2-12.

    L2-31 See Response L2-12.

    L2-32 See Response L2-12.

    L2-33 As stated in the Draft MSHCP, Proposed Constrained Linkage 15 provides Live-In Habitat for western pond turtle and Los Angeles pocket mouse and provides important Linkage Habitat for bobcat. As also noted, Proposed Constrained Linkage 15 also provides a reserve design function of connectivity. Therefore, the commentor's assertion that the purported absence of "key populations" of the noted species is not valid for eliminating the Proposed Constrained Linkage 15, since identification of this reserve feature relied upon a variety of data sources, and not solely upon the UCR species occurrence data.

    L2-34 See Response L2-33.

    L2-35 See Response L2-33.

    L2-36 See Response L2-33.

    L2-37 The potential for proposed Constrained Linkage 16 to facilitate wildlife movement is based in the best scientific and commercially available data used in the analysis for the MSHCP.

    L2-38 The commentor's assertion that the purported absence of "key populations" of the noted species is not valid for eliminating the Proposed Constrained Linkage 16, since identification of this reserve feature relied upon a variety of data sources, and not solely upon the UCR species occurrence data.

    L2-39 Interstate 215 exists today. This obvious information was considered in the analysis pertaining to proposed Constrained Linkage 16.

    L2-40 See Response L2-39.

    L2-41 The requested information is contained in the discussion of Cores and Linkages, Section 3.2.3 of the Draft MSHCP.

    L2-42 The requested information is contained in the discussion of Cores and Linkages, Section 3.2.3 of the Draft MSHCP.

    L2-43 The commentor's assertion that the purported absence of "key populations" of the Planning Species identified for this reserve feature is not valid for eliminating the Proposed Constrained Linkage 17, since identification of this reserve feature relied upon a variety of data sources, and not solely upon the UCR species occurrence data.

    L2-44 The commentor's assertion that the purported absence of "key populations" of the Planning Species identified for this reserve feature is not valid for eliminating the Proposed Constrained Linkage 18, since identification of this reserve feature relied upon a variety of data sources, and not solely upon the UCR species occurrence data.

    L2-45 The requested information is contained in the discussion of Cores and Linkages, Section 3.2.3 of the Draft MSHCP.

    L2-46 The requested information is contained in the discussion of Cores and Linkages, Section 3.2.3 of the Draft MSHCP.

    L2-47 The requested information is contained in the discussion of Cores and Linkages, Section 3.2.3 of the Draft MSHCP.

    L2-48 Reserve Assembly procedures are described in Sections 3.0, 6.0 and 8.0 of the Plan and include a variety of methods and incentives to achieve the Conservation anticipated in the Plan. It is not necessary or appropriate to discuss the methods for Reserve Assembly for individual properties given the criteria-based approach incorporated in the Plan.

    L2-49 MSHCP reserve design considers multiple redundant Linkages within the French Valley area specifically to address the potential foreclosure of Linkage opportunities between Proposed Core 2 and other components of the MSHCP Conservation Area. In addition, the Draft MSHCP provides mechanisms to address circumstances where Conservation that is proposed in the MSHCP may be precluded.

    L2-50 See Response L2-48.

    L2-51 See Response L2-49.

    L2-52 See Responses L2-48 and L2-49.

    L2-53 See Response L2-49.

    L2-54 See Responses L2-48 and L2-49.

    L2-55 See Response L2-49.

    L2-56 See Response L2-49.

    L2-57 See Response L2-49.

    L2-58 See Response L2-49.

    L2-59 See Response L2-49.

    L2-60 See Response L2-49.

    L2-61 See Response L2-49.

    L2-62 The MSHCP is a criteria-based plan, and as such does not have mapped boundaries for any of the Additional Reserve Lands. The Criteria provide flexibility in achieving proposed Conservation and does not rely on "hard line" reserve areas. Therefore, "alternative boundaries" are not necessary, as the Criteria provides for flexibility in the ultimate boundaries of the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    L2-63 See Response L2-62.

    L2-64 See Response L2-62.

    L2-65 "Mitigation factors" are not considered to be necessary to achieve the proposed Conservation within Core 2.

    L2-66 See Response L2-62.

    L2-67 The MSHCP Criteria provide guidance as to the necessary Conservation. The stakeholders and County agreed early on to not develop a "hard-line" reserve system. Previous experience with the SKR HCP demonstrated the difficulties with a hard-line system. The Criteria approach offers the property owner the most flexibility in crafting a conservation proposal that meets the objectives of the MSHCP.

    L2-68 If the property owner proposed Development or offers the property for sale, the RCA and Local Permittees would work with the property owner to identify a specific acquisition scenario.

    L2-69 See Responses L2-67 and L2-68.

    L2-70 The IA identifies how each City will implement the MSHCP. Not all will use the HANS Process.

    L2-71 Cities must remain consistent with the terms of the IA.

    L2-72 Both Plans will continue to evolve based on the actual experience gained during implementation. The MSHCP will utilize the General Plan Bonus and Incentive Program if adopted by the Board of Supervisors. If not included in the General Plan, the MSHCP will utilize the Draft General Plan program as the basis of an MSHCP Incentive Program.


    Comment Letter L3 - Riverside County Fire Department, January 15, 2003

    L3-1 The Lead Agencies appreciate the comment and the proposed language will be added to the Final MSHCP.

    L3-2 The Lead Agencies will work during the first year of Plan implementation with the Riverside County Fire Department and CDFG to develop acceptable terms used in the draft easement contained within Appendix D to the MSHCP.


    Comment Letter L4 - Endangered Habitats League, March 13, 2003

    L4-1 This comment is a summary of Comment's L4-20 through L4-62 and specific responses are provided in the Responses to those comments.

    With respect to the first bullet, the MSHCP recognizes that "Western Riverside County is already a highly fragmented landscape that may not function in the future without human intervention through land-based management and Adaptive Management." (Draft MSHCP, Section 5.0, pg 5-1). The Applicable Conservation Biology Principles presented in Section 3.1.4 of the MSHCP reflect the items referenced in the comment regarding fragmentation and reserve design and, as stated in the MSHCP, these principles were used in the conservation planning process for the MSHCP. See Responses F-46, F-47, F-48, F-50 and F-51 for additional discussion of features incorporated in the MSHCP to address fragmentation. The conservation planning process also addressed the requirements of Covered Species and determined that meeting these requirements included protection of lands throughout the Plan Area, including more highly developed areas currently subject to development pressure. The Lead Agencies do not agree that simply because areas are fragmented they do not provide conservation value, and therefore should be dismissed. Further, moving Conservation from more developed areas to less developed areas may not meet the objectives for all of the Covered Species. Regarding the feasibility of implementing the MSHCP, the Plan identifies a Reserve Assembly process and a funding program that has been determined to be Feasible and demonstrates adequate funding capacity.

    With respect to the second bullet, the commentor offers opinions on cost reductions without any detailed cost estimates. Based on the preliminary and incomplete information in this Comment Letter, an evaluation has been completed on the differential costs of the alternative proposal in the Comment Letter ("the EHL Proposal") and the proposed MSHCP. This evaluation indicates that the EHL Proposal could require Conservation of an additional net 8,000 acres of Additional Reserve Lands. It should be noted that the Wildlife Agencies indicate that the Local Permittees will be responsible for this additional acquisition thus increasing the Local Permittee's acquisition requirements from 56,000 acres to 68,000 acres. An estimate prepared by the consultant team working on the nexus study for the MSHCP Local Development Mitigation Fee indicates that this additional Conservation could potentially reduce costs for Reserve Assembly by about $18 million rather than the $100 million as the commentor suggests in Comment L4-3. Thus, given the information provided in the comment and review of that information by the Lead Agencies, it cannot be concluded that the cost reductions for land acquisition noted in the comment would be realized under the EHL Proposal. However, language regardinga Local Permittee initiated Criteria Refinement Process has been incorporated in the Final MSHCP that may be suitable for future consideration of a proposal such as the EHL Proposal.

    The EHL Proposal provides no analysis of, or supporting documentation for, the assertion that management costs would be reduced under the Proposal. In contrast, the MSHCP provides a detailed analysis of capital costs and management costs (Draft MSHCP Section 8.0), based on reasonable estimates of acreage to be acquired and associated land values, as well as management cost estimates that are based on actual management experience, and a detailed assessment of proposed management activities, as outlined in Section 5.0 of the Plan.

    The second point raised in this bullet suggests that the EHL Proposal would assure conservation objectives of the Plan. This is offered without analysis of the individual objectives for each of the Covered Species contained in the species accounts in the MSHCP (Volume II). The EHL Proposal would eliminate Conservation in one Proposed Core area and several Linkages, but does not provide any information regarding the Covered Species for which these areas are proposed to provide Conservation. Therefore, it is not clear how the commentor can reach a supportable conclusion that the EHL Proposal would "assure MSHCP conservation objectives are met" without the requisite analysis.

    Regarding the third bullet, see Responses L4-20 through L4-35.

    Regarding the fourth bullet, as noted earlier in this Response, the MSHCP provides a detailed analysis of management and related costs of funding. Funding of the Management and Monitoring Program has been determined to be Feasible based on information included in Section 8.0 and Appendix B of the Plan. Known and anticipated "fiscal constraints" have been considered and addressed in the Plan. No information has been provided in the Comment Letter to support the conclusion that the EHL Proposal would provide for "cost-effective management."

    The remaining five bullets describe the features of the EHL Proposal described in greater detail in the Comment Letter. See Responses L4-20 through L4-58.

    L4-2 The MSHCP does not rely "too heavily on Conservation of fragmented lands in a developing suburban and urban matrix." See Responses L4-1, L4-9, L4-10, L4-17, L4-20 through L4-24, and L4-32 through L4-34.

    The analysis of each Covered Species in the MSHCP (Volume II), includes an analysis of configuration issues, and demonstrates that in consideration of configuration and other issues, the MSHCP Conservation Area does provide long-term benefits for Covered Species. These analyses are based on the best scientific and commercial data available.

    The funding, management and monitoring plans developed for the MSHCP are based on the risks and costs associated with assembling and managing reserves in an urban setting. See Responses L4-1, L4-10 and L4-15.

    The conservation planning process for the MSHCP was biologically based as described in Section 3.1 of the MSHCP and the Conservation Strategy identified for each Covered Species is designed to achieve the overall MSHCP biological goal: "In the MSHCP Plan Area, Conserve Covered Species and their Habitats." See Responses G-2, G-6, G-9, R19, R-20, R-21, R-25 and R-34. Sufficient information is not provided in the comment to determine if the EHL Proposal would meet this goal for the Covered Species.

    With respect to "optimal use of capital and management funds," see Response L4-1.

    L4-3 See Responses L4-1, L4-2, L4-40 and L4-41.

    L4-4 Information is not provided in the comment to support the conclusion that the "expansions" and "contractions" of the Criteria Area incorporated in the EHL Proposal would achieve the results indicated in the comment. See Responses L4-20 through L4-58 for discussion of the specific features of the EHL Proposal and the degree to which those features improve upon the proposed MSHCP and achieve the results indicated in the comment.

    L4-5 Assurance is not provided in the comment that the EHL Proposal would eliminate the potential for litigation. In addition, as noted in the comment, the EHL Proposal would need to be refined and the "strategies behind it" applied "to other MSHCP areas" and the Criteria Area "expanded" in certain areas. Given these features of the Proposal, the Lead Agencies do not agree that "adoption of this alternative" would result in only a "brief delay." The Lead Agencies believe that the past and ongoing preparation, review and approval process for the MSHCP is a collaborative one. However, language regarding a Local Permittee initiated Criteria Refinement Process has been incorporated in the Final MSHCP that may be suitable for future consideration of a proposal such as the EHL Proposal.

    L4-6 Information is not provided in the comment to support the conclusion that the "strength of the take permits" would be enhanced by the EHL Proposal or that it would provide "better assurances that permits for infrastructure, including CETAP corridors, will remain in effect." See Responses L4-1 and L4-5.

    The commentor makes unsubstantiated statements in this conclusion. The proposed alternative reserve system could well be more costly and less defensible since it has no scientific basis and impacts many additional property owners and significantly increases the number of acres of conservation. This increase in acres without any showing of greater conservation benefit would increase management costs by over $1 million per year. The proposed reserve system does not meet the requirements of an NCCP since it greatly limits the connectivity of conservation areas and potentially results in the loss of coverage for two currently listed species. However, language regarding a Local Permittee initiated Criteria Refinement Process has been incorporated in the Final MSHCP that may be suitable for future consideration of a proposal such as the EHL Proposal.

    L4-7 The core/linkage approach referenced in this comment is a typical conservation planning approach in multiple species planning efforts and has been incorporated in the conservation planning process for the MSHCP as discussed in Sections 3.1 and 3.2.3 of the Draft MSHCP. The Conceptual Conservation Scenario initially developed as part of the MSHCP, and discussed in Section 3.1 of the Plan, incorporated existing core reserves and suggested new Core Areas, including those referenced in the comment. The Lead Agencies do not agree with the commentor that there are weaknesses to this overall approach. Since specific weaknesses are not identified in the comment, a more specific response cannot be provided.

    L4-8 The commentor is not correct in asserting that the core/linkage strategy was not given equal emphasis to the lowland ecosystem. As discussed in Section 3.2.2 of the Plan, representativeness of Bioregions and other parameters was an important factor in the conservation planning process for the MSHCP. With respect to the Riverside Lowlands Bioregion, Section 3.2.2 of the Plan notes that 24% (166,820 acres) within this Bioregion would be conserved as part of the MSHCP. This represents significant Conservation within this Bioregion particularly when considering, as stated in Section 3.2.2, that approximately 50 percent of the land in the Riverside Lowlands Bioregion currently supports urban or agricultural land uses. See Responses G-16 and G-17 for discussion of the representativeness of grassland and coastal sage scrub within the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    L4-9 The conservation planning process for the MSHCP was undertaken with knowledge and understanding of the changes to the landscape in the French Valley (Core 2) area referenced in this comment. The items referenced in this comment have been taken into consideration in the MSHCP planning process in the following ways:

    • The MSHCP acknowledges the presence of the County administrative center and jail and does not contemplate a terrestrial linkage from Johnson Ranch to the Hogbacks. Rather, the MSHCP calls for expansions of existing conservation in the Johnson Ranch area to increase patch size and strengthen connectivity to the Lake Skinner area to the east.
    • The MSHCP recognizes the presence of ongoing and approved developments in the French Valley area and proposals for Conservation within Core 2 and Constrained Linkages 15, 16, 17 and 18 incorporate this recognition. As part of the MSHCP planning process, the MSHCP consultants worked with County and City of Murrieta staff to evaluate core and linkage proposals in the context of ongoing developments. In particular, the Constrained Linkages referenced above incorporate to the extent Feasible open space reflected in existing and ongoing development plans including, in some cases, existing resource agency permits. Conservation contemplated within Core 2 focuses on those areas with the greatest concentrations of biological resources in strategic locations with respect to the overall configuration of the MSHCP Conservation Area. Notwithstanding existing and ongoing development in the French Valley area, substantial, relatively unfragmented, habitat blocks remain that provide opportunities for Conservation consistent with MSHCP biological goals.
    • The arterial road system in the French Valley area was also considered in the MSHCP planning process. As described in Section 9.3 of the Draft MSHCP, a variety of arterials in the French Valley area, including Keller, Baxter, Briggs, De Portola and Murrieta Hot Springs were realigned as part of the County's Circulation Element planning process to reduce the potential for fragmentation in the Core 2 area. The current design anticipates that the only road traversing Core 2 would be Clinton Keith Road and the MSHCP incorporates specific design guidelines for arterials such as Clinton Keith Road to reduce fragmentation effects associated with construction of the roadway.
    • Similarly, the MSHCP recognizes the presence of ongoing and approved developments in the Lake Elsinore/Sedco Hills area (MSHCP Linkage 8). This description of Linkage 8 in the Draft MSHCP acknowledges the presence of barriers within this Linkage that will affect terrestrial movement and notes that terrestrial movement within this Linkage will likely be limited to common mammals. Opportunities for avian movement and dispersal are emphasized in this Linkage.

    L4-10 Papers by the authors cited in the comment were reviewed as part of the MSHCP planning process and those papers are cited in the references included in the MSHCP Literature Cited and References, Volume II, Section D of the MSHCP. Citations to some of these authors are included in Sections 2.1.1, 3.1.4 and 3.1.5 of the Plan. Section 3.1.4 of the Plan acknowledges that Edge Effects have deleterious effects on biological resources and the Core and Linkage descriptions in Section 3.2.3 highlight those Cores, Linkages and Constrained Linkage that will likely require more management due to Edge Effects. In addition, the Management and Monitoring Plan presented in Section 5.0 of the Plan states that the Plan Area is already a highly fragmented landscape and that management will be required in order to meet the overall MSHCP goal of Conserving Habitats and Covered Species in the Plan Area.

    L4-11 Sections 4.0 and 5.0 of the Draft MSHCP acknowledge the costs of managing reserve lands in an urban setting. As noted in Response L4-10, the existing condition of the Plan Area is that of a highly fragmented landscape.

    L4-12 See Responses L4-1, L4-2, L4-3 and L4-7.

    L4-13 This comment describes the parties involved in development of the EHL Proposal as also described in Comment L4-1 and no further response is necessary.

    L4-14 The objectives noted in the comment are consistent within objectives of the Plan. The exhibits attached to the comment letter indicate that the objective noted in the third bullet, a reserve design within the draft Criteria Area, was not achieved by the working group referenced in the comment.

    L4-15 The Lead Agencies concur that management costs for reserves in an urban setting may be greater than management costs for a reserve system in a wilderness setting. However, as stated in the Plan, the MSHCP Plan Area is already a highly fragmented landscape and any reserve assembled in the Plan Area will be subject to the issues and costs associated with management of a reserve in an urban setting. See Responses L4-1, L4-3, L4-10 and L4-11.

    L4-16 The process described is consistent with elements of the conservation planning process described in Section 3.1 of the Plan. See Response L4-14.

    L4-17 The Lead Agencies do not agree that the MSHCP does not adequately protect Covered Species or does not reflect conditions on the ground. Since more specific statements regarding these issues are not provided in this comment, more specific responses cannot be provided. Specific responses to specific comments are provided in the other responses to the comments in this letter. See Responses L4-7, L4-8 and L4-9.

    With respect to the SWRCMSR and Lake Mathews reserves, expansions to these reserves are proposed as part of the MSHCP as indicated by the Criteria Area depicted on the MSHCP Plan map (Figure 3-1) and Extensions of Existing Cores 2, 6 and 7 as shown on the MSHCP Schematic Cores and Linkages map (Figure 3-2). These expansions are proposed to protect and augment these existing reserves and provide greater connectivity between the existing reserves and other existing and planned conservation lands. See Response L4-9 for discussion of the French Valley and Sedco Hills areas. Since "regionally critical habitat linkages" not incorporated in the MSHCP are not identified in the comment, a specific response cannot be provided.

    L4-18 See Response L4-17.

    L4-19 The principles of the working group referenced in this comment appear to be similar to elements of the MSHCP objectives and conservation planning process for the MSHCP as described in Sections 1.2.3, 1.3 and 3.1 of the Plan. The Lead Agencies note that the commentor's statements that "the proposed reserve alternative is conceptual and will require additional analysis"; that "the Bio Working Group discussed the compelling need to apply the reserve design principles articulated in this report to other areas of the planning area including, but not limited to, Vail Lake, the San Jacinto River, Linkages from the SWRCMSR to the reserves to the north across the Hemet Basin; and the connections across I-15 to Alberhill and the Santa Ana Mountains"; and that "there is a need for more detailed analysis and refinement of this conceptual alternative" indicate that the EHL Proposal does not represent a complete alternative to the MSHCP but rather, as stated in Comment L4-16, a "test case" for a conservation planning approach. The conservation planning approach described in the comment is compatible with that used for the MSHCP. See Responses L4-7, L4-14 and L4-16.

    L4-20 The Lead Agencies do not agree that the MSHCP Criteria for Lake Mathews and the area surrounding Harford Springs reflect the features mentioned in the comment. These areas are incorporated respectively in Existing Core C/Extension of Existing Core 2 and Linkage 3 as identified in the MSHCP. Together Existing Core C/Extension of Existing Core 2 are proposed to total 23,710 acres of which 22,280 acres would be interior and 1,430 acres would be edge. As stated in the MSHCP, Linkage 3 includes "upland habitats in the Gavilan Hills, Harford Springs and proposed North Peak Conservation Bank" areas and is proposed to include 5,550 acres with about 4,620 acres of interior lands and 930 acres of edge. The descriptions of these areas in the MSHCP are not consistent with the assertions in the comment that the MSHCP proposes Conservation in these areas "with a high amount of edge, relatively narrow reserve areas, and reserve boundaries that often do not provide for effective wildlife control."

    L4-21 The MSHCP acknowledges the characteristics of the Plan Area identified in the comment and reflects these characteristics in the proposed MSHCP Conservation Area. As stated in the MSHCP, the proposed MSHCP Conservation Area incorporates Extension of Existing Core 2 which proposes extension of the existing Lake Mathews reserve to the west "to the base of the hills facing I-15." The MSHCP planning process has consistently identified an objective of extending preservation in this area to provide an upland connection along the eastern boundary of Temescal Wash and providing broad connectivity between the wash and Lake Mathews reserve. The MSHCP also includes reserve areas identified for the El Sobrante landfill in the El Sobrante HCP. Based on our understanding that the Black Rock area is the geologic formation west of I-215 and north of El Sobrante, this area is included in the Criteria Area. The description of Linkage 3 in Section 3.2.2 of the Draft MSHCP notes that this area historically supported Quino and recognizes the presence of clay soils supporting sensitive plant species in this linkage area.

    L4-22 The Temescal Wash area noted in this comment is generally located within Subunit 2 of the Temescal Canyon Area Plan. One of the Biological Issues and Considerations for this Subunit is to "conserve upland habitat adjacent to Temescal Wash to augment existing upland habitat conservation in the Lake Mathews/Estelle Mountain Reserve areas and provide for contiguous connection of upland habitat blocks from the existing reserve to Temescal Wash. Habitat conservation should focus on blocks of existing upland habitat east of Temescal Wash connecting to the Lake Mathews/Estelle Mountain Reserve." Thus, the features described in this comment have been incorporated in the MSHCP. With respect to potential presence of clay endemic species west of I-15, the comment does not identify specific areas as desirable for Conservation and a specific response is not possible. The MSHCP proposes Conservation west of I-15 in the vicinity of Lake Mathews within proposed Core 1, Linkages 1 and 2 and Constrained Linkages 3, 5 and 6. The Biological Issues and Consideration for Core 1 call for protection of clay soils supporting clay endemic species.

    L4-23 See Responses L4-20, L4-21, L4-22, and T-2.

    L4-24 See Response L4-20 for discussion of the size and configuration of Linkage 3 (including interior and edge acres) within which the Harford Springs area is located. The definition of Linkage in the MSHCP recognizes that Linkages may function as Core Areas/Live-In Habitat for some species. The MSHCP acknowledges the historic presence of quino in the Gavilan Hills area and quino is identified as a Planning Species for this Linkage in the MSHCP as are clay soils plant species such as Munz's onion and many-stemmed dudleya. Since reference to specific cell numbers is not provided in the comment, a more specific response cannot be provided.

    L4-25 The Criteria Area extends around Harford Springs to the south, east and west and Reserve Assembly is anticipated to occur in these areas to augment existing Conservation in Harford Springs Park. With respect to terrestrial species, the description of Linkage 3 in the MSHCP Plan notes that terrestrial movement within this Linkage is anticipated only for common mammals. See Response L4-24.

    L4-26 The "reconfiguration" referenced in the comment appears to be similar to the proposed configuration of Linkage 3 described in the MSHCP. With respect to steeply sloping lands where "conservation may be accomplished with development restrictions," this approach is not consistent with the incentives-based approach incorporated in the MSHCP or with the requirements in the MSHCP that lands within the MSHCP Conservation Area be accessible for the management, monitoring and public access activities incorporated in the MSHCP. The MSHCP identifies this area as a potential location for reintroduction of quino.

    L4-27 The MSHCP does not anticipate that Linkage 3 will be a fragmented Linkage. No features of the MSHCP would restrict swapping existing public lands as part of the Reserve Assembly process. See Responses L4-24, L4-25 and L4-26.

    L4-28 The Lead Agencies do not agree that the Linkage as proposed in the MSHCP "lacks a coherent border" or that better"buffering" would be provided by the EHL Proposal. See Responses L4-26 and L4-27.

    L4-29 The area referenced in this comment is included within Linkage 8, Constrained Linkage 16 and a portion of Core 1 as identified in the MSHCP. The descriptions of these areas in the MSHCP note that terrestrial movement in these areas is anticipated only for common mammals. The MSHCP recognizes the presence of the existing barriers to terrestrial movement within this area noted in the comment. The focus in this area in the MSHCP is on avian movement and dispersal, especially gnatcatchers, as noted in the comment, along with Live-In Habitat for certain species.

    L4-30 The stepping stone linkage configuration described in the comment is similar to that anticipated in the MSHCP. The MSHCP anticipates a linkage comprised of narrow, constrained areas sufficient to maintain existing terrestrial movement for common mammals along with larger patches of intact upland habitat sufficient to support Live-In Habitat for avian species such as gnatcatchers. The Lead Agencies do not agree with the commentor's assertion that "the total management commitment would be lower than that required for any attempt to maintain terrestrial connectivity through the entire Elsinore and Sedco Hills linkage" given the later statement in the comment that: "Given the lack of terrestrial connectivity, management responses to maintaining genetic integrity of regional populations may need to be developed." Such management responses may involve actions such as translocating individuals between areas which would be a costly endeavor. With respect to the use of "lands with a slope of greater than 25%," see Response L4-26.

    L4-31 The comment incorrectly characterizes the degree of terrestrial connectivity anticipated in the Elsinore and Sedco Hills linkage in the MSHCP. The terrestrial connectivity anticipated in this area in the MSHCP is not anticipated to be greater than that occurring under existing conditions and would not be a focus of monitoring in the MSHCP. See Responses L4-29 and L4-30.

    L4-32 The MSHCP does not propose limited Conservation within and adjacent to the SWRCMSR. The SWRCMSR is identified as Existing Core J in the MSHCP. Within Existing Core J, the SWRCMSR proposes 24,360 acres of Conservation including 23,460 interior acres and 900 acres of edge. Adjacent to Existing Core J, the MSHCP proposed Conservation within Extensions of Existing Cores 5, 6 and 7. Together, these areas comprise 26,140 acres of Conservation including 25,010 interior acres and 1,130 acres of edge. Linkages 13 and 14 are also proposed adjacent to the SWRCMSR to the east. Together, these Linkages comprise 6,230 acres of Conservation including 5,560 interior acres and 670 acres of edge. Taken together, these areas comprise 56,730 acres of Conservation with 54,030 interior acres and 2,700 acres of edge.

    Although the Criteria Area is the focus area where Reserve Assembly will occur, it is not correct to state that properties outside the Criteria Area "would not be eligible for long term conservation options." The Criteria Refinement Process in Section 6.5 of the Draft MSHCP allows additions to the Criteria Area as part of that process.

    L4-33 Extensions of Existing Cores 5 and 6 are incorporated in the MSHCP to augment the connection between Lake Skinner and Johnson Ranch including the area at the north end of Anza Road. Quino is identified as a Planning Species for Existing Core J and Extensions of Existing Cores 5 and 6. The Lead Agencies do not agree that the MSHCP leaves the SWRCSMR "unfinished." See Response L4-32.

    L4-34 Areas along the western edge of the SWRCSMR are within Extension of Existing Core 7 and are proposed to be included in the MSHCP Conservation Area. See Response L4-32.

    L4-35 In addition to the species cited in the comment, Planning Species for Core 2 include sensitive plants such as Munz's onion, San Diego ambrosia, spreading naverretia and California Orcutt grass; bird species in addition to the California gnatcatcher including southern California rufous-crowned sparrow, grasshopper sparrow, Bell's sage sparrow, Swainson's hawk and California horned lark; and other species including bobcat, Los Angeles pocket mouse and western pond turtle.

    The Lead Agencies concur with the commentor's statements regarding the presence of coastal sage scrub and occurrences of quino in the Core 2 area. MSHCP planning efforts have focused more on augmenting Conservation provided in the AD161 HCP in the Johnson Ranch and Rancho Bella Vista areas to provide a larger block of conserved area than on providing a connection from these areas to Core 2. As noted in Response L4-9, it is recognized that a linkage to Core 2 is compromised by the existing County administrative center and a jail. The Lead Agencies are aware of recent acquisitions in the French Valley area including the 400-acre property referenced in the comment but these acquisitions were not acquired for restoration purposes.

    L4-36 The Lead Agencies have determined that Core 2 is Feasible and would contribute to Conservation in the MSHCP. The Lead Agencies are aware of the Greer Ranch and Murrieta Hills projects referenced in the comment and these projects are reflected in the Criteria for Constrained Linkage 16 and Linkage 8. Approved Specific Plans are located throughout the Plan Area. As noted in Section 3.3.1 of the MSHCP, General Plan Alternative 3 and other project-specific mapping information was used in the development of the Criteria for each Area Plan to provide input regarding planned land uses. The Lead Agencies are aware that a number of approved Specific Plans are present in the French Valley Area. It is recognized that Core 2 would be separated from other Core Areas by I-15, I-215 and SR-79. A variety of redundant Constrained Linkages (15, 16, 17 18) as well as Linkage 8 and Extensions of Existing Cores 5 and 6 are incorporated in the MSHCP to address this issue. The isolation referenced in the comment is a factor throughout the fragmented landscape within the Plan Area.

    L4-37 The MSHCP calls for Core 2 to be 5,050 acres in size with 4,140 interior acres and 910 acres of edge. The Lead Agencies do not agree that this would constitute a "gerrymandered voting district rather than a well-designed reserve." A 1-mile width, such as cited in the comment, is regarded as a substantial width for the Planning Species identified for this Core Area including quino and the plants referenced in Response L4-35. See Responses L4-9 and L4-36 for discussion of terrestrial movement and isolation associated with Core 2.

    L4-38 The "archetypal " population referenced in the comment refers to historic conditions in the Plan Area that have not existed since well before the MSHCP planning process began. As noted in the MSHCP, the planning process is occurring in the context of the existing urbanized and fragmented landscape within the Plan Area (Draft MSHCP, pg. 5-1). The MSHCP recognizes that management of quino within Core 2 will be necessary to achieve overall MSHCP objectives of sustaining populations of quino within the Plan Area. The specific management activities identified for quino in Table 5-2 of the Draft MSHCP require that each Reserve Manager "evaluate the condition of the Quino checkerspot Habitat within their Core Area and maintain an adaptive program to maintain and/or enhance Quino checkerspot Habitat to increase the value of the Habitat and viability of the Quino checkerspot." See Responses L4-9, L4-36 and L4-37.

    L4-39 See Responses L4-17, L4-32, L4-33 and L4-34.

    L4-40 See Responses L4-1, L4-9 and L4-15. As noted in Response L4-9, certain roadways in the vicinity of Core 2 were eliminated from the Circulation Element as part of the MSHCP planning process resulting in some concomitant cost reductions in infrastructure in this area. It is acknowledged that measures would need to be incorporated in the design of the portion of Clinton Keith Road traversing Core 2 to ensure consistency with MSHCP requirements. Changes in the cost of an infrastructure project do not directly affect funds available for implementation of the MSHCP, including management.

    L4-41 With respect to the first and second bullets of the comment, see Responses L4-17, L4-32, L4-33 and L4-34. With respect to replacement of Core 2 as proposed in the MSHCP with the "several large habitat stepping stones," "both drainages through the Core 2 area" and Conservation of "important extant populations of ...plants" referenced in the third and fourth bullets of the comment, sufficient detail is not provided in the comment to determine the differences between the recommendations in the comment and the reserve configuration proposed in the MSHCP. The MSHCP contemplates an approximately 5,000 acre Core Area incorporating the stepping stones, drainages and plant populations referenced in the comment. Given existing parcelization and approvals in the Core 2 area, the Lead Agencies are uncertain how the Conservation proposed in this area in the comment would differ substantially from either a reserve configuration or cost standpoint when compared with the Conservation in this area anticipated in the MSHCP. However, language regarding a Local Permittee initiated Criteria Refinement Process has been incorporated in the Final MSHCP that may be suitable for future consideration of a proposal such as the replacement of Core 2.

    The fifth bullet references the need for a "functional bridge" at the Warm Springs Creek crossing. Since no design for the Clinton Keith Road/Warm Springs crossing has been proposed, it is premature to project cost savings of the EHL Proposal when compared with the Guidelines in Section 7.0 of the Draft MSHCP (see also Response L4-40).

    With respect to the last sentence of the comment, see Responses L4-26 and L4-38. The management activities for quino incorporated in the Plan call for maintenance and/or enhancement of quino habitat as appropriate within the MSHCP Conservation Area. As noted in Response L4-24, the MSHCP identifies quino as a Planning Species in the Lake Mathews area; however, reintroduction of quino to this area would be a costly process with an uncertain outcome which would be an added cost of the EHL Proposal beyond what is anticipated in the MSHCP. In fact, in Comment Z3-18, one of the authors of this Comment Letter L4 notes the following: "We don't know how to translocate quino checkerspot butterflies to recovering patches of their habitat."

    L4-42 See Responses L4-9, L4-21, L4-32, L4-36, L4-37 and L4-38.

    L4-43 The commentor's assertions regarding acceleration of development, assurances of cash flow and reduced per-acre costs for Reserve Assembly are speculative and not supported by information in the comment. The funding plan as presented in Section 8.0 of the Draft MSHCP was developed in consultation with the Wildlife Agencies to meet the requirements of FESA and the NCCP Act. See Response L4-1.

    L4-44 See Responses L4-17, L4-32, L4-33 and L4-34.

    L4-45 The comment is unclear regarding the recommended configurations of quino conservation areas and the ways in which the conservation areas "would be separated by a lake and a wide riparian zone." Under the proposed MSHCP, quino conservation would be focused within Proposed Cores 2, 4, 6 and 7 and within Existing Cores A and J and Extensions of Existing Cores 5 and 6, with limited opportunities for connectivity and reintroduction in Linkages 3 and 8 and Existing Core C. These areas provide for separations between populations to address stochastic events such as wildfire and include the "two larger reserves" referenced in the comment. See Responses L4-26 and L4-41 regarding reintroduction of quino in the Harford Springs area and Response L4-41 regarding Criteria Refinement language in the Final MSHCP that may be appropriate for consideration of alternative configurations of quino conservation areas..

    L4-46 See Responses L4-17, L4-32, L4-33, L4-34, L4-37 and L4-41.

    L4-47 See Responses L4-26, L4-29 and L4-30.

    L4-48 The MSHCP proposes Conservation of the drainages and riparian habitat associated with Warm Springs Creek referenced in the comment. See Response L4-41.

    L4-49 The location of the recommended conservation referenced in this comment cannot be ascertained from the comment and a specific response is not possible.

    L4-50 See Responses L4-1, L4-15, L4-17, L4-32, L4-33 and L4-34.

    L4-51 See Responses L4-40 and L4-41.

    L4-52 The Lead Agencies concur that connecting Existing Core J to Cleveland National Forest is appropriate and such connections are incorporated in the MSHCP.

    L4-53 The commentincorrectlycharacterizes the configuration of Proposed Core 4 and Linkage 14 as having "significant development" within them. As described in the MSHCP, proposed Core 4 is proposed to comprise 11,890 acres including 11,340 interior acres and 550 acres of edge. Linkage 14 is proposed to comprise 4,320 acres including 3,990 interior acres and 330 acres of edge. The commentor is using geographic references that the Lead Agencies are unable to accurately locate and a more specific response is not possible. With respect to Linkage 14, it should be noted that the MSHCP Criteria describe a Linkage virtually identical to the linkage recommended by one of the authors of this Comment Letter L4 (Memorandum from Jud Monroe to June Collins, Linkage from the Multi-Species Reserve to the National Forest, March 25, 2000) as part of the information assembled during the conservation planning process for the MSHCP.

    L4-54 See Response L4-53.

    L4-55 As noted in Response L4-32, the MSHCP anticipates conservation of the SWRCSMR within Existing Core J along with additional linked areas to the west, south and east. Taken together, these areas comprise 56,730 acres of Conservation with 54,030 interior acres and 2,700 acres of edge. This configuration appears to be similar to the "mega reserve" recommended for this area in the comment.

    The Lead Agencies concur that the additional areas recommended for Conservation in this area by the commentor would result in additional protection of grasslands; however, reconfiguration of Proposed Core 2 as recommended in Comment L4-41 would eliminate substantial blocks of existing grassland habitat. Based on the MSHCP vegetation map, it appears that the additional grasslands Conservation would generally include patches of non-native grassland in a mosaic with other habitats and that certain larger patches of grassland conservation would be eliminated. See Response G-16 for additional discussion of grasslands conservation under the MSHCP.

    See Responses L4-1 and L4-3.

    L4-56 The Lead Agencies agree that connections should be made along the San Gorgonio River across I-10 and between western San Diego Riverside County and San Diego County (between the Palomar Mountains/Agua Tibia wilderness and the Santa Ana Mountains) consistent with information contained in the referenced Missing Linkages Project report. Theseconnections involve coordination with American Indian tribes. Language has been added to the Final MSHCP to address these connections in the context of coordination with American Indian tribes. See Response D-16.

    L4-57 See Response L4-56 and Response D-16.

    L4-58 See Response L4-56 and Response D-16.

    L4-59 Survey requirements associated with individual project proposals within the Plan Area are identified in Sections 6.1.3 and 6.3.2 of the Plan. In addition, surveys within the MSHCP Conservation Area will be undertaken as part of the MSHCP Management and Monitoring Plan as described in Section 5.3 of the Draft MSHCP. The reference in the comment that surveys should be conducted "of areas deleted from the draft MSHCP Conservation Area to determine whether unique areas of biodiversity would be affected" by the EHL Proposal reinforces the commentor's previous statements that the EHL Proposal is incomplete and would require substantial refinement. In addition, this comment implies that such refinements could result in fewer reductions to Core 2 and Linkage 8 than previously indicated, resulting in higher costs. Finally, surveys within the Criteria Area "on a routine basis before development occurs" such as described in the comment would require access to private properties and are not proposed as part of the MSHCP except as described in Sections 6.1.3, 6.3.2 and 5.3 of the Plan.

    L4-60 The criteria-based approach incorporated in the MSHCP provides opportunities for the types of refinements discussed in this comment. The Reserve Assembly process incorporated in the MSHCP anticipates assembly of the MSHCP Conservation Area based on current data at the time of conveyance of lands to the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    L4-61 It is not clear in the comment how the "proposed reconfiguration" would give small landowners greater options for use of their lands or how this relates to the author's recognition of the value of low-density development adjacent to reserves. The MSHCP as proposed does not call for a specific land use type, such as low-density Development, adjacent to the MSHCP Conservation Area. Figure 3-1 of the Plan, the MSHCP Plan map, does indicate the configuration of the County's existing Rural Mountainous designation in relation to the proposed Criteria Area and the MSHCP acknowledges that such Rural Mountainous areas may provide a beneficial edge to the MSHCP Conservation Area for certain species. See SRP Correspondence regarding Comparative Evaluation of Alternative MSHCP, April 2003.

    L4-62 The MSHCP proposes management onlyon lands within the MSHCP Conservation Area and does not impose management requirements on lands outside the MSHCP Conservation Area. The Guidelines for the Urban/Wildlands Interface incorporated in the MSHCP are directed toward maintaining the type of "good neighbor" relationship referenced in the comment.

    L4-63 See Responses L4-1 through L4-62.

    Comment Letter M

    Comment Letter M - Jackson, DeMarco, Peckenpaugh, on behalf of Riverside County Farm Bureau, 14 January 2003

    M-1 The Lead Agencies appreciate the Farm Bureau's participation in the RCIP process and that the Farm Bureau is generally supportive of the RCIP planning process. The Lead Agencies disagree that the MSHCP will have significant negative effects on agricultural activities and believe that this Plan provides more protections for agriculture than any other large regional HCPs. The MSHCP does support the continued viability of agriculture in western Riverside County, incorporates many of the Farm Bureau's previous comments and recommendations, and addresses, in most instances, the concerns raised by the Farm Bureau during numerous and extensive meetings. However, it is up to the Lead Agencies to determine which comments and proposed changes to the Plan are feasible, appropriate and will still allow Permit issuance.

    M-2 The MSHCP places no limit on agricultural lands. In fact, the MSHCP supports the continuation and expansion of agriculture in western Riverside County. The table entitled, "Proposed Agriculturally Zoned/General Plan Farmland within the Limits of Each MSHCP Alternative (Acres)," identifies the amount of agriculturally zoned and/or General Plan designated farmland within the MSHCP Plan Area for the Draft MSHCP and its alternatives, but places no limits on the number of acres of agriculture in western Riverside County. In fact, the MSHCP authorizes Take of Covered Species in connection with agricultural activities, which otherwise would not occur absent issuance of Take Authorization through the Section 7 or 10 processes.

    Three different categories of agricultural land were analyzed in the MSHCP EIR/EIS: existing utilized agricultural land, land zoned or designated under the Cities' existing and the County's Draft General Plans, and State Designated Farmland. Impacts to each of these categories are discussed in depth in Section 4.2 of the MSHCP EIR/EIS. To avoid confusion between the different farmland categories, the analyses for impacts to these three categories were kept separate in the EIR/EIS. Each assessment identifies potential impacts to each category of Agricultural Operations that would result from implementation of the proposed MSHCP and the various alternatives. While these numbers are interrelated and may overlap, they are not interchangeable. For example, land may be zoned as agricultural but not actively farmed. Likewise, land may be actively farmed but not Designated Farmland by the state. Thus, it would be inappropriate to add the numbers from the different categories or to subtract them from each other.

    The figures presented in this comment are erroneous. First, the comment appears to incorrectly conclude that agricultural land will be reduced from 169,4801 acres identified in the 1995 vegetation study as agricultural to 32,6962 acres. This statement by the commentor appears to confuse different types of "agricultural" designations.

    The 1995 vegetation study was produced to determine the rough boundaries of the existing biological classifications of land within the MSHCP Plan Area. The 1995 vegetation study is based on how land would be characterized from a vegetation (biological) standpoint. Agriculture was one of the four broad categories of vegetation type identified in the 1995 vegetation study. The designation of land as "agriculture" in the 1995 vegetation study does not necessarily mean that the land is in existing agricultural use. Rather, the "agriculture" designation was used to indicate land that has been disturbed but currently has very limited development on it. This includes lands previously planted in crops, tilled, cleared, or otherwise disturbed, even if there is no current agricultural activity on the land. In other words, vegetation communities are based on the type of vegetation (biological resources) present on the site, not the existing land use or land use designation. For this reason, the 169,480 acres identified as agricultural or other disturbed land uses in the 1995 vegetation study does not correlate to the 161,792 acres of actively utilized agricultural land in the MSHCP Plan Area which was identified in the 1999 Existing Setting Report. Agricultural vegetation is discussed in Section 4.1.

    In calculating the MSHCP's potential impacts to agricultural resources, it would not be appropriate to use the 169,480 acre figure as the baseline because 169,480 relates to the number of acres that are classified as biologically disturbed, not necessarily those that are actually utilized for agriculture. Therefore, the Draft EIR used the 161,792 acres of actively utilized agricultural land as the baseline. The 32,696 figure cited identifies the number of acres that will be zoned or designated as agricultural under the Cities' existing and the County's Draft General Plans, not necessarily actually used as such within the Plan Area. However, it is not true that only land designated or zoned as agricultural is available for agricultural uses.

    1 There is a typographical error in the MSHCP that listed this number incorrectly as 169,470 acres. This typographical error has been corrected in the Final EIR/EIS.

    2 This number is not found in the EIR/EIS. The commentor presumably arrives at this number by subtracting the 5,584 acres of land designated for agricultural use under the Cities' existing and the County's Draft General Plans which may be conserved during Reserve Assembly from the 38,280 acres identified in the Draft EIR/EIS as agriculturally zoned or General Plan designated in under the Cities' existing and the County's Draft General Plan. Because the number of acres identified as agriculturally zoned or General Plan designated under the Cities' existing and the County's Draft General Plan has been revised to 38,223, the figure the commentor derives should probably be revised to 32,639 acres.

    Nor would the MSHCP take "20,020 acres of land that is currently active commercial agricultural use...out of agriculture and conserve[] [it] as habitat." Again, this number refers to the statistics for Vegetation Communities, not land use, in Table 9-1 of the Draft MSHCP. Table 9-1 illustrates that 20,020 acres of agricultural vegetation could be conserved under the MSHCP. It does not mean that currently active commercial agricultural uses are conserved since land can be classified as agricultural vegetation in the complete absence of any agricultural operation. Nor does this table mean that this acreage is converted to habitat.

    The table entitled, "Actively Utilized Land within the Limits of Each MSHCP Alternative (acres)," in the Final EIR/EIS (formerly Table 4S in the Draft EIR/EIS) does identify currently active agricultural land. Of the approximately 161,792 acres of active agricultural land in the MSHCP Plan Area, approximately 32,726 acres of actively used land are in the Criteria Area, an area of approximately 310,000 acres. Since about half of the Criteria Area could be conserved through Reserve Assembly (153,000 acres out of 310,000), theoretically half of the actively used land, or approximately 16,898 acres, could be included in Reserve Assembly.3 This includes 7,235 acres in existing reserves. Thus, the MSHCP only anticipates that a maximum of 9,663 acres of existing utilized agricultural land could be newly conserved as part of Reserve Assembly if willing sellers choose to sell their property. If farmers choose not to sell, and continue to farm indefinitely, the MSHCP would provide Take Authorization to such activities indefinitely and the MSHCP would provide a great positive impact on agriculture. See Responses M-3, M-6, M-14 and M-15.

    Additionally, even if farmers voluntarily elect to sell their property for Reserve Assembly, in some instances they may continue to farm. Therefore, it is highly speculative that all of this existing agricultural land would be conserved and farming eliminated. Even in this unlikely event, the loss of a maximum of 9,663 acres (approximately 6%) of the total existing agricultural land in the Plan Area is minimal and does not constitute a significant impact. It should be further noted that the MSHCP provides for the addition of up to 10,000 acres of New Agricultural Lands within the Criteria Area. Even if the maximum of 9,663 acres within the Criteria Area were conserved, becausefarmers voluntarily choose to sell their property, another 10,000 acres in the Criteria Area could be used for New Agricultural Lands. Accordingly, there are no social or economic effects related to physical impacts that need to be evaluated. Finally, the MSHCP provides unlimited coverage for agriculture outside the Criteria Area upon inclusion in the Existing Agricultural Operations Database and execution of a Certificate of Inclusion.

    3 The 16,898 figure is based on a theoretical reserve design in which cell criteria was applied to demonstrate one possible way the MSHCP Conservation Area could be assembled. It is by no means the only configuration. This theoretical design assumes that approximately 52% of actively utilized farm land within the Criteria Area may be included in Reserve Assembly. The actual acreage may be much lower.

    M-3 See Response M-2. The MSHCP does not subject agriculture to new regulatory restrictions. The Plan is a streamlined process for complying with the mandates of FESA, the NCCP Act, CEQA and NEPA. As such, it actually relieves existing regulatory burdens on property owners. As set forth in more detail below, the Lead Agencies believe that the MSHCP provides agriculture with great benefits with minimal effort. See Response M-5. As explained in more detail below and specifically in Responses M-14, M-16, M-34, M-40 and M-74, the MSHCP does not convert agricultural land to non-agricultural uses, violate the Williamson Act, regulate agriculture as a nuisance, or violate "Right-to-Farm" laws. Likewise, the MSHCP does not result in "oppressive exactions" and in fact, agriculture benefits more than any other business with often very little effort. If an intent of this comment is to invoke the requirements of California Government Code sections 66000, et seq., or a Constitutional standard, see Responses H2-187, H2-231 and H2-243. If the Farm Bureau does not want agricultural activities provided Take Authorization under the Plan, it should make that suggestion to the Board of Supervisors.

    M-4 The commentor's introductory remarks summarize Comments M-5 through M-117, for which responses are provided below. The Plan's provision will not "necessitate the extinction of agriculture." In fact, the Lead Agencies are unaware of any other regional HCP/NCCP that provides any similar protections to agriculture as those granted in this MSHCP. The commentor has misinterpreted the Plan in many instances concerning "taking commercial agricultural land out of production." The commentor's misstatements are addressed in Response M-2 and in the Responses that follow.

    M-5 The commentor's recommendation that Take Authorization should be granted to existing, expanding, and future agricultural uses is already provided in the MSHCP. In fact, all Existing Agricultural Operations, regardless of where they are located in the Plan Area, are granted Take Authorization, as are all future operations outside the Criteria Area, an area of approximately 960,000 acres, as long as no discretionary approval or certain City ministerial approvals is required. See Responses H2-133, M-2, M-3,M-6, M-9, M-10, M-14, M-16, M-22, and M-27 through M-32.

    As stated in Section 6.2 of the MSHCP, Take Authorization will apply to all lands within the MSHCP boundaries that were used for ongoing Agricultural Operations for at least one of the last five years preceding the Effective Date of the IA. Existing Agricultural Operations within the MSHCP Plan Area are exempt from the payment of impact mitigation fees or any other requirements of the Plan. (Draft MSHCP EIR/EIS, p. 4.29.) Moreover, even the expansion of Existing Agricultural Operations requiring a discretionary authorization from the County or another regulatory body will not be subject to the requirements of the proposed MSHCP as long as the construction and operation disturbance is confined to the existing building footprint. Likewise, crop types may be changed without affecting the ability of Agricultural Operations to be classified as Existing Agricultural Operations. (Draft MSHCP, pp. 6-55 - 6-57.) Additionally, Take Authorization may be applied to up to 10,000 acres of lands converted to agricultural use within the Criteria Area during the term of the proposed MSHCP. Thus, the MSHCP already provides a feasible process for granting Take Authorization to existing, expanded and future Agricultural Operations.

    M-6 See Responses M-2, M-14 through M-18. The Draft EIR/EIS fully discusses and analyzes all potential impacts to the environment from the MSHCP. An EIR is required to evaluate only the environmental impacts of a project. (Pub. Res. Code, § 21100.) Economic and social effects of a project are not treated as significant effects on the environment unless they result from a physical effect. (State CEQA Guidelines, § 15131(a).) "Environment" is defined as the physical conditions that exist within an area affected by a proposed project, including land, air, water, minerals, flora and fauna, noise, and objects of historic or aesthetic significance. (Pub. Res. Code, § 21060.5.) Thus, under these definitions, social or economic effects that are not related to physical impacts need not be evaluated in an EIR. (State CEQA Guidelines, § 15131(a).) Likewise, even though federal regulations specify that the environmental impacts to be addressed include direct and indirect effects that are "caused by the action," these effects are not cognizable under NEPA unless traceable to the impact the project will have on the "natural and physical environment and the relationship of people." (40 C.F.R. § 1508.14.) Accordingly, NEPA specifies that economic or social effects are not intended by themselves to require preparation of an EIS. (Ibid.; see also Hanley v. Mitchell (2nd Cir. 1972) 460 F.2d 640, 647 [holding that effects lacking an environmental nexus are outside NEPA.].)

    An analysis of economic or social impacts is unnecessary because the Plan will not result in significant adverse physical impacts to agriculture. See Responses M-2, M-3 and M-14. Existing Agricultural Operations will be permitted to continue within the Criteria Area and implementation of the proposed MSHCP will not significantly reduce the amount of land presently utilized for agricultural production or otherwise affect Existing Agricultural Operations. However, out of an abundance of caution and in the interest of providing the public with the best available information, economic and social effects are discussed in Section 4.3 of the EIR/EIS as part of the analysis of Population, Housing and Employment. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 6.1-2.) Additionally, Table ES-B summarizes the potential direct and secondary impacts under each alternative discussed in the EIR/EIS. Cumulative impacts, including cumulative secondary impacts, are discussed in Section 5.0.

    M-7 The Urban/Wildlands Interface Guidelines do not require buffers but instead applywhere urban uses occur in close proximity to the MSHCP Conservation Area. These Guidelines are intended to apply to new Development, not Existing Agricultural Operations, proposed in proximity to the MSHCP Conservation Area. In addition, the Urban/ Wildlands Interface Guidelines are intended to address issues such as lighting, urban runoff, and introduction of invasive species, which are generally not associated with agricultural activities. See MSHCP Section 6.1.4.

    As stated in the Draft MSHCP, procedures outlined in the Riparian/Riverine Areas and Vernal Pools Guidelines and the Narrow Endemic Plant Species survey requirements do not require buffers and are consistent with existing requirements. No additional regulatory processes are proposed for agriculture as part of these policies.

    M-8 The General Plan is a separate document from the MSHCP. The MSHCP places no new regulatory burdens on agriculture, nor does it expand the scope of discretionary approvals for agricultural activities in order to subject such activities to the MSHCP. The MSHCP does acknowledge existing regulations to achieve the conservation objectives of the MSHCP.

    M-9 The MSHCP does not impose new discretionary approvals on Agricultural Operations as compared to what exists today. To the extent the comment addresses new Development projects related to agriculture that currently require (and will continue to require) local discretionary permits, these activities will be subject to compliance with County and City requirements, such as the MSHCP Criteria and mitigation fees, if the MSHCP is adopted. See Responses M-12 and M-20.

    M-10 The MSHCP does not require surveys for existing agricultural activities. Surveys may be required in limited situations for expanded or new projects related to agriculture that are currently required to obtain discretionary and certain City ministerial approvals.

    M-11 The MSHCP EIR/EIS contains an adequate cumulative impact analysis that fully complies with CEQA and NEPA. (See Draft EIR/EIS, § 5.5) See Responses M-109, H2-15, and H2 -310 through H2-315.

    The baseline analysis is appropriate. "The environmental setting will normally constitute the baseline physical conditions..." State CEQA Guidelines, § 15125(a). However, as indicated by inclusion of the term "normally," the lead agency has discretion to deviate from the time-of-review baseline. Fat v. County of Sacramento, 97 Cal.App.4th 1270, 1278 (2002). Nothing compels the lead agency to use the existing environmental setting as the baseline; as long as there is substantial evidence to support the lead agency's choice of baseline, that agency's choice is not an abuse of its discretion. Fat, 97 Cal.App.4th at 1278; Save Our Peninsula Comm. v. Monterey County Bd. of Supervisors, 87 Cal.App.4th 99, 117 (2001). In some cases - such as this one - conditions closer to the date the project is approved are more relevant to a determination of whether the project's impacts will be significant. Save Our Peninsula Comm., 87 Cal.App.4th at 125, citing Mira Monte Homeowners' Assn. v. County of Ventura, 165 Cal.App.3d 357 (1985). For instance, when the issue involves an impact on traffic levels, the EIR usually takes into account the normal increase in traffic over time. Since the environmental review process can take a number of years, traffic levels as of the time the project is approved may be a more accurate representation of the existing baseline against which to measure the impact of the project. Save Our Peninsula, 87 Cal.App.4th at 125-26, citing Fairview Neighbors v. County of Ventura, 70 Cal.App.4th 238 (1999). The only relevant question is whether there is substantial evidence to support the lead agency's choice of baseline.

    For this Project, substantial evidence supports the Lead Agencies' decision to use the General Plan Update as the baseline for analyzing impacts to agricultural resources. First, because this Project is a component of the RCIP process, and the RCIP process also involves the update to the County's General Plan, it would be absurd for the Lead Agencies to ignore the fact that the County's General Plan is being updated. The three components of the RCIP process (CETAP, the Western Riverside County MSHCP and the General Plan Update) are being coordinated in an effort to improve long-term regional planning. The General Plan update is a central component of the RCIP process and will likely be approved before the MSHCP or any of the CETAP corridors. Consequently, it was appropriate for the environmental documents prepared for the MSHCP to identify the General Plan update as the baseline condition.

    Moreover, using the General Plan update as the baseline condition provides the most accurate assessment of the environmental impacts attributable to the Project. If the existing General Plan were used as the baseline, the EIR/S could overstate the environmental impacts of this Project because some portion of the change in future conditions will be attributable to the changes in the General Plan rather than this Project. Cf., Save Our Peninsula Comm., 87 Cal.App.4th at 125-26, and cases cited therein. By using the General Plan update as the baseline, the Draft EIR/S for this Project appropriately isolates the environmental impacts that will occur as a result of this Project. Given that the General Plan update is proceeding as part of the RCIP process, it was appropriate for Lead Agencies to designate the General Plan update, rather than the existing General Plan, as the baseline. Therefore, there is no basis to support the commentor's request for revision of the baselines in the Draft EIR/S. See also Responses M-2, M-50 through M-57, M-80 through M-84 and H2-248. However, in response to the commentor's request, the Lead Agencies did analyze impacts to agricultural resources using the land use designations under the Cities' and County's existing General Plans as the baseline. There was no change in the EIR's significance conclusions as a result of this additional analysis: impacts to land that is zoned or General Plan designated for agricultural use remain less than significant regardless of which baseline is used because the MSHCP expressly allows the continuance of Existing Agricultural Operations throughout the entire MSHCP Plan Area, including the Criteria Area. Therefore, the MSHCP does not mandate conservation of any land that is being used for Existing Agricultural Operations and does not cause the conversion of this land to non-agricultural uses. For further information, please see the additional text added to Section 4.2 of the EIR/EIS.

    The standards for determining significance are appropriate. See Responses H2-77, H279, H2-318, M-108 and J3-3 regarding mitigation. Alternatives are discussed in Responses M-113 through M-116.

    M-12 The MSHCP does not contemplate or require grading ordinances to be amended to require new discretionary approvals or ministerial approvals for agricultural activities. Existing Agricultural Operations and expanded or new agricultural activities which do not require a discretionary approvals, or certain City ministerial approvals, will receive Take Authorization pursuant to the MSHCP upon inclusion in the Existing Agricultural Operations Database and execution of the Certificate of Inclusion. See Response M-28. For agricultural activities requiring a discretionary approval or certain City ministerial approvals, MSHCP review would be applied to the project described in the application. It is assumed that applicants would only include the boundaries of the project (i.e., "ground disturbance footprint") in their applications.

    M-13 The attachment provided by the commentor reflects policy changes to the MSHCP and the IA as requested by the Farm Bureau. County staff has previously expressed concerns with some of these proposals and the impact on Permit issuance and Plan implementation. However, since these are policy issues, they will be forwarded to the Board of Supervisors for consideration.

    M-14 The Lead Agencies disagree with the statements and conclusions in this comment, as well as the cited numbers. The MSHCP will not result in the "vast conversion of agriculture to conserved acreage" (see Responses M-2 and M-74) nor does it prohibit any agricultural uses, regulate land use or "replace the agricultural industry." In fact, the 161,792 acres in the MSHCP Plan Area identified as active farmland and agricultural uses will receive Take Authorization and will not be required to implement MSHCP provisions, except for inclusion on the Database and execution of a Certificate of Inclusion, to allow their continued operation with Take Authorization. (Draft EIR/EIS, p 4.2-1 through 4.2-2.) The MSHCP also expressly allows an additional 10,000 acres of New Agricultural Land in the Criteria Area and unlimited amounts outside of the Criteria Area, without, in most instances, any mitigation requirements whatsoever. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 4.2-1.) See Response M-6 regarding CEQA and NEPA requirements for economic impacts analysis.

    The numbers cited by commentor are incorrect. The 266,926 acres of actively utilized agricultural land the commentor claims will be affected by the MSHCP actually refers to agricultural land in the entire County, not the MSHCP Plan Area. There are 161,792 acres of existing agricultural land in the Plan Area. Similarly, it is untrue that only 32,696 acres of agricultural land will remain after implementation of the General Plan and MSHCP. See Response M-2, Footnote 2.

    As explained in Response M-2, the EIR/EIS analyzes three separate agricultural categories. One of these categories is land zoned or General Plan designated as agriculture.

    However, available agricultural land is not limited to the 38,223 acres specifically zoned or designated for agricultural uses. In fact, of the 161,792 acres in the MSHCP Plan Area that are currently used for agricultural purposes and as such are Covered Activities, only 33,927 of these acres are currently zoned for agricultural use. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 4.2-4.)

    Second, it is inaccurate to subtract the amount of land zoned or General Plan designated for agriculture in the Criteria Area from available agricultural land. Only about half of the Criteria Area will be included in Reserve Assembly. Moreover, existing uses will be permitted to continue. By subtracting these acres, the commentor mistakenly suggests that Existing Agricultural Operations in the Criteria Area will be forcibly removed from the amount of availableagricultural land. Existing Agricultural Operations are a Covered Activity within the Plan Area and would be allowed to continue operating indefinitely. Only land that is voluntarily sold to the RCA would become part of the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    Finally, because the MSHCP provides a mechanism for the conversion of up to 10,000 acres of non-agricultural land within the Criteria Area to agricultural uses and unlimited conversion outside of the Criteria Area, and even permits Additional Reserve Lands to be farmed in some situations, any potential impacts related to conversion of zoned or General Plan designated farmland would be offset and, overall, less than significant. Accordingly, the economic impact on the agricultural industry is less than significant. An analysis of the socioeconomic impacts of the MSHCP is therefore not required by either CEQA or NEPA under these circumstances. See Responses M-2 and M-6. The MSHCP does not impose a 25-foot buffer on agricultural lands. See Response M-7.

    The statistics cited by the commentor relating to the Riverside County Agricultural Commissioner's Office are draft and continuing to be refined. However, the Lead Agencies have acknowledged that the cited numbers are generally representative of the currently available information.

    M-15 Unlike the process attendant to the designation of Critical Habitat by the Secretary of the Interior, which requires an analysis of the relevant economic impacts (see FESA, §4(b)(2)), the Secretary's review (and potential approval) of an HCP does not take economic considerations directly into account. Section 10(a)(2) of FESA describes the requirements imposed on the Secretary of the Interior when evaluating HCPs. In brief, the Secretary must find that: (1) the taking will be incidental; (2) the applicant will, to the maximum extent practicable, minimize and mitigate the impacts of such taking; (3) the applicant will ensure that adequate funding for the HCP is provided; (4) the taking will not appreciably reduce the likelihood of survival and recovery of the species in the wild; (5) the applicant will ensure that other measures that the Service may require as being necessary or appropriate will be provided; and (6) the Service has received such other assurances as may be required that the HCP will be implemented. (50 C.F.R. § 17.22(b); Section 10 Handbook, pp. 7-2 to 7-5.) Economics may be incidentally considered when determining whether specific mitigation or minimization thresholds are "practicable;" however, the Section 10 Handbook specifies: "particularly where the adequacy of the mitigation program is a close call, the record must contain some basis to conclude that the proposed program is the maximum that can be reasonably required by that applicant. This may require weighing the costs of implementing additional mitigation, benefits and costs of implementing additional mitigation, the amount of mitigation provided by other applicants in similar situations, and the abilities of that particular applicant." (Section 10 Handbook, p. 7-3.)

    Significantly, recent federal case law has placed substantial emphasis on ensuring that regional HCPs provide adequate mitigation to not appreciably reduce the likelihood of survival and recovery of the species in the wild and that adequate funding assurances be provided to ensure that conservation is actually accomplished. (See National Wildlife Federation v. Babbitt (2000) 128 F.Supp.2d 1274; see also Gerber v. Norton (2002) 294 F.3d 173.) Without such assurances, the Secretary may be precluded from issuing a Section 10(a) Permit.

    M-16 The MSHCP does not conflict with the CEQ Regulations implementing NEPA. The EIR/EIS fully analyzes the potential environmental impacts of implementing the MSHCP. The August 11, 1980 CEQ Memorandum to which the commentor cites merely provides guidance to federal agencies on how to implement NEPA. The point of the memorandum is to identify means by which federal agencies can improve their NEPA analysis of a project's potential impacts on prime or unique agricultural lands. This is an informal guidance document and does not carry the force and weight of a regulation. Moreover, the quote that the commentor relies upon is taken out of context. In indicating that agencies should cooperate with the efforts of state and local governments to retain prime or unique agricultural lands, the memorandum cites the reader to sections 1502.16(c) and 1506.2(d) of Title 40 of the Code of Federal Regulations. These are portions of the regulations the CEQ adopted to implement NEPA.

    Section 1502.16(c) requires that the EIR/EIS include discussion of the project's environmental consequences resulting from "possible conflicts between the proposed action and the objectives of Federal, regional, State, and local...land use plans, policies and controls for the area concerned." Section 1506.2(d) requires that the EIR/EIS "shall discuss any inconsistency of a proposed action with any approved State or local plan and laws (whether or not federally sanctioned)." Notably, though, the NEPA regulations do not require that every project be fully consistent with all applicable state and local plans and laws. Rather, the NEPA regulations expressly provide that inconsistencies may exist. (40 C.F.R. § 1506.2(d).) To the extent that the quote from the August 11, 1980 Memorandum might be read to prohibit conflicts between the project and local plans and laws, the quote misstates the NEPA regulatory authority on which it relies. The EIR/EIS prepared for the MSHCP fully complies with Sections 1502.16, 1506.2, and all of the CEQ's regulations for implementing NEPA and provides great benefits for agriculture.

    The Service is not "working with the County to convert [prime or unique agricultural] lands to conserved habitat" through implementation of the MSHCP. To the contrary, the MSHCP expressly allows all Existing Agricultural Operations in the MSHCP Plan Area to continue to be used for agriculture indefinitely, including within the Criteria Area. See Responses M-2, M-6 and M-14.

    Likewise, implementation of the MSHCP is consistent with the Open Space Lands Act Government Code sections 65560, et seq. This Act does permit "agricultural lands and areas of economic importance for the production of food and fiber" as lands that the County and the participating Cities may designate as open space uses on their required open space plans. (Gov. Code, § 65560, subd. (b)(2).) In accordance with this provision, the County or the Cities may have designated certain agricultural lands as open space lands. However, implementation of the MSHCP will not interfere with those designations because the MSHCP expressly allows the continuation of existing agricultural activities. Moreover, the Open Space Lands Act also recognizes that "areas required for the preservation of plant and animal life, including habitat for fish and wildlife species" and other land "for the preservation of natural resources" may be appropriately designated as open space lands. (Gov. Code, § 65560, subd. (b)(1).) Implementation of the MSHCP will assemble a reserve of lands set aside for the preservation of natural resources. Thus, implementation of the MSHCP will further, not conflict with, the Open Space Lands Act.

    The Lead Agencies also note that the commentor's assertion that the Open Space Lands Act imposes a "duty" on the County and the Service to avoid or minimize impacts to agriculture misstates the law. The provision to which the commentor cites, Government Code section 65561, is a statement of legislative intent and purpose. Such broad statements of legislative intent do not give rise to any statutory duty. (Toward Responsibility in Planning v. City Council (1988) 200 Cal.App.3d 671, 677 - 78.)

    M-17 The MSHCP, while comprehensive and complex, is not unduly complicated given the large scope and breadth of the MSHCP Plan Area and does not place "a cloud" over private property. See Response H2 -30. It is the stated policy of the MSHCP to provide just compensation to property owners who voluntarily elect to sell lands to be included in the Additional Reserve Lands. If farmers in the Criteria Area do not want to sell or develop their land, then they can continue farming with the added benefit of Take Authorization if they sign a Certificate of Inclusion. If they do not want Take Authorization, they are not required to sign the Certificate of Inclusion.

    As to agricultural operations for which a new discretionary approval or certain City ministerial approvals is required, certain provisions of the MSHCP will be applied because the impacts will be similar to typical development. The Farm Bureau has previously asked that a provision be added to the MSHCP that includes the HANs processfor such operations. See Responses H2-30, H2-132, H2-138, H2-140 and H2-241.

    M-18 The MSHCP requirements will not violate any statutory protections. For example, Government Code section 65858, limiting moratoria to a maximum two-year period, does not apply to the MSHCP because the HANS process is not a moratorium. See Response H2-41. The comment's reference to the "principles" of the First English Evangelical Lutheran Church case is misplaced given the very narrow ruling of this case. See Responses H2-41, H2-168 and I2-43. The further reference to the "principles" of Lucas v. South Carolina Coastal Council (1992) 505 U.S. 1003 and Penn Central Transp. Co. v. New York City (1978) 438 U.S.104 is further misplaced given the court's ruling in Tahoe-Sierra Preservation Council, Inc. v. Tahoe Reg'l Planning Agency (2002) 535 U.S. 302, and other relevant California and federal case law. See Responses H2-30, H241, H2-235 and I2-43. The MSHCP and/or the HANS Process therefore do not result in a "taking."

    M-19 The MSHCP does not impose regulatory requirements greater than those existing prior to issuance of the Permits or in excess of what is necessary to obtain Take Authorization. (See Response H2 -133 and MSHCP Section 6.2.) Moreover, the MSHCP will not impose new or additional restrictions on Existing Agricultural Operations adjacent to the MSHCP Conservation Area. (MSHCP Section 6.2) The MSHCP provides Take Authorization under FESA and the NCCP Act. Contrary to the commentor's implication, agricultural activities are subject to all of these laws and their implementing regulations. Thus, Agricultural Operations would be required to obtain "Take" Authorization before engaging in any activities that "harass, harm, pursue, hunt, shoot, wound, kill, trap, capture, or collect" listed species. These activities include any actions that may significantly modify or degrade habitat when the habitat alteration "actually kills or injures wildlife by significantly impairing essential behavioral patterns, including breeding, feeding, or sheltering" of any listed species.

    As indicated below in Responses M-34, M-35 and M-40, the MSHCP does not violate the Williamson Act or the Right-to-Farm laws. The MSHCP does not impose improper exactions. To the extent that the MSHCP imposes exactions or fees, those exactions and fees are "roughly proportional" to the impacts of the activities permitted under the MSHCP. An independent estimate of the land costs will be included in the nexus study required by the Mitigation Fee Act as set forth in Government Code Sections 66000 et seq. The nexus study will provide a basis for establishing the Local Development Mitigation Fee amount.

    The Land Use analysis in the EIR/EIS for the MSHCP adequately analyzes the MSHCP's consistency with Federal, regional, State, and local land use plans, policies, and controls (See Draft EIR/EIS, pp. 4.2-19 - 4.2-20.) The Lead Agencies note that the commentor has not identified any land use plan, policies, or control, or any approved state or local plan or law with which the MSHCP is in conflict.

    M-20 The quoted sentence from page 6-47 will be recommended for elimination from the Final MSHCP. With regard to ministerial versus discretionary permits for Development, see Responses F-42, K-71, H2 -28, M-9 and O2-21.

    M-21 See Response M-12. If the commentor's reference to the "City's Resolution" means IA Exhibit H, Section III states that all projects must be consistent with the MSHCP and the Resolution. Section 6.2 sets forth how agriculture is addressed under the MSHCP. Provided the County or City complies with Section 6.2, then MSHCP compliance for Agricultural Operations has been met. See Response M-23. The MSHCP does not contemplate or require grading ordinances to be amended to require new discretionary permits or ministerial approvals for agricultural activities. The MSHCP does not impose new discretionary approvals on Agricultural Operations over what exists today. To the extent the comment addresses new Development projects related to agriculture that currently require (and will continue to require) local discretionary permits, these activities will be subject to compliance with County requirements, such as the MSHCP Criteria and mitigation fees, if the MSHCP is adopted. For agricultural activities requiring a discretionary approval or certain City ministerial approvals, MSHCP review would be applied to the project described in the application. It is assumed that applicants would only include the boundaries of the project (i.e. "ground disturbance footprint") in their applications. Only property proposed by applicant farm owners for inclusion in their Development applications would be subject to the Criteria established under the MSHCP; the Criteria would not apply to the applicant's entire Existing Agricultural Operations.

    M-22 The Lead Agencies believe that the definition of Existing Agricultural Operations, as defined in Section 11.3 of the IA and Section 6.2 of the MSHCP, is extremely broad. An "Agricultural Operation" is broadly defined to include the production of all plants (horticulture), fish farms, animals and related production activities, including the planting, cultivation and tillage of the soil, dairying, and apiculture; and the production, plowing, seeding, cultivation, growing, harvesting, pasturing and fallowing for the purpose of crop rotation of any agricultural commodity, including viticulture, apiculture, horticulture, and the breeding, feeding and raising of livestock, horses, fur-bearing animals, fish, or poultry, the operation, management, conservation, improvement or maintenance of a farm or ranch and its buildings, tools and equipment; the construction, operation and maintenance of ditches, canals, reservoirs, wells and/or waterways used for farming or ranching purposes and all uses conducted as a normal part of such Agricultural Operations. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 4.2-9.)

    The MSHCP does not include conversion from pasture or grazing land to a tilled crop within the definition of Existing Agricultural Operations. However, such conversions within the Criteria Area could receive Take Authorization as New Agricultural Land upon execution of a Certificate of Inclusion. Contrary to the comment, in no event does the MSHCP require that such conversion triggers the need for a discretionary approval. The MSHCP does allow a change in agricultural crop type without application of MSHCP requirements, including the requirements cited in the comment as "Biological Regulations". Moreover, all Existing Agricultural Operations, including tilled crops, are Covered Activities and are exempt from the payment of impact mitigation fees or other mitigation measures. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 4.2-9.) See Response M-27. The MSHCP does not result in mandatory conservation of land. See Responses M-2, M-3, M-17 and M-21. The cited policies are required to be applied throughout the Plan Area in order to receive Take Authorization for those Covered Species dependent on the policies for Conservation. With regard to the HANS reference, see Response M-12 for application of MSHCP policies. The MSHCP does not result in new land use approvals.

    This comment's broad invocation of the "Constitutional nexus and rough proportionality" standard in reference to Best Management Practices is mistaken. Best Management Practices are not exactions, and, therefore, the Government Code does not require a nexus study for Best Management Practices. See Response H2-242. BMPs, which will be applied as appropriate, will not result in environmental impacts, as they are intended to avoid or minimize environmental impacts and are routinely applied to many projects through existing regulatory processes.

    M-23 With regard to the MSHCP's coverage of Agricultural Operations, see Responses M-2, M-5, M-14 and M-16. Existing Agricultural Operations receive Take Authorization under the Plan and are exempt from any other requirements if they are in the Database and a Certificate of Inclusion has been executed; however, these requirements are minimal and only necessary to ensure that Existing Agricultural Operations are properly identified and, thus, can receive Take Authorization. These requirements differ greatly from those imposed on Development and are virtually without any cost to the farmer. In most cases, the individual property owner will not be required to do anything except sign a Certificate of Inclusion as the County will make the initial list of entities in the Database. See Response F-10. Farmers would not be subject to the requirements for a discretionary approval process for an Agricultural Grading/Clearing exemption form pursuant to County Ordinance 457. See Response M-20. With regard to the legality of a regional HCP, see Response H2-43.

    M-24 The meaning of the comment that, "The MSHCP expands the MSHCP requirements..." is not clear. The MSHCP establishes certain requirements for issuance of Take Authorization by the Wildlife Agencies. As stated in the MSHCP Section 6.1.4, the Urban/Wildlands Interface Guidelines are intended to be considerations that are placed on new Development including Agricultural Operations that require a discretionary or certain City ministerial approvals, proposed in close proximity to the MSHCP Conservation Area. There is no provision for applying these guidelines to existing land uses, including agriculture, regardless of where the operation is located in the Plan Area. See also Response M-7.

    M-25 See Responses M-12 and M-20. Staff will recommend to the Board of Supervisors that certain County and City permits will be exempt from the MSHCP requirements. (See Final MSHCP § 6.2.) See Responses I2-29, I2-32 and I2-44.

    M-26 The MSHCP complies with all relevant statutory time frames. See Responses H2 -41 and I2-32.

    M-27 The MSHCP provides farmers with clear direction. If the "Agricultural Operation" requires a discretionary approval or certain City ministerial approvals and occurs within the Criteria Area, then the Criteria will be applied. Such projects will not be subject to the Criteria and mitigation requirements if construction and operation disturbance and impacts are confined solely to an existing building footprint. If the "Agricultural Operation" occurs outside the MSHCP Criteria Area and requires a discretionary approval or certain City ministerial approvals, then the Criteria will not be applied. However, the policies for the protection of Narrow Endemic Plant Species and Riparian/Riverine Areas and Vernal Pools, requirements as set forthin Sections 6.1.2 and 6.1.3 of the MSHCP, shall be applied and additional surveys required, as set forth in Section 6.3.2 of the MSHCP, if appropriate. Again, such projects will not be subject to these requirements if construction and operation disturbance and impacts are confined solely to the existing building footprint. Compliance with these policies does not require mandatory dedication of lands for Reserve Assembly. Additionally, there are no provisions in the MSHCP that would require a farmer to stop Existing Agricultural Operations even if an expansion is proposed.

    M-28 The MSHCP provides farmers with clear direction. See Responses M-12, M-20 and M-25. This comment seems to suggest that all Agricultural Operations are required to submit a written request to be included in the Database identifying Existing Agricultural Operations on or before the Effective Date of the MSHCP. This is incorrect. By the time of Permit issuance, the County anticipates that the great majority of Agricultural Operations will already be on the Database. Only the land not on the Database will have to be added at the applicant's request. Take Authorization for parcels identified in the Database will become "effective upon MSHCP approval and issuance and receipt by RCA of a Certificate of Inclusion which is a ministerial action intended solely for the purpose of documenting acknowledgment of Take Authorization and ensuring compliance with the Permits, the MSHCP and the IA." (Draft MSHCP, pp. 6-55 - 6-56; Draft EIR/EIS, p. 4.2-9.)

    The Lead Agencies disagree that the information to be included in the request to add property to the Database is excessive. The MSHCP does not require that the written requests to add property to the Database include private business, tax and property records as suggested by the comment. The MSHCP states that the request to add land to the database must be "supported by adequate factual evidence which may include but is not limited to" certain documents such as a) agricultural permits obtained from, and/or registrations filed with the County, State of California or other appropriate public agency; b) an approved Agricultural Grading/Clearing Exception Form as defined in County Ordinance No. 457; c) business, tax and property records; d) Agricultural Preserve and Williamson Act contract information; or e) aerial photographs or other relevant business records and information. The information to be collected is minimal and almost entirely within the public sphere. The information simply seeks to allow the RCA to track Agricultural Operations entitled to receive Take Authorization and, thus, seeks to protect legitimate farmers, not unethical individuals attempting to take advantage of the MSHCP's provisions encouraging agriculture. Therefore, there are many documents that may be submitted -- the MSHCP provides flexibility and allows the farmers to choose which documents to submit. A draft Certificate of Inclusion is attached to the IA as Exhibit F. The submittal of the document is merely a ministerial action and the only requirement is that the appropriate party sign the document. Thus, the commentor's claim that unknown conditions will be added is incorrect. Moreover, if farmers do not want to sign the Certificate of Inclusion and thus not receive Take Authorization, there is no obligation to do so. Additionally, reliance upon the New Agricultural Lands cap will only be required if the property owner wishes to receive Take Authorization under the MSHCP. The New Agricultural Lands cap is a limit on Take Coverage, not an absolute limit on new agricultural activity within the Criteria Area.

    The Lead Agencies disagree with the conclusion that agricultural landowners are singled out for "onerous treatment under the MSHCP." Instead, existing and most future Agricultural Operations are exempted from the requirements of the MSHCP while being granted Take Authorization to continue their operations. This protection is not afforded to any other class of property owners in this MSHCP or any other regional HCP and, thus, farmers receive benefits not provided to other classes either in this Plan or any other large regional plan. See Responses M-2, M-3, M-6, M-14, and M-16. The Certificate of Inclusion is attached as Exhibit F to the IA. There are no conditions to be met, just the signature is needed. Again, there is no other class of private landowners or businesses that receive Take Authorization with only the execution of a Certificate of Inclusion without mitigation obligations.

    The Lead Agencies disagree with the comment that the RCA has "unfettered discretion" in the MSHCP process. The RCA does not limit County or City local land use authority. Nor does it prevent a Permittee from approving a discretionary project. (See MSHCP,§ 6.6.2(A), (C).) The RCA provides the primary policy direction for implementing the MSHCP and for public participation in the decision-making process. The particular duties of the RCA are set forth in Section 6.6.2(C). Section 6.6.2(E) of the MSHCP describes the "Joint Project/Acquisition Review Process." However, it is also clear that land use agencies solely retain their discretionary project approval/disapproval power.

    As part of the public notification process mailed to all property owners at release of the draft documents, information was provided regarding the agricultural provisions of the Plan. In addition, the County Agricultural Commissioner will develop an outreach program to explain the provisions and benefits of the Certificate of Inclusion. The Farm Bureau has represented that it will assist as deemed appropriate.

    M-29 The Lead Agencies disagree with the commentor's opinion that agricultural lands should be included in the Existing Agricultural Operations Database based solely on the landowner's written request with oversight from the Agricultural Commissioner. The Plan attempts to provide protections to legitimate Agricultural Operations. Most of this information can be found in existing public documents and is already part of the public domain. The scope and extent of the factual evidence is left to the discretion of the individual property owner. See Response M-28. The County and the RCA will strictly maintain the confidentiality of documents and other information submitted in connection with verifying Existing Agricultural Operations to the maximum extent permitted under the California Public Records Act, or any other relevant statute or regulation. (MSHCP, § 6.2.)

    M-30 The MSHCP does not take private property - willing sellers may opt to sell their property. The Lead Agencies disagree that none of the incentives are applicable to Agricultural Operations. Any new agricultural activity which currently requires a discretionary or certain City ministerial approvals could rely upon any of the incentives available to other types of development activities. The RCA, in cooperation with local property owner interests, can seek legislation to provide additional tax incentives above those available today. The Lead Agencies encourage the Farm Bureau to work with the RCA in this regard. Any incentive that is currently available could be considered by the Local Permittees and the RCA in negotiations with property owners. Moreover, the incentives are not limited to those listed in the Plan.

    M-31 The agricultural industry has been provided, in large measure, with an exemption from the MSHCP process until agricultural lands are converted to other uses. (See Responses M-2, M-3, M-6, M-14 and M-16.) With regard to the legality of regional HCPs, see Response H2 -43. The MSHCP does not extend FESA requirements to agricultural land; FESA requirements already apply to the extent agricultural land is occupied by or provides habitat for species that are listed and protected under FESA. Existing Agricultural Operations receive Take Authorization for all lands within the MSHCP Plan Area. See Responses M-5, M-14, M-16, H2-205 and H2-217.

    M-32 California Fish and Game Code section 2085 (2002) refers to candidate species. The commentor's intent regarding this section is unclear. See Responses G-10, H2 -93 through H2-122 and N3-1 through N3-3. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of: Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003. The EIR/EIS also complies with 40 CFR section 1502.24. In its entirety, this section states, "Agencies shall insure the professional integrity, including scientific integrity, of the discussions and analyses in environmental impact statements. They shall identify any methodologies used and shall make explicit reference by footnote to the scientific and other sources relied upon for conclusions in the statement. An agency may place discussion of methodology in an appendix." Accordingly, the EIR/EIS explains each methodology used and references the appropriate source in the actual text or, if a chart or table, as a footnote. Additionally, Section 9.0 of the EIR/EIS provides a list of all resources used in preparing the EIR/EIS.

    M-33 See Response H2 -115. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of: Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003.

    M-34 Application of the MSHCP will not unlawfully modify or violate any existing Williamson Act contract nor does it conflict with state objectives. As explained in Responses M-2, M-3, M-14 and M-16, the MSHCP explicitly allows the continuation of Existing Agricultural Operations. Any property that is included in an agricultural preserve and covered by a Williamson Act contract should also have been used for ongoing Agricultural Operations for at least one of the five years preceding the Effective Date of the IA (unless the property owner has filed a Notice of Nonrenewal and already discontinued farming with the intent to develop the property). In order to have a Williamson Act contract, the land must be within an agricultural preserve. Thus, no property that is included in an agricultural preserve and covered by a Williamson Act contract will be converted to habitat use as long as the land continues in Agricultural Operations and the property owners obtain the required Certificates of Inclusion. See Response M-28. Accordingly, the MSHCP includes provisions so that land that is included in an agricultural preserve and covered by a Williamson Act contract is exempted from application of the Criteria.

    Of course, if the agricultural landowners apply to develop lands that are included in an agricultural preserve and covered by Williamson Act contracts, the MSHCP's Criteria will apply to the development application. This application of the Criteria does not create any conflict with the Williamson Act because any application to develop land subject to a Williamson Act contract and included within an agricultural preserve must necessarily include a notice of non-renewal or an application to cancel the Williamson Act contract and diminish the preserve. The MSHCP does continue the County's existing practice of allowing owners of agricultural land to apply to obtain permits to develop their property. However, the MSHCP does not require any agricultural property owners to develop their property. As long as the landowners obtain Certificates of Inclusion for their Existing Agricultural Operations, Agricultural Operations on those lands can continue indefinitely.

    The MSHCP does not violate County Ordinance 509. To the contrary, as indicated above, the MSHCP expressly allows the continuation of Existing Agricultural Operations, and this provision applies to lands subject to a Williamson Act contract and included within an agricultural preserve. Moreover, even if the MSHCP did permit conservation on lands subject to Williamson Act contracts, this would not violate County Ordinance 509. County Ordinance 509 specifically allows "public works required for fish and wildlife enhancement and preservation" as an allowable use within agricultural preserves. This text has been in place since June 16, 1988.

    The commentor's concern that the MSHCP violates the legislative objectives of the Williamson Act is misplaced. The provision to which the commentor cites, Government Code section 51220, is a statement of legislative intent and purpose. Such broad statements of legislative intent do not give rise to any statutory duty. (Toward Responsibility in Planning v. City Council (1988) 200 Cal.App.3d 671, 677 - 78.)

    At this point, there is no indication that any land subject to a Williamson Act contract will abut the reserve that is ultimately assembled. The selection of the property to be included in the Conservation Area will be determined by the Local Permittees, and the potential for a conflict with existing farming operations on neighboring property will be considered. Even if the boundaries of certain reserve lands abut lands that are under Williamson Act contract, though, the MSHCP does not violate the Williamson Act. As indicated above, the County's Williamson Act rules expressly allow fish and wildlife enhancement and preservation as a compatible use under the Williamson Act.

    The MSHCP does not impose any requirements on agricultural landowners that are inconsistent with the Williamson Act or any other state law. The Urban/Wildlands Interface Guidelines apply only when an application has been submitted to allow development in proximity to the MSHCP Conservation Area. "Development" occurs only when there is an alteration to land, including but not limited to, construction of buildings, structures, or infrastructure. Thus, unless the agricultural landowner subsequently files an application to obtain a permit for development on his or her land, the Urban/Wildlands Interface Guidelines do not apply to Existing Agricultural Operations. Accordingly, the Urban/Wildlands Interface Guidelines' restrictions on the planting of invasive plants do not apply to Existing Agricultural Operations unless the agricultural landowner files an application for development.

    Likewise, the Riparian/Riverine Areas and Vernal Pool Guidelines apply only when a development project is proposed. (MSHCP § 6.1.2, p. 6-20.) Therefore, the Riparian/Riverine Areas and Vernal Pool Guidelines will not apply unless the agricultural landowner files an application for development. Likewise, the Narrow Endemic Plant Species Guidelines apply only when projects are proposed and appropriate Habitat is present on the proposed project site. (MSHCP, § 6.1.3, p. 6-27.) Thus, the Narrow Endemic Plant Species Guidelines do not apply unless the agricultural landowner files an application for development.

    The commentor's concern appears to be the MSHCP's provisions regarding the expansion of Agricultural Operations. The Expansion of Existing Agricultural Operations is covered in Section 6.2.E of the MSHCP and is subject to the HANS Process or other applicable implementation mechanism. The Expansion of Existing Agricultural Operations of similar use which require a discretionary permit or certain City ministerial approvals as defined in the County's agricultural zones (set forth in Riverside County Ordinance No. 348) or relevant City land use regulation is eligible to receive Take Authorization under the Permits. If the expansion is proposed within the Criteria Area, the Criteria will be applied to the proposed expansion project, unless the construction and operation disturbance and impacts is confined to the existing building footprint (i.e., limited to those areas that have been recently and consistently disturbed and that have little or no habitat value). If the disturbance and impacts are confined to the existing building footprint, the Criteria will not be applied to the proposed expansion project and no mitigation will be required.

    If the proposed expansion requires a discretionary permit or certain City ministerial approvals but would occur outside the Criteria Area, the Criteria will not be applied. However, the policies for the protection of Narrow Endemic Plant Species and Riparian/Riverine Areas and Vernal Pools will apply and additional surveys will be required under these policies, as appropriate, unless the construction and operation disturbance and impacts are confined to the existing building footprint. If the construction and operation disturbance and impacts are confined to the existing building footprint, the policies for the protection of Narrow Endemic Plant Species and Riparian/Riverine Areas and Vernal Pools will not be applied and no additional surveys will be required.

    Contrary to the commentor's implication, neither the Williamson Act nor any other state law compels local agencies to treat the expansion of Agricultural Operations as a matter of right. Rather, local agencies may use their police powers to regulate the expansion of Existing Agricultural Operations, just as they regulate other proposed land uses.

    The commentor also incorrectly asserts that the MSHCP may require Williamson Act contract land to be taken out of production and conserved if the agricultural landowner applies for a grading permit or other discretionary permit. As explained above in Responses M-2, M-3, M-14 and M-16, the MSHCP expressly allows the continuance of Existing Agricultural Operations.

    M-35 As explained above in Response M-34, habitat conservation is not necessarily inconsistent with agricultural preserves. Moreover, the MSHCP does not require conservation of any lands that constitute Existing Agricultural Operations. To the contrary, as explained in Responses M-2 and M-16, the MSHCP allows these Existing Agricultural Operations to continue indefinitely. Hence, the MSHCP does not take any agricultural land out of agricultural production.

    Land that is subject to a Williamson Act contract and included within an agricultural preserve will be included in the Existing Agricultural Operations Database. Even if such land is located within a Criteria Area, it may continue in agricultural use for as long as its owner(s) choose. Such land would be subject to evaluation for Conservation only if an application for new Development on that land were submitted or if the farmer voluntarily elected to sell his or her property. As explained above in Response M-34, implementation of the MSHCP does not violate the Williamson Act or the Ordinance No. 509.

    Section 7.4 of the MSHCP addresses uses that are allowable within the MSHCP Conservation Area once properties are acquired for purposes of conservation under the MSHCP and become public land. To the extent that it is determined that under certain circumstances agriculture could provide benefits to Covered Species and thus be incorporated into management activities, continuation of agricultural use after transfer of ownership of the properties would be encouraged as a compatible use within the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    M-36 To the extent the comment purports to summarize state law, the California Government Code speaks for itself. Contrary to the commentor's unfounded assertions, the MSHCP establishes specific protections to accommodate Existing Agricultural Operations. (See MSHCP,§ 6.2, see also Responses M-2, M-6, M-14, M-16 and M-34.)

    The commentor correctly notes that consideration of a landowner's request to enter into a new Williamson Act contract is a discretionary action on the part of the County. See Response M-34. However, such an action is contractual in nature and does not necessarily authorize the physical development or use of the property. Therefore, it would not be subject to the review provisions of HANS or the MSHCP.

    M-37 As explained in Responses M-34, M-35, and M-36, the MSHCP does not conflict with the Williamson Act, does not impose any restrictions that are incompatible with agricultural uses on lands that have Existing Agricultural Operations, and does not require that land under Williamson Act contract be included in the MSHCP Conservation Area. To the contrary, as set forth in the referenced responses, the MSHCP makes specific provisions to accommodate and allow the continuance of Existing Agricultural Operations. (See MSHCP, § 6.2.)

    M-38 Implementation of the MSHCP will not require the diminishment of any agricultural preserve. See Responses M-16, M-34, M-35, M-37 and M-74.

    M-39 The County does not require any person to participate in the Williamson Act or equivalent mechanism. Rather, a landowner's participation in the Williamson Act process is purely voluntary. The commentor misinterprets Section 6.2 of the MSHCP, which says that assurances need to be provided that New Agricultural Lands are in fact legitimate farming operations and not merely a ploy to avoid the requirements of the MSHCP. A Williamson Act contract is merely one mechanism to show that such uses are in fact legitimate, but a Williamson Act contract is not required. Implementation of the MSHCP does not defeat the voluntary nature of entering into a Williamson Act contract.

    M-40 The edge provisions in the Urban/Wildlands Interface Guidelines do not conflict with Right to Farm laws such as California Civil Code section 3482.5 or Riverside County Ordinance 625, since Existing Agricultural Operations are generally not considered "urban" uses and the Guidelines are applicable to new Development. The provisions of the MSHCP do not treat Agricultural Operations as a nuisance. As explained in Responses M-7, M-24 and M-34, the Urban/Wildlands Interface Guidelines do not establish any restrictions on Existing Agricultural Operations.

    M-41 Most bona fide Agricultural Operations will not require a grading permit and absent the need for other discretionary approvals or certain ministerial approvals by the Cities, the MSHCP's guidelines and other provisions will not be imposed. See Responses M-5, H2 42 and H2-43. Mitigation payments under the MSHCP are the result of a general legislative enactment, and are not imposed on an "ad hoc" basis as alleged by the comment. The holding of Ehrlich v. City of Culver City (1996) 12 Cal.4th 854 is thus wholly inapplicable to the MSHCP. A nexus study is currently being prepared for the Local Development Mitigation Fee. Prior to approval of the MSHCP, the County and Cities will make the findings required by California Government Code sections 66000 et seq., namely that there is a "reasonable relationship" between the "fees" that will be imposed and the impacts related to land development or use. Further, findings will be made that there is a "reasonable relationship" between the fees and the cost of land acquisition.

    M-42 The Draft Resolution and Ordinance in the IA (Exhibits H and I) incorporates all of the terms and conditions of the MSHCP and the IA and applies to the entire MSHCP Plan Area, including the Cities. Therefore, the Cities will comply with the MSHCP provisions applying to Agricultural Operations, including Section 6.2 of the MSHCP.

    M-43 The MSHCP is by no means an "attack" on agriculture nor does it cause the "decimation of agricultural lands in favor of conserved habitat." Instead, the Plan places no limit on agricultural lands, supports the continuation and expansion of agriculture in western Riverside County and provides protections far exceeding other large HCPs. The MSHCP meets all legal standards for consistency with the General Plan and/or the proposed amendments thereto pursuant to Government Code section 65454. See Responses M-2 through M-6, M-14, M-16, M-34- M-35 and M-74. Portions of this comment relate specifically to the County's proposed General Plan. As such, these comments would in no way alter and do not relate to the Draft MSHCP or the analysis in the Draft EIR/EIS. Consequently, no further response is required.

    M-44 The MSHCP neither restricts the amount of land available for agricultural land uses nor converts "tens of thousands of acres of productive agricultural land to habitat." See Responses M-2 through M-6, M-14, M-16, M-34- M-35 and M-74. The Farm Bureau has provided a written request to the Board of Supervisors that the agricultural mitigation bank reference be removed in its entirety from the EIR for the Draft General Plan. Should the Agricultural Mitigation Bank be implemented, it would only apply to new Development. As such, agricultural lands acquired or conserved through the development process would not be considered Development and therefore would not be subject to the mitigation bank.

    M-45 See Responses M-2 through M-6, M-14, M-16, M-34, M-44, M-35 and M-74.

    M-46 Under the current state and federal laws, the farmer would not have Take Authorization and would be fully subject to the provisions of the State and Federal Endangered Species Acts. Under the Draft MSHCP, the farmer would have full Take Authorization upon signing the Certificate of Inclusion if the property fell within the definition of Existing Agricultural Operations or is outside the Criteria Area. (See Response M-28 for information regarding the Certificate of Inclusion.) If the property did not fall within the definition of Existing Agricultural Operations or is inside the Criteria Area, then it could receive Take Authorization under the New Agricultural Lands provisions of the MSHCP. The reference to the Draft General Plan is not relevant to the comments on the MSHCP.

    Therefore, no further response is required. However, it should be noted that the Draft General Plan does not provide any new regulations in connection with the growing of crops.

    M-47 The MSHCP provides coverage for up to 10,000 acres of New Agricultural Lands within the Criteria Area and unlimited New Agricultural Lands outside the Criteria Area. Should 7,000 acres of New Agricultural Lands within the Criteria Area occur, the Permittees would initiate a permit amendment to increase the 10,000 acre limit. However, it should be noted that the County's analysis of the conversion of undisturbed lands to agriculture over the years indicates that this is highly unlikely to occur.

    Section 6.2.G of the MSHCP describes the process to increase the Cap. The IA also states that when "the RCA determines that approximately 70% of the New Agricultural Lands Cap within the Criteria Area has been converted to New Agricultural Lands, the RCA shall seek approval of an Amendment from the Wildlife Agencies to increase the New Agricultural Lands Cap." (IA, § 11.3-7.) The Wildlife Agencies are further required under the IA to make reasonable efforts to expeditiously consider and, if appropriate, approve the request. If the request is approved, a Minor Amendment may be made to increase the New Agricultural Lands Cap if the increase meets the requirements for a Minor Amendment and if it can be demonstrated to the satisfaction of the Wildlife Agencies that such an increase does not: 1) preclude Reserve Assembly, 2) significantly increase the cost of MSHCP Conservation Area management or assembly, or 3) preclude achieving Covered Species conservation and goals. (Ibid.) See Response M-46 concerning the General Plan.

    M-48 Regardless of the property's General Plan land use designation, under the MSHCP, the conversion of pasture lands to irrigated or tilled crops would count toward the 10,000 New Agricultural Lands Cap if the subject lands are within the Criteria Area. Outside the Criteria Area, there would be no limit on the amount of agricultural lands converted from grazing or pasture lands to irrigated or tilled crops.

    M-49 See Response M-44. Land acquired under the 4:1 mitigation ratio for the Agricultural Mitigation Bank associated with the General Plan EIR will not be considered part of the New Agricultural Lands Cap.

    M-50 The Draft MSHCP and the EIR/EIS discuss impacts to agriculture with respect to three separate categories: State Designated Farmland, land actively utilized for agricultural production, and land zoned or designated in the Cities' existing and the County's Draft General Plans for agricultural use. See Response M-2. Although these designations may sometimes overlap, often they do not. Accordingly, the EIR/EIS discusses each designation in order to provide a comprehensive understanding of potential impacts to agricultural land. The "baseline" agricultural conditions for each of these three categories are:

    • 99,090 acres of State Designated Farmland (Prime, Unique or Statewide Important farmland);
    • 161,792 acres of land actively utilized for agricultural production; and
    • 38,223 acres zoned or specifically designated in the Cities' existing or the County's Draft General Plans for agricultural uses.

    Under Section 15064.7 of the CEQA Guidelines, lead agencies are encouraged to develop thresholds of significance in order to determine the significance of potential environmental effects. The EIR/EIS assesses potential impactsto Agricultural Operations utilizing significance thresholds based on Appendix G of the State CEQA Guidelines.

    Regarding the Lead Agencies' choices of baselines for analyzing impacts to agricultural resources, see Response M-11.

    The remainder of the commentor's introductory remarks summarize Comments M-51 through M-66, for which responses are provided below. See also Responses M-2, M-3, M-6, M-14, M-16 and M-74.

    M-51 As stated in Section 4.2.1, "Various methods were utilized to identify the extent and location of agricultural land within the proposed MSHCP Plan Area." The numbers stated in the EIR/EIS identify baselines for three different assessments of potential impacts to agricultural resources. The EIR/EIS clearly identifies the differences between the various agricultural baseline figures (e.g., "State Designated Farmland," "Actively Utilized Agricultural Land," and "Agriculturally Zoned/General Plan Designated Farmland").

    The commentor is correct in stating the amount of State and local farmland in western Riverside County recognized as agriculturally important totals 383,650 acres; however, this is not identified as a baseline. This figure includes 172,418 and 112,142 acres designated as locally important and grazing lands, respectively. However, only 99,090 acres are State Designated Farmland. In accordance with Appendix G of the State CEQA Guidelines, the significance threshold for this farmland category established by the Lead Agencies is the conversion of Prime, Unique, or Statewide Important farmland (collectively, "State Designated Farmland") to non-agricultural use, which is why the Draft EIR/EIS uses the 99,090 acres of State Designated Farmland as the baseline.

    Farmland of Local Importance is land of importance to the local economy, as defined by the County's local advisory committee and adopted by the Board of Supervisors. Riverside County has identified the following lands as Farmlands of Local Importance:

    1. Soils that would be classified as Prime and Statewide but lack available irrigation water.
    2. Lands planted to dryland crops of barley, oats, and wheat.
    3. Lands producing major crops for Riverside County but that are not listed as Unique crops. These crops are identified as returning one million or more dollars on the 1980 Riverside County Agriculture Crop Report. Crops identified are permanent pasture (irrigated), summer squash, okra, eggplant, radishes, and watermelons.
    4. Dairylands, including corrals, pasture, milking facilities, hay and manure storage areas if accompanied with permanent pasture or hayland of 10 acres or more.
    5. Lands identified by city or county ordinance as Agricultural Zones or Contracts, which includes Riverside City "Proposition R" lands.
    6. Lands planted to jojoba which are under cultivation and are of producing age. (See Existing Setting Report, p. 4.4-6.)

    Under the thresholds of significance established in the Draft EIR/EIS, a significant impact would result if the MSHCP resulted in the conversion of Prime, Unique, or State Designated Farmland to non-agricultural use. However, the MSHCP does not cause the conversion of any farmland to non-agricultural use. Even if locally important land were analyzed, impacts would be insignificant because the MSHCP considers Existing Agricultural Operations as Covered Activities; thus, any land characterized as locally important because it has an Existing Agricultural Operation (such as those described in paragraphs 2, 3, 4, 5, and 6, above) will be permitted to continue operating indefinitely. No conversion of active farmland to nonagricultural uses will occur unless and until a farmer elects to Develop or sell his or her property for Conservation. Even in that event, however, a farmer may in certain instances continue to farm after the property has been conserved.

    It is also important to note that the MSHCP is not a land use document and does not mandate the conversion of any property. Property that is locally designated but not actively farmed may be included in Reserve Assembly, but inclusion does not amount to "conversion" to non- agricultural use since the property is not being removed from active agricultural use and future agricultural uses are not necessarily prohibited once a property has been included in Reserve Assembly. For example, agriculture benefits some widely distributed grassland species, such as California horned lark, and provides foraging for certain raptors. See Response F-15. Thus, the MSHCP does not cause the "conversion" of farmland of local significance to a non-agricultural use.

    M-52 The 99,090 acres of State Designated Farmland was used as one of the baselines to determine impacts to agricultural resources. As stated in Response M-51, a significant impact would occur if the MSHCP resulted in the conversion of Prime, Unique, or Statewide important farmland from an agricultural to non-agricultural use. However, it is important to note that the MSHCP is not a land use document and does not mandate the conversion of any property. While there are 383,560 acres of agriculturally important farmland in western Riverside County, only 99,090 acres are designated Prime, Unique, or Statewide Important farmland. Accordingly, 99,090 acres is the appropriate baseline for determining impacts to State Designated Farmland. See Response M-51.

    M-53 The Draft EIR/EIS did not use this figure as a baseline. While the commentor is correct in stating that the amount of land actively utilized for agriculture throughout the County totals 266,926 acres, this amount is reflective of Agricultural Operations that take place throughout the entire unincorporated County, including the Coachella and Palo Verde Valleys. Only 161,792 acres of actively utilized agricultural land are located within western Riverside County in the MSHCP Plan Area. The purpose of the EIR/EIS is to identify potential impacts to agricultural land/uses within the MSHCP Plan Area,. i.e., western Riverside County, resulting from the MSHCP; therefore, a baseline of 161,792 acres of active agricultural land is appropriate.

    M-54 38,223 acres, which is the amount of land zoned or General Plan designated under the Draft General Plan, is used as one of the baselines for determining impacts to agricultural resources. Section 15125 of the State CEQA Guidelines sets forth the general rule that environmental conditions existing at the time environmental analysis is commenced "normally" constitutes the baseline for purposes of determining whether an impact is significant. However, the Lead Agencies have the discretion to choose any appropriate baselines, as long as their choices are supported by substantial evidence. See Response M-11.

    In response to the commentor's request, the Final EIR/EIS also analyzes the MSHCP's potential impacts to agricultural resources using the Cities' and the County's existing General Plan land use designations as a baseline. Even under this measure, the MSHCP will not result in significant impacts to agricultural resources. In the Cities' and the County's current General Plans, 84,364 acres are agriculturally zoned or designated in western Riverside County, and 16,947 of these acres are in the Criteria Area. Of the 16,947 acres of land within the Criteria Area that is zoned or designated for agricultural use under the current General Plans, no more than 8,926 acres will be included in Reserve Assembly. This figure includes 3,370 acres in existing reserves. This means that under the Cities' and the County's current General Plans and zoning, up to 5,556 acres of zoned or General Plan designated for agricultural uses may be included in the Additional Reserve Lands. However, for the reasons explained in Response M-14, this level of potential impact is not significant.

    M-55 The Draft EIR/EIS did not use the 169,480 acres of land identified as an "agricultural" vegetation community as a baseline for determining impacts to agricultural resources. This figure would not present an appropriate baseline for determining impacts to agricultural resources. The vegetation map referenced in the MSHCP represents conditions at the time the vegetation study was prepared (1995). The vegetation map was prepared to assist in the classification of biological conditions, not land use conditions. The vegetation survey identifies vegetation categories and recognizes "agriculture" as crops, orchards, vineyards or similar uses. The Holland classification does not identify uses typically associated with agricultural production (e.g., such as dairies, corrals, or feedlots) as "agriculture." Based on the 1995 vegetation mapping, 169,480 acres of agricultural vegetation were identified throughout western Riverside County in 1995.

    To reflect the extent of land actually utilized for Agricultural Operations, an interpretation of land use was conducted during preparation of the Riverside County Existing Setting Report (1999). The acreage for Agricultural Operations was derived from the interpretation of aerial photographs of the entire County and was supported by field checks and the verification of land uses. The land use interpretation included dairies, feedlots, fish farms, and agricultural related uses in the tabulation of land utilized for agricultural production throughout the County. As this data was tabulated on a GIS database, the amount of agricultural land in western Riverside County (i.e., in the MSHCP Plan Area) was extracted from the total amount of agricultural land in the County as a whole. Based on the land use interpretation, 161,792 acres were identified as being utilized for agricultural production. As the land use interpretation was based on the identification of existing land use (rather than vegetation type), it was used as the baseline for determining the MSHCP's potential impacts to Existing Agricultural Operations in the MSHCP Plan Area.

    The 169,480 acres of agricultural vegetation is a proper baseline for determining impacts to biological resources. The EIR/EIS properly used the 169,480 acre figure as one of the baselines in the appropriate sections (Sections 3.1 and 4.1) relating to biological resources. However, the baseline for determining impacts to agriculture resources, which represents a land use category, is 161,792 acres. That baseline was appropriately used in the Draft EIR/EIS' analysis of agricultural resources.

    M-56 The 161,792 acre figure was based on an interpretation of land use, not on the 1995 vegetation study, which analyzed land according to its biological classifications. The 161,792 acre figure was used as a baseline for determining impacts to agricultural resources. See Response M-55.

    M-57 Ironically, the commentor appears to be arguing that the Draft EIR/EIS violates CEQA and NEPA because it discloses too much information regarding the MSHCP's potential impacts on agricultural resources. To the contrary, both CEQA and NEPA favor full disclosure of a project's potentially significant environmental impacts. Here, the EIR/EIS identifies various agricultural baseline figures (e.g., "State Designated Farmland," "Agriculturally Zoned/General Plan Designated Farmland"). The separate assessments represent an analysis of potential impacts to agricultural land/uses and provide sufficient information and data to permit full assessment of potential impacts by reviewing agencies and members of the public. For example, since not all land that is zoned or General Plan designated for agriculture is actually used for such purpose, it would be misleading to only use this baseline. Therefore, the separate assessments provide a more complete point for reference. As shown in the EIR/EIS, because the MSHCP will permit the continuation of Existing Agricultural Operations, and allow for the expansion of Agricultural Operations, no significant impact was identified.

    The Lead Agencies believe that the "professional" and "scientific integrity" of the analysis in the EIR/EIS is supported. (See Responses G-10, H2-93 through H2-122 and N3-1 through N3-3 regarding the validity of scientific data in the MSHCP EIR/EIS. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of: Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003.) As stated in the EIR/EIS, the Designated Farmland analysis was based on data obtained from the State's Farmland Mapping and Monitoring Program; analysis of Existing Agricultural Operations was based on a land use interpretation prepared for the Riverside County Existing Setting Report; and the assessment of impacts to zoned or General Plan-designated agricultural lands is based on data obtained from the County and Cities participating in the MSHCP process. The sources of the data presented in the EIR/EIS are the State, County, and municipal entities.

    The data used qualify as substantial evidence and are sufficient to allow an assessment of potential impacts to Agricultural Operations.

    The discussion of potential impacts to Agricultural Operations clearly differentiates the methods used to derive the various baseline figures, as well as the difference between the three agricultural categories. To avoid confusion between the different farmland categories,the analyses for impacts to Existing Agricultural Operations, State Designated Farmland, and zoned or General Plan designated agricultural lands were kept separate. Each assessment identifies potential impacts to each agricultural category that would result from implementation of the proposed MSHCP and the various alternatives. See Responses M-2, M-50 through M-56.

    The EIR/EIS analyzes impacts to zoned or General Plan-designated agriculture acreage based on the land use designations in the Cities' existing and the County's proposed General Plan. In accordance with the commentor's request, the Final EIR/EIS includes additional analysis reflecting the amount of land currently zoned or General Plan designated for agricultural use.

    M-58 See Responses M-55 and H2-248. 161,792 acres is the appropriate baseline. See Response M-54. The 383,650 figure is not an appropriate baseline because it includes locally designated land. See Response M-51. Therefore, the EIR/EIS appropriately uses 99,090 acres as the baseline for determining impacts to State Designated Farmland. However, even if the impacts to agricultural resources are analyzed including all land classified as locally important, the MSHCP would not have any significant impact on agricultural resources. Draft EIR/EIS, p. 4.2-5. See Responses M-51 through M-57.

    M-59 This comment purportedly summarizes state, federal and case law. No further response is required. See Response H2-248.

    M-60 The commentor does not acknowledge that the various baseline figures were developed to assess potential impacts to different classifications of Agricultural Operations (e.g., State Designated Farmland, Existing Agricultural Operations, and zoned or General Plan designated agricultural lands). The baseline figures are specific to the category of agricultural use analyzed in the EIR/EIS and are not interchangeable. The EIR/EIS clearly differentiates between the baseline figures, the corresponding agricultural classification and the subsequent analysis of potential impacts that would result from implementation of the MSHCP and its alternatives. See Final EIR/EIS, p. 4.2-1 through 4.2-2. See also Responses M-2, M-51 through M-57 and M-74.

    The commentor misstates the holding of the Save Our Peninsula case. See Response M-11.

    The commentor erroneously states the Riverside County General Plan EIR identifies 266,926 acres as being actively utilized for Agricultural Operations in western Riverside County. This figure represents the total amount of active agricultural land throughout the (unincorporated) County. Within the MSHCP Plan Area, including unincorporated western Riverside County and the incorporated area encompassed by the Cities, there are 161,792 acres in active agricultural use. The baseline acreage (161,792 acres) for active Agricultural Operations was derived from the interpretation of aerial photographs of the County, and was supported by field checks and the verification of land uses. The land use interpretation included dairies, feedlots, fish farms, and agricultural related uses in the tabulation of land utilized for agricultural production and therefore is an accurate estimation of the amount of land actively utilized for Agricultural Operations. See Response M-55.

    M-61 Section 3.3.1 of the Draft MSHCP states that the quarter sections are approximately 160 acres. In fact, some of the quarter sections are greater and some are less than 160 acres, based on the boundaries established by the USGS. As discussed in the Draft EIR/EIS, the actual acreage of the Criteria Area is approximately 310,000 acres. Therefore, the acreage has been approximated, not minimized.

    M-62 See Responses M-51, M-52, and M-60.

    M-63 The EIR/EIS did not use the 161,792 acres of existing agricultural use to minimize impacts; rather, it is the more accurate baseline for analyzing impacts to existing agricultural land uses. See Responses M-55, M-58 and M-60. The MSHCP and the Biological Resources section of the EIR/EIS use the 169,480 acre figure because this figure represents the biological classification of the land, i.e., "agriculture" vegetation community. It is appropriate for the MSHCP to use the 169,480 acre figure to refer to the vegetation classification of land, since the MSHCP is concerned with biological resources. No agriculture will be forcibly "lost" due to implementation of the MSHCP. See Response M-14. Regarding derivation of the 161,792 baseline, see Response M-2.

    M-64 The commentor is correct in stating the EIR/EIS baseline for calculating impacts to agricultural land use designations assumes the adoption of the County's proposed General Plan. In response to the commentor's request, the Final EIR/EIS also analyzes the MSHCP's potential impacts to agricultural resources using the amount of land zoned or General Plan designated for agricultural use under the Cities' and the County's existing General Plans. See Responses M-11 and M-54.

    M-65 The Draft EIR/EIS indicates that up to 16,898 acres of actively used agricultural land might be included in the Conservation Area. This figure includes the 7,235 acres of actively used agricultural lands that are already included in Existing Reserves. Moreover, as explained above in Responses M-5 and M-71, the MSHCP does not force farmers to abandon their Existing Agricultural Operations. The baseline acreage figure (161,792 acres) identified in the EIR/EIS represents an accurate, inclusive, and recent tabulation of existing agricultural usage. The Lead Agencies had substantial evidence to support this choice of baseline. See Response M-11. The analysis of potential impacts to Existing Agricultural Operations based on this acreage estimate is neither inaccurate nor underestimated. See Responses M-55, M-58, and M-60.

    M-66 The EIR/EIS provides baseline data for various agricultural classifications (e.g., State Designated Farmland, Existing Agricultural Operations, and zoned or General Plan designated agricultural lands). The baseline estimates and a description of agricultural classifications are differentiated in the EIR/EIS and provide an adequate foundation for the discussion of potential impacts that may result from implementation of the proposed MSHCP and its various alternatives. See Responses M-11 and M-51 through M-65.

    M-67 The Lead Agencies have the discretion to formulate standards for significance for use in the EIR. (State CEQA Guidelines, § 15064(b).) Reflecting Appendix G of the State CEQA Guidelines, the Lead Agencies established standards of significance for determining the MSHCP's potential impacts to agricultural resources. See Response M-50. Under NEPA, the Lead Agencies' determination of the "significance" of a major federal action involves consideration of the project's "context" and "intensity." (40 C.F.R. §§ 1508.27.) "Context" refers to analyzing the action in terms of society as a whole, the affected region, the affected interests and the locality. (40 C.F.R. §§ 1508.27(a).) Accordingly, the project description in the EIR/EIS includes a description of the precise location and boundaries of the project (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 2.1-2, and Figures 1.2, 2.1, 2.2) and a detailed map showing the project's location in a regional perspective (Draft EIR/EIS, Figures 1.1, 1.2). The MSHCP also includes a discussion of potential cumulative impacts (Section 5) and growth-inducing impacts (p. 6.1-4) to further analyze impacts to "society as a whole."

    "Intensity" refers to the severity of the impact and requires consideration of several factors, including unique characteristics of the geographic area such as proximity to prime farmland. 40 C.F.R. §§ 1508.27(b). Accordingly, one of the agricultural designations reviewed in the EIR/EIS is State Designated Farmland. Impacts to this agricultural designation are throughly discussed in Section 4.2 of the EIR/EIS. NEPA also suggests that the "degree to which the action may establish a precedent for future actions with significant effects" should be considered in determining the intensity. The Lead Agencies believe that any precedent-setting effect that the MSHCP may have would be beneficial and encouraged by federal law. In fact, the HCP Handbook affirmatively states that: "a second guiding principle of this handbook is that the Service and NMFS will continue to encourage state and local governments and private landowners to undertake regional and multi-species HCP efforts as appropriate and will assist such efforts to the maximum extent practicable." (HCP Handbook, p. 1-15.) Areas of potential controversy are identified in the MSHCP on page ES-7. This summary of issues raised was compiled from issues and opinions expressed in response to the NOP/NOI. A complete set of the NOP/NOI response letters is included in the Final EIR/EIS as Attachment A. Therefore, as suggested by NEPA, the Draft EIR/EIS takes into account the unique characteristics of State Designated Farmland, including Prime Farmland, and includes other relevant factors. (See e.g., 40 CFR § 1508.27.)

    M-68 This comment purports to summarize State CEQA Guidelines, Appendix G and page 4.2-5 of the Draft EIR/EIS and no further response is required.

    M-69 The EIR/EIS relies on the definition of significant in the State CEQA Guidelines. The EIR/EIS simply states that "[t]he Proposed Action will have a significant effect on agricultural resources if its implementation would result in the conversion of agricultural land to non-agricultural uses." Morever, CEQA does not set forth mandatory significance standards. Thus, it would be impossible for the Lead Agencies to impose a higher or lower standard than CEQA. Instead, CEQA specifically states that the lead agency has the discretion to formulate standards for significance for use in the EIR. (14 Cal. Code Regs., § 15064(b) ["The determination of whether a project may have a significant effect on the environment calls for a careful judgment on the part of the public agency involved, based to the extent possible on scientific and factual data. An ironclad definition of significant effect is not always possible because the significance of an activity may vary with the setting."].) Likewise, the determination of significance standards for NEPA involves agency discretion. (See, e.g., City of New York v. U.S. Army Corps of Engineers (2nd Cir. 1983) 715 F.2d 732.) See Response M-67. The significance criteria in the Draft EIR/EIS are sufficient under both CEQA and NEPA. See Response M-67. In fact, the significance standards in the Draft EIR/EIS essentially restate the language used in Appendix G, are equivalent to or more broad than the suggested Appendix G thresholds and identify substantial or potentially substantial adverse changes that would be significant. See Response M-50.

    M-70 See Responses M-67 through M-69 and M-74. The Draft EIR/EIS necessarily must assume that the proposed MSHCP will be implemented in order to analyze the project's potentially significant environmental impacts.

    The significance criteria in the Draft EIR/EIS is are not based on a "balancing test." The Draft EIR/EIS concludes that, "on balance," the MSHCP will not conflict with existing zoned or General Plan designated agricultural lands or Williamson Act contracts because Existing Agricultural Operations are allowed within the Criteria Area and Plan Area. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 4.2-10.) If the commentor is referring to this statement, the language will be changed to "In conclusion" in the Final EIR/EIS.

    M-71 Impacts on agriculture from Plan implementation are less than significant and the discussion of impacts in the EIR/EIS supports this conclusion. See Responses M-70 and M-74. The MSHCP does not establish or otherwise grant land use authority. Depending on the desires of landowners, existing active agricultural uses may continue within the Criteria Area throughout the life of the MSHCP. No conversion of active farmland to non-agricultural uses will occur unless and until a farmer elects to sell his or her property for Conservation or develops the property. Even in that event, however, a farmer may in certain instances continue to farm after the property has been conserved. See Responses M-14 and M-16. Additionally, the EIR/EIS does not state that the MSHCP will "result in the loss of 16,898 acres." See Responses M-2 and M-74. In fact, a portion of those acres may be included in Reserve Assembly; however, they will only be included if they are converted from Existing Agricultural Operations. So long as they remain an Existing Agricultural Operations, they are a Covered Activity. Because the MSHCP expressly allows the continuation of Existing Agricultural Operations, it does not conflict with existing agricultural designations of land within the MSHCP Plan Area or any Williamson Act contract. Likewise, for the same reason, the MSHCP does not result in the conversion of State Designated Farmland to non-agricultural use. See Responses M-14 and M-16.

    M-72 This comment purports to summarize state, federal and case law and no response is required.

    M-73 See Response H2-15.

    M-74 See Responses M-2, M-6, M-14 and M-16. The identification of significance standards and the analysis of both direct and indirect impacts in the EIR/EIS is adequate and appropriate. The Lead Agencies have the discretion to establish thresholds of significance appropriate for the project. Accordingly, the Lead Agencies determined that the MSHCP would have a significant effect if it would result in the conversion of agricultural land to non agricultural use.

    To thoroughly analyze the possibility of both direct and indirect impacts to agriculture, the Draft EIR/EIS identifies three different categories of agricultural land: existing actively utilized agricultural land, land zoned or designated under the Cities' existing or the County's Draft General Plans, and State Designated Farmland. Impacts to each of these categories are discussed in depth in Section 4.2 of the Draft EIR/EIS.

    First, the Draft EIR/EIS concludes that there are no significant impacts to existing actively used agricultural lands because there is no conversion of Existing Agricultural Operations to non-agricultural uses. Existing Agricultural Operations are considered a Covered Activity and will not only be permitted to continue under the Plan, but will also receive Take Authorization. See Responses M-2 through M-6 and M-14. Moreover, under the MSHCP, Existing Agricultural Operations can continue indefinitely, even within the Criteria Area. Because Existing Agricultural Operations are a Covered Activity under the MSHCP, no direct or indirect impact would occur. Additionally, the MSHCP is not a land use document and does not cause the conversion of any land.

    Second, impacts to zoned or General Plan designated agricultural land are considered insignificant because the MSHCP does not conflict with any zoning or General Plan designations. As indicated above, the MSHCP is not a land use document and does not establish any land use categories. Moreover, the MSHCP expressly authorizes the continuation of Existing Agricultural Operations.

    Third, the MSHCP does not result in the "conversion" of State Designated Farmland to non-agricultural use. Of the 99,090 acres of State Designated Farmland in western Riverside County, approximately 18,653 acres are in the Criteria Area. [For a discussion explaining why impacts to State Designated Farmland and not to locally important farmland were analyzed, see Response M-51.] Accordingly, the EIR/EIS concludes that Reserve Assembly may conserve up to 10,4194 acres of Designated Farmland, including 6,5645 acres of Designated Farmland that has already been incorporated into existing reserves. However, as explained above, the MSHCP expressly allows the continuance of Existing Agricultural Operations. To the extent that State Designated Farmland is not being actively used for agricultural production, the MSHCP will not cause its "conversion" to non-agricultural use. See Response M-83.

    4 There is a typographical error in the Draft EIR/EIS that listed Designated Farmland potentially included within the Conservation Area as 10,411 acres. The correct figure is 10,419 acres. This typographical error has been corrected in the Final EIR/EIS.

    5 There is a typographical error in the Draft EIR/EIS that incorrectly listed this figure as 6,563 acres. The correct figure, 6,564 acres, has been included in the Final EIR/EIS.

    It is also important to remember that while these figures represent different categories of agriculture, they are not mutually exclusive. For example, a particular parcel may be Designated Farmland and also be zoned for agricultural use or be part of an Existing Agricultural Operation. However, assuming that there was no overlap and no Existing Agricultural Operations, even if the maximum number of zoned acres (5,299) and State Designated Farmland (3,855 acres) were included in the Additional Reserve Lands, this would mean up to 9,154 acres may be conserved. Since the MSHCP allows the Take Authorization to apply to up to10,000 acres of New Agricultural Land within the MSHCP Criteria Area and unlimited new agricultural land outside the Criteria Area, this will more than offset any impacts from Reserve Assembly. The MSHCP also provides a mechanism for considering future increases to the New Agricultural Land Cap permitted within the Criteria Area. Thus, the Draft EIR/EIS appropriately concludes that impacts to agricultural land are insignificant.

    M-75 The EIR/EIS analyzes project-specific impacts on agricultural land and/or operations under three separate criteria. See Responses M-2, M-6, M-14, M-16, M-46 through M56 and M-74. To determine the amount of existing agricultural land within the limits of the MSHCP Conservation Area, the digitized map of existing land use (County and Cities) was overlain with the digitized boundaries of the MSHCP Plan Area. Using GIS software, the amount of land in the County and Cities that is currently utilized for Agricultural Operations was tabulated. The tabulation of Existing Agricultural Operations for the proposed action and each alternative will be stated in the Final EIR/EIS.

    M-76 The MSHCP does not establish or otherwise grant land use authority. Depending on the desires of landowners, existing active agricultural uses may continue within the Criteria Area throughout the life of the MSHCP. No conversion of farmland to non-agricultural uses will occur unless a farmer voluntarily sells his or her property or proposes development. Moreover, in some instances, even after land is conserved, agricultural activities may continue on a case by case basis.

    The commentor again mistakenly uses the 16,898 acreage number. This number reflects the acreage of Existing Agricultural Operations that may be included in the Conservation Area. However, as explained repeatedly above, Existing Agricultural Operations will be allowed to continue as long as the farmer chooses to do so. See Response M-2 for a complete discussion of the 16,898 number.

    M-77 As explained previously, the commentor is confusing the vegetation map "agriculture" category with the agricultural land use designations presented in the EIR/EIS. The second impact discussion assesses the effect of MSHCP implementation on lands designated for agricultural uses in the Cities' existing and the County's Draft General Plans and/or zoned specifically for agriculture. The acreage figure cited by the commentor (11,480 acres) (Page 3-20 of the MSHCP) is the amount of agricultural vegetation on public and quasi-public lands based on the 1995 vegetation survey. As the analysis set forth in this section of the EIR/EIS pertains to potential impacts to the amount of land zoned or General Plan designated specifically for agricultural use, and not active agricultural land, the use of the baseline data cited in the EIR/EIS is appropriate. In order to accurately reflect current conditions, EIR/EIS has been revised to reflect the amount of land currently zoned or General Plan designated for agricultural use. Within existing reserves, the amount of land currently being utilized for agricultural production totals 7,235 acres, while the amount of land zoned or designated for agricultural use under the Cities' existing and the County's Draft General Plans totals 285 acres. (The amount of land within existing reserves zoned or designated for agricultural uses under the Cities' and the County's existing General Plans totals 3,370 acres.) The MSHCP will not prohibit the continuation of Existing Agricultural Operations on any of these lands. It should also be noted that existing agricultural uses within existing reserves provide foraging opportunities for raptors.

    The MSHCP will establish the monitoring and management standards for the entire Conservation Area (including Public/Quasi-Public Lands). Section 5.2.1 of the MSHCP sets forth proposed Management Activities within the MSHCP, while Section 6.2A defines Agricultural Operations. Neither section prohibits the continuation of Existing Agricultural Operations. Because Existing Agricultural Operations are a Covered Activity under the MSHCP, no direct or indirect adverse impact to agricultural resources would occur. Additionally, if an existing reserve chooses to continue its own management without participating in the MSHCP, it may do so. (See Responses N-2 and I4-3.)

    M-78 See Responses M-11 and M-77. Data pertaining to the amount of land specifically designated in General Plan(s) or zoning use was obtained from the County and Cities participating in the MSHCP process (which have land use authority over these lands) and, as such, represents the most accurate data available. See Response M-54.

    The analysis is not based solely on land use designations. The EIR/EIS analyzes the potential impacts to agricultural resources under three different criteria. See Response M-2. Because of the differences between the farmland categories, the baselines for each analysis are necessarily varied. See Responses M-51 and M-52.

    M-79 Statewide, 16.3 million acres, representing approximately one-half of the State's farmland (and one-third of the State's privately owned land), were enrolled under Williamson Act contracts. Based on the Department of Conservation's 2002 Status Report, 62,668 acres within the whole of Riverside County are under Williamson Act contracts. The amount of land under Williamson Act Contracts within western Riverside County, the Criteria Area, the Proposed Action, and each alternative is detailed below:

    Williamson Act Lands
    Jurisdiction Williamson Act Lands Williamson Act Lands Within Limits of Alternative
    Within MSCHP Plan Area Within Criteria Area Proposed Action1 Listed, Proposed, and Strong Candidate Alternative Listed and Proposed Candidate Alternative Existing Reserves Alternative No Project Alternative
    Unincorporated Riverside County 38,029 11,324 5,807 4,364 4,375 1,685 1,685
    Banning 150 0 0 0 0 0 0
    Beaumont 1,143 0 0 0 0 0 0
    Corona 975 0 0 3 3 0 0
    Hemet 193 0 0 0 0 0 0
    Moreno Valley 1,223 851 54 0 0 0 0
    Riverside 257 117 57 50 49 0 0
    San Jacinto 2,481 948 340 228 213 0 0
    TOTAL 44,451 13,240 6,258 4,645 4,640 1,685 1,685
    1 Includes the amount of Williamson Act contract lands within Public/Quasi-Public Lands (PQP) and Additional Reserve Lands (ARL)

    Unless a Notice of Nonrenewal has been filed and the landowner has abandoned agricultural operations in contemplation of development of the property, any property covered by a Williamson Act contract should have been used for an Agricultural Operation for at least one year of the five years proceeding the effective date of the IA. Thus, these lands would be considered Existing Agricultural Operations. Existing Agricultural Operations may continue within the Criteria Area throughout the life of the MSHCP. Therefore, the MSHCP does not create any conflict with the Williamson Act status of these lands. Accordingly, the impacts to Williamson Act landsare insignificant.

    The commentor misstates the EIR's analysis of impacts to land under Williamson Act contracts. Contrary to the commentor's allegation, the EIR does not indicate that the County does not know the amount of acreage within the MSHCP Plan Area that is subject to Williamson Act contracts. Rather, the EIR states that it is not possible to determine the extent of Williamson Act lands that might be included in the Conservation Area. Williamson Act contracts are parcel-specific. The MSHCP is a criteria-based plan and it is not possible at this time to predict which parcels might be assembled into the Additional Reserve Lands. Given the criteria-based nature of the MSHCP, the EIR adequately discloses and analyzes the MSHCP's potential impacts to Williamson Act contracts.

    M-80 As stated in Section 6.2B of the MSHCP, Take Authorizations would apply to all land within the boundaries of the MSHCP that was actively used for Existing Agricultural Operations for at least one of the last five years preceding the effective date of the IA. These lands would be exempt from the payment of impact mitigation fees or other mitigation measures. (MSHCP EIR/EIS, p. 4.2-9.) Because these uses would be permitted to continue, no "taking" of existing or recently utilized agricultural land would occur. Rather than granting "some" Existing Agricultural Operations "Take" Authorization and "conditionally" allowing other Agricultural Operations to remain, the MSHCP grants all current and recently utilized (one out of the five prior years) Agricultural Operations Take Authorization and allows them to continue. The application of the Criteria and other MSHCP requirements will occur only when Development on agricultural land requires discretionary approvals or certain ministerial approvals by the Cities.

    M-81 See Responses M-51, M-52 and M-74. Whether land is classified as Designated Farmland is dependent on its soil classification. Its ownership status is not relevant and is therefore not considered.

    The EIR indicates that up to 10,419 acres of State Designated Farmland may be included in the Conservation Area. This includes 6,564 acres of State Designated Farmland that has already been incorporated into Existing Reserves, plus 3,855 acres of State Designated Farmland within the Criteria Area that could be included in the Additional Reserve Lands. Thus, the MSHCP's total potential impacts to State Designated Farmlands are 3,855 acres; the 3,855 acres are a component of, not in addition to, the 10,411 acres6 cited by the commentor.

    In compliance with NEPA, the thresholds of significance for the Draft EIR/EIS analyze the MSHCP's potential impacts on State Designated prime or unique Farmland.

    6 See footnote 4, ante.

    M-82 Section 7.3.3 is not inconsistent with any other provisions of the MSHCP. In response to a request by the Farm Bureau, Section 7.3.3 was added to allows an additional 10,000 acres of New Agricultural Land in the Criteria Area.

    M-83 See Responses M-74 and M-82. The Lead Agencies believe that the significance conclusions in the EIR/EIS are appropriate and are supported by substantial evidence. The MSHCP will not cause the loss of any Existing Agricultural Operations. See Response M-14.

    M-84 The Lead Agencies disagree with the commentor's conclusions and believe that the agricultural analysis is sufficient under CEQA and NEPA. See Responses M-80 through M-83. In Galante Vineyards v. Monterey Peninsula Water Management District (1997) 60 Cal.App.4th 1109, 1123-1124, the court concluded that an EIR was inadequate because it completely failed to address impacts to agriculture. In contrast to this case, the MSHCP and the Draft EIR/EIS throughly consider impacts to agriculture. See Response M-74.

    The Lead Agencies are unclear about the commentor's reference to Kings County Farm Bureau v. City of Hanford (1990) 221 Cal.App.3d 692. The portions of the Kings County case cited by the commentor established the "one molecule" rule for analyzing cumulative impacts. This rule has since been rejected in Communities For a Better Environment v. California Resources Agency (2002) 103 Cal. App. 4th 98, 120. See Response M-83. PQP Lands are separated out in the analysis because they will not contribute to Additional Reserve Lands and will not serve as mitigation for future Development. See Response W-23. MSHCP impacts and General Plan update impacts are discussed in separate EIRs because they are separate stand-alone projects and it is important to identify the impacts caused by each of those separate projects. See Response H2-19.

    M-85 The commentor misrepresents the conclusions of the analysis. The purpose of the biological resources analysis in the Draft EIR/EIS is to evaluate the potential impacts to natural habitats and species that could result from Take Authorization in areas that are not proposed to be Conserved for the benefit of Covered Species. The figures represented in this section do not refer to Agricultural Operations or agricultural land uses but instead to agricultural vegetation. Agricultural vegetation may or may not occur on an Agricultural Operation. In addition, the unenforceable statements of legislative intent of Government Code Section 65561(b) discourage "premature and unnecessary" conversion of agricultural uses to urban uses; this statute does not protect the biological values of vegetation communities.

    M-86 The analysis of impacts in the Draft EIR/EIS is based on the best available scientific and technical data. See Responses G-10, H2-93 through H2-122 and N3-1 through N3-3. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence -Review of: Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003. Moreover, the agricultural analysis is based on facts. See Responses H2-277, M-2, M-3, M-6, M-14, M-16, M-34, M-35, M-51 through M-56 and M-74. Thus, this data meets the substantial evidence standard.

    The commentor's reference to the "fair argument" standard of review, which applies to negative declarations, is unclear, given that an EIR/EIS, not a negative declaration, was prepared for this Project.

    M-87 The General Plan EIR does not conclude that General Plan policies will result in the conversion of State Designated Farmland. It only concludes that there will be a change in zoned or General Plan designated land. (General Plan EIR, p. 4.2-20-4.2-21.) The MSHCP EIR/EIS concludes that there is no significant impact to zoned or General Plan designated land because the MSHCP does not conflict with any zoning designations, among other reasons. See Responses M-2, M-3 , M-14, M-16 and M-74. The MSHCP is a different project than the General Plan update, and the MSHCP is not a land use document. Therefore, the MSHCP's potential impacts on agricultural resources are different from the General Plan update's.

     

    M-88 The commentor fails to provide explicit examples of other changes which, due to their location, could result in conversion of farmland to non-agricultural use. Therefore, the Lead Agencies are unable to respond.

    M-89 See Responses M-51 and M-58.

    M-90 Nothing in CEQA or NEPA requires analysis of the Project's potential impacts to agricultural preserves. See Responses M-34 through M-38 and M-79.

    M-91 See Responses M-34 through M-38 and M-79.

    M-92 Table 9-1 in the MSHCP lists the "Overall Vegetation Community Conservation Estimates". Vegetation Communities are broken up into four large categories, one of which is "agriculture," which refers to the biological classification of the land. Table 9-1 illustrates that 20,020 acres of agricultural vegetation is conserved under the MSHCP. It does not mean that the MSHCP requires the cessation of Existing Agricultural Operations; rather, the MSHCP expressly allows Existing Agricultural Operations to continue and provides them Take Authorization. See Response M-2.

    M-93 The commentor misrepresents information contained in the Draft MSHCP by stating that when the MSHCP is adopted, agriculture will not be a "permitted use." In fact, agricultural activities may continue indefinitely as Covered Activities. See Responses M-2, M-6, M-14, and M-16. Moreover, the sections of the Plan cited by commentor do not discuss the continuation of agricultural activities. Section 5.2.1 discusses management activities and even identifies agriculture as the primary habitat for several species. Section 6.2A merely defines an Agricultural Operation.

    M-94 As discussed in Responses M-14, M-16, M-50 and M-74, Existing Agricultural Operations would be exempt from the MSHCP requirements until such uses require the issuance of a discretionary permit or certain City ministerial approvals. As stated in the Draft MSHCP Section 6.1.4, the Urban/Wildlands Interface Guidelines are intended to be considerations that are placed on new Development that is proposed in close proximity to the MSHCP Conservation Area. There is no provision for applying these guidelines to existing land uses, including agriculture, regardless of where the operation is located in the Plan Area. M-20. Therefore, it is not necessary to assess this alleged impact in the EIR/EIS. See also Responses M-7 and M-20.

     

    M-95 Neither Section 6.1.5 of the Plan or Riverside County Ordinance No. 457 require bona fide existing, expanding or new Agricultural Operations to obtain a grading permit. See Response M-20. Therefore, it is not necessary to assess this alleged impact in the EIR/EIS.

    M-96 See Responses M-5, M-27 and M-94. Therefore, it is not necessary to assess this alleged impact in the EIR/EIS.

    M-97 See Responses M-5, M-27 and M-94. Therefore, it is not necessary to assess this alleged impact in the EIR/EIS.

    M-98 See Responses M-5, M-27 and M-94. Therefore, it is not necessary to assess this alleged impact in the EIR/EIS.

    M-99 See Responses M-5, M-16 and M-74 and M-100.

    M-100 The HANS process is a property owner-initiated process. Agricultural land owners would not be required to comply with the HANS process unless they voluntarily submitted development applications to develop their property or desire to sell their property to the RCA for conservation purposes. Therefore, the HANS process will not delay Agricultural Operations for six years. See Response H2-31. At this time, it is impossible to ascertain how much property would be sold under HANS from Agricultural Operations. Neither CEQA nor NEPA requires analysis of speculative impacts. See Response H2-15.

    M-101 It is speculative to attempt to quantify "agricultural operations that would otherwise have occurred, but will not as a result of the...MSHCP." In fact, the MSHCP encourages agriculture, given the unlimited Take Authorization provided to Agricultural Operations outside the Criteria Area and to at least 10,000 New Agricultural Lands within the Criteria Area.

    M-102 The Draft EIR/EIS fully analyzes impacts to agricultural resources in compliance with both CEQA and NEPA. See Responses M-2, M-3, M-6, M-14, M-16 and M-74. Impacts to Agricultural Operations that might occur in the future because of the MSHCP are too speculative to analyze in the Draft EIR/EIS. See Response M-101. State CEQA Guidelines section 15145 specifically states that speculation is not required in an EIR.

    Likewise, NEPA does not require an analysis of impacts that are too speculative to identify. (See, e.g., Kootenai Tribe of Idaho v. Veneman (2002) 313 F.3d 1094; Hoosier Env'l Council, Inc. v. U.S. Army Corps of Engs. (S.D. Ind. 2000) 105 F.Supp.2d 953, 998 [concluding that economic growth from rural casino project was too speculative to require NEPA analysis].) See Responses M-47 and M-88 through M-101.

    The August 11, 1980 CEQ Memorandum to which the commentor cites merely provides guidance to federal agencies on how to implement NEPA. See Response M-16. 40 CFR Section 1502.16(f) requires that the discussion of environmental consequences also include a discussion of any irreversible or irretrievable commitments of resources. The Proposed Action is the establishment of an MSHCP, which would create a reserve system and a mechanism for assembling the reserves as well as permitting development. Development in areas outside of the MSHCP Conservation Area would occur as anticipated in the County and City General Plans. The MSHCP would not increase or decrease the amount of development that is anticipated to occur, and thus does not directly result in development (which would involve the irretrievable and irreversible use of land, water, and building materials). Development impacts will occur regardless of whether the MSHCP is implemented. Indirectly, through Reserve Assembly and management, areas with significant natural resources would be conserved through this Plan. These natural resources would be committed for the duration of the MSHCP. However, this does not represent irreversible environmental changes or an irretrievable commitment of resources. Growth inducing impacts are also thoroughly analyzed in this section. See Responses H2-15, H2-310 through H2-315 and H2-330.

    M-103 See Responses G-10, H2-93 through H2-122 and N3-1 through N3-3. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of: Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003. The conclusion that the data is "inaccurate and outdated" does not follow from the fact that the data was collected over the past decade. The development of the MSHCP was predicated on the use of this information. Additionally, the Adaptive Management and vegetation database update provisions of the MSHCP are not an improper deferral but instead are a means by which newly discovered science may be utilized in Plan implementation.

    The commentator's reliance on Berkeley Keep Jets Over the Bay Com. v. Board of Port Cmrs. (2001) 91 Cal.App.4th 1344, is misplaced. See Responses H2-93 and H2-288.

    M-104 The Lead Agencies have the discretion to formulate standards for significance for use in the EIR. (State CEQA Guidelines, § 15064(b).) See Responses M-67 through M-72, M-82. See also MSHCP, § 7.3.3; Draft EIR/EIS. p. 4.2-14. See Response M-34 regarding Williamson Act issues and Response M-43 regarding General Plan Consistency issues. Impacts from the MSHCP will not have a significant impact on existing or future agriculture. See Response M-74. See also Response M-88 regarding MSHCP programs, M-12 and M-20 regarding grubbing/grading permits, and M-27 regarding Narrow Endemic Plant Species and Riparian/Riverine and Vernal Pools.

    M-105 CEQA only requires the discussion of feasible mitigation measures in an EIR for significant impacts. (Pub. Res. Code, § 21002.1.) The MSHCP has no significant impacts on agricultural resources. Thus, no mitigation measures were required. See Responses H2-77, H2-79, H2-318 and J3-3. To the extent that no feasible mitigation exists to reduce an impact to below a level of significance, the Lead Agencies would have to consider adoption of a statement of overriding considerations. See Response H2-321. The comment fails to identify any specific mitigation measures for consideration by the Lead Agencies. The EIR/EIS appropriately assumes the MSHCP will be implemented. See Responses M-2, M-6 and M-74.

    M-106 See Responses M-74, M-82 and M-105. The MSHCP provides numerous incentives to farmers to continue their operations, such as unlimited Take Authorization for the duration of the Plan.

    The Plan encourages continued and future agriculture and ensures that Agricultural Operations may continue unimpacted by the MSHCP. However, it is impossible at this time to analyze or discuss other factors that may cause a farmer not to continue his/her operation or that may discourage new operations if private farmers choose not to farm. The MSHCP does not force land into Agricultural Operation, but the MSHCP does contain provisions for continued Agricultural Operations, in the form of Take Authorization and the New Agricultural Lands provision, to avoid significant impacts to agriculture.

    M-107 See Responses M-105 and M-106. The Draft EIR/EIS fully analyzes all potential environmental impacts. See Response H2-321. No significant impacts to agriculture have been identified and therefore no mitigation measures are required. Additionally, with respect to right to farm laws, the commentor fails to provide any details that would allow a specific response. However, generally these laws impose greater restrictions on agricultural land, which the Farm Bureau has rejected in the past. Second, the MSHCP is not a land use document and does not redesignate agricultural land nor does it render it a non-conforming use. Third, the MSHCP acquires property for Reserve Assembly from willing sellers; it does not require involuntary contributions of land. Fourth,

    agricultural uses are entitled to participate in the full array of incentives offered in the MSHCP, including tax credits. See Responses M-17 and M-30. Fifth, the Urban/Wildlands Interface Guidelines do not constitute a "land exaction program" and as noted previously these Guidelines are intended to address issues such as lighting, urban runoff, and introduction of invasive species, which apply only to Development, not Existing Agricultural Operations. Sixth, the provision regarding permits to clear, grub, or grade has been recommended for removal from the MSHCP. See Response M-20. Seventh, as explained previously, the guidelines associated with Riparian/Riverine areas, vernal pools, and protection of Narrow Endemic Plant Species do not apply to Existing Agricultural Operations. Finally, the commentor's recommendation that Take Authorization should be granted to existing, expanding, and future agricultural uses is already provided in the MSHCP. See Response M-5.

    M-108 See Response M-16 with regard to Open Space Lands Act. The MSHCP is largely self-mitigating. See Responses H2-77, H2-79, H2-318 and J3-3. For those limited impacts that are significant, the Lead Agencies have not identified any feasible mitigation measures that would lessen such impacts. The EIR/EIS concludes that there will not be any significant adverse impacts to agriculture and, therefore, no mitigation measures are required. The commentor-suggested mitigation measures reiterate provisions in the Plan. The comment recommends that agricultural land be acquired as a last resort and that Take Authorization be provided for all relocated Agricultural Operations. With respect to the first suggested measure, Reserve Assembly through the HANS Process would only occur as a result of development applications or acquisitions from willing sellers. The Parties would only establish priorities for acquisition for lands already determined to be offered by willing sellers through the HANS Process. With respect to the second measure, no features of the MSHCP would mandate the displacement or relocation of Existing Agricultural Operations. See Responses M-2, M-6, M-14, M-70 and M-104. Additionally, one of the stated objectives of the MSHCP is to "conserve habitat in functional blocks, rather than on a piecemeal ad hoc basis." (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 1.2-4.) The commentor's recommended mitigation measure would not allow the acquisition of habitat in functional blocks. Instead, it would create a disjointed MSHCP Conservation Area that would be impractical for the large scale comprehensive conservation of species as contemplated by the MSHCP. Since Existing Agricultural Operations will not need to relocate and the MSHCP provides 10,000 acres for the future expansion of agriculture within the Criteria Area, the suggested mitigation measure is neither necessary nor required by law.

    M-108A See Responses M-109, H2-15, H2-310 through H2-315 and H2-330.

    M-109 See Responses H2-11, H2-19, H2-82, H2-85 and H2-340 responding to the commentor's first and second points. Consistent with state and federal requirements, the EIR/EIS provides an accurate depiction of the project and its environmental effects, including any reasonably foreseeable activities associated with the project in the Executive Summary and Section 2. The MSHCP Plan Area encompasses all areas within western Riverside County under the jurisdiction of the County and the participating Cities in which activities resulting in Take are expected to occur. From its inception, the three components of RCIP were designed to use a common database and to have coordinated policy direction. As noted in the Draft EIR/EIS, adoption of the General Plan is the sole responsibility of the County of Riverside, while adoption of the MSHCP also requires approval of 14 Cities within the western portion of the County, CDFG, and USFWS. Adoption of CETAP is the responsibility of the RCTC and the Federal Highway Administration. While they are coordinated, the update of the County's General Plan, the MSHCP, and CETAP have independent utility, and each project could be adopted regardless of actions taken in relation to the other projects. See also Responses H2-310 through H2-315, M-14, M-51 and M-50 through M-58. Response M-101 discusses the commentor's allegations regarding future Agricultural Operations. Response M-11 discusses the baseline issue. Finally, establishing hard line boundaries is not required by CEQA or NEPA. See Responses H2-43 and H2-11.

    M-110 See Response M-109 regarding the separate analysis of the various independent RCIP projects. The EIR/EIS adequately analyzes the potential environmental impacts of the MSHCP. See Responses M-94 and M-102. The MSHCP, the Draft General Plan, and the CETAP are independent but interrelated projects which would be considered for implementation regardless of the outcome of the other two projects. Indeed, the General Plan Update is required by state law. (Gov. Code, § 65103.) The MSHCP, CETAP and the Draft General Plan do not trigger one another, can and will proceed independently and do not depend on each other for their justification. The drafters of the three documents have attempted to make them consistent, but this is just good planning, not prohibited piecemealing. See Responses H2-312 and H2-340.

    M-111 The MSHCP and other RCIP documents include numerous maps that assist landowners in determining how these properties will be impacted. Additionally, the County has a website that allows property owners to enter their APN and immediately ascertain whether property is within the Criteria Area. See Response H2-85, www.rcip.org/ maps.htm. Existing Agricultural Operations in the Plan Area receive Take Authorization, which would protect the property owner should a species "migrate from the Conservation Area into operating farms and ranches." The citation to the case of John Corp. v. City of Houston (5th Cir. 2000) is irrelevant because the suggestion that a violation of a property owner's substantive due process rights can exist outside of any "takings" clause action is incorrect. Settled precedent in the 9th Circuit pursuant to the "Graham doctrine" forbids all substantive due process claims from supplementing or supplanting regulatory takings claims. (Armendariz v. Penman (9th Cir. 1996), 75 F.3d 1311, 1313-1315; Macri v. King County (9th Cir.1997), 126 F.3d 1125; Buckles v. King County (9th Cir. 1999) 191 F.3d 1127, 1138.)

    The procedures established under the MSHCP are not a constitutional "taking." See Response H2-41. The MSHCP, though comprehensive and complex, is not unlawfully vague. The MSHCP is a streamlined process for complying with the mandates of FESA and the NCCP Act. For an area of the Plan's size, compliance with these legal mandates would be burdensome and haphazard outside of this streamlined process. See Response H2-11.

    Definitive boundaries for the MSHCP Conservation Area are not required. In the context of a regional HCP, there is no FESA requirement that areas to be conserved be identified at a parcel-level basis. There is inherent flexibility for Reserve Assembly. The HCP Handbook states that "HCP boundaries should encompass all areas within the applicant's project, land use area, or jurisdiction within which any permit or planned activities likely to result in incidental take are expected to occur...For regional HCPs, the size and configuration of the plan area will depend on various factors. Sometimes a regional HCP boundary will simply be a county line because a county government is the applicant... Generally, HCP applicants should be encouraged to consider as large and comprehensive a plan area as is feasible and consistent with their land or natural resource use authorities." (HCP Handbook, p. 3-11.) Indeed, because regional HCPs are often funded through collected habitat mitigation fees and other revolving sources of funding, mitigation lands are not all purchased "up front." Instead, conservation lands are purchased in a timely manner as funds become available. However, because the precise mitigation lands that might be available for acquisition in the coming years cannot be predicted at this time, and due to other legal constraints, the MSHCP identifies core areas and conservation criteria to facilitate future acquisition of mitigation lands for the Plan. See Responses H2-11, H2-85 and H2-344.

    M-112 The MSHCP is an independent project from the other components of the RCIP. The MSHCP project description is adequate and fully complies with both CEQA and NEPA. The Draft EIR/EIS contains an adequate analysis of cumulative impacts and growth-inducing effects. See Responses M-110, H2-15, H2-310 through H2-315, and H2-330. The MSHCP will not force Existing Agricultural Operations out of production. See

    Response M-14. Therefore, it was appropriate for the EIR/EIS to conclude that the MSHCP's potential impacts on agricultural resources are less than significant. In contrast, the General Plan EIR found significant impacts to agricultural resources based on the re-designation of land uses from agricultural to development.

    M-113 As required by CEQA, the Draft EIR/EIS discusses a range of reasonable alternatives in detail in Section 2. (14 Cal. Code Regs. § 15126(a).) The Lead Agencies have the discretion to determine what alternatives constitutes a reasonable range. (See Citizens of Goleta Valley v. Board of Supervisors (1990) 52 Cal. 3d 553, 556.) Although an infinite number of alternatives and variations could be identified, EIRs are not required to evaluate all possible alternatives or "consider an alternative whose effects cannot be reasonably ascertained and whose implementation is considered to be remote and speculative." State CEQA Guidelines § 15126(d)(5)(C). As a result, the alternatives analysis in the Draft EIR/EIS focuses on those options that could be implemented and which, if implemented, would have the potential to reduce or avoid any significant adverse environmental effects associated with the proposed project while still meeting the project objectives.

    A wide range of potentially feasible alternatives was considered. A Description of Preliminary Alternatives, including numerous suggestions from stakeholders and landowners, was distributed in February 2000. The selection of alternatives for the Draft EIR/EIS is discussed in detail in the Alternatives Screening Document (Appendix B).The Alternatives analyzed in the Draft EIR/EIS are the Proposed MSHCP; the Listed, Proposed and Strong Candidate Species Alternative; the Listed and Proposed Species Alterative; the Existing Reserves Alternative; and the No Project Alternative. Since one of the project objectives identified in Section 1.0 of the Draft EIR/EIS is to conserve habitat and species, the alternatives include protection for both habitat and species. The County and the Service concluded that alternatives that resulted in conservation of fewer species were infeasible for economic and other reasons, conflicted with the project objectives and would not avoid or substantially lessen the project's significant environmental impacts. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 2.2-1.) The four alternatives identified in the Draft EIR/EIS were chosen to foster informed decision-making and public participation.

    With regard to the impacts of the MSHCP on agriculture, see Responses M-2, M-14 and M-74. With regard to the timing of the Section 10(a) permit application, see Response H2-349.

    M-114 The suggested alternative providing for agricultural land to be acquired as a last resort and allowing Take Authorization for all relocated Agricultural Operations need not be analyzed because it does not substantially lessen project impacts. See Responses M-5, M-14, M-29, M-70, M-104 and M-108.

    M-115 The No Project Alternative discussed in the Draft EIR/EIS fully complies with CEQA in its discussion of the Draft General Plan. CEQA requires the No Project Alternative to analyze the existing conditions "as well as what would be reasonably expected to occur in the foreseeable future if the project were not approved, based on current plans and consistent with available infrastructure and community services." State CEQA Guidelines, § 15126.6(e)(2). The MSHCP, the Draft General Plan, and the CETAP are independent but interrelated projects which would be considered for implementation regardless of the outcome of the other two projects. Indeed, the Draft General Plan is required by state law. Government Code section 65103. Accordingly, the discussion of the Draft General Plan in the No Project Alternative is appropriate since it is a current plan that the County reasonably expects to occur.

    M-116 As required by both CEQA and NEPA, the Draft EIR/EIS discusses a range of reasonable alternatives in detail in Section 2. State CEQA Guidelines § 15126(a); 40 CFR § 1502.14. As more thoroughly explained in Responses G-10, H2 -93 through H2-122 and N3-1 through N3-3, the discussion of alternatives is based upon the best available scientific and commercial data. The range of alternatives considered was based on their feasibility, taking into account biological, land use, economic, regulatory, legal, and other considerations; their ability to reduce or avoid the MSHCP's significant environmental impacts; and their consistency with the project objectives identified in Section 1.0 of the Draft EIR/EIS. See Response M-113. See also Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of: Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003.

    M-117 The Lead Agencies appreciate the Farm Bureau's support of the Plan's goals. The Lead Agencies have not ignored any comments received on the Plan. In fact, the MSHCP has incorporated many of the Farm Bureau's prior requests verbatim, often over the objections of other stakeholders. However, it is ultimately up to the Lead Agencies to determine which comments and proposed changes to the Plan are feasible and appropriate and would still allow Permit issuance. As explained in the responses to comments contained herein and elsewhere, the MSHCP does not violate CEQA, NEPA, FESA, CESA or any other applicable state or federal law.

    M-118 The Draft EIR/EIS does not contain any new information or inaccuracies that require extensive revision or recirculation of the Draft EIR/EIS. As explained in detail in the proceeding responses, the Draft EIR/EIS "adequately apprise[s] all interested parties of the true scope of the project for intelligent weighing of the environmental consequences of the project." (City of Santee v. County of San Diego (1989) 214 Cal.App.3d 1438, 1454-1455.) The Lead Agencies will comply with all legal requirements regarding document distribution.

    M-119 The proposed policy recommendations will be forwarded to the Board of Supervisors for consideration. See Responses M-24, M-34 and M-94 regarding the Urban/Wildlife Interface Guidelines. See Responses M-5, M-108, M-114 regarding Take Authorization. See Response M-28 regarding the Certificate of Inclusion and the Agricultural Lands Database. See Responses M-22 and M-48 regarding the conversion of grazing or pastureland to tilled acreage . See Responses M-5, M-23, M-34, M-41, M-43, M-57, M99 and M-108 regarding the expansion of Existing Agricultural Operations. See Response M-47 regarding the New Agricultural Lands Cap.

    The provision in the MSHCP that for property included in the New Agricultural Lands Cap, Development will not be considered for at least five years after the property was added to the Agricultural Operations Database, except in limited circumstances, is intended to ensure that only legitimate bona fide Agricultural Operations receive Take Authorization.

    M-120 This attachment is a comment letter on prior versions of the documents or the Notice of Preparation. These comments have been received and considered in the draft documents that were released for public review. Although all comments have been considered, it is up to the Lead Agencies to determine how such comments should be addressed.

    M-121 See Response M-120.


    Comment Letter M2 - Friedman Peterson Stroffe and Gerard on behalf of Civic Partners and Elsinore and Liberty Founders, January 15, 2003

    M2-1 This comment requests that an attached letter from Helix Environmental Consultants regarding the commentor's property be entered into the administrative record for the EIR/EIS.

    M2-2 This comment is the attachment referenced in Comment M2 -1. Consideration of the criteria developed by the consultant is within the scope of the process for reviewing development applications identified in the Draft MSHCP.

    M2-3 The MSHCP is not a "mapped" plan. The Local Permittee will gladly work with the property owner to determine what portion, if any property is within a Cell. The HANS Process provides for consultation as part of an offer to sell property or in response to a proposed development.

    The MSHCP consistency review process will take into consideration the applicant's discussion with the USFWS concerning the proposed open space. A property owner may also obtain information on parcels through the County website (www.rcip.org).

    M2-4 See Response W-1.


    Comment Letter M3 - Juanita W. Bullock, UCR, January 15, 2003

    M3-1 The proposed addition of a Cell immediately north of Cell 719 and immediately west of Cell 635 is noted. This minor addition to the Criteria Area will be provided in the Final MSHCP. It is acknowledged that addition of this Cell will improve the ability to achieve the Proposed Constrained Linkage 7, in consideration of the limited opportunities that exist to establish a permanent Linkage in this area.


    Comment Letter M4 - SilveradoRanch Conservation Bank, March10, 2003

    M4-1 See Responses N4-2 and N4-3.

    M4-2 See Responses N4-2 and N4-3. The Lead Agencies acknowledge and appreciate the cooperation and efforts of the commentor in conserving an important resource and offering a service to the development community.

    M4-3 See Response N4-3.

    M4-4 See Response N4-3.

    M4-5 See Responses N4-3 and N4-4.


    Comment Letter N - Metropolitan Water District of Southern California, January 15, 2003

    N-1 The Lead Agencies agree that the MSHCP is a comprehensive, multi-jurisdictional habitat conservation plan that addresses conservation needs for biological and ecological diversity in Riverside County. The Lead Agencies also appreciate Metropolitan's participation in the development and review of the RCIP work products.

    N-2 As set forth in Section 4.2.2 of the Draft MSHCP, local government managed conservation areas, including those controlled by Metropolitan, will significantly contribute to the Conservation of Covered Species through species and habitat management. However, those lands will continue to be managed by the owners of those lands (see Draft MSHCP, p. 4-13). The Permittees intend to enter into a Memorandum of Understanding (MOU) with Metropolitan to ensure that its reserve areas will be managed in a cooperative fashion to ensure maximum benefits to species and habitat. A Draft MOU has been added as Exhibit K to the IA.

    N-3 With respect to Metropolitan-owned conservation areas covered by existing HCPs, the Lead Agencies anticipate that Metropolitan will continue to manage those lands. (See Response N-2.) With respect to other Metropolitan property and future facilities, such future facilities could be permitted within existing Public/Quasi Public (PQP) Lands subject to a finding of equivalent conservation (Draft MSHCP, p. 7-11.) As set forth in Section 11.8 of the IA and pages 6-53 to 6-54 of the Draft MSHCP, Metropolitan is eligible to become a Participating Special Entity, should Metropolitan so desire. Metropolitan would then receive Take Authorization under the MSHCP, provided the MSHCP requirements are met. The RCA may consider exempting Metropolitan from certain mitigation as part of the MOU process, provided certain requirements are met.

    N-4 The Lead Agencies are not aware of any inconsistencies between the MSHCP and the General Plan regarding designations on Metropolitan's property and facilities or with the intended use of Metropolitan's property.

    N-5 Existing reserves are defined as "Public/Quasi-Public" (PQP) and include lands known to be in public ownership that are managed for conservation and/or open space value, or land contained in an existing reserve (see, e.g., Draft EIR/EIS Figure 2.8; see also Draft EIR/EIS, p. 4.1-10). Existing reserves and conservation areas are shown on Figure 2.3 on page 2.3-5 of the Draft EIR/EIS and are discussed in detail in Section 2.3.1 (see also Figure 2.8). These lands are not being used to mitigate for future Development.

    The RMOC will act as the intermediary between conservation/adaptive management activities conducted by Reserve Managers and those who manage existing reserves (see Draft MSHCP, p. 6-83.). The RMOC is comprised not only of local agencies, but also the Wildlife Agencies, BLM, USFS, DPR, and certain other entities appointed by the RCA Board that own or manage land within the MSHCP Conservation Area. Thus, wildlife management will be coordinated in a comprehensive fashion (Draft MSHCP, p. 6-84).

    N-5A See Responses N-6 through N-44.

    N-5B The Lead Agencies acknowledge that Metropolitan is a regional water wholesaler with facilities and land holdings in western Riverside County. Metropolitan will be consulted by the RCA as appropriate to coordinate Metropolitan's specific facilities requirements during the long-term implementation process for the MSHCP.

    N-6 The Lead Agencies acknowledge receipt of the mapping from Metropolitan identifying core and reserve properties. Core properties identified by Metropolitan are not included as PQP Lands in the MSHCP. With respect to designation of core properties as public facilities, this is not an MSHCP issue. The Public Facilities designation is a General Plan designation. In addition, Section 3.2.1 of the Draft MSHCP calls for verification of the precise acreage, location, and amount of PQP Lands within 5 years of Permit issuance. See Response N-8.

    N-7 The MSHCP establishes wildlife Linkages to provide maximum benefit to species. As wildlife Linkages are established as part of the Reserve Assembly process, the presence of existing and planned Metropolitan facilities will be considered. Should Metropolitan facilities be located in such areas, compliance with best management and other practices may be considered to minimize impact to species.

    N-8 While the MSHCP and General Plan share a common base of information, the General Plan land use designations are not part of the MSHCP. For example, a parcel of land could have a designation in the General Plan of public facility but be reflected in the MSHCP as PQP Land. The MSHCP does not establish land use designations and is consistent with the General Plan. In addition, the County is prevented by State law from regulating Metropolitan's water operations and facilities.

    N-9 The MSHCP does make the distinction called for by the commentor. The 153,000 acres of "Additional Reserve Lands" will be conserved to complete the MSHCP Conservation Area. The Mitigation Lands are a subset of Additional Reserve Lands totaling approximately 103,000 acres that will provide mitigation for future Development. No existing conservation lands are considered mitigation for future Development. No existing Metropolitan conservation lands or operation facilities are considered as mitigation for future Developments' impacts to Covered Species. Vacant Metropolitan lands may be in the Criteria Area but would only be considered as Additional Reserve Lands if they were acquired or otherwise conserved in the future.

    Impacts on existing HCPs and NCCPs are adequately discussed in the Draft EIR/EIS (see p. 1.5-5). Section 4.1 of the Draft EIR/EIS also briefly describes existing conservation planning efforts in areas adjacent to the MSHCP (See also Draft EIR/EIS, figure 4.1.2). However, not all issues analyzed were found significant or cumulatively considerable. Adoption of the proposed MSHCP and issuance of the Permits under FESA and the NCCP Act would permanently conserve land in western Riverside County and would permit Take of Covered Species. The thresholds of significance utilized by the Lead Agencies for determining the significance of the impact only requires a finding of significance if the proposed MSHCP would conflict with the provisions of an adopted HCP, NCCP or other approved local, regional, or state habitat conservation plan (see State CEQA Guidelines, App. G). Since the MSHCP does not authorize any physical Development, it was determined that implementation of the proposed MSHCP would not result in any significant environmental effects relating to adopted HCPs or NCCPs. In fact, the MSHCP was specifically designed to augment and complement existing HCPs and NCCPs. Accordingly, an in depth discussion of the impacts to existing HCPs and NCCPs is not required by CEQA; nevertheless, the Draft EIR/EIS briefly discusses several insignificant environmental issues, including impacts on HCPs and NCCPs, in Section 1.5.5 (Draft EIR/EIS, pp. 1.1-17 and 1.5-8; see also State CEQA Guidelines, § 15128). See also Responses N-3 and N-5.

    N-10 As indicated in Section 4.2.2 of the MSHCP, a summary of existing reserves, including Metropolitan's lands, is contained in a document entitled Description of Existing Reserves, Western Riverside County MSHCP (Dudek 2000), which is on file with the County, was relied upon during the preparation of the MSHCP and related documents and is therefore part of the Administrative Record. Thus, it is unnecessary to add this information to the MSHCP or to the Draft EIR/EIS. Additionally in Section 5.2.2, there is a discussion of the relationship between Metropolitan's existing reserve lands and PQP Lands. See Response N-9.

    N-11 Metropolitan's existing reserve lands are included in the MSHCP's calculation of PQP Lands. See Responses N-6 and N-9.

    N-12 Section 3.2.1 of the Draft MSHCP calls for verification of the precise acreage, location, and amount of PQP Lands within 5 years of Permit issuance. Therefore, it is not necessary to do any additional mapping at this time.

    N-13 If Metropolitan elects not to directly participate in the RMOC process, the Permittees intend to enter into an MOU regarding the management of existing conservation lands within the Plan Area. However, by participating in the RMOC, Metropolitan will be able to coordinate management and monitoring activities with the Permittees, thereby saving both time and money. See Responses N-2, N-3 and N-5.

    N-14 The Lead Agencies acknowledge Metropolitan's existing HCPs and mitigation agreements. The MSHCP does not supercede these plans and agreements. The Lead Agencies appreciate Metropolitan's offered cooperation in the MSHCP implementation. The Lead Agencies believe that a coordinated approach to MSHCP Conservation Area management would provide the greatest benefits for species and best utilization of available resources. See Responses N-2, N-3, N-5, N-7 and N-13.

    N-15 Neither the MSHCP nor the EIR/EIS utilizes any existing Metropolitan reserve lands or conservation areas as mitigation for future new Development. However, the MSHCP and the EIR/EIS do anticipate that these lands will continue to be managed for species conservation. Consequently, a land use designation of Open Space Conservation in the County's Draft General Plan would be an appropriate land use designation for these lands. Additionally, agreements may be reached between Metropolitan and the MSHCP Permittees to evaluate management activities to determine what changes, if any, would benefit the broader reserve system while remaining consistent with Metropolitan's current obligations under their existing permits.

    N-16 The appropriate text revisions will be made in the Final MSHCP.

    N-17 The comment correctly notes that Metropolitan lands cannot be used under the MSHCP to mitigate for future Development or to establish Take Authorization. These lands are included for purposes of establishing a coordinated MSHCP Conservation Area within western Riverside County. See Responses N-9 and N-15. The Lead Agencies believe that such a coordinated effort will provide better protection for species and more effectively utilize available resources, and that the cited paragraph is correct.

    N-18 The County is continuing to work with Metropolitan on mapping Metropolitan facilities for purposes of General Plan land use designations. After that mapping is completed, the RCA will review the General Plan land use designation maps to determine if the PQP Lands database included in the MSHCP should be changed. The MSHCP does not characterize any public agency's lands as "Public Facilities." See Responses N-6 and N-12.

    N-19 Section 4.1 of the Final MSHCP will clarify that 50,000 acres will be contributed to the overall MSHCP Conservation Area by state and federal sources and that 6,000 acres will be provided by State Permittees as mitigation for their projects.

    N-20 The MSHCP recognizes the conservation values that existing publically held lands have. See Responses N-9, N-15, and N-17. The editorial changes will be made in the Final MSHCP.

    N-21 Section 7.2 of the Draft MSHCP (Covered Activities within Existing PQP Lands) explicitly sets forth the activities that are covered in the PQP Lands. This includes a list of activities that are covered including maintenance of roads and future facilities. See Responses N-17 and N-20. Section 11.8 of the IA provides information concerning the process for Participating Special Entities, which could include Metropolitan, obtaining a Certificate of Inclusion.

    N-22 As explained above and elsewhere, (see for example Responses N-5, N-9, N-17, I4-10 and T4-7), existing PQP Lands, including Metropolitan reserves, are not being counted as part of the mitigation obligation of the Permittees under the MSHCP. The Lead Agencies intend to enter into MOUs with Metropolitan and other reserve owners in the Plan Area to address cooperation in terms of Plan implementation and species protection measures. Pursuant to Section 7.2.3 of the Final MSHCP requires analysis of the effects on existing HCPs/NCCPs for the Hemet to Corona-Lake Elsinore CETAP corridor.

    N-23 The mechanisms for coordination between the Lead Agencies, Permittees and existing reserves are explained in the discussion of the RMOC (see MSHCP, Section 6.6). Specifically, the MSHCP states that the RMOC will act as the intermediary between Reserve Managers and those who hold an equivalent position for existing reserves in order to ensure that wildlife management is coordinated in a comprehensive and organized manner. (Ibid.) Non-Permittees that own and/or manage property will be asked to sign an MOU, to ensure compliance with the Plan. The actual details of the annual work plans will be developed after Permit issuance, with oversight and consistency provided by the RCA. See Response N-5.

    N-24 The comment misstates the discussion on p. ES-4 of the Draft EIR/EIS. The MSHCP does not address protection of lands designated as public lands in the General Plan, nor does it change any designated land use.

    N-25 See Responses N-2 and N-3.

    N-26 Issues relating to the relationship between existing reserves and the MSHCP Conservation Area are adequately addressed in the Draft EIR/EIS and in the MSHCP. See Responses N-5, N-8, N-9 and N-23. With respect to consistency with the County's General Plan, see Responses K-107 and K-110. The General Plan Update currently being considered by the Board of Supervisors contemplates that adoption of the MSHCP is one form of mitigation for impacts to certain biological resources. Moreover, the IA specifically states that if a City wishes to benefit from the MSHCP's Take Authorization, the City will have to ensure that there are no General Plan inconsistencies that conflict with the provisions of the MSHCP, Permits, and the IA. Specifically, the IA states in Section 13.2(A) that the Cities have the obligation to "amend their general plans as appropriate" to effectuate the IA and fulfill the requirements of the Plan. These requirements are also included in the Draft EIR/EIS in Table 1A on page 1.4-1. The comment does not state which issues in the Metropolitan response to the Notice of Preparation were not addressed in the EIR/EIS, and thus no detailed response is possible.

    N-27 Pages 4.1-96 through 4.1-102 of the Draft EIR/EIS analyze the effects of the Proposed Action on Cores and Linkages and adopted or approved HCPs and NCCPs. The analysis of Cores and Linkages considers the Cores and Linkages identified as part of the MSHCP planning process as well as those identified in the California Wilderness Coalition report for Cores and Linkages in the South Coast Ecoregion. The analysis concludes that the Cores and Linkages identified as being located all or in part within the MSHCP Plan Area will be incorporated in the MSHCP Conservation Area and no significant impacts have been identified. Table 4E provides a summary of this analysis. With respect to adopted or approved HCPs and NCCPs, the EIR/EIS analysis addresses the Coachella Valley MSHCP, the San Diego MSHCP North County Subarea and MHCOSP, the Orange County Central and Coastal Subregion NCCP, the Orange County Southern Subregion NCCP and the San Bernardino preliminary MSHCP planning area. The analysis concludes that features are incorporated in the proposed western Riverside County MSHCP to ensure consistency with these related HCPs and NCCPs and no significant impact are identified. The analysis in the Draft EIR/EIS supports the conclusions shown on Table ES-B and a revision to the table is not needed.

    N-28 See Responses N-2, N-3, N-5, N-9, N-15, and N-17. The MSHCP is not designed to use Metropolitan's properties for Take Authorization.

    N-29 See Responses N-5, N-6 and N-17. CEQA and NEPA do not require that a discussion of preexisting conservation agreements be added to the MSHCP or the Draft EIR/EIS. Pre-existing conservation agreement lands shown on Figure 2-2 of the Draft MSHCP represent private lands having such agreements. Metropolitan is a public entity, and it is not appropriate to show Metropolitan lands under the pre-existing conservation category on Figure 2-2.

    N-30 See Responses N-6, N-9, N-10 and N-12. The core definition on p.4.1-96 of the Draft EIR/EIS is a biological definition and does not refer to the core property definitions referenced by Metropolitan in Comment N-6.

    N-31 See Response N-29.

    N-32 See Responses N-2, N-3 and N-17. In addition, this comment refers to the existing reserves alternative which is not the Proposed Action at this time. However, the existing reserves information contained in Responses N-2, N-3 and N-17 would apply to both the existing reserves alternative and the Proposed Action.

    N-33 For clarification purposes, the vegetation acreages shown in Table 4F under each of the alternatives analyzed represent areas that are not proposed for Conservation for each alternative (representing the potential impacts to Vegetation Communities). Therefore, since existing reserves are considered to be conserved under all of the alternatives, the figures presented in Table 4F do not include vegetation acreages within existing reserves.

    N-34 In Section 1.5.5 of the Draft EIR/EIS, it states:

    Utilities. The proposed MSHCP does not authorize or contemplate any physical development, so it will not require the use, construction, or expansion of water facilities, wastewater treatment facilities, storm drainagefacilities,orlandfillcapacity. Therefore, no direct impact on utilities would result from implementation of the proposed MSHCP. Because the proposed MSHCPcould increase pressure to develop areas outside of designated reserves and would encourage more dense or compact development, implementation of the proposed MSHCP could necessitate the "shift" of utility facilities to areas outside of reserve areas. However, for the reasons given above, it is impossible to speculate where future development might occur. Potential impacts to utility facilities and service systems resulting from future development would be determined during preparation of project-specific environmental analyses, in compliance with CEQA.

    It is implicit that public land and facilities that are owned by utility companies would similarly not be directly affected by implementation of the MSHCP. The MSHCP would not render any existing land use non-conforming or require any change in existing land use, and would only apply if a property owner (including a public agency) sought to change a land use in a manner that requires a discretionary and certain City ministerial approvals from one of the Permittees or the Wildlife Agencies. Adoption of the proposed MSHCP and issuance of the Permits would permanently conserve land in western Riverside County and would permit Take of Covered Species. Since the MSHCP does not authorize any physical development, it was concluded that implementation of the proposed MSHCP would not result in any significant environmental effects relating to utilities. As required by CEQA, the Draft EIR/EIS briefly discusses insignificant environmental issues, including utilities, in Section 1.5.5 (State CEQA Guidelines, § 15128). For example, because the proposed MSHCP does not authorize physical development, implementation of the proposed MSHCP would not require the use, construction, or expansion of water facilities, wastewater treatment facilities, storm drainage facilities, or landfill capacity. Moreover, even though the Draft EIR/EIS recognizes that there is a possibility that the proposed MSHCP could encourage more dense or compact development, which could in turn affect utilities, potential impacts from future unknown development are too speculative to analyze in this Draft EIR/EIS. See Response H2-15. For this reason, there are no significant impacts on utilities.

    N-35 The code sections referenced below were added to the NCCP Act by Senate Bill 107 in 2001, and became effective January 2, 2002. The NCCP Act of 2001 specifically recognized that many plans were under development pursuant to the terms of the previous act, and as such included a "grandfather" clause with the new amendments at California Fish and Game Code section 2830. This "grandfather" clause allows plans with planning agreements executed prior to January 2, 2002 to be deemed consistent with the revised NCCP Act if certain required findings are made.

    The Planning Agreement for the MSHCP was executed prior to January 2, 2002, and therefore, pursuant to California Fish and Game Code Section 2830, the MSHCP will be "grandfathered-in" once the required findings are made.

    N-36 through N-43 See Response N-35.

    N-44 See Responses N-2, N-3, N-17 and N-34.

    N-45 As to the equitable sharing of the costs, Section 8 of the Plan discusses the sharing of costs among local entities engaged in development activities. Among public entities, the costs are shared differently based on the type of Development being undertaken. For non-Permittees, public agencies and utility companies, participation under the Plan to obtain Take Authorization is discretionary. If a local utility desires to obtain Take Authorization under the Plan, mitigation is identified in Section 11.8 of the IA. If a utility believes that this mitigation is not equitable, it is under no obligation to participate. See Responses O-6 and O-7.

    N-46 The Planning Agreement included as Appendix A to Volume I of the Draft MSHCP did not represent the Planning Agreement executed by the Parties. Appendix A of the Final MSHCP incorporates the executed Planning Agreement, and this Planning Agreement does not include references to acreages in the Lake Mathews MSHCP.

    N-47 See Responses N-2, N-3 and N-17.

    N-48 The Lead Agencies concur with this comment.

    N-49 See Responses N-2, N-3 and N-17.

    N-50 The commentor's statements are correct. The County does not have the ability to regulate Metropolitan lands used for their water supply facilities. The MSHCP does not regulate Metropolitan lands.

    N-51 As a Participating Special Entity, Metropolitan would have to follow the requirements set forth in Section 11.8.3 of the IA, absent an alternative agreement between RCA and Metropolitan. Unlike Metropolitan, the other public entities referenced are Permittees under the MSHCP and thus, have committed to certain mitigation requirements and to cooperate and implement the MSHCP.

    N-52 The Lead Agencies appreciate Metropolitan's participation in the MSHCP planning process and willingness to meet with County representatives. Future public documents will be made available to Metropolitan upon their request.

    Comment Letter N

    Comment Letter N2 - Gresham, Savage, Nolan & Tilden on behalf of Warmington Land Company, January 15, 2003

    N2-1 This comment provides information regarding the commentor's property. With respect to the 65-acre parcel referenced in the comment, the commentor is correct in noting that this parcel is part of the Criteria Area, and the MSHCP anticipates Conservation on this parcel as part of Additional Reserve Lands.

    N2-2 The comment refers to the EIS/EIR completed for CETAP. The lead agencies for CETAP are RCTC and FHWA. All letters of comment received on the CETAP EIS/EIR will be addressed in the final EIS/EIR for that project. At this point in time, the RCTC is scheduled to consider selection of a preferred alternative for the Winchester to Temecula corridor in July 2003. For the Hemet to Lake Elsinore/Corona corridor, the RCTC and FHWA are preparing a Supplemental EIS/Recirculated EIR that will be distributed for public review in 2003. Currently, RCTC is scheduled to consider this document and select a locally preferred alternative in February 2004.

    N2-3 The commentor is correct in noting that the three components of the RCIP are subject to CEQA and/or NEPA.

    N2-4 See Response N2-2.

    N2-5 See Response N2-2.

    N2-6 Neither the Draft MSHCP nor the MSHCP Draft EIR/EIS state that further consideration of CETAP Alternatives 5a and 5b have been terminated. Both the MSHCP and EIR/EIS address potential east-west and north-south CETAP corridors. Both documents note that several of the corridor alternatives include multiple options; however, only one of the options will be selected as the preferred alternative for each corridor. The documents also note that corridor alternatives not ultimately selected may remain as part of the General Plan Circulation Element if an underlying designation, such as expressway or urban arterial, exists for the alignment. The MSHCP and the EIR/EIS analyze impacts associated with the Take Authorization proposed by the MSHCP for the CETAP alternatives identified in the Plan and the General Plan Circulation Element.

    N2-7 See Response N2-2.

    N2-8 The Lead Agencies acknowledge that the October 9, 2002 memorandum was a recommendation and not a final decision and believe that it was appropriately circulated for the purpose of encouraging informed discussion and comment. In addition, the MSHCP expressly acknowledges that there are several alternatives for the transportation corridors being considered. (Draft MSHCP, § 7.3.5.)

    N2-9 See Responses N2-6 and N2-8.

    N2-10 See Responses N2-6 and N2-8.

    N2-11 See Responses N2-2 and N2-6.

    N2-12 See Responses N2-2 and N2-6.

    N2-13 There are no equivalency evaluations or processes referenced in the Plan that are related to replacement mitigation fees. References to "equivalency evaluations" in the Plan are contained in Sections 6.1.2, 6.1.3, 6.3.2 and 6.5 and refer to biologically equivalent or superior alternatives that may be considered as part of the guidelines related to protection of riparian/riverine areas, Narrow Endemic Plant Species, additional survey species, and criteria refinements respectively. The procedures for preparation, review and evaluation of biologically equivalent or superior alternatives are included in Section 6.1.2, 6.1.3, 6.3.2, and 6.5 of the Plan.

    N2-14 See Responses N2-2 and N2-6.

    N2-15 The SAMP is currently being developed and a draft of the plan is not available to review at this time. Section 6.1.2 of the Draft MSHCP acknowledges that the SAMP process is underway and states that as SAMP data become available, MSHCP procedures with respect to riparian/riverine areas "may be reviewed and requirements reduced in light of the data assembled through the SAMP process."

    N2-16 Determinations made by the RCA are subject to the RCA's rules and regulations and are binding on the Permittees. The RCA is the primary organization that will serve as the oversight and administrative authority for the MSHCP, as well as provide primary policy direction for implementing the MSHCP and a mechanism for public participation in the decision-making process. The RCA will also offer staff assistance to help Permittees with Plan compliance. (See Draft MSHCP, § 6.2(C) for a complete list of the Duties and Responsibilities of the RCA.) To ensure ease of administration in accomplishing these goals, the RCA will adopt rules and regulations regarding its own operation. The RCA will not adopt any rules and regulations supplanting local land use decision-making, and will not have the authority to prevent a Permittee from approving a discretionary project. As such, the RCA will not impede local land use authority. (See Draft MSHCP, § 6.6.2(A) and (C).)

    Ultimately, if a determination is made that a proposed project fails to meet the Implementation Mechanisms adopted by a Permittee, compromises the viability of the MSHCP Conservation Area, or otherwise fails to comply with the MSHCP, the Wildlife Agencies will then have the right to revoke or suspend all or a portion of the Permits, as set forth in Section 23.5 of the IA. (Draft MSHCP, p. 6-80.) Before a party would get to this point, however, Section 6.6 of the MSHCP contains a multi-step process to resolve conflicts. This process is more fully described in Response R-9.

    N2-17 The provisions of the MSHCP do not result in a circumstance where a development project might be approved within a Cell, but service roads and utilities might be prohibited. The Cell Criteria referenced in the comment will be applied to development application within the Criteria Area. The definition of Development in the MSHCP is "the uses to which land shall be put, including construction of buildings, structures, infrastructure and all alterations of land." Within the Criteria Area, infrastructure that is proposed within the context of a development application will be considered part of that application and will be evaluated along with the Development against the Criteria. As noted in Section 7 of the Draft MSHCP, Development including infrastructure, within the Criteria Area that is determined to be consistent with the Criteria is considered to be a Covered Activity.

    N2-18 See Responses O2-1, O2-2, O2-3, O2-5 and O2-6.

    N2-19 The MSHCP is a comprehensive plan for the Conservation of species and is more than a "skeletal framework." Given the scope and complexity of this Plan, the initial implementation phase will be complex and processes and procedures will need to be refined. The organizational structure for the MSHCP is located in Section 6.6 of the Plan. To facilitate this process the RCA will have oversight over Plan implementation and will be responsible for resolving any conflicts between various management activities. The RMOC will also help to ensure a coordinated and efficient conservation and MSHCP Conservation Area management strategy through overseeing and implementing Reserve Management Plans and the Adaptive Management Program, monitoring budgets and reporting, and taking on the other oversight functions set forth in Section 6.6.4 of the Draft MSHCP. The RCA will also hold regularly scheduled public meetings in compliance with the Ralph M. Brown Act Open Meeting requirements to encourage public participation and review of the MSHCP. (Draft MSHCP, p. 6-77.) Thus, wildlife management will be coordinated in a comprehensive fashion. (Draft MSHCP, p. 6-84.) It is standard practice to develop detailed implementation and guidelines after formation of a joint powers authority such as RCA, not before. See also Response K-4.

    N2-20 See Responses O2-10, O2-12, and O2-14.

    N2-21 See Responses O2-1 through O2-8.


    Comment Letter N3 - Jackson, DeMarco and Peckenpaugh, in behalf of David H. Murdock, 28 January 2003

    N3-1 As discussed in Response H2-252 and the following Responses (N3-2 through N3-5), the accuracy of vegetation mapping conducted in January 2003 for Murdock's Outlet Mall Expansion Property is questionable. However, a comparison of the January 2003 vegetation mapping with the MSHCP vegetation data base actually confirms the accuracy of the MSHCP vegetation data base, as noted in Response N3-2, and its purpose in providing a landscape-level guidance in assembly of the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    N3-2 A review of the vegetation within the Castle & Cooke Properties Vicinity map attached to the letter raises significant concerns regarding the accuracy of the vegetation mapping apparently conducted on January 5 and 8, 2003 as the field conditions displayed on the aerial photograph base differ in substantial ways from the vegetation polygons shown on the map. Since the survey methodology is not described in the letter, it cannot be ascertained if field conditions during the January 5 and 8, 2003 surveys were different than those shown on the 2002 aerial photograph base, if the mapping was conducted on a topographic base and then transferred to the aerial photograph, or exactly what took place. In any case, if an aerial photograph is used as the base for a vegetation map, it is standard practice to have the aerial photograph and the vegetation polygons generally match. If a current aerial photograph is not available, it would be more appropriate to map the vegetation on a topographic or other base map. As it is, displaying what purport to be the 2003 vegetation polygons on the 2002 aerial photographic base, when they clearly do not match, calls into question the accuracy of the data provided in the letter.

    Some obvious discrepancies in the aerial photograph and the vegetation polygons are noted below:

    • A large area in the southwest portion of the Outlet Mall Expansion property is shown as DH (Disturbed Habitat/Developed) yet the aerial photograph base map clearly indicates that this large DH area is clearly not uniform in character. For example, along the southern boundary of the property, there is an obvious change in the habitat character north and south of the east/west demarcation generally west of the mapped Eucalyptus woodland area. The area to the south appears to be Riversidean sage scrub (note its appearance similar to other areas mapped as Riversidean sage scrub on the map), while the area to the north is clearly different in character.
    • The remainder of the large DH polygon north of the east/west demarcation does not look uniform and appears as though it should be broken out into several differing polygons ranging from DH, to disturbed Riversidean sage scrub, to Riversidean sage scrub.
    • The southern boundary of the large Riversidean sage scrub polygon occupying the northeastern portion of the property appears to be registered incorrectly. It appears that this boundary should follow the roadway/trail clearly visible on the aerial photograph. The indentations shown along the southern boundary of this polygon to do not appear to follow any observable vegetation boundary.
    • The distinction between the Riversidean sage scrub polygon in the northwest corner of the property and the adjacent northern portion of the DH polygon to the east is not readily apparent when examining the base aerial photograph. These areas look generally uniform and it is not clear why they would be characterized as two different vegetation types.

      Given these discrepancies, the accuracy of the quantitative vegetation comparison presented in the table on page 3 of the January 28 letter is questionable. The MSHCP vegetation data base for this property was queried based on a property boundary provided earlier to the County by Murdock representatives. It should be noted that this property boundary appears to differ somewhat from the property boundary depicted in the January 28 letter although a general comparison is possible. Based on review of the MSHCP vegetation data base for the property, the following general comments can be made on the quantitative vegetation comparison presented in the table on page 3 of the January 28 letter.
    • From the broad, landscape perspective, both vegetation maps show a large area of Riversidean sage scrub across the northeastern portion of the Outlet Mall Expansion property. This is generally the area identified as desirable for Conservation in the MSHCP Criteria and, from this landscape perspective, the property-specific map provided with the January 28 letter confirms that this is the portion of the property with the most habitat value.
    • The MSHCP vegetation data bases shows an intact patch of Riversidean sage scrub in the southwest portion of the property. Based on the aerial photograph, and the property-specific vegetation map, it appears that this area has been disturbed since the MSHCP vegetation map was prepared. The MSHCP would accommodate such changed conditions in conjunction with review of individual projects and, as noted above, this would not be an issue for this particular property as the landscape-level criteria provided in the MSHCP focus on the larger swath of Riversidean sage scrub across the northeastern portion of the property, and not on the isolated patch of scrub noted on the MSHCP vegetation map.
    • The MSHCP vegetation map characterizes much of the area shown as DH on the property-specific vegetation map included with the January 28 letter as non-native grassland. This is likely consistent with the Holland vegetation classifications (which are the standard for western Riverside County) used for the MSHCP vegetation mapping. As noted above, it is not known what classification system was used for the property-specific vegetation mapping included in the January 28 letter as the survey methodology is not described. Under the Holland classifications, areas with 50% or more grass cover are generally mapped as non-native grassland. In the field, these areas may appear as non-native weed cover with Brassica or Erodium as noted in the January 28 letter, but often have 50% or more native plant cover beneath the weedy "overstory." Under the Holland classifications, it is also typical that areas mapped as DH would be characterized as having 20% or more area as bare ground. This does not appear to be the case in the large polygon mapped as DH, at least from the underlying aerial photograph. See page 2-1 of the Draft MSHCP, Volume I for a description of the methodology used to develop the MSHCP vegetation map, and pages 2-23 and 2-28, respectively, of the MSHCP Volume I for the characterization of non-native grassland and DH under the Holland classifications. As noted on those pages, non-native grasslands are likely be dominated by several species of grasses that have evolved to persist in concert with human agricultural practices while developed/disturbed lands (DH) consist of areas that have been disced, cleared or otherwise altered. Based on the aerial photograph base map included in the January 28 letter, this does not appear to be the case throughout the large polygon mapped as DH.
    • The area mapped as Eucalyptus woodland in the January 28 letter appears to be consistent with the areas mapped as residential/urban/exotic on the MSHCP vegetation map.
    • The January 28 letter notes that two non-jurisdictional swales are not depicted on the MSHCP vegetation map. The MSHCP acknowledges that the MSHCP data base does not reflect wetland mapping that would result from property-specific mapping and incorporates wetland policies to address this issue.

    N3-3 The Outlet Mall Expansion data provided in the letter, while with its own deficiencies as noted in Response N3-2, actually confirms the MSHCP data base for the purpose for which it was intended: to provide landscape-level guidance in design and assembly of the MSHCP Conservation Area. As noted in Response N3-2, both the MSHCP vegetation map and criteria, and the property-specific map provided with the January 28 letter, appear to concur that the portion of the Outlet Mall Expansion property with the highest conservation value is the block of Riversidean sage scrub extending across the northeastern portion of the property.

    N3-4 The Draft EIR/EIS does not contain any new information or significant inaccuracies that require recirculation of the document. Nor are the Lead Agencies aware of any facts that require significant revisions to the Draft EIR/EIS that would trigger recirculation. As explained in detail in the proceeding responses and in the responses to commentor's January 15, 2003 letter, specifically identified as Comment Letter H2, the Draft EIR/EIS is adequate and fully complies with both CEQA and NEPA.

    N3-5 The MSHCP incorporates many features to provide additional data during long-term Reserve Assembly and MSHCP implementation. First, one of the first tasks called for in the MSHCP Monitoring Plan is an update to the vegetation map using a rapid assessment methodology described in Section 5.0 of the MSHCP. Second, the Criteria-based approach to Reserve Assembly as described in the MSHCP is clearly directed at responding to project-specific information as it is brought forward during the individual project review process. Third, the MSHCP Monitoring and Management Plan and the annual reporting process call for incorporation of new data into the MSHCP throughout the life of the Permit.

    As discussed in Responses N3-2 and N3-3, comparison of the January 2003 vegetation mapping of Murdock's Outlet Mall Expansion Property with the MSHCP vegetation data base confirms the accurate application of the landscape-level guidance of the MSHCP database.

    See Response N3-4. The use of scientific data in the MSHCP and the Draft EIR/EIS is based upon the best available information and fully complies with both CEQA and NEPA. See Responses H2-93 through H2-122 and N3-1 through N3-3.

    The Lead Agencies believe that the Draft EIR/EIS is sufficient. The Lead Agencies note that in addition to the substantial public and stakeholder participation that has occurred during the preparation of the MSHCP, the IA, the associated joint Draft EIR/EIS, and related documents, the public will continue to have meaningful input and review in the post-MSHCP adoption planning process. For example, the RCA will hold regularly scheduled public meetings in compliance with the Ralph M. Brown Act Open Meeting requirements to encourage public participation and review of the MSHCP. (Draft MSHCP, p. 6-77.)

    N3-6 See Response N3-2.


    Comment Letter N4 - Wilson Creek Conservation Bank, March 12, 2003

    N4-1 The Final MSHCP will be updated to reflect the correct name for the Wilson Creek Conservation Bank.

    N4-2 The commentor is correct in stating that language contained in prior administrative draft documents related to the MSHCP has been changed. Reviewers of administrative draft documents were fully informed that changes could occur without notice prior to the release of the public-review Draft MSHCP. See Response O2-6. The Lead Agencies did not make any assurances that the banks would be acquired through the MSHCP. Recognizing the long-term conservation value of the conservation banks/mitigation areas, it is anticipated that these lands, if proposed for acquisition, would be among the priority acquisitions of the RCA.

    N4-3 The USFWS recognizes that the Wilson Creek Mitigation Bank and other conservation banks and mitigation areas have long-term conservation value. The importance of these areas is reflected by their inclusion in the Criteria Area. Contrary to the commentor's recollection of commitments from the Carlsbad office, the USFWS maintains that prospective mitigation bankers were informed that there was no guarantee that they would be bought out by the Plan. See also Responses N4-2, O2-6, and M4-4. The proposal referenced in this comment was discussed by a subcommittee to the Advisory Committee, but never emerged as a policy recommendation from the Advisory Committee.

    The Board of Supervisors did take an action on April 9, 2002 to execute a Section 10 (a) permit application which signaled their intent to prepare a Draft MSHCP. That action did not consider or endorse any administrative draft documents nor did it commit the Board to any future terms and conditions of the Final MSHCP or Final IA. The County can find no record of the Board of Supervisors adopting a policy that established a priority for acquiring and purchasing existing conservation banks. Furthermore, the County can find no record of such a policy recommendation emerging from the Advisory Committee.

    N4-4 See Responses N4-2 and O2-6.

    Comment Letter O

    Comment Letter O - Southern California Edison, 14 January 2003

    O-1 The Lead Agencies appreciate the level of participation that SCE has had in the development of the MSHCP. Responses to the specific points summarized in this comment are provided in detail in the following responses.

    O-2 As set forth in Section 11.8 of the IA and pages 6-53 to 6-54 of the Draft MSHCP, SCE is eligible to become a Participating Special Entity, should SCE so desire, in order to obtain Take Authorization for activities outside (and inside) the Criteria Area. Section 11.8 of the IA states:

    "Any public facility provider, such as a utility company...that operates facilities and/or owns land within the Plan Area ('Participating Special Entity') may requestTake Authorization for its activities pursuant to the Permits. As set forth below, such activities must comply with all of the terms and requirements of the Permits, the MSHCP and this Agreement."

    Activities carried out by Participating Special Entities outside of the Criteria Area are permitted under the Plan, so long as mitigation fees are paid and the requirements set forth in MSHCP Sections 6.1.2, 6.1.3, 6.1.4 and 6.3.2 are satisfied. (See Draft MSHCP, p. 7-1; see also IA, § 11.8.) These consistency determinations are related to Protection of Riparian/Riverine and Vernal Pool Areas, Protection of Narrow Endemic Plant Species, Guidelines Pertaining to the Urban/Wildlands Interface, and the need for additional surveys in certain situations. These requirements are explained in more detail in Responses M-27, M-34, O-6 and Section 6.3.2 of the Draft MSHCP.

    If SCE becomes a Participating Special Entity, repairs to SCE utility lines and other facilities located in publicly-maintained roadways, or rights-of-way associated with such roadways, are Covered Activities under the MSHCP. (See Draft MSHCP, § 7.1) Private roadways within Public/Quasi Public (PQP) Lands or the Criteria Area maintained by SCE or others are afforded only limited Take Authorization, provided the requirements set forth on pages 7-5 to 7-6 and 7-21 of the Draft MSHCP are met.

    If SCE becomes a Participating Special Entity, emergency repairs conducted by SCE are Covered Activities, provided the requirements of Section 7.1 of the Draft MSHCP are met. Emergency repairs of public utility infrastructure within the MSHCP Conservation Area is considered to be compatible with the overall conservation goals and objectives of the Plan and are covered, provided that requirements set forth in Draft MSHCP Section 7.4.1 are satisfied.

    With respect to other SCE activities, the MSHCP can only provide Take Authorization if SCE becomes a Participating Special Entity and otherwise meets the requirements of the Plan. SCE's suggestion that it should receive Take Authorization for all of its potential impacts, regardless of any potential effects on species and without avoidance, minimization and mitigation to the maximum extent practicable, is contrary to the terms of FESA and the NCCP Act. Currently, SCE is required to obtain Take Authorization for any activities in the Plan Area that Take listed species. This circumstance will not change if the MSHCP is approved and implemented. SCE can become a Participating Special Entity and receive Take Authorization by complying with the MSHCP, if it so decides, or it can choose to proceed another way. Section 11.8 of the IA sets forth the requirements to become a Participating Special Entity. This Section does not differentiate between activities inside or outside the Criteria Area for regional utility projects.

    O-3 Preparation and implementation of revegetation plans deemed necessary in conjunction with the emergency repairs described in Section 7.4.1 of the Draft MSHCP are the responsibility of the Permittees, and any Participating Special Entities. RCA staff would provide oversight of such efforts. Guidelines for revegetation efforts are presented in Table 5-1 of the Draft MSHCP.

    O-4 SCE is not a Permittee under the MSHCP. Should they wish to have their facilities covered under the MSHCP, SCE can apply to be a Participating Special Entity. Mitigation provided by SCE as a Participating Special Entity would need to be consistent with Section 11.8 of the IA and Section 6.6 of the Draft MSHCP.

    It is incorrect to say that SCE's current activities and proposed activities and projects are not addressed in the MSHCP. Sections 7.2.1 and 7.4.1 respectively of the Draft MSHCP address existing uses on PQP Lands and potential future facilities within the Plan Area. These uses may include existing and proposed SCE activities should SCE choose to become a Participating Special Entity.

    With respect to the July 2000 and June 2001 SCE projects information provided to the County, this information remains on file and is part of the MSHCP database. Similar project information was provided at the request of the County during this time frame by other Public/Quasi-Public entities and is also included in the MSHCP database. This combined information is not explicitly incorporated in the MSHCP for any of these entities due to the approach determined to be appropriate for addressing Covered Activities in the MSHCP. Only Permittee projects are Covered Activities in the MSHCP.

    O-5 The Lead Agencies acknowledge that SCE has certain legal obligations with respect to maintaining its transmission lines and other facilities. No features of the MSHCP would preclude SCE's ability to carry out its legal obligations. However, these activities can qualify for Take Authorization under the MSHCP only if they become a Participating Special Entity. (See also Response O-2.) Otherwise, SCE can pursue its own separate HCP or other vehicle to allow Take Authorization.

    O-6 The Lead Agencies disagree they are "imposing" a development impact mitigation fee upon Participating Special Entities. To the contrary, the MSHCP and the IA allow, but do not require such entities to obtain Take Authorization under the MSHCP. Should SCE believe that becoming a Participating Special Entity and/or payment of the mitigation fees set forth in Section 11.8 of the IA is not worthwhile, SCE has the option to obtain a Section 10 Permit or other Take Authorization directly from the Wildlife Agencies rather than proceeding under the MSHCP. Section 11.8.3 of the IA allows flexibility for mitigation required from Participating Special Entities. Therefore, guidelines and criteria were not established in order to allow maximum flexibility on a case by case basis. This maximum flexibility was provided to address the types of situations raised in the comment that may have minimal impacts.

    This comment's reference to the case of Dolan v. City of Tigard (1994) 512 U.S. 374, 391 is misplaced. In the context of a Participating Special Entity, the MSHCP is a vehicle of compliance with FESA and the NCCP Act and is not an exaction regarding a particular piece of property. See Response H2-242.

    The Lead Agencies also acknowledge that SCE engages in numerous activities in conjunction with its construction and maintenance program to minimize impacts to species and habitat. Should SCE elect to become a Participating Special Entity, these species sensitive activities will certainly assist SCE in satisfying MSHCP requirements.

    O-7 The Lead Agencies believe that some infrastructure projects could in fact have growth-inducing impacts. Regional infrastructure projects may directly affect the environment not only through the effect they have on species and their habitats, but also by facilitating continued new Development. (Draft MSHCP, p. 8-15.) State CEQA Guidelines section 15126, subdivision (d), requires an EIR to discuss the "Growth-Inducing Impact of the Proposed Project," which includes impacts from activities that facilitate new Development. State CEQA Guidelines section 15126.2, subdivision (d), elaborates:

    "...Discuss the ways in which the proposed project could foster economic or population growth, or the construction of additional housing, either directly or indirectly, in the surrounding environment... Increases in population may tax existing community service facilities, requiring construction of new facilities that could cause significant environmental effects. Also discuss the characteristic of some projects which may encourage and facilitate other activities that could significantly affect the environment, either individually or cumulatively. It must not be assumed that growth in any area is necessarily beneficial, detrimental, or of little significance to the environment."

    Moreover, an EIR must discuss growth-inducing impacts even if those impacts are not themselves a part of the project under consideration, and even though the extent of the growth is difficult to calculate. Napa Citizens for Honest Government v. Napa County Bd. of Supervisors, 91 Cal. App. 4th 342 (2001). The court in City of Antioch v. City Council, 187 Cal. App. 3d 1325 (1986), found that a project required an EIR notwithstanding the fact that the project itself involved only the construction of a road and sewer project which did not in and of themselves have a significant effect on the environment. The court recognized that the reason for the construction was to provide a catalyst for further Development in the immediate area. It held that because construction of the project could not easily be undone, and because achievement of its purpose would almost certainly have significant environmental impacts, the project should not go forward until such impacts were evaluated in the manner required by CEQA. Id. at 1337-38. Residential Development is inevitably accompanied by numerous necessities and amenities, including development of utilities and infrastructure, which combine to preclude open space uses regardless of density. Moreover, the injurious effect of such Development in rural areas upon protected open space lands is far greater than urban Development, because the low density of the former is more inefficient, consuming relatively more acreage of open space land than its high density counterpart. Additionally, infrastructure Development also encourages infill Development. See Response L-6. Thus, the Lead Agencies have determined that the requirements set forth in Section 11.8 of the IA are appropriate.

    O-8 The Lead Agencies acknowledge that the Draft MSHCP is lengthy and complex. Every effort has been made to present information in the clearest, most readable fashion possible. The Lead Agencies disagree that the suggested format would provide a better organizational framework for the document. See Response H2-30.

    O-9 Since no specific references are provided in this comment, it is not possible to provide a detailed, point-by-point response to this comment. It is also not clear whether the commentor is referring to references to other sections in the text of the MSHCP or to outside sources. The Lead Agencies believe that the Draft MSHCP includes appropriate references and disagree that references should not be provided, as such references reduce the amount of text required to convey specific information.

    O-10 As set forth in Response O-6, Participating Special Entities can, but are not required to, pay a percentage of the total capital costs of a project as mitigation in order to receive Take Authorization under the MSHCP. Contrary to the comment, there is not a category of "non- Participating Special Entities." Instead, there is a category for Third Parties Granted Take Authorization by the Permittees who will be required to pay habitat mitigation fees and meet the other requirements of the MSHCP as a condition of development approval by a Local Permittee. These requirements are set forth in Section 6.0 et seq. of the MSHCP.

    O-11 Section 7.3.1 of the IA and page 6-3 of the Draft MSHCP are not inconsistent. The IA states that the HANS Process applies only to the Local Permittees. That is, the County and the Cities will implement HANS and acquire property through this mechanism for purposes of assembling the Additional Reserve Lands. State and federal agencies will not utilize the HANS Process for this purpose. Page 6-3 of the Draft MSHCP simply states that various entities, including the RCA, the Permittees, and various state and federal agencies are expected to obtain property interests as part of the overall Plan.

    O-12 The MSHCP is clear that payment of fees and compliance with the other Plan requirements is intended to offset the direct, indirect, and cumulative impacts to Covered Species, and that No Surprises Assurances will be provided for such impacts. (See Draft MSHCP, § 6.8; Draft IA, p. 3.) In exchange for such payment and compliance, a Participating Special Entity or a Third Party Granted Take Authorization will be able to take advantage of No Surprises Assurances. (See Draft MSHCP, § 6.8.) Section 11.7 of the Draft IA simply reiterates that these assurances apply to indirect and cumulative impacts as well.

    O-13 As set forth in Response O-2, the MSHCP can only provide Take Authorization for SCE's operation, maintenance and other activities if SCE becomes a Participating Special Entity and otherwise meets the requirements of the Plan. SCE's suggestion that it should receive Take Authorization for all of its potential impacts, regardless of any potential effects on species and without payment of habitat mitigation or other fees, is contrary to the terms of FESA and the NCCP Act. Under the status quo, SCE is required to obtain Take Authorization for any activities in the Plan Area that Take listed species. This circumstance will not change if the MSHCP is approved and implemented. See Responses O-2, O-5 and O-6 for responses to SCE's other comments.

    Power line rights of way are not proposed to be included in the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    The Gas Company is not a Permittee under the Plan and thus must meet the requirements of Participating Special Entities should it desire to obtain Take Authorization. The comment does not refer to any section of the MSHCP or the IA to the contrary, thus no further response is possible or required.

    Section 7.2.2 of the Draft MSHCP and Section 11.10 of the IA refer to an Out of County CETAP Corridor. Of course, the Lead Agencies understand that Take Authorization for any such corridor actually constructed would apply to that portion of the corridor located within the MSHCP Plan Area (i.e., western Riverside County). The MSHCP does not apply to activities outside the MSHCP Plan Area.

    O-14 See Responses O-2, O-3, O-5, O-6, and O-7. SCE would receive Take Authorization under the Plan only if it becomes a Participating Special Entity. In addition, it is not necessary to develop an alternative process to the Cell Criteria for linear projects. The Cell Criteria incorporated in Section 3.2 of the Plan incorporate a variety of planning units in addition to the individual Cells including broad Cores and Linkages, Area Plans and Area Plan Subunits. Planning Species and Biological Issues and Considerations are identified for these broad planning units and this guidance can be used to evaluate linear projects.

    O-15 See Response O-7.


    Comment Letter O2 - Gresham, Savage, Nolan and Tilden on behalf of Wilson Creek Development and Joe Gonzales, January 15, 2003

    O2-1 This comment provides information regarding the commentor's property. The County has never been a party to a WCMB transaction. Contrary to the commentor's assertion concerning "typical operating procedures," the County routinely conditions land use development projects to mitigate impacts to listed species by obtaining Take Authorization from the Wildlife Agencies prior to obtaining a grading permit. Thereafter, any subsequent transaction between a project applicant with mitigation/Take Authorization needs and the mitigation area/bank owner is a private business transaction. This should not be construed as the County's implicit endorsement of such transactions.

    O2-2 The MSHCP acknowledges the existing conservation banks/mitigation areas and assumes that they will continue to operate. Prior to completion of the Draft MSHCP, the County had not "recognized" any conservation bank or mitigation area. Therefore, the MSHCP and the EIR/EIS do not fail to identify the Wilson Creek Mitigation Bank or other conservation banks. It is the Lead Agencies understanding that the collective "mitigation banks" or "Private Habitat Plans" are informal conservation banks or mitigation areas and that they have no formal legal status in applicable environmental law. Neither the Draft MSHCP nor the Draft EIR/EIS are required to identify, analyze, or evaluate the potential impacts to such informal or even formal conservation banks or mitigation areas because no environmental impacts to the banks or mitigation areas will result from MSHCP implementation. See also Responses L-1 and N2-18.

    O2-3 The Draft EIR/EIS did not find any potential impacts to the Wilson Creek Mitigation Banks or any other similarly situated "private habitat plan" and thus, no further environmental review was required under CEQA or NEPA. See Responses L-1, N2-18 and O2-2.

    O2-4 See Responses O2-2 and O2-3.

    O2-5 See Responses O2-3 and O2-4. Section 4.6.1 of the Draft MSHCP identifies the status and location of conservation banks and mitigation areas within the Plan Area as of July 2002. With respect to the WCMB, Section 4.6.1 notes the following: "Wilson Creek/Joe A.

    Gonzalez Conservation Bank - 800 acres, 400 credits remaining for sale." Section 4.6.1 states that all of the conservation banks and mitigation areas noted in this section "have draft mitigation banking agreements and draft or approved management plans."

    With respect to the relationship of the MSHCP to the conservation banks and mitigation areas, Section 4.6.1 notes the following: "The MSHCP considers the remaining credits within these conservation banks and mitigation areas to be included in the estimates of privately owned Habitat that will be conserved. The MSHCP anticipates Conservation of these conservation banks and mitigation areas, whether through the sale of credits or through other mechanisms as may be negotiated between the Parties and the owners of the banks."

    O2-6 The MSHCP is not in conflict with the decision-making process and/or the ability to issue environmental credits. See Response O2-5. The banks were created as a business. They can continue to operate a business. Whether their marketability will increase or decrease under the MSHCP will be determined by market conditions. Entities such as school districts, water districts or utilities, which are not Permittees, could continue to purchase credits. Additionally, a bank could as a willing seller go through the HANS Process. Recognizing the long-term conservation value of the conservation banks/mitigation areas, it is anticipated that these lands, if proposed for acquisition, would be among the priority acquisitions of the RCA. Moreover, language has been added to Section 4.6.1 of the Final MSHCP that allows development projects to elect to acquire acreage from certain conservation banks in lieu of payment of the LDMF.

    O2-7 The MSHCP identifies potential lands to be conserved within an approximately 310,000acre Criteria Area. Generally, the MSHCP would be applicable when a discretionary, and in certain instances a ministerial, development approval is voluntarily sought within the Plan Area. The MSHCP does not interfere with legally allowable uses that exist today. The MSHCP is not a land use component of the General Plan.

    O2-8 See Responses O2-2, O2-3 and O2-4.

    O2-9 See Response O2-7. The MSHCP does not apply to projects outside the Plan Area.

    O2-10 The County was required to identify a mechanism for MSHCP implementation. The County chose its General Plan to fulfill this requirement. Proposed revisions to the Draft General Plan clarify that the provisions of the MSHCP apply only if the MSHCP is adopted. See Response O2-7.

    O2-11 See Response O2-7. It is unclear to the Lead Agencies what "already established rules, regulations and case law applicable to compliance with the controlling endangered species acts" the commentor is referring to. Thus, no response can be provided.

    O2-12 See Response O2-7. The MSHCP is consistent with the Planning Agreement guidance in that it "Establishes and emphasizes the use of incentives to encourage property owners to voluntarily conserve habitat and species within the plan area as an alternative to regulatory mandates" and that "consistent with the provisions of FESA and CESA, the MSHCP will rely to the maximum extent practicable on the use of voluntary incentive based programs in order to encourage private property owners to conserve habitats and species on their lands."

    O2-13 See Responses O2-7 and O2-10.

    O2-14 See Responses O2-3, O2-4, O2-10 and O2-11. Upon signing of the IA, the Permittees are legally bound to implement the terms and conditions of the MSHCP. The MSHCP and the Draft EIR/EIS are consistent in how they analyze implementation of the Plan, and how they treat implementation. Thus, no amendments to the documents are required for such purpose.

    O2-15 See Responses O2-2 through O2-8 and L-1. The Draft EIR/EIS is Volume IV of a four volume set that includes the entire MSHCP.

    O2-16 See Responses O2-2 and O2-3.

    O2-17 See Responses O2-2 and O2-3.

    O2-18 See Responses O2-2 through O2-8.

    O2-19 See Responses O2-2 through O2-8.

    O2-20 See Responses O2-2 through O2-8.

    O2-21 See Response O2-12.

    O2-22 The Draft EIR/EIS states on p. 1.2-3 that the Draft MSHCP will "to the maximum extent possible, streamline development authorizations under the federal and State Endangered Species Acts." The Draft EIR/EIS population and housing (Section 4.3) and growth inducement (Section 6.1.3) analyses conclude that the MSHCP would remove existing impediments to growth and lessen the existing constraint to development by streamlining the permitting process. Section 6 of the Draft MSHCP sets forth the decision-making process that will be used to assemble and manage MSHCP Conservation Area lands together with and separate from the land use entitlement process. This decision-making process is procedural and not related to physical changes to the environment requiring analysis in the EIR/EIS.

    O2-23 It is incorrect that the baseline for the documents is "current entitlement process timing." Section 6.0 of the Draft MSHCP does set forth in adequate detail how the Plan will be implemented, including the decision making process, and how conflicts will be resolved. For further on the EIR/EIS' baseline, see Response F-110.

    O2-24 See Response O2-23.


    Comment Letter O3 - Okazaki Law Offices, February 5, 2003

    O3-1 The comment does not provide specific references to the MSHCP, IA or EIR/EIS. See Response O3-2.

    O3-2 The Lead Agencies appreciate the commentor's support of the MSHCP. The County would be pleased to meet with the District to discuss this issue. At first review, the Lead Agencies would note that properties acquired for Conservation could actually reduce the number of developed properties while potentially reducing revenues if based on each property whether developed or not.

    O3-3 As noted above, the Lead Agencies would be happy to meet with District representatives. A letter from the District to the Riverside County Board of Supervisors requesting a County representative to the referenced committee would facilitate the requested action.


    Comment Letter O4 - Vandermost Consulting Services, March 14, 2003

    O4-1 See Responses M2-1 and M2-2. The Lead Agencies would be happy to meet with the commentor to discuss these issues further.

    Comment Letter P

    Comment Letter P - Gail Wanczuk Barton, 14 January 2003

    P-1 This comment generally acknowledges the commentor's understanding of the MSHCP and points out positive features of the Plan. As no issues are raised in this comment, no further response is provided.

    P-2 Section 7.2.1 of the Draft MSHCP states that Maintenance Activities on "Roadways Maintained by Others" located in Public/Quasi-Public Lands are afforded limited Take Authorization, subject to the submittal of an application for a Certificate of Inclusion. (Draft MSHCP, p. 7-5.) That is, those maintaining private roads are eligible to have their maintenance activities considered Covered Activities and receive Take Authorization under the Plan in order to conduct a limited class of activities, including restoring a smooth driving surface, maintaining graded shoulders within existing rights of way and limited weed abatement. (Ibid.) However, those maintaining private roads in Public/Quasi-Public Lands are not required by the MSHCP to obtain Certificates of Inclusion. Such certificates are only required if Take Authorization is sought. (Draft MSHCP, § p. 7-5.)

    The comment is accurate insofar as it states that existing roads within the Criteria Area are not anticipated to be included in the total acreage of Additional Reserve Lands. (Draft MSHCP, p. 3-16.) It is acknowledged that there are uses within Public/Quasi-Public acreage, including existing roads and other developed and disturbed lands, that are not compatible with species conservation. However, it is important to note that Public/Quasi-Public Lands (shown on Figure 2.3 on page 2.3-5 of the Draft EIR/EIS) are included in the MSHCP Conservation Area in order to create a coordinated approach to management that will provide the best coverage for species and best utilization of available resources; these lands are not being used to mitigate for future Development. See Responses N-2, N-3, N-5, N-7 and N-13. Accordingly, the Lead Agencies do not believe that these uses will materially affect the conservation goals of the Plan.

    The Lead Agencies do not believe that a specific process for quantifying easements/roads through existing and future reserve lands is necessary at this time since these uses are within Public/Quasi-Public Lands and are not considered in the number of acres identified for mitigation. If necessary, the MSHCP anticipates that the quantification of easements/roads can be accomplished through MSHCP implementation. Within five years of Permit issuance, the RCA will verify the precise acreage, amount, and location of the Public/Quasi-Public Lands in the Conservation Area. (Draft MSHCP, § 3-16.)

    P-3 Single-family homes on existing legal parcels in the Criteria Area are considered Covered Activities and are afforded substantial protections under the MSHCP, including fair and equitable treatment. (See Draft MSHCP, § 7.3.2; see also Response C-71.)

    The Lead Agencies agree that it would be preferable for all Cities to adopt the HANS Process. The MSHCP does not usurp local authority and the Lead Agencies acknowledge that it would be impossible to prevent Cities from taking a future action. However, it is doubtful that once a City selects an implementation method that it would change midway through the MSHCP term. See Responses A-12 and K-5.

    P-4 Funding shortfalls at the state and federal level could impact Reserve Assembly; however, would not alter the Take Authorization of Local Permittees.

    P-5 The Adaptive Management funding is subject to adjustment because of changing cost, but no additional funding is required to expand the amount available for Adaptive Management.

    P-6 The costs of the Adaptive Management component of the total local program costs are set forth in Section 8.2.1 of the Draft MSHCP. The Five Points Policy and other provisions of FESA, and its implementing regulations, now place added emphasis on adaptive management as a way to ensure the long term Conservation of Covered Species. As a result, the Lead Agencies do not believe it would be appropriate to put a defined cap on Adaptive Management. "Of course, implementation of the No Surprises Rule and Unforeseen Circumstances, as they relate to Adaptive Management, will control, to a certain extent, the amount of funding available for such management." (Draft MSHCP, Section 6.8.2.) Additionally, the IA limits the amount of funds required from Local Permittees.

    Additional Reserve Lands will be identified through the HANS Process. See Responses M-14 and M-17.

    P-7 The Lead Agencies appreciate the comment. Careful consideration will be given to the formation of the RCA. See Responses K-141, M-12, and R-10.

    P-8 See Response K-13.

    P-9 Language will be added to Figure 3-2 to provide the desired clarification.

    P-10 The MSHCP text will be revised to include the term "private land owners" on Page 4-1, paragraph 1, sentence 2.

    P-11 Paragraph 1 of 4.1 will be revised and the Final MSHCP text will incorporate a table summarizing the local, state, and federal contributions to the MSHCP.

    P-12 Language will be added to Table 5.2 to provide the correction.

    P-13 On pages 6-13 and 6-14, the following text will be added to the last sentence of (1) and (2): "...or the total value of the lands together, whichever is less."

    P-14 The Guidelines Pertaining to the Urban/Wildlands Interface are intended to be applied on a case-by-case basis, in order to provide flexibility in addressing the issues outlined in Section 6.1.4. Therefore, specific distances and/or criteria for avoidance of the use of invasive plant materials is not provided, as circumstances and needs will vary from one location to the next, and depending on specific circumstances of the relationship between developed lands and the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    P-15 The initial project review process referenced in the comment would take place under the HANS Process described in Section 6.1.1 of the Draft MSHCP, not under the Criteria Refinement Process discussed on the referenced page 6-70 of the Draft MSHCP. Local Permittees will determine the completeness of applications under the Criteria Refinement Process.

    P-16 The requested text modification will be provided in the Final MSHCP.

    P-17 The requested text modification will be provided in the Final MSHCP.

    P-18 Requested corrections will be included in the Final MSHCP.

    P-19 The requested revision to Figure 9-1 will be provided in the Final MSHCP.

    P-20 The requested revision to Figure 9-2 will be provided in the Final MSHCP.

    P-21 This comment summarizes other more detailed comments provided in this comment letter. See Responses P-2 and P-3.


    Comment Letter P2 - Hackman Capital Partners on behalf of Park West and East-West Properties, January 15, 2003

    P2-1 See previous comments on the extension in Response W-1.

    P2-2 Each Local Permittee will be required to sign the IA and be obligated to comply with the MSHCP. The MSHCP provides greater certainty in the development process than exists today by shifting responsibility to issue Take Authorization from the USFWS to the Local Permittees. The elected body of each Local Permittee is the entity responsible for implementing the MSHCP just as they are responsible for implementing existing local and state development law, rules, and regulations. Many of the Cities have agreed to implement the HANS Process. In those cases where a City has chosen not to implement HANS, an alternate mechanism will be selected by that municipality to ensure compliance with the MSHCP. The application and use of incentives through the HANS Process must occur on a case-by-case basis in that all properties are not similarly situated nor are all development projects the same. See Responses K-4 through K-6.

    P2-3 This comment makes numerous incorrect statements. The Cell Criteria are not "established as a means of governing land use", as the commentor states, the MSHCP does not regulate land use. As described in Section 3.3.1 of the MSHCP, the CRD was an analytical tool developed by the County's MSHCP consultant during the conservation planning process for the MSHCP. It does not create hard-line boundaries for Reserve Assembly. It represents one possible conceptual reserve that could emerge from application of the Criteria but is certainly not the only reserve design that could be consistent with the MSHCP Criteria and conservation objectives. The commentor states that the CRD is "arbitrary" because it relies on "outdated information". The MSHCP meets federal and state standards for the preparation of HCPs and NCCPs by using the best scientific and commercially available data. See Response H2-46. The MSHCP does not "admit (that) the methodology for designing the reserve was inadequate". Sections 3.1.5 through 3.1.10 of the Draft MSHCP provide extensive detail on the conservation planning process and document that the methods used represented the best scientific and commercially available data. See Responses H2-90 and K-8. Finally, it is inaccurate to state that the Cell Criteria are derived from the CRD. The Cell Criteria were derived from the overall MSHCP conservation planning process described in Section 3.1 of the MSHCP, and as stated in the MSHCP, the CRD was simply an analytical tool developed as part of the conservation planning process.

    P2-4 See Response P2-3. The Cell Criteria were based on biological considerations. The MSHCP is based on the most accurate and complete scientific data available. The development of the Cell Criteria was predicated on the use of this information, and was not the result of a formulation based solely on the Conceptual Reserve Design. See Response H2-11. The Conceptual Reserve Design is merely an analytical tool intended to describe one possible way in which the MSHCP Conservation Area could be configured. See Response K-8.

    Because of the scope of the MSHCP, it is too speculative at this time to identify with any certainty the specific boundaries of the MSHCP Conservation Area. See Responses H2-3, H2-11, H2-43, H2-85, and H2-86. The HANS and criteria review processes, and in some cases the Criteria Refinement Process, will be used as the means for acquisition of fee title, conservation easements and other interests in property. The HANS Process was carefully drafted to reflect stakeholder input as well as meet all legal requirements. See Response H2-30. To the extent feasible, other processes will run concurrently with regular development approval processes. Thus, the MSHCP requirements do not place burdensome restrictions on private property. See Responses H2-30, H2-132, H2-138, H2-140, H2-241 and M-17.

    The MSHCP does not preempt local land use authority. (Draft MSHCP, § 6.2.2; see also Response H2-40.) Further, the procedures established under the MSHCP are not a constitutional "Taking." See Response H2-41.

    P2-5 A complete description of the function of each Linkage is provided in Section 3.2.3 of the Draft MSHCP. The procedures established under the MSHCP are not a constitutional "Taking". (See Responses H2-41 and I2-64.)

    New Development will contribute Mitigation Lands in the amount of 103,000 acres. The funding plan attempts to spread this across the broadest base possible. For example, landfill tipping fees and the Measure A sales tax apply to all residents and non residents living, working, shopping, or recreating in the County. In addition, the state and federal contributions to the plan, while not mitigating for new Development, do leverage local funds to enhance the MSHCP Conservation Area and the resulting benefits to Riverside County residents and visitors.

    P2-6 See Response P2-5.

    P2-7 The state and federal contributions are in addition and allow for a more fully developed reserve system that covers a broader range of species and provides a more robust system than could be achieved by Local Permittees and are not intended to serve as mitigation for private Development. The Wildlife Agencies, like local government, cannot bind future state or federal legislators to financial obligation. The state and federal agencies are signatories to the IA and, like Local Permittees, have responsibilities. Neither Local Permittees nor the Wildlife Agencies can legally give the assurances that the commentor is suggesting. In order for Permit issuance, the Wildlife Agencies must find that there is adequate funding to implement the MSHCP. See Section 8.0 of the MSHCP.

    P2-8 The incentive programs are proposed, but it is acknowledged that these incentives will be refined on a case-by-case bases through negotiations with the property owner to provide the greatest benefit to the property owner while achieving the conservation goals. Additionally, new incentives can be proposed by the property owner or developed by the RCA in response to changing needs.

    P2-9 The MSHCP will add some costs to new Development; however, it will also shorten the time for many projects to be approved and permitted and alleviate the need for individual applicants to spend significant funds on obtaining appropriate permits from state and federal agencies. It is important to note that projects experience costs today to do biological studies, process permit applications through the USFWS and CDFG and to fund required mitigation. The MSHCP in combination with the other programs will further the development of Riverside County, and reduce time delays and permitting requirements. The end result may well be little or no "added costs" and significantly reduced time. Affordable housing will likewise benefit from the regulatory streamlining. See Section 8.0 of the MSHCP.

    P2-10 The nexus study is in draft form undergoing review by the appropriate agencies, jurisdictions and stakeholders. Public hearings will be held prior to adoption of the LDMF by the County and Cities based on the nexus study. See Responses P2-6 through P2-9.

    P2-11 Section 8.6.5 of the Draft MSHCP identifies potential actions Local Permittees could consider if revenues and costs do not meet expectations. The Local Permittees' obligations are defined in the IA. There is no dollar cap recognizing that both costs and revenues will change over time. The obligations are limited to those provided in the IA.

    P2-12 The MSHCP provides Third Parties Take Authorization with full satisfaction of their mitigation obligations under CEQA, NEPA, the NCCP Act, and FESA for Covered Species to the maximum extent allowed by law, provided the terms and conditions of the Plan are satisfied. See Response F-24. The Permittees and those Third Parties Granted Take Authorization will be given No Surprises Assurances to the maximum extent allowed by law to ensure there is no "double mitigation" burden. See Response F-25.

    P2-13 See Responses H2-199 and K-2.

    P2-14 As set forth in the MSHCP, the United States Army Corps of Engineers has regulatory responsibility under Sections 401, 402 and 404 of the Clean Water Act separate from FESA, CEQA, and other state and federal laws implemented through the Plan. (Draft MSHCP, p. 6-24.) This responsibility is not affected by the Plan. However, it should be noted that the County and RCTC, in partnership with the United States Army Corps of Engineers, intend to complete a Special Area Management Plan ("SAMP") for the Santa Margarita and San Jacinto Watersheds. (IA, § 27.7; Draft MSHCP, pp. 6-21 to 622.) Once implemented, the SAMP should allow for a greater degree of collaboration and cooperation between the Lead Agencies and the United States Army Corps of Engineers regarding protection measures for wetlands and other waters of the United States. The Wildlife Agencies do not have veto power. The Plan states that the 60-day review and response period will give the Wildlife Agencies an opportunity to determine if the proposed activities would preclude successful implementation of the MSHCP Conservation Area. (Draft MSHCP, § 6.1.1.)

    With respect to the Wildlife Agencies' review of proposals relevant to the "biologically equivalent or superior" process, the MSHCP states the 60-day review and response period "will give the Wildlife Agencies an opportunity to determine if the proposed activities would preclude successful implementation of the MSHCP Conservation Area." (Draft MSHCP, p. 6-112.) This provision should be read with the second paragraph of page 6-12 of the Draft MSHCP, which states that any approved development application that precludes compliance with MSHCP Conservation Criteria will result in suspension or revocation of the Permits terminating Third Party Take Authorization. This suspension or revocation can occur as appropriate and may cover all or a portion of the Plan Area, Covered Species, etc. See Response C-54. However, the Wildlife Agencies' ability to impose additional conservation requirements after the Permits are issued is also limited. As set forth in the IA:

    "As a result and to the maximum extent allowable, in any consultation under Section 7 of FESA subsequent to the Effective Date involving the Permittee(s) or entity with Third Party Take Authorization with regard to Covered Species Adequately Conserved and Covered Activities, the USFWS shall ensure that the FESA biological opinion issued in connection with the proposed project that is the subject of the consultation is consistent with the internal FESA biological opinion. Such project must be consistent with the terms and conditions of the MSHCP and this Agreement. Any reasonable and prudent measures included under the terms and conditions of a FESA biological opinion issued subsequent to the Effective Date with regard to the Covered Species Adequately Conserved and Covered Activities shall, to the maximum extent appropriate, be consistent with the implementation measures of the MSHCP and this Agreement. The USFWS shall not impose measures in excess of those that have been or will be required by the Permittee(s) or entity with Third Party Take Authorization pursuant to the MSHCP and this Agreement." (IA, § 14.9.)

    P2-15 See Responses A-28, K-13 and IA Section 14.10.

    P2-16 The MSHCP incorporates a broad array of incentives to encourage Conservation on privately owned lands. (See Draft MSHCP, § 6.1.1.) These incentives include, but are not limited to, the waiver and/or reduction of certain development fees, monetary compensation for entering into an option agreement, fast track processing, density bonuses, clustering, density transfers and property reassessment and tax credits, if determined to be feasible. See Responses H2-30, H2-132, H2-138, and H2-140.

    The MSHCP encourages purchase of properties at fair market value from willing sellers. See Response H2-41. In order to receive the Permits, the Permittees must provide adequate funding assurances. As part of the funding assurances, the Permittees will be asked to adopt the LDMF. See Response K-140. The LDMF will be used for acquisition of properties. See Response K-65.

    The RCA and the HANS Process have been designed to be straight-forward, unburdensome and timely processes that run parallel to existing development application processes. The MSHCP minimizes the regulatory burden by providing Local Permittees with the ability to issue Take Authorization. Compared to the current process under which a property owner must deal on a case by case basis with local, state and federal agencies to address endangered species issues,the MSHCP provides a one-step approach, thereby providingmoreefficiency than if Take Authorization were applied for separately. See Responses H2-120 and H2-132.

    Further, the procedures established under the MSHCP are not a constitutional "Taking." See Response H2-41. This is especially true in light of the Supreme Court's ruling in the recent case of Tahoe-Sierra Preservation Council, Inc. v. Tahoe Reg'l Planning Agency (2002) 535 U.S. 302, that even a complete temporary building moratoria is not a per se Takings. If this comment intends to invoke the "rational nexus" and "rough proportionality" constitutional standards by reference to "exactions," such an invocation is misplaced. The line of constitutional case law that developed these standards is limited to certain types of exactions, and not to compliance with the mandates found under FESA and CESA. See Response H2-242.


    Comment Letter P3 - County of San Diego, January 28, 2003

    P3-1 The Lead Agencies appreciate the input of the County of San Diego.

    P3-2 The Lead Agencies are aware of the SITES model and acknowledge that the County of San Diego is applying such a model to the HCP being prepared for northwestern San Diego County.

    P3-3 The Lead Agencies recognize the importance of the Santa Margarita River as an important Linkage. The Final MSHCP has been revised to include additional considerations for this Linkage. See Response D-16.

    P3-4 See Response P3-3.


    Comment Letter P4 - Gary Grant, March 13, 2003

    P4-1 See Response H2-46. Information used in development of the MSHCP is considered to be the best scientific and commercial data available, in accordance with the requirements of FESA and the NCCP Act. See Responses L4-2, L4-9 and J4-7 regarding fragmentation of Habitat associated with existing development patterns.

    Comment Letter Q

    Comment Letter Q - The Sauls Company, 14 January 2003

    Q-1 The Lead Agencies acknowledge contributions of various stakeholders to the MSHCP process. Section 3.3.1 of the Draft MSHCP identifies projects that have met the conservation objectives of the MSHCP at the time of public review distribution. Many other properties are currently under negotiation and will be added as the agreements are finalized prior to the adoption of the MSHCP. As a result of additional meetings with stakeholders, further clarifications regarding criteria consistency review and criteria refinements have been provided in Sections 3.3.1 and 6.5 respectively of the Final MSHCP.


    Comment Letter Q2 – Hewitt and O'Neil on behalf of Pardee Homes January 14, 2003

    Q2-1 This comment generally refers to concerns of the commentor regarding the MSHCP. Responses to specific comments are addressed in the responses that follow.

    Q2-2 See Response H2-98.

    Q2-3 The MSHCP states specifically that the RCA, the joint regional authority to be formed by the County and participating Cities pursuant to the requirements of the Government Code and other appropriate legal authorities, "shall not limit County or City local land use authority, or prevent a Permittee from approving a Discretionary Project." It is unclear what the commentor means by the reference to the MSHCP's recognition of city general plan and zoning designations. All Local Permittees will be required to implement the terms and conditions of the MSHCP, which may require General Plan Amendments and other land use regulatory changes.

    As to the projects where development rights have been vested through a development agreement, local land use authority is similarly not limited for Permittees. More generally, as to the status of development under the MSHCP that has some form of "vested rights," see Response H2-270.

    Q2-4 See Responses K-123 and K-124.

    Q2-5 The MSHCP is a criteria-based plan and does not incorporate a reserve map. See Responses D-8, D-9, G-3, and H2-85.

    Q2-6 The Additional Surveys Needs and Procedures for certain identified species are necessary throughout the Criteria Area because of the limited distributional data available those species. Data collected through the surveys may have an influence on Reserve Assembly.

    Q2-7 See Response Q2-5.

    Q2-9 See Responses F-120 and K-116

    Q2-10 As noted in the Draft MSHCP and the Draft IA, the Permits related to the MSHCP provide Take Authorization for Covered Species, pursuant to FESA and the NCCP Act. As implied by this comment, additional state and federal regulatory processes may apply to "riparian areas and vernal pools." Those processes are not satisfied by the Permits related to the MSHCP. However, as noted in Section 14.9, Section 7 consultations under FESA that could result from additional federal processes would be consistent with the Biological Opinion related to the MSHCP. The commentor's assertion that "these sections result in a blight on property" is completely unsupported. The Lead Agencies are unclear regarding the reference to conflict resolution.

    Q2-11 For a discussion of the status of development under the MSHCP that has some form of "vested rights," see Response H2-270. If the Canyon Hills project does not have vested rights, and discretionary or certain City ministerial approvals are required, the terms and the conditions of the MSHCP would be applicable. The Criteria Refinement Process in Section 6.5 of the MSHCP is also available. The MSHCP will not change existing Section 7 obligations.

    To the extent that this comment suggests that the MSHCP creates "pre-condemnation" upon the Canyon Hills project, see Responses H2-241 and Q2-17.

    Q2-12 In accordance with the process outlined in Section 6 of the Draft MSHCP, determination of consistency with the Criteria is made in conjunction with review of development applications upon adoption of the MSHCP. Projects that have vested development rights prior to adoption of the MSHCP would not be subject to the MSHCP requirements. See Response H2-270.

    Q2-13 The provisions of the MSHCP and the HANS Process as applied to specific projects do not amount to a regulatory taking. This comment's reference to the cases of Lucas v. South Carolina Coastal Council (1992) 505 U.S. 1003 is misplaced given the Court's recent ruling in Tahoe-Sierra Preservation Council, Inc. v. Tahoe Reg'l Planning Agency, (2002) 535 U.S. 302, wherein the Court ruled that even a complete temporary building moratoria is not a per se taking.

    Moreover, the MSHCP is a streamlined process for complying with the regulatory mandates of FESA and the NCCP Act. As such, it relieves existing regulatory burdens on property owners, making it easier to comply with what is an otherwise stringent and time-consuming permit process. Further, it is the stated policy of the MSHCP to provide just compensation to property owners whose lands are deemed to be necessary for Reserve Assembly. However, the MSHCP does not require any landowner to conserve their lands. Instead, the MSHCP incorporates a broad array of incentives to encourage Conservation on privately owned lands. (See Draft MSHCP, § 6.1.1.) These incentives include, but are not limited to, the waiver and/or reduction of certain development fees, monetary compensation for entering into an option agreement, fast track processing, density bonuses, clustering, density transfers and property reassessment and tax credits, if determined to be feasible. Where these incentives are insufficient, the MSHCP encourages purchase of properties at fair market value from willing sellers. For further information, see Response H2-41.

    This comment's suggestion that the provisions of the MSHCP amount to a regulatory taking under Penn Central Transp. Co. v. New York City (1978) 438 U.S.104 is also incorrect. Given the Court's ruling in Tahoe-Sierra Preservation Council, Inc. v. Tahoe Reg'l Planning Agency, (2002) 535 U.S. 302, and other relevant California and federal case law, time delays for the purpose of complying with planning laws and other legal requirements do not amount to a taking. See Responses H2-41, H2-241 and M-18.

    As to the status of projects under the MSHCP that have completed some aspects of the development process, see Response H2-270.

    Q2-14 This comments broad invocation of the cases of Dolan v. City of Tigard, (1996) 512 U.S. 374, and Nollan v. California Coastal Commission, (1987) 43 U.S. 825, and thereby presumably the "rational nexus" and "rough proportionality" constitutional standards, is misplaced. The line of constitutional case law that developed these standards is limited to certain types of exactions, and not to compliance with the mandates found under FESA, CESA or the NCCP Act. The MSHCP is a vehicle of compliance with Section 10(a)(1)(b) of FESA and the NCCP Act, and not an exaction regarding a particular piece of property.

    A nexus study is currently being prepared for the Local Development Mitigation Fee. Prior to approval of the MSHCP, the County and Cities will make the findings required by California Government Code sections 66000 et.seq., namely that there is a "reasonable relationship" between the "fees" that will be imposed and the impacts related to land development or use (including such projects as Canyon Hills and other similarly situated As to the status of projects under the MSHCP that have vested rights, see the Response H2-270. The stated policy of the MSHCP is to compensate landowners for their property and property has not been "targeted." Moreover, the exact property needed for Reserve Assembly will be determined through the HANS Process or similar implementation mechanism.

    Q2-15 This comment incorrectly asserts that inclusion of the Pardee properties within the MSHCP violates the "procedural due process" protections of the 14th Amendment to the United States Constitution. The Lead Agencies believe that the adoption of the MSHCP by the Permittees is properly characterized as a legislative act generally affecting the citizens in the Plan Area, and as such the "procedural due process" properly due such legislative acts will be accomplished through the legislative process.

    Furthermore, the planning process for the MSHCP has had many opportunities for public comment, including the extended comment period for the MSHCP, EIS and IA.

    Q2-16 The comment's assertion that the MSHCP violates the "contracts clause" has no legal merit. To the extent that a legislative act leaves a party with a potential claim for a common law breach of contract, case law holds that there can be no valid cause of action for a violation of the Contracts Clause of the U.S. Constitution. (Union Pac. R.R. v. Village of S. Barrington, (1997) 958 F. Supp. 1285; Jackson Sawmill Co. v. United States, 580 F.2d 302, 311-12 (8th Cir. 1978); See e.g. the discussion by Judge Posner in Horwitz-Matthews v. City of Chicago, 78 F.3d 1248, 1251 (7th Cir. 1996) explaining that the state does not unconstitutionally impair a contract to which it is party if its action-- typically, the enactment of a law -- leaves the promisee with a remedy for breach of contract.) As noted by the court in Northwestern National Life Insurance Co. v. Tahoe Regional Planning Agency, 632 F.2d 104, 106 (9th Cir. 1980), to demonstrate a contract clause violation, "[t]he state action complained of must alter the obligations or duties of the parties to a contract."

    The MSHCP does not specifically target the development agreements of Canyon Hills and Oak Valley nor act to change the contractual status of the parties. As such, no claim for a violation of the "contracts clause" is possible. Further, there is no reason that a common law contract cause of action, though completely factually unfounded, is legally To the extent that this comment intends to argue that the MSHCP violates the "vested" rights of any development projects, see Response H2-270.

    Q2-17 The MSHCP is not a "slander on title" of Pardee's Canyon Hills or Oak Valley properties nor does the MSHCP act to "blight" the same property.

    First, as to the status of projects under the MSHCP that have "vested rights," see Response H2-270. Second, a natural species habitat is far from a "blight" on a neighborhood. The goal of the MSHCP is to preserve quality of life for western Riverside County residents, and as the quality of life increases, there may be a concomitant increase in property prices. (See Draft MSHCP, Section 1.3) Third, the conduct at issue in the case of Klopping v. City of Whittier, (1979) 8 Cal.3d 39, is far different than the coordinated regional planning efforts to be implemented by the MSHCP. In Klopping, the city made public announcements that it intended to acquire the plaintiff's land, terminated the proceedings, and then restarted eminent domain proceedings once the price of land had dropped. Worth noting is that the city specifically announced that the particular property owned by the plaintiff was to be condemned. The MSHCP has made no such announcements regarding individual pieces of property. Only a portion of the property within the Criteria Area will be acquired from willing sellers for Reserve Assembly. See Response H2-241.

    Q2-18 See Responses Q2-1 through Q2-17.


    Comment Letter Q3 - County of San Diego, February 4, 2003

    Q3-1 The Lead Agencies appreciate the input of the County of San Diego.

    Q3-2 See Response P3-2.

    Q3-3 See Response P3-3.

    Q3-4 See Response P3-3.


    Comment Letter Q4 - Van Blarcom, Leibold, McClendon & Mann on behalf of the City of Lake Elsinore, March 14, 2003

    Q4-1 Specific responses to the comments detailed in this letter are provided below.

    Q4-2 The Conservation called for in the MSHCP within the city boundaries of Lake Elsinore are not "the City's Open Space Obligations." The City, as a participant in the MSHCP, would have the same obligations as any other city or the County. The City would not be independently responsible for the Conservation of the Additional Reserve Lands within its jurisdiction. All Permittees share in the obligation to conserve these lands as they do all other provisions of the MSHCP.

    The commentor's analysis assumes that all the lands called for Conservation within the Lake Elsinore City Boundaries have the potential for Development. This is false. As evidenced by the projects that have been "on hold," many of these lands have severe environmental constraints that would greatly limit any potential Development of these lands. A more appropriate analysis would be to look at the Development that would be facilitated by the MSHCP. The City ignores the simple fact that they have many environmental constraints that absent the MSHCP will prohibit Development within Lake Elsinore.

    Negotiations with property owners within Lake Elsinore that, if completed, will allow development of portions of projects that have been "on hold" for many years. These projects will generate revenues for the City that, absent the MSHCP, would not be available.

    The City's revenue numbers do not reflect offsetting costs. Many studies have shown that residential Development is a net negative cost to a city or County. Further, development fees, by law, can only offset the actual costs of providing the facility. Therefore, the city does not experience a net gain or loss from these fees. Gov. Code Section 66000 et. seq.

    The MSHCP allows Development in Lake Elsinore to continue, and therefore, contrary to the City's assertions, provides the City long-term benefits. Whether the City elects to participate in the MSHCP is its choice.

    Q4-3 Each City will individually determine whether they will participate in the MSHCP and how they will implement it within their jurisdiction. In general, Cities and the County will use existing land use authority supplemented where necessary to meet their responsibilities under the IA by amending their General Plan or adopting local ordinances. Each City is individually responsible for their compliance. Likewise, each City will gain the ability to issue their own Take Authorization for Development within their jurisdiction, thereby greatly reducing the time and cost to process development applications and allowing actual Development to occur.

    The commentor makes reference to the "RCIP Elsinore Area Plan." It is presumed that this is a reference to the County's General Plan which is not applicable to lands within the City's jurisdiction and is not a part of the Draft MSHCP or its EIR/EIS.

    The commentor makes several comments on the "complex regulatory framework." It is unclear what the commentor is referring to. The MSHCP clearly defines the implementation mechanism proposed under the Plan, which is HANS, but allows each City to implement alternative mechanisms. The City should determine how it wishes to implement the MSHCP and propose mechanisms. The ability for differing jurisdictions to customize their implementation to their local situation does not increase the burden on other jurisdictions. Rather, it allows each jurisdiction to more effectively implement the program.

    The implementation of HANS is not required. Each City can propose their own implementation strategy that meets the requirements of the IA. The commentor continues to refer to "the County" when the correct entity is the Regional Conservation Authority, a Joint Powers Authority, of which the City would (if it participates in the MSHCP) be a member. The City could work with the Regional Conservation Authority to obtain technical assistance.

    The ability to issue Take Authorization and address environmental impacts through the MSHCP should significantly reduce the development processing time lines, and potentially mitigation costs, but may shift more resources into the early phase of development review.

    Q4-4 The Lead Agencies acknowledge that negotiations are underway with several property owners within the City of Lake Elsinore boundaries. To the extent those negotiations are finalized prior to production of the Final MSHCP, they will be documented in Section 3.3.1 of the Plan.

    Q4-5 An individual Local Permittee will not be required to make up an "acreage shortage." The MSHCP is clear that the Local Permittees will be protected from being required to provide further Conservation or financial outlays by the No Surprises Policy. A more complete discussion of the policy is set forth in Response K-82 and Sections 4.3, 14.12 and 17.6 of the IA. The Local Permittee's obligations under the MSHCP are joint obligations and not the obligations of any one Local Permittee.

    Q4-6 The MSHCP does not usurp local land use control in favor of "regional control" or give the Wildlife Agencies undue influence over the local land use process. See Responses K-4, K-80, K-84, L-2, M-28 and R-9. The Lead Agencies agree that jurisdictions not participating in the Plan will not receive Take Authorization nor be able to provide coverage to Third Parties through the MSHCP.

    RCTC, a regional authority of which the City of Lake Elsinore is a member, voted to approve Measure A language. Failure of a City to participate in the MSHCP and any resulting fiscal impact is not an environmental impact that requires analysis in the Draft MSHCP or EIR/EIS. (See, e.g., Response L-1)

    Q4-7 The commentor references "the RCIP listing of benefits of CETAP Transportation Corridors provides no commitment to such a transportation corridor,..." it is unclear what the commentor is referring to. The MSHCP provides coverage of the two internal corridors and provides criteria for obtaining coverage for the external corridors. Since the alternatives for the external corridors have not been identified, no response to this comment is possible.

    Participation of each City is a decision each City must make. The City of Lake Elsinore has previously approved the MSHCP in concept. This is not binding on the City. If the City desires to develop their own HCP, that is their decision to make. The MSHCP does not propose to subsidize any local jurisdiction.

    The commentor proposes "...if the funds associated with, and generated by Lake Elsinore conservation are restricted to transportation projects within the City's jurisdiction." If this comment is referring to MSHCP mitigation fees, the fees cannot be expended on transportation projects, but must go for the purpose identified in the nexus study and the fee ordinance.

    Q4-8 See Responses H2-224 and K-148 regarding Permittees' funding obligations. The Lead Agencies do not believe that recirculation of either document is required.

    Comment Letter R

    Comment Letter R - The Nature Conservancy, 14 January 2003

    R-1 The general concerns expressed in the comment are responded to specifically in Responses R-3 through R-65.

    R-2 The general concerns expressed in the comment are responded to specifically in Responses R-3 through R-65.

    R-3 The Draft EIR/EIS is Volume IV of a four volume set consisting of the MSHCP, the reference documents, IA and EIR/EIS. Since these documents are intertwined and are clearly identified on the covers as a four volume set, they can and should be read together. Specific citations in the EIR/EIS to the other three volumes were included to refer interested parties directly to the source. (See Draft EIR/EIS, § 1.1.2.) All documents referenced in the Draft EIR/EIS are listed in Section 9. This reference complies with both CEQA and NEPA's requirement that materials be incorporated by reference when the effect will be to cut down on bulk without impeding agency and public review of the action. (40 CFR 1502.21; State CEQA Guidelines, §§ 15147, 15148, 15150.) When a document is incorporated by reference it is treated as though it were fully included in the Draft EIR/EIS. (State CEQA Guidelines, § 15150(a).) The Lead Agencies believe that the Draft EIR/EIS fully discusses and analyses the proposed MSHCP's significant environmental impacts on the environment and fully discusses mitigation measures and alternatives. The Executive Summary also contains a summary of environmental impacts and proposed mitigation measures on pages ES-13 through ES14. See Responses H2-18, H2-77 through H2-80 and M-109.

    R-4 The Lead Agencies disagree with the commentor's conclusion and recommendation. The incorporation of provisions of the MSHCP within the Draft EIR/EIS complies with CEQA and NEPA. See Response R-3. The Draft EIR/EIS does not contain any new information or inaccuracies that require recirculation of the document. Nor are the Lead Agencies aware of any facts that require revision or recirculation of the Draft EIR/EIS. See Response M-118.

    R-5 As the comment simply restates information contained in the Draft MSHCP, no further response is necessary.

    R-6 The MSHCP proposes to conserve lands in perpetuity. The General Plan proposes lands uses at "build out" which is not time dependent. The 75-year term was selected to reflect the magnitude of the plan and the need for long-term certainty as to the development of the County. At build out, the pattern of land uses will be determined and additional development potential will largely be redevelopment or infill development. The reserve system will be fully built out and represent approximately 40% of the land in western Riverside County. The Management, Monitoring, and Adaptive Management programs are intended to address the needs of the species and the habitats for the long-term. The commentor's specific concern with the term is not stated. It is therefore not possible to determine if the commentor believes the term is too long or too short.

    R-7 The MSHCP will create a reserve system of approximately 500,000 acres and outside of that reserve system, build-out of the County will occur. The MSHCP and General Plan therefore do directly describe the future Development of western Riverside County.

    R-8 Section 8.0 of the Draft MSHCP describes funding for administration of the MSHCP. The RCA will administer the plan. The funding for administration comes from the multiple sources some of which are "tied to new development."

    R-9 The RCA is part of a cooperative organizational structure for implementing the MSHCP. As noted in the comment, the RCA does not limit County or City local land use authority. Nor does the RCA have the authority to prevent a Permittee from approving a discretionary project. (See Draft MSHCP, § 6.6.2(A), (C).) The RCA provides the primary policy direction for implementing the MSHCP, for public participation in the decision-making process and staff assistance to help Permittees with Plan compliance. As part of initial project review, RCA staff and the staff of the Permittee shall participate in a "Joint Project/Acquisition Review Process." (See Draft MSHCP, § 6.6.2(E).) (The related HANS Process discussed in Section 6.6.1 of the MSHCP provides the County and Cities with a mechanism to evaluate property to be included in the Conservation Area.) Under the Joint Project/Acquisition Review process, RCA and appropriate Permittee staff will jointly review development applications and public projects within the Criteria Area, including holding appropriate meetings to discuss the application. (Draft MSHCP, p. 6-79.) RCA staff then prepares comments that address the project's compliance with the MSHCP, which are sent to the Permittee, the project proponent, and the Wildlife Agencies. (Ibid.) The Wildlife Agencies are provided with a 10-day period to provide comments on the RCA compliance notice. If it is determined that a project fails to meet the Implementation mechanisms adopted by the Permittee, compromises the viability of the MSHCP Conservation Area, or otherwise fails to comply with the MSHCP, RCA staff and Permittee representatives must meet and confer to resolve the issues, including the development of conditions of approval and other requirements to ensure compliance. (Draft MSHCP, pp. 6-79 to 6-80.) If the meet and confer meeting is unsuccessful, the matter is submitted to an ad hoc committee comprised of elected officials representing the RCA and the Permittee. If that process does not resolve the matter, it is submitted to the Wildlife Agencies for review. The Wildlife Agencies shall then have the right to revoke or suspend all portions of the Permits, as set forth in Section 23.5 of the IA. (Draft MSHCP, p. 6-80.)

    The conflict resolution process described in Section 7.3.3 of the IA, and on pages 6-8 to 6-9 of the Draft MSHCP, is related to the HANS Process, rather than the Joint Project/Acquisition Review Process described above.

    R-10 The RCA is a joint regional authority to be formed by the County and the Cities to oversee and provide primary policy direction for implementation of the MSHCP. (Draft MSHCP, p. 6-74.) It may also issue Take Authorization to Special Participating Entities. It is not responsible for overseeing issuance of Take Authorization to other Permittees, who will receive Take directly from the Wildlife Agencies.

    R-11 When Take permits are issued for public projects, they will be issued in accordance with the public project mitigation obligations set forth in Section 13.0 of the IA.

    R-12 Yes, for projects in the Criteria Area. See Section 6.6.2(E) of the Draft MSHCP.

    R-13 The Section 4.0 reference in the Draft EIR/EIS to Section 2.3 at page 4.1-1 is intended to reference the Generalized Reserve Description on pages 2.3-1 thorough 2.3-8. The paragraph on page 4.1-1 will be clarified to read, "The proposed Project/Action is the MSHCP as described in Section 2.3.1 of this EIR/EIS, and includes the whole of the action (policy statements, issuance of incidental Take Authorizations, and the Implementation Agreement)."

    R-14 Both the terms Development and Covered Activity are defined and explained in the IA and the MSHCP. The term "Development" does encompass more than the term "Covered Activity." "Development" is defined as the uses to which land shall be put including construction of buildings, structures, infrastructure and other alterations of land. (IA, p. 8.) However, as stated on page 2.3-1 of the Draft EIR/EIS, not all Development will receive Take Authorization. Instead, only those types of Development that are "Covered Activities," defined as certain activities carried out or conducted by Permittees, Participating Special Entities, Third Parties Granted Take Authorization and others within the Plan Area, and described in Section 7.0 of the MSHCP, will receive Take Authorization under the Section 10(a) Permit and the NCCP Permit, provided that these activities are otherwise lawful.

    R-15 The Draft EIR/EIS describes the duties and responsibilities of the County and other Permittees throughout the document. Table 1A illustrates the decisions and actions that the County and Cities must take in order to comply with the Plan. (See also Draft EIR/EIS, § 1.4.) The duties and responsibilities of both the County and the Cities are also described in detail in Section 13.2 of the IA and Sections 6.1.6 and 7.0 of the MSHCP. The County will administer the MSHCP within the unincorporated areas of the County in a manner consistent with its General Plan and zoning ordinances. The County will also implement the MSHCP through incorporation of the relevant terms and requirements into its General Plan, thereby ensuring consistency. (Draft IA, p. 1.1-2.) Since the County is preparing a new General Plan, there should not be any inconsistencies between that Plan and the MSHCP. If the County does not adopt a new General Plan, then it has committed to amending the existing General Plan and other relevant land use ordinances to ensure MSHCP compliance as well as compliance with existing regulations.

    R-16 The Cities will implement the MSHCP as set forth in Section 13.2 of the IA. Upon signing the IA, the Cities are legally bound to implement the MSHCP, which may require a General Plan Amendment or other action to ensure consistency.

    R-17 The Cities will implement the MSHCP as set forth in Section 13.2 of the IA. Upon signing the IA, the Cities are legally bound to implement the MSHCP, which may require a General Plan Amendment or other action to ensure consistency.

    R-18 The comment correctly notes that the MSHCP is a criteria-based plan and, as such, must contain Criteria that describe how the MSHCP Conservation Area is assembled and analysis of how the MSHCP Conservation Area provides for the Conservation of species. All of this information is provided in the MSHCP and simply excerpted beginning at page 2.3-1 of the Draft EIS/EIR referenced in the comment. The referenced EIS/EIR section entitled "Reserve Design" actually describes the methods used to develop Area Plan Criteria and not the conservation planning process for the MSHCP. This section will be more accurately titled "Methods for Area Plan Criteria" in the Final EIS/EIR. The actual conservation planning process for the MSHCP is described in Section 3.1 of the Draft MSHCP.

    R-19 The overall MSHCP goals are presented in Section 1.3 of the MSHCP and the conservation planning process is described in Section 3.1. As noted in Section 3.1.4 of the MSHCP, the general reserve design tenets described in the NCCP General Process Guidelines and NCCP Act were used to guide the conservation planning process in addition to review and analysis of species-specific requirements based on the species list recommended by the MSHCP Advisory Committee and directed by the County Board of Supervisors in December 2000. As described in Section 9.2 of the Draft MSHCP, an overall Conservation Strategy is defined for each Covered Species that consists of four components: 1) a global biological goal; 2) global biological objectives; 3) species-specific biological objectives; and 4) management and monitoring activities.

    R-20 The process for arriving at the approximately 500,000-acre size for the MSHCP Conservation Area is summarized in Section 3.1 of the MSHCP and presented in greater detail in the August 9, 1999 Draft MSHCP Proposal (DUDEK, 1999) and the October 4, 2000 Alternatives Development Document (DUDEK, 2000). As noted in Section 3.1 and the referenced documents, an initial acreage estimate was developed in conjunction with the Conceptual Conservation Scenario (see Section 3.1.6 of the MSHCP) based on stakeholder direction to develop rough acreage ranges for a conservation scenario that would conserve the maximum number of species on species lists initially developed by the Wildlife Agencies in concert with the MSHCP Advisory Committee. Stakeholders also directed that the conservation scenario address NCCP requirements. At the lower end, the Conceptual Conservation Scenario acreage estimate contemplated a 380,000 acre conservation area including 340,000 acres of public lands and 40,000 acres of private lands. At the upper end, the Conceptual Conservation Scenario acreage estimate contemplated a 510,000 acre conservation area including 390,000 acres of public lands and 120,000 acres of private lands. The Conceptual Conservation Scenario was reviewed by the Wildlife Agencies and, at the upper end, was determined to be a good foundation to proceed with a conservation planning effort meeting NCCP requirements and the conservation needs of up to 164 species. At the lower end, the Wildlife Agencies noted that the Conceptual Conservation Scenario would likely not meet NCCP requirements and would likely not provide for the conservation needs of all of the listed species in the Plan Area.

    The Conceptual Conservation Scenario configuration and acreage estimate were refined during the conservation planning process and additional alternatives were developed for review and analysis as described in the Alternatives Development Document. On December 13, 2000, the County Board of Supervisors directed the MSHCP consultant to proceed with a criteria-based plan based on Alternative 1 from as described in the Alternatives Development Document. Alternative 1 contemplated an approximately 510,000 acres conservation area comprised of about 357,000 acres of public lands and 153,000 acres of private lands, the conservation needs of up to 164 species, and meeting NCCP requirements. The Draft MSHCP distributed for public review on November 15, 2002 envisions an approximately 500,000 acre MSHCP Conservation Area comprised of about 347,000 acres of public lands and 153,000 acres of private lands and meeting NCCP requirements and the conservation needs of 146 species. The shift in the split between public and private lands Conservation between the Conceptual Conservation Scenario and the current Draft MSHCP was based on ongoing assembly of land ownership information in the Plan Area. Areas that were evaluated as public lands in development of the Conceptual Conservation Scenario were later determined not to be in public ownership. To retain a conservation scenario that would meet NCCP requirements and meet species needs, the estimate for private lands conservation was adjusted to close the gap. The change in the acreage of public lands from 357,000 acres to 347,000 acres between the Alternatives Development Document and the Draft NCCP was based on the County's assembly of a parcel-based public lands data base which more accurately reflected the acreage but did not substantively change the distribution or configuration of public lands previously being analyzed for Conservation. The change in the number of species anticipated to be conserved from up to 164 to146 was based on analysis of species data, consideration of new data that were collected in the intervening time frame, determination that sufficient data were not available to proceed with conservation planning for certain species, determination that certain species were not present in the Plan Area, and addition of several new species to the species list.

    R-21 As described in Responses R-19 and R-20, initial MSHCP goals, including biological goals, were established by the stakeholders and directed the development of the Conceptual Conservation Scenario which resulted in the initial rough acreage estimates. The species accounts included in the Draft MSHCP present the Conservation Strategy for each individual species, incorporating the global biological goal, global biological objectives and species-specific objectives. Many factors are considered in analyzing the degree to which these goals and objectives are met including acreage of areas to be conserved, configuration of areas to be conserved and core populations and species localities to be conserved. The size of the conservation area itself is not a consideration in determining whether the various biological goals of the Plan are met.

    R-22 The funding for the MSHCP was determined by first looking at a reasonable distribution of responsibility for assembly of the reserve system. The initial proposal by local stakeholders was for the responsibility to be shared one-third each by local, state, and federal sources. As the plan developed, that distribution evolved to the roughly one-third state and federal and two-thirds Local Permittees (including State Permittees) that are responsible for approximately 103,000 acres. As proposed, the MSHCP relies on contributions from a variety of funding sources and does not rely on a project-by-project mitigation approach. It is also important to look at MSHCP implementation both in terms of land conservation and in the Management, Monitoring, and Adaptive Management programs that are funded under the Plan. As the commentor notes, "What the MSHCP predicts in 2003 may not reflect reality in 2013, 2023 or beyond." The MSHCP, through the criteria system for Reserve Assembly, to the multiple funding sources, the discussion of Adequacy of Funding, the shared local state and federal commitments, the Management, Monitoring, and Adaptive Management plans and the recognition that conditions will change, indicates that the MSHCP is more than a project-by-project approach to mitigation.

    R-23 See Response R-22. The State Permittee's conservation obligation was determined by the California Department of Fish and Game.

    R-24 See Response R-22.

    R-25 As described in Sections 3.1.1,3.1.2, 3.1.3 and 3.1.4 of the Draft MSHCP, the initial steps in the conservation planning process involved compilation of existing data and review and consideration of applicable conservation biology principles. The compilation of existing data included review of initial draft species accounts prepared by the Wildlife Agencies, augmented by additional information assembled for the August 9, 1999 Draft MSHCP Proposal (DUDEK, 1999), and workshops with local biologists that took place in April and June 1999. This species-specific information was compiled and informed the development of the Conceptual Conservation Scenario in August 1999. The species-specific information continued to be augmented through the alternatives development process and updated summary species analyses and species accounts were included in the Alternatives Development Document and informed the alternatives development and analysis process. The species specific information in Volume II of the MSHCP referenced in the comment represents the ongoing refinement of the data presented and analyzed in the earlier documents.

    R-26 It is unclear why a description of the existing configurations and dimensions of the items referenced in the comment are necessary to evaluate whether the Plan's conservation objectives will be met. However, dimensional data for the existing and proposed Cores and Linkages is provided in Section 3.2.3 of the MSHCP; the index on pages 3-28 through 3-30 of the Draft MSHCP indicates those Cores and Linkages are regarded as existing and those regarded as proposed. It would seem that the analysis of existing Cores and Linkages would be more relevant to the No Project Alternative. Such an analysis is presented in 4.1 of the Draft EIS/EIR and summarized in Table 4E of the Draft EIS/EIR.

    R-27 See Response F-112 regarding anticipated Conservation and loss of meadows and marshes. With respect to the discrepancies identified in the comment, the referenced Table 2F accurately portrays anticipated conservation of meadows and marshes at 50%. As noted in the footnote for Table 4A in the referenced Section 4.1.4, the 76% figure given in that section combines meadows and marshes and cismontane alkali marsh which is the reason for the percentage differences. The estimate for Conservation of cismontane alkali marsh reflects the fact that the majority of cismontane alkali marsh mapped on the MSHCP vegetation map is along Cahuilla Creek and within American Indian Lands. American Indian Lands are not a part of the MSHCP and no Take is authorized on American Indian Lands as part of the MSHCP.

    R-28 See Responses G-15 and G-16 for discussion of Conservation of grasslands and grassland species.

    R-29 See Responses G-15 and G-17 for discussion of Conservation of coastal sage scrub and coastal sage scrub species.

    R-30 Analysis of the various alternatives in relation to Cores and Linkages is presented on pages 4.1-95 through 4.1-102 of the Draft EIS/EIR. See Response R-26 regarding dimensional data for existing Cores and Linkages. Table 4E of the Draft EIS/EIR notes whether or not these Cores and Linkages are in or out of the various alternatives addressed in the Draft EIS/EIR.

    R-31 See Response F-80 for discussion of Edge Effects associated with Covered Activities.

    R-32 The Draft EIR/EIS discusses potential environmental impacts associated with implementation of the proposed MSHCP. See Response M-16.

    R-33 The information requested in the comment is summarized for all 146 Covered Species, including the listed threatened and endangered species, in Table 9-2 of the Draft MSHCP, Volume I and is presented in detail in the species accounts in the MSHCP Reference Document, Volume II of the MSHCP, Section B and in the Management and Monitoring Plan in Section 5.0 of the MSHCP. In the MSHCP species accounts, the following information is provided for each Covered Species: Common Name and Scientific Name, Listing Status, Group Designation and Rationale, Species Conservation Objectives, Species Conservation Analysis (including Conservation Levels, MSHCP Conservation Area Configuration Issues, Conservation Summary), Incidental Take, Species Account (including Data Characterization, Habitat and Habitat Associations, Biogeography, Known Populations Within Western Riverside County, Biology (including for animals as appropriate - genetics, diet and foraging, daily activity, reproduction, survival, dispersal, socio-spatial behavior, community relationships; for plants as appropriate - genetics, reproduction, dispersal, demography), Threats to Species, Special Biological Considerations, and Literature Cited. In Section 5.0 of the MSHCP, Management and Monitoring, the following information is provided for each Covered Species: Common/Scientific Name, Group Designation, Key Management Units, Core Locations (as appropriate), Primary Habitat Types, Known Threats, Applicable General Management Measures, Species-Specific Management Activities, Species-Specific Monitoring Measures.

    R-34 As noted in Responses R-20, R-21 and R-25, the goals and objectives of the MSHCP, as identified by stakeholders early in the conservation planning process, are to Conserve Covered Species and their Habitats in a manner that meets regulatory requirements and accommodates economically planned growth in western Riverside County. The iterative process involved development and consideration of a variety of conservation scenarios and iterative evaluation of those scenarios in the context of the conservation and management needs of the species considered for conservation under the various scenarios. An initial Conceptual Conservation Scenario and various reserve alternatives were identified during the conservation planning process in the context of the identified goals and objectives. As discussed in Response R-25, at various points in the process, preliminary species analyses were completed to evaluate the degree to which various alternative scenarios might meet the conservation and management needs of proposed Covered Species, including listed, threatened and endangered species. The Draft MSHCP represents the culmination of these efforts and, as noted in Response R-33, complete information regarding the degree to which assembly and management of the MSHCP Conservation Area would meet the conservation and management needs of the listed threatened and endangered species is summarized in Table 9-2 of the MSHCP and presented in detail in the species accounts in Volume II, Section B and the Management and Monitoring Plan in Section 5.0 of the MSHCP, Volume I.

    R-35 See Response R-33. The information requested in the comment is provided for all Covered Species as described in Response R-33, including regionally or locally sensitive

    or rare species and upper trophic or generalist species on the Covered Species list. The Covered Species list is presented in Table 2-2 of the Draft MSHCP.

    R-36 See Response R-34. The information requested in the comment is provided for all Covered Species as described in Response R-34, including non-listed Covered Species. The Covered Species list is presented in Table 2-2 of the Draft MSHCP.

    R-37 The baseline information included in the MSHCP is incorporated by reference in the Draft EIS/EIR. It is not necessary to duplicate this information in the EIS/EIR since the EIS/EIR is part of a four volume sheet that includes the Plan, the IA and the EIS/EIR.

    R-38 Potential effects on biological resources associated with the single-family home expedite process and the New Agricultural Lands Cap are discussed on pages 4.1-31 and 4.1-32 of the Draft EIR/EIR and in Sections 7.3.2 and 7.3.3 of the MSHCP. Potential effects of the Cajalco Road realignment and widening are not discussed in the EIS/EIR since, as noted in Section 7.2.3 of the MSHCP, this project would not be a Covered Activity under the MSHCP unless certain conditions are met. Analysis of the effects of this project would be conducted at the time it is proposed to be a Covered Activity.

    R-39 See Responses F-46, F-79, F-80, F-83, F-84, F-85 and F-86 for discussion of these issues.

    R-40 The commentor states that the Draft EIR/EIS must include text from Appendix B and from the MSHCP text (Chapter 7.0) which are referenced in the text of the Draft EIR/EIS (Section 2.11). However, as the Draft EIR/EIS (including Appendix B) and the MSHCP are included as volumes of the same document, such inclusion is not legally required. The CEQA Guidelines Section 15120(c) cited by the commentor states the necessary contents of an EIR. The County and Service maintain that the Draft EIR/EIS contains each of these elements. The CEQA Guidelines Section 15126 and 15126.2 contain further specific information on topics that must be discussed in an EIR. Sections 4, 5 and 6 of the Draft EIR/EIS addresses the requirements listed in Section 15126 and 15126.2. Because the information referenced in the Draft EIR/EIS is part of the same document as the MSHCP (Volume IV of IV), and is considered to be included. Re-circulation of the Draft EIR/EIS pursuant to Public Resources Code Section 21092.1 is not required.

    R-41 The MSHCP does not provide "blanket approval" of the Covered Activities. Rather, it streamlines the process of determining conservation requirements and mitigation measures for impacts to biological resources. Projects and activities proposed and undertaken subsequent to the adoption of the MSHCP will continue to require site-specific CEQA (and potentially NEPA) environmental analysis. Take Authorization does not constitute a physical change, as it does not reflect approval of any specific project on the Covered Activities list. The MSHCP is intended to avoid the significant unavoidable impact pursuant to CEQA Guidelines 15065(c), which occurs if the project "has the potential to substantially degrade the quality of the environment, substantially reduce the habitat of a fish and wildlife species, cause a fish or wildlife population to drop below self-sustaining levels, threaten to eliminate a plant or animal community, reduce the number or restrict the range of an endangered, rare or threatened species..." by setting forth mitigation to preserve habitat for such species.

    The preparation of an EIR/EIS reflects the County and Service's acknowledgment that the proposed MSHCP would have a potential change in the environment. Indirect effects (as outlined in 40 CFR 1508(8) and PRC 21065) associated with the MSHCP are discussed along with the other impacts in Section 4, as well as in Sections 5 and 6. The analysis in the Draft EIR/EIS for the MSHCP included the assumption that the 2002 Riverside County General Plan would be adopted. Thus, any synergistic effects between the two plans have been addressed as a part of the analysis.

    R-42 As discussed in Response R-41, the County and Service maintain that the proposed MSHCP would not result in direct physical changes to the environment. The discussion from the Draft EIR/EIS Section 1 (pp. 1.5-5 to 1.5-10), which indicates that it is impossible to speculate where future Development will occur, does not state that future Development itself is speculative. The location and timing of projects that are anticipated to occur in Riverside County is based largely on market factors. The 2002 Riverside County General Plan provides potential locations for growth, and the associated EIR analyzes impacts caused by this growth independently of when it occurs.

    The commentor appears to imply that because one of the goals of the MSHCP includes "improving the future economic development in the County by providing an efficient, streamlined regulatory process through which development can proceed in an efficient way" (Draft EIR/EIS, pg. 1.2-2), it necessarily follows that the MSHCP would directly or indirectly resultinDevelopment. However, the availability of a streamlined regulatory process would not eliminate significant barriers to growth. A process (which is, admittedly, not streamlined) exists presently through which developers can assess and mitigate impacts to biological resources. This process is cumbersome, but does not prevent Development from occurring. Making the process less cumbersome and more effective will allow Development to proceed more efficiently and in a more timely fashion. While it is possible that this will encourage more Development to occur, this is far from a foregone conclusion. Thus, the Draft EIR/EIS discusses this potential in Section 6.1.3 under Growth Inducement as a potential indirect effect.

    Furthermore, the statement in the Draft EIR/EIS that the MSHCP is being prepared to "address the potential impacts of urban growth, natural habitat loss, and plant and animal species endangerment" (Draft EIR./EIS, pg. ES-1) reflects the reality that if no further growth were to occur in the County, no MSHCP would be required. The MSHCP is intended to "ensure habitat conservation, species protection and management, program costs and development certainty to the County and cities; State and federal wildlife agencies; development, agriculture, and environmental communities; and the public at large" (Draft EIR./EIS, pg. ES-1). Mitigation for impacts to biological resources is required if such impacts occur. Impacts are associated with urban growth, and result in the need for mitigation. The proposed MSHCP will serve to identify appropriate mitigation for impacts that are anticipated to occur as a result of future Development. However, the provision of a method of mitigating for impacts does not, in and of itself, result in the Development that would cause those impacts.

    R-43 See Responses R-41 and R-42. The County and Service maintain that there will not be significant indirect impacts pertaining to Development as a result of implementing the proposed MSHCP. The Draft EIR/EIS acknowledges that future Development, which is anticipated to occur with or without the MSHCP, may have adverse impacts on aesthetics, cultural resources, geology and soils, hazards and hazardous materials, hydrology and water quality, noise, public services, and utilities. These impacts (with the exception of the public services for fire protection and parks) are not affected by policies in the MSHCP. They would be subject to analysis, and, if needed, impact mitigation in the same manner with the MSHCP as without the MSHCP. Impacts to resources that would potentially be affected by policies in the MSHCP, such as biological resources, agriculture, mineral and extractive resources, population and housing, parks and recreation, fire protection, and transportation have been analyzed in the Draft EIR/EIS in terms of how the MSHCP policies would affect these resources (and mitigation measures available to be used in subsequent environmental analyses to address impacts to these resources).

    The changes that would occur to accommodate the MSHCP in the 15 local jurisdictions are described at length in the Draft MSHCP and the Draft IA. These changes would function to support the implementation of the MSHCP, which provides a streamlined approval process for projects that impact biological resources, and provides appropriate mitigation for such impacts (including long-term management of conserved resources).

    Such changes are not anticipated to result in new Development, nor would they result in other substantial adverse physical changes to the environment. Physical changes to the environment resulting from the MSHCP would be limited to habitat restoration, creation, enhancement, and improvement as a part of the management of the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    R-44 The commentor states that all of the "Covered Activities" are authorized within the Criteria Area under the MSHCP. This is incorrect. The MSHCP would grant "Take Authorization" to certain Covered Activities within the Criteria Area. However, this does not indicate that these actions would be exempt from further environmental review; it merely would satisfy the need to mitigate many biological resources impacts and would satisfy the Section 10 consultation requirement with regard to the USFWS. New transportation systems, single family homes, off-highway vehicle parks, and all other actions requiring a discretionary permit from the Permittees would be subject to all environmental review required by CEQA and NEPA, including an analysis of land use impacts. See also Response K-107.

    R-45 The comment seems to suggest that the Draft EIR/EIS is a program EIR. This is incorrect. The Draft EIR/EIS is a project EIR/EIS. As such, the Draft EIR/EIS fully discusses and analyzes potential impacts. See Responses H2-3 and R-41 through R-44. Subsequent CEQA documents can tier off of or incorporate by reference all or portions of a project EIR.

    R-46 It is assumed that this comment is referring to the information presented in Table 4A of the Draft EIS/EIR and the subsequent discussion in Section 4.1.4 of the EIS/EIR (pages 4.1-13 and 4.1-14 of the Draft EIS/EIR). This discussion discloses impacts to the Vegetation Communities noted in the comment and then characterizes the significance of impacts in four broad categories - sensitive upland, wetland, forest and agriculture. The discussion concludes that impacts to forest and agriculture would not be significant due to the high level of preservation of forest habitat and associated low level of impact, and the low sensitivity of agricultural habitat. Likewise, the discussion concludes that impacts to wetland habitats would not be significant due to the combination of a high level of preservation for these habitats and implementation of the policies for the Protection of Species Associated with Riparian/Riverine and Vernal Pool Habitats presented in Section 6.1.2 of the Draft MSHCP. With respect to sensitive upland habitat, the EIS/EIR discusses chaparral and scrub and grassland communities separately. For chaparral, the EIS/EIR concludes that impacts would not be significant due the high level of preservation of this habitat, wide distribution of chaparral in the Plan Area, and relatively low number of highly sensitive species occupying this habitat. For scrub and grassland communities, the EIS/EIR discussion concludes that impacts would be substantial but would be reduced to a level below significance by features incorporated in the MSHCP including the configuration of conserved lands, avoidance and minimization measures to be undertaken during Reserve Assembly, and long-term management and monitoring of the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    R-47 It is acknowledged that CEQA requires discussion of mitigation for each identified significant effect. As noted in Response R-46, significant effects were not identified for the Vegetation Communities referenced in the comment and a discussion of mitigation is therefore not necessary.

    R-48 As discussed in the Draft EIS/EIR, the biological value of the identified Vegetation Communities is primarily associated with the plant and animal species present in those communities and maintenance of the habitat quality within those communities in a manner that will enable them to support varied populations of plant and animal species. For these reasons, configuration of conserved lands would contribute to reduction in the significance of impacts associated with loss of these Vegetation Communities.

    It is assumed that the portion of the comment regarding conversion of natural Vegetation Communities to agricultural lands is related to the New Agricultural Lands Cap discussed in Section 7.3.3 of the Draft MSHCP. See Response F-84 for discussion of this issue. Vegetation Communities that could be disturbed as a result of conversion of natural lands to New Agricultural Lands are unknown at this time and there are no data to suggest that these conversions would occur on existing coastal sage scrub or fan sage scrub lands. It would be speculative to analyze such a specific impact at this time.

    R-49 See Response R-48. Adaptivemanagement and monitoring activities will benefit species within the identified Vegetation Communities which is one of the primary biological values associated with these communities.

    R-50 See Response R-48. Vegetation Communities that could be disturbed as a result of conversion of natural lands to New Agricultural Lands are unknown at this time and there are no data to suggest that these conversions would occur on sensitive native grassland. See Responses G-15 and G-16 for discussion of grasslands Conservation associated with the MSHCP.

    R-51 See Responses R-38, R-49 and R-50. There are no Covered Activities in the MSHCP that are associated with specific Vegetation Communities such as the coastal sage scrub, fan sage scrub and native grasslands referenced in the comment.

    R-52 See Response F-59 for discussion of the relationship of the MSHCP to "no net loss" standards for wetland and riparian habitats. The referenced Riparian/Riverine/Vernal Pool policy is presented in Section 6.1.2 and applies and is enforceable for all Covered Activities throughout the MSHCP Plan Area. As signatories to the IA, the Permittees will be responsible for implementing the policy.

    R-53 As discussed in Response R-47, discussion of mitigation is only required for identified significant impacts.

    R-54 Measures incorporated in the MSHCP to avoid and minimize impacts to mountain plover are summarized in Table 9-2 of the Draft MSHCP and in the species account for mountain plover in the MSHCP Reference Document, Volume II, Section B. These measures are incorporated in the description of the proposed project analyzed in the Draft EIS/EIR and the EIS/EIR assumes implementation of these measures. The Draft EIS/EIR concludes that avoidance and minimization measures incorporated in the MSHCP would reduce impacts to mountain plover to a level below significance and mitigation measures would not be required.

    R-55 Measures incorporated in the MSHCP to avoid and minimize impacts to western yellow-billed cuckoo are summarized in Table 9-2 of the Draft MSHCP and in the species account for western yellow-billed cuckoo in the MSHCP Reference Document, Volume II, Section B. These measures are incorporated in the description of the proposed project analyzed in the Draft EIS/EIR and the EIS/EIR assumes implementation of these measures. The Draft EIS/EIR concludes that avoidance and minimization measures incorporated in the MSHCP would reduced impacts to western yellow-billed cuckoo to a level below significance and mitigation measures would not be required. With respect to the referenced survey requirements, survey requirements for western yellow-billed cuckoo are identified in Section 6.1.2 of the MSHCP and the reference has been corrected in the Final EIS/EIR. As noted in Section 6.1.2 of the MSHCP, if surveys for western yellow-billed cuckoo are positive, avoidance and minimization measures must be implemented.

    R-56 Measures incorporated in the MSHCP to avoid and minimize impacts to southwestern willow flycatcher are summarized in Table 9-2 of the Draft MSHCP and in the species account for southwestern willow flycatcher in the MSHCP Reference Document, Volume II, Section B. These measures are incorporated in the description of the proposed project analyzed in the Draft EIS/EIR and the EIS/EIR assumes implementation of these measures. The Draft EIS/EIR concludes that avoidance and minimization measures incorporated in the MSHCP would reduce impacts to southwestern willow flycatcher to a level below significance and mitigation measures would not be required. With respect to the referenced survey requirements, survey requirements for southwestern willow flycatcher are identified in Section 6.1.2 of the MSHCP and the reference has been corrected in the Final EIS/EIR. As noted in Section 6.1.2 of the MSHCP, if surveys for southwestern willow flycatcher are positive, avoidance and minimization measures must be implemented.

    R-57 Measures incorporated in the MSHCP to avoid and minimize impacts to coastal California gnatcatcher are summarized in Table 9-2 of the MSHCP and in the species account for coastal California gnatcatcher in the MSHCP Reference Document, Volume II, Section B. These measures are incorporated in the description of the proposed project analyzed in the Draft EIS/EIR and the EIS/EIR analysis is predicated on the fact that implementation of these measures will occur. The EIS/EIR concludes thatavoidance and minimization measures incorporated in the MSHCP would reduce impacts to coastal California gnatcatcher to a level below significance and mitigation measures would not be required.

    R-58 See Response R-47. It is acknowledged that CEQA requires discussion of mitigation measures for identified significant impacts. However, the referenced features incorporated in the MSHCP are regarded as project features and not mitigation measures for purposes of the EIS/EIR. Assurance that these measures will be implemented is provided through the IA and the Permits to be issued by the Wildlife Agencies for the MSHCP.

    R-59 The 153,000 acres when incorporated with the existing public lands in western Riverside County was the most robust conservation alternative identified during the analysis of alternatives. It appears that the commentor believes that the proposed reserve system was one of the lesser alternatives considered. There should be no need for additional conservationlands to address the Covered Species. Under CEQA, mitigation for impacts will continue after the completion of Reserve Assembly. Mitigation could be used to retire debt created to assemble the MSHCP Conservation Area, contribute to ongoing Management and Monitoring activities, offset increased Management, Monitoring and Adaptive Management costs, or add additional conservation lands. The enhancement of the existing reserve system should be the priority rather than adding additional lands.

    R-60 The Lead Agencies strongly disagree with this comment. The EIR/EIS is fully sufficient to satisfy the requirements of CEQA and NEPA. Further delay as suggested by the commentor will only result in lost opportunities to assemble the reserve, increased costs, and reduced local support for the concept of conservation planning. It is disappointing that the Nature Conservancy did not utilize more of its energies in supporting the planning effort and less in building a case for greater public cost for no additional benefit to the public or the endangered resources the MSHCP protects.

    R-61 See Responses R-48 and R-50. Data are not available at this time that suggest that New Agricultural Lands would be located within these Vegetation Communities. Features incorporated in the MSHCP that address this issue are discussed in Section 7.3.3 of the Draft MSHCP. The aerial photography review required in this section will be sufficient to determine identify Vegetation Communities being converted to agriculture, if any, and, as discussed in Section 7.3.3, annual reporting will be undertaken to determine if Reserve Assembly options are being precluded and if acquisition priorities need to be adjusted to respond to this issue. Based on existing trends and incorporation of these features in the MSHCP, the recommendation in the comment is not determined to be necessary.

    R-62 The assertions in the comment that the reserve design is considered the minimum for viability and may be questionable for certain species, and that future public funding may be uncertain, are not substantiated. It is acknowledged that Reserve Assembly and MSHCP implementation will occur over a long period of time and that baseline conditions upon which the MSHCP is based will change. Features are incorporated in the MSHCP to reflect these uncertainties including measures for incorporating new information into the MSHCP, flexibility in Reserve Assembly to respond to changing conditions, ongoing management and monitoring, and extensive review and oversight among the Permittees and with the Wildlife Agencies. With respect to the recommendation that mitigation for private development projects should continue after completion of private lands acquisition, it should be noted that the requirements of the MSHCP will continue to be applied throughout the Plan Area for the planned 75-year life of the Permit. The MSHCP includes a variety of requirements that are unrelated to Reserve Assembly including survey requirements, management and monitoring requirements, annual review and oversight requirements and payment of fees.

    R-63 See Responses F-46, F-79, F-80, F-83, F-84, F-85 and F-86 for discussion of this issue. As discussed in those Responses, features incorporated in the MSHCP address this issue.

    R-64 See Response F-59 for discussion of this issue. As discussed in that Response, features incorporated in the MSHCP address this issue.

    R-65 See Responses R-61 through R-65. The Lead Agencies do not believe that the new information or recommendations referenced would require recirculation of the MSHCP and EIR/EIS.


    Comment Letter R2 - Hewitt and O'Neill on behalf of SCC Properties, January 14, 2003

    R2-1 This comment describes the commentor's property and explains the commentor's interpretation of the Criteria in relationship to the property. As no issues related to the Draft MSHCP, the Draft EIR/EIS or the Draft IA are raised in this comment, no further response is provided.

    R2-2 The MSHCP will not violate the actual "vested rights" of any property, including the rights of the Golden City development discussed in this comment. See Response H2-270.

    R2-3 See Response H2-270.

    R2-4 The provisions of the MSHCP and the HANS Process as applied to specific projects, including the Golden City property, do not amount to a regulatory taking. See Responses H2-41, H2-241, M-18 and Q2-13. As to the status of projects under the MSHCP that have completed some aspects of the development process (such as the Golden City property), see Response H2-270.

    R2-5 See Response R2-4.

    R2-6 See Response R2-4.

    R2-7 See Responses H2-242, H2-243, H2-270, and Q2-14.

    R2-8 See Response Q2-15.

    R2-9 See Response Q2-16.

    R2-10 See Response Q2-17.

    R2-11 See Responses R2-1 through R2-10. Comment will be forwarded to the County Board of Supervisors.


    Comment Letter R3 - Oak Valley Partners, February 12, 2003

    R3-1 This comment provides information related to the commentor's property and the portions of that property anticipated to be conserved. As this comment does not raise issues regarding the Draft MSHCP, the Draft EIR/EIS or the Draft IA, no further response is necessary.

    R3-2 The area that is intended for Conservation within the noted Cells is the Wash, and the Lead Agencies believe that interpretation of the Criteria would result in Garden Air Wash being identified for Conservation. Therefore, the Lead Agencies do not believe it is necessary to revise the Criteria or Cell arrangements to achieve Conservation consistent with the commentor's proposed conservation areas.

    R3-3 See Response R3-2.


    Comment Letter R4 - Julie Kay Smithson (email sent 3/12/03)

    R4-1 This comment appears to express the opinions of the commentor regarding the Section10(a) process of FESA. These comments are not relevant to the adequacy of the Draft MSHCP, the Draft EIR/EIS or the Draft Implementing Agreement and therefore, no additional response is necessary. It should be noted, however, that private landowners would be eligible for Take Authorization under the Permits, upon conveyance of Take Authorization to the Permittees. It should be noted that extensive benefits are provided to Agricultural Operations as set forth in Section 6.2 of the MSHCP.

    R4-2 Noticing will be provided in accordance with appropriate legal and policy requirements and standards.

    Comment Letter S

    Comment Letter S - University of California, Riverside -Rotenberry, Nunney, and Price, January 10, 2003

    S-1 The proposed addition of a Cell immediately north of Cell 719 and immediately west of Cell 635 is noted. This minor addition to the Criteria Area will be provided in the Final MSHCP. It is acknowledged that addition of this Cell will improve the ability to achieve the Proposed Constrained Linkage 7, in consideration of the limited opportunities that exist to establish a permanent Linkage in this area.

    S-2 See Response S-1.

    S-3 See Response S-1.

    S-4 See Response S-1.


    Comment Letter S2 - KB Home, 13 January 2003

    S2-1 The comment describes the process that has been ongoing for over a decade to address flooding along the San Jacinto River. However, the 404 permit referenced by the commentor was not allowed to "lapse." It expired as there was not sufficient funding to construct the channelization project. Additionally, a Section 7 consultation with the

    U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service was required to be reinitiated in light of the subsequent listing of certain plant species that would have been affected by the channelization project. This reinitiated consultation was never completed.

    S2-2 The MSHCP provides an ongoing process that the commentor acknowledges is attempting to reach resolution on a project that will provide a degree of flood control protection while conserving the unique habitat and species that exist in the San Jacinto River floodplain. The time required to reach resolution on this project is uncertain. If the MSHCP is adopted, it provides the structure to accommodate the final resolution on the San Jacinto River. Therefore, delaying the adoption of the MSHCP will not impact the ongoing effort. Whether the conservation offered by the commentor is adequate is the subject of the ongoing discussions between the property owners, Wildlife Agencies, ACOE and the County.

    S2-3 The Wildlife Agencies have been diligently working with the Riverside County Flood Control and Water Conservation District, landowners and their representatives, ACOE and other interested parties to develop the information needed to design a flood control project which achieves multiple goals (flood control, Conservation of species including ecological processes needed to maintain their habitat, Clean Water Act 404 and 401 permitting requirements and Fish and Game Code Section 1600 et seq. requirements). These efforts were initiated as a result of landowners, including KB Homes, desire to modify an earlier flood control alternative (Alternative F) that provided a more spatially explicit Conservation Strategy for plant species dependent on the San Jacinto River floodplain.

    The current multiple agency and stakeholder process is focused on identifying the specific information needed to understand how the San Jacinto River functions hydrologically including sediment transport and deposition. While previous flood control project designs may have worked to move water from one location to another, it did not address, in the opinion of the Wildlife Agencies, many of the other functions and beneficial uses of the river. Understanding how the river actually functions is key to understanding the impacts to biological resources from any flood control project. The Wildlife Agencies continue to express a desire and have made their technical staffs available (including a staff fluvial geomorphologicst) to identify a flood control project that they and the ACOE can permit and which achieves the needed protection of the Ramona Expressway, I-215 and much of the lands that might be flooded in a significant flood event.

    In the opinion of the Wildlife Agencies, the previous design also had significant flaws which had not been addressed. These included the need for a flood easement or similar mechanism which would allow water to be backed onto the Department of Fish and Game's San Jacinto Wildlife Area. Moving forward with any proposal which requires flooding of state lands will require Department of Fish and Game approval which may be difficult to obtain if the project would result in significant impacts and potentially jeopardizing the continued existence of a listed species.

    S2-4 The Lead Agencies disagree with the commentor's assertion that "the MSHCP is plainly excessive in designating conservation requirements within the particular subunit." See Response S2-2.

    S2-5 See Response S2-2.

    S2-6 The analysis contained in the Draft MSHCP for the species that depend on habitat and flood regimes within the subject area does not support the summary of the property owners consultant regarding habitat values for sensitive Covered Species.

    S2-7 The USFWS has the sole discretion to designate critical habitat for federally-listed species; accordingly, the comment is not germane to the MSHCP or any related documents.

    S2-8 The MSHCP is based on the best scientific and commercially available data. The commentor's opinions regarding purported actions or statements by the U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service are not relevant to the facts used in the MSHCP analysis.

    S2-9 See Response S2-3. It should be noted that properties currently within the flood plain are generally not considered to be "readily developable".

    S2-10 The Minor Amendment process does not, in most instances, require Wildlife Agency approval. The Wildlife Agencies have 60 days from notification to submit written comments on any Minor Amendments. However, concurrence is required for Minor Amendments proposed for Cajalco Road and State Route 79 Road Improvements and the San Jacinto River Project. (See IA Section 20.4.2.) As set forth in Section 7.3.7 of the Draft MSHCP, the San Jacinto River Flood Control Project is a Covered Activity and any adjustments to the Cell Criteria or Area Plan assumptions can be implemented through either a Minor Amendment or the Criteria Refinement Process.

    The Wildlife Agencies' concurrence regarding a Minor Amendment must be solely based upon whether or not the Minor Amendment meet the criteria contained in the MSHCP. In contrast, Major Amendments require Federal Register notice, environmental review and full compliance with all other FESA Section 10 requirements.

    S2-11 The commentor misrepresents the HANS Process. The HANS Process does not result in the property owner having to wait six years to be informed as to whether or not all or portions of his/her property may be developed. In fact, this determination is made within the initial 45 day review period. Additionally, if at the end of up to a six-year period, funding is not available to purchase the property, the property may ultimately be developed and would not be subject to the MSHCP Criteria. Thus, the land would no longer be "deemed needed for habitat" as asserted by the commentor.

    S2-12 The Lead Agencies disagree with the commentor's conclusions concerning the amount of funding necessary for compensation in connection with the acquisition of lands. The MSHCP uses an average value of approximately $13,000 per acre based on an analysis of recent land sales in Riverside County. Additionally, the Lead Agencies disagree with the commentor's assertion that an "unconstitutional taking of property without compensation" may be indicated. Please see Landgate v. California Coastal Commission, 17 Cal. 4th 1006 (1998) wherein the California Supreme Court indicated that land use regulations that are part of a reasonable regulatory process designed to advance legitimate government interests are not takings.

    S2-13 The subject property is highly constrained. Through a regional conservation effort such as the MSHCP, development potential of the property may be realized. The commentor appears to be making speculative claims as to valuation of properties in this area and the potential for the development of the subject property.

    S2-14 See Response S2-2. The MSHCP provides an opportunity for the San Jacinto River flood control project to be successfully negotiated. Delaying the MSHCP would not further the opportunity for resolution of the complex issues surrounding flood control along the San Jacinto River.


    Comment Letter S3 - Sweeney Law Corporation, February 17, 2003

    S3-1 This comment described the commentor's understanding of the RCIP and provides comments on the MSHCP which are addressed in the responses below.

    S3-2 The reference to 74% Conservation of Willows soils indicates that the commentor misunderstands the definition of the term Additional Reserve Lands. These are lands that would be added to the MSHCP Conservation Area through Reserve Assembly. These are not lands that are already conserved.

    S3-3 Although the commentor is not specific about the land dedication mentioned in his letter, the Lead Agencies are aware of a 69-acre donation of private land located along the San Jacinto River that was dedicated by Mr. William Sweeney to the Riverside County Habitat Conservation Agency in December of 1994. It is not clear how the information provided by the commentor is expected to alter the Draft MSHCP. More information would need to be provided.

    S3-4 The Criteria describe the area necessary for Conservation to provide Take Authorization for Covered Species. As described in Section 7 of the Draft MSHCP, a process has been established whereby a flood control project for the San Jacinto River could be considered as a Covered Activity, subject to meeting certain Criteria. The current Criteria in the Draft MSHCP do not specify a "2,000 foot wide corridor."


    Comment Letter S4 - Center for Biological Diversity, March 13, 2003

    S4-1 Responses to the detailed comments referenced in the Comment Letter are provided in the following responses.

    S4-2 See Response G-6.

    S4-3 See Response D-17.

    S4-4 See Response D-19.

    S4-5 See Response G-6.

    S4-6 See Response D-59.

    S4-7 See Responses A-3 (Lincoln's sparrow and montane species in the San Bernardino National Forest), D-24 (coast range newt), and D-48 (burrowing owl).

    S4-8 See Response T4-7.

    S4-9 Generally, areas that were not included in the MSHCP Conservation Area were not found to be necessary for the Plan to provide adequate Conservation of Covered Species to meet the Permit issuance criteria. Reference to certain geographical areas are too vague to afford a specific response (e.g., the Riverside lowlands Bioregion, which occupies a majority of the 1.26 million-acre Plan Area). Conservation in the Temescal Wash is included in the MSHCP Conservation Area. For information relating to private in-holdings in the National Forest, see Response G-23.

    S4-10 A four component Conservation Strategy is identified for each Covered Species in Section 9.2 of the Draft MSHCP, including Narrow Endemic Plant Species. The strategy for these species incorporates survey requirements as described in Sections 6.1.3 of the Draft MSHCP, recognizing that site-specific data regarding these species is required to assure that acquisition boundaries and priorities are properly defined and avoidance and mitigation measures are properly implemented. The proposed strategy is considered to be sufficient to demonstrate that the Permit issuance criteria are met.

    S4-11 See Responses G-16 and G-17.

    S4-12 See Responses G-30, G-29 and F-59.

    S4-13 See Responses G-29 and F-59.

    S4-14 See Response D-9.

    S4-15 See Responses E-42, G-20 and D4-14.

    S4-16 See Responses G-31 through G-33. As noted in the final SRP letter, the best scientific and commercial data available are not sufficient to conduct Population Viability Analyses.

    S4-17 See Responses F-61 and G-26.

    S4-18 See Responses F-61 and F-72.

    S4-19 See Response F-12.

    S4-20 The recommendation is adequately addressed by Section 23.5 of the IA. See also Responses C-54, F-52 and K-66.

    S4-21 The recommendation is adequately addressed by Section 23.5 of the IA. See also Responses C-54, F-52 and K-66.

    S4-22 The Draft EIR/EIS states, out of an abundance of caution, that, as required by CEQA, future development proposals will undergo environmental review and the project's potential environmental impacts will be identified, analyzed and mitigated. (Draft EIR/EIS, p. 1.5-6.) This analysis would include non-Covered Species as appropriate. See Responses H2-312, K-84 and R-45.

    S4-23 The MSHCP does include the payment of a Local Development Mitigation Fee in connection with all new Development. The fee may be adjusted over time as necessary to support Plan implementation. A nexus study is required to determine the amount of the fee. This study is being prepared and will be considered by the County and Cities and available to the public prior to any adoption of such a fee.

    S4-24 The suggested change is already set forth on page 6-104 of the Draft MSHCP and thus no modification is required. In any event, federal agencies have the explicit right, by regulation, to purchase or protect additional land in response to Unforeseen Circumstances. (See 50 C.F.R. §§ 17.22(b)(6) and 17.32(b)(6).)

    S4-25 Agricultural land converted to another use will be subject to MSHCP requirements. Other projects requiring discretionary and certain City ministerial approvals will also be subject to MSHCP requirements, not just when impacts will occur to unaltered land. (IA, Exh. H, § III; see Responses K-71, M2-28 and O2-21.)

    S4-26 See Responses F-46 through F-48.

    S4-27 This comment includes a large volume of appendices consisting of scientific publications and reports that are assumed to be provided to support other comments, although specific references were not made. This information does not raise issues related to the Draft MSHCP, the Draft EIR/EIS or the Draft IA, therefore no further response is necessary.

    Comment Letter T

    Comment Letter T - San Bernardino National Forest, January 14, 2003

    T-1 See Response D-16.

    T-2 See Response D-16.

    T-3 See Response D-16.

    T-4 See Response D-16.

    T-5 The text of the Cores and Linkages discussion will be revised to reflect references to mountain lion as Planning Species for Existing Cores M and B. Linkage 12 is not considered to be a viable Linkage for mountain lion because of the lack of habitat resources in Existing Linkages 5 and 6 and Proposed Constrained Linkage 23.

    T-6 The strategy for Conservation of species with primary habitat within forest areas is not solely reliant on independent management actions by the U.S. Forest Service. The Draft MSHCP includes provisions for transfer of local funding for management within the National Forest that will benefit the entire MSHCP Conservation Area. In addition, the Draft MSHCP also provides additional protections outside of the MSHCP Conservation Area for some of the species noted in this comment. For example, Lincoln's sparrow is known to nest in meadows and montane riparian/riparian scrub. Implementation of the Protection of Species Associated with Riparian/Riverine Areas and Vernal Pool Policy (see Section 6.1.2 of the Draft MSHCP) would benefit this species. For mountain yellow-legged frog, the Draft MSHCP requires additional surveys as part of the project review process for public and private projects and requires that detected populations be protected according to procedures in Section 6.3.2 of the Draft MSHCP. In addition, for many of these species, Take is limited and/or prohibited. For example, no Take of California spotted owl active nest sites is allowed by the Permit. In addition, Section 9.0 of the Plan will be revised to indicate that twelve of the Covered Species that primarily occur on Forest Service Lands will require execution of an MOU with the Forest Service regarding management pursuant to the MSHCP in order for these species to move to the list of Covered Species Adequately Conserved.

    T-7 See Response T-6.

    T-8 The Lead Agencies are aware of bald eagle observations at Lake Hemet. The guidelines for protection of riparian/riverine areas in Section 6.1.2 of the Draft MSHCP will apply to Covered Activities throughout the Plan Area, including Lake Hemet, and bald eagle is identified as one of the Covered Species benefitting from these guidelines.

    T-9 Section 3.2.1 of the Draft MSHCP calls for verification of the PQP Lands database within five years of Permit issuance, and this information will be included as part of that update.

    T-10 Language from the Species Accounts (MSHCP Volume II) regarding threats from nonnative fish and amphibians will be included in the summary provided in Table 5-2, as requested.

    T-11 Language will be added to Table 5-2 to acknowledge the proposed wildlife crossing under I-10.

    T-12 Language for the Species Accounts (MSHCP Volume II) regarding threats from recreational activities will be included in the summary provided in Table 5-2, as requested.

    T-13 See Response D-16.


    Comment Letter T2 - Sauls Company, 15 January 2003

    T2-1 This comment identifies the property to which the comment relates and states the commentor's view that Criteria modifications proposed by the comment could benefit the MSHCP.

    T2-2 The Lead Agencies believe that adequate funding exists to carry out the requirements of the MSHCP.

    T2-3 The Village proposal appears to be consistent with MSHCP objectives to conserve up to 41,000 acres of lands through voluntary contribution in return for non cash incentives. Land use entitlements must be obtained through the submission and approval of a project application. The Final MSHCP incorporates Criteria Area revisions as requested by the property owner to accommodate the Village project.

    T2-4 The Village project offers an example of how the proposed MSHCP implementation strategy can work. However, should the Village project ultimately not prove successful, it does not indicate any inherent flaw in the MSHCP funding plan or implementation strategy. The Village is only one of many projects that are anticipated to be proposed over the next 25 years.

    T2-5 See Response T2-3.


    Comment Letter T3 - Alhadeff and Solar, February 13, 2003

    T3-1 The "formal letter" referenced in the comment has been included as Comment Letter U3. See Response U3-1.


    Comment Letter T4 - U.S. Department of the Army Corps of Engineers, March 13, 2003

    T4-1 This comment describes the context within which the balance of the comments in this letter are provided below in Responses T4-2 through T4-12.

    T4-2 The Draft MSHCP and the Draft EIR/EIS both provide a quantitative analysis of Conservation and Take for each Covered Species. The species accounts contained in Volume II of the MSHCP include a detailed summary of the best scientific and commercial data available for each species and references to scientific literature used in the analysis. See Scientific Review Panel Correspondence - Review of: Final Draft Western Riverside County MSHCP Document, April 2003.

    T4-3 See Responses E-42, G-20 and D-4. The Guidelines Pertaining to the Urban/Wildlands Interface presented in Section 6.1.4 of the Draft MSHCP will be employed, as appropriate, for areas in proximity to the MSHCP Conservation Area based on the particular interface factor of concern. It is acknowledged that Edge Effects will be a management issue even with the application of the guidelines presented in Section 6.1.4. Reserve Managers will need to identify edges that are most vulnerable to specific impacts based on adjacent land uses and habitat setting, and sensitive resources and will need to be managed appropriately. The Management and Monitoring Plan in Section 5.0 of the Draft MSHCP provides detailed direction for management and monitoring within the MSHCP Conservation Area. In addition, Section 5.2.2 of the Draft MSHCP provides guidance for Reserve Management Plans that may be prepared by Reserve Managers within 5 years of Permit issuance for each Conceptual Management Unit identified in Figure 5-1 of the Draft MSHCP. Education is anticipated to be a component of management activities.

    T4-4 All of the Proposed Linkages, as well as all other features of the MSHCP Conservation Area have been considered in terms of their known or potential value to Covered Species. All of the features of the Cores and Linkages discussed in Section 3.2.3 of the Draft MSHCP are considered to have value to Covered Species. Elimination and/or replacement of Linkages is not considered necessary.

    T4-5 Inclusion of the referenced connection within the Criteria Area is not considered necessary to provide Conservation for Covered Species sufficient to meet the Permit issuance criteria. Application of the policies related to the Protection of Species Associated with Riparian/Riverine Areas and Vernal Pools, addressed in Section 6.1.2 of the Draft MSHCP would provide protections for species within the Mockingbird Canyon area.

    T4-6 Constrained Linkages 22 and 23 referenced in the comment are not suitable for large mammal movement due to presence of existing Development and freeways, including SR-60 and I-10. Large mammal movement is provided for through additional Conservation between the San Bernardino Mountains and San Jacinto Mountains provided in the Final MSHCP. See complete Responses to Comment Letters P3, Q3 and X3.

    T4-7 The Lead Agencies intend to enter into MOUs with the owners/controllers of all Public/Quasi-Public Lands within the Plan Area prior to Permit issuance to ensure that public lands are managed compatibly with species and habitat conservation. The Lead Agencies note that pursuant to FESA, CESA and other state and federal laws, public agencies have a responsibility to conduct their activities so as to not jeopardize, and in some cases affirmatively conserve, species and habitat. (See, e.g., 16 U.S.C. §§ 1531(c)(1), 1536; Cal. Fish & Game Code, §§ 2052, 2055.) In addition, these agencies also have a duty to cooperate with their federal and state counterparts in such species protection efforts. (See, e.g., 16 U.S.C. §§ 1531(a)(5), 1535; Cal Fish & Game Code, §§ 2810, 2820.)

    See Response J4-34 for further discussion of the role of existing federal and state lands within the MSHCP.

    T4-8 The MSHCP and the associated EIR/EIS do not convey any project-level approvals for Covered Activities and therefore, no analysis of their project-specific impacts is required. Therefore, it is not appropriate for the EIR/EIS to consider alternatives for the projects that would be considered Covered Activities.

    T4-9 Feasible is a defined term in the Definitions and Acronyms Section of the MSHCP. Section 6.1.2 of the Draft MSHCP addresses Covered Species requirements in Riparian/Riverine and Vernal Pool areas throughout the Plan Area not just within the Cores and Linkages referenced in the comment. Section 6.1.2 of the Draft MSHCP also summarizes the relationship of the Plan to existing wetland regulations and acknowledges that CWA Section 401, 402 and 404, CFG Code Section 1600 and Section 7 of FESA will continue to apply. In addition, as stated in the MSHCP, other existing regulations related to wetland habitats such as the Porter Cologne Act will continue to apply. Section 7 approvals are intended to be carried out in conformance with the process outlined in Section 14.9 of the IA. Section 6.1.2 of the Draft MSHCP acknowledges the potential future availability of SAMP data and states that these data will be incorporated in the MSHCP as appropriate.

    T4-10 See Response T4-9.

    T4-11 There are many features of the MSHCP that provide processes for monitoring and reporting of Plan implementation to the Wildlife Agencies. Most notably, Sections 6.1 and 6.7 of the Draft MSHCP provide a detailed discussion of the process for local implementation of Reserve Assembly, and Reserve Assembly accounting, respectively. Section 6.6 of the Draft MSHCP additionally describes the Cooperative Organizational Structure for Implementation and Management of the MSHCP. This structure provides for effective coordination between the Permittees and the Wildlife Agencies. The Draft MSHCP provides the Service with adequate opportunities to review individual projects to verify their compliance with the MSHCP.

    T4-12 See Responses I4-13 and I4-14.

    Comment Letter U

    Comment Letter U - Department of Transportation Division of Aeronautics, December 19, 2002

    U-1 This comment summarizes components of the MSHCP. It should be noted that, while the initial list of species for which Conservation was considered in the MSHCP totaled 247, the Draft MSHCP proposes Take Authorization for 146 species.

    U-2 This comment states that one of the roles of the Division of Aeronautics is protection of airports from incompatible uses. This information is noted.

    U-3 The MSHCP is a criteria-based Plan that does not designate land use or change designation of other General Plans or land use plans. Therefore, conflicts with the referenced ALUC Plan are not anticipated.

    U-4 The MSHCP is intended to provide for Conservation of Covered Species within the MSHCP Plan Area. However, it is not anticipated that reserve management decisions would result in establishment of conditions that would foster increased bird populations in areas where mortality hazards for birds would be expected, such as in the vicinity of airports. The recommendations provided in the Comment Letter and its attachments are included in the public record for the MSHCP and will be considered, as determined appropriate in the implementation of the Plan.

    U-5 See Response U-4.


    Comment Letter U2 - Driscoll & Tomich, 15 January 2003

    U2-1 The MSHCP does not zone or for that matter "downzone" any property. However, the commentor's property is located within the Criteria Area. The Lead Agencies disagree that location of property within the Criteria Area takes away any use or development of property.

    U2-2 Establishment of the Criteria Area does not "prohibit" development on any properties. The MSHCP is based on the best scientific and commercially available data. See Response H2-46.

    U2-3 The comment references certain property and no further response is necessary.

    U2-4 The MSHCP has not changed any land use designations from single-family density to open space. The procedures established under the MSHCP are not a constitutional "Taking." (See Response H2-41.) Furthermore, it is important to note that the Local Permittees retain their local land use jurisdiction and responsibility for evaluating development applications for consistency with MSHCP requirements. (See Draft MSHCP, § 6.6.2(A), (C).)

    U2-5 See Response U2-1. The MSHCP does not prevent the use of the commentor's property as mitigation or put any limitations on the selling of mitigation credits by the commentor or any other third party.

    U2-6 The Criteria Area defines the area from which the MSHCP Conservation Area will occur through the purchase or voluntary Conservation of lands in return for incentives that compensate the property owner for the properties fair market value. The property owner should review the Criteria for the Area Plan they are located in to determine what portion if any of their property is called out as potentially desirable for Conservation. The Criteria Area does not prohibit a property owner from proposing Development on their property. See Response Q-1.z

    U2-7 Inclusion of property within the Criteria Area does not mean that the County "wants" the property. Should a property owner choose to initiate discussions with the Local

    U2-1 Permittees concerning the acquisition of his/her property through the HANS Process set forth in the MSHCP, a determination will be made at that time as to whether it will be needed for inclusion in the MSHCP Conservation Area. Alternatively, should a property owner choose to initiate a development application on the property, a determination will be made at that time as to whether any portion of the property will be needed for Conservation. If a determination is made that the property is needed for Conservation, then a negotiated purchase of the property at fair market value will occur.

    The property owner through the HANS Process can negotiate the sale of their property if that is their desire. Also see Response U2-6.

    U2-8 See Response U2-4. Because of the scope of the MSHCP, it is too speculative at this time to identify with any certainty the specific boundaries of the MSHCP Conservation Area. (See Responses H2-3, H2-11, H2-43, H2-85, and H2-86.) The HANS and Criteria Review processes, and in some cases the Criteria Refinement Process, will be used as the means for acquisition of fee title, conservation easements, and other interests in property. Finally, it is the stated policy of the MSHCP to provide just compensation to property owners who elect to sell lands to be included in the Additional Reserve Lands. (Draft MSHCP, § 6.1.1.)

    U2-9 The Lead Agencies appreciate the comment and fully respect the rights of property owners under the Constitution. The Lead Agencies are also fully committed to reviewing and considering each comment submitted. As explained in the Responses contained herein and elsewhere, the MSHCP does not violate CEQA, NEPA, FESA, CESA or any other applicable state or federal law.


    Comment Letter U3 - Alhadeff and Solar, February 13, 2003

    U3-1 Section 3.3.1 of the Draft MSHCP specifically states that TR28484/GPA521 (the subject project) has received approval for the County Board of Supervisors and has been planned in consideration of the requirements of the MSHCP. Therefore, Section 3.3.1 states that future construction of this project consistent with its approvals would be considered to be consistent with the MSHCP guidelines and Criteria.


    Comment Letter U4 - South Coast Wildlands Project, March 12, 2003

    U4-1 The comment sets forth the commentor's mission. The comment regarding effectiveness of the MSHCP is addressed below. No further response is necessary.

    U4-2 The commentor correctly notes that the exhibits contained in the Draft MSHCP generally depict only the MSHCP Plan Area. However, lack of a specific figure showing other regional conservation planning efforts is not an indication that those planning efforts were not considered in the MSHCP development and analysis. In fact, Draft EIR/EIS (Section 4.1) does include an exhibit showing the context of surrounding regional conservation planning efforts and contains an analysis that demonstrates consideration was given to other regional conservation planning in the MSHCP. The RCA will be responsible for implementing the MSHCP, not the Riverside County Planning Department.

    U4-3 The MSHCP has been prepared pursuant to the requirements of FESA and the NCCP Act. These requirements relate to a defined study area within which a Permit for Take Authorization would be valid. Therefore, the analysis in the MSHCP necessarily discusses Conservation in the context of the Plan Area boundaries, because conservation efforts outside of the Plan Area cannot be assured by the Permittees. While Conservation in adjacent plans is not assured by the MSHCP, every effort has been made to plan based on the assumption that adjacent regional conservation plans would remain in place. The figures provided regarding the size of Core Areas when considered in conjunction with Conservation provided outside of the Plan Area provide additional support for Conservation of those Core Areas.

    U4-4 This comment incorrectly characterizes the conservation planning process undertaken for the MSHCP. GIS was an important tool in the conservation planning process, but was not the sole basis for determining the appropriate reserve design. A detailed discussion of the conservation planning process is provided in Section 3.1 of the Draft MSHCP.

    U4-5 The Final MSHCP will be revised to address the issue of connectivity at both of these locations.

    U4-6 The South Coast Missing Linkages report was considered an important reference in the preparation of the Draft MSHCP.

    U4-7 See Response U4-6.

    U4-8 See Responses U4-5 and U4-6.

    U4-9 See Response U4-6.

    U4-10 See Response U4-6.

    U4-11 See Responses U4-5 and U4-6.

    U4-12 See Response U4-6.

    U4-13 See Responses U4-5 and U4-6.

    U4-14 See Responses U4-5 and U4-6.

    U4-15 See Responses U4-5 and U4-6.

    U4-16 Cismontane Alkali Marsh comprises 3% (40 acres) of the total Conservation acreage within the 1.26 million-acre MSHCP Plan Area. As noted, for ease of understanding, the MSHCP provides vegetation data in "collapsed" categories. It is not considered inappropriate to summarize data in an EIR/EIS document. The conservation analysis for each Covered Species considered the best scientific and commercial data available, including "uncollapsed" vegetation data.

    U4-17 See Response G-6. The MSHCP analysis was based on meeting the needs of each of the 146 Covered Species, not pre-determined percentages of any particular Vegetation Community.

    U4-18 The Lead Agencies will continue to follow the progress of the South Coast Missing Linkages report.

    Comment Letter V

    Comment Letter V - Department of Transportation - District 8, 15 January 2003

    V-1 The analysis of future freeway improvements was based on lane configurations and right-of-way assumptions provided by Caltrans. It is understood that these assumptions included a "worst case" estimate of right-of-way needs for the facilities, due to the lack of specific design information available at this time. Therefore, the additional lanes beyond those specifically stated in Section 7 of the Draft MSHCP that may be accommodated within the identified right-of-way estimates would also be considered Covered Activities.

    V-2 The analysis conducted for the Circulation Element roads includes future interchange improvements at freeways. Clarification of this fact has been provided in Section 7.0 of the Final MSHCP.

    V-3 The Lead Agencies will continue to work with all Permittees and other interested parties in development of the Final MSHCP.

    V-4 The Lead Agencies appreciate Caltrans' comments and will continue to work cooperatively to provide for the future transportation needs of this region.


    Comment Letter V2 - Sweeney Law Corporation, January 7, 2003

    V2-1 The commentor appears to be referencing Section 2.8.1 of the Draft EIR/EIS, which describes an alternative that was considered at one point in the MSHCP planning process, but was eliminated from further analysis in the EIR/EIS. As noted in Section 2.8.1, elements from this alternative were incorporated into the proposed MSHCP (e.g., the Narrow Endemic Plant Species survey requirements). Land use controls provided in the Area Plans do not provide sufficient assurances for Conservation to meet the requirements of an HCP or an NCCP, as the MSHCP is designed to accomplish.

    V2-2 CETAP is not the subject of this EIR/EIS. It is not clear how the flooding of the wildlife area is relevant under the MSHCP.

    V2-3 The MSHCP does not "oppose" a channel. A flood control project is envisioned in the Criteria for the San Jacinto River described in Section 7.3.7 of the Draft MSHCP. The issue the commentor is addressing would need to be evaluated in the analysis of any flood control project proposed.

    V2-4 The species accounts for Covered Species applicable to this portion of the MSHCP Plan Area included in Volume II, Section B of the Draft MSHCP provide quantitative information regarding anticipated soils conservation and call for maintenance of hydrologic processes within areas to be conserved. Soils become established over hundreds or thousands of years of erosion and deposition and, depending on the depth of the soil profile, may be minimally to maximally affected by surface activities. Historic disturbances along the San Jacinto River do not appear to have affected soils or hydrology in this area such that sensitive plant species addressed in the MSHCP no longer occur in these areas based on species occurrence data in the MSHCP data base. The MSHCP generally proposes Conservation with where species occurrences, appropriate soils and appropriate hydrology occur together. Other areas, such as those referenced in the comment, may have certain appropriate characteristics such as soils, but may not have as high value as other areas proposed for Conservation due to other factors.

    V2-5 Existing land uses are discussed in Section 2.1 of the Draft EIR/EIS. Figure 2.1 provides a map of existing land uses in western Riverside County. In addition, Table 2D compares existing and planned land uses within the proposed MSHCP Plan Area. It was determined in the EIR/EIS that implementation of the proposed MSHCP would not result in any significant environmental effects related to existing land use. As required by CEQA, the Draft EIR/EIS briefly discusses insignificant environmental effects related to land use in Section 1.5.5. (State CEQA Guidelines, § 15128.) Further, page 7-12 of the Draft MSHCP states:

    "As discussed in Section 3.0 of this document, public and private Development within the Criteria Area that is determined to be consistent with the Criteria is considered a Covered Activity."

    However, inclusion in the Criteria Area has no effect on the validity of existing development agreements that provide vested rights. (IA, Exh. H, p. 2) See Response H2-15. Moreover, existing legal land use activities are not impacted by the MSHCP and thus, have not been subject to its provisions.

    It is unclear which alternative the commentor believes the Lead Agencies "ignore and fails to discuss approved land uses" and thus, the Lead Agencies are unable to respond.

    The Draft EIR/EIS does not contain any new information or inaccuracies that require recirculation of the document nor are the Lead Agencies aware of any facts that would require significant revision or recirculation of the Draft EIR/EIS. See also Response H2-352.


    Comment Letter V3 - San Diego Gas & Electric, January 14, 2003

    V3-1 The comment summarizes certain operations and no response is required.

    V3-2 The RCA is the entity that will provide regional coordination of MSHCP implementation (see Section 6 of the Draft MSHCP). Neither SDG&E nor SCG are Permittees under the MSHCP. Therefore, conveyance of Take Authorization through the MSHCP for any activities undertaken by SDG&E and SCG could occur through a Local Permittee via a discretionary or certain City ministerial land use approval and evaluation against the Criteria, or through the voluntary process for Participating Special Entities outlined in Section 11.8 of the Draft Implementing Agreement.

    V3-3 See Response V3-2. Section 7 of the Draft MSHCP describes how future gas and electric utilities relate to Covered Activities.

    V3-4 It is anticipated that the Local Development Mitigation Fee (LDMF) will be imposed by the County and Cities on new residential, commercial, industrial development projects and public projects within the Plan Area. LDMF fees are distinctly different from those fees that would be paid by Participating Special Entities. Utility projects--such as SDG&E facilities-that choose to seek Take Authorization as a Participating Special Entity, would to be required to pay a fee in the amount of 5% of total capital costs or implement other mitigation as agreed with the RCA and the Wildlife Agencies (IA, Section 11.8.3). If the CPUC prohibits cities from collecting fees of this nature from utility companies who require discretionary or certain City ministerial approvals, then a prospective Participating Special Entity would be directed to the RCA to submit their application for the proposed activity. Although the mitigation requirements set forth in Section 11.8.3 of the Implementing Agreement provide guidance concerning the amount of mitigation expected from prospective Participating Special Entities, it leaves some flexibility for negotiation on a project-by-project basis between the applicant, the RCA, and the Wildlife Agencies.

    V3-5 Determination of biological equivalent or superior Conservation would be determined on a case-by-case basis. Whether equivalent/superior Conservation is achieved through "offsite mitigation" is a matter to be determined in consultation with the applicable Permittee, based on project and site-specific consideration.

    V3-6 See Response V3-2.

    V3-7 The language "years with at least normal rainfall" does not require a definition, as the meaning is clearly self-evident. Records of rainfall are maintained by a variety of official sources, any of which can be referenced in conducting the habitat suitability assessments.

    V3-8 The Draft MSHCP states that surveys shall be conducted in accordance with established protocols when such protocols are available. For species without established protocols, the best professional judgement of a qualified biologist would be used.

    V3-9/10 Public utilities such as SDG&E have avenues other than the MSHCP by which they are able to obtain Take Authorization and participation in the Plan is voluntary. The Implementing Agreement sets forth the fundamental terms by which a public utility may avail themselves of the MSHCP. If the utility believes that this mitigation is not equitable, it is under no obligation to participate and can pursue other options with the Wildlife Agencies. There is no schedule or table relating different activities to the different fees. See also Response O-6.

    V3-11 Each of the Local Permittees has a well established process for determining completeness of development applications, pursuant to applicable laws, ordinances and policies. A "universalize(d)" application is neither required nor necessary.

    V3-12 Section 4(b)(2) of FESA, 16 U.S.C. section 1533(b)(2), sets forth the factors to be utilized by the Service in designating Critical Habitat for listed species. The Service retains the sole authority and responsibility to determine whether Critical Habitat should be reduced or eliminated for the Covered Species within the Plan Area. Unlike future designations of Critical Habitat, which will be reviewed in light of the fact that the MSHCP provides a substantial level of protection for species (see Draft MSHCP, § 6.9), existing Critical Habitat was in place before the Plan was approved. See also Response K-13. In addition, revisions to Critical Habitat must follow the same, sometimes lengthy procedural steps under FESA that are used to originally designate Critical Habitat. (See 16 U.S.C. § 1533.) Based on these circumstances, the Lead Agencies believe that the USFWS commitment "to the maximum extent allowable after public review and comment" to "reassess and revise the boundaries of existing designated and proposed Critical Habitat of Covered Species with the MSHCP boundaries after its approval" is substantial and appropriate.

    V3-13 See Response V3-2.

    V3-14 See Response V3-2.

    V3-15 See Response V3-2.

    V3-16 See Response V3-2.

    V3-17 See Responses V3-9/V3-10 above.

    V3-18 As is set forth in Section 11.8 of the IA and pages 6-53 to 6-54 of the Draft MSHCP, the RCA, not the Local Permittees, would consider applications from Participating Special Entities for Take Authorization. If a discretionary or certain City ministerial approval is required from one of the Local Permittees, an applicant will be required to comply with that Local Permittees' general plans etc. See also Response O-2.


    Comment Letter V4-Bureau of Land Management, March 14, 2003

    V4-1 This comment raises no issues related to the Draft MSHCP, the Draft EIR/EIS or the Draft IA and no further response is necessary.

    V4-2 The Lead Agencies appreciate and support BLM's long-term objective of pursuing "land tenure adjustments" to facilitate more efficient management. The Lead Agencies acknowledge and will work with BLM to consolidate land holdings for management purposes consistent with the long-term management goals and objectives of the MSHCP.

    V4-3 See Response V4-2.

    Comment Letter W

    Comment Letter W - United States Environmental Protection Agency, January 15, 2003

    W-1 The comment period on the MSHCP, IA and EIS was extended by the United States Fish and Wildlife Service. The Lead Agencies have responded to all comments received during the extended comment period.


    Comment Letter W2 - United Five Star Capital Corp., January 15, 2003

    W2-1 The MSHCP Criteria Area simply identifies an area within which individual project applications will be reviewed for potential Reserve Assembly opportunities in the context of the incentives-based, willing sellers Reserve Assembly approach incorporated in the MSHCP. The MSHCP does not include provisions for "voluntary" removal from the Criteria Area.

    W2-2 The MSHCP does not alter the zoning on any property.

    W2-3 See Responses W2-1 and W2-2. The MSHCP does not place restrictions on the existing or planned land use of any property. If and when the MSHCP is adopted, Local Permittees will review development applications for consistency with the MSHCP concurrently with all other normal development review requirements.

    W2-4 The MSHCP does not alter zoning or the process for changing a zone in the future.

    W2-5 The MSHCP does not prevent the commentor from using his property for mitigation or to sell mitigation rights/credits to others.


    Comment Letter W3 - Endangered Habitats League, February 17, 2003

    W3-1 Responses to the specific addition comments provided in this letter are included in Responses W3-2 through W3-6.

    W3-2 See Responses G-11, G-25, G-26, F-61 and F-72.

    W3-3 The MSHCP Monitoring Plan included in Section 5.3 of the Draft MSHCP incorporates surveys for all Covered Species. These surveys would be combined with the surveys called for in Sections 6.1.3 and 6.3.2 of the Draft MSHCP. Species-specific survey boundaries are identified on the maps in Sections 6.1.3 and 6.3.2 and relevant parameters identified in the comment such as Vegetation Communities, soil types, Bioregion, and elevation were used to develop the maps. It is unclear how the suggestions in the comment differ substantially from features already incorporated in the MSHCP. See Responses J-2, G-11, G-25, G-26, F-61 and F-72.

    W3-4 As discussed in Sections 6.1.3 and 6.3.2 of the Draft MSHCP, survey requirements during the Reserve Assembly process are identified for those species for which it was determined that sufficient information is not currently available to ensure that the MSHCP Global Biological Goal and Conservation Strategy identified for those species will be met. Information from surveys was determined to be necessary for identified survey species to provide such assurances. For the species identified in the Comment, it was determined that sufficient information is currently available to appropriately define individual Conservation Strategies for those species to ensure that the MSHCP Global Biological Goal for those species is met. For example, for San Bernardino flying squirrel, suitable habitat within the Plan Area occurs primarily within Forest Service lands. The survey requirements identified in Sections 6.1.3 and 6.3.2 do not apply to these lands and these lands would not be surveyed as part of the Reserve Assembly process. However, these lands would be within the MSHCP Conservation Area and surveys for all Covered Species will occur within the MSHCP Conservation Area as part of the Monitoring Plan presented in Section 5.3 of the Draft MSHCP. Anecdotal observations of western pond turtle and northern harrier (breeding) would be recorded as part of the mapping efforts conducted in accordance with Section 6.1.2 of the Draft MSHCP. The species-specific objectives for Delhi sands flower loving fly include potential survey requirements for this species depending upon the conservation approach selected by the Local Permittees. With respect to quino and cactus wren, substantial survey information is available for these species within the Plan Area and the Lead Agencies determined this information was sufficient to identify Conservation Strategies for these species. Surveys for these species, as for all Covered Species, will be conducted within the MSHCP Conservation Area in accordance with the Monitoring Plan in Section 5.3 of the Draft MSHCP. See Response G-16 for discussion of golden eagle.

    W3-5 See Responses G-15, G-16, G-17 and complete Responses to Comment Letter L4.

    W3-6 See Response G-26.


    Comment Letter W4 -Gresham, Savage, Nolan & Tilden, on behalf of Wilson Creek Development, LLC and Mr. Joe Gonzalez, March 13, 2003

    W4-1 See Response O2-1.

    W4-2 See Responses O2-5 and O2-6. No features of the MSHCP would force the referenced mitigation bank to be liquidated or preclude continuation of the activities referenced in the Comment. Section 7.4.1 of the Draft MSHCP identifies scientific research as an allowable use within the MSHCP Conservation Area.

    W4-3 No features of the MSHCP would interfere with or prohibit existing management activities at the Wilson Creek Mitigation Bank and the existing management activities are likely consistent with management activities proposed for the MSHCP Conservation Area in Section 5.0 of the Plan. Should the Wilson Creek Mitigation Bank ultimately become part of the MSHCP Conservation Area, appropriate management for these lands can be determined. See Response O2-5.

    W4-4 The Lead Agencies note that there are no executed agreements formalizing mitigation banks as the commentor asserts in this comment. Thus no banking agreement has been executed between representatives of the WCMB and the Wildlife Agencies (see Responses W4-11 and O2-1 through O2-8). Furthermore, the County has never been a party to a WCMB transaction. Rather, the County routinely conditions land use development projects to mitigate impacts to listed species by obtaining Take Authorization from the Wildlife Agencies prior to obtaining a grading permit. Thereafter, any subsequent transaction between a project applicant with mitigation/Take Authorization needs and the mitigation area/bank owner are a private business transaction. This should not be construed as the County's implicit endorsement of such lands. There is nothing in the MSHCP that "contravenes" or "hinders" the continued operation of the existing conservation banks and mitigation areas. See Responses O2-1 and O2-2.

    W4-5 While Wilson Creek Mitigation Bank, in the course of an independent business venture, has provided opportunities for private development projects to expedite their project specific mitigation requirements through the purchase of credits, the Lead Agencies strongly disagree with the commentor's assertion that the Wilson Creek Mitigation Bank properties, and the management thereof, provide "substantial public benefit"beyondwhat will be provided through implementation of the MSHCP. See also Response W4-2.

    W4-6 The Lead Agencies disagree with the commentor's assertion that the Draft MSHCP process would force Wilson Creek Mitigation Bank out of business. Recognizing the long-term conservation value of the conservation banks/mitigation areas, it is anticipated that these lands, if proposed for acquisition, would be among the priority acquisitions of the RCA. See Responses O2-5, O2-6 and W4-2.

    W4-7 This comment reflects information provided in the Draft MSHCP.

    W4-8 The MSHCP does not force owners of mitigation banks to "liquidate" nor does it impair their ability to continue doing business in the future. Additionally, the owners may choose to initiate the HANS Process. Recognizing the long-term conservation value of the conservation banks/mitigation areas, it is anticipated that these lands, if proposed for acquisition, would be among the priority acquisitions of the RCA. Negotiations for the acquisition of conservation banks and mitigation areas could involve creative financing, which could incorporate the use of mitigation fees. Should the RCA enter into a negotiation with an owner of a conservation bank/mitigation area, including lands that are subject to banking agreements or conservation easements and for which a management agreement exists, the RCA would negotiate the management obligation along with the acquisition. See Responses O2-1 through O2-8.

    W4-9 See Response W4-2. Proposed future conservation banks or mitigation areas will be evaluated based upon the official policies adopted by the California Resources Agency and the California EPA as well as the supplemental policy issued by the USFWS and CDFG for the NCCP region of Southern California. Proposals will not be denied because of the MSHCP nor will the approval process be changed in any way by the MSHCP.

    The Lead Agencies disagree that the MSHCP will "cause the prompt liquidation of all private conservation habitat plans." The MSHCP specifically states that private parties may continue to establish private conservation banks or mitigation areas. (Draft MSHCP, p. 4-16.) The fact that the Permittees are not required to purchase any credits in future conservation banks or mitigation areas does not mean that future banks or mitigation areas are prohibited or discouraged or that current owners are forced to sell. In fact, as discussed in Response W4-8 above, owners of current properties can continue to sell credits as they see fit. Similarly, owners of future properties may choose to participate in the HANS Process or may choose to sell credits to the public.

    W4-10 The Lead Agencies agree that the last sentence quoted from Section 4.6.2 of the Draft MSHCP applies to both future private conservation banks and existing conservation banks and mitigation areas. However, the Lead Agencies disagree that the existing conservation banks would be forced to liquidate their assets (see Responses O2-5, O2-6, W4-6, W4-8 and W4-9).

    W4-11 See Responses A-4 and L-1. The Lead Agencies do not anticipate that the Wilson Creek private conservation habitat business will be forced to liquidate in the event that the MSHCP is adopted. The MSHCP is intended to provide mitigation for private development projects that would have adverse impacts to Covered Species. Non-private projects, such as road improvement projects, U.S. Army Corps of Engineers projects, utilities projects, water district projects, school district projects and other projects that would require a Section 7 consultation pursuant to the Federal Endangered Species Act may require mitigation for impacts to sensitive habitats or listed species, which could be provided by the aforementioned Wilson Creek private conservation habitat business. Thus, as such public and/or federal projects are anticipated to occur in the future, the MSHCP would not prevent Wilson Creek from realizing profits relating to the provision and maintenance of conservation habitat.

    The commentor states that Wilson Creek, if it suffered a loss of future profits, would cease being able to support employees and would breach its contract to the CNLM. Lands set aside as mitigation with USFWS and/or CDFG approval (as appropriate) are required to be set aside and managed "in perpetuity." The cost of purchasing such mitigation lands is intended to provide for both the cost of the land and the cost of managing the land.

    The owners of mitigation areas may choose to initiate the HANS Process as set forth in Section 6.1.1 of the Draft MSHCP. If such lands are acquired pursuant to this process, they would also be managed "in perpetuity." It should be noted that USFWS and CDFG have not approved any "conservation banks" in western Riverside County. Mitigation provided by entities such as Wilson Creek has been allowed on a case-by-case basis, as certain portions of the habitat intended to be used as mitigation have been evaluated and deemed appropriate.

    W4-12 See Response W4-11. The MSHCP, if adopted, will not preclude the use of the Wilson Creek Mitigation Bank for habitat conservation and mitigation purposes. Thus, the concerns expressed by the commentor regarding the potential closure of private conservation habitat programs resulting from the MSHCP are not anticipated to occur. In Section 5.0 of the MSHCP, provisions for management and monitoring are provided that will adequately address the needs of the Covered Species.

    W4-13 Responses to the comments made in the January 15, 2003 comment letter are provided under Responses O2.

    W4-14 See Responses O2-6, W4-5, W4-6 and W4-8.

    W4-15 See Responses O2-2, O2-5 and O2-6. The HANS Process is for willing sellers. If individuals do not wish to sell property and cease operation of activities that conflict with the MSHCP Conservation Area, then they do not need to avail themselves of HANS.

    W4-16 See Responses W4-2, W4-8 and W4-9. It is unclear what the commentor means by allowing private mitigation banks "to be able to effectively participate with the other environmental agencies and Riverside County Planning Department for reasonable access to the mitigation fees so long as Units in those programs remain available."

    W4-17 See Responses L-1, O2-3, W4-11 and W4-12.

    Comment X

    Comment Letter X - United States Army Corps of Engineers, January 15, 2003

    X-1 The comment period on the MSHCP, IA, and EIS was extended by the United States Fish and Wildlife Service. The Lead Agencies have responded to all comments received during the extended comment period.


    Comment Letter X2 - Renaissance Development, January 14, 2003

    X2-1 The land use designation of Open Space Conservation is not an overlay, but a General Plan designation. It is not related to the MSHCP. The Lead Agencies are unclear regarding the reference to "MSHCP proposed habitat map."

    X2-2 The determinations of what lands are required for the MSHCP is determined by the application of the MSHCP Criteria, not a "Conservation Overlay" such as referenced in the comment. The Lead Agencies are unclear regarding the reference to a "Conservation Overlay". Regarding the "macro approach" to mapping for the MSHCP, see Responses D-17 through D-19.

    X2-3 See Response X2-1.


    Comment Letter X3 - Dr. Claudia Luke, Reserve Director of Santa Margarita Ecological Reserve, February 13, 2003

    X3-1 The Lead Agencies have reviewed the attached draft Santa Ana-Palomar Mountains Linkage Conservation Design Plan and have considered the information provided. The Final MSHCP includes additional features to address the issues discussed in the study related to the MSHCP Plan Area. See Response D-16.

    X3-2 In addition to the Core Areas mentioned in this comment, the MSHCP also contributes connectivity between the Santa Ana and Palomar Mountains through a variety of upland and riparian connections. These connections are discussed below:

    As discussed in the attachment to the letter, the Santa Ana-Palomar Mountains Linkage Conservation Design Plan, the Santa Ana Mountains Core Area is protected by the Trabuco Ranger District in the Cleveland National Forest in the north, and by Marine Corps Base Camp Pendleton in the south. The following describes MSHCP connectivity from these two major Core Areas of the Santa Ana Mountains east to the Palomar Mountains.

    Existing Core B is composed of Cleveland National Forest that is linked to the Trabuco Ranger District. From Existing Core B, Proposed Linkage 9 (Tenaja Corridor) provides a mosaic of upland and wetland Habitats that provide Live-In Habitat and movement for a number of species connecting to Existing Core F (Santa Rosa Plateau Ecological Reserve). The MSHCP also provides Constrained Linkages 9, 10, 11, and 12 between Existing Core F and areas in San Diego County that contribute to the Santa Ana-Palomar Linkage. These Constrained Linkages may serve as one component of a larger movement corridor for mountain lions. An upland connection is provided from Existing Core F in the north to Existing Core G (Santa Margarita Ecological Reserve) in the south through Linkage 10. This Linkage is nearly a mile wide and thus provides Live-In Habitat for many species. This Linkage provides movement for species such as bobcat and mountain lion. The MSHCP would also provide a riparian connection between Existing Cores F and G through Proposed Constrained Linkage 13 (Murrieta Creek). Murrieta Creek and Temecula Creek merge to form the mainstem of the Santa Margarita River, a major riparian corridor that flows southwest into the Santa Ana Mountains and Camp Pendleton before emptying into the Pacific Ocean. The Santa Margarita River is protected through habitat conversion along most of its 30 miles, and is included in the MSHCP in Existing Core G.

    The MSHCP provides continued connection to the Palomar Mountains from the terminus Murrieta and Temecula Creeks, through Proposed Constrained Linkage 14 (portions of Temecula and Pechanga Creeks). Proposed Constrained Linkage 14 connects Existing Core G and Proposed Linkage 10 to the west to Existing Linkage A in the south. This Constrained Linkage bifurcates and may be used to move directly to the east, along Temecula Creek, or to the southeast, along Pechanga Creek to Existing Linkage A (BLM land). Temecula Creek does not provide good linkage between the Santa Ana and Palomar ranges as riparian vegetation terminates from SR 79 to Vail Lake, shy of the Palomar Core Area. Pechanga Creek provides connection to Existing Linkage A, which provides connection to Rural Mountainous land adjacent to the Palomar Mountains in the Cleveland National Forest. Existing Linkage A may be used to move from Pechanga Creek south into San Diego County or to the east, to Rural Mountainous land. Existing agriculture or urban developments do not constrain Linkage A, which is largely surrounded by a planned land use designation of Rural Mountainous. Linkage A likely provides for movement of common mammals such as bobcat and mountain lion.

    In addition, the Final MSHCP has been revised to provide additional connectivity in the southwestern portion of the Plan Area. See Response D-16.

    X3-3 This comment is reflected in the text revisions provided in the Final MSHCP. See Response X3-2.

    X3-4 See Response X3-2. The Final MSHCP has been revised to reflect the connectivity issues raised in this comment.

    X3-5 See Response X3-2.

    X3-6 This comment is provided in support of features included in the reserve design for the MSHCP. No further response is necessary.

    X3-7 See Response X3-1.


    Comment Letter X4-University of California, Riverside by Nunney, Reznick, Rotenberry, Waser, & Price dated 3/11/03

    X4-1 This letter is a comment letter on a specific project apparently being processed by the City of Riverside. This is not a comment letter on the MSHCP, EIR/EIS, or IA. For a discussion of the Linkage addressed in this letter, see complete Responses to Comment Letter S.

    Comment Letter Y

    Comment Letter Y - Department of Parks and Recreation - OHMVR Division mistakenly dated 1/15/02, should be 2003

    Y-1 The commentor refers to the proposed off-highway vehicle (OHV) park area at Laborde Canyon as being located on property "formerly" owned by the Lockheed Corporation. In fact, this site is currently owned by the Lockheed Corporation. The Lead Agencies have included the revised language proposed by the commentor in Section 7.3.6 of the Final MSHCP.

    Y-2 See Response Y-1.

    Y-3 See Response Y-1.


    Comment Letter Y2 - Golden Era Productions, January 14, 2003

    Y2-1 This comment describes a property for which the commentor has an interest and no further response is necessary.

    Y2-2 As noted in the Draft MSHCP, the Criteria Area represents a large area within which the Criteria will be applied, and is much larger than the actual area desired for Conservation. It is acknowledged that developed lands occur within the Criteria Area. Conservation is not being sought on those developed lands.

    Y2-3 The Criteria Area of approximately 310,000 acres includes much more land than is necessary to acquire the 153,000 acres of Additional Reserve Lands. The Lead Agencies would be happy to work with the property owner to identify what Conservation (if any) may be desirable on the subject property.

    Y2-4 Figure 6-5 of the Draft MSHCP does not indicate the physical presence of the species referenced in the comment on the commentor's property. Figure 6-5 simply identifies mammal species survey areas based on general habitat features, not specific parcels and is not indicate the presence of a particular species within the entire survey boundary. As stated in Section 6.3.2 of the Draft MSHCP, surveys are proposed to be conducted for the mammal species shown on Figure 6-5 only within suitable habitat in the generalized survey area. A biologist would determine if a particular property is suitable habitat for the species under consideration. Developed lands and golf courses are not generally considered to be suitable habitat for the species mentioned in the comment.

    Y2-5 The Lead Agencies will work with Golden Era on the location of any trails in this area. The safety of trail users is a consideration in the location of trails. While the Lead Agencies generally agree with the commentor, the actual location of trails is beyond the scope of the MSHCP and will be addressed by the County in any subsequent development applications by Golden Era or others.


    Comment Letter Y3 - Jud Monroe, Adjusting the WRC-MSHCP

    Y3-1 See Responses G-15, G-16, G-17 and complete Responses to Comment Letters Z3 and L4.


    Comment Letter Y4 - Gresham, Savage, Nolan and Tilden on behalf of Jon and Linda Prun, March 14, 2003

    Y4-1 This comment does not raise any issues related to the Draft MSHCP, the Draft EIR/EIS or the Draft Implementing Agreement and as such, no additional response is necessary.

    Y4-2 This comment does not raise any issues related to the Draft MSHCP, the Draft EIR/EIS or the Draft Implementing Agreement and as such, no additional response is necessary.

    Y4-3 The Lead Agencies disagree with the comment and believe the MSHCP project description fully complies with applicable laws, is sufficiently detailed, and accurately reflects the MSHCP requirements and potential impacts. See Response H2-11. The commentor has not provided enough information regarding the alleged inaccuracies of the project description to allow a more specific response.

    Y4-4 The Draft MSHCP was developed in accordance with the standards for information for HCPs and NCCPs requiring use of the best scientific and commercial data available. See Responses H2-11 and D-17 through D-19.

    Y4-5 This comment purports to summarize federal law. The CEQA Regulations speak for themselves and no further response is necessary.

    Y4-6 The Draft MSHCP was developed in accordance with the standards for information for HCPs and NCCPs requiring use of the best scientific and commercial data available. See Responses H2-11 and D-17 through D-19.

    Y4-7 See Responses D-17 through D-19, H2-46, and H2-98.

    Y4-8 One of the primary objectives of the MSHCP planning effort is to provide assurances to property owners that future listing of species as threatened or endangered will not require additional financial or regulatory burdens. To qualify as an NCCP and to receive the benefits of the federal "no surprises" policy, the MSHCP is required to address a broader range of species than those that are currently listed. See Response H2-219.

    Y4-9 The commentor offers no evidence that the property in question lacks conservation value, but nevertheless expresses concern that if, through site-specific biological studies, it is discovered that the property is not suitable for Conservation, that the burden would be on the property owner to provide alternative Conservation. Conservation value has been determined based on a number of factors, including but not limited to vegetation coverage, species occurrence, soils composition, slope and elevation, in addition to reserve design considerations that include habitat block size, configuration and linkage. If through a site-specific study, it is clearly demonstrated that the conservation value sought in the Criteria cannot be achieved because of the absence of resources, the substantial alteration to a Linkage by offsite Development or other reasonable factors, then a Permittee could make a determination that Development within areas proposed for Conservation would not be inconsistent with the Criteria.

    Y4-10 See Responses Y4-4 through Y4-9. The Lead Agencies believe that the documents fully comply with all applicable state and federal laws, and thus recirculation is not required.

    Comment Letter Z

    Comment Letter Z - City of Corona, January 15, 2003

    Z-1 The MSHCP and Draft EIR/EIS utilize the Cities' adopted General Plan land use information. (Draft EIR/EIS, § 9.0) It is the Lead Agencies' intention that the Cities will rely upon the MSHCP EIR when making Responsible Agency findings under CEQA, approving an Implementation Mechanism and authorizing execution of the IA.

    Z-2 The Lead Agencies appreciate the time and effort of the Cities, WRCOG and WRCOG Planning Directors TAC in the development of the MSHCP and related documents. The requested information will be added to the Final EIR/EIS.

    Z-3 Section 7.3.5 of the Draft MSHCP describes the provisions and conditions under which the Orange County-Riverside County Corridor would be considered a Covered Activity. The EIR/EIS project description provides a reference to the detailed description of Covered Activities contained in Section 7.0 of the Draft MSHCP.

    Z-4 The Lead Agencies acknowledge receipt of the list referenced in the comment and the list is included in the MSHCP database. Section 7.0 of the Plan addresses all of the activities for which Local Permittees desire Take Authorization. However, Take Authorization for impacts to listed species for projects on federal lands would require consultation under Section 7 of FESA.

    Z-5 The intent of the Density Bonus Program is to accommodate the same population but utilize less land thereby making land available for Conservation.

    Z-6 Language will be added to the text of Section 7.0 of the MSHCP to clarify that the generalized Circulation Element referenced includes the General Plan Circulation Elements of all of the City Permittees.

    Z-7 Language will be added to Section 7.0 to clarify that operation of existing uses by Local Permittees within the existing disturbed footprint of such uses in Public/Quasi-Public Lands is considered to be a Covered Activity.

    Z-8 See Response Z-7.

    Z-9 See Response Z-7 regarding the wastewater treatment plant and airport. Recreational activities are addressed as Covered Activities in Section 7.4.2 of the Draft MSHCP.

    Z-10 Specific alignments for the Orange County-Riverside County Corridor have yet to be agreed upon by the two counties. Therefore, it is not possible to depict alignments on a map at this time.

    Z-11 A response to this comment letter will be provided to the commentor at least 10 days prior to County certification of the Final EIR.


    Comment Letter Z2 - Agri Empire, January 15, 2003

    Z2-1 See Response W2-1.

    Z2-2 See Response W2-2.

    Z2-3 See Response W2-3.

    Z2-4 See Response W2-4.

    Z2-5 See Response W2-5.


    Comment Letter Z3 - Jud Monroe, Rationale for Development of Conservation Alternatives

    Z3-1 The commentor misstates the "purpose/mission of the MSHCP" as well as the "underlying premise of an HCP." The goals and objectives of the MSHCP are presented in Section 1.0 of the Plan and the Conservation Strategy for each Covered Species is presented in Section 9.2 of the Plan and in Volume II, Section B. The issuance criteria for HCPs are presented in Section 10(a)(B)(1) of FESA and require that HCPs propose measures to offset the Take of Covered Species not "reduce the rise of localized extinction."

    Z3-2 The "desired future condition" for each Covered Species is clearly defined in the MSHCP through the Conservation Strategy identified for each Covered Species in Section 9.0 of the Plan and in the Species Accounts in Volume II, Section B of the Plan. The Conservation Strategy includes provisions for management as presented in Sections 5.0 and 9.0 of the MSHCP.

    Z3-3 See Response Z3-2. The Conservation Strategy identified for each Covered Species incorporates the considerations referenced in this comment.

    Z3-4 See Responses Z3-2 and Z3-3.

    Z3-5 The Management and Monitoring Plan presented in Section 5.0 of the Draft MSHCP incorporates features designed to respond to change expected to occur during the long-term MSHCP implementation process. The MSHCP does not anticipate prevention of "conversion of coastal sage scrub to non-native grasslands," but rather anticipated maintaining coastal sage scrub habitat values through an effective fire management program, grazing management and exotics controls that emulate the natural dynamic of habitat succession.

    Z3-6 The MSHCP acknowledges that the Plan Area is characterized by an existing fragmented, urban and urbanizing matrix. See Responses F-46, F-47, F-48, F-50, F-51 and L4-1.

    Z3-7 The comment raises no specific issues related to the Draft MSHCP, EIR/EIS or the IA and no further response is necessary.

    Z3-8 The MSHCP is not based "on simple associations of species and various vegetative communities" and does incorporate "an ecosystem approach to reserve design." See Responses G-2, G-6, G-9, G-10, R-19, R-20, R-21, R-25, R-34 and L4-1. The commentor does not cite specific examples from the MSHCP to support the statements in the comment and a more specific responsible is not possible.

    Z3-9 The Lead Agencies concur that the Plan Area is biologically diverse. As discussed in Section 3.2.2 of the Plan and Volume II, Section A, the proposed MSHCP Conservation Area appropriately incorporates representativeness of the diverse Bioregions within the Plan Area. Since comments on features of the MSHCP are not provided, a more specific response is not possible.

    Z3-10 The applicable conservation biology principles noted in Section 3.1.4 of the Draft MSHCP include "conserve large Habitat blocks" and "keep reserves contiguous and connected" incorporating the considerations noted in the comment. Since comments on specific features of the MSHCP are not provided, a more specific response is not possible.

    Z3-11 See Responses Z3-2, Z3-3 and Z3-10.

    Z3-12 Section 6.4 of the Draft MSHCP incorporates requirements for fuels management and calls for the RMOC to work with fire protection entities to identify and map fuel reduction zones, fuel breaks and fire access routes. See Responses Z3-2, Z3-3 and Z3-5.

    Z3-13 See Responses R-19, R-20, R-21, R-25 and R-34 for discussion of the conservation planning process and formulation of the Covered Species list for the MSHCP. It should be noted that raccoons, skunks and deer are not on the MSHCP Covered Species list as indicated in the comment. See Responses F-46, F-47, F-48, F-50 and F-51 for discussion of the ways in which fragmentation is proposed to be addressed during the Reserve Assembly process.

    Z3-14 Conservation planning for the MSHCP considered representativeness of the biodiversity of the Plan Area as discussed in Section 3.2.2 of the Plan and Volume II, Section A. It should be noted that Plantago erecta is not "associated with a single soil type" as indicated in the comment. See Responses G-16, G-17, L4-8 and Z3-9.

    Z3-15 See Responses L4-1, L4-2, L4-9, L4-36, L4-37 and Z3-6. In addition, the MSHCP does not rely on "recolonization by management" as a tool for achieving individual species objectives as indicated in the comment. Conservation Strategies for each Covered Species are presented in Section 9.2 of the Plan and in Volume II, Section B and do not incorporate such an approach.

    Z3-16 Patch size and connectivity were considered in detail in the conservation planning process for the MSHCP as described in Sections 3.1.4 and 3.2.2 of the Plan and in Volume II, Section A. The commentor fails to cite specific examples or to provide sufficient scientific information that would indicate that the size or configuration of any of the MSHCP Conservation Area components are not adequate. Therefore, additional response to the comment is not possible.

    Z3-17 No public entity can commit their future legislative bodies to funding commitments. Yet government implements billions of dollars in programs annually and many programs continue over decades. Certainly the Lead Agencies must all recognize the uncertainties of governmental funding, but that is not a justification for the unsupported hypothesis that state, federal, and local governments will not meet their commitments. The private financial markets routinely accept the credit of the government as very secure.

    The MSHCP addresses inflation. Both costs and revenues will inflate over time. Section 8.6 addresses keeping revenues in line with costs.

    A fundamental principal of the MSHCP since the County took the lead on the effort has been that lands would be acquired from willing sellers and that condemnation would not be used. This concept has been endorsed by a broad range of stakeholders and is fundamental to the MSHCP as well as to the buy in by local government. Priorities will be set both through the HANS Process and through the funding decisions made by the RCA. Thus, lands with high conservation value will initially be acquired. The Lead Agencies strongly disagree with the commentor that the willing seller strategy will hinder Plan implementation. See also Response D-56.

    Z3-18 This comment misstates the assumptions used in calculating reserve management costs. Section 5 of the Draft MSHCP contains a detailed description of the Adaptive Management Program and identifies both general management measures and species-specific measures that are required to be implemented. The cost estimates are based on the proposed management activities.

    The Lead Agencies disagree with the commentor's observations that the MSHCP proposes a wholly "passive" management regime nor do the Lead Agencies agree that management must be as "active" or as costly as the commentor opines. It is interesting to note that other commentor's recommend a more passive management strategy than what is included in the Draft MSHCP and assert that management cost estimates are too high. While the Lead Agencies recognize that there are varying opinions concerning the approach to management and its funding, the Lead Agencies believe that the management and adaptive management costs anticipated in the Draft MSHCP are adequate based on the experience of those who provided input into the planning process.

    While Sections 5 and 8 of the MSHCP were under development, two reputable land management entities were asked to develop preliminary estimates of management costs and resources that would be required to address the management responsibilities that were evolving through the Plan. Land management entities consulted for this work effort were the Center for Natural Lands Management and the Riverside County Park and Open Space District-entities that continue to manage large conservation areas within Riverside County. Their estimates took into consideration expenses and resource allocations both during and after Reserve Assembly. While each entity offered their unique approach based on their professional experience, the fundamental objectives were similar. It is interesting to note that one proposed a figure lower than what was ultimately reflected in the Draft MSHCP while the other proposed a higher figure.

    The Lead Agencies are aware that the Southwestern Riverside County Multi-Species Reserve (SWRCMSR) spent a significant amount of its annual budget on research contracts from 1993 to 2000. Some of the research provided useful insight to several species and the control of non-native vegetation. However, it arguably did not yield a compendium of practical reserve management practices (adaptive or otherwise) that was originally envisioned when the Reserve Managers embarked on the costly research program. Very little of the work that resulted from the $3.2 million dollar research investment actually provided any constructive benefit to the draft management plan that was finally issued for internal review by committee members in December of 2002.

    One could always argue for more funds to be spent on research but practical experiences suggest that, unless scientific research is more strategically applied, there is a point of diminishing returns to reserve management. Moreover, members of the SWRCMSR management committee have found that the very presence of the reserve acts as a laboratory for scientists with outside research funding.

    The commentor indicates that Metropolitan Water District was presented with a $30,000 per acre cost estimate for restoration of CSS—presumably after Northills fire or the Winchester fire in the early 1990's which burned CSS habitat in the SWRCMSR. It is important to note that the SWRCMSR Reserve Management Committee, after much discussion and consultation with the reserve biologist and the Wildlife Agencies, decided not to actively restore the burn areas but rather allow the CSS regrowth to naturally occur. Today, the former burn areas have reestablished CSS habitat and many California gnatcatcher pairs have recolonized the site. Specifically, 22 pairs are now occupying the Northhills and the CSS vegetation there is almost fully recovered. This experience suggests that a more active and costly management approach is not always warranted as similar results can be achieved through time, natural processes, and regular monitoring.

    Contrary to the assertions posed by the commentor, the MSHCP management plan does not presuppose full knowledge of Mediterranean ecosystems, effects and remedies of present and future invasive species, or translocations of species to recovering patches. Rather, the adaptive management plan and the Organizational Structure of the Regional Conservation Authority provide for ongoing scientific research that would inform future management plans and adaptive management decisions-some of which cannot be fully anticipated at this time.

    See complete Responses to Comment Letter L4.

    Z3-19 See Responses Z3-6, Z3-7, Z3-8 and Z3-10 through Z3-16.

    Z3-20 The commentor does not address specific features of the MSHCP but refers to a potential "alternative conservation design strategy" that appears to be described more fully by the commentor in Comment Letter L4. See complete Responses to Comment Letter L4.

    Z3-21 See Response Z3-20.

    Z3-22 See Response Z3-1. The comments regarding land costs and management costs are not supported by any data provided in this comment. The comment also speculates on increased willingness of property owners to sell land for Conservation, which is also unsupported by facts presented in this comment.

    It is not clear how the commentor can draw distinct conclusions rejecting the design of the MSHCP Conservation Area, which is based on extensive scientific research, in favor of an alternative hypothetical reserve design based on only one tenant of conservation biology/reserve design—principally, bigger is better. From this theoretical basis, the commentor suggests that there would be a reduction in land costs, reduced management costs, and reduced reserve design conflicts with urbanization. While the commentor references considerations of costs and reduction in land development conflicts, he provides no supporting data or calculations for his conclusions.

    The commentor's proposal suggests concepts of an a priori reserve design without any analysis of its effects on Covered Species. Theoretically, one could argue that management costs might be reduced by focusing on larger reserves. However, no consideration is provided by the commentor for the effects of deleting reserve land and linkages within the urban matrix that contribute to the persistence of Covered Species nor does he provide supportive evidence that the additional lands added to the larger reserve area actually do more to support the Covered Species than the land that the commentor would forfeit to urbanization.

    The commentor further asserts that Conservation should be transferred to areas that are not under immediate development pressure simply for the purpose of reducing conflicts with urban development interest. No biological evidence is offered to suggest that this is prudent yet the proposal would likely increase conflicts with rural landowners. The Plan envisions that approximately 41,000 acres of Additional Reserve Land would be set aside on-site through the normal land use entitlement process without the need for acquisition. Should this conservation obligation be shifted to rural landowners and added to the Conservation already required of them, it is likely that the County's ability to use conservation incentives outlined in Section 6.1.1 would be greatly diminished and more acquisitions would be necessary thereby increasing the cost of the MSHCP. Additionally, no evidence is offered to support the commentor's conclusions that the "percentage of willing sellers could be expected to increase."

    Z3-23 The comment appears to be incomplete and a response is not possible. See Responses Z3-20 and Z3-21.


    Comment Letter Z4 - Joe Sheeran, 2/05/03

    Z4-1 The concerns expressed in this comment regarding alleged illegal activities committed prior to MSHCP approval are related to enforcement actions outside the scope of the MSHCP. Conservation proposed under the MSHCP would occur through Reserve Assembly and result from review of discretionary and certain City ministerial actions on the part of the Permittees or result from requests by property owners to be considered for land purchases. The MSHCP recognizes the presence of constraints in the Linkage 1 area and for that reason incorporates multiple connections between Lake Mathews and the Cleveland National Forest to ensure that MSHCP conservation objectives are met.

    Z4-2 This comment consists of exhibits that relate to the issues raised in Comment Z4-1. See Response Z4- 1.